This was one
AWESOME chapter for several reasons (as you can probably guess by now, junkie-chan...)
I hope you don't lose the motivation to continue writing AiEri after AiEri chapter.
And after talking with you and realising your possible intent for this couple, I hope you make the right choices!
(Which means please don't break puppy Eri's heart! )CHAPTER 8:I figured it would be better for me to leave the house so that we can both reflect about what happened last night.
What? The more Ai is going to think about that
DAMN HOT KISS she shared with Eri, I can only imagine the more she's going to want it.
It's undeniable that they have
something going on between them. Deep down, Ai desires Eri just as much as the puppy does her. I bet.
It's only that Ai understands the gravity of their circumstances and that it's probably for the best that she doesn't get too involved with Eri on any level. The puppy is just really too childish and oblivious to things to grasp that. She only sees Ai and wants Ai.
Grabbing the covers, I carefully pull the blanket over Eri's legs and up to her chest. She lets out a comforting sigh then stops shaking. I smile at how cute she looks laying comfortably on my bed. Eri is so happy here and I make her happier. Without thinking, I bend down and place a delicate kiss to her forehead.
If only Ai would allow herself to express those feelings freely, always.
I am also of the opinion that Eri was awake and knew that Ai had kissed her.
“Ai-chan!!” Eri calls. I slowly turn around, feeling tense once again. “If Ai-chan wanted to kiss Eri, Ai-chan should have kissed Eri here.” She points to her lips.
Oh Eri...
If I were Ai, I'd be all
The girl must have a lot of willpower not to have done that on pure impulse. How can you resist puppy Eri saying something like that?!
Eri looks at me with a mysterious twinkle in her eyes and before I know it I'm pulled on the bed and pinned on my back. Eri sits on top of me to keep me in place. I look up at her shocked how quick she was able to get me down. She takes my hands and puts them to her thighs and sighs. Eri smiles and goes down to press her nose against my neck and takes a deep breath.
YATTA! for puppy antics! This is so what a pet dog would do affectionately
And only because we're not just talking any puppy here, the thought is oh so hot... I think Eri has absolutely NO idea how much she affects Ai-chan with all this playfulness!
“Ai-chan...” Eri whispers, running a finger along my collar bone. “Somehow...you still smell different.”
It was at this point that I literally had to take a break from reading (and calm down before I exploded in front of a room of studying uni students)
I instantly knew what Eri was referring to... after all, wouldn't YOU be turned on to have Eri pressed on top of you like that while running her nose along your skin?
So yeah. She was picking up Ai's heat. And that simple thought made me turn to mush.
Eri starts to sniff me again, but she moves down my body, eager to find what she's picking up. If things haven't gotten weird they are now! This whole thing is just becoming awkward!! Eri settles between my legs and my whole face turns hot when I see her push my legs apart. Does she even know what she's doing and how embarrassing this is becoming?! I put a hand to my face and look away.
I close my eyes tight and bite my bottom lip to hold back my moans. I don't want Eri to know that I'm enjoying this and I don't want her to see how turned on I am from having her straddle me.
Ai-chan, stop being so uptight about the fact that she's some kind of weird alien puppy and go with the flow...
She ignore me though and begins to pull down my zipper and quickly pop open the button next. I feel my pants get pulled down to my knees and whimper. She can see my underwear! That isn't what bothers me though it's because Eri can probably see how soaked my underwear is and that bothers me.
Yeah, I died many times reading this first part. It's so hawwwwwwwt...
I'm also constantly wondering that while doing all this, does Eri have ANY idea what she's doing? How it's affecting Ai? I'm sure Eri's getting hot herself, but I'm a little unclear about her feelings/knowledge/experience about this whole thing. Or is she really a dog and sexuality is an innate thing that she doesn't even have to think about? xD
Eri's hands clamp around my thighs and I hear the bed creak as she moves closer to me. I slowly open my eyes and let out a small gasp when I see Eri's face above my underwear. Her nose is twitching. She probably smells how turned on I am! Is her nose that good?! Eri looks at me, her mouth slightly parted as she pants.
“The smell...is so much stronger...here.” Eri moans, going back to take in my smell.
Yeah, OF COURSE Eri's nose is that good. She's a puppy, or haven't you noticed, Ai-chan?
But holy crap, this was a really good moment to imagine
“Eri stop this...” I let out a sharp yell when I feel Eri's tongue lick against my underwear.
To be honest, I didn't expect it to go that far... I would've thought (with Ai's continual internal struggle even with the mere thought of liking Eri) that Ai would've pushed her away a bit earlier than this... the fact that she waited for a lick to do something...
I just can't do whatever this is and I can't give her what she wants. When my pants are button up I race towards the door. I don't look back when I leave the room and get outside, speed walking to my job. I'm sure this is another bad response, but I just had to leave. I will call Eri later so she won't be as sad.
.....I'm safer going to work at this moment.
DAMN. This first part really had me going
I wasn't expecting it to be that
, and I'm certainly hoping for more delicious AiEri moments like this. So please junkie-chan, don't just leave it at that. I want moar.
Oh, and Ai-chan's just going to run off to work like that? Isn't she still pretty flustered? .....
“You can trust me. I'm your senpai. I want to help you.” I proclaim.
...
Without thinking, I pull her into a hug. I feel Reina go stiff against me and that makes me hug her a little tighter as if trying to bring her out of the daze she went in. After waiting a few minutes, her body is more relaxed and she hugs me back. I let her go and look at her with a warm smile in place.
I'm sorry, but that was a little fast...
I was still under the impression that Ai didn't like Reina all too much, and that Reina was still acting rather cool and aloof about everything. I never saw them develop further than that (except maybe in the last chapter when Ai began to have Reina-is-cute thoughts...).
So this was a little abrupt for me, to be honest...
Reina grins. What does that mean?! I don't like that grin! What is she up to? Reina's hand strokes the side of my face and her other arm wraps around my waist.
This is wrong! I want to leave but...it's like my feet are stuck to the ground. Reina moves forward and I turn my head to the side she won't kiss me. I nearly melt though when I feel her kiss my neck.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
Please, no kissing! What the heck is going on?! Is this all part of some master plan of Reina's? To get closer to Ai, and subsequently Eri?
I just don't see her falling for Ai that quickly.
Why is it that every new girl I come across they end up wanting to get into my pants?! This is so not fair! I close my eyes finally accepting Reina's demands. What else can I do? Reina laughs at my surrender and proceeds to kiss me like planned. Eri...I'm sorry.
Yeah, it really isn't fair to be as hot as Ai-chan, hey? xD
What else can you do? Well for a start, you can fend Reina off like you did Eri earlier in the morning when she was on top of you. Hmph. I mean, it should be a lot easier avoiding a kiss than avoiding a superhuman-strong puppy clamped to you.
And the fact that Ai-chan mentally apologised to Eri like that, it says a lot.
*whole squabble between TakaGaki*
OK, so for the first time in the story, I'm kind of put off by both Gaki-san and Ai-chan. Gaki was certainly overreacting, though we all can probably make guesses as to why (she likes Ai-chan and if Ai-chan can give friendly kisses to Reina, why not her too?).
Ai-chan too, biting back pretty harshly. I guess she's just kind of stressed about everything. Everything's happening pretty quickly, and she's just trying to catch up with it all and make sense of it. But still, I didn't like how either of them reacted in this scene...
Linlin perks up at the mention of a dog. “A puppy?! Can I see come over to see it?!” she begs.
“You can come over another time I promise. The puppy made a big mess at home a few days ago and I still haven't cleaned it all.” I reply, hoping to not crush her hopes again.
“Okay, I understand, Takahashi-san.” Linlin agrees. “I look forward to coming over soon! You promise to show me the puppy, right?”
Uh-oh.
Why did Ai-chan make a promise that easily? What is she thinking? Now she's really going to have to show Lin Lin puppy Eri!...
“Eri don't crash into me!!” I cry. I close my eyes waiting for her to tackle me, but instead I feel her warm arms around me.
“AI-CHAN~!!” Eri jeered, rubbing her cheek against mine. “Eri is so glad Ai-chan is home!”
Just before I think I'm about to pass out from her bone crushing hug, Eri lets go and I desperately start to collect air to my lungs again. I never realized how strong she is. “Did Ai-chan see?!” I rub my throat and look at her.
“You mean the lack of mess?” I question, she nods with a goofy smile in place.
“Eri cleaned everything for Ai-chan!! Eri was sorry about making a mess before so Eri cleaned it for Ai-chan. Does Ai-chan like it?” Eri told me, with a proud smile in place.
Her innocent self like this is too gorgeous. Contrast that with lustful Eri and.. and.. and..
What a character, hey?
Eri takes a step back, stands up straight, and right before my eyes I watch her ears disappearing and finally her bushy curled tail. I nearly have a heart attack when I see the last of the K-9 parts finish Eri's human form. I thought she couldn't do that! I stand stiff, speechless.
Honto? Wow... you know, I was kinda hoping that Eri could go out in public under the pretense of cosplaying...
Her tail and ears are really too cute to imagine! And imagine the hordes of men who would turn heads to keep their eyes on her. ^___^
“D-does Ai-chan hate me...because of what happened this morning?” Eri rubs her tears away. “Eri's sorry. B-but...I couldn't hide it from Ai-chan anymore. Eri does love Ai-chan.” I feel something inside me twist and turn. Is it guilt? Why would I be feeling guilty? “I know now though...that Ai-chan can't love Eri, but...it's okay if Ai-chan doesn't love me. Eri will continue to love Ai-chan no matter what.”
Why say something like that Eri...
“You can't force me to love you Eri!” I scold. “But...how can I love you? That night when you were angry you were so strong. You hurt me Eri! I...I'm scared of you. How can I love someone that I don't even know who they are or what they're capable of?”
Sure Ai may be a bit cautious because of how Eri had reacted the other day, but still... seems like for the most part Eri gives Ai-chan a lot of happiness and she thinks Eri as very cute and helpless.. I didn't know that Ai would be saying this kind of thing as a way of rejecting Eri's feelings >.<
“Ai-chan wants to know everything?” Eri questions. I nod. “Then Eri will tell Ai-chan everything.”
FINALLY!Some questions will be answered!
Though I really do hope this isn't going to create a rift between the two girls!
Thanks for the chapter, junkie-chan... please continue to write (and enjoy the writing while you're at it!
), and I'm going to support this fic no matter what! (yes, even if you break Eri's heart, and my own... lol).
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Can't wait to find out what happens next when Eri spills everything.