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Hello! I'm chubar~ and I also happen to write fanfiction. However, I'm not confident in my skills when it comes to real-person fanfics. Because of this possibly irrational fear, I can only write oneshots. I made it hopefully easier on you by making up a table of contents of oneshots I've posted here. To see the other fanfics I've written, please go here. ^^ Feel free to give me constructive critisism because I know my grammar and characterizations aren't very good.

Anyway, you're here for the fanfics.  :heart:

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Troublesome
« Reply #1 on: July 23, 2009, 08:18:08 PM »
Troublesome

Today had been eventful day for Kamei Eri. Morning Musume had finished with their interviews and, strangely enough, they could do whatever they wanted for the rest of the day. Eri decided to hang out with her friend and fellow band mate, Tanaka Reina. They decided to go to a local club since they haven’t gotten a chance to do so in quite a while.

They entered it with ease and, as expected, the music was loud and the lights were bright. Eri wasn’t one for clubs but she didn’t mind going there once in a while. She drank a little bit of soda and chatted with some guys. They didn’t know who she was, but that was fine with Eri.

“We’re on the prowl, Eri-chan!” said Reina when she pointed to a couple of guys dancing provocatively. “Keep an eye out!”

She glanced at her friend. “Tanaka-san,” she used the more polite form, “we shouldn’t be looking for boyfriends. I almost got in trouble for having an ex, you know!”

The other ignored her and she sighed. Reina and Eri eventually got separated in the crowd. Eri, being more careful, stayed away from the dancing and the drinking. Instead of alcohol, she opted for water. At least if the paparazzi were to catch her, she wouldn’t get in too much trouble.

“Kame!”

She perked at the sound of her nickname. She glanced around for Reina, but didn’t see her.

“Kame, where are you?”

“Tanaka-san, I’m right here!”

“Kame, Jin’s not even at the dressing room anymore!” cried out the voice. Eri blushed and cowered. It was a male Kame they were after, not her. That was getting troublesome.

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Re: [ kiss, kiss! {fall in love~! } - chubar's oneshot collection ]
« Reply #2 on: July 23, 2009, 08:26:40 PM »
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It's a decent start/prologue. Going to be interesting to see what Eri does next.

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« Reply #3 on: July 24, 2009, 03:37:26 AM »
Ohhhh!.... Kat-tun x MM fic huhh~
Don't tell me you're gonna have Kamex2 pairing xD

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Re: [ kiss, kiss! {fall in love~! } - chubar's oneshot collection ]
« Reply #4 on: July 25, 2009, 05:48:34 AM »
Hmm, interesting. XD I wasn't expecting it to be so short, but still, I'm curious as to what happens next. :)
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Re: [ kiss, kiss! {fall in love~! } - chubar's oneshot collection ]
« Reply #5 on: October 12, 2009, 10:05:10 AM »
Strong Beginnings

Miyabi looked at herself in the mirror – checking everything before she left for Buono’s first rehearsal that day. Cute outfit? Check. Cute hairstyle? Check. Breath? She huffed into her hand and brought her palm closer to inspect her breath. Check. Everything was ready!

She took a deep breath. She didn’t want to admit it but she was really nervous for meeting the other two girls for the band, Buono! Their dear producer, Tsunku, had came in one morning and grabbed Miyabi away from the rest of Berryz and told her she was going to be in a temporary band called Buono!

“For what,” she had asked curiously.

“For the anime, Shugo Chara!” he had said. Miyabi was one not to question him so she didn’t and things progressed from there.

Even though she didn’t really interact with the girls outside of Berryz, Miyabi was confident that she was going to get along with the two other girls Tsunku had told her she was going to perform with. She hoped they were like Berryz, although it would be nice to meet different types of people.

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Airi was way too early for the rehearsal. She thought that her train would take longer to get to where she needed to go but, surprisingly, it didn’t take that long at all that day. Her stomach growled as a reminder of what she didn’t do earlier. She placed a hand there.

“Ugh,” she groaned out loud. “I can’t believe I forgot to eat!” She sighed but she didn’t want to leave. What if the other girls had gotten there early? They would’ve been there all by themselves while Airi would’ve been selfishly eating. She sighed once again.

Maybe this studio has a vending machine, she thought as she got up. She peeked outside the door and looked up and down in the hall. They seemed extremely empty at this time of day, although she did spot a coffee machine. Of course, she continued to think, it’s lunchtime.

She grabbed her purse and looked through her change pocket in search of some change. Maybe if there were something in her stomach, rather than nothing at all, her hunger would go away for a little bit.

Once she found enough change she smiled and headed towards the machine. Thankfully, because it was empty, there weren’t any lines. She put in the change and made a curious look and made her selection. It took some time but she was hopeful for some coffee when she saw no cup come out of it.

“Huh?” she said. Then milk started to pour out of it. “No!” she said as she put up her hands. “No! Where’s the cup?” She cried out. She looked all over the place for any other holes for the cup to possibly come out but there wasn’t – just that one hole.

“And that’s all the change I had,” she cried as she heard her stomach growl again.

“Hi!” cried out a voice. The voice surprised Airi that she jumped and turned.

“Oh, hi,” Airi said, she gave the taller girl a smile. “How do you do?” She bowed out of respect for the obvious older girl.

Miyabi gave her a cheeky grin. “I’m fine! Nice to meet you!” She bowed as well though afterwards she put out her hand. Airi was surprised but graciously took it. “Are you here for Buono?”

Airi nodded and Miyabi merely smiled brighter, if it were possible.

”All right!” she said enthusiastically. Airi merely giggled, she thought this girl was adorable!

”Oh, have you eaten yet?” Miyabi suddenly asked. Airi shook her head. “Let’s have lunch, okay? My treat! We’re a bit early anyway so I’m sure it’ll be okay we can eat!”

Miyabi grabbed Airi’s hand slowly and pulled it. Airi nodded and just followed Miyabi. Even though this girl seemed really bold, Airi could tell they were going to be friends.



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Re: [ kiss, kiss! {fall in love~! } - chubar's oneshot collection ]
« Reply #6 on: October 12, 2009, 10:45:04 AM »
Interesting to the core, fast pace and movement all around, I like your style :)

Both of them are movement based which is good because I like short lol
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« Reply #7 on: October 13, 2009, 05:23:58 PM »
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“Kame, Jin’s not even at the dressing room anymore!” cried out the voice. Eri blushed and cowered. It was a male Kame they were after, not her. That was getting troublesome.
And it was probably the 'male' Tanaka' that she was talking to.. :rofl:


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“Huh?” she said. Then milk started to pour out of it. “No!” she said as she put up her hands. “No! Where’s the cup?” She cried out. She looked all over the place for any other holes for the cup to possibly come out but there wasn’t – just that one hole.

Poor Airi.. her brain's not functioning well due to the lack of food... XD

Cool stories!Keep it up! :thumbsup

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