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Re: Esmerelda [ Royal Garden Walk - Chapter 8 (15/12) ]
« Reply #60 on: December 18, 2009, 05:42:51 AM »
The last time I read Eri as an animal character was when she was a turtle who can metamorphose into human form in the fic, Goddess of Fire. Now I don't know which I find to be cuter, turtle Eri trying to crawl across the beach with her stubby turtle legs until Reina  :wub: scoops her up into the water, or pup Eri trying to scale a tree despite being...a dog XD


I say reward the pup for her bravery by letting the feisty kitten open up a bit more. What do you say, author-san? XD
Though I'm not liking the ominous air threatening to ruin the TakaGaki moments as well as the pup-and-kitten 'battle'  :(


I just love the parts where the masters dote on their pets in this fic, as much as the respective pairings working their magic on each other  :D And I say GakiKame and ReinAi work those master-pet pairings very well  :thumbup




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Re: Esmerelda [ Royal Garden Walk - Chapter 8 (15/12) ]
« Reply #61 on: December 19, 2009, 05:17:52 PM »
GAAAHHH~!!! Your story's so COOL!!!! I read it in one shot!!! ahahaha... Loving the TakaGaki and TanaKamei pairings here... Why didn't I read it earlier? ahahaha... more Cat and Dog fight on the next chapters!!!XD

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Re: Esmerelda [ Royal Garden Walk - Chapter 8 (15/12) ]
« Reply #62 on: December 20, 2009, 12:27:40 PM »
Hey People~ Thanks for the comments! Really appreciate it~  XD

Reply Comment Time~

@kurosawa87: Hmmm... I like to take things slow XD sooo... while then.. the pup and kitten will do the entertaining first~  :P

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Mr Moonlight was the first thing that came into mind
-LOL~ now that sentence never looks the same to me.. each think i read it..Yossie glides into my mind as well

And no.. i'm still not sending brat Gaki-san to you~~   :P

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As kitty Reina would say, revenge is sweet. Or in this case, wet  Poor Eri
- but the pup love it nevertheless~ XD

Oh.. ya~ i can get the pain of writing now.. LOL~ sometime when i wrote something in previous chapter.. and realize it will contradict my future chapters... i need to crack my brain again and curse myself...but i still enjoys it..XD


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The less time the better. *pout*
-Need another kiss?  XD

OMG~ green dog...with a shell..haha.. it's hilarious... Makes me think of Grinch since x'mas is around the corner..  :D

@Chloe - Hmmm.... i didn't wrote any stories there.. but maybe i have seen you while i was going through other writer's review =X
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I told you, suicidal. Get friend or die trying  :lol:  (hoping it could be more though coughTanaKameicough)
- die trying *shocked* Reina is not that~ mean~ LOL~ even so...i'm not that mean! LOL..

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Can she ever stop being so adorkable?
- LOL~ This is why we love Eri don't we? the real her is pretty dorky as well.. i laugh every time when she do something really cold but funny.. she is just able to pull them off~

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:wub: awww, that could mean the pup already managed to get into the kitten's mind. Next is the heart
:D It's true though..you wun even bother if it's someone you don't care about..  ;)

@aussie: I didn't have so much pet and master interactions at first.. but it got added more of it halfway through somewhere... I'm glad that it is doing well.. it's fun to write about the different kinda love they shows to their pet..  :)

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Eri trying to crawl across the beach with her stubby turtle legs until Reina :wub: scoops her up into the water
- LOL stubby turtle legs... poor Eri.. but it seem quite sweet doesn't it? Is the story in H!P? i never read it before.. I always imaging the pup hugging the tree trunk only instead of scaling...cause she can't really climb~ LOL~

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I say reward the pup for her bravery by letting the feisty kitten open up a bit more. What do you say, author-san?  XD
- Maybe the next chapter might answer this a little~  :P

@cogi-yoshi: Hello there! New Reader~  :D Thanks lots! All comments mean a lot to me~ It's never too late! haha~ I read your Broken Destiny all 29 chapters in one shot too.. (and ran away crying because Maki is dead.. LOL) haha~ Hope you like the rest! Enjoy the magical ride~

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Re: Esmerelda [ Royal Garden Walk - Chapter 8 (15/12) ]
« Reply #63 on: December 20, 2009, 12:48:06 PM »
@ All Readers: Regarding the "bomb" that i might drop that everyone is worrying about......... I'm still considering if i should drop a small one first...but i actually like to slowly "bake" the cream puff in the oven.... until....the cream Explodes from the inside! LOL~  XD (Do they even bake cream puff in an oven??? I'm not a good cook~ LOL)

Anyway...thanks all for your comment and supports~ It makes my day~ =]


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Chapter 9
The Chase 2


Once again, Risa was at the pavilion. She had deliberately got up earlier this time round, hoping to catch the Princess on her daily walk again. Of course, she did not miss out that important piece of information.

And sure enough, the Princess came by but seems to be searching around for something. Gorgeous it may be with the morning sunlight on her, Risa decided to put up a protective barrier just right above to shield snow white from the heat and the damaging elements of the sun, only allowing the slightly dimmed filtered light to shine on her. It was not long before Ai noted the different and finally, those emeralds found her bluish purple orbs. The rewarding smile Risa got from her made all the waiting worth while.

“Have you seen Reina?” the princess asked casually.

Risa pouted. “I was just about to ask if Ai-chan had seen Eri too”

Ai just giggled at how easy the girl would switch from a perfect gentleman into a spoiled brat just within seconds. 


Then, there it was again. Rustling sounds from that same bunch of bushes. As the two eyed each other knowingly, they waited.

As Ai expected, this time, the white fur ball was after the black cotton ball instead.

Her kitten was so disorientated that she unconsciously had opened the link between them and was seeking help from her in despair unknowingly. The raven girl got this tingling feeling while on her way here but could not really convey what it really was since her kitten was actually bombarding her with nothing but desperate meowing subconsciously hence she was unable to get her exact position.

She was searching frantically for her at first but when she got into the garden ground and felt the air for her kitten’s presence. Almost immediately, she picked up her kitten’s purplish aura and was being pursued by nothing but a stunning slivery one. Knowing that it could be nothing serious, the raven girl carried on with the rest of the search in leisure and just constantly sends out her positioning to the kitten.

The black kitten ran straight up to her master, while transforming to her semi-human self and hid timidly behind her while the pup chose to hop onto Risa’s lap before changing.

Her kitten was shook up so bad that whatever she was trying to tell her came out in nothing but a babbling mess.

“Reina…slow down. You’re okay now. What’s wrong?” Ai hugged the trembling kitten tightly, stroking her back to calm her down.

“That bitch! She killed Aika! I saw it with my own eyes! Look at the blood dripping from her mouth! I knew she was up to no good at all…acting innocent and all…trying to get close to me!” Reina was sobbing uncontrollably and was depending solely on her master to hold her up.

Risa, unaffected by those senseless screaming, just gently wiped those red stains off the side of her pup’s mouth. Eri eyed her sadly and was about to say something but she cuts her off with a finger to her lip. Eri who is even incapable of harming a little fly had murdered something? She did not even need her pup to explain anything. Kissing her pup on the forehead, she smiled to reassure the pup.

“You are up to no good too!” Reina sneered at Risa

“Reina?” came a husky voice that broke the commotions.

Upon hearing that voice, the kitten turned her head swiftly towards it.

“AIKA! I thought you were…dead?” the kitten looked confusingly at her

With an equally confusing look, Aika replied “I was? I only remembered falling from the tree and…AH!” running toward Eri, she hugged the girl.

“Eri here stopped the bleeding and healed my leg.” Releasing Eri, Aika finished the rest of the sentence.



And that was it. Case closed.



“Reina…” Ai loosens her hold on the kitten to pull back enough to look her in the eye. She was not upset with the feline. She knew how harsh the feline can be to others but her kitten is actually nothing but a big meanie with a super jello heart. You just need to get pass the meanie part first though.

“I’m sorry, Ai-chan” Reina looked down as she apologized

“Nana...” Ai uses the pet name to get her kitten’s attention

“Not me…” she then tilts her head towards the two occupants in the pavilion.

Reina turned her head to the mentioned two and then back to her master with a pleading look. Ai just chose to smile encouragingly at her kitten. When it comes to Ai, there is really nothing much Reina can do about it. She just knew where all her soft spots are and uses it to coax her into anything. With that, Reina just entrusted her fate to her master as she circled her arms around Ai’s neck and buried her face in the crook of her neck.

Ai grinned as she shook her head slightly. Even though she had already resolved her kitten’s willfulness, she is still not going down without the last struggle. This is her kitten…her Reina. With that, she scoped Reina up, carrying her bridal style to the pavilion.



Up until now, three sets of eyes had been just enjoying the interesting little show.



Sitting across Risa, Ai pets the top of Reina’s head. “We’re ready whenever you are”

Still unable to face them, Reina murmured something desperately into Ai’s neck and tightens her hold on her.

“Hmm… Yes Reina…I know…I love you too.” Ai replied while kissing her kitten’s head lovingly and raised an eyebrow when she saw Risa pouted again.

With the final squeeze, Reina finally turns her head sharply to the other two and stood up.

“I’m…S…sorry!!” after managing to choked the apology out, she ran away like there is no tomorrow.


“What’s wrong with her?” Aika finally speaks up. She was lost, anyway…was she even found to begin with?

“It’s nothing… Go to Koharu-chan…She is probably wondering where you have been to by now.”

“Oh right! I’ll see you then your Highness.” And she left, looking for her master.



“Sorry… I might have spoilt Reina too much” Ai finally sighed.

“No worries…I understand how that feels” Risa replied as she stroke her pup’s hair. Eri currently had her face buried in the crook of her neck.

“You feeling okay?” the brunette girl scratches her pup on the back of her neck, under the collar.

Pulling back, her pup nodded sadly. Eri did not know why but even the words from her master could not lift her heavy heart.

“I’m going after Reina”

“Hmmm…Okay…Don’t get yourself hurt. You know how to get me when you need me.” Risa eyed her pup worryingly before agreeing. With that, the pup ran off in the direction where the kitten took off to.


The pair that was left behind watched the pup swiftly cut through the vast greenery and was soon out of their line of vision.

Turning their attention back into the pavilion, both coincidentally sighed in unison. Eying each other with a raised eyebrow, a grin slowly forms simultaneously and finally, both synchronically falls into a fit of laughter.

It felt good to finally loosen the tension. The morning had just started but it felt as if it was hit by a whirlwind of events.


“Her aura is really beautiful. The Sliver Glow of Cura isn’t it?” After letting a deep breath out, Ai commented.

“So mine is not?” Risa pouted and wiped the tear out of her eyes as if she was crying sadly.

“You know that is not what I have meant and you can’t really compare them this way.” Ai replied with an as a matter of fact tone and knows that the girl knew it.

“But definitely the most passionate yet mysterious Crimson Blaze of Fira” the raven continued and finish off with a smile.

“So…I’m hot?” Risa wriggled her eyebrow as she speaks

“You’re incorrigible.” the girl rolled her eyes

“You know… you might be doing that just a too much for a Princess~” the younger girl emphasized the word with a slightly higher pitch.

“And just. who might be the cause of it?” Ai chose to pause a short while at that word instead.

“Anyway, you have yet to answer me. Don’t change the topic!”

“Over my dead body”

“Hmmmm…Sooo……I’ll be hot if I’m over your dead body?”

“WHATEVER” the girl sighed as she waved her hands frustratingly in the air once. The other just giggled at the cute reaction she had gotten from the girl.

With that, they fall into their usual silent again but this time with one grinning and the other frowning and looking away but Risa could faintly detect the corner of those lips were actually tilting slightly upwards.

After a short while, sighing again, Ai taps her own lap lightly before standing up to leave.

Risa just sat there stupidly, watching as the Princess walked further and further away, her grin, falling bit by bit.

“You coming or not?” Ai turned back with a smirked and a raised eyebrow at the girl’s dejected look.

She did not need to be told twice. Risa immediately jogs over and joined the Princess by the side.

“What’s up with you and rain?”

“Shouldn’t I be the one asking you that?” Risa mused

This time, it was Ai who was putting up the show. It was nothing fancifully like what brunette girl had, nevertheless, Risa was still grinning like a love-struck girl. Ai simply just had a barrier around the both of them.

“Sorry, nothing special”

“Your presence itself is more than enough.”

With that, Ai sweetly laced her fingers through Risa’s.

Together, they walked silently, listening to the light tapping of the rain on their, what Risa is currently naming it, Ai barrier.

Ai was pretty amazed that the younger girl was able to lead the way to the waterfall in this maze of greenery effortlessly only after being brought once. It once again shows how delicate the brunette was.

Sitting under the same tree again, the raven girl leans back comfortably and rested her hands on those that were gently wrapped around her waist from the back. Together, they just gazed at the water that was gushing down from the clifftop.

The rain was really pouring heavily and the wind was picking up at a rapid rate. Even though well protected by the barrier, Ai could still mildly feels the cold passing through a little and gave an involuntary shiver. After living in the Ice Palace for all her life, she was still unable to get use to the low temperature here.  Right away, she felt the arms around her tighten and held her closer to its owner body, instantly warming up hers a little. She smiled at how sweetly the girl was.

Not long after, she realized that the body holding onto her was actually burning at a considerably higher temperature than normal. Immediately, she turned around and placed a hand on the burning forehead while eyeing the girl worryingly.

“You are hot!” the older girl exclaimed concernedly

“Finally you admitted it.” the younger girl nonchalantly replied with a smirk as she removed the hand from her forehead and held it gently in hers.

“THAT IS NOT WHAT I MEANT~ You are having a high fever! Let get back.” The girl attempted to stand up but with a light tug, she landed right back on the brunette’s lap, facing her. Then, she felt a warm hand circled around her waist and the other around her neck, pulling her close again. Slightly taken aback, Ai was about to question the girl when she felt the sudden temperature change from the girl again. The temperature was now slightly below normal but was slowly creeping up to a higher temperature than earlier on before dropping back to normal again.

It was then that she finally realized that Risa had deliberately altered her body temperature to accommodate hers. How stupid of her to have not thought of that. Of course the girl was able to do so. She is the master of fire and heat.

Realizing how silly she might have seen to the girl, she just buried her blushing face softly into the girl’s shoulder.

“Thanks anyway…” the brunette say softly by her red pointed ear with a warm smile.

Again, the temperature starts to creep up and remains at a comfortable warmth. Mused by the fact that younger girl had gone to such length just to make her feel at ease, Ai snuggled contently into her new warm pack.

They were falling to yet another serene silent when a soft and sincere voice was whispered by the Princess’s pointed ears again.

My Love has the most angelic White Light of Purity I have ever seen.”

Even though the Princess did not reply her verbally, Risa could feel a smile forming on her neck as the pointed ear reddens again. Unable to resist, Risa gave a light peck to the flushing ear, causing the girl to shiver a little but definitely not due to the cold this time. Knowingly, the brunette lowered her temperature to allow the raven girl to cool down a little before rising back up once again.

Together with their eyes closed, they take in the pleasant natural orchestra playing around them in warmth.


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In a rush to work! OMG! BYE!

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Re: Esmerelda [ The Chase 2 - Chapter 9 (20/12) ]
« Reply #64 on: December 20, 2009, 01:52:09 PM »
TakaGaki is sweet, as usual :wub:

But I wanna know what happened to TanaKame after Eri chased after Reina XD

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Re: Esmerelda [ The Chase 2 - Chapter 9 (20/12) ]
« Reply #65 on: December 20, 2009, 04:10:01 PM »
I meant Eri is trying very, very hard to befriend Reina (she's willing to put herself in danger for that).

Yep, that's why we love Eri.

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:D It's true though..you wun even bother if it's someone you don't care about..  ;)
Oh, you make me want to chant 'TanaKamei' badly....  :nervous

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All Readers: Regarding the "bomb" that i might drop that everyone is worrying about......... I'm still considering if i should drop a small one first...but i actually like to slowly "bake" the cream puff in the oven.... until....the cream Explodes from the inside! LOL~   (Do they even bake cream puff in an oven??? I'm not a good cook~ LOL)
Somehow that translated to my brain as: "I'm gonna torture them first slowly then I'm gonna make them so very miserable! Mwahahaha!!  :mon evil:"
Sorry, that's just my brain :depressed:
I dunno about that, I'm bad at cook too.

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but her kitten is actually nothing but a big meanie with a super jello heart. You just need to get pass the meanie part first though.
Pup, hang on! You're getting there :mon olympic:

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Pulling back, her pup nodded sadly. Eri did not know why but even the words from her master could not lift her heavy heart.
“I’m going after Reina”
One step closer to TanaKamei  :ding:

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“You are hot!”
“Finally you admitted it.”
:rofl: I'll never get tired with all the teasing/banter/flirting.

:wub: Aww TakaGaki are very protective with each other, casting barrier for the other.
They're not officially a couple, yet they act like one  :grin:

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Maybe you mean 'eyebrow'?
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Re: Esmerelda [ The Chase 2 - Chapter 9 (20/12) ]
« Reply #66 on: December 20, 2009, 06:35:25 PM »
TakaGaki at its best :wub:  The Reina/Eri saga just keeps continuing  :lol:

I like the Reina and Eri matching up with each other lol
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Re: Esmerelda [ The Chase 2 - Chapter 9 (20/12) ]
« Reply #67 on: December 20, 2009, 07:35:05 PM »
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Together, they walked silently, listening to the light tapping of the rain on their, what Risa is currently naming it, Ai barrier.
Barrier of Love! I like it.

I'm not going to say anything that hasn't already been said, but it won't hurt to reiterate. Takagaki is awesome and Tanakame amusing. Can't wait to see how it turns out for them.

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Re: Esmerelda [ The Chase 2 - Chapter 9 (20/12) ]
« Reply #68 on: December 21, 2009, 02:21:10 AM »
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And sure enough, the Princess came by but seems to be searching around for something. Gorgeous it may be with the morning sunlight on her, Risa decided to put up a protective barrier just right above to shield snow white from the heat and the damaging elements of the sun, only allowing the slightly dimmed filtered light to shine on her.

OMG  :wriggly:  :gmon twirl:  :wriggly:


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“Have you seen Reina?” the princess asked casually.

Risa pouted. “I was just about to ask if Ai-chan had seen Eri too”

 XD maybe they're in there somewhere, cuddling  XD


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As Ai expected, this time, the white fur ball was after the black cotton ball instead.

Switched?  :w00t:


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she picked up her kitten’s purplish aura and was being pursued by nothing but a stunning slivery one.

Yay!  :mon fyeah:


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while transforming to her semi-human self and hid timidly behind her while the pup chose to hop onto Risa’s lap before changing.

 :mon blood:  I so love Eri's ummm  pureness..?


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Eri who is even incapable of harming a little fly had murdered something?

This made me laugh, I don't know why  XD


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And that was it. Case closed.

I bet Reina is  :shocked and  :nervous     :lol:


I so love the masters and pets interactions, so lovely, giggly and funny  :bow:  :bow: and  :bow:


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With that, she scoped Reina up, carrying her bridal style to the pavilion.


 :on bleed: I'm so dying from blood loss any second now


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“We’re ready whenever you are”

I want Ai for a master   :heart:


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“Hmm… Yes Reina…I know…I love you too.” Ai replied while kissing her kitten’s head lovingly

 :mon blood:


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and raised an eye brown when she saw Risa pouted again.

Jealous  XD


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“I’m…S…sorry!!” after managing to choked the apologize out, she ran away like there is no tomorrow.


 :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:


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“I’m going after Reina”

 :banana:  :pepper:  :leek:  :taco:


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“So mine is not?”

 :roll:


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“So…I’m hot?”

 :roll:


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“You’re incorrigible.”

 :lol:


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“Over my dead body”

OMG   :wriggly: to the max


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“Hmmmm…Sooo……I’ll be hot if I’m over your dead body?”

 :imdead:  :imdead:  :imdead:


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“Sorry, nothing special”

“Your presence itself is more than enough.”

With that, Ai sweetly laced her fingers through Risa’s.

 :on bleed:  :on bleed:  :on bleed:


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“You are hot!” the older girl exclaimed concernedly

“Finally you admitted it.”

 :lol:


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Realizing how silly she might have seen to the girl, she just buried her blushing face softly into the girl’s shoulder.

 :mon lovelaff:


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“My Love has the most angelic White Light of Purity I have ever seen.”

 :mon lovelaff:  :mon lovelaff:  :mon lovelaff:


I was thinking ebil when her temp rose, but can you blame me? No, you can't


O.M.G.   G.R.E.A.T.   C.H.A.P.T.E.R.    :bow:  :bow:  :bow:
 



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Re: Esmerelda [ Royal Garden Walk - Chapter 8 (15/12) ]
« Reply #69 on: December 21, 2009, 01:02:01 PM »
“I’m going after Reina”
I'm so dying to know what happened at the end of this third 'chase' XD

Kitten Reina has no chance against her master does she? Which I find to be adorable. It just sounds like something the kitten would do (from what has been said of her so far in this fic, especially around Eri), jump to conclusions as if wanting to prove herself right that the pup is up to no good. But hey, if it's going to be the ice breaker between the two pets so be it!


As for the 'bomb' you keep threatening to drop, as long as the grass remains green and the sky is blue at the end of it all, and the kitten stops jumping at the pup at every given opportunity XD


(Oh, the fic I was talking about that has turtle Eri in it is called Goddess of Fire. I think it's on the third page of the fanfics board)



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Re: Esmerelda [ The Chase 2 - Chapter 9 (20/12) ]
« Reply #70 on: December 22, 2009, 12:10:10 PM »
@Mum: XD My poor kitten.. you'll know soon! but i have something more important today to update! IT's the puppy's birthday!

@Chloe:
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Pup, hang on! You're getting there :mon olympic:
- Somehow this cracks me up~ LOL~     :gmon nya:......................... :mon olympic:     ME: :mon yeah: *go Eri go!*

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Somehow that translated to my brain as: "I'm gonna torture them first slowly then I'm gonna make them so very miserable! Mwahahaha!!  :mon evil:
LOL~ The *MUHAHAHA* part was right though!

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Maybe you mean 'eyebrow'?
*SCREAM* OMG! LOL~ i wonder how many "eye brown" i have thrown inside there already..

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Barrier of Love! I like it.
i'm lovin' it too~  :wub:

@kRisZ:
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maybe they're in there somewhere, cuddling
- LOL~ far from that.... XD

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:mon blood: I so love Eri's ummm  pureness..?
- YES! i manage to kill one with the puppy! LOL~

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This made me laugh, I don't know why
- I could almost imaging the pup trying to chase the fly instead..lol

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I want Ai for a master  :heart:
- NOPE! i'm not giving her to you too!!  :P I'm a greedy girl! LOL~

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I was thinking ebil when her temp rose, but can you blame me? No, you can't
- What's ebil?  :?

Count for the day.... Nose bleed: 6

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I'm so dying to know what happened at the end of this third 'chase' XD
- I didn't realize until you mention that the last part when Eri went after Reina was consider as another chase.. LOL!

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Kitten Reina has no chance against her master does she?

- No.. absolutely zero.. LOL~ She could not even bare to go against her.. XD

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wanting to prove herself right that the pup is up to no good
- Plus isn't it scary to see your friend being eaten up? LOL~ poor Reina~ she is going to have nightmares!



Special Chapter coming up soon!

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Re: Esmerelda [ The Chase 2 - Chapter 9 (20/12) ]
« Reply #71 on: December 22, 2009, 12:16:55 PM »
Happy Birthday Kame-chan!

IT's the Puppy's Birthday! Even though i so want to update the story at 12am but i have work.. so i guess an early one is better than a late one.. It's a little rush but i manage to squeeze this out of me in 2 days! *Dying soon*



Side Story -
A Kamei Eri Birthday Special


“Gaki-san! Gaki-san! Look!” the girl shrieked excited as she ran to her master, holding something carefully close with both her hands. Risa smiled as her thrilled pup made her way to her from the sandy beach.

The pair was now on a private island for their well deserved holiday. For almost two weeks, they have been tracking a pack of demonic rogues. There had been sightings near a dense forest and when some scouts were sent to gather more information, they never came back. Heavily armed search squats were then formed to comb the forest but were ambushed and only a handful managed to escape the massacre.

Hence, Risa was sent down with direct orders from her grandfather to investigate and rectify if possible. Reito had insisted her to bring a small unit of elites but after assaying the demons’ strength and is confident that she is able to take them down alone, she denied the offer. If what the survivors said were true, then they were dealing with a pack of highly intelligence demons.

Demons are self-centered creatures and only live for themselves, therefore they do not live in pack unless they were under control of a demon lord which from what she heard, there was none. Individually, they are easy to handle but if they are smart enough to get over their natural instinct to get together, then it is something that should not be overlooked. Moreover, not only did they moved in a group but were also able to brilliantly camouflage themselves to blend into the surrounding. Since it was not easy to uncover them, then the best was to too remain unknown to the enemy as well. Hence, the lesser people, the better. There have to be times when the demons let their guard down.

And sure enough, her enduring wait was not in vain.

Casting a barrier around the area, Eri prepare herself on the outside to support her master. The moment she got her barrier up, the pup habitually continued with a protection spell to increase her master’s resistances, a regeneration spell to hasten wound and energy recovery and finishing off competently with a blessing for maximum damage.

Satisfied with her current extra boost from her pup, it was time to announce her presence, Gaki style. Holding her hand out, instantly a ball of inferno formed and hovers above her palm. With a slight swing of her arm, the fiery orb slowly circled around her creating a ring of fire before spreading out with her as the centre, in frenzy speed. Within seconds, Risa was covered in a sea of red. It was not hard to spot her prey when there was nothing left for them to hide in. The slayer materialized her katana as she charged towards the nearest one. Without delay, her pup cast a haste spell on her, increasing her agility significantly. The poor creature did not even have any time to assay what was happening when a katana came right down from the top of her head, perfectly splitting her into two parts. The very last thing she saw was just a pair of crimson eyes.

Turning swiftly, the slayer slashed a foolish one that was trying to sneak up on her from the back, clean across her mid section, halving her as well.

Enraged, the rest of the six charged towards her all at once while the remaining two far behind cast an ineffective fire bolt.

Imbuing her weapon with flames, Risa sliced the empty air in a “X” motion, sending two brisk sheered line of fiery wave out, successfully dividing the first two of the six diagonally before putting up a reflective barrier to deflect the two fire bolts back to its’ casters with twice its’ original speed, incinerating one while the other that manage to dodge in time to avoid a direct hit, screamed in agony as one side of her arm got blasted off by the force.

Entrusting her pup to take him out, Risa concentrated on to the four that were approaching her.

Raising her arms as if to draw a bow, a spiritual arrow took form as Eri swiftly pulled the imagery bow into a full draw. Pausing for a millisecond to take aim, she weaved a soul cleansing spell on it before releasing the spirit arrow, piercing the creature straight in the heart, ending its torment.

Turning her attention back to her master, Eri shot another arrow, hitting the only one that had managed to get away from the line of the speeding wall of fire that her master hurled towards them, right on the head, killing the last of the pack.

It was when the remains of the demons turned into talisman that Risa finally realized that whole plot was nothing but a test from her grandfather. Given that she gave an acceptable explanation to refuse the reinforcement her grandfather insisted plus not only had she used her past experiences along with the knowledge from the books but also able to look into details on the limited amount of information given to finally conclude on her strategic for the assignment, of course she cleared it with flying colours, hence the reward.


Sitting on her lap, her pup carefully showed her the content in her cupped hands. It was a new born baby sea turtle.

“I saved it from an eagle!” the girl declared proudly and looked expectantly at her.

“Hmmm…A brave puppy I have…” Risa chuckled as she pets her puppy and gave her a nice scratch behind the ear, bringing a wide smile to her pup’s face.

“Can I keep it??”

Knowing that was coming, Risa gave her pup an unreadable smile.

“If one day… some one were to take you away from me……” Before she even finish the question, her pup was already close to tears.

Motioning the girl to turn in her lap to face the sea, the older girl wrapped her arms around her waist and rested her head on the girl’s shoulder before continuing.

“It will feel the same, wouldn’t it? The big blue sea is where this little green turtle belongs to…”

“Hmm…” understanding where her master was getting to, the pup nodded and gave an acknowledging hum before turning to give a warm smile but Risa was still able to detect the slight disappointment in it.

“Don’t worry… she will definitely come back again… to this very same shore…to lay her eggs…beside, this little one have a birthmark on it shell… it wouldn’t be hard to find her when she is back.” pointing out the unique black patch on the turtle’s shell, Risa hope to cheer her little pup up.

“Come on… I’ll go with you.” Taking her pup’s hand, she led her to the shoreline.

“I’ll see you again…I hope… No… definitely…” bringing the little turtle close to her face, Eri hummed a blessing spell before delivering it with a peck on the little turtle’s head.

“Kyamei…remember your way back ok?” Risa smiled adoringly at how cute her pup was that she already named the turtle. With that, the girl bends down and returns the little reptile back to where it belongs.

Turning back to shore, her pup cast a haste spell on all the rest of baby turtles that were struggling to the sea. The brunette could only laugh out loud at the scene of a bunch of baby sea turtles speeding into the sea comically.


The following week…


“This is for me?!” Eri exclaimed excitedly as her master passed her a present.

Shaking the box a little to get a clue on what the present might be, the pup eventually gave up and settles on opening the wrapping carefully.

Risa watched delightfully as the pup let out an overjoyed shrieked when she opened the box.

Knowing that her pup really love that turtle a week ago back at the island, she had a dog tag custom made into a shape of a turtle with a black patch right where the little turtle had and had it engraved with her pup’s name.

“THANKS!” Eri was jumping around her before practically throwing herself at her, giving her a big bear hug.

“Come on… I’ll put it on for you.” Snapping the tag into place, she weaved a blessing on it and her pup started to tear up.

Smiling affectionately, Risa use her thumb to remove those happy tear from the stunning sliver orbs and scratches the spot behind her pup’s collar before placing a peck on her cheek.

“Happy Birthday…”


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Just a note... Eri does not have a surname in this fic.. because ar.. she is a puppy? So her surname is probably Niigaki now if she needs to have one~..XD

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Re: Esmerelda [ A Kamei Eri Birthday SP - Side Story (22/12) ]
« Reply #72 on: December 22, 2009, 12:41:20 PM »
nice side story for her b-day, I don't have anything on hand for her lol

ne ways, eri saves a turtle woo hoo her own kind in an ironic way well that makes sense on the surname though

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Re: Esmerelda [ A Kamei Eri Birthday SP - Side Story (22/12) ]
« Reply #73 on: December 22, 2009, 01:32:16 PM »
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Casting a barrier around the area, Eri prepare herself on the outside to support her master. The moment she got her barrier up, the pup habitually continued with a protection spell to increase her master’s resistances, a regeneration spell to hasten wound and energy recovery and finishing off competently with a blessing for maximum damage.

Whoa! That's the Tur.. erm.. Puppy in action Yay!  :pepper:  :pepper:  :pepper:


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Satisfied with her current extra boost from her pup, it was time to announce her presence, Gaki style.

So badass and I love the Gaki style thing  :rockon:


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With a slight swing of her arm, the fiery orb slowly circled around her creating a ring of fire before spreading out with her as the centre

Reminds me of KP Green Dance Version  :P


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Imbuing her weapon with flames, Risa sliced the empty air in a “X” motion, sending two brisk sheered line of fiery wave out, successfully dividing the first two of the six diagonally before putting up a reflective barrier to deflect the two fire bolts back to its’ casters with twice its’ original speed, incinerating one while the other that manage to dodge in time to avoid a direct hit, screamed in agony as one side of her arm got blasted off by the force.

Wow, it's like I'm watching a movie   :w00t:


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Sitting on her lap, her pup carefully showed her the content in her cupped hands. It was a new born baby sea turtle.

Yay


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“I saved it from an eagle!” the girl declared proudly and looked expectantly at her.

So innocent and pure  :love:


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“It will feel the same, wouldn’t it? The big blue sea is where this little green turtle belongs to…”

 :)


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Turning back to shore, her pup cast a haste spell on all the rest of baby turtles that were struggling to the sea. The burette could only laugh out loud at the scene of a bunch of baby sea turtles speeding into the sea comically.

 :lol: It's like so Eri-like thing to do  :lol:


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“Happy Birthday…”

Happy Birthday!  :heart:  :heart:  :heart:

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Re: Esmerelda [ A Kamei Eri Birthday SP - Side Story (22/12) ]
« Reply #74 on: December 22, 2009, 11:09:36 PM »
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Gaki style.
Lols.
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Turning back to shore, her pup cast a haste spell on all the rest of baby turtles that were struggling to the sea. The burette could only laugh out loud at the scene of a bunch of baby sea turtles speeding into the sea comically.
More lols.

This is so cute! Really, a good birfday fic.

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Re: Esmerelda [ A Kamei Eri Birthday SP - Side Story (22/12) ]
« Reply #75 on: December 22, 2009, 11:15:55 PM »
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Gaki style

Gaki style rocks! XD

Really good story for our Turtle-Puppy's birthday XD


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Re: Esmerelda [ A Kamei Eri Birthday SP - Side Story (22/12) ]
« Reply #76 on: December 22, 2009, 11:16:26 PM »
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- Somehow this cracks me up~ LOL~    :gmon nya: .........................  :mon olympic:   ME:  *go Eri go!*
XD yeah, that's what I thought.

Eh?! What do you mean the *MUHAHAHA* part was right?? Coz that doesn't sound good.

No worries, typos happen  :thumbsup

Reading this update is like playing an RPG game, with Risa as the main chara and Eri as the support magic-type chara, and since I love RPG games this is so great!! :mon thumb:

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“If one day… some one were to take you away from me……”
A very effective method for explaining things to her pup. Both Eri and Reina have awesome masters, yay!

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Turning back to shore, her pup cast a haste spell on all the rest of baby turtles that were struggling to the sea. The burette could only laugh out loud at the scene of a bunch of baby sea turtles speeding into the sea comically.
:rofl: that would be very interesting to see!


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Re: Esmerelda [ A Kamei Eri Birthday SP - Side Story (22/12) ]
« Reply #77 on: December 23, 2009, 08:09:36 AM »
This is the best Eri's birthday story I read the whole day! :wub: My heart is melting into a puddle of mush :heart:


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Turning back to shore, her pup cast a haste spell on all the rest of baby turtles that were struggling to the sea. The burette could only laugh out loud at the scene of a bunch of baby sea turtles speeding into the sea comically.
I couldn't resist quoting this too  :lol: :lol: :lol:

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Re: Esmerelda [ A Kamei Eri Birthday SP - Side Story (22/12) ]
« Reply #78 on: December 23, 2009, 09:48:23 AM »
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To the Video - LOL~ it's a pity Risa replied xie xie only  but it's cute.. it was a request from fan is it?

A fan actually asked JJ to teach Risa to say "wo ai ni" to Ai but there was a typo error so it came out as asking Ai to say it to Risa XD

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Just a gentle reminder that this story might not be all happy days *Evil Laughter*

ooooh, exciting. I wanna see how tragic you are gonna make this :twothumbs

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Bake the cream puff in the oven sounds like "bun in the oven" which means someone's getting pregnant XD I don't think you mean it in this way though but I REALLY wanna read the bomb. I can't wait!

Aww, Risa is so observant and considerate to make that shield appear and protect Ai from the sun :wub:

OMgosh, Reina kitty apologizing is SOOOOOOOOO cute!!! I can't believe I'm at risk of turning into mush from someone other than Risa or Eri :P

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“So…I’m hot?” Risa wriggled her eyebrow as she speaks

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“You’re incorrigible.” the girl rolled her eyes

Flirty TakaGaki =  :heart:

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“Hmmmm…Sooo……I’ll be hot if I’m over your dead body?”

LOL! That was a good line :D

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“You are hot!” the older girl exclaimed concernedly

I knew what Risa was gonna reply the instant Ai let that slip :lol:

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Side Story - A Kamei Eri Birthday Special

MERRY XMAS!!! (in advance XD) and of course happy Kame day :wub:

I was all happy and enjoying myself reading about kakoii Risa but this (points to line below)... scared me.

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“If one day… some one were to take you away from me……” Before she even finish the question, her pup was already close to tears.

What does this mean huh? HUH!?!? Is this a clue to that bomb you were talking about? :panic:

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Motioning the girl to turn in her lap to face the sea, the older girl wrapped her arms around her waist and rested her head on the girl’s shoulder before continuing.

Is this action normal between master and pup? Or could it be something more?

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“This is for me?!” Eri exclaimed excitedly as her master passed her a present.

Shaking the box a little to get a clue on what the present might be, the pup eventually gave up and settles on opening the wrapping carefully.

Risa watched delightfully as the pup let out an overjoyed shrieked when she opened the box.

Knowing that her pup really love that turtle a week ago back at the island, she had a dog tag custom made into a shape of a turtle with a black patch right where the little turtle had and had it engraved with her pup’s name.

“THANKS!” Eri was jumping around her before practically throwing herself at her, giving her a big bear hug.

“Come on… I’ll put it on for you.” Snapping the tag into place, she weaved a blessing on it and her pup started to tear up.

Smiling affectionately, Risa use her thumb to remove those happy tear from the stunning sliver orbs and scratches the spot behind her pup’s collar before placing a peck on her cheek.

“Happy Birthday…”

Awwww, so kawaii. KameMame is the most adorable couple :oops:

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Re: Esmerelda [ A Kamei Eri Birthday SP - Side Story (22/12) ]
« Reply #79 on: December 23, 2009, 07:21:30 PM »
*SCREAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!*  :scared:

*PRAYING*

I hope none of you realized i misspelled Brunette as burette..........

Burette -a graduated glass tube, commonly having a stopcock at the bottom, used for accurately measuring or measuring out small quantities of liquid.


Have I been portraying Risa as a thin piece of glass all along!?!?!?  :mon scare:


Sigh...too much Science...........



 :mon POd: <- signing off with this instead.....
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