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Re: Solus (Chapter 7 - 02/10)
« Reply #60 on: October 06, 2009, 08:06:41 PM »
oh ... could you send me the perv version?
I really wanna read that part , it sounds so interesting  :grin:

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Re: Solus (Chapter 7 - 02/10)
« Reply #61 on: October 08, 2009, 10:09:21 AM »
OH man, it looks like TanaShige is losing the race :(

EHHHHHHHHH!?!?!? Perv fic continuation? ooooh this is "interesting" :P

I love all the TakaGaki-ness. I think you're reigniting my TakaGaki fandom :D

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Re: Solus (Chapter 7 - 02/10)
« Reply #62 on: October 08, 2009, 04:00:43 PM »
Oh hi aussie! :welcome Glad to see you here!
*does best impression of waving back* That was totally unexpected but still cool  :D I've been lurking around here for some time actually, but spent more time at other forums, communities etc. But my recently renewed interest in fanfics has brought me back here.

(You are gonna pair the kitty cat up with the turtle, aren't you? Right?? *coughcough*)
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Re: Solus (Chapter 6 Part 3 - 22/09)
« Reply #63 on: October 08, 2009, 05:40:48 PM »
Eri decided to christened them Eric and Elizabeth, much to Reina’s objection.


Love the part about naming the turtle Eric and Elizabeth~  :lol: Seems like something Eri will do.. and she did said in a interview before if she wants to change her name, it would be Elizabeth or Erika if i'm not wrong

Going for TanaKame!

Hope you update soon!

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Re: Solus (Chapter 7 - 02/10)
« Reply #64 on: October 12, 2009, 03:34:08 AM »
I only need one comment for these one. It's pure Nose bleed Chapter. More please.      :bleed eyes: :bleed eyes:

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Re: Solus (Chapter 7 - 02/10)
« Reply #65 on: October 12, 2009, 04:43:13 AM »
TakaGaki is so hot  :drool: ~~~  :heart: ... I really loved the perv version  :P

I wanna read more, more, more  of your fic  *w* xDD

I'll waiting for your updated  :D

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Re: Solus (Chapter 8 - 14/10)
« Reply #66 on: October 13, 2009, 09:25:11 PM »
Hope you enjoyed the last chapter :P That was my first perv so I hope it was ok~ Niway, new commenters GETS! Woohoo! :cow: Did this chapter in less than 2 hours and too tired to edit it, so do excuse me for any grammar/spelling mistakes


Chapter 8


“Papa? Mama? Where are you going? Don’t leave me in this darkness. Please…”


“Ne Princess? Princess, wake up.”

Reina felt someone shaking her body furiously. Opening her tired eyes and adjusting to the morning light, she saw Aika’s worried face inches away from hers…

“Arrgh! What the…Aika!”

“Are you alright? You were thrashing and screaming in your sleep. Nightmare?” Aika touched Reina’s forehead for any sign of fever.

Pushing the hand away, Reina groggily sat up and tried to bring her conscious mind back to the present. Her wet pajamas sticking to her body and fevered head did nothing to help calm her down. The nightmares kept haunting her although it has subsided a lot recently.

Aika frowned at the familiar scene in front of her. She tenderly stroked Reina’s hair and softly whispered, “Come on Princess, I hear some blueberry pancakes calling your name.”

Reina let herself be pulled up from the bed and went to the bathroom for a wash; after which she walked to the dining room anticipating a hearty breakfast. Eri grinned cheerfully at her as she helped herself to a piece of the pancake. She seems to be taking yesterday events quite well. Aika poured a cup of tea for her and smiled,

“Here you go, Princess. Your favourites every morning. Specially brought from Fukuoka for you”

Reina beamed as she bites into her breakfast. The taste of home evident with every bite she takes. She remembers her mum making the pancakes whilst Aika would tease her about school. Mum... Reina pushed her plate away much to Eri’s and Aika’s surprise.

“I’m late for school,” Reina frowned and walked out of the dining room.

~~~

A loud roar echoed through the corridor. Reina looked around, relieved that nobody was around to hear the rumblings of her anatomy.

“Hungry?”

Reina let out a short scream at the voice behind her. “When did you appear?”

The voice, a certain flirty bunny to be precise, giggled at the yankii’s reaction and hooked her arm around the yankii.

“While you were spacing out? If I didn’t know any better, I’d thought that you hang around Eri too much”

Reina smiled at the statement. It’s true that she hangs around Eri too much. Every day, in fact, but that’s only because they live together. Though that’s a fact the others are not aware of. Seems like her housemate “dazeness” has rubbed off on her.

“Come on, you little kitty. Let’s have a lunch date. My treat”

Reina shrugged at her foiled attempt to pull away from Sayu. Oh well, a free lunch sounds good anyway, especially when payday seems so far away right now. Reina suddenly remembered she skipped breakfast this morning.

Reina did not expect she could have a lot of things in common with Sayumi, especially for the girls’ taste in fashion and music. She felt strangely at ease talking and joking with Sayu as they walked towards the school cafeteria. In fact, she could not remember the last time she laughed so much. As they approached the cafe, Reina was surprised when she saw Aika sitting and joking with Eri, Ai and Risa.

Risa choked on her lunch when she saw a willing Reina in Sayu’s arm. Ai patted on her girlfriend’s back, trying to ease any discomfort she might have. Eri laughed at Risa reaction, though that died down quickly.

“Reina~ I brought you your bento,” Aika pulled Reina to sit beside her whilst Eri smiled, munching on her sandwiches. Sayu sat beside Eri and pouted at her lost chance to be with Reina. Reina wondered, beneath that laugh, if Eri is really smiling right now.

“Hai I finished my lunch. Going for my class now. See you tomorrow,” Eri stood up, excusing herself to go to class.

“Oh, Eririn?” Sayu looked confusedly at Eri. Eri just waved her hands and walked away, head down.

“Sorry Reina, I owe you a date,” Sayu apologised before chasing after Eri.

~~~

Eri let out a soft sigh. She hoped her behaviour back at the café didn’t cause any attention. She knew she promised to let go but having to see loving gestures that Risa gives to Ai is still hard for her at this moment. She contemplated staying away from Risa for a while but later decides against it as she didn’t want to invite any suspicion from the older girl. She snapped out of her depression when she felt two hands covering her eyes.

“Sayu?”

“Bah, no fun. How did you know it was me?”

“Your perfume gave you away”

Sayu grinned and linked her hand with Eri’s. The two girls slowly walked down the corridor whilst enjoying the afternoon sun. Eri saw a few girls (and guys) doing a double take when they passed by Sayu. Eri chuckled. Despite her reputation as a notorious flirt, Sayu has never seriously dated anyone before. Eri knew her friend well enough that Sayu is a staunch romanticist at heart.

“So what’s wrong?” Eri turned to Sayu, surprised at the younger girl’s question. The speaker, however, continued looking ahead ignoring the longing glances from the faceless strangers and the confused look from the turtle.

“What do you mean?” Eri looked away, knowing full well what Sayu meant.

“I’m your best friend, don’t you think I notice?” Sayu stopped, their linked hands also preventing Eri from walking any further. Sayu cupped Eri’s cheek with her free hand as if preparing for any tears from her best friend. “Besides, I know that you don’t have any more class this afternoon.”

“Sayu…”

Pinching the turtle’s cheek, Sayu grinned, “Now now dear, since you are free, I know of this new teashop near the train station. And you can tell me everything there.”

~~~

She could sense the hostile air as she entered the house. Eri tiptoed cautiously into the kitchen, where she found Reina and Aika facing off with each other. Not again, she sighed. The two supposed best friends seems complete opposite of Sayumi and her. In fact, these two girls seem to be fighting like cats and dogs since meeting the night before.

“Drop it. It was just a dream” Reina scowled.

“About what?” Aika doesn’t seem like she’s backing down.

“Miki” Reina replied defiantly; Aika looked up in shocked at her friend’s answer.

Eri saw the change in expressions on both girls’ face at the mention of the name. Who is Miki? Is she the cause of the estrangement between the best friends?
 
“What about the sleeping pills?” Aika shot back. Eri let out a loud gasp at this.

The bitter atmosphere quieted a little when Reina and Aika finally realized Eri was also in the house. Eri swore she could cut the tension with knife. Seeing she’s not getting response from her best friend, Aika softened and grasped the older girl’s hands firmly.

“I’m begging you Princess, talk to me. Please? Don’t keep shutting me off like the last of one year”

“I don’t need to talk to anyone about anything and can you stop with the Princess thing? We’re too old to play that game anymore” Reina pulled her hands from Aika. She wanted to stop this interrogation already and just forget about everything. The hollow feeling in her stomach is pulling her down, leaving her breathless and threatening to swallow her whole. She could feel Aika’s stare boring through the wall that she’s learnt to put up over the year.

“How did it become like this?” Aika asked at the girl she once knew.

Reina threw a passive glance at Aika; her eyes betraying the emotions she’s desperately trying to hide.

“You weren’t like this before. After she left…you totally changed”

“Don’t blame this on her,” Reina growled at her childhood friend,

Aika reached out to Reina. Reina has kept everything inside her for too long, even locking Aika out from her heart.

“Talk to me Reina” The last plea, barely a whisper.

An awkward silence hangs over the air. Eri watched the drama in front of her feeling not knowing what to expect. She felt like an intruder to the two friends’ shared world. A world she can never get into.

~~~ :twisted: ~~~

@rndmn -  :lol: I lol at your comment @ the perv.
@len.chan - Glad you like this :D
@kRisZ - haha Aichan is not a coward, just a little chicken. But she did make up/out for it :lol:
@aussie - Living together do have some advantages *naughty ideas in my mind* :twisted: A clue just for you - this will turn out to be a Tana***** pairing (Kamei? Shige?)
@Cogi-chan - Hope the "dark deeds" was worth it 8)
@Michi.Pinku - Thank you so much. For some reason, your comments always make me smile :D
@Hammy - There will be a TanaShige date in the coming chapter. Will that be ok? *blushing* My love for Gaki-san was partly fanned by your fics (although she ended up dead in some of them XD) So your TakaGaki comment is really a wow :oops:
@amEthystx - Its just so...Eri, isn't it? XD That's what makes us love her more
@Sancho - Didn't think it was pervy enough lol, though I couldn't stop blushing when writing it.

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Re: Solus (Chapter 8 - 14/10)
« Reply #67 on: October 14, 2009, 02:48:57 AM »
Ah, KamShige friendship, I knew Sayu would have some redeeming qualities! :lol:

And Aika, I guess I'm a little mad at her for coming in when the relationship between Eri and Reina is still so fragile, but maybe Reina will open up to Eri instead of her old friend first.

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Re: Solus (Chapter 8 - 14/10)
« Reply #68 on: October 14, 2009, 04:33:02 AM »
SayuKame  :heart:, she is such a flirt lol
well i hope Reina would come back to her old friend soon
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Re: Solus (Chapter 8 - 14/10)
« Reply #69 on: October 14, 2009, 05:45:45 AM »
 :cry: i don't have access to the prev version and not enough posts yet to get the access but i'll work on it~  XD

Ohhhhh~ the story is getting interesting...~ what happened to Miki? and sleeping pills? oh dear....~  :( But seems like Reina is still very protective over Miki..~

Aika calling Reina princess is kinda cute.. haha~  i would have pampered Reina the same way too XD

Eri is just too adorable..! Poor Eri~ give our turtle some love soon ok?  ;) after reading this chapter.. i suddenly feel like switching the couples! From TanaKame to SayuKame! Cause the biggest flirt usually falls hardest for their best friend don't they?  :P  and knowing that Eri loves Risa, hence the hopelessness turns into flirtatious habit~!  *Shoutout to Eri* "Sayu never dated anyone seriously maybe because she wants to date you!" weeeeeeeeeee! haha..  *Praying!*  :P

Oh.. i just got the 2010 Morning Musume Calendar and Sayu really caught my eyes~! (thats y i was going with SayuKame =X )
Take a look!



She look really outstanding in this photo (not that others are not..) but she is like shining!  XD

or am i the only one having eye problem?

Cheers~!

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Re: Solus (Chapter 8 - 14/10)
« Reply #70 on: October 14, 2009, 02:11:37 PM »
^ Sayu is unbeatable in this pic. But Kame is a close 2nd :D

Ooohhh so a TanaShige date is coming up? I do wish something will come out of it although I'm not so sure. What about Eri now? It's good to see lovey dovey TakaGaki :)

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“Come on Princess, I hear some blueberry pancakes calling your name.”


How can anyone not melt when they hear this being told to them? I know I would :wub:

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Re: Solus (Chapter 8 - 14/10)
« Reply #71 on: October 16, 2009, 12:37:11 PM »
Poor Eri. Good thing Shige is around. Reina is too stubborn isn't she. Hope Aika won't stop. For sure Reina need it. Nice Chapter. Hoping for more.  :D

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Re: Solus (Chapter 8 - 14/10)
« Reply #72 on: October 16, 2009, 01:44:47 PM »
Reina is strange, the night before she let Aika hug her, now they're clashing  :dunno:  but I think I can understand. And SayuEri moment is  :luvluv1:


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Re: Solus (Chapter 9 - 18/10)
« Reply #73 on: October 18, 2009, 05:53:58 PM »
Comment time! Yay!

@rndmn- Gotta have some goodness in her, though she is still the devil we love. And Aika, I admit I'm a little mad at her too (and I'm the writer :lol:)
@22- sorry I didn't reply to you comment at the perv :cry: She will go back to her old friend soon, though not in the way we expect :twisted:
@amEthystx- I know I told you this already but I love the pix. Thanks for uploading it. I agree that Sayu stands out the most in the pix (sorry Ai-chan :() Wait a minute, you didn't hack into my laptop, did you? Or is this story so predictable? j/k :lol:
@Hammy- I would melt too :wub:
@Sancho- Yeah Reina is one stubborn girl, isn't she. Aika will not stop being around Reina, for now at least :D
@kRisZ-  :P Reina got her own personal reason for being that way

An early update, thanks to a certain katana-wielding little devil (you know who you are XD). Presenting chapter 9... *goes back into hiding*


Chapter 9

Reina took out her organiser from her drawer. She flipped through the pages, finally stopping when she found the two pieces she was looking for. She saw her parents smiled at her, bringing a sad smile to her face. Lightly tracing the other picture, the memories came flooding back. The three girls beamed at her, reliving the happier times. She frowned at the girl in the middle, wondering if that younger her knew of the stupid decision that she was about to make then. Standing on either side are the two special girls in her life. Reina sighed, frustrated with the her now.

She admitted that she has been harsh with her best friend nowadays, but being around her is hard. Clutching her chest with her free hand, she held back the emotions residing inside her.

“Why did you come for me?”

~~~

Slowly chewing on her expensive steak, she concentrated on finishing her dinner as quick as she dared to without compromising on her etiquettes. She knew the two people sitting in front of her right now are a stickler for rules.

“How are your studies?” A question that caused her to flinch every single time, especially when it came from her father.

“Good,” she hoped her answer is safe enough to appease her parents.

“That’s good. Your office will be ready for you once you graduate,” Her father began talking of the expansion of the business and how she is going to take over the rein of the corporation.

A waiter came to take away her plate. She sighed inwardly in relief. Excusing herself to go to the ladies, she hoped to escape any further conversations, if they can be called same. The occasional dinner with her parents has always been a stressful event; for it is that time of the month that she is reminded of her obligations as a daughter. Not that she hated them; she just wished for once that her parents would care enough to ask about her well-being and her wants instead.

She glared at her pathetic reflection; the mirror mocking her presence. Resigning to the fact that she has to return to her parents soon, she twitched her face to present a happy face, only to fail miserably. She took out her phone, gazing into the image of the girl standing next to her, a smile came naturally to her, knowing that this girl will always make things right.

“Risa…”

~~~

“Reina-channnn~ let’s go on a date~”

“Don’t wanna”

“We can go shopping, and then a romantic dinner, and then attend the Night Boys concert, and then I can walk you home, hand-in ha~”

“Are you even listening to me?” Reina stared at Sayu, more amused than pissed, “Wait, did you just say the Night Boys?”

“Yup,” Sayu beamed, pleased that she got Reina’s attention.

“That’s so cool! I thought their tickets are like, sold out?”

“Well, I know this somebody who knows this somebody who in turn knows this somebody…Anyway I got two tickets. How about it? Tomorrow’s the concert.”

Reina deliberated a little, she did have a massive fangirl crush on the band which she told Sayumi the other day, but she’s a little apprehensive about going on a date with the devilish bunny, even if it is a friendly one.

The inner Sayumi cheered when Reina finally nodded, feeling victorious that her plan is working, and knowing that she is one step closer to Reina.

~~~

Reina checked the time on her mobile phone before slipping same into her pocket. She hoped Sayu will not interpret her earliness as enthusiasm. Seeing that she has ten minutes before the appointed time, she decided to send a text message to Abe-san, thanking her for allowing the time-off from work. Barely sending the message, she saw a pink bunny hopping to where she is standing.

“Reina-channnn~ you’re here. Let’s go honey,” Sayu quickly claimed Reina’s hand causing the younger girl to cringe a little at the overfriendliness.
 
“Where are we heading to now?” Reina wondered aloud.

“It’s a surprise,” Sayu grinned at Reina. Suddenly, Reina doesn’t so sure about this date after all.

The two girls soon arrive in front of a quaint restaurant hidden in an alleyway. Reina gaped at the charming eatery, appreciating the old-world cute layout being an interior designer student that she is. She wondered how a treasure like this could remain hidden. Sayu greeted the owners affectionately and pulled Reina to a corner booth.

“We haven’t really talked to each other much. So today I want us to talk a lot,” Sayu cupped her face with both hands and gaze at Reina.

“Cool place, you seem familiar with this place,” Reina looked around her, feasting on the sight.

“But of course, it belongs to my boyfriend” Sayu giggled at the awed Reina. She was glad that Reina liked the place.

“Your boyfriend?” Reina quickly turned to look at Sayu, shocked at what Sayu just uttered. She never heard of Sayu having a boyfriend for as long as she knew the girl.

“Here he comes. Why, thank you, you handsome you,” Sayu winked at the man who just delivered their lunch. Reina resisted the urge to drop her jaw. Did Sayu just flirt with the old man? He’s old enough to be her grandfather!

“Hey cutie, today’s specials only for you girls. You must be the one and only Ms Tanaka Reina. I’ve heard so much about you,” the old man smiled at Reina. Okay, now Reina is really confused. She looked questioningly at Sayu who couldn’t stop laughing.

“Stop teasing them, dear. I apologise for my husband’s playfulness, Ms Tanaka.” An elderly lady soon joined the crowd.

“Hmmm~ way to spoil the fun grandma,” Sayu sulked with her arms crossed, the twinkle in her eyes saying otherwise.

It took some time for Reina to realise what just happened. She quickly got off her chair and bowed to the two owners, remembering her manners to introduce herself properly.

“It’s a pleasure to meet a girl as pretty as you, Ms Tanaka. Everything is on the house. Please enjoy your meal,” Mr Michishige bowed and kissed the back of Reina’s hand. Reina caught a small wink from him. Now she knows where Sayu get her lessons from.

Fed and filled, Sayu and Reina thanked the owners for their hospitality before continuing on their date. Reina rubbed her belly in contentment, musing,

“That was unexpected. You seem quite close to your grandparents”

Sayu just shrugged, “Yeah, they took care of me after my parents passed on.”

“What happened to your parents, erm that is if you don’t mind sharing” Reina asked timidly, afraid if she has crossed the line.

“My parents were working for the Kamei’s company. On one of the overseas business trip, a circuit failure caused their plane to nosedive into the ocean. They couldn’t find any survivors. Eri lost her father in that incident too, didn’t she tell you? Her mum now takes over the company and is now in New York. That’s why Eri is living alone in Japan. That girl wouldn’t stay with me when I asked her to. Strange that she hasn’t invited me to her place, though that can be arranged.” Sayu smirked at the plan forming in her brain.

Reina shook her head. There are so many things she didn’t know about her housemate. It was probably her happy-go-lucky attitude that gave Reina the impression that the girl didn’t have any problem. Reina muttered her apologies for the tragedy.

“It’s okay. That was a long time ago. Both of us were only 3 years old then. Guess the reason I don’t miss them as much as I should is because I don’t have much memories of them.” Reina began to see Sayu in a new light, amazed by how strong she is. She began to understand why Eri treats Sayu as her best friend despite her cheeky nature.

The girls stopped walking before the traffic junction. Reina grinned, “So where to now?”

“Now we go window shopping, then we’ll have a blast at the concert!” Sayu replied excitedly, happy that Reina is finally enjoying the date.

Reina chuckled at Sayu’s enthusiasm. She is having a good time with Sayu, more than she’ll ever admit to the cheeky devil. And she was surprised that she is looking forward to what’s in store for the rest of the day.

~~~

“Ai-chan, are you okay?” Risa looked worriedly at Ai.

“I’m okay, just tired” Ai smiled at her girlfriend.

“We can go home if you want,” Risa couldn’t finish her sentence when she felt Ai’s lips on hers. She instinctively returned the kiss, breaking off only when the need for air arises.

“I want to spend more time with you, Risa” Ai looked longingly at Risa. Risa nodded though she saw something else in her girl’s eyes.

“So you haven’t tell me about your dinner with your parents,” Risa pulled Ai to street bench at the edge of the park. Ai pretended to observe the crowd and murmured,

“It was okay, just the usual” Risa sensed there is more than what Ai is letting on, but decided not to press on the issue. She will let Ai move at her own pace. She felt Ai’s head leaning on her shoulder and she absently stroked her girl’s hair.

“USO!”

Ai stood up, startled by her girlfriend’s outburst. Following the direction that Risa is pointing, Ai saw two familiar figures walking hand-in-hand, talking enthusiastically, across the road. Well, it was more of the raven-haired doing the talking whilst the shorter one just laughed.

Ai watched in amusement, “Well this is definitely interesting.”

Meanwhile, the girls in question were too engrossed in their conversations to notice their personal life being zoomed in.

~~~ :twisted: ~~~
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Re: Solus (Chapter 9 - 18/10)
« Reply #74 on: October 18, 2009, 06:08:39 PM »
Uh-oh, that little devil at the bottom doesn't give me any hope for Sayu and Reina's 'friendly' date to be understood by a certain turtle. You definitely got my attention with the Ai/Risa plotline, I love Takagaki so much. I hope everything works out for Ai.

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Re: Solus (Chapter 9 - 18/10)
« Reply #75 on: October 18, 2009, 06:34:49 PM »
The Sayu and Reina interaction is opening up new background between them

Ai and Risa might do something  :twisted: as an indication at the end

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Re: Solus (Chapter 9 - 18/10)
« Reply #76 on: October 18, 2009, 08:17:40 PM »
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@amEthystx- I know I told you this already but I love the pix. Thanks for uploading it. I agree that Sayu stands out the most in the pix (sorry Ai-chan ) Wait a minute, you didn't hack into my laptop, did you? Or is this story so predictable? j/k

Ai-chan comes in along with little turtle at 2nd together for the pic~
Ai-chan is at the top of my list too but just Sayu is overly :wub: in the pic XD
But something have been troubling me for a long time.. it's on why they always have to put Gaki-san in pigtails~ cause i very much prefer her straight hair in Resonant Blue~  :P (personal preference =X)

If i can hack into your laptop i would have finish reading up the story before you know it!~  :P but i'm glad there is a update now~


New update!!  XD

i guess now Reina will feel pretty bad..she just realise that Kamei basically left with her best friend but was unable to invite her over cause of her..

When i read the part about Sayu's boyfriend it gave me a shock~ LOL~ well.. flirting is basically a very good social skill if you use it in the right amount in the right way XD so... 5 * for Sayu's grandfather~!  :thumbsup

waiting for next chapter......  :cool1:

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Re: Solus (Chapter 9 - 18/10)
« Reply #77 on: October 19, 2009, 11:28:20 AM »
Nice Update. Now these explained why Eri and Sayu are close to one another. But their situation, somehow, manage to let Reina realize that she's not the only person in the world that had lost someone. She realize that she too need to be strong just like them. Poor Ai. well most rich family are like that. Can't blame them. theyare doing it for family security after all. but yeah, they should realize Ai feeling as well.

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Re: Solus (Chapter 9 - 18/10)
« Reply #78 on: October 19, 2009, 02:40:28 PM »
Wait a sec, did Reina utter Risa's name when she was looking at the pic on her cell phone? Was there TanaGaki in the past? I really shouldn't be asking this but I think I've gotten all the fics I'm chasing mixed up :nervous

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Re: Solus (Chapter 9 - 18/10)
« Reply #79 on: October 19, 2009, 06:01:17 PM »
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Wait a sec, did Reina utter Risa's name when she was looking at the pic on her cell phone?


hmmm.. that was Ai-chan~ she is the one having dinner with her parents..

I guess much more ridiculous in mixing up all the fics.. after reading "Love is blind", blind Eri pops out somewhere once in a while... and i will be like :dunno:

and sometimes guy version of Gaki-san, Ai-chan and Koharu from glass slipper will pop out some where  :on lol: (sorry for not commenting cause the Fic ended long before i started reading it...so i did not know where to start commenting   :( )


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