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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 47 - (7/22)]
« Reply #280 on: July 22, 2010, 06:00:44 PM »
tanakame is so~ cute XDD i love reina's little emberassed outbursts XD

and poor ai~! WHAY DID U HAVE TO COME SAYU?!?!?! damn if only she came like a min or 2 later we'd have fun takagaki time D:

keep it up~!
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 47 - (7/22)]
« Reply #281 on: July 22, 2010, 07:20:57 PM »
I'm alive again.  :nervous
Sorry, I didn't comment 'cause I was VERY busy. Gyaaa!! I lost a lot of chapters. :panic:
Poor Ai-chan, She's really affected. Don't give up Aichan! Fight for the little bean.  :scolding:
Kyaaa! Reina is so cute, she's doing a big effort. If I had not  read the 47 chapters, I would say Reina is bipolar when Eri is around her.  :wub:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 47 - (7/22)]
« Reply #282 on: July 23, 2010, 12:42:04 AM »
:on gay: *Come out from the lurking hiding place*
sorry if I take the time to go out now (after 47 chapters) and to comment this fic :mon hanky:

but Honto ni I really like this story :mon inluv: :mon inluv:

Reina : aww....I really felt how lonely she was when her love story end up with Aika.....and how she tried to erase this failure feeling doing what she did....
but Yeah...for TanaKame.... yeah..... Reina wanna take this riding to confess her love at the lttle turtle  :mon thumb:

Eri : She's really funny and so cute at how is completely blind about her feeling toward Reina....(Aika was right Eri wanna take good care of the little cat) :whistle:

Sayu : OMG....I know she can be evil sometime....but in this fic....she's really...EVILNESS....

Risa : >_<.... Open your eyes....Or I wanna take Ai-chan away from you :p kidding kidding.... but yeah...you have to look clearly around you and be care avout Ai-chan :mon misch:

Ai : Yeah...yeah...don't let Sayu tell what you have to do again......Do what you want if you want to keep Risa with you and don't been apart or leave her again.....

Autor-chan : Keep the great work you do in writting and updating this fic.....
but you have to tell us or let us some hint about Ai, Risa, Sayu& Eri past...what could be that link which they link the together?!?!?! :mon cry:

Can't wait to read moar and MOAR about this fic :mon innocent:

*go back to the lurking place waiting for the next update* :mon bye:  :on crazygran:
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 47 - (7/22)]
« Reply #283 on: July 23, 2010, 07:28:00 AM »
@kurosawa87: definitely, I cannot leave TakaGaki hangin XD

@rndmnwierd: yeah, sorry about that chapter... that's why this chapter is LONG :twothumbs

@kawaii beam: TanaKame is getting cute~ and mature :twisted:  and Sayu's always evil XD

@Michi.Pinku: yuppers, you gotta stick around when i'm the author :D welcome back!!! :welcome

@YumePouk: YAY!! I NEW COMMENTER!!! I pulled out another lurker! *does a dance* :otomerika: :yossi: you better come out of your hole now, cuz here's another update! :cow: :twothumbs


I just LOVE when I pull out lurkers, I feel all fresh XD
So, since i've been giving you guys only short chapters, here's a SUPAH long one...  :panic: :twothumbs
Rndmn, I hope this satisfies you :P

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Chapter 48

   “Reina-chan… I still can’t believe you brought me here of all places,” Eri said, stifling a giggle.

   “I said don’t laugh!” Reina yelled, blushing from embarrassment.  “And don’t say my name too loudly; it’s never good to stand out in public like this for me.”

   The two girls were sitting in a booth, across from each other, in a fast food place.  Reina was examining her burger in a very analytical way.  Eri was chewing on a french fry, watching the oblivious yankii play with her food.

   “But Reina-chan,” Eri giggled, “you said you were taking me to somewhere you’ve always wanted to go to.  I thought it would be some place amazing but… this is a fast food place!”  Eri finally exploded and started to laugh hysterically. 

   Reina was acting very cute today in Eri’s eyes.  She had said that there was something she really wanted to try: it was a double cheeseburger.  She had tried to order by herself: Eri had to step in before Reina blew up on the cashier.  She had tried to open a ketchup pack: it exploded in her hands and Eri had to get wet towels for her.  So basically, Reina was in a very stressed and embarrassed mood while Eri was very entertained and happy.

   “Don’t blame me,” Reina grumbled, staring at her burger.  “I’ve been in show biz since I was 13 years old; I didn’t get to enjoy most of the social activities people do in Japan.”  The yankii examined the burger a little more and took a bite out of it, then nodded her head slowly.  “This is pretty good.  A little fattening, but tasty.”

   “I’m glad you like it,” Eri chuckled.  It was so odd how she could laugh like this in front of the Tanaka Reina, the one who had hurt her…  Even weirder, laughing like this felt so natural.  Eri already felt so close to Reina, and she wanted to get even closer.

   “So,” Reina continued, chewing on her food, “your job today is to enlighten me.”

   “Enlighten you?”

   “Take me anywhere you want.  Take me some place where people hang out; show me what the people of Japan do on their free time.”

   “Why are you suddenly interested in this?” Eri questioned, raising an eyebrow.  “I would’ve thought that you didn’t care about anything except… yourself.”

   “I’m an entertainer, I have to be able to relate to civilians,” Reina said in a low voice.  And you. I want get to know you.  “Just take me anywhere you usually hang around.”

   “Then I know just the place!” Eri exclaimed, getting up from her seat.  “Oh my gosh, I’ll show you my favorite hang-out spot!  Come on, Reina-chan!”

   “Keep your voice down!” Reina whispered loudly as Eri grabbed her wrist.  “And I want to finish this burger— it tastes good— do you mind?”

   “Take it with you, come on!”

   With that, Eri dragged the singer out of the fast food place, giving Reina no chance at all to protest.  They ran all the way to the shopping district.  At some point in their run, Reina threw out the rest of her burger, which was a hard decision because it tasted absolutely heavenly to her.  Right before entering a store that Eri pinpointed, Reina quickly checked her teeth in the shop window.  Satisfied with her appearance, the yankii composed her face again into that of an annoyed expression and followed Eri into the shop.

   Eri was already bouncing around store.  She took a pink blouse and held it up against the idol. 

   “What do you think, Reina-chan?” the turtle beamed.  “Isn’t it cute?  You should try it on.”

   “It’s not my style at all,” Reina shot back, pushing the blouse away.  Then, Eri started pouting a little.  The yankii covered the bottom half of her face, trying to hide the blush in her cheeks, and sighed.  “If you find something that I like, I’ll try it on.”

   “Okay!” Eri answered, re-energized by Reina’s promise. 

   She immediately whirl-winded around the room like a hurricane and collected various outfits.  The yankii chose a couple of them, walked into the dressing room stall, and closed the curtains.

   “Did you put something on yet?” Eri asked, restless.

   “I just got in here,” Reina replied, rolling her eyes.  She grabbed whatever was first in the pile of clothes.  It was a golden one-piece dress with a zipper on the back.  The bottom was ruffled and there was a big bow right by the chest area. 

   The yankii almost wanted to toss it into the corner and not even touch it.  But then she thought of the expectant turtle outside… with those shiny eyes… and that pout… Ugh.  Okay, that did it. 

   So the idol stripped down quickly and put the dress on.  But she couldn’t reach the zipper in the back.  She let out a groan of frustration.

   “Reina-chan, is something wrong?” Eri voice came from the other side of the curtain.

   “It’s nothing… just the zipper,” Reina grumbled back.

   “Oh, I can help.”

   Before Reina could say otherwise, Eri helped herself into the small space in the dressing stall.  Reina immediately looked down at the floor as she felt her cheeks heating up. 

   But there was absolutely no change in Eri’s facial expression.  She was a fashion designer; she had seen a lot of naked bodies, much less a bare back.  She had already seen Ai in her undergarments as well, while she was helping her with her costume.  Of course, she hadn’t seen Reina in that state, for the yankii always insisted she would put on her own clothes.

   “Wow, you’re back is really smooth, Reina-chan,” Eri commented, completely oblivious to Reina’s nervousness.  “I wish my back was smooth like that.”

   “Can she hear herself talking right now?” Reina thought.  “It sounds almost like sex-talk!  Or is that just me going psychotic?

   The turtle swiftly pulled the dress zipper up and looked at the yankii’s full body through the mirror.

   “You look so cute in it!” Eri exclaimed happily.  “You definitely have to get this, Reina-chan.”

   “It’s not my style,” Reina contradicted, biting her lips.  “It’s too… frilly… and girly.”

   “But it really suits you, though,” Eri sighed.  “Well, I guess I can’t tell you what to buy and what not to buy.  Why don’t you try the other ones too?  I’ll be right outside.”

   Then, Eri pulled down Reina’s dress zipper swiftly and walked out, not hearing the idol’s sudden gasp from her action.  Reina held herself for a moment, and then straightened up.  She took off the dress and held it up to herself again.  Eri’s smile, her hopes, her laughter popped into her mind. 

   “Have I already gotten this helpless?” Reina thought.  “I… really do like her, don’t I?

   Without another thought, the yankii put on her original clothes and walked out of the stall.  Eri looked at her with wide-eyes. 

   “I’ll buy this dress,” Reina said in a low voice, holding up the golden frilly dress.  “So can we leave?”

   “Yes!” Eri exclaimed, practically bouncing in place. 

   The rest of the day basically went the same way.  Eri dragged Reina all around the shopping district, forcing her into the dressing rooms.  Reina always rolled her eyes or groaned at Eri’s overreaction to every cute outfit she found.  But in truth, she had smiled a couple times today, and the turtle had caught her doing so.  In the end, Reina ended buying only the first dress they found.  But Eri still seemed satisfied by her hunt of the day so Reina also breathed a sigh of relief.

   It was already around ten o’clock when the silver sports car pulled in front of Eri and Risa’s home.  Reina walked with Eri all the way to the door.  The turtle turned and smiled.

   “I had a lot of fun today, Reina-chan,” she said.  “Thanks.  We should hang out like this more often.”

   “Uh-huh…” Reina mumbled.

   “Well, I’ll see you next time.”

   “W-wait a minute!”

   Before the turtle could go inside the house, Reina grabbed her wrist and turned her around to face her.  Eri’s eyes widened.

   “What is it?”

   Reina gritted her teeth, then bit down on her lips.  “You can do this, Reina.  Focus.  It doesn’t matter if she has a girlfriend; the important thing is letting her know how you feel.

   “Reina-chan?”

   “Listen… Eri…” Reina started.  “I’ve known you for a couple months now.  Um, we didn’t get off to a very nice start… I guess that’s my fault.  But, um, you helped me get over my past… and you taught me to move on and look to the future.  I’m really, uh, thankful for that.  And, um… if you didn’t teach me that… I don’t know where I’d be at this moment.  I guess what I’m trying to say is, I feel like you’re a necessity to my life now.  So, uh…”

   “You can just say what you need to say, Reina-chan,” Eri whispered.

   “I like you!” Reina blurted out, looking straight into the older girl’s eyes.  She had gained a little more backbone now.  “No, I love you.  I know you probably don’t feel the same way towards me, but I still needed to say it.  I don’t expect you to return the same feelings… but I just wanted you to know that there’s someone named Tanaka Reina in this world who is in love with you.”

   The yankii held her determined expression as she looked at the turtle’s shocked face.  I’ve done it. Just please, don’t let me lose her…

   Suddenly, Eri jumped toward Reina and wrapped her arms around her neck, taking her into a hug.  Reina unconsciously wrapped her arms around Eri’s waist as well, although her expression was still that of confusion.

   “I love you too,” Eri whispered in her ears.

   Reina pushed the older girl away to look at her face with wide eyes. 

   “What?!” Reina yelled.  “But… but I hurt you!”

   “It’s in the past.”

   “I’m always cruel to you!”

   “You never mean it.”

   “But… you have a girlfriend!”

   “No, I don’t.”

   Reina’s chin dropped open with a pop.  She was so confused; she had to organize all these facts flying towards her.

   “But I hurt you like that and you cried so much and I’m always so cold and you had a girlfriend that day and she was my fan and you were worried but if you don’t have a girlfriend and I like you and you like me back and we have mutual feelings and does that mean—”

   Reina never finished her sentence because of Eri’s sudden attack on her mouth.  The older girl’s lips moved slowly, molding itself onto Reina’s glossy lips.  It was a soft, warm, mild, yet sweet kiss.  Eri soon backed away and inch and smiled at Reina’s surprised face.

   “You talk too much,” she whispered.  “You love me and I love you.  So we’re officially together now… right?”

   “… Damn it!”

   Muttering a curse under her breath, Reina immediately placed her mouth back on to Eri’s lips, unable to control her want.  This kiss was rougher; Reina’s lips continuously moved, trying to find some way into Eri’s mouth.  Soon, the turtle’s lips parted, and the yankii seized the chance to stick her tongue in.  Their tongues twirled around each others while Reina tried to stay in control.  Eri was the one to finally look away to the side, gasping for air.

   “Stop… stop…” she huffed.  “I can’t… I can’t breathe…”

   “I’m so sorry!” Reina apologized desperately.  “I… I took it too far, I’m sorry!”  Big mistake, Reina!

   “No, it’s fine,” Eri gasped.  “I’m just… not use to it yet.  But that doesn’t mean I didn’t… like it.”

   Eri gave a sweet smile to the idol.  Reina stared back at the turtle for a while, then gave a smile of relief.  She embraced her tightly.

   “Thank you…” Reina whispered.  “Thank you so much!  I promise, I’ll treat you right.  I won’t mess up this time.  Not with you.  Not ever again.”

   “Correction: I won’t let you mess up,” Eri giggled.  “Because I think I like you just as much as you like me.”

   Just like that, the two girls smiled and held on to each other for a little longer.  Reina kept her arms tightly locked around the waist of her new girlfriend.

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This took SO LONG to edit :shocked
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 48 - (7/23)]
« Reply #284 on: July 23, 2010, 07:41:05 AM »
TanaKame  :heart:

nice chapter

we almost there yet????
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 48 - (7/23)]
« Reply #285 on: July 23, 2010, 08:34:43 AM »
Tanakame is so damn cute >o< !!!  :inlove:
Reina was so nervous xD. She melted my heart when she said the discourse entire to Eri.
She really talks too much.
Gyaaaaah! I'm so happy now I read the chapter.   * :on gay: *
Waiting more. :D
Good job SarangAi and I really enjoyed it   :twothumbs

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 48 - (7/23)]
« Reply #286 on: July 23, 2010, 08:41:12 AM »
Kyaaaaaaaaaaaah~!!!!!!  :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff:
OMG!! OMG!! OMG!!! OMG!!! OMG!!!  :mon blood:
That was such a cute chapter!!!!  :love: :love: :love:
I'm so happy for TanaKame!! :cow: :cow:
I had to read it over and over again like 5 times cuz it was just such a happy moment!!  :cry:
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 48 - (7/23)]
« Reply #287 on: July 23, 2010, 09:42:56 AM »
Yay! Tanakame~ <3<3<3!! so cute how u write em~!!

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 48 - (7/23)]
« Reply #288 on: July 23, 2010, 09:59:44 AM »
!

Oh nooooo~ Haha.. Reina & Eri had a rough start but they are catching up pretty fast... As for Ai and Risa......I see them both dancing around a pink bunny with a banana-printing collar..so let's just see who might step on it first to kill it... Probably a kitty and turtle would be somewhere around too~ LOL! <- such a weird reference.

I can see a massive crack in Ai's mask. Wun be long till it got completely ripped off by both bunny bean. XD

But anyway~

<- lol this is really funny

Finally the kitty confessed~ XD

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“You talk too much,” she whispered.  “You love me and I love you.  So we’re officially together now… right?”

   “… Damn it!”
- Yes Reina, u're damned~ LOL~ officially Turtle whipped  XD

I so wish to see Reina reaction if Risa had now open the door and see them hugging..~ 

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 48 - (7/23)]
« Reply #289 on: July 23, 2010, 10:09:17 AM »
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW  :heart:
I got hyper for the rest of the day xD

Really loved this chapter  :wub: To make my happiness complete, all I need is some AiGaki :D *hint hint*  :bow:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 48 - (7/23)]
« Reply #290 on: July 23, 2010, 01:04:44 PM »
so sweet  :wub:

Finally Reina and Eri got together, the rest of my day will be better because of thie  :lol:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 48 - (7/23)]
« Reply #291 on: July 23, 2010, 01:43:29 PM »
Confession! :w00t: Looks like TsundeReina melted by the turtle power :lol:

@kawaii beam: TanaKame is getting cute~ and mature :twisted:
Does this mean we can expect some mature scenes in the coming chapters? :twisted:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 48 - (7/23)]
« Reply #292 on: July 23, 2010, 02:04:36 PM »
Tanakame confessions! Yay! I'm really, tired... I had all these thoughts floating about my head about what I wanted to say, but they all just fluttered away. So, I loved the chapter and I can't wait for some Tanakame shnoo shnoo.

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 48 - (7/23)]
« Reply #293 on: July 23, 2010, 03:45:35 PM »
so cute~! X3 eventhough i had a feeling that with all of the talking reina was doing that eri would just say it for her XD oh well XD good job~! :thumbsup
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 48 - (7/23)]
« Reply #294 on: July 24, 2010, 06:05:33 AM »
@kurosawa87: a little longer~ XD

@Michi.Pinku: yay yay yay! It was good enough for you to come back! :D :twothumbs

@Swtme03: awwww~ it was a cute moment XD :wub:

@stefy: oooh~ a new commenter! XD thank you~

@amEthystx: LOL pink bunny with a banana collar~ and turtle whipped is RIGHT :twothumbs

@Ada: AiGaki WILL come... I'm gonna focus a bit more on them now XD

@oddball: yay! glad I made a difference(?) in the world XD

@badsaints: oh, there will definitely be more maturity... little by little... :twisted:

@rndmnwierd: LOL glad you liked it :D

@kawaii beam: oh, Reina will get a little more talkative from now on... :twothumbs


Do you guys see all my comment replies up there??? you guys REALLY liked the confession, huh? :D
I'm thinking of an even cuter confession for TakaGaki (cuz I like them more) so stick with me~  XD

And I'm going home in two days~ :P

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Chapter 49

   “And then I said she was talking too much and I asked if we were officially a couple now and she cursed under her breath and she kissed me again and I opened my mouth to breath and she stuck her—”

   “Okay!  Too much info, Kameha!”

   Risa clamped both of her hands on her ears to prevent herself from hearing the rest of Eri’s blissful story.  The two friends were sitting together on Risa’s bed, reading fashion magazines and listening to music: a typical chill time for them. 

   Eri was practically shooting bullets out of her mouth as she described how Reina confessed her love to her.  Risa tried not to listen but it was hard to do that.  After all, Eri’s high-pitched voice was like a different frequency that hit your ears the wrong way sometimes.

   “But I’m just happy~” Eri said, rocking back and forth while hugging a pillow.  “I mean, I feel kind of weird about this… but at the same time, it feels so right.  You know?”

   “No, I don’t know,” Risa answered.  Eri rolled her eyes as the bean grinned.  “I’m just joking.  And I’m happy for you.  I guess I’m trying to trust you with your life a little more now.”

   “Thank you, ‘mother’,” Eri said sarcastically, smiling.

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   “Yeah… so she kissed me… and she said I talked too much… which is ironic because usually I don’t talk at all… anyway, I couldn’t resist… so I kissed her again… and then—”

   “Reina, I thought this was supposed to be a happy story,” Ai interrupted, laughing.  “Can’t you be a little more energetic?”

   “I am energetic,” Reina said, monotonously.

   The two idols were sitting on the couch in their living room.  The TV was on again but as usual, neither of them were paying attention.  Reina was curled up in a ball, hugging a cushion, as she tried to hide much of her red face as possible.  Ai just stared at her member with a smirk; it was so entertaining to see how this yankii just wanted to talk about her new girlfriend… but was trying to stick with her cool character at the same time.

   “So you’re happy now, right?” Ai questioned.

   “… I feel a lot better than before,” Reina answered slowly.  But then, she thought, “Yes, I’m happy!  I feel like shouting it to the world that Eri is my girlfriend and I am hers!  I feel like I want to explode with joy!

   “That’s an improvement,” Ai said, nodding.  “I’m happy for you.”

   “Yeah…” Reina sighed.  Then she turned a little more serious.  “But what’s up with you?  You seem… preoccupied.”

   “Still sharp, even after such bliss,” Ai commented, sighing. 

   “What’s up?” the yankii questioned.

   “It’s just… I’m kind of lost…”

**  **  ** 

   “Risa-chan, did something happen?”

   “No, nothing,” Risa said, trying to conceal her lie.  “I just hung out with Sayu and Junjun for a while after the meeting today.  I’m fine.”

   “Don’t lie to me, I’m not that oblivious.”  Eri narrowed her eyes.  “Come on, tell me.”

   “The truth is…”  Risa pushed her knees up and hugged her legs.  She bit down on her lips as she thought of the minor event that happened after Eri went away with Reina.  “I think… Ai hates me.”

   “Why would you think that?” Eri asked, surprised.

   “Well,” Risa continued, “she was perfectly fine today… then suddenly, she got all frustrated and angry.  Eri, I’m scared.  She doesn’t seem like her usual self these days.”

   “I’m sure she’s just stressed,” Eri comforted.  “Don’t worry; I’m sure she still considers you a good friend.  You guys are still close.”

   “Eri,” Risa said, her voice cracking, “she called me ‘Gaki-san’ today.  She used to be comfortable with calling me Risa… but today, she went back to the formalities.”

**  **  ** 

   “I called her ‘Gaki-san’ today,” Ai sighed.  “It’s just that… I feel so distant from her somehow, you know?  I want to call her by her first name but… I don’t even know.  I feel uncomfortable.”

   “It’s like she’s too good to be true,” Reina commented.

   “Well, yeah,” Ai agreed.  “As if it’d be too selfish of me to… like her.”

   “I say just go for it,” Reina advised.  “Be selfish.  You have to work to get what you want.  Do whatever you think is right.”

   “Reina…” Ai started slowly, “if Eri told you that she hated you and never wanted to see you again, would you still stay by her?”

   “… that’s a pretty cruel question,” Reina said in a low voice.  “I think, I would still stay.  Even though I’m being selfish, I don’t think I’d be able to go a day without seeing her.  If she really does hate me that much, I’d stay in the sidelines and wait for a time when I can jump back in.”

**  **  ** 

   “I don’t know what to do anymore!” Risa cried.  Tears started to form at the corner of her eyes.  “I… I just want her to be happy!  I want to see her smile again… I need her!  I don’t want her to go away!”

   “Risa, Risa,” Eri whispered, taking her friend into a hug, “you have to calm down.”

   “How can I be calm when Ai is so angry like that?” Risa yelled, tears streaming down her cheeks.  “I… I want to be with her!  I can’t… I can’t let her leave me!”

   “Risa-chan,” Eri said in a low voice, “could it be that… you’re in love with Ai?”

   The room fell silent.  Risa stopped sobbing and broke out of Eri’s arms.  She touched her cheeks and stared down at her hands, wet with tears. 

   “... Am I?” Risa gasped.  “Is this… is this what it feels like?”

**  **  ** 

   “I’m selfish because I love her,” Ai admitted.  “I’m a terrible person.”

   “What made you get so angry anyway?” Reina asked.

   “... I guess I just felt stressed,” Ai mumbled.  “I mean, I’ve been wondering this entire time if it was okay for me to be with her.  I can stay away, even if it means hurting myself.  So the question is, will she be hurt if I stay with her?”

   “If you love her enough to even think about these questions,” Reina said, “that means you have the right to stay with her.  Now, I know there’s something you’re not telling me.  And you don’t have to.  But if you’re starting to question the rights in love… you have to go for it.  No regrets, no hesitation.”

   “I wonder…”  Sayumi’s smile immediately popped into Ai’s head.  She clenched her fists.  “If Sayumin truly loves Risa as much as I love her, then she won’t tell the truth about my identity to Risa.  Because if she cares about her, she won’t want to hurt her… no matter how cruel she may be.

**  **  ** 

   “Risa-chan, do you feel happy when she’s next to you?”

   “Yes…”

   “When she touches you?”

   “… Yes…”

   “When she smiles at you?”

   “… Yes.”

   “Then congratulations, you’re officially in love,” Eri announced, grinning.

   “… Yeah… I guess I am…” Risa could imagine holding hands with Ai, hugging her, even kissing her… The bean covered her hot cheeks with both of her hands.

   “So you’re next step,” Eri continued, “is to get intimate.”

   “Intimate?”

   “Yeah.  Flirt a little, here and there.  Flaunt your stuff.”

   “My… stuff?”  Risa raised an eyebrow.

   “Well… just be yourself, Risa-chan, and you’ll be fine,” Eri rephrased, giggling.

**  **  ** 

   “I’m going for it,” Ai decided.  “I won’t hesitate anymore.  If I let Risa get further away, I’ll never get her back.”

   “Now you’re thinking,” the yankii said, rolling her eyes.

**  **  ** 

   “I love Ai,” Risa admitted.  “And I’ll do everything I can so that she can love me back.”

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This has marked the start of some TakaGaki moments~ starting immediately in the next chapter :twothumbs
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 49 - (7/24)]
« Reply #295 on: July 24, 2010, 06:35:39 AM »
AW the cross convo was a pretty smart idea! i cant wait to see risa flaunt her stuf XD and what if sayu's despreate enough to tell risa the truth....crasy ppl do crasy things....

but its good to see ai aim for the prize!!! :thumbsup
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 49 - (7/24)]
« Reply #296 on: July 24, 2010, 08:23:29 AM »
I like the fact that both need to get a boot to realize that they are meant for each other
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 49 - (7/24)]
« Reply #297 on: July 24, 2010, 11:18:31 AM »
Tanakame helping Takagaki  :nervous, such a cute thing.

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 49 - (7/24)]
« Reply #298 on: July 24, 2010, 12:04:06 PM »
HELLYESFINALLYOMGYAY xD  :wub:
Can't wait for the AiGaki confession 8D I wonder how will Sayu react seeing Ai and Risa growing more and more close? D:
Lmfao at Eri  :rofl: "Flaunt your stuff" xD Does that mean Turtle will be more bold around her Reina?  :twisted:
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 49 - (7/24)]
« Reply #299 on: July 24, 2010, 02:08:17 PM »
REALIZATIONS BABY! Whoo! Now, onto Takagaki and pray Sayu doesn't catch on or Jun's sly enough to distract her.

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