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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 13~1/12)
« Reply #100 on: January 12, 2010, 05:21:07 PM »
^ *Rides C's pink camel and rammed over kRisZ* Get back here!

I have unknowingly been nicknamed bishop i realized... but y "Bishop NI" instead of just bishop? XD

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“Are you hungry? I made bread and pancakes”
- lol~ pancakes! Risa must be like "PANCAKES!?"

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“I seldom make bread”
- o.O POOR RISA! but then again...does bread need to be made??? isn't it like spread the jam and done?? lol how bad is she anyway!?

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What better way to infiltrate your target's fortress  :w00t:
- I second that~  :D

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 13~1/12)
« Reply #101 on: January 12, 2010, 05:53:51 PM »
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Risa hurriedly got up and gave out an embarrassing smile while shouting “I’m okay, I’m okay” which made Ai chuckle more.
Made me chuckle too.

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“Who wrecked your kitchen?”

“I seldom make bread” she said while she gestured for her visitor to sit down.

“Oh... I thought you hated pancakes”

“Nah, actually I love them”
The whole exchange just tickled me momoiro.

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Ai slightly nudged the girl who was still clinging onto her, when she didn’t move a bit, that’s when she realized the girl fell asleep.
:wub: :wub:

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“Sweet dreams my dear.”
:wub: :wub: :wub: :heart: :heart: My heart esploded a little.


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Says who there’s another chapter.
:shocked

 :mon rush:

 XD
*blocks exit* :twisted:

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 13~1/12)
« Reply #102 on: January 12, 2010, 08:41:45 PM »
Oh yay! Update^^ ah drats I expected a kiss to but it's ok, something better might happen after Risa wakes up :P
So we have confirmed Gaki lost "it" to Ai which is good but I wanted what occured between her and Reina. I hope it's nothing too terrible*worried*

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 13~1/12)
« Reply #103 on: January 14, 2010, 12:15:49 PM »
I’m not supposed to be her today because of work, I’m so tired at the moment, but I forgot to post this last night because of a certain distraction, a good laugh distraction. The strongest pillar of YTTC stormed the house last night  :yep: Our favorite Nutty Intruder struck again with full force. But it turned out to be a good thing though because I was able to make some revisions, yes this was revised but stayed crappy still   :lol:  I’ll be back probably on Saturday if not I’m here by Monday  :)


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*hop in*
skip the previous chp comment..XD..
*hop out*
:roll:

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KR!!!!!!! :angry:
WHY!!!!
geee..i expect a kiss!!!   :angry: :angry:
 XD :lol:
:smhid   :P

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just go to the bedroom and hug longer.. :D
good idea  :twisted:


@baddie
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Awwww *pouts* I don't eat kids. Serious! At least not anymore :lol:
Kid? Where?  :lick: (  :mon look: Where's that spoon and fork holding emoticon  :D )

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I'm gonna stick with my theory for now. Ai's been burned when Reina breached their relationship and moved town to start anew. Then the rest of the story as per chapter 1 onward. Am i right?
I dunno  :P

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I feel sorry for Risa. Is that bread safe for consumption? :lol:
XD

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What better way to infiltrate your target's fortress :w00t:
:strawberry:


@Bishop NI
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I have unknowingly been nicknamed bishop i realized... but y "Bishop NI" instead of just bishop? XD
*Points above*  :P  :k-thrilled:

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- o.O POOR RISA! but then again...does bread need to be made??? isn't it like spread the jam and done?? lol how bad is she anyway!?
Old people... *looks around* like baddie  :mon rush:   :k-thrilled:  uses personal touch to impress a girl?  :D


@rnd-sama
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Made me chuckle too.
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The whole exchange just tickled me momoiro.
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My heart esploded a little.
:cow:  :muffin:  :strawberry:

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*blocks exit* :twisted:
:scared:  :D


@lil_hamz
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Oh yay! Update^^ ah drats I expected a kiss to but it's ok, something better might happen after Risa wakes up :P
So we have confirmed Gaki lost "it" to Ai which is good but I wanted what occured between her and Reina. I hope it's nothing too terrible*worried*
We'll see  :D





UPDATE 14



 “Who are you and what are you doing here?” a shrill voice resounded the quiet house. Ai turned around startled. Her feather duster flew a meter away, surprised by the sudden intrusion.

“Oh, I didn’t know Risa had a hot house assistant” said the intruder while eyeing the frozen girl from head to toe and giving her a wink when the intruder met Ai’s eye.

“Don’t mind her, she’s not that pervert always” Eri emerged from the open door smiling and gave Sayu a spank on the head.

“Eri that hurts” Sayu pouted while rubbing her injured head.

“I know” she retorted before sticking her tongue out to the pouting bunny. “Where’s Risa?

“She’s sleeping” Ai replied amused by the act. When Eri was about to head upstairs Ai continued “Oh no she’s not upstairs, I was here to pick her key up when she dropped and forgot to take it an hour ago. And then I remembered she’s been barely here the whole week so I volunteered cleaning her house.

“Lucky” commented the bunny “Wait, you two knew each other? How come I didn’t now?” she continued, giving the two an inquisitive look.

“You’ve already met her, at the club, a few weeks ago” Eri rolled her eyes about to talk again when Sayu cut in

“Oh yeah I remember! You’re the rapist!”

“Ehh!?” yelped Ai upon hearing the last word the bunny uttered.

“Itai! Eri that’s the second one in just a short period and it really hurts” whined Sayu “Risa did call her rapist”

Eri ignored her girlfriend and faced the bewildered Ai. “Risa woke up after that night and hysterically called and informed us that she was raped and that she had no idea who she was with. We didn’t catch your name so we were not able to give her any name, so up till now she had no idea it was you.”

“I see”

“If she’s not upstairs, where is she?”

“Oh, she’s sleeping in my house at the moment”

“Ohhh, she sleeps in your bed now?” teased the bunny

“Sayu!” Eri exclaimed

“What? I was just asking” grinning, Sayu faced her girlfriend

“No, she’s on my couch. You need me to call her?”

“No, it’s okay, she needed the sleep. We’re in the area so we decided to drop by and give her these fruits” Eri said while handing a basket to Ai.

“Thank you. I’ll tell her you paid a visit”

“Ohhh, acting like a girlfriend now?”

*Toink* “Itai”


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The sun was almost setting. The owner of the house was in her black robe patiently waiting on her chair by the window holding a glass of wine while watching the sun slowly descending and the darkness starting to reign.

“Mmmn” someone mumbled from the bed and so Ai shifted her gaze toward the person who bit by bit opened her eyes and studied the unfamiliar surrounding, until she met Ai’s eyes. She tried to sit up but failed.

“Why am I handcuffed?” she questioned the smiling Ai who gulped down the glass’s content.

“I just found out that I was charged guilty without even tried.” Not breaking the eye contact, Ai slowly crossed her legs, and paid her full attention to the somewhat lost Risa.

“What are you talking about?”

“How could I rape someone who passes out every after 5 seconds of trying to wake her up through sucking her flesh here and there?” arcing her brow as she stood up. “It’s payback time.” smirking, she took her robe off revealing her sexy lingerie, a vinyl string bra and a low rise cheeky shorts both with grommet detail. Risa was left speechless at the scene, still processing the now turned seductive woman in front of her.

“It took me a long while finding this” she seductively said while pointing at her attire, running her left hand over her almost exposed chest creating an almost drooling Risa  “and this” swaying a single feather before running it on Risa’s uncovered belly, making the captive yelped at the sudden contact. Satisfied with the initial reaction, she turned around and uttered “Wait here” after a couple of seconds Ai returned with a platter of fruits and placed it on the bedside table.

“Here, I’m sure you’re starving, you’ve been hibernating the whole day” she shoved a grape into Risa’s mouth, before licking her own finger tips.

Not taking away her vision from the seductress, she chewed the fruit unconsciously until she realized it was sour and eventually showed it through her distorted face.

“What? Not that sweet? Let me do something about that.” She picked another piece and this time she put it in between her teeth instead and moved in closer to her ogling captive.

Risa was literally gulping her own saliva down when Ai was closing in. There was a sudden surge of electricity exploding inside her body, electrifying her every nerve. She raised her head to meet Ai’s mouth but was pushed back. Slowly, Ai moved closer, making Risa loss her patience more and more. Ai stopped when she was an inch away, where she could breathe the tied woman’s unsteady breath and waited there for Risa’s move. Risa bit it and pushed as far as she could to savor her captor’s lips but Ai pulled back smirking after a good five seconds.

“Not so fast, we have all the time in the world my dear” Risa remained speechless, her body slightly trembling, eyes dilating.

“We’ll get there sooner or later dear, but my way and my time” she winked and continued. “Was it good?”

“Huh?”

“Wrong answer.” Ai picked something from a bucket down the floor and placed it on Risa’s belly causing Risa to shiver. Still unable to speak, she peeked down to see what it was.

“You’re burning hot you need ice to cool down” Ai said still gazing at her prey’s eyes while her hand was playing with the cubes, touching Risa’s flesh from time to time, and making the ice melt in a flash. She leaned in and sipped the liquefying cube from Risa’s belly button, eliciting a moan from the captive but the offensive mouth retreated after hearing the sound, agonizing the woman more.

Ai picked the feather up and ran it on Risa’s tummy making Risa shiver again but this time from the tickling sensation. Ai watched as her captive’s eyes darkened with each stoke, she listened as her captive let out a whimpering moan making her heat up at the same time and making her resistance reach its boundary. Not being able to control her inner heat, Ai made her move, she slowly climbed on the bed and straddled Risa on the hips, her hands traveled until they met Risa’s tied hands and she intertwined her fingers with the captive’s while staring intensely at her. Risa was not the only one starving with the other’s kiss but her as well. She gingerly kissed Risa on the forehead down to her nose, to her cheeks, to her chin and then she paused for a moment and gazed into the waiting parted lips and into Risa’s eyes before finally moving in for the long awaited kiss. It was gentle at first but progressively it turned rough. Exchanging throaty moans, both heat up even more. After a while, the girl underneath noticed some moist that landed on her cheeks, for this reason she broke the kiss and found out the girl on top of her was shedding tears. She stared at Ai with questioning and worried look, “I thought I will never taste your lips again” Ai whispered, resting her forehead on her captive’s. “And I thought this day would never come” replied Risa as she wiggled lightly her head managing a nose to nose contact as her own tears started to fall as well.


“Untie me..?”





Enjoy  :D


« Last Edit: January 16, 2010, 03:57:28 PM by kRisZ »

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 13~1/12)
« Reply #104 on: January 14, 2010, 12:34:01 PM »
 :w00t: :wub: :oops: :drool: :twisted: :on bleed: :imdead: :smoke:

Hgasddrfrrght. Assgradfthhg. Wagthnfmoar. Must have moar.

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*SayuEri interaction*
Also liked but Takagaki overshadowed them a little bit.

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 14~1/14)
« Reply #105 on: January 14, 2010, 01:50:34 PM »
sayueri interaction is just so  :wub: :wub:
love how eri is the one who "bully" sayu here..XD

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“Oh yeah I remember! You’re the rapist!”
how unfriendly :lol:
but  :twothumbs :twothumbs

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she took her robe off revealing her sexy lingerie, a vinyl string bra and a low rise cheeky shorts both with grommet detail. Risa was left speechless at the scene, still processing the now turned seductive woman in front of her.
:drool: :drool:
*off to imagine this scene*

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for this reason she broke the kiss and found out the girl on top of her was shedding tears. She stared at Ai with questioning and worried look, “I thought I will never taste your lips again” Ai whispered, resting her forehead on her captive’s. “And I thought this day would never come” replied Risa as she wiggled lightly her head managing a nose to nose contact as her own tears started to fall as well.
at first, i thought it was cause aichan felt bad kissing risa cause of reina..
but seem like no worries huh..XD..

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“Untie me..?”
aichan: NO.. :lol:
if yes, gakisan will take over the "top" role ritz..XD

takigaki interaction
seem like aichan and gakisan change their role..LOL..
i still hoping gakisan is the one who takes the initiative..XD

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 14~1/14)
« Reply #106 on: January 14, 2010, 04:14:28 PM »
*Gasped!*

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Our favorite Nutty Intruder struck again with full force.
-What did she do!?  :D Soooo...that was where NI is from.. i thought it was Japanese for brother that "Ni".. so i was like  :?

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Old people... *looks around* like baddie
- She is soooooo gonna shove her walking stick up your ass... LOL! =X

Back to story!


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“Oh yeah I remember! You’re the rapist!”
- Indeed....something that Sayu might say... XD
- Sayu/Eri  :wub:
- Ai-chan must be like...  :shocked *I'm so gonna get her........lol*


Which all know she did! LOL~  :wub:

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“It’s payback time.”
- wooooooo~~~~ *grabs popcorn*

Must have been pretty hard on Ai-chan that day.... finally when she decided to let go and go after Risa... only to find her drunk till the point of blacking out... So she just have to settle on marking her on almost everywhere instead of taking advantage of her due to her current state~ XD How cute~  :wub:

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“Untie me..?”
- YahoooOOOOOOOOooooooo <- singsong version of yahoo~ came out of nowhere from me...which...is pretty common of me.. LOL~


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“Oh, I didn’t know Ai had a hot house assistant”
<- Anyway...Was that suppose to be Risa?? :?




« Last Edit: January 14, 2010, 04:21:55 PM by amEthystx »

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 14~1/14)
« Reply #107 on: January 14, 2010, 09:30:46 PM »
 :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :on bleed: :on bleed: :on bleed: :imdead:

wow that was hot
* kurosawa87 faints

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 14~1/14)
« Reply #108 on: January 14, 2010, 10:16:14 PM »
KYAHHH!!!!!!!  :imdead:
That was so sweet, hawt, and sexy all in one!!
I think I'll read it again!  :D
I really want more of this bedtime scene! :yep:  :P
« Last Edit: January 14, 2010, 10:21:31 PM by Swtme03 »

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 14~1/14)
« Reply #109 on: January 16, 2010, 12:47:27 AM »
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! ._____________.

I AM SPEECHLESS xD

I want more.... where's the next chapy?!?!?!??! xD


God!! She knows she's HOT!

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 14~1/14)
« Reply #110 on: January 16, 2010, 03:33:00 PM »
OH MY GOD!!!!

:imdead:

Seriously, I think that I've lost the whole blood that I had :grin:

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 14~1/14)
« Reply #111 on: January 16, 2010, 03:56:48 PM »
@rnd-sama
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Hgasddrfrrght. Assgradfthhg. Wagthnfmoar. Must have moar.
Kkfdorfsafg. Rokjada. Sdfsadkj.  :yep:  XD



@S!Hu!
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how unfriendly :lol:
but  :twothumbs :twothumbs
Bow.  :D

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:drool: :drool:
*off to imagine this scene*

 :shocked *coughperv#$&cough*  :P  :mon rush:



@Bishop NI
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-What did she do!? :D
For more details please visit YTTC  :P

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Soooo...that was where NI is from.. i thought it was Japanese for brother that "Ni".. so i was like  :?
lol, that would be weird  :lol:

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Old people... *looks around* like baddie
- She is soooooo gonna shove her walking stick up your ass... LOL! =X
Oh i didn't know she had rheumatism   :huhuh  XD   *covers ass with both hands and runs*  :mon rush:
Baddie dear Please make a sound, you're making me worried  :nervous  Please don't make me, it's my birthday in a couple of hours already  :D  :kneelbow: gomen :kneelbow:

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- YahoooOOOOOOOOooooooo <- singsong version of yahoo~ came out of nowhere from me...which...is pretty common of me.. LOL~
You're so full of random ideas, which is  :twothumbs

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“Oh, I didn’t know Ai had a hot house assistant”
<- Anyway...Was that suppose to be Risa?? :?

OMG right   :O   Thank you for pointing that out   :nervous



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wow that was hot
* kurosawa87 faints

 :thumbup
Thank you  :D



@Swtme03
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That was so sweet, hawt, and sexy all in one!!
I think I'll read it again!  :D
I really want more of this bedtime scene! :yep:  :P
Thank you  :love:  lol



@Haruka
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! ._____________.

I AM SPEECHLESS xD

I want more.... where's the next chapy?!?!?!??! xD
In a minute  :D but it's kinda short  :P



@trey-trey
  :w00t: :mon hi:  Where have you been? I thought the monster under your bed ate you alive.  :grin:







UPDATE 15



Without answering, Ai hungrily kissed the pleading girl. Forgetting her plea, Risa kissed back with same vigor and she pushed her tongue inside Ai’s trembling mouth. Risa was sure this time that the cause of it is her captor’s flaming desire. Ai allowed the trespasser to explore inside, when she got a hold of it she sucked it making Risa moan loudly and quiver more. Ai broke the kiss and trekked east, relishing every second of her trail, savoring the whimpering girl’s scent making the trekker raise some of her hair. Ai then moved up a little to give Risa the access to taste her scent as well which made the woman in control to stiffen and grasp her captive’s hands with a little more force. She continued moving north until she was able to make Risa feel her two perfect molds. Risa traced them lightly with her nose at first, making her captor shiver which in turn made Risa all the more energized, she trailed again the area but this time using her lips, after awhile she stopped and stayed still.


Ai gazed at her captive, unclasped their hands and sat up a little using both of her hands as braces. Not breaking their eye contact, a smirk slowly surfaced. “Found the treasure already?” leaning again toward her captive’s face and targeting her lips, she dived and bit the metal that was in between Risa’s teeth, took it from her mouth and proceeded to the cuffs above.


“You’re so in trouble” declared Risa as she flipped and pinned Ai down on the bed after being freed. Ai giggled and Risa gawked at her. The giggles died down and no one talked for a moment. They only stared at each other’s twinkling eyes. “You’re so beautiful” she said almost inaudibly, just enough for Ai to hear, as she traced Ai’s cheeks with her right hand. Ai’s eyes started to darken again, pleading for her touch. Witnessing the sight, she didn’t wait any longer and lunged downward while still cupping Ai’s face with her hand. Ai’s hands moved and locked on top of Risa’s neck as they continued to share a kiss passionately.


Moan echoed inside the room, the curtains swayed lightly to the tender blow of the wind, the stars danced above and the moon was proud as if rejoicing with them. And then the phone resonated, making Ai flinched for a moment, but ignored the disturbance and continued. The sound was gone for a few seconds but resounded again. “Don’t answer that” mumbled Risa as she gave Ai’s skin light kisses and bit it from time to time. “It’s not mine” this time it’s Risa’s turn to flinch and let out a groan and said “Must be important.” as she buried her head on Ai’s neck. She listened and scanned the room and spotted the flickering light from her phone’s screen. She halfheartedly stood up, picked her phone and flipped it open. “Yeah!” with a tone of annoyance she answered the phone only to be answered back with a hiss from the other line. She removed the phone from her ear and looked at the screen ‘Nakazawa Senpai’ it showed.


“Sumimasen, I was on my bed when you called”

“Get your ass down her at the office right away. I have questions for you!” and then she heard nothing. Nakazawa hang up.

“Shit”




 :D

Please poke me if it’s too much. My only defense and guideline’s that they’re not doing the main course  :nervous  If anyone finds the post inappropriate to be posted here, please drop a bomb  :)



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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 15~1/16)
« Reply #112 on: January 16, 2010, 04:20:43 PM »
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:w00t: :mon hi:  Where have you been? I thought the monster under your bed ate you alive.  :grin:
XD He didn't eat me, since you told me that he was down there, I haven't hide myself there anymore :P Nah, I've been here all the time, but I've broken my right wrist At least I'm left-handed xD and I prefer to not to type XD  :kneelbow:

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*READS THE WHOLE SCENE*

:mon blood:

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And then the phone resonated

NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! :on blackhole:

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“Get your ass down her at the office right away. I have questions for you!” and then she heard nothing. Nakazawa hang up.

“Shit”

Indeed :smoke:

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If anyone finds the post inappropriate to be posted here, please drop a bomb  

I don't think that it's inappropiate... Since they're not doing the "main course" :rofl:


Ohhh, I almost forgot to say:

Happy B-day!!!

Little kRisZ is getting old!!!! XD
« Last Edit: January 16, 2010, 10:46:58 PM by Treykun »

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 15~1/16)
« Reply #113 on: January 16, 2010, 04:48:26 PM »
YOU!!! :angry: :angry: :angry:

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“Found the treasure already?”
aichan aichan
is definitely a teaser too :lol:

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“You’re so in trouble”
GO GAKISAN!!!
she the rapist!!!!rape her back  :P

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And then the phone resonated
YOU!!!! :angry: :angry: :angry:

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Please poke me if it’s too much. My only defense and guideline’s that they’re not doing the main course
i wan the real main course!  :lol: :lol:

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:drool: :drool:
*off to imagine this scene*

 :shocked *coughperv#$&cough*  :P  :mon rush:
i admit..so, like what i say above
i want the main course..XD XD

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 14~1/14)
« Reply #114 on: January 16, 2010, 06:10:58 PM »
@rnd-sama
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Hgasddrfrrght. Assgradfthhg. Wagthnfmoar. Must have moar.
Kkfdorfsafg. Rokjada. Sdfsadkj.  :yep:  XD
Erien language? :gmon blonde:


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Old people... *looks around* like baddie
- She is soooooo gonna shove her walking stick up your ass... LOL! =X
Oh i didn't know she had rheumatism   :huhuh  XD   *covers ass with both hands and runs*  :mon rush:
Someone's ass is sooo gonna get skewered and bbq :on chew:


Baddie dear Please make a sound, you're making me worried  :nervous  Please don't make me, it's my birthday in a couple of hours already  :D  :kneelbow: gomen :kneelbow:
Sorry me was busy with assignments. Plus those thick books can kill your appetite to read anything else. And I don't want to do great injustice to great writers like you by reading the stories half-assedly :mon innocent: Is it your b'day today? Woot! :luvuluvu:



Happy birthday!!! Here's a flower for you :mon loveflower:



*Caught up with the story*
So Ai has taken over the active role huh *Baddie nods with approval* Volunteering with the housekeeping (and perhaps that's where she found Risa's handcuffs), and using the cuffs to tie her there, using fruits and ice to seduce Risa...Oooooh Kinky~ :twisted:


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“Ohhh, acting like a girlfriend now?”
I love Sayu :twisted:


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Moan echoed inside the room, the curtains swayed lightly to the tender blow of the wind, the stars danced above and the moon was proud as if rejoicing with them.
:mon blood:


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She removed the phone from her ear and looked at the screen ‘Nakazawa Senpai’ it showed.
Damn you, Nakazawa! :on voodoo:


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Please poke me if it’s too much. My only defense and guideline’s that they’re not doing the main course  :nervous  If anyone finds the post inappropriate to be posted here, please drop a bomb  :)
My only complaint is that it's not enough XD

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 15~1/16)
« Reply #115 on: January 16, 2010, 06:46:35 PM »
Ohhhhhhhhhh! Little kRisZ!


Happy Birthday!

May you have a great camel year~ XD

*pouts*

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For more details please visit YTTC :P
- I tried to kill myself there~ :(

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Someone's ass is sooo gonna get skewered and bbq :on chew:
- *points to Little kRisZ* It's her~ it's her! (wait....you are also a her right?  :?)

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“Found the treasure already?”
- Risa: Mooooooooooooooooooooo! <- LOL! pure random

LOL~ Risa is so dorky too here~ XD

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“It’s not mine”
- Must have been very embarrassing after saying the "don't pick up" LOL~

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Please poke me if it’s too much
- I think it's more likely you will get poke by a spear or maybe walking stick for making the call interrupt them... :P

 :mon bat:

EDIT: OMG.. Trey-trey~ are are ok?? LOL

« Last Edit: January 16, 2010, 07:08:01 PM by amEthystx »

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 15~1/16)
« Reply #116 on: January 16, 2010, 09:58:18 PM »
Gomen! This isn't a real comment (will edit later)

But I wanna say Happy B'day kRisZ!!  :)

*:on speedy: to real life*

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There's a mini chapter with Yuko in there, it was written with you in mind
:w00t: Arigatou! Was that chapter 8?

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Risa was left there frozen with a mouthful donut staring at the vanishing Ai.
:O bad timing.

RenAi? There's something about it. Why do I got the feeling Reina's not dead, just hasn't showed up yet? :mon huh:

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And so she let Risa do and decide the things and she’ll just watch for her tonight, just like Risa will do to her every time she’s feeling the same way.
That's a good friend :yep:

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And when she re-appeared from the washroom, she came back with a girl clinging to her
I found it funny, it's like 'looking for a girl tonight? Washroom is the place' XD

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“Why do I feel so dirty now?”
You're falling for her. Wooo go Ai! she's taming teh playa slowly but sure  :cow:

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night patrolling until wee hours if she feels like it, just to make sure the town stays safe and peaceful
A great chief, isn't she?  :wub:

Dead body appears! This is getting more interesting :D

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“I saw a credit card in her wallet. Takahashi Ai”
:shocked

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:O Are you running for your dear life?  :O *follows C and makes a thorny barricade behind. There, you’re safe now*
More like running before real life catches me lol but thanks for the barricade :)

Until next time!
« Last Edit: January 18, 2010, 09:36:23 AM by pretend_2besome1 »


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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 15~1/16)
« Reply #117 on: January 16, 2010, 10:55:14 PM »
 :on_hot: Whew, little bit warm in here. Me likey.

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“Shit”
Lol, no kidding.

Waiting for the next chapter.

Happy birfday!! :otomerika: :yossi: :shakeit: :cow:

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 15~1/16)
« Reply #118 on: January 16, 2010, 10:56:13 PM »
HAPPY B-DAY!!!!!!!!

And THANKS for this great greeeeat FIC =)


God!! She knows she's HOT!

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 15~1/16)
« Reply #119 on: January 17, 2010, 12:38:54 AM »
happy b-day~! X3
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