Author Topic: FaqU's one-shots- Trust You - 10/13 (Read 43010 times)

kRisZ · « **Reply #60 on:** September 28, 2009, 04:51:54 PM »

OMG! Reina did not

That was so

rndmnwierd · « **Reply #61 on:** September 28, 2009, 11:37:51 PM »

^I read that comment first and I was like, "What? OMG! OMG! What happened, what!??!"

I understand the pairings now, yes I was a little lost.

So sad, I'm glad the pieces all fell into place, but did Reina really? Did she?

lil_hamz · « **Reply #62 on:** September 29, 2009, 01:56:09 PM »

HOLY SHI** Did Reina kill herself??

WHYYYYYYYYYYY?!?! This is so sad

I cried. I really did

And I had to wipe the tears away as discreetly as I could cuz I was in a public place.

I don't think Eri would have wanted her to take her own life. Eri would have wanted her to be happy. Especially when she still had her whole life ahead of her. She was going to be a doctor

I need some chocolates to cheer myself up now.

FaqU · « **Reply #63 on:** September 29, 2009, 06:35:23 PM »

Minna-san yes Reina did, sorry to anyone that would be upset by how things turned out.

Some people would probably think that this would be a perfect ending so I don't intend to post a fourth, however for those who are interested, there is a fourth part. Maybe after reading people will think that the fourth part is not necessary but on a personal level, for me it was. So instead of posting it, I will send it out to those who are interested.

rndmnwierd · « **Reply #64 on:** September 29, 2009, 07:14:14 PM »

I'm interested!

maiZe · « **Reply #65 on:** September 29, 2009, 08:42:25 PM »

I've never commented on your stories before (sorry

) but I'm interested! Also, this was a very touching and emotional story. I really enjoyed your writing. I got a bit confused on the pairings at first, but the third part definitely cleared it up (though I had to go back and read parts 1 and 2 to get everything straight). Thanks for the story!

lil_hamz · « **Reply #66 on:** September 30, 2009, 08:28:41 PM »

Even though I know I will get to read it, I still wanna tell you personally (uh, it's through the net but you know what I mean

) I'm more than interested in the 4th part.

The fic stands well with 3 parts but with another I'm sure it will give us a different perspective and I'm certain it will be just as good if not better

GanbaReina!

JFC · « **Reply #67 on:** October 01, 2009, 05:52:56 AM »

POV 2

Sooo...the patient is Risa, Aichan's the one that found her, and Eri's the one that left.

Is it odd that I expected Aichan and Eri's roles to be switched? I guess we can blame the other fics here that have had Aichan in the role of "the one that left" for making me automatically think that it'd be her.

POV 3

Hoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooly CRAP!

Reina...please say she didn't....

badsaints · « **Reply #68 on:** October 01, 2009, 06:43:16 AM »

Gasp!

She did?! Guess even death can't do them part

(I know I commented on H!O but I can't help myself here)

I feel that the ending here sums up the story well so I'm not sure I want a continuation, or maybe I do afterall. I'm a sucker for sappy story afterall

@Hammy- I'll join you for the chocolates

Misery loves company

cogi_yoshi · « **Reply #69 on:** October 05, 2009, 06:50:59 AM »

REINAA~~~!!! I can't believe it... Did she just try to...ki... I can't even say that word... She's suffered too much. And Eri's letter added her sufferings more which.... GAAAAHH!!!

Can you PM me the 4th POV?

aussie · « **Reply #70 on:** October 07, 2009, 04:34:28 AM »

Reina....whaaaaa?????? I'd be more than interested in the fourth part too.

FaqU · « **Reply #71 on:** October 16, 2009, 07:28:43 PM »

Yours Always

If I tell you I love you would you feel the same?

Or would you turn it down and tell me to find it in another’s name?

If I tell you I’m happy would you spend the night?

Or would you turn it around and let me spend it in fright?

If I tell you I’m sad would you take my troubles away?

Or would you leave me hanging here alone and astray?

If I tell you I can’t live without you would you not leave me?

Or would you just tell me in my face that we weren’t meant to be?

If I tell you I support your decisions would you leave today?

Or would you reconsider and think of another way?

What could I possibly tell you?

I read the note over and over, it was a poem by you and it expressed all of your concerns and feelings. I know because we’ve spent so much time together, no one knows you like I do, or understands you like I do and I wish I could ease all your pain but I know that it was inevitable. We both knew this day was going to come it was a matter of sooner or later and unfortunately regardless of how we see it, the day came for me to leave.

I picked up my pen and wrote in response hoping this will ease all your concerns

Dear Maimi,

I know that it must be tough to support me when I am leaving but this isn’t the end of our relationship. We may be doing separate things but that doesn’t mean that we won’t be seeing each other anymore. Granted our schedules will be different and our chances of going out will be more difficult than before but that doesn’t mean that I will stop loving you, in fact I think it will make our love grow every moment we spend it with each other.

I know you are growing more and more worried because I am will be leaving by your side, you feel like no one will be able to help you out nor will there be a person to talk about your stresses within the group but I will always be a phone call away. I will smack some sense into those hooligans if they start acting up, disregarding your position as their leader.

Thank you for your support, I know that the decision has hit you the hardest and you have done nothing but support me throughout when we talked about our dreams. Please don’t let my departure blur your decision and future, you’ve got to be strong like you always have. Although people have said that you aren’t much of a leader because you have no control over the girls but I know that you only want them to be happy so you let them be. You don’t tell nor show them your troubles because you don’t want to be overly strict with them but that’s why you are strong though. You tolerate, maybe you really are scatterbrained and that’s why you can tolerate, but I believe that you only portray that part of you especially on national television when the girls don’t give you the respect you deserve. You only laugh it off and think of it as a joke.

When I am not around, you are the oldest of the group regardless if it is just a 2 year gap, you are the leader so your responsibilities are greater than the rest, you are the one who has to be reprimanded if the girls do anything wrong, and time and time again you just suck it up and let them be but you don’t have to feel like you are alone. Nakky can help you, Airi may be going at her own pace but she can help you deal with the other 2. Don’t worry about the future too much (I know that is one of your main worries even if you don’t tell me, so don’t even try to lie), everything will be alright.

I haven’t mentioned about our relationship in this letter but only because I don’t think of it as a concern, it never will be. You are irreplaceable in my world just like I am in yours, so there is no need to worry about it. I only worry about your sanity (laugh) when I am not around, I trust your feelings for me are true and that we can make this all work out. I promise it will, don’t doubt it (don’t think I can’t sense it in your poem), I am guaranteeing it to you now like I have never before, that we will remain strong in our relationship regardless of the circumstances.

Although the group has changed, my love for you will not. I love you so don’t forget that.

Yours always,

Erika

kuro808 · « **Reply #72 on:** October 16, 2009, 07:39:36 PM »

nice one-shot, it is a sincere letter

Also congrads on 100

rndmnwierd · « **Reply #73 on:** October 16, 2009, 09:14:29 PM »

So sweet!

100 posts!!

lil_hamz · « **Reply #74 on:** November 04, 2009, 11:45:14 AM »

Quote from: badsaints on October 01, 2009, 06:43:16 AM

@Hammy- I'll join you for the chocolates Misery loves company

Ehh, are you sure you wanna join me? I might exasperate you too much

Your Always

I love the poem. I don't know how you managed to make everything rhyme so well. I know it's a poem so it's supposed to go but still! You are good!

Poor Maimi though. I hope she can pick herself up

FaqU · « **Reply #75 on:** January 04, 2010, 05:16:02 PM »

Wow it's been a while since I did a one-shot and I haven't replied to the comments from my previous one yeesh!!!

I didn't even realize that I was at 100??? But thanks guys!!!

@ Mame-chan: I don't even know how I managed to make everything rhyme, but the spur of the moment for rhyming came and with the help of the rhyming gods voila!

So inspiration came to me via Chloe's one-shot so here we go....

Target

I ran at full force noticing the time. I was frantically praying that I would get to my destination on time in which I mentally kicked myself for oversleeping because if I didn’t I wouldn’t be in this situation now would I?

Carrying my bag over my shoulders I mentally kicked myself again for oversleeping on a day that I had so much to carry. Today was the day I had to attack in which I was so hyped up on and it felt like now or never. I’ve spent a lot of time collecting information, observing my target from afar to the point that I believe I had it down pat and planning this day.

I checked my watch again, I’ve got exactly 15 minutes to complete my mission and I still had a long way to go. Putting all my energy into heaving a heavy bag and running I picked up my pace and ran like never before.

I didn’t really relax until I saw my destination up ahead, a tall white building surrounded by glass windows but I shouldn’t get too happy too quickly because I still have to be up there on the 20th floor, where my target should be.

Running past people at the lobby, I slid my way into the elevator just before it was closing. I knew I was getting weird stares and glances from people around me but I didn’t care at the moment I was in a hurry as I watched the elevator arrive to my designated floor.

At the sound of the ‘ping’ I rushed out and turned left and ran, slipping past people. I could hear a few “Hey”s, but there is no time to acknowledge them now, I have exactly 2 minutes for my attack.

I ducked past pillars, dodged past anyone who might be watching me, weaving in and out, round and round. I looked at my watch again which I wished I didn’t at the moment because now my target was on the move.

Based on my observations and data, I had to change my original plan as I went up the fire escape route and ran to the 21st floor where my target was to meet up with others.

I opened the fire escape door quietly just in case my target was already here. Looking left and then right I saw nobody just yet which means I have time to catch my breath from all that running I did.

I waited silently for my target to get off the elevator, I had to pull this off just at the right moment, I’m in trouble as it is. At the sound of the elevator ‘ping’ I peeked through a crack and luckily only my target walked out.

I closed the door and waited patiently for my target to walk by and when they did, I opened the door and grabbed the person from behind, covering their mouth with my free hand.

I turned them around and smack…I kissed them on the lips “Good morning” I smiled

After realization had hit them, the person frowned and crossed their arms across their chest “You’re late again”

“Awww Reina, I didn’t mean to, I was so anxious about surprising you with breakfast that I overslept” I pouted

Reina’s glare softened “a surprise breakfast??”

I nodded and heaved my bag in front for Reina to see, there were 4 lunchboxes and 4 containers, 2 breakfast meals, 2 lunches, 2 containers of juice and 2 containers of milk “it was so heavy on my arms”

Reina smiled and took my bag from me to hold then gave me a peck “Forgiven” as we exited the stairways to the meeting room.

My plan didn’t go as I wished which means that I have to go back to the drawing board and think of a new one for a new day…say tomorrow?

pretend_2besome1 · « **Reply #76 on:** January 04, 2010, 05:37:22 PM »

Holy crap! I was just replying to your comment like minutes ago and ZAP here you are with a new 1-shot! Tell your inspiration to pass by me as well

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I turned them around and smack…I kissed them on the lips “Good morning” I smiled

nice technique!

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I nodded and heaved my bag in front for Reina to see, there were 4 lunchboxes and 4 containers, 2 breakfast meals, 2 lunches, 2 containers of juice and 2 containers of milk “it was so heavy on my arms”

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My plan didn’t go as I wished which means that I have to go back to the drawing board and think of a new one for a new day…say tomorrow?

So there's more? *give hopeful look*

You didn't reveal who the girl is (revenge?), so I'll try to guess, Eri? Since you said you want to use more of this pairing in the future.
If not then I hope it's Sayu. However, considering all the running she did it's not possible

cogi_yoshi · « **Reply #77 on:** January 04, 2010, 07:41:47 PM »

YEY!!! You started another series of one shots!!!! And Reina's there again.... hmm, considering the pairings that you've written so far... I'm guessing that it's another TanaGaki fic!!!

Unless you want to change it into a different pairing..ahahaha...anyways, anything with reina's cool for me.

badsaints · « **Reply #78 on:** January 05, 2010, 03:34:46 AM »

I'm guessing the speaker is Eri?

Nothing like a good run and homemade meal in the morning to spice up your relationship

aussie · « **Reply #79 on:** January 05, 2010, 04:55:02 AM »

The whole thing just screams TANAKAME