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unstoppable feelings (Chapter 10)
« on: August 28, 2009, 09:45:21 AM »
“Yossie, how do you like this school. It is one of the most prestigious and richest school in Japan. Not only that, it’s also an all girls’ school.” Goto was excited and jumped up and down.

Yossie just kept her look on the finely-well-built building. Its appearance gives off a richly smell. Metal gate surrounding the architecture, a long pebble sidewalk extending from the gate to the main big door. Fountains were on both side. There were more to the school and its surrounding which yossie’s view was blocked from her standing but she knows that the scene is that of a park where rick people would spend their free time to sit and drink tea.

“Spoil brat girls who just spent their time for scenery than for education.” Yossie spat out disgustingly.

“You are so pessimistic. Why don’t you just enjoy the scene?  And why aren’t you wearing a skirt?”

“Because its more comfortable in pants plus this is an all girls school, there’s no point in dressing yourself up since there are no boys here.” Some of other students passing by them looking at yossie as if they have never seen a handsome girl before.

The two entered the school when the bell rang.

“Miki-sama, wait up!” Miki kept her pace faster trying to avoid whoever is calling her, yet oblivious to what’s infront of her.

“Ittai!!! Which low life dared to bump into me. Do you know who I am?” Miki looked up which to see an angry tall short brownish-black hair glaring back at her.

“It is I, the great yossie who does not give a damn of who you are.” With that, yossie shoved miki away and walked pass her. Obviously Miki wouldn’t leave this matter alone. Aya who was calling out for miki had finally caught up to her.

“Miki-sama, you forgot your cellphone” Miki was angry at Aya, the intruder, interrupted her exploding on yossie, so she grabbed her cellphone and smashed it on the floor.

“I demand an apology”

“Excuse me if I heard you wrong. You want an apology when you were the one who didnt watch where you were going. You should be glad that I didn’t return any nasty comments back to you. An apology? dream on!”

Goto quickly held yossie’s arm back and nodded her head and apologized to miki in turn for yossie.

“Look at who’s talking so dignified can’t even say the word sorry and had to make her girl say it for her”

“She’s not my girl, she’s my friend. Get that through your thick skull.”

Ding Dong. The bell rang the second time for the final reminding that class had started.

“Miki-sama, I think we should go or else Nakayawa sensei will be mad. You know how her wrath is.”

“Pssh, if you’re that chicken then go first. Annoying girl. With my background, what can she do?

While aya was persuading miki, goto quickly grabbed yossie and made a dash heading for the classroom.

“Yossie, why… did you make trouble… on our first day at school. Not only that we’re freshmen also.” Goto was panting like a mad dog.

“That girl..what’s her name? err…something miki pissed me off. This is why I don’t like rich girls. They think they are mighty and high. If not because of you kept pestering me to apply for this school, I wouldn’t be bumping into that crazy girl man.”

“Arent you yourself kinda rich too, but not as rich as some of these girls here lol. However you shouldn’t be so discriminating on every girls here.”

“Whatever. Let’s get to our class hurry. We’re late”

While all the commotions that yossie and miki had caused in the hallway, someone was also watching them from afar.

“Rika-sama, it’s time for our class.”
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Re: unstoppable feelings
« Reply #1 on: August 28, 2009, 07:20:50 PM »
Hmm, interesting. Am I really the first to comment on a story which seems to star the 85ers? Hellz yeah!

Oh and  :welcome

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Re: unstoppable feelings
« Reply #2 on: August 28, 2009, 09:53:11 PM »
thanks rndmnwierd. I was hoping to read comments so then i could know if i should continue this story but people are selfish where they dont leave any comment at all but still reading someone's story

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Re: unstoppable feelings
« Reply #3 on: August 28, 2009, 10:01:49 PM »
That's a very harsh, but true, outlook. Anyway, I want you to continue and I'm awesome so please.

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Re: unstoppable feelings
« Reply #4 on: August 28, 2009, 10:44:33 PM »
Should I say "ouch!" XD 
well I sometimes do that, but is not for selfishness but because I still have problems with my english and sometimes I can't express what I want to say so I get annoyed and end up no posting anything :nervous anyways I usually try to comment the most in the stories I a like, and I think I'll be posting here :thumbsup

now on the story... wow Mikitty as a spoiled girl, agressive Yossy, Aya as the submissive one and Maki a good kid?!!!  :dizzy: what on earth is happening? hahaha but it's interesting :thumbsup

waiting for the next chapter

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Re: unstoppable feelings
« Reply #5 on: August 29, 2009, 12:16:12 AM »
whatever it has the 85ers in it I'll read it  :heart:
Miki being a bitch is always interesting to read  XD XD

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Re: unstoppable feelings
« Reply #6 on: August 29, 2009, 12:53:03 AM »
whatever it has the 85ers in it I'll read it  :heart:
Miki being a bitch is always interesting to read  XD XD

My sentiments exactly!  :w00t:  Do continue! Do!   :cry:
Somehow, I get the f4 vibes here..  Must be all the rich, mean people.  :P



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Re: unstoppable feelings
« Reply #7 on: August 29, 2009, 09:22:30 AM »
lol thanks for the reply. Do u guys think that rika is also mean.
Since im a yomiki fan and ishiyoshi fan, this fic is going to be miki-yossie-rika. I dont know whom yossie should end with

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Re: unstoppable feelings
« Reply #8 on: August 29, 2009, 10:43:37 AM »
Here is chapter two

Yossie slided the door open to find the grls all chattering about stuffs which she wasn’t interested in.

“Hey do you think that Ishikawa girl will be in the same class as us?”

“Don’t know but I hope she’s not.  She doesn’t even give a damn of anyone around her. She thinks the world revolves around her only.”

“Yeah, aren’t we also the top 10% richest families in Japan? Just because her father is richer than us doesn’t mean that she can treat us like trash.”

“Hey yossie, do u hear what they’re saying. Seems like this Ishikawa girl is so rich.” goto was prying on the girls’ conversation

“Not that I care.” yossie grabbed a seat at the end couple rows away from the window

“Oh no! you should care! Getting close to her will give you an advantage in business.”

“Who are you.” Yossie raised her eyebrow

“My name is sayu. My family specializes in tea business. I’m quite as well rich as those girls.”

Yossie just ignored her and stared outside the window. Goto who was curious about the information so she jumped in.

“Who is that Ishikawa girl that they were talking about.”

“Her family owns half of Japan’s business. Most of us are just under her family’s wings. Half of this school budget is funded by her father.”

“Then whose the other half?”

“The other half is funded by Fujimoto family. They are also Ishikawa’s rival since other half of Japan’s business is controlled by them.”

“Who are their daughters?

“Ishikawa’s daughter is Rika-sama and Fujimoto’s daughter is Miki-sama.” Goto quickly looked up to yossie who also looked at her surprisingly. “Their personalities are the same which that they don’t see people as equal as them because of their social status. It would be great if you don’t get on any of their nerves.”

Sayu beamed them with her wink and excused herself.

“Yossie what are you going to do?”

“About what?”

“Miki, the girl who you pissed off.”

“You mean the girl who pissed me off. Im not going to do anything since im here for my business education and hit off my career.”

“Yossie! You got on her nerve.”

Yossie covered her ears to blocked her best friend’s complain and stuck out her tongue to mock her friend.

“Look, its Miki-sama.” Sayu whispered to her friend, Erin.

“So its not gonna be Rika-sama?” Erin questioned

“Actually its going to be both.” Ai chan and Rika both dropped their jaws. “This year is going to be hell for us.”

When Miki looked around and saw the familiar face who bumped into her earlier, she smirked to herself. Yossie felt the goosebump all over her body.

“Rika-sama, where would you like to sit” Erika politely bowed her head to her master.

“Next to that brownish-black hair girl.”


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Re: unstoppable feelings
« Reply #9 on: August 29, 2009, 11:16:21 AM »
Yossi with the attitide :O Damn I'm in!

Potential drama alert! Can't wait for the next chap XD

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Re: unstoppable feelings
« Reply #10 on: August 29, 2009, 01:41:40 PM »
Oooo, are they gonna fight over Yossui? Or is Yossui gonna fight over them?

Wait, does that even make sense?

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Re: unstoppable feelings
« Reply #11 on: August 29, 2009, 03:31:10 PM »
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Sayu beamed them with her wink and excused herself.

Yay! The ichiban kawai


Miki and Rika both with great 'powers' yay, very interesting


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“This year is going to be hell for us.”

wanna see err read  :w00t:


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“Next to that brownish-black hair girl.”

So Miki will sit n the other side.?.   Get ready to rumble   :taco:

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Re: unstoppable feelings
« Reply #12 on: August 29, 2009, 04:08:04 PM »
Ishikawa VS Fujimoto
This is going to be fun  XD XD

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Re: unstoppable feelings
« Reply #13 on: August 29, 2009, 09:50:43 PM »
hahahaha I'm already laughing thinking about what could happen next :lol:

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Re: unstoppable feelings
« Reply #14 on: August 30, 2009, 06:18:16 AM »
This is a great story
I think I'm going to enjoy
this , Keep it up

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Re: unstoppable feelings
« Reply #15 on: August 30, 2009, 10:45:08 AM »
chapter 3 is up, thank you for those who commented


“What an unlucky day. Cant believe this bitchy girl is sitting next to me and on my left side also. Now I cant stare out at the window.” Yossie thought to herself.

Goto giggled to herself, “What a twisted fate.”

Thud! “Alright class, quiet down!” Nakazawa-sensei slammed her books on the desk.

“How scary. It’s the old lady again.” Risa whispered to ai-chan

“Not only that, she’s still single haha.”

“Eh? What did you just say?” Nakazawa-sensei bulged out her eyes to stare at the girls.

“Nothing sensei!” both saluted their teacher.

15 minutes since class had started………

“Newton's first law of motion is that an object at rest tends to stay at rest and an object in motion tends to stay in motion with the same speed and in the same direction unless acted upon by an unbalanced force.” Nakazawa-sensei started writing out the second and third law of Newton.

Everyone seemed to be bored of this topic since physics is not that easy for them to comprehend except yossie who was scribbling down the notes into her notebook.

Miki was playing with her nails while Rika twirled her hair with her fingers.

Yossie dropped her eraser and it rolled to her right which happened to hit Rika’s foot. Yossie bent down to pick up her eraser but she stepped on it purposely. She looked at yossie and smiled playfully at her.

“Excuse me” Yossie asked Rika nicely but Rika kicked the eraser and it rolled near the teacher’s desk.

“What was that for?” Yossie was irritated.
“To kill my boredom. You seem like a nerd. No one in the class pays attention to the lesson except you. It’s also because they are rich so they don’t care about what lies ahead of them. But you I guess it’s a different story.”

“My background is none of your business.” Yossies straightened her back and tried to keep her face cool. This is really my double hell unlucky day. A bitchy miki earlier and now a crazy Rika. They both really have the same personalities; always like to bring up their status.

Miki on the other hand kept throwing small pieces of paper ball at Yossie. She made a hand signal for yossie to unfold the paper.

What a nerd. Yossie crumbled up the paper into its previous form and looked at Miki whom returned her with an innocent face.

“So that’s the end of today lesson. Have fun with your lunch guys. If you don’t understand just look over again in your textbooks. Just remember DON’T DISTURB MY LUNCH! Bye class.” Nakazawa made a quick dash outside the classroom.

Is she really working for her salary? Yossie packed up her notebook and left also. Goto quickly followed her.

“Neh yossie, what are you going to eat?” Her best friend grabbed her stomach.

“Anything that’s edible.”

“Here are the rooms for students to hang out and eat their food.  Wait here, I’ll go get something for us to eat."
Goto left yossie standing there cluelessly.

“Matte! which room though? “ However goto was already out of sight. “Since she said it’s a place to hang out so it doesn’t matter which room right. I’ll just text her where I am.”

Since a room with a pink tag on it was near yossie, she twisted the doorknob open which to find the room was empty.

“Hm…this is weird. How come no one hangs out in here?” She entered the room and scanned around its surrounding. There were small table and chairs in the middle and couple couches near the walls. The windows are decorated with fine fabric long creamy curtains.

“This room is huge.” Yossie yawned outloud. “I might as well take a quick nap also to restore my energy incase I bump into any crazy girls. Never know what might happen at this strange school.” She threw herself onto the couch on the right side and dozed off.

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“Rika-sama, what would you like to eat today?”

“Just something light, I don’t want any meat today.”

“Understood. Please excuse me.” Rika nodded her head and Erika disappeared away.

Rika stopped in front of her resting room. The door is always noticeable because of the pink tag. However she heard something strange coming from inside. It was a snoring sound

She twisted the doorknob and walked inside slowly to find who the intruder was.

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Hope you guys will enjoy this chapter


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Re: unstoppable feelings
« Reply #16 on: August 30, 2009, 01:08:47 PM »
1st day of school and Yossie already made herself popular? :mon cigar:

I can just imagine Miki & Rika competing to win over Yossie  :knee:


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:on study: Oh Yossie is a nerd with attitude? Cool!

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Re: unstoppable feelings
« Reply #17 on: August 30, 2009, 05:32:09 PM »
Lols, I can't wait to see Rika's reaction.

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Re: unstoppable feelings
« Reply #18 on: August 30, 2009, 06:15:35 PM »
Mou!  :tantrum: why is it have to be Yossie....i mean the main character! hehe kidding! :hee:

i was hoping there would be a charmikitty  :shifty: here but reading the chapters.....made me  :shock:

i want to read some CharMikitty story..... :on roll:

anyway....nice one author-san!  :kneelbow:




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Re: unstoppable feelings
« Reply #19 on: August 30, 2009, 09:24:36 PM »
^ naaah   It's been a while since I read a fic about tis awesome triangle 8) 

Rika and Miki are so spoiled XD I guess Yossy will have to give them a lesson :pimp:  after she gets out of trouble :nervous

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