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Imagination ["The Girl" 1/22]
« on: February 03, 2010, 11:47:08 PM »
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I really want to apologize for all the people who have started to read my story "Sisters". I was following the manga online, but it was removed from the stream probably due to the nature of its content and I was just having a difficult time adapting it to the two girls. I'm really sorry, but feel free to use your imagination to fill in the blanks?

I'm really terrible at keeping stories going, I haven't steadily written fanfiction in years, just sporadic writings when I feel like it. If it's okay, I wanted to post up stories I've started, and also ask for some opinion on how to continue. This summer I started writing an Ai-centric story that I'm trying to make realistic but it's difficult. I have no idea on my update speed or if it will be, but I hope it can be an interesting read. I just ask that if I don't continue ever or for a long time that you use your imagination to fill in blanks.


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Hello! I've been reading the fanfics here for a little while now and it really inspired me to write one too! XD

Some of the information might not be entirely accurate, but I had to change a little bit of stuff to make the story work more. I adapted the storyline from an (obscure?) manga, which I hope nobody has read or it will ruin the plot!

Thanks for your time!

Warning: There will be (implied?) sexual... happenings. Nothing too graphic, but it should be obvious. Read at your own discretion!

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Chapter 1

Takahashi Ai, 22, single. For a while now, I've been employed at the Hello! Project advertising company, and doing fairly well at my job. There are a lot of parties that go on with the employees, though to be honest, it's becoming tiresome.

"Ai-chan!" an employee whose name escaped me sidled herself to my side. "How about going out somewhere, just the two of us?"

I sighed inwardly to her suggestive flirting, but showed a calm and aloof smile. "Sorry, I have some business to attend to after." Puffing her cheeks in an attempt to look cute, she nodded and removed herself lightly. I'm not unpopular and quite good looking (if I do say so myself), but I was immune to any advances by my co-workers, female or not. I stood up to leave, but didn't make it very far into the hallway when a voice called out to me.

"Hey, Takahashi!" I was getting irritated. The alcohol I had consumed was starting to initiate a slight buzzing and this tool wasn't helping any. "Is Michishige Sayumi really your sister?"

My younger sister, Sayumi, who I am not related to by blood.

"The higher-ups were wondering if you could get her to do a commercial for us. Can you do it?"

My younger sister, Sayumi, who played a key role in my current job at HelloPro.

"She's a very busy girl," I began cryptically, "but I'll see what I can do." The man smiled and gave a thumbs up before returning to the karaoke room, not noticing the frown I returned to his back.

Fate threw Sayu and I together twelve years ago when my father married her mother. At the time, I was ten years old and Sayu was six. My mother had passed on when I was younger, so it had just been my father and I for the longest time, and that was what I was used to. It was strange to have more strangers in my life, especially one so close to my age. I remember being nervous and uncomfortable around the silent girl.

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"Stop following me around!" a ten year old Ai shouted back, eyeing the other girl. Sayumi paused, but continued her slow pace towards her new step sister. "Go home!" Ai swung her leg over her bicycle and began to peddle away, when suddenly the bunny child began to run after her. However, Sayumi wasn't a very well coordinated child and quickly lost her footing, slamming face first onto the ground. It took a moment for her to pull herself up, both knees scraped bright red.

Halting quickly, Ai jumped off her bike and raced back, her kind nature kicking in. "Are you okay?" Sayumi gave a slow nod and merely looked at Ai blankly, orbs almost questioning.

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That was the first time we seemed to acknowledge each other, and although it was strange for me to have a sister, I feel like we were able to bond a lot over time- at least until that summer.

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"Sayu! Hurry up!" Takahashi Ai, age 18, stopped her ascent and looked back down the hill. A cute teenager was panting her way up the hill, clearly not used to exercise. Upon reaching Ai, the older girl took her hand and led her up the hill at a more comfortable pace.

It was summer once again, and as a regular routine, the four person family was once again on vacation at the hotel resort owned by their father's friend. Both girls had grown up quite beautifully, though they were still young, especially Sayumi who was only fourteen. Due to Ai's short stature and Sayumi still growing, the two were often mistaken for friends more often than siblings, though that suited them just fine. Ai in particular spent more time with her sister than her other friends, enjoying their time together more.

The two girls reached their destination: a lonely building surrounded by rusted fencing that had been abandoned some decades ago. Ai and Sayumi had discovered this place together on their first vacation and had loyally returned each summer. Although one of them would be finishing high school soon, it didn't bother her to think that their secret place was childish at all.

"Eww, what bug was that?" whined Ai, swatting absentmindedly. Sayumi remained silent, true to her nature of when the two had first met. "Hmm?" Ai pulled the younger girl to a large, rusty locker situated against a wall. "You think there could be treasure?" she mused mischievously.

Nudging Sayumi inside to look, Ai quickly slipped in as well and suddenly pulled the door shut. Their source of light diminished with such a loud noise that it caused the bunny girl to jump with a start, only to press tightly against Ai.

The younger could just imagine the grin that stretched on Ai's features. "Don't do that! It's really scary!" Sayumi complained, only to have Ai snicker. "You shouldn't mess around in such a tiny space!" She tried to reach around the older girl, but do to their similar sizes, Ai was able to parry her efforts. Sayumi gave up quickly, cursing her lack of any physical ability.

"Whoo, you really made me work up a sweat," joked Ai, wiping her forehead with her arm. Sayumi muttered what sounded like "open the goddamn door" under her breath, much to the other's amusement. "Fine~" Click. "...?" Ai pushed on the door some more, trying to budge the rusted metal.

"It's stuck."

"..."

"..."

"..."

"..."

"..."

"EHHHHHHHHHH?!?!"

"What to do now..." murmured Ai to herself as Sayumi panicked behind her.

"You've got to be kidding me! You're hopeless!!" Despite her complaints, the younger girl suddenly quieted down surprisingly quickly and was still against Ai.

"It's really hot in here... And I have to go..." Ai turned to her silent companion, worry rising. "Are you okay, Sayu?" No reply. "Do you have to go too?"

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I didn't receive any verbal reply back then, but I could distinctly remember her eyes closed, trembling with a flushed face, almost as though she were in pain. We did manage to get out after an hour, but that was the turning point in our relationship. Sayu began to act distant then, and immediately bolted back to the hotel, myself unable to catch up due to the stiffness in my legs.

I knew that Sayu didn't have many friends, (if Mr. Pill-Bug was any indication) but she was able to laugh and talk to me so easily. Even though we weren't related by blood, I truly felt that we were able to connect without speaking. After that incident, a rift came between us, and we barely spoke to each other.

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"EHH?!" Stunned, Ai nearly dropped her chopsticks in surprise at the news her father brought her. "Sayu joined the tennis club?" Although the bunny girl was quite a fan of the sport, she wasn't an active girl in any sense, so it was surprising that she had joined such a physically demanding club. Especially since the Okajo schools had very high standards.

"Yes," her father confirmed, "she's been working so hard too. Sayumi was up at five today for her morning practice."

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After that, Sayu was clearly avoiding me. Her schedule was crazy, between all of the intense sports practices and school, we barely saw each other despite living in the same house. Sayu wasn't the most naturally gifted tennis player, but she quickly became good with practice.

Around when she was sixteen, Sayu had already surpassed me in height. Although her face still held (adorable) baby fat, she was blossoming into a fine woman. It was becoming a regular event that men and women alike would loiter outside our house in hopes to see the bunny girl they crushed on. When people learned of my relation to Sayu, it wasn't uncommon for them to become starry-eyed and attempt to meet her through me, much to my chagrin. It was really annoying, and happened almost every other day as well.

Still, Sayumi wasn't the best player, but her looks and charisma drew attention from all the tournaments. She drew fan clubs all throughout the district and many gathered to watch her games. Matches that were broadcast on television had high ratings, with the press making a huge deal out of such a cute and talented tennis player. I was really proud of Sayu, but it was really depressing to have your younger sibling surpass you when you're the older one- supposed to be setting the example. That being said, I could only indulge in my one simple pleasure.

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"Ah," a sigh escaped the short girl's lips as she prepared herself for her favourite past time. "VCR, check. Rewound, check." A bubbling feeling of excitement welled up inside her as she pushed the tape into the player. The video began playing, and it was times like these that Ai was glad that she had hid the tapes from her family. It wasn't that they didn't approve, but it was almost an annoyance towards her passionate obsession with Takarazuka, especially one Mizu Natsuki.

Headphones in, Ai tensed up as her favourite scene was reaching its climax. Unintentionally letting out a squeal in her excitement, she froze when she heard the door squeak. The twenty year old girl slowly turned around to see her sibling standing just outside in the hallway. Sayumi's gaze was icy as her eyes wandered over Ai's form, hunched in front of the little screen. Her lips moved, and though the words had not been spoken loud, the message had been quite clear.

"What a loser."

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The moment following her departure, I was stunned. I was so shocked at Sayu's cold treatment to me that I slept in for two whole days. All of the pride I held at being the older sibling shattered and I felt my heart close itself up. Days passed, turning into months until the present, my heart still cold and passive to the world.

This year I earned an employee job, and Sayu would also be going to America to study. Despite the time that had passed, we haven't spoken since that summer.

I don't know what happened to Sayu when we were in that locker, but... my pride was beaten down with her cold eyes. Now that Sayu isn't in Japan, I've felt myself recover little by little.

"Sorry." A murmur behind me as someone grazed my back, but I ignored it.

By the end of this year, I aim for a speedy and complete recovery. I fully intend to fall in love and... lose my... virginity... and even become a bride!!!

"Welcome home, Ai-nee!" Greeting me at the door was my twelve year old sister, Mai. I mumbled a reply as I set my shoes aside and slipped my feet into my slippers. "Guess what! Sayu-nee is back!" I tensed up, only just noticing the pair of familiar sneakers at the entrance. "It was really random and- oh! And Sayu-nee said she's coming with us on our trip next week! You guys better bring me to your secret hiding spot!" I ignored her words, and peeked past her into the hallway. Light was coming out of the room via an opened door, an opened door that had been closed for quite some time until now. I swallowed and grabbed my shoes, hastily putting them on and bolting before anything else could be said.

"USOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!" My wounds run deeper than I thought and I felt my cold heart being pinched. Even just seeing the shoes that Sayu wore was enough to throw daggers at the organ in my chest. I booked it out of our house and just kept going, eyes glistening.

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First chapter done! I hope it's okay... :nervous

I know the age differences are off (actually only 3 years, as opposed to the fictional four), but I still need Sayumi to be in school and Ai to not. In the manga, the age difference is 5 years, but those girls can change a lot in a short amount of time!

Sayumi doesn't really do tennis in real life (I'm pretty sure?), but I needed a sport and it said she liked tennis on various profiles. It was either that, or some sort of extreme Tetris or fourth grade math. :lol:
« Last Edit: January 22, 2011, 11:00:59 PM by Mkame »

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Re: Sisters [Ch.1]
« Reply #1 on: February 04, 2010, 12:39:46 AM »
I have no idea which manga you picked up the storyline from, but this is a very intriguing start! I'm really interested in knowing just what in the world caused Sayumi to act all cold and distant toward Aichan. Was there something about their ol' secret spot that made her like that? Did their being locked-in trigger some painful memories? Or is the locker... magical? Could it possibly be related to something paranormal?

Blah! I'm asking too much questions, I should just wait for the second chapter. :whistle:

Oh, and the Aichan-Sayumi sister pairing is pretty interesting. You don't see that often. :D But you can't help but feel sorry for Aichan, though. Being given the cold-shoulder and unpleasant treatment by your own sister must be dreadful. If I was in her place, I probably would've confronted Sayumi and asked her just what her problem was (and try not to lose my temper if she kept up her cold act, lol.)
« Last Edit: February 04, 2010, 12:45:26 AM by Retro Bubble »

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Re: Sisters [Ch.1]
« Reply #2 on: February 04, 2010, 02:18:49 AM »
I was trying to lurk like I always do, but reading this fic obviously made me come out to at least tell you I'm very interested in this fic. I find the idea of Ai and Sayu as sisters even though they aren't biologically sisters really interesting and new. I like that a lot about this story. Don't worry about the age thing it's fun to twist things around when it comes to writing fan fiction. Things get really boring if it's too close to facts all the time.

Sayu and Ai as sisters is really cute too. I like the flash back when Ai and Sayu were younger I thought that was really cute.

I still can't get why Sayu made a big deal about being locked in some small space with Ai. Maybe it has to do with her past when she was living with her biological father? Hmm, I'm going to guess that her father was a bit too controlling and abusive? But that's just something that came to mind if Sayu is going to react like that. It's either that or Sayu is scared to stay in small places? Like claustrophobic.

I feel bad for Ai though. She is or was living in her little sister's shadow and I kind of know how that feels. ^^; I really hope that Sayu and Ai can talk again now that Sayu is back home with her parents, but at the same time I want Sayu to leave since a hell of a lot of drama will come from her sudden appearance. I really look forward to the next chapter though. ^_^

By the way I have no idea about what manga you're talking about, but then again I'm not a big anime watcher or manga reader. So nothing will be spoiled for me.

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Re: Sisters [Ch.1]
« Reply #3 on: February 04, 2010, 04:12:03 AM »
Thank you guys SO much for reading and giving your feedback :ptam-cry:

I think I might have messed up a bit on the tone though ^^; I also need to put up a warning...

@ Retro Bubble - I'm glad you are interested! I think when the truth comes out it might be a bit disappointing, but I don't know. Ai is too big of a sweetie to directly confront Sayumi... or pushover, your pick xD

@ writerjunkie - I'm so happy to hear about your interest! I... think the real point may be a bit disappointing for you too xD;; I'll understand if you won't want to read anymore LOL but I hope you'll stick around at least a little longer!

I didn't really think much of it before, but... this will be a TakaShige romance and I don't know if that is crossing lines since they're (not blood) siblings?

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Re: Sisters [Ch.1] (Ai/Sayu)
« Reply #4 on: February 04, 2010, 05:04:26 AM »
^I don't think it's crossing any lines at all, given the fact that they aren't even blood-related siblings in this story. That, and since they're not even related in real life as well, I'm guessing that a lot of people are more used to reading and writing about them as merely being friends, or just two separate individuals with their own families; therefore, they'll most likely see them more as such rather than siblings, which I don't think will really create much of a controversy at all concerning their relation in this story. ;)

And somehow, I was expecting TakaShige. Don't ask me why. XD I lurve both of them together, though. :heart: Since you mentioned the pairing, I'm having different thoughts about why Sayumi totally went all cold and stuff toward Aichan... maybe she's pissed 'cause her older sister didn't make a move while they were stuck in the locker, lol.
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Re: Sisters [Ch.1] (Ai/Sayu)
« Reply #5 on: February 04, 2010, 09:13:10 AM »
Oh I've always wanted to read a TakaShige fic though not on romantic level :heart:

We all know how Sayu looks up to Ai irl & how Ai adore Sayu like a little sister. It'll be interesting to see how this pairing will progress in this story ;)

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Re: Sisters [Ch.1] (Ai/Sayu)
« Reply #6 on: February 04, 2010, 10:55:09 AM »
wooooooooot!  :onioncheer: :onioncheer: :onioncheer: its TakaShige on the block! wahahaha  :onionwhip: :onionwhip: :onionwhip:
Im a TakaGaki fan and a GakiKame but i want other pairings right now!

This is totally different  :hehehe: :hehehe: :hehehe: since Ai-chan was not the famous one here! its the evil bunny!  :ding: :ding: :ding: NICE!

For once again, Ai-chan is not in control!  :wahaha: :wahaha: :wahaha:
This fic  totally got my attention! yay!  :luvluv2: :luvluv2: :luvluv2:

dont take too long to update author-san!  :kneelbow:




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Re: Sisters [Ch.1] (Ai/Sayu)
« Reply #7 on: February 04, 2010, 12:35:52 PM »
 :mon innocent: It's Ai-chan..........and the bunny!

hmmmmm.... *Deep thoughts* I think this might be the first time i ever read about this pairing......!

It's interesting~ plus with the whole sisters but not blood related relationship... <- this can be such a mess...if not handled properly XD

Sooooo.... Sayu became the successful Tennis girl... <- Anna Kournikova pops out in my mind.. XD She should be then dating Ai-chan who is a famous pop star  :w00t: <- out of the point comment :(

After they grew up Ai-chan became the receiving end of the cold shoulder... how :(

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"What a loser."
- I'm sure that is not Sayu meant... was it?? :(:(

 :mon POd: Ai-chan.....~

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Re: Sisters [Ch.1] (Ai/Sayu)
« Reply #8 on: February 04, 2010, 02:29:41 PM »
I have an idea bout why Sayu's attitude toward Ai changed so drastically but I'll comment on e pairing first. I always felt Ai looked like sisters with Eri from their outer appearance while she and Sayu would be related due to characters. Don't ask me for e reason cuz I don't have one ^^;

I'm surprised only Sayu is popular since Ai herself is quite e looker too. I guess only tall girls get attention huh? Is the Mai in here Hagiwara? So Ai and Sayu have a little Sis? That makes 3 daughters in e house and all of them cute :)

My mind works in strangest ways. I imagined Sayu looking up to Ai cuz she thought this older sibling would be able to protect her. But that incident made her realized Ai wasn't as awesome as she made her out to be. Disappointed and disillusioned, Sayu began to withdraw away from Ai and in e process found tennis as something she could spend her time on.

Am I close? Even just a tiny bit? I have no idea what manga this fic is based on so I'm really looking forward to updates. Post them fast ok?:P

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Re: Sisters [Ch.1] (Ai/Sayu)
« Reply #9 on: February 04, 2010, 02:57:10 PM »
She should be then dating Ai-chan who is a famous pop star 

^ If I'm not mistaken, Ai's not a famous pop star in this story... she's just an employee at the H!P company ^__^

Anyways... this is a really interesting start, Mkame. Like everybody else before me, it's definitely got me wondering what happened that Summer when Sayu had a sudden change of attitude. I'm REALLY curious. =__=

I haven't read much besides IshiYoshi, and Sayu isn't exactly my favourite musume either (though she is beginning to grow on me somewhat...), but I really like what's been portrayed of AiSayu so far. Especially when they were younger.... cute!  :wub:

Sayu calling Ai a 'loser' was a bit O.o
Seriously, what happened that Summer? The 'loser' remark was a little too harsh. For it to be justified, Ai must have done something really terrible. But then I can't imagine that happening either. Maybe Sayu realised she was falling for her sister? And now wants to distance herself? LOL. A big fat guess there, but I really have nothing else in mind (not a manga reader either  :twothumbs).

On another note, I really like your writing style.  :thumbsup
Not too much detail, nor too little. Just the way I like it.

Please continue... I'll be waiting patiently for the next update! Can't wait to find out what happens now that Sayu is back and a confrontation is set!

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Re: Sisters [Ch.1] (Ai/Sayu)
« Reply #10 on: February 04, 2010, 03:04:54 PM »
^ XD Yup~ i know she is just a normal employee in the story...

It was relating to Anna Kournikova (A famous Tennis Player) who had dated Enrique Iglesias (Pop star)  XD Since the bunny was a famous tennis player.. i was thinking Ai-chan will be the famous pop star  :lol: Hence.. the out of content comment..

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Re: Sisters [Ch.1] (Ai/Sayu)
« Reply #11 on: February 04, 2010, 03:55:13 PM »
The Ai/Sayu concept alone is enough to made me go here, unusual which is why it's interesting.

Child Sayu following Ai is so cute  and Ai going back is :wub:

Somehow the cold hearted Sayu was  :heart:  XD


TakaSemaru  :heart:

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Re: Sisters [Ch.1] (Ai/Sayu)
« Reply #12 on: February 04, 2010, 04:58:51 PM »
I'm a bit late, but TakaShige?!  :w00t: I like that! I can't wait to read more of this fic then! I hope the update is soon. I've been trying for the longest on how I can write a TakaShige fic. I've spoken about it with my friends on msn, but they're all too much of a TakaGaki fan so they kind of freak out. lol That isn't every encouraging to me. I'm still trying to see how I can write that pairing though and I've only came up with something extremely said. Maybe reading your fic will give me some ideas on how I can write my TakaShige fic.

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Re: Sisters [Ch.1] (Ai/Sayu)
« Reply #13 on: February 04, 2010, 09:18:38 PM »
this is a really interesting story..i like the first chapter..Ai/Sayu story is very intriguing and makes me wanna read more. Awesome first chapter..can't wait to read the next chapter XD!!!!!

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Re: Sisters [Ch.1] (Ai/Sayu)
« Reply #14 on: February 05, 2010, 12:18:38 AM »
i think i have an idea on what the manga is. i think ive read it or skimmed through it. lol.
im more of a TakaGaki fan but i do love the bunny with ai-chan.
TakaShige yeah!!!  :hiakhiakhiak:

this story is very interesting even though i think i know where the plot is going still,cant wait read the next chapter. ^^

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Re: Sisters [Ch.1] (Ai/Sayu)
« Reply #15 on: February 05, 2010, 01:15:30 AM »
Ouch!!!!

I'm loving it  XD

Takashige?

Even though I was a big fan of Kameshige and Tanashige, but this story is pretty interesting (I have to admit it  :thumbsup)..

So, there was a romance between this two?  :w00t:

I was so curious about next chapter..

Hope you'll update soon author-san.. hehehe..  :P

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Re: Sisters [Ch.1] (Ai/Sayu)
« Reply #16 on: February 05, 2010, 08:03:25 AM »
Th-thank you to everyone who has shown interest! :cry:

@ Retro Bubble - thanks for letting me know your opinion! I didn't think it would be a big deal, but just checking! =D

@ badsaints - I hope this doesn't disappoint ^^; Funny thing is that I originally intended for this to be TakaGaki, but with the characters physically and personality-wise, Sayumi fit better xD

@ ayase909 - I really love those pairings too! I'm glad i could introduce some more variety =) I'll do my best to update (semi)frequently!

@ amEthystx - I hope my writing doesn't ruin this pairing >_< Even though that's not in this story, that idea does sound super fun! :D

@ lil_hamz - Yup, it IS Mai Hagiwara; I was hoping someone would notice XD. I don't want to reveal the plot too much, but thank you for thinking so deeply into the plot!

@ Beecubed - I'm glad that I was able to grab your attention (in a good way? XD). I might have portrayed it a little more harsher than it should be, so I hope it turn out okay... ^^; I really love writing, so I'm glad you enjoy my writing 8D

@ pretend_2besome1 - Poison-tongued Sayumi =  :heart: XD

@ writerjunkie - I hope you do write a TakaShige fic! I would definitely read!! Haha, I don't know how much I can "inspire" you, but I'm glad that you are interested!

@ il0v3bb_7 - Thank you! The next chapter will be up hopefully soon!

@ Aly.~. - Really?! :O Actually, due to the nature of the original manga, I was thinking some people would have read it, but that was quick! I'm really curious- you can PM me what you think the manga is, if you want!

@ cute88 - Thanks for reading! Update will be soon [hopefully]!

Thank you SO MUCH to everyone who has read and commented- I was really surprised at the number! I'll try to update ASAP, though the next chapter/installment will be significantly shorter because it was initially part of the first chapter.

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Re: Sisters [Ch 1.5 on 2/10] (Ai/Sayu)
« Reply #17 on: February 11, 2010, 07:30:48 AM »
Chapter 1.5

"Hah, she got me good!" The now empty can I drank from clattered to the ground noisily and I let out a (small, yet) unladylike burp. I leaned back on the park bench, not caring that I looked like some bum, contemplating on whether to get some more booze or smokes.

Despite my inner turmoil, I had come to a reasonable conclusion: I would just have to go away- to a world away from Sayu. If she looked at me with those eyes again... I might shrivel up forever. If that were the case... I would never find love-!

"Hey." Looking up, a girl (or woman? Hard to tell...) walked up to me. "Do you want to go for a drink?"

"Sure," I replied nicely, eyeing the cans of beer in the plastic bag she held.

"The moon's nice tonight," the stranger said, "Great for moon viewing." Sitting down next to me, she handed me a can, which turned into two, which multiplied into four.

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"And my little sister is really cute but she sucks," I slurred, on a rambling rampage. "You need to pay respect to those above you, you know! Popular people are just freaks, man! She went through middle school, surrounded by guys and guys like some loose girl." I paused and sniffled, taking in my words. "But ya know, when she plays tennis... sometimes... I admire her too..."

Taking a small sip from her own can, the stranger (now known as Miki) shifted her sunglasses (but it was night!) on her face. "I think you're much more appealing." However, her murmur fell on deaf ears as her audience was drunkenly fumbling for a tissue.

"Did you say something?" I hadn't been successful in my search.

"...No. Come on, drink up!" Another beer was pushed into my hands and I gulped it on autopilot. I was too absorbed in my beverage, that I hadn't noticed how she would always be staring at me with a small smile gracing her lips.

"Ugh..." The half full can (or half empty) slipped from my hold and sloshed onto the ground. I suddenly wasn't feeling so hot, having never knocked back so much alcohol. "Toilet..." I made to stand and head towards the public restrooms, but I quickly fell over, only to be caught by Miki. I could only groan as she mainly dragged me to the facilities I desired.

We entered the female side, and I lunged for the sink with a dry heave. Shit, did I feel sick. "Damn, you never drink so much," Miki commented, "your sister coming back must have really shook you up." Some part of my brain that was functioning beneath the nausea had the sense to wonder how this stranger knew how much I regularly drink, but I was too sick to care. "I've been watching you for a while now... it's probably because you drank so much that you feel so weak."

Through my aching, I said the most appropriate thing I could think of in response. "Huh...?"

Either ignoring me or taking that as an "OK", Miki's hands wandered dangerously around my body. "Will you come home with me?" she purred in my ear. I felt a sqeeze on my rear and tensed up in surprise. "Ai-san, I wouldn't mind spending forever with you..."

WHACK.

Suddenly, Miki crumpled to the floor face first. My mouth hung open as I stared at her unconscious form. A new voice broke through the silence.

"Geez *pant*, staggering around drunk just like I thought." Sayu...? "I take my eyes off you for one minute and you go and do this." Sayu's talking to me... is this a dream? ...Sayu's gotten taller again...

Still panting, the younger continued, "I can't even kick back and study abroad." Her eyes look more gentle.

Sayumi's hand went to push back my messy fringe with great care- while I hiccuped. "Ya little devil bunny," I slurred tiredly, eyes feeling like lead. This Sayu spoke to me like the good old days and brushed her thumb against my lip with a surprising gentleness. That was the last thing I remembered before I blacked out.

I woke up with a terrible hangover the next morning, as was to be expected. I checked the front doors, and as I thought, Sayu's shoes were there. With a feeling of falling into despair, I was frantically trying to figure out how I would get through the family trip next week.

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Short update, sorry about that! It doesn't really answer any questions, so I'm sorry about that! ^^; Let me know if anything is confusing or needs clarifying!

And I love Miki, but I just wanted/needed a name to go with that person, and her character seemed to fit the situation. 8D;

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Re: Sisters [Ch 1.5 on 2/10] (Ai/Sayu)
« Reply #18 on: February 11, 2010, 01:29:37 PM »
woot.......... :onioncheer: :onioncheer: :onioncheer:

even if its a short update, an update is an update!  :luvluv2: :luvluv2: :luvluv2:

haha....soooooooo its Miki-sama huh  :hehehe: i hope she will play a role that will make Sayu more jealous! yakimochi! :ding:

haha...the groping demon strikes again!  :kekeke: :kekeke: :kekeke:

I'm a fan of peculiar pairings so keep it up, author-san!  :kneelbow:

PS: i wrote this to another fic....that i just recently watched  the platinum concert again....and the Sayu-Ai-chan kissed was epic!  :on GJ: :on GJ: :on GJ:




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Re: Sisters [Ch 1.5 on 2/10] (Ai/Sayu)
« Reply #19 on: February 11, 2010, 03:13:14 PM »
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- Poison-tongued Sayumi =  :heart: XD
:yep:

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I would just have to go away- to a world away from Sayu.
Nooo, you should do the opposite! Go chase your HOT step sister! XD XD

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shifted her sunglasses (but it was night!)
:lol:

Does Miki knows both Sayu and Ai?

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"Ai-san, I wouldn't mind spending forever with you..."
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Ai fan? Though with her sunglasses I can't help but think stalker :nervous

Sayu to the rescue! :rockon:


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