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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 12 11/30)
« Reply #180 on: December 04, 2009, 07:40:52 PM »
Ohhh...other pairings...  :love:
AikaJun... TanaShige... wait...how about Eri??? Don't leave her all alone!!!! On second thought.... it's somewhat a little bit of TanaKame (coz Eri and Reina are both cops and they knew each other better) and KameShige too (coz Reina pushes Sayu away from her bed towards Eri)... woah... Sugoi!!!  :on lol:

This chapter's full of action!! I'm glad that she lessened her 'trigger-happiness' a little bit and decided not to KILL them... but instead... TORTURE them!!! ahahaha... now which is the lesser evil? hmmm... :grin:

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“I haven’t had this much fun in a while.” Sayumi grinned dangerously at her companions and the cops understood Aika’s fear.
BE afraid Aika.. be VERY afraid! It's the narcissistic bunny we're talking about...  XD

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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 12 11/30)
« Reply #181 on: December 06, 2009, 06:09:22 AM »
@amEthystx: The green tea frappuccino is from Starbucks. McDonald's has it too? Golly, I've got to give it a try then. Or, get my friend to :P Don't I get a drink too? :D

@badsaints: You are so right ;)


Now, onto the fic comment...

It's good to see Jun Jun and Aika being able to share some parts of their painful past. I know the girls aren't all gonna be les XD But at least they can become closer friends. That is, until some of them die :cry:

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The con gasped lightly in surprise at the action, but quickly regained her composure and tightened her hold on her cop, happily hugging her. Both girls fell into a comfortable sleep soon after.

Isn't this much better? :lol:

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Risa’s eyes widened as she watched one of them sway and twist and then the other match them move for move.

I dunno if this is such a good idea. I mean, Ai is hurt.

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As the next song started up, Ai let out a low groan and began to fall, clutching her side. Eri was quick to catch her, face transforming into a look of concern and Risa was up and running before it even registered that she had sat down.

See, I knew it! I can't believe Eri challenged Ai to a dancing contest. Even if it was on a whimp, shouldn't she know better? Seems like Eri really needs someone more mature to look after her. Someone like Risa :P

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“400,000 yen too much, but some of it’s to keep Ai from getting too bored.

Wooo~~! Risa sure is a generous girlfriend.

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“And Ai? I-” Risa paused, suddenly aware of her audience, “I’ll see you soon.”

This line freaked me out. I thought something bad was gonna happen.

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As Reina was driving, she had to get someone to help strap on her own holster, but before Eri could reach her, Sayumi, who had grabbed a large machete, volunteered. Her soft touch and teasing hands caused Reina to flush brightly, much to the older girl’s amusement, “Why Reinya,” she asked as she secured the straps between her breasts, “is your heart beating faster?” her fingers lingered longer than necessary, finally snapping the cop out of her daze.

LOL! Sayu you little devil. Taking the opportunity to grope Reina. And Eri was funny. I can just imagine her expression.

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*Sayu action*

Wah..I didn't expect her to be so capable in this department.

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“Why didn’t you kill them?” Reina asked bluntly. Risa put away her various weapons, looking down to hide her face.

Agreed. Will this become a problem in the future?

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There, they got hurt in the face! I didn't say it would be one of the girls. Please don't kidnap me, I can't write in a cupboard....


I dunno what to say about the action scenes except :shocked You are awesomely good :twothumbs I could install a light in the cupboard. Will that be better? Or I'll feed you with loads of green tea fraps if you don't update sooner XD

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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 12 11/30)
« Reply #182 on: December 06, 2009, 01:51:55 PM »
@rndmnwierd:

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adopts a gruff tone* Well, I killed a man once, but they never caught me. In fact, I'm still running and I'm writing this under mah bridge by the over pass. It's so cold tonight and the desktop is so heavy. So, so heavy.

 :mon scare: Stop scaring the babies out there~ Including me! Poor thing~ You carried the desktop??? lol

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Yup, Reina has herself quite the admirer, doesn't she? Will she be able to handle all that potential psychoticness?
- *Digs Reina a grave*

To the video: I happy i'm not that watermelon.



@Hammy: McDonald was a wild guess~ =X Ohhh~ Maybe i'll go try it the next time i go Starbuck~ I'm already missing Starbuck  :(

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I could install a light in the cupboard. Will that be better? Or I'll feed you with loads of green tea fraps if you don't update sooner
- LOL ~ a few weeks later.. you might see rndmnwierd turning into a green tea plant.. THEN... I'll help you change the lights into some better UV lamps~

 :mon bat:

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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 12 11/30)
« Reply #183 on: December 08, 2009, 10:16:46 PM »
@cogi_yoshi - Are you hoping for a rokki orgy or something? XD

@hammy-san - What makes you think I'm going to kill someone? Did I say that somewhere? Hmm, I guess I still haven't decided if I'm going to or not, so... Maybe I will, maybe I won't. :bigdeal:
Eri just wasn't thinking about that. She forgot. :sweatdrop:
What's a little money to someone's happiness?
What did you think was going to happen?
I was going to make Sayu a wimp, but I changed my mind half way through.
Hmm, it might, but maybe not in the way you think. I'll touch on that in later chapters.
Ah, thank you. Light is good, but if I turn into a plant, I'll be unhappy. I don't even like green tea! *waves arms*

@Baby Sticky - Yup, I plugged the power cord into my ear and rubbed a balloon on my head until it turned on, lol.
Nooo! No green tea plant! I wanna be a happy tree. *pouts*

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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 12 11/30)
« Reply #184 on: December 08, 2009, 10:18:43 PM »
Chapter 13: the poster bearer cried.


As soon as she entered Lin’s hotel room, Risa made a beeline for her girlfriend, engulfing her in a tight embrace. Ai let out a small squeak as she was squeezed, but returned the hug with just as much vigor. “Welcome back.” she greeted softly.

“I’m glad to see you.” Risa said when she finally released the older woman. Ai noticed her split lip instantly and began to check her over for other injuries, “I’m fine, Ai, just a little sore.” She finally turned to acknowledge the other girl in the room and hugged her as well, “Hi Lin Lin.”

“What happened?” The hacker asked curiously.

“Everything went according to plan. Everyone was neutralized, only one death.” Risa shrugged at Ai’s still disapproving look. “Sorry, that one couldn’t be helped.”

“Neutralized how?” Lin asked uncertainly, it didn’t sound very encouraging.

“I don’t know what Sayu did, exactly, but the other’s seemed a little afraid of her on the ride back and she was the most covered in blood. She didn’t kill anyone, though I heard the ones she dealt with lost the use of their legs.” The gunner reported nonchalantly.

The demolitions expert shook her head, “Even Sayu?” she looked down for a moment, before suddenly snapping her head up, “Oh yeah, earlier, some guys came through with about 400,000 yen worth of electronics to our room. You wouldn’t know anything about that, would you?”

“Yup, I bought it. To keep us from getting too bored.” Ai smacked her head at her girlfriend’s answer.

“Why did you buy that much stuff?!” Risa tilted her head in puzzlement.

“Because I can?” Exasperated, Ai stood and walked out, “Oh come on, it’s mostly for you!”

“Good night Lin-chan.” Ai greeted as she exited the room.

“Night Ai-nee-san! Good night, Niigaki-san.” Risa was almost too distracted to respond, but she did and quickly followed Ai back to their room.

“Look look! I got a PSP and a DS and lot’s of games and a big screen TV and a Wii and a 360 and a PS3. And movies! And some horror books, too!” Risa explained excitedly, waving the novels around.

Ai, sitting propped against her headboard, rolled her eyes at the younger woman’s puppy like eagerness, “Still, you spent so much.”

“Do you want jewelry, too? I’ll get you something else if you want.” Risa completely missed the point, blinking innocently at her girlfriend.

“Gaki-san, I don’t need all this stuff. Keep your money.” Ai shoved away the very tempting PSP.

“What else can I spend my money on? I don’t need anything else, but to make you happy.” Risa pouted, sad her gifts were being refused, “I know you’re bored being here all day while we go out.”

“Risa, the only thing I need to make me happy is you.” Ai declared firmly.

“Really?” The gunner asked shyly. Ai nodded and beckoned her closer, the younger woman eagerly complied, crawling up into warm arms. “But still, this stuff is for entertainment purposes. I’m keeping it.

Ai sighed in exasperation, shaking her head. She decided to just address the issue later, leaning down to press her lips to Risa’s. The younger girl buried her hands in Ai’s dark locks, bringing her closer. They slowly pulled apart, staring deeply into each other’s eyes. “All that being said, I really wanna play with that Wii.”

The break in mood sent Risa nearly rolling off the bed. “Wanna try out the Sports Resort game?”


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“Why are you taking a shower in our room? Don’t you have your own shower?” Reina griped as a bloody Sayu sauntered into the bathroom.

“You’re welcome to join me.” she proposed seductively, causing a blush to appear on the cop’s cheeks.

“No thanks.” she stated flatly, turning her head away with a hum.

“I will, Sayumin.” Eri said, grabbing her own towel and following the con into the bathroom. Reina could only shake her head at them.

“Why do I put up with this crap?” she flopped down on her bed face first. When she looked up, her eyes connected to a bar napkin with a number scrawled on it.

Though it had been a week since Risa suggested it, Reina hadn’t called her father yet. She wondered if she ever would. They were so close to taking out Takashi and his higher ups, so close to moving on to her father’s gang.

Shaking her head, Reina sat up, reaching for the drawer of the bedside table and pulling out some files. She’d only given each a cursory glance, but decided now would be as good a time as any. She flipped through the stack until she found Sayu’s file and opened it.

Name, birthday, height, weight, hometown and her mug shot. A brief history was also given on the introductory page. Born into a rich family, her father’s company went bankrupt and he went crazy. He sold his oldest daughter to a slave ring and completely destroyed his mansion, with him and his wife in it. The only reason Sayumi escaped was because she was out of the country at the time.

Why was she out of the country by herself? She couldn’t have been fourteen at the time. Reina flipped a few more pages, scanning for the answer. “At such and such date Michishige Sayumi was in Bali for her- You have GOT to be kidding me!” Thinking she couldn’t possibly be reading what she was, Reina stared at the line again. “Honeymoon? She’s married?” The yankii felt a strange hollowness in her chest that she certainly didn’t like, “She’s married.”


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Jun groaned as the cold ice packs shifted on her aching body. When she got back to the hotel, a thorough examination concluded that her ribs were bruised from the pounding she’d taken and her wrist had been sprained from the pounding she’d given. Since it was her left hand, Jun figured it had happened when she’d lost her spikes.

Watching her worriedly from her own bed was Aika, who’d found the ice for her. “Do you need anything?” the thief asked quietly.

“No, I’ll be fine. Just the hazards of the job taking it’s toll.” Despite her words, the Chinese girl felt her eyes tearing up in pain.

Aika slowly crawled over to her, climbing into bed beside the older girl. Hesitantly, she wrapped her arms around Jun, holding her as the tears started, “Go ahead and cry, you’ve deserved it today.”


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Reina angrily sipped at her beer, sitting at the hotel bar later that night. She was still mulling over the information that she’d learned, feeling absolutely idiotic. How could she have even begun to think that the con artist had any sort of feelings for her or any feelings at all that weren’t selfish. The girl was married and apparently had no qualms about cheating on him. She thought back on the exchange she’d heard between Sayu and Jun at the apartment.

The cop was kicking herself for doing exactly what she’d tried to avoid doing since she’d taken this assignment; getting attached to these criminals. They were nothing but lowlives and had no morals. Feeling her fury peak, Reina guzzled the rest of her mostly full beer and ordered another. If she was being honest with herself, she wasn’t even really mad at Sayu, she was more disappointed with herself for her feelings for the older woman. And if she was being honest about her feelings…

Well, she really didn’t want to think about it honestly. In fact, she intended to drink until she couldn’t be honest to herself about anything. Someone sat down next to her and she turned a fierce glare towards them. Ai recoiled comically, holding up her hands in surrender.

“Whoa, hold on, I come in peace. Don’t you know you should never drink alone?” Ai ordered a drink of her own.

“I’m too angry to want company. Go away.” Reina took another gulp of beer, “Where’s your shadow?”

Ai tilted her head at the conflicting responses, “Risa? Sleeping, she was really worn out.” Reina just nodded and they fell into silence. Ai laid a hand on her shoulder, “Do you want to talk about it?”

“No, I just want to drink myself into the stupidity I’ve displayed recently.” The yankii replied in a slightly depressed tone.

“Oh.” The demolitions expert couldn’t think of a suitable comforting thing to say to that, “Well, I’ll help you then.”


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A loud thump, followed by badly muffled giggles sounded outside her room, causing Risa to awaken with a start. Zeroing in quickly on the sound, she almost laughed herself at the voices she heard in the hallway.

“Shh, be quiet Rei-chan. Risa’s trying to sleep.” Ai’s unmistakable voice echoed loudly, this was followed by a fumbling scratching that the gunner guessed was her trying unsuccessfully to open the door with her keycard, “Hmph, stupid lock.” Risa couldn’t help the grin that spread across her face as she rose to let them in.

“Hi guys.” the looks on Ai and Reina’s faces when the door was suddenly jerked open was totally worth being rudely woken up in the middle of the night. The two drunk women were quickly ushered inside and the cop wasted no time in flopping face down on the bed on the far side of the room.

“I’m sorry for waking you up Sacchan.” Ai apologized sincerely, throwing her arms around her girlfriend and cuddling her tightly. Still grinning, the gunner patted her affectionate girl on the back. She was kind of cute like this.

The two made their way to the unoccupied bed and flopped down in a tangle of arms and legs, Ai bursting into giggles upon impact. “Shh, you’ll wake up Tanakacchi.” Risa shushed quietly.

The older woman got her laughter under control slowly, under the amused gaze of her girlfriend. Noticing this watchfulness, Ai pounced on the gunner, rolling so that she was snuggled comfortably on top. Both girls sighed contentedly at the comfortable warmth that flooded from where their bodies touched, Risa closed her eyes and began to drift off.

Jerking awake with a moan, Risa felt something soft and wet caressing a sensitive spot on her neck and realized that Ai was kissing and biting the place rather distractingly. She sucked in a breath as the older woman shifted positions to hover over her more securely, getting serious about their necking. A bolt of electricity shot down Risa’s spine and into her nether regions.

Now, the gunner was no stranger to this feeling as she and Ai had been teenagers when they dated and it was terribly pleasant, but the demolitions expert was very drunk and Risa didn’t want to do anything they’d regret later. They’d agreed to take it slow, with that thought in mind, the younger woman pushed her amorous girlfriend away firmly. Ai resisted at first, drunkenly trying to reattach her lips to the place they’d been before, but the gunner would have none of it. Eventually the older woman just pouted, her unfocused gaze trying to lock onto Risa’s.

“Why? I wanna make you feel good, Risa.” The younger woman blushed at the tone and breathless way her name was said.

“Not like this, Ai. I want you to be lucid when I finally make you mine.” The demolitions expert seemed to contemplate this statement seriously before she nodded.

“Okay. Good night, I love you.” Ai planted a chaste kiss on her girlfriend’s cheek and snuggled up against her side, fading into unconsciousness almost immediately. Risa was stunned by the ease with which she‘d fallen asleep, but quickly snapped out of it when Ai’s still jean clothed leg rubbed against her own nearly bare one.

Shaking her head, the gunner glanced at the other bed to see Reina face down in what looked to be an uncomfortable position, hanging half off the bed. With a sigh, Risa untangled herself from her girlfriend and made her way to the youngest girl’s still form. She stripped her of her daytime clothes and put her in some shorts that lay at the end of the bed. Then she maneuvered her onto her left side and under the covers, making sure that there was nothing that could potentially suffocate her in her sleep.

Satisfied that the cop was going to wake up with a terrible hangover and be confused about where the rest of her clothes were, Risa turned her attention to Ai. She tugged off her shirt and jeans, leaving her in just her under garments. The gunner took a moment to admire the lithe form, marred only by a clean white bandage. She felt her heart beat faster.

Shaking her head of naughty thoughts, and absently rubbing her still sensitized neck, Risa crawled into bed with her girlfriend, bringing the blankets up around them both and cuddling up with Ai closely. Her work finally done, it didn’t take long for Risa to join them in slumber.



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A knock on the door early the next morning was greeted by two twin groans of pain. Chuckling, Risa got up to answer the door, reluctantly leaving her warm cocoon. Outside was a slightly frantic Sayumi, “Have you seen Reina?”

“Yeah, she’s in here.” The gunner had barely stepped aside before she was pouncing on the sluggish cop.

“Where were you! Why didn’t you come back to your room, do you know how worried Eririn and I were?!” Even Risa winced at the shrill tone which sent the hungover girls scrambling to cover their ears.

“Oh, so you care now? Fuckin’ hypocrite, why don’t you crawl back to your husband?” Already grumpy, Reina almost couldn’t stop the words from spilling forth, causing the other occupants of the room to widen their eyes, Ai even poked her head out from where she’d burrowed in the blanket to watch the unfolding drama.

“So you found out about that, huh?” Sayu scratched the back of her head as if she’d been caught with her hand in the cookie jar. Her nonchalance only seemed to enrage Reina further.

“Why do you say that as if it doesn’t matter!? You’re married and carrying out a fling with Jun Jun and whatever it is you were trying to pull on me! You’re the worst kind of scum.” Reina said with such vehemence that the con pulled back a good ways, hurt shining in her eyes.

“It’s not a big deal, that was an arranged marriage, I was fourteen! He’s a nice enough guy that he’d agreed that even though we were legally bound to each other, we should still look for our own happiness. We only have to be married until I’m 25.” Sayumi explained calmly, “Besides,” she added shyly, “What happened with Jun Jun was just a fluke, an act. It didn’t mean anything to either of us.”

“That still doesn’t make it right in my eyes. Arranged or not, you still made those vows.” Only slightly less angry, Reina rubbed her aching temples, “I won’t forgive you.”

Sayumi looked helplessly at their audience, who both just shrugged at her. When she turned back to Reina, the younger girl was on her side with her back facing the others, an obvious dismissal. It was apparent that any other tries at communication would be met with silence.

Feeling a little sorry for the con, Risa escorted her to the door, one hand on her lower back in a comforting gesture, “Maybe you should try again later.” Sayu’s crestfallen look tugged at her heart strings as she nodded in resigned silence. The door closed quietly behind her.

“Tanakacchi? Are you okay?” Reina grumbled something that probably wasn’t very nice, “You didn’t have to be so mean, Sayumin was just worried about you.”

“Worried?” The cop scoffed cynically, “That con artist has no feelings for anyone, except herself.” Risa and Ai exchanged a look at her bitter words.

“Why don’t you go take a shower? I bet that might help you feel a little better.” The oldest woman suggested kindly, prompting Reina to rise from her comfortable nest.

Looking down at herself in confusion, the cop asked, “Where’re my clothes? When did I take them off?” Risa chuckled, lightly.

“Don’t worry about that, I’ll get you a fresh change.” Too hungover to argue, Reina just complied, heading to the bathroom.

“What are we going to do about them?” Ai asked once the younger girl was out of earshot.

“Nothing yet, now isn’t the time for budding romance. It’s bad enough having to trust absolute strangers, but falling in love with one? No, we can’t let that happen now.” Risa shook her head to emphasize how bad of an idea she thought that was.

“But it will happen and if it doesn’t, then things will just be awkward.” the demolitions expert pushed.

“Well, we’ll have to cross that bridge when we come to it. It’s hard enough just getting along. Anyway, let’s take the next few days off. What do you suggest we do, Leader?” the gunner crawled back into bed with her girlfriend.

“Hmm, I don’t know. What’s a good group activity?” Ai wrapped her arms around Risa’s shoulders, hugging her tightly to her chest.

“I don’t know what the others like, but how about we just tell them to do whatever? You and me can go on a date or something.” Though her tone sounded nonchalant, the gunner looked up hopefully into the older woman’s face, judging her reaction.

Ai couldn’t help, but smile broadly at the offhanded suggestion, “Really? You mean it?”

“Yeah, let’s go tonight. To dinner and maybe a movie. Or a musical. You still like those, right?” The demolitions expert nodded vigorously and then held her aching head, causing Risa to laugh at her. “Alright, it’s settled then.”


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A meeting was quickly called and the good news was given. The other girls wasted no time vacating the hotel. Eri, Sayumi, and Lin Lin decided to head downtown and walk around looking for anything interesting to do. Aika and Jun headed out to eat and Reina dragged Ai and Risa off to karaoke. The latter two sat in amused boredom as the youngest girl hogged the microphone.

“Well, this wasn’t exactly what I had in mind for us tonight.” Risa commented as she sipped her wine. As soon as they had gotten there, they’d ordered a big bottle of plum wine and a little something to eat.

“Well, this is fun anyway. And with Reina up there providing background music, it’s almost like we’re alone.” Ai scooted closer and shifted the gunner into a comfortable position leaning against her chest between her legs. They lay stretched out along the couch, with Ai’s back to the wall.

“Still, I’ll make it up to you later.” Risa promised, snuggling into the older woman’s warm chest. She could faintly hear her thudding heartbeat under her ear and pressed closer to listen better. The fast, but steady beat calmed her thoughts to nothing except the presence underneath her. “Your heart…”

“Eh?” Ai asked, tilting her head down to look at her companion. She’d been watching Reina perform a particularly energetic dance, seeming lost in her own world.

“Your heart is pounding so fast. It’s so… Real.” Risa pulled back to make eye contact and both girls became mesmerized by the sweet tension that passed between them.

“Of course it’s beating fast, you’re so close to me right now, I can’t think of anything else.” the demolitions expert whispered quietly, “I’m so glad to be together with you.”

“I’m glad too.” Was all Risa could mutter as her voice caught in her throat. That look Ai was giving her was so intense, possessive and loving, she thought if she stared too long, she’d start to fall. Oddly, she didn’t mind the strange sensation, it had been a while since she’d seen anyone with that look. The last person to give it to her was this amazing woman with her arms wrapped around her.

That felt like yesterday and forever ago, had they really been children still? Risa’s eyes flickered down to Ai’s lips when the woman’s tongue darted out to wet them. They leaned towards each other, Risa intent on claiming those tempting lips, when a hand suddenly grabbed the gunner on her arm.

Startled, both women turned to find Reina, whom they’d nearly forgotten about, with a teasing expression on her face, “I don’t think so, not here. Now come and sing with me Gaki-san.” Risa was pulled out of the warm embrace and found herself on stage before she could process what had happened.

When she finally came back to awareness, a microphone was thrust into her hand, “Eh? What? Wait, what song is this?”

“It doesn’t matter, just follow my lead. Don’t look so smug, Ai-chan! You’re next.” Reina warned, shaking her finger at the lone woman.



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By the end of the night, all three women were exhausted, happy and more than a little drunk. They stumbled back to the hotel, which hadn’t been that far from the karaoke place, arms supporting each other and laughing about some joke or another. They tried to keep it down in the lobby after management gave them dirty looks, but all they succeeded in doing was laughing harder.

“Goodnight guys.” They parted ways at Reina’s door, the youngest giving each a kiss on the cheek. They were all feeling a little bit more friendly than usual.

Reina entered her room as quietly as possible, beginning to shed her day clothes almost before the door had shut. She tossed them onto the chair in the far corner, deciding to deal with them tomorrow. Standing in just her underwear, she began to search for her usual pajamas, but only managed to come up with a very thin tank top which she didn’t think even belonged to her. With a shrug, she put it on anyway and crawled into her bed.

Colliding almost instantly with a warm body, Reina wrapped her arms around whoever it was that decided to stay there, having a hunch even in the complete darkness. A small gasp sounded as the person awoke from their slumber and stiffened in the embrace.

“Sayu.” she whispered huskily into a thick mane of hair. Her hands began to wander across the figure in her grasp, squeezing a plump handful in her right hand while her left traveled lower. Reina felt a lazy grin spread across her face as her digits slipped past an elastic waistband and down into even warmer territory. She would have continued her assault if a sharp elbow hadn’t connected with her gut and the body forcefully pulled itself from her arms.

“What are you doing?!” Sayumi nearly yelled, her surprise keeping her from being wary of the other sleeping occupants of the floor.

“Just having some fun.” Reina slurred easily, bringing her wet fingers to her lips. She knew, even in the darkness, that the con could see her every move and she grinned wickedly at the taste of the whitish liquid on her fingertips.

Letting out a slightly disgusted and horrified, but mostly indignant noise, Sayu stormed out of the room, leaving the yankii chuckling in her wake. She wouldn’t be gone for long, but maybe now that she’d been burned a little, she might not be so eager to play with fire. Reina brought the previously occupied pillow to her chest to hug, smelling the older girl’s familiar shampoo on the fabric. Content for now, the cop finally drifted off to sleep, the comforting smell enveloping her.



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Risa grinned as she watched her companions joke about something across the table from her. Tonight was the last night of their break and the whole group had decided to go out to dinner, the gunner couldn’t help but marvel at how well they got along now. It seemed liked they had known each other for years, not three weeks. She guessed that if you shared such dangerous experiences with people you’d become closer faster, due to having to trust the person to watch your back. Kind of like soldiers who were friends with each other.

Thinking back on their first meal together, Risa grinned to herself. They were sitting in the exact configuration as they were back then, Reina, Eri, Ai and herself on one side with Sayumi, Jun, Aika and Lin on the other in that order. All of them got a hearty meal, thanks to Lin’s thawing of their accounts, and they all chattered with each other happily.

The only tension seemed to be between Sayu and Reina, with the con refusing to make eye contact and Reina giving her a self-satisfied smirk every once in a while. Those two plus Eri seemed to be having a group discussion without actually talking about the same things and it was quite amusing to watch the turtle girl be caught in the middle. Across the table, Aika listened as Jun Jun regaled her with some outrageous, but true tale, the thief watching her wild gestures with a smirk on her face.

Turning her attention back to her girlfriend and Lin, she half followed along as they talked about strategies to defeating the difficult mini-boss in one of the games Risa had bought. It was a two player, so the hacker had frequently made her way into their room when ever they were there to play with Ai. Risa wasn’t really all that interested in those kind of games, so she just watched them have their fun with Ai nestled comfortably against her chest between her legs.

Out of the corner of her eye she noticed a large entourage enter the restaurant, causing the entire staff to hum with tension. The manager nearly climbed over himself to serve a suited man with greasy, slicked back hair, leaving himself open to teasing from the man’s lackeys. Turning her full attention to the scene, Risa watched as the group was led into the backroom that was secluded enough to offer privacy, but still was open enough so that the occupants could be viewed without getting too close.

Racking her brain for where she knew the greasy man from, Risa continued to silently observe the entourage of him and about twelve other men of similar dress. He sat at the head of one of the long banquet tables, watching in amusement the antics of his men as they playfully argued and joked around. He turned his head to the left to talk to the only calm man and as he did so, Risa’s eyes widened. The motion made a black tattoo visible, a dragon peeked out of his collar. Just the tip of the snout was shown, indicating that the whole of the ink was massive, probably encompassing his entire back.

It clicked in the gunner’s head where she knew the man from, he was one of the head lieutenants in the Takashi gang! And furthermore, the calm man at his side was also a high up sub-boss. What were the odds that they would run into two of their main targets without even looking for them? Already plans were forming in Risa’s head on how to deal with this opportunity. She concluded that Ai was going to kill her later, but it was too tempting to pass up. Excusing herself from the table, the gunner slipped outside to the van to gather supplies.

It was only a few minutes later that she reentered the restaurant, a small gift bag in her hand. She took her place at the table again and set some packs of ear plugs in the middle. Her strange action halted the conversations immediately.

“What is this for?” Reina asked, picking up a pack and examining it closely.

“It’s for blocking out loud sounds, what do you think?” Risa replied sarcastically, gaining an eye roll in response, “Just put them in and don’t ask anymore questions. Jun, I need you to flip the table up into barrier when I give the signal.” The now alert Chinese girl gave her a wide eyed stare.

“What’s the signal?” she asked lowly, one ear plug already in.

Risa just gave a grim smile, reaching into her gift bag and standing up. “You’ll know it when you see it.” At her side, Ai’s ears perked up when she heard a familiar metallic clinking sound, but before she could ask anything, Risa was running towards the back room.

The oldest woman felt as if time was slowing down as fear gripped her heart. Her girlfriend ran at full speed towards the gangsters, but it seemed to her as if she was fighting through molasses. Risa gripped the bag tightly by the handles and began to swing it around, her actions finally being noticed by the surprised group. Before any of them could draw their weapons, she flung the bag into their midst and spun on her heel.

Jun took this as her signal and the table was flipped up into a defensive barrier, the other girls instinctively diving behind it for protection as the entourage brought their weapons up to bear on the little gunner. Risa sprinted as fast as she could back to her position as behind her, the men opened fire. Bullets whizzed past her and thunked heavily into the thick table.

At about this time, inside the bag, six grenades detonated, the force of the explosion sending Risa flying over the make-shift barrier and onto her companions with a chorus of groans. Despite the ear plugs, the sound was nearly deafening and instead of bullets, now debris rained around the girls.

For Ai, time sped back up. She was huddled underneath Lin Lin’s arms, the hacker having pulled her from her seat when the table had been flipped. When everything finally stilled, the group all cautiously rose to examined the carnage. The walls were still standing, thankfully, but the grenades’ force had flattened everything in it’s path. In the restaurant proper, tables and chair lay overturned as though an angry child had given them a swipe with his arm.

The backroom was all but rubble, everything completely flattened. Nothing moved for a long moment, until in the very back corner, something began to struggle. Wasting no time, Risa hopped over their table and marched over to the form, drawing her sidearm as she went from her pocket. As she drew closer, she realized that it was the greasy man that stirred, the calm man lay heavily across his lap, shredded from obviously taking the brunt of the blast in an effort to protect his higher up.

Standing in front of him now, his slicked back hair mussed and his suit torn and burned, Risa almost felt pity. He struggled to open his eyes, one seeming to be glued shut from the blood that covered the whole left side of his head. Eventually, he glared at her balefully with his good eye and the gunner pushed her feelings away.

“Do you remember me? It’s been a long time since we last met. I think I was just beginning my training with Doro-san at the time.” Though he opened his mouth, no words came out, but he didn’t need to say anything for Risa to read the recognition in his eyes. “I lived.” she said with finality, leveling her pistol at his head and firing twice.

Then she turned and headed back to her group, not bothering to wipe away his blood and brain matter from her face. The girls all were stunned into silence at this blatant display of brutality, even Eri, whom had never seemed affected until now. Risa said nothing, just walked towards the exit. And they followed.

The ride back to the hotel was mostly silent, Risa driving and Ai riding shotgun, occasionally sending her worried glances. Finally, the gunner spoke, “Our break’s over, tomorrow we begin to hunt.” In the rearview mirror, she saw the others exchange uncomfortable looks. “We need to take out Takashi soon and the only way to do that is to take out his sub-bosses. From now on, it’s kill or be killed. No exceptions.” Risa knew they were all thinking about the carnage they had just witnessed and knew there was more to come.


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Alright, enough stalling. Here you go, lodge any complaints in the complaint box. *points to box on the wall* The paper slides down the furnace and warms the house, lol.

Anything constructive, is welcome.


I don't know why I felt the need to put that here...
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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 13 12/08)
« Reply #185 on: December 08, 2009, 11:00:23 PM »
I think I had a dumbstruck look on my face complete with open mouth the whole time I read this part.  :O hehe Wow, so many things, you're so good with details. Tanashige, what's that all about? Sayu amuses me in this story, I thought she wouldn't have anything to contribute to the group but she's very interesting and a bit crazy, and it's funny seeing Reina fume at her with jealously for the lack of a better word.

I was going to reference Tokyo Gore Police, but I never saw that movie but I had a feeling the action was similar to your story. And there goes Gaki's killer instinct again. She's awesome.

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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 13 12/08)
« Reply #186 on: December 09, 2009, 02:34:29 AM »
the takagaki is  :wub: :wub: :wub:
and tanashige moment is   :lol: :lol: :lol:

hope it will be happy ending for tanashige XD
but how about eri then.. :banghead:
and dont let her interfer takagaki!!!

need more takagaki.. :heart:
it's just so so sweet.. :wub:

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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 13 12/08)
« Reply #187 on: December 09, 2009, 02:41:13 AM »
sweet an update, I should update mines soon, but which one????? :lol:

well that Sayu being married was sort of surprising but Reina seriously likes the cons way too much IMO  :lol:

Almost perv moment but no dice at this time awww

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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 13 12/08)
« Reply #188 on: December 09, 2009, 04:02:22 AM »
OMG!CWHY!WHY MUST U END IT THERE!!!?!?!?!god! just as it was getting good!
smexy takagaki is good~ XDD but so is risa spoiling ai wth gifts X3 and i guess a drunk ai is a naughty ai ne? XD
and sayu's mareied?! O.Ohot dang!
and reina's just in the "i love the bunny/i hate the bunny" mode ne? XD
and lastly...WTH RISA! just as i thoght hse was gonna be all "i wont kill anyone so cazily anymore" she does that!!!
eventhough i love how quickly she thought of the plan though...why do i feel that when her and ai talk about this it wont end so good?(or maybe i'm wrong..idk ^^;)
over all...GOOD JOB! X3 cant wait fior the next one~
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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 13 12/08)
« Reply #189 on: December 09, 2009, 06:06:25 AM »
@Happy Tree~

awwww~ I'll kiss the pout away~ :mon kissy: *Please refrain yourself from any violent.*

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Yup, I plugged the power cord into my ear and rubbed a balloon on my head until it turned on, lol.
- LOL~ Cannot help but laugh at the image~ rubbing a balloon on head  :mon lmao:


OK~ for the real comment now~ LOL

Today~

Risa and Ai:  :wub: :wub: :wub: Risa could not even walk str8 after her mission but Ai was more important.. Drunk Ai indeed is very cute~ haha~ and so sweet that Risa still plans to take Ai out on a date~~

I guess even if Ai was in control of Risa most of the time, but that was only because Risa allows it~ At the last paragraph, when Risa went so out of it, Ai dare not interrupt as well. So meeting the guy finally made Risa make the hard decision... She escape death once..and got her chance for revenge...She if they are going to do that as well.. they all gonna be dead meat~~ sooner or later~


Reina and Sayu: wooooo~ somethings seems to be burning inside Reina now..due to jealousy?  Her turn to tease the bunny~ Lol

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Reina brought the previously occupied pillow to her chest to hug, smelling the older girl’s familiar shampoo on the fabric.
- She just wants to be with her..  ;) anyway~ Drunk Reina is pretty cute too

Is it ok to get them drunk all the time? LOL~ Even though it's not very good but they are cute....soooooo..... *Bright smile!*


Wondering what a drunk Sayu might do to Reina~ *Brighter Smile!*


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“What else can I spend my money on? I don’t need anything else, but to make you happy.” Risa pouted, sad her gifts were being refused, “I know you’re bored being here all day while we go out.”
- Forgot this.. it's just too cute to see Risa like a kid trying to make Ai-chan happy~  :P

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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 13 12/08)
« Reply #190 on: December 09, 2009, 01:35:36 PM »
What? Nobody dropped any complaint yet? Well little me will be the first then. *Takes a deep breathe* Here it goes....

%hfn^u9#@^)&&HG%**^%$!$^** TANASHIGE @^UI^$EDE@%RUI)(&%$ SAYUMI #^%ftt%rrcguytt REINA &&opht%y$#r$

*breathe out* Okay I'm done ranting :P Sigh I love you but I hate you rndm-chan. Why must thou make TanaShige suffer like this? It's really sad the way Reina treated Sayu after she found out about the marriage. It's like Reina is trying to convince herself that Sayu is indeed a scum not worth respecting. But she can't deny that she has for sure fallen for the bunny. I guess they will grow to be a stronger couple if they can work through this :cry:


On the bright side, TakaGaki just make me mush inside. Risa trying to please Ai is just so cute. Plus Ai trying to be the mature one reprimanding Risa about overspending when the chibi her is jumping for joy at all those toys XD


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Everyone was neutralized, only one death
Errr that's a very diplomatic way of putting it. I'm thinking of the watermelon at the part where Risa blows that guy's head off :lol:


Okay now Author-san will get serious.. Strap on your seatbelt everyone
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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 13 12/08)
« Reply #191 on: December 09, 2009, 06:46:17 PM »
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As soon as she entered Lin’s hotel room, Risa made a beeline for her girlfriend, engulfing her in a tight embrace. Ai let out a small squeak as she was squeezed, but returned the hug with just as much vigor. “Welcome back.” she greeted softly.

Nice start  :D


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“I don’t know what Sayu did, exactly, but the other’s seemed a little afraid of her on the ride back and she was the most covered in blood. She didn’t kill anyone, though I heard the ones she dealt with lost the use of their legs.” The gunner reported nonchalantly.

Traumatized  XD and eww


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“Because I can?”

lol


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Ai shoved away the very tempting PSP.

Must resist huh


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The break in mood sent Risa nearly rolling off the bed. “Wanna try out the Sports Resort game?”

 :rofl:


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“You’re welcome to join me.” she proposed seductively, causing a blush to appear on the cop’s cheeks.

The seductive ebil Sayu  :on lol:


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“I will, Sayumin.” Eri said

 :on bleed:



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Reina stared at the line again. “Honeymoon? She’s married?” The yankii felt a strange hollowness in her chest that she certainly didn’t like, “She’s married.”

Ouches.

Sayu's married at 14?  :shocked


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“Go ahead and cry, you’ve deserved it today.”

 :luvluv2:


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Reina angrily sipped at her beer, sitting at the hotel bar later that night. She was still mulling over the information that she’d learned,

Yay!  :mon dance:


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She thought back on the exchange she’d heard between Sayu and Jun at the apartment.

 :mon blood:


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“Where’s your shadow?”

Damn  :on lol:


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“Not like this, Ai. I want you to be lucid when I finally make you mine.”

  :luvluv1:  :gmon twirl:


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Satisfied that the cop was going to wake up with a terrible hangover and be confused about where the rest of her clothes were

 :lol:


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“Why do you say that as if it doesn’t matter!? You’re married and carrying out a fling with Jun Jun and whatever it is you were trying to pull on me!

Now she admitted it  :D


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“I don’t know what the others like, but how about we just tell them to do whatever? You and me can go on a date or something.”

and do that thing  :twisted:


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“I don’t think so, not here. Now come and sing with me Gaki-san.”

lol


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“Goodnight guys.” They parted ways at Reina’s door, the youngest giving each a kiss on the cheek. They were all feeling a little bit more friendly than usual.

Makes me think of threesome  :twisted: but no, no please  :D


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Just having some fun.” Reina slurred easily, bringing her wet fingers to her lips. She knew, even in the darkness, that the con could see her every move and she grinned wickedly at the taste of the whitish liquid on her fingertips.

 :mon blood:


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Letting out a slightly disgusted and horrified, but mostly indignant noise, Sayu stormed out of the room, leaving the yankii chuckling in her wake.

lol


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The only tension seemed to be between Sayu and Reina, with the con refusing to make eye contact and Reina giving her a self-satisfied smirk every once in a while.

Lovely


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hose two plus Eri seemed to be having a group discussion without actually talking about the same things and it was quite amusing to watch the turtle girl be caught in the middle.

Amusing indeed  :on lol:


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Risa was running towards the back room.

Alone  :shocked


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not bothering to wipe away his blood and brain matter from her face

Umm, eww


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From now on, it’s kill or be killed. No exceptions.

Whoa


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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 13 12/08)
« Reply #192 on: December 10, 2009, 11:50:33 AM »
*takes out some paper, scriibbles on it and stuffs it into complaint box*

This list is gonna be long :P

1) Why must Reina be such a meanie? She labeled Sayu as scum without even letting her explain! Seems like this is a common trait of the yankii in many fics XD Plus, she was 14 when she married. Can that even be taken seriously?

2) Ai not being grateful to Risa's enormous purchase. Shouldn't Gaki-san get something good in return, say a nice make-out session :p

3) Is Jun-Aika headed where I think it is?

4) Why is Lin2 the one who grabbed Ai when the madness started. <-- This isn't exactly a complaint. I was just wondering thats all :D

5) Why is Reina acting like a such an as****e again by doing that to Sayu when she was drunk? Poor Sayumin. Her heart must be so hurt :cry:

6) That action packed scene at the end was way too short. It was awesome but still, just when I was getting into it all, bamn, it ended :banghead:

7) You made everyone scared of Risa :smhid How can anyone be frightened of the lovable and squeeshy bean? XD

See, I told you it was long. But really, these aren't complaints. I was just trying to be a moron. All these points were what really struck me and I can't say if its good or bad cuz it depends on what happens next. I know one thing for sure. There isn't a single  :yawn: moment. You are incredible!

Let's say I don't turn you into a plant, then can I know the ending now? I'm DYING to know :banghead:
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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 13 12/08)
« Reply #193 on: December 10, 2009, 01:40:15 PM »
I'm starting to get a hang of this story's kinkiness and brutality. and I'm expecting of it more.  :P

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“Look look! I got a PSP and a DS and lot’s of games and a big screen TV and a Wii and a 360 and a PS3. And movies! And some horror books, too!” Risa explained excitedly, waving the novels around.
all those stuff are really tempting but I'm still go For Lin's PC.  :lol: :lol:

In this chapter. I'm on to Reina. I feel so sorry for her.  :cry:

I got good news. I already started doing the fun art. I don't why. Maybe I just missed drawing things.  :P just wait for a couple of days for this.

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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 13 12/08)
« Reply #194 on: December 10, 2009, 06:34:39 PM »
WHUT!?!?!?! SAYU MARRIED AT 14?!?!?! :shocked: :shocked: :shocked:
Somehow that thought makes me think that her father was brought up in a Tribe where early marriages are allowed. :lol:

And Reina... :on shady: :scolding: :grr:!!!!!
Think WELL before letting your feelings take over you!!! Gaaahhh... But then again, maybe she's just confused because she's starting to fall in love with the bunny. And she's just desperately finding some 'bad things' about Sayu so that she will not fall in love with her. Although she doesn't have the right to accuse her. After all, her father's doing bad things too.

Ohh, Risa's really sweet!!! I hope she didn't regret buying those stuffs to Ai. After all, if I was into her game mode... She might ignore Risa. :lol:

..... :sweat:....
ok I take that back.. Risa's SCARY!!!!

@cogi_yoshi - Are you hoping for a rokki orgy or something? XD
Ahahaha... not really... but then.. if you make it like that... :bow: :bow: :bow:

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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 13 12/08)
« Reply #195 on: December 17, 2009, 07:31:51 PM »
@Do me-san - Ah, thank you very much. I'm really having a lot of fun with the volatile Tanashige relationship, I hope it shows. Originally, Sayu was just going to be a supporting character, but then she started to write herself. Oh Tokyo Gore Police, that's such an, er, interesting movie. Definitely not for the squeamish, there's some really sick stuff in there.

@alwaysYou - Hi, thanks for commenting. Be warned, I'm not going to let any couple have it easy. Though I'll try to make lots of fluffy moments to make up for the pain I'm going to cause them. Maybe...

@kuro-kun - I think you're the only person who said Reina likes Sayu TOO much, lol. And there prolly won't be a perv for a while, but if there is, I'll be sure to post it in it's appropriate place. Not to say that I won't have some heavy making out in later chapters.

@kawaii-chan - Ah, it wasn't too much of a cliffhanger, was it? There will be lot's of crazy killing in the next few chapters, so look forward to it! Everything will work out in the end. Maybe. :twisted:

@Baby Sticky -
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- LOL~ Cannot help but laugh at the image~ rubbing a balloon on head 
Static electricity, baby. He who masters that masters the world. XD

Risa finds it quite difficult to live by someone elses' rules, being raised with such a lawless background and then her later violent training made her independent and wary. So if she slips up, that's just survival instinct rearing it's head. Also anger...

And Tanashige will continue with it's love/hate take. So expect some more clashes between them. BTW, I just realized how many time I got the girls drunk. So many days in a row, I'd die if I had to even lay eyes on another beer. :lol:

@baddie -
What? Nobody dropped any complaint yet? Well little me will be the first then. *Takes a deep breathe* Here it goes....

%hfn^u9#@^)&&HG%**^%$!$^** TANASHIGE @^UI^$EDE@%RUI)(&%$ SAYUMI #^%ftt%rrcguytt REINA &&opht%y$#r$
I just imagined you banging your head against the keyboard, lol. :lol: But yes, Reina is trying to convince herself that Sayu's scum! Cause she does illegal things and that's bad. Don't worry, though, after a few more arguments, maybe I'll give them a break. Enjoy the mental torment and be glad I don't off someone, yet, muahahaha.
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Errr that's a very diplomatic way of putting it. I'm thinking of the watermelon at the part where Risa blows that guy's head off
  :lol: :lol: Diplomatic, yeah, but also a little cold.

@KrisZ - Jeez, so much to respond to and I'm too lazy to do some massive quoting. I'll just say thanks you so much and I'm glad you found so many things to comment on. I promise I won't be so half-assed next time. XD

@Hammersteinz - Thanks for the warmth I need it to keep my fingers from going numb so I can write.
1)Reina's set in her stubborn way and the marriage is perfectly legal. I'll resolve, or at least explain it later.
2)What do you think happened when they tried to hook everything up?
3)Why if you were thinking that it would be a forbidden love between a sixteen year old and a twenty-one year old with lots of ups and downs and misunderstandings from family and friends as well as them being shunned be the general populace, then you're absolutely wrong. Lol, they're just close is all. :lol: But now that idea warrants a fic.
4)They were sitting next to each other and Lin is quite fond of the older girl, so of course she wants to keep her safe. They bonded over their time doing surveillance together and talking about video games and manga.
5)She was drunk and a little amorous, she made a mistake, but to be fair, Sayu is always teasing her as well.
6)Yeah, that was the point. It was just a shock and then wham! You're as stunned as the characters.
7)It'll work itself out. Or I'll just kill her. :lol:

I'm glad you think it's interesting. I'm trying to keep up a balance of action and emotions, but all my fingers keep writing out are feelings, so I hope instead of boring you to tears it makes the girls feel like they have a bit more depth.

You want to know the ending? Me too. :lol:

@Sancho - Glad you like it. I just realized how much pent up violence I have, lol. XD Oh Lin's pc set-up? I drooled a little as I was describing it. Yeah, poor Reina, I'm probably not going to give her much of a break, at least until she can deal with her father. As soon as you finish your art you should post it up here. That would be really awesome seeing as how I have the artistic talent of a rock. :D

cogi_yoshi - Yes at 14, it's not completely unheard of in this day and age, just pretty rare in the so called civilized countries. I think the marriage age in Japan is 16? Maybe? So she would have had to go out of country to get the license and blahblahblah, details. The important thing is it happened.

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And Reina...!!!!!
Think WELL before letting your feelings take over you!!! Gaaahhh... But then again, maybe she's just confused because she's starting to fall in love with the bunny. And she's just desperately finding some 'bad things' about Sayu so that she will not fall in love with her. Although she doesn't have the right to accuse her. After all, her father's doing bad things too.
Uh, yeah, that's pretty much it. Although you bring up an interesting point.
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Although she doesn't have the right to accuse her. After all, her father's doing bad things too.
Reina's father is like a constant black mark against her character. When people find out about this, they transfer the sins of the father to the child when, really, Reina is an individual. What her fathers does is the reason she's so wary of other criminals and why she's so adamant about hating them.
BTW, don't get too excited about that orgy, I gots plans for them later.

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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 13 12/08)
« Reply #196 on: December 17, 2009, 07:32:38 PM »
Chapter 14: "Listen son," said the man with the gun


Early the next morning, a meeting was called in their make-shift war room. The atmosphere was grim in the aftermath of the explosive conclusion of their break, but the girls were all ready to do whatever it took to take down the Takashi gang. Risa stood in the middle of the room, eyeing them seriously for a long moment, before she dropped a file down on the table in front of her. It landed with a slap that sounded loudly in the quiet room.

“This is our key to winning. Inside is a thorough profile of each member of Takashi-dono’s lieutenants, including their addresses and basic schedules. Apparently, he didn’t trust any of them and always kept tabs on them in case he needed to take them out himself. That will work to our advantage.” Reina grabbed the file and drug it closer to get a better look at it.

“Why are there ten names with three crossed out? I thought we only killed two guys.” The first page in the file was a list of names and, as Reina mentioned, three were crossed out, one in black ink and two in red. “D-Dwight-o L-Roberts?” she tried to say the first name, tongue stumbling over the foreign pronunciation.

“He’s been dead. There were originally ten sub-bosses, now there are seven. On the page, they are written in  a specific order. Roberts-san was Takashi’s number one. The men we-I took out last night were numbers 2 and 4. I’ve been planning on how to take out the others since I found this file and I know we’ll have to work fast. Five through ten will be easy, but it’s number three we have to worry about. We’ll cross that bridge when we come to it, though.” Across the table, Ai met Risa’s eyes and held them meaningfully.

“What exactly are your plans?” The older woman asked evenly, causing the gunner to adopt a pleading look.

“Please, I need your support. I need you to say you’re okay with what I have to do.” Risa was nearly whispering, feeling the pressure of everyone’s eyes on her.

“I’m not okay with killing, but I trust you.” The simple words were all the younger woman needed to hear and a small, relieved smile graced her face.



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Emerging from the bar, the laughing man headed to his car. On his arm was an equally drunk woman, his escort for the night. Well, he squinted into the bright sunlight, he guessed it had been morning for about nine hours now, but the night never really ended until he slept.

“What do you say to extending your services into tonight as well, huh doll?” the vapid, bleached blonde giggled agreeably to his offer.

“As long as you can pay, I’m yours!” She shivered a little in the frigid morning air and the man wrapped his arm over her shoulder, pulling her closer.

“Well, in that case, I might keep you with me for a couple of weeks!” The two burst into drunken laughter. The streets were surprisingly empty for the time of day and he could see clear down to where he parked a couple blocks away. He and his floozy made their way slowly, traveling in a fairly zig-zag pattern. Soon enough, he was fumbling with his keys in the lock.

He dropped them, once, twice, then a third time, before bursting into laughter. As he reached down to grab them the last time, a small, gloved hand collided with his. He turned to his right and met the eyes of an attractive young police woman. Fearlessly, he grinned at her, watching as her nose wrinkled from the smell of alcohol on his breath. He knew there was nothing the law could do to him and he could see, in her chocolate colored eyes, that she knew it too.

“You know, it’s dangerous to drive under the influence.” the cop said, pursing her plush lips teasingly and raising her eyebrows.

“I live for danger, miss.” he heartily bellowed, watching a grin spread across her face.

“Your friend look a little chilly, perhaps you should give her your coat, like a gentleman? She might catch a cold before you can get somewhere warm.” He furrowed his brows at her strange suggestion, what was she getting at?

“I like my bitches chilled. Not that it’s any of your business.” She shook her head, a little sadly.

“No, it really isn’t, but hearing you say that makes me feel a little better about doing this.” Before either could react, the sound of a gunshot echoed on the empty streets. The escort screamed as the man sunk to his knees, clutching his chest, eyes already beginning to go glassy. The cop watched him for a moment as she holstered her weapon and then tugged his long coat off, draping it around the woman’s shoulders. The terrified escort met her light colored orbs in stunned silence, taking in her regretful eyes.

“Why did you-?” But she couldn’t finish her sentence and the cop walked away through a nearby alley, shedding her disguise as she went.


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The streets were crowded at midday, people scurrying everywhere trying to get to their destinations quickly, but having to wade through the human tide. It was impossible to walk without bumping against the person nearest you, so the short man didn’t even try to avoid anyone. He practically barreled through the crowds, intent on getting to his next ‘meeting.’ Some young punks had been trying to stroll into his territory and Takashi had told him to deal with it however he saw fit.

Grinning cruelly, he brought his hands from his pockets to crack his knuckles. He couldn’t wait to take care of this. Nowadays, being a gangster was all about politics and solving things without garnering the attention of the police. It was so rare to get a direct order to handle things without thinking of the consequences.

Just recently, a few men had been lost to a shootout and the police had been asking questions. There was nothing to be said, especially after the drug brothers had shut down their factories and disappeared. It was all very baffling and the man thought that maybe Takashi knew more than he let on about what was happening. It frustrated him to no end that he didn’t trust any of them enough to tell them important things. Well, now he would be able to work some of that frustration off.

His shoulder slammed into someone hard and he would have sent that person to the ground if it hadn’t been so crowded. He didn’t say a word, just kept going, ignoring any protests his rough demeanor caused. He didn’t notice a pair of chocolate colored eyes tracking his progress from somewhere in front of him.

Swiftly, she made her way through the human tide, weaving in and out expertly, focused on her target. From her pocket, she pulled a long dagger, gripping it in gloved hands tightly.

Oblivious to the impending danger, the man kept moving forward, shoving his way past anyone who got too close. He didn’t even see the woman as they slammed shoulders in the crowded sidewalk, but he did feel a sharp pain in his chest. He took a couple more steps before he had to stop, the unbearable, white hot pain shooting through his torso.

Looking down, he saw a large hilt sticking out from where a knife was shoved in through his ribcage, plunging deep into his heart. Before he could even register what this meant, he fell face first onto the ground, dead.

The crowds surrounded him, some people letting out screams and cries as they realized what had happened. The incident brought everyone gathering, except for a small woman with light eyes and plush lips, face twisted in regret.


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Risa barely breathed, she didn’t move, the butt of her rifle was pulled tight into her shoulder and her whole being was focused on her objective. She was perched on top of a roof overlooking the shopping district. Every week, her target would take his children out into the city, leaving him vulnerable to this kind of attack, now it was just the waiting game.

It had been a long time since she’d last truly sniped someone, Doro-san always gave her these kind of exercises to teach her patience and concentration. She thought of the first times she had done this, against livestock to make her aim better and then against shepards in the middle east and Africa.

Risa shook her head, turning her attention away from the past at shuffling next to her. Eri lay beside her, head on her folded arms and looking as if she would fall asleep. She was unused to working with a partner and couldn’t resist the urge to take control of the operation. Luckily, the same aged girl had understood Risa’s true reason for wanting to take care of things herself.

“Why did you take me?” Eri suddenly asked, nearly startling the gunner. It was pretty much the only words she’d spoken all day.

It was understandable that she would ask, after all, she wasn’t really needed in any of Risa’s plans. After the first and second assassinations, she’d merely given the gunner clean clothes to change into, helping to ensure that no blood was visible. And now she was just laying around while Risa did the work.

“I had to take someone. Ai said so.” Risa responded quietly, her voice feeling croaky from disuse. She remembered sitting for days or even weeks at a time all alone while she waited for the perfect shot. When she was finished and went back to report, it would take hours for her voice to come back.

“But why me? Why not Jun? She volunteered to go with you first and I think you actually hurt her by refusing to take her with you. She really seems to look up to you.” Eri opened one eye lazily to look at her.

After she had detailed her plan, there had been  a few protests, the loudest of all from Ai. “You can’t go alone! I will not let you put yourself into unnecessary danger. Take at least one other person with you.” She had all but ordered and Risa had glanced around the room, taking in some eager faces.

Jun hadn’t wasted any time before she stepped forward, “I’ll go with you.” she sounded the most eager and that made Risa uncomfortable.

“No.” She had declared, “I’ll take Kame with me. You stay here.” The Chinese girl’s eyes had widened, briefly flashing with undisguised hurt, but the gunner forced herself to ignore it and instead turned to face the surprised cop.

“Me?” she questioned in a loud bark, as if unable to stop herself. Risa had only nodded at her and then gestured for them to leave the room.

“I needed someone purely for support. Jun is a very punch first, ask questions later kind of girl and I couldn’t use her talents here.” Once again snapping back into the present, Risa truthfully explained her reasons, “Also I guess I trust you.” She didn’t mention that she was trying to keep Jun away from the violence as much as possible.

“You trust me?” Eri asked as though this had never occurred to her. The gunner just nodded and they shared a look, “Maybe you shouldn’t.” the same aged girl finished forlornly, frowning for a second.

Risa just tilted her head to the side for a moment before she turned back to watching the ground below. They fell into silence again, the gunner becoming absorbed in her waiting game once again and Eri laying her head back onto her folded arms, closing her eyes peacefully.

The sun was nearly gone before Risa finally spotted her quarry coming out of a clothing store with two young children in tow. She didn’t let herself feel bad for what she was about to do, her mind went on autopilot. She pressed her face against the side of the rifle, staring down the sights. She led the target for a few seconds, lining up on the center of his head. There was no center mass, there would be no second shot, all that existed was this one, perfect prey.

Taking in a deep breath, Risa gently squeezed the trigger. The report from her weapon sounded loudly in her unprotected ears and down below there was an explosion of red. She took only that half second to confirm her kill before she began to disassemble her rifle with quick, practiced motions. Beside her, Eri had awoken with a start and was staring at the hysteria on the ground with wide eyes.

It was less than a minute later that they were leaving the rooftop, Risa’s rifle packed inconspicuously into a guitar case that was slung across her back. They traveled in silence back to the hotel, neither in any mood for idle chatter. For all that their mission had been successful, it didn’t feel like something to be celebrated.



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After the abrupt dismissal of the morning meeting, the other girls had gone off to do various things on their own. Ai headed to her own room to try and fall back to sleep, but all she managed to do was doze lightly on and off for a few hours. Lin had turned on a police scanner, much to the suspicion of Reina, and her and Sayumi had crowded around it.

Jun went to sulk in her room, followed by Aika, who tried her best to comfort the older woman. And Reina left the hotel altogether to take a walk.

After quite a few hours of tossing and turning, Ai sat up with a groan. Her heart was heavy with tension and she wanted Risa to get back already. Flopping unceremoniously over onto her stomach, Ai pressed her face into the mattress and let out a frustrated cry, kicking her feet and pounding the bed with her fists like a child throwing a temper tantrum.

When she had satisfied herself at least a little, Ai stopped her thrashing around. She needed something to distract her attention from her worries. She glanced at the impressive electronic set up that her and Risa had put together over the past few days. It really should only have taken a couple hours at the most, but they had kept pausing to make out heavily.

The demolitions expert blushed at the memories. The younger woman made her feel like an awkward teenager again and she meant that in the best way possible. They had never taken that last step to cement their relationship, but that hadn’t stopped them from trying everything else they could do together. Nor had that stopped Ai from thinking about doing ‘it’ with Risa, just that both had an unspoken agreement to wait until the bean was older.

Well, now she was older and Ai was still having to wait to give her most precious gift to the woman. It frustrated her and excited her in a way, because she knew when it did finally happen, it would be amazing. Shaking her head, Ai realized her thoughts were definitely not helping to calm her, just that now she was tense in another way.

Rolling over, Ai grabbed her PSP off the bedside table, flicking on the power easily. Maybe a certain RPG game would take her mind off her problems.

Except that it didn’t. Ai was so distracted, she kept dying in every battle and fudged up a very important quest line. Shaking her head again, she shut off the device without saving, setting it back in it’s place. For lack of anything to do, she rolled around on the bed from one side to the other, finally loosing her restless thoughts in the mindless activity.

She wasn’t sure how long she did that, but Ai was brought back to reality by a knock on the door. Startled, she tumbled off the bed, just managing to throw herself into a roll to avoid hurting herself. Standing quickly, she blushed at herself, moving to answer the door. Reina blinked at her placidly from the other side and was ushered inside quickly.

“What brings you here, Reina?” Ai asked from her cross legged position on her bed. The younger girl took a seat beside her and sighed wordlessly. The demo expert smiled sadly at her, able to easily guess the cause for her distress. “Are you worried about Eri?”

“Aren’t you worried about Gaki-san?” the yankii shot back defensively, immediately seeming to regret her harsh tone when Ai’s face fell, “Sorry. I didn’t mean to say that. I just wanted some company.”

“It’s alright. And of course I’m worried, I can’t think of anything else and I’ve tried everything to distract myself. I’m just surprised you’d be so affected by this.” The older woman realized she’d said the wrong thing right away when Reina scowled at her.

“What do you mean ‘not affected?’ How could I not be when my partner is out there shooting lunatics with a lunatic by her side! Just because we haven’t known each other that long doesn’t mean I don’t care about her!” Reina stood and planted her hands on her hips, leaning forward to give Ai the full effect of her glare. “I don’t need to stand here and be insulted!”

“That wasn’t my intention. I was just surprised because it just doesn’t seem to be like you to worry so much. After all, Eri has gone on a mission without you already and you were fine.” Ai held up her hands in surrender, her words seeming to deflate the younger’s anger as Reina plopped back down into her spot. The demo expert breathed a sigh of relief.

“That was different and I know you feel it too.” Pouting, Reina crossed her arms, “Why couldn’t she have just taken Jun Jun?” she questioned sulkily.

“She wants to protect her, that’s why.” Ai said decisively, drawing a look from her companion, “Risa’s not a bad person, you know? She doesn’t want the others to suffer.”

“Suffer? What do you mean by that?”

“You’re worried that Eri might come back physically injured, aren’t you?” She cut Reina off before she could answer the rhetorical question, “Of course you are. Well, I know that Risa can take care of herself a hundred percent. I kept tabs on her after she left home and she filled me in on everything that happened first hand, so I know she’s done terrible things.”

“But I know she never wanted to do those things. Not really. She just thought she did. After her brother died she was so hurt, but maybe because of the way she grew up, to her back then, hurt translated into weakness and she was taught to never show weakness. All that hurt turned to anger, at herself and her situation and the person that killed her brother. I think being with me helped and harmed her at the same time, I kept her from letting it out and as a result all that pain began to fester.”

“When we bro- I mean when I broke her heart and we split up, it just came out in a frenzy. She attacked the man who had started it all and in the end, he took her in and turned all that repressed anger into a weapon. He taught her to kill and be ruthless and I know he hurt her physically, too, to enforce his lessons and also to make sure she could take it.”

“She did bad things, lost in her anger and the pain I caused, she felt no regret. At first. As things began to calm down inside her, she realized that she really didn’t like hurting people, but she thought it was too late for her, so she kept doing it. Until her mentor died and she went into hiding. After that, she had no choice, but to settle down and live a normal life. And she found that she liked the peace so much she nearly turned into a pacifist.” Here Ai let out a chuckle, becoming silent for a moment.

“Being in this situation hurts her. In the time that she had to slow down and look back at her misdeeds, she had finally begun to forgive herself. Now, I don’t know how to help her.” Silence descended again as the two let Ai’s last words sink in.

“Is that why you’ve been so annoyingly insistent about no one killing?” Reina asked, turning to face the older fully.

“Yes. I’m not naïve, Rei, I know how the world works, but I also know that not everything has to end in bloodshed. Sometimes, it’s harder to take the straight and narrow and I know it’s so easy for Risa to fall back into her old habits when she doesn’t truly want to. These sub bosses have to die, though, or we risk having one of them replace Takashi and then we’re back to square one. Except they’d know we were after them.”

Reina regarded Ai with a bit more respectful glance. Obviously the woman wasn’t just saying ‘Don’t kill ‘cuz it’s bad, eheh,’ she actually had her reasons. She was strong and had no qualms about defending her beliefs, even against someone she loved. “I see. Well, have you eaten today?”

“No, let’s go.” It only took Ai a moment to slip on some shoes and the two were headed down to the hotel’s restaurant. The conversed easily, as if they’d known each other for years, allowing trivial conversation to distract them from their true worries for a while.

“Uh, so, how is your…” Reina gestured towards Ai’s side and the older woman understood what she was asking.

“Oh! It’s fine, I should be fully functional in a couple more weeks.” Unconsciously, Ai placed her hand against the bandage hidden by her shirt. “The stitches have almost dissolved, which surprised me, I thought it would take longer. I can also already move around fine without any pain, as long as no one, you know, punches me there or something.”

“That’s good, but just a couple of weeks? Eri’s hasn’t even fully healed and it’s been over a month now.” Reina raised her eyebrow at her companion, watching as she rubbed her head sheepishly.

“I’m a pretty fast healer, I was always getting scrapes and cuts when I was a kid and my clumsiness hasn’t changed at all over the years. My body’s had lots of practice, especially since I started working with explosives.” Ai held up her left hand and Reina could see a faint scar around her pinky finger, “I had it almost blown off once and, when they reattached it, it only took a month and a half to completely heal.”

“Really? Wow.” Was all the suddenly queasy girl could think to say, looking down at her spaghetti and meat sauce. Ai noticed her glance and laughed.

“Wanna trade?” she pushed her chicken sandwich across the table and the younger girl gratefully took it. After they were settled and had begun to eat, Ai laughed again, “I wouldn’t have taken you for being squeamish.”

“Well, there’s not a lot that freaks me out, but missing appendages do the trick, especially fingers. I think it might be because my first crash course in first aid was sewing my dad’s fingers back on while under heavy gun fire. I was twelve at the time and my initiation went wrong. My dad had to save me and he got shot trying to protect me. He laughed, he always laughed, no matter how bad the wound was.” Reina shook her head slowly.

“Maybe he was trying to put you at ease? If you were so young and he started freaking out, it definitely wouldn’t help to calm you.” Though Ai’s words were said nearly off-handedly, Reina’s eyes widened as if she had never considered this before. “Speaking of, have you called him yet? We are getting very close to finishing with Takashi’s clan.”

“No, I haven’t. I’m not sure I should, I’m still mad at him and I’m sure he’s still mad at me, so why bother?” Reina crossed her arms and pouted grumpily, more upset that the demo expert was asking the same question that she had been posing to herself.

“You should, nothing will ever get fixed unless you talk. You need to suck it up and stop being such a selfish coward. Do you know how much I would give to be able to fight with my father again? To be able to argue and be mad and then forgive. Be lucky you still have a dad that loves you.” The cop was stunned by the harshly spoken words coming from the normally soft spoken woman. “Call your father and make up with him before he dies.”

After her mini rant, the table fell silent and Reina lowered her eyes to her lap, unable to take the burning pressure of the older’s intense stare. “I was thinking about it. Maybe I could call him after all of this with Takashi is over, if I do it now, then I’ll just be too distracted and I’ll end up hurt or getting someone else hurt, especially if it doesn’t go well.”

Seeming satisfied with the response, Ai nodded once and sat back in her chair, “Good, I’m sorry I was mean to you.” It only took another moment for both to shake off any lingering awkwardness and then finished their meals in amicable silence. As they left the restaurant, the had to pass through the main lobby to get to the elevators and both had a clear line of sight to the front door, just as two familiar figures strolled in through the sliding glass doors.

Ai found herself looking into strained chocolate colored eyes and felt her breath catch. Her girl had never looked so beautiful in pain before now. Risa and Eri quickly joined the two still women, the turtle immediately latching onto her partner’s arm and the bean throwing herself onto Ai’s lips.

When they parted breathlessly a moment later, Ai kept her arms wrapped around the younger girl’s waist, “Welcome back.”

“I’m home.” Was the tired response.


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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 14 12/17)
« Reply #197 on: December 17, 2009, 08:01:57 PM »
Killing off the bottom to get to the top, Ai seems to be holding a lot back from the rest for her planning, and Risa broke Jun's heart  :(

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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 14 12/17)
« Reply #198 on: December 18, 2009, 06:48:40 AM »
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Does violent blushing count?
- Even when i'm a baby?! Looks like you have been around the block~ LOL~! =X

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Static electricity
- One that can power up a desktop? Teach me please~

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I'd die if I had to even lay eyes on another beer.
- I will~ I got it so bad once that just by smelling Martell (Ain't i a little too young to be drinking sure an old man liquor?)  turns my tummy~ but recently i fall for Sambuca  :wub:

*Throws one shot to Ai*
Ai-chan~ You are gonna love it for sure~ One shot = to maybe 2 pint of beer? gets you to bed faster plus you wun have beer belly..~


ANYWAY~~~~~~~ back to the story~ LOL~

Nice action scene~! 3 in 1 story~ XD YAY! to the sniper scene~

TakaGaki is sweet as usual  :wub:

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“I’m not okay with killing, but I trust you.” The simple words were all the younger woman needed to hear and a small, relieved smile graced her face.
- She's like an anchor isn't she? To anchor our bean-transporting tanker firmly in place from what the brutal sea have to offer in her young life..  ;)

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The gunner just nodded and they shared a look, “Maybe you shouldn’t.” the same aged girl finished forlornly, frowning for a second.
- ohhh~ what is our little turtle trying to imply? Could it be that the government might not hold their end of the bargain? or just simply or turtle might like the bean? XD

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Nor had that stopped Ai from thinking about doing ‘it’ with Risa, just that both had an unspoken agreement to wait until the bean was older.
- Ain't it worth the wait? The bean is smoking now~~~ Roasted~ XD

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She was strong and had no qualms about defending her beliefs, even against someone she loved.
- *Throws Ai a shot again~* Anchor with strong will  ;)

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“No, I haven’t. I’m not sure I should, I’m still mad at him and I’m sure he’s still mad at me, so why bother?”
- Reina Reina Reina~~~~~ Talk to your daddy soon~ Daddy always dote on daughters more.. and its true~ Anyway..even if he is mad at you (Was he anyway??), you just have to cry... i'm sure he will be freaking out and be all over you~ Maybe you can tease the big man~  XD


p.s: i was thinking maybe the alcohol is making Ai-chan heal faster (even though it shouldn't be that way) cause she have been drinking throughout her recovery~ haha.. maybe little turtle could get little drink too *Throws Eri a Sambuca too*   :mon evillaff:


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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 14 12/17)
« Reply #199 on: December 18, 2009, 12:45:50 PM »
God I actually felt like I wanted to give the bean a hug :( The pain she must felt as she kill take another life.

On the other hand, Eri's character is still a question mark to me. You know, the feeling of not knowing what she's really thinking? It's like, she's too, hmm...neutral? 8)

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It really should only have taken a couple hours at the most, but they had kept pausing to make out heavily.
Oh yeah! :inlove:

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Enjoy the mental torment
*Grab a jumbo-size popcorn* Oh don't worry, I will :twisted:

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and be glad I don't off someone, yet, muahahaha.
Oh Do it! Do it! :twisted:

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