Kurosawa's Poems 12/26 Iikubo/DAWA

[kuro808]

Kitty watches her prey

As the bunny nibbles

The kitty pounces on top of the rabbit

The rabbit rubs the kitty's nose

Kitty lets the bunny go

Walks behind the bunny

Realizing the meaning

The bunny won the match

As the kitty

gives up her shame

As the bunny has her toy

in the turtle's shell

[kuro808]

Distilling the words

You said

The last night we met

Wondering

Somewhere

You are happy

We haven't talk

And yet I saw

Another girl in your arms

Defeated

I left the flowers

To apologize

As I walk back

You hugged me

Whispering

Risa you'll win someday, I know it

[kuro808]

Feeling how your body sways,

The image of waves come to mind

Slowly rising and violent crash

--------

Risa

I miss you

You still look like a mushroom

A red mushroom

While I'm yellow

We should group up

And we can spore together

 

Erinin

NOTE: Don't take it too seriously, just an image between Gaki and Kamei...

[kuro808]

The silence at night

When you touch me

The feeling of lust

Overriding the love

The night coming to an end

Can't stop it

Please don't stop

Can't get rid of the guilt

I only know what you can do

Please

Stay with me tonight

Like our first time

I'll be well-behaved.

[kuro808]

The pain

The sliver stuck onto my finger

As I pull it out

The pain grows

As I see you with another girl

I could only think of the pain

Not the girl

I want to fight

But not as an ex

But as a friend

I mistreated you

I apologized

Spent my days

Drinking myself to sleep

Seeing you flirting

Turned my stomach

Until I couldn't do

Just when I wanted to leave

A woman saved me

Nursed me to health

Realizing I was wrong

I want you to have a good life

But I want you to know

I support you

Always

[Beecubed]

 

Great poems, Kuro. You're really good at free verse. You write so simply, but there's plenty of meaning behind those words

I have to wonder, how long does it take for you to write these? Do you plan, draft and revise? Or just write them and post them in their raw forms? Just curious 

Smile
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I was happy and will be forever

I loved this one! 

And the last one you just posted is really good too.

You know, some of these poems are really good inspiration for one-shots - I think you could take some of these up and expand on them. 

Good job, and keep writing! 

[kuro808]

^ I really only take a few minutes to get the image but most of the poems have those types of intentions where the theme is similar and to expand on them lol not gonna happen

[kuro808]

Hidden away

Finding myself scared

Lips chapped

Mouth dry

Gazing into your eyes

Out of everybody you pick me

Why?

I mean

Thank you

I just wish

You were more

Not funny

Because

The more I fill up

The more I want to kiss you

Please quiet

Let me lean in

Let me...

No

Please don't...

As I reach out

You catch me

Seeing the smile

I knew I did the right thing

[kuro808]

Sitting in bed

Waiting for you

In the rain

I just watch the rain

hit the pane in rhythm

As you enter

See the rain-soaked clothes

You smile

Giving me you soup

You pour it into a cup

Letting me drink it

I am feeling better

Although your smile

Turns into frown

I rush you into the bathroom

Taking off your clothes

Handing a spare pajamas

Letting me tuck you in

Being sick together sucks

But at least with you

I can feel better

With the best medicine

You =3

[kuro808]

The night falls with her

As she gracefully passes

The partner stays mute

[kuro808]

Late nite

I can't sleep

Thinking of you

Calling you

After a few rings

Your voice

Warm

Cute

And Sexy

Although

Dead sounding

I still like you

No

I love you!

[kuro808]

Never felt this way

I trusted you

In a way

Crushing my heart

my spirit

In front of me

Remembering the past

How you would kiss me

When i couldn't go to sleep

Caress my body

To make me feel better

But

Crushing me

In front of your house

With another girl

I wanted to scream

Just waited until you left

Wrote what i needed to say

And left

Hearing the voice from above

"You lost"

Trying

to keep myself

from breaking down

I ran through the rain

To my safe place

Looking at the crowd

I just put my head down

Let the tablecloth soak my tears

Everything washed away

Before thinking about it

A girl sat across of me

She offered a glass of water

In her working attire

She smiled

Walking back

I ordered a special

She left it on my table

as she walked

I asked her to stay

"Sorry I am working"

Sat there waiting

Until she finished her shift

Seeing me

Not touch my food

She took off her apron

And cut into a piece of meat

Looking up

All I could do was smile

And she continued eating

She finished and walked back to clean

Seeing her walk back

I grabbed her wrist

Press my lips onto hers

Then walked away

Months later

She managed to find me

At a park

With a bento

She finally said

"Why?"

"Because you did so much"

What did I do?

You became my new friend

[kuro808]

The two girls look at the moonlight

Nervous on their first date

The silence makes them anxious

Listening to nature

The first girl makes her move

She lets the her put her head on her shoulder

Her breathing becomes difficult

Thinking of the next words

The other girl turns the head

Pecks her on the cheek

Smiles

And grabs her hand

Takes her through streets

Feeling the breeze through her hair

Takes her to a hideaway

Presses her lips on top of hers

And feel the body sway in her arms

"Aishiteru!"

[kuro808]

What is the fear?

The fear is

Us being together

Everybody knows it

Everytime I get close

I see it in your eyes

For how much it is worth

I love when you whisper

When you say those words

I cannot help it anymore

I gotta run back

No one will stop me

This is not worth anything

My life

or my happiness

I choose you

Final

Just let me have it

"I love you"

[kuro808]

The monkey sits on the roof

Watching over the bean

She sees the tears falling

As she creeps closer

She feels the pain coming over

She hangs upside down with a smile

The bean becomes startle

"Hello, I'm Ai"

"Hey, I'm Risa"

The new friendship starts

To become closer at every moment

With every fight breaks them apart

With every makeup makes them better

With support

They realize what is next

Both grow from their youth

Realize the faults

Conquer the mountain

In happiness

Its soon their own ceremony

To end in the depths

[kuro808]

Fighting through the enemies

She realizes her destiny

In the end she would get the girl

No matter how much stuff

She will fight

In her heart

She sees the glow

With her weapon

Slashes through the opponent

Every difficulty

She steps toward the end

Feeling her body

Exhausted

Happy

Saddened

Accomplished

She stands at the end

Looking up

Her dream was a reality

The quest in her mind

A video game

[kuro808]

She walks across the dance floor

Watching the eyes

She lends out her hand

They touch hands

Her feet moves to the beat

The stiff feeling goes away

They follow the rhythm

As the steps become crisp

The music goes faster

Their faces loosened up

Smiling

Spins

Stops

Let's go

Walks toward the other side of the dance floor

She nods

Running toward her partner

Picks her up

As she holds on to her hips

She laughs as she soars

Slowly let her down

Laugh

Finally, touching each other lips

 

[kuro808]

The full moon

Shines upon the girl

As she twirls

The glitter she releases

Amazes the older girl

She could only smile

As the fairy

Reveals herself

As she closes in

Her body close

Lips closer

Love stronger

Better learning

[kuro808]

The two girl with smiles
5th generation loving
Always together

[kuro808]

Whisper in her ear
What others say about them
It doesn't matter