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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 54 - (7/28)]
« Reply #340 on: July 29, 2010, 10:04:54 AM »
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Don't give her ideas!!!  :bleed eyes:

I kinda felt bad for Sayu in this chapter. Trying to confess her love, but not able to get her point across...must be hard  :cry:
But I guess that's what she gets for treating Jun Jun that way while knowing how she feels about her  :yep:

Keep it up!!  :thumbsup
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 54 - (7/28)]
« Reply #341 on: July 29, 2010, 02:32:42 PM »
^ Well, I could have suggested that Sayu kidnap Risa, tie her to a bed and do naughty things to her to get her point across, at least until Ai and Eri come to the rescue, but I didn't suggest something evil like that, now did I? :roll: :lol:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 54 - (7/28)]
« Reply #342 on: July 29, 2010, 03:09:15 PM »
The time for Sayu to learn a very harsh lesson is creeping up soon...



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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 54 - (7/28)]
« Reply #343 on: July 29, 2010, 05:01:10 PM »
rndy ur evil XD

and ai sayu mostly looks so sweet her...well on the outside XD that mind is juts pure mean!  :smhid

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 54 - (7/28)]
« Reply #344 on: July 29, 2010, 05:32:01 PM »
I do feel a bit sorry for Sayu in this chapter, she really just wants to get her fellings across to Risa but Risa dosn't seem to get it!

The way she treats Jun is wrong however, she knows that Jun loves her and dosn't care about using her feelings to get her own way, its pure evil!  :cry:

So Risa and Eri want Jun and Sayu to get togehter? I must admit I appreciate the Irony, I just hope someone like Ai can rescue Jun before its to late for her!

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 54 - (7/28)]
« Reply #345 on: July 30, 2010, 03:14:21 AM »
@kurosawa87: hmm... maybe... i'm thinking about that :twisted:

@Ada: I wouldn't say Gaki's oblivious.  She's just never thought of "cute, sweet, little Sayu" as more than a sister-figure, you know? :smhid

@rnmdnwierd: you're kinda right. Sayu's logic is just all wrong: she doesn't understand how Risa couldn't have fallen for her as much as she's fallen for the bean for the past, i dunno, 10 years. it is sad... :(

@Swtme03: Oh, she's already given me some ideas...  :twisted:  and i usually update around this time, so you can check then XD

@rnmdnwierd (again): oh you just inspire me so much.. :twisted: but the fact is, i'm such a big TakaGaki fan that I don't think I could bare to write about either of them being with anyone else, so SayuGaki won't be TOO overboard :D

@aussie: yeah, a lesson on REALITY 8)

@kawaii beam: rndy's imagination is WILD :twisted: and Sayu's double-personality is what makes her scarier than an average antagonist :shocked

@oddball: Yeah, Sayu's logic is just all wrong. In her mind, there's nobody else for her besides Risa, and vice versa (and that's where she's wrong). and I'd say Jun is the most tragic character in this story... ironic, considering i love her XD


My goodness, check out all these comments.  XD
You guys are REALLy getting into this... (i'm talking to you, rndy) :twisted:

Here's a SUPER long chapter for all you TanaKame AND TakaGaki fans~  :wub:
Personally, I love how this chapter turned out. I didn't plan on adding the TakaGaki section but I decided to cuz I feel like this fic is getting deprived of that :D

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Chapter 55

   “Okay, let’s run it one more time,” Ai suggested.

   “Fine,” Reina sighed.  “But we’re going to stop before I get bored of this routine, okay?”

   The two High-Queen members high-fived each other as the leader walked past her partner to turn on the music again.  Risa was sitting on the floor with her back against the wall opposite of the mirrors that the idols were facing.  She had been watching them practice their choreography in the dance studio since noon. 

   Before Ai could kick the boom box to life, Eri stumbled into the dance studio, squealing.

   “It’s done!  It’s done!” the turtle cried, jumping up and down.

   “The costume?” Risa guessed.

   “Yes!” Eri squeaked in her high-pitched voice, hyperventilating.  “I think… I think it’s great!”

   The young fashion designer had been working on High-Queen’s outfits for “Cinderella Complex” the entire morning.  Apparently, she was finished with the final sketches.

   “Okay, calm down,” Reina laughed.  “Let’s see it then.”

   Eri skipped over to the middle of the room towards her girlfriend, as Ai and Risa both walked over to them.  She held out her sketchbook proudly.

   On the page were two human figures drawn.  The figure on the left had a black hat on along with a big, red shirt.  There was a black skirt drawn in with a black belt, a couple necklace chains, and black heels.  The figure on the right had her hair drawn into two small ponytails.  It had on a black necklace with lots of bracelets; other than that, the two figures were pretty much wearing the same outfit.

   “I like it,” Ai commented.  “The red-and-black combo is a good choice; it’s powerful.”

   “Yeah, I like it too,” Reina said, smiling a little.  “It’s nice.”

   “It is, isn’t it?” Eri blabbered on excitedly.  “At first, I thought maybe all red would be nice but then, I decided to go more for a realistic fashion then a costume-look so I made the skirts black. And then—”

   “That’s great, Eri,” Ai interrupted.  She took a couple steps out of small huddle.  “Reina, come over here for a moment.  I need to tell you something.”

   “What?” Reina asked, irritated.  She enjoyed listening to her girlfriend rant, even though half of it was incomprehensible.

   “I figured out a way for you not get bored about our routine,” Ai said, smirking. 

   The yankii raised an eyebrow, then walked over to her leader.  Ai whispered something in her ear as Reina’s lips curved into a big smile.

   “You up for it?” the leader questioned.

   The yankii nodded.  “I’ll do it.  It sounds like fun.  I’ll enjoy seeing her face…”

   The two idols smirked and high-fived each other again.  Risa raised an eyebrow while Eri cocked her head to the side in confusion.

   “Baby,” Reina called, gesturing to her girlfriend, “come here for a moment.”

   “Why?” Eri asked as she walked over to the middle of the dance floor.

   “Just stand right here,” Reina ordered.  She nodded to her leader, and Ai kicked the boom box alive.

   The song started from the last chorus.  Reina started to do her routine right next to Eri.  Risa skittered over to Ai and whispered to her.

   “What are you two planning?” Risa asked.  “What is she trying to do to Kameha?”

   “Just watch,” Ai chuckled.  “It should be pretty interesting.”

   The song turned into the final verses after the last chorus was over.  As soon as the “na na na”s started, Reina broke out of the usual dance routine and started to approach Eri with a seductive expression.  Eri watched her girlfriend with wide eyes as the catty idol did waves around the turtle, trying to be as sexy as possible. 

   “Reina,” Eri stammered.  “I, uh… um… I don’t think… um…”

   But Reina ignored Eri’s words and continued to dance around her.  She pressed her body against the turtle’s back and did a wave, causing Eri to stiffen up.  The older girl was clutching her sketchbook to her chest, blushing bright red.  Reina swung around to face Eri, and caressed her cheeks lightly before whipping around in a quick turn again.  Her face felt hot, as though she had a severe case of fever. 

   “Nee, Reina-chan… um… I… just, uh…” Eri stuttered, trying to cover her face with her hair.

   “Aw, she’s so cute!” Ai commented, laughing hysterically.  “Look at her blushing!”

   “I’m more surprised by the fact that Reina let you put her up to this,” Risa said, her eyes wide.

   “Well, she just wanted to see her girlfriend’s cute reaction,” Ai explained, giggling.

   The yankii pressed her own back to Eri’s chest, reached her arms back to wrap them around the turtle’s neck, and slowly slid down into a crouch.  Eri let out a sharp gasp as she blushed even more, if that was possible.  Reina then slithered back up again while she let her hand travel up Eri’s smooth leg to her hips.  Eri let out a small squeal, shocked from her girlfriend’s ticklish touch. 

   “Reina-chan, I—”

   Before Eri could finish what she was about to say, the yankii kissed the older girl on the lips at the song’s last beat, and took a couple steps back. 
The turtle’s entire face was red with embarrassment as she dropped her sketchbook and covered both of her cheeks with her hands.  Ai’s laughter got even louder while Reina didn’t hold back on the giggling either.  Risa exhaled sharply at how easily Reina controlled Eri’s emotions, and started laughing as well.

   “It’s not funny!” Eri yelled, picking up her sketchbook and hugging it to her chest.  “Reina-chan, that… that was…”

   “Exciting?  Sexy?  Seductive?” the yankii suggested.  The turtle puffed up her cheeks and slapped her girlfriend on her arm. 

   “Don’t make fun of me,” Eri grumbled.

   “I’m just teasing, baby,” Reina laughed, taking her girlfriend into hug.  “Besides, Ai put me up to it.”

   “You were the one who was getting bored of the original choreography,” the leader argued.  “It was merely a suggestion but you decided to take on the challenge.”

   “Yeah, yeah, it’s all my fault,” Reina rolled her eyes. 

   “No, Ai was just getting too smart,” Risa said, narrowing her eyes.

   “It’s okay, I’m already the bad guy here,” Reina chuckled.

   “Yeah, Reina’s the yankii,” Ai giggled.  “Besides, I think Eri enjoyed it.”

   “Did not!” Eri yelled.  She almost looked like she was down with a bad cold.

   “Okay, we’re going to leave before my girl explodes from all your teasing,” the yankii said, pointing at her leader.  “Do you mind locking up?”

   “Not at all,” Ai said.  “You guys can go ahead.”

   The two lovebirds walked out of the dance studio; Reina tried to wrap her arm around the turtle’s shoulder, chuckling, while Eri kept on taking the yankii’s hand and dropping it down, grumbling to herself.

   “Are you going to stick around with me, Risa?” Ai asked.

   “Yeah, I have time,” the bean replied.  “Your joke was pretty over-the-top for Kameha, but it was pretty funny, I’ll give you that.”

   “I try,” Ai said, flipping her hair in an exaggerated way.  “But Eri liked it, I know she did.”

   “She seemed… happy in her own way…” Risa said slowly.

   “You wanna try?”

   “Sure— wait, what?”

   Without another word, Ai kicked the boom box alive again.  The song started from the same place as the previous time: the last chorus. 

   “Woah, woah, woah,” Risa said, slowly backing away from the smiling idol.  “Wait a minute, wait a minute, Ai!”  If you dance like that towards me, what the hell am I supposed to do?  It’s like candy right in front of you, but you can’t take it!

   But Ai just smirked and placed her hand on Risa’s shoulder, causing the bean to freeze in place.  She ran her hand over her collar bone as she walked in a circle around the younger girl.  She took her hand and placed it on her own face before she slid down into a crouch. 

   Risa covered her cheek with her free hand: it was burning up.  Ai sprung up again and did a side wave with her back to Risa’s chest.  But she could still see the bean’s blushing face through the mirrors. 

   The “na na na”s started again, and Ai started to briskly walk around the flustered girl, letting her hand slip from one body part to another.  She played with Risa’s hair, then her fingers, then her shoulder, then her neckline.  Risa could feel her skin burn anywhere and everywhere that Ai touched.  The song started to near its end.

   “Wait a minute…” Risa thought.  “The finale of Reina’s dance was…

   On the last beat, Ai shot her head forward and stopped right in front of Risa’s face, their lips only half an inch away.  They’re eyes met: Risa could see the darkness and sincerity in the older girl’s eyes… what did it mean?

   “She won’t… will she?

   Ai stared at the younger girl for a little longer, then smiled sadly.  She craned her neck and placed her lips on Risa’s forehead, and kept it there.  The younger girl closed her eyes as she felt her forehead burn.

   After what seemed like a couple milliseconds, when in reality it was a little more than that, Ai slowly backed away.  She looked at Risa’s flustered face.  The bean looked away, biting down on her lips.

   “I won’t apologize,” Ai said in a low voice.  “I’m not sorry at all.”

   “… You don’t need to be,” Risa whispered back.

   “That’s good,” Ai grinned.  “Because I don’t feel like I did anything wrong.”

   “You didn’t,” Risa whispered again.  “It’s perfectly… fine.”

   Ai smiled again, which allowed the bean to smile back.  The leader gently placed her hand on Risa’s shoulder.

   “We better go now,” she said.  “I have to close up here.  You can go wait by the elevator, if you’d like.”

   “Okay,” Risa replied. 

   She turned around and walked out of the studio.  She pressed the button of the elevator, which started to move from the first floor.  She touched her forehead and sighed.

   “I can still feel her warmth,” Risa thought.  “I… I think I love her more than I thought I did.  But… how does Ai feel about me?

   Meanwhile, the High-Queen leader unplugged the boom box and gathered her sweater.

   “I’m sorry, Sayumin,” Ai thought.  “But I don’t think I’ll be able to keep my promise with you.  I need Risa more than I thought I did… and I don’t plan on waiting any longer.

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 55 - (7/28)]
« Reply #346 on: July 30, 2010, 03:36:05 AM »
lo ygOB  OOAG WHA....?!?

no fair u cant stop there... keep going XD
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 55 - (7/28)]
« Reply #347 on: July 30, 2010, 05:21:50 AM »
@kawaii beam: what was that, some funky gibberish language? XD and I CAN stop there.  Yes, yes I can :twisted:


yeah, i kno there's only one comment...  :nervous
but this next chapter was so short that I decided to update again  :D

So all of you guys who didn't catch the last chapter, read that first (which is two posts ago) and then read this one! :twothumbs

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Chapter 56

   “Hurry, Ai, the elevator is almost here!”

   “I’m coming!”

   The idol dashed out of the studio, locked it, and ran down the hallway.  Risa was waiting in front of the elevator.  The floor count was up to the 8th floor, and then the 9th.

   “I made it just in time, huh?” the leader huffed.

   “Yup,” Risa laughed.  “And I don’t think either of us wants to walk down all those flights of stairs.”

   At that moment, the elevator dinged and the door slid open.  The two girls were about to walk in, but they stopped themselves.  Risa’s mouth dropped open with a pop and Ai let out a long whistle.

   In the elevator were the yankii and the turtle in a hot make-out session.  Ai and Risa could only see Reina’s back because she had Eri pushed against the wall, but they could still tell what was going on.  The two girls were kissing each other passionately and moaning into each other’s mouths; the older girl’s arms were wrapped around her girlfriend’s neck while the younger girl was running her hand from Eri’s back, to her waist, to her stomach, and to her chest.

   Risa cleared her throat once.  The couple didn’t seem to notice.  The bean cleared her throat again but it still had no effect.  Finally, Ai put her fingers in her mouth and whistled loudly, causing the two girls to jump apart from each other.

   Reina turned around and scratched her head while smacking her lips awkwardly.  Eri put her arms around herself in an attempt to cover up her ruffled, half-unbuttoned clothes.  She had pink marks on her neck.

   “Guys…” Ai started, “this is hardly the place.”

   “I disagree,” Reina mumbled.

   “Actually, this is where we first kissed…” Eri whispered hesitantly.

   “Remember how I said I didn’t want to walk down the stairs, Ai?” Risa asked, her eyes still wide in shock.  “Well, I do now!”

   With that, the bean exhaled sharply again, and briskly walked away from the elevator towards the stairs.  Ai turned to follow her, paused, then faced the two lovebirds again.  She grabbed both of their arms and pulled them out of the elevator.

   “Nee, I have a favor to ask the two of you,” Ai said.

   “If it’s something about us making out—” Reina started.

   “No, it’s not,” Ai said, shaking her head while rubbing her head.  “It’s more of a question for Eri, so be quiet for a while, Reina.  My head hurts.”

   “What’s the favor, Ai?” Eri asked, running her fingers through her disorganized hair.

   “So… Risa’s birthday is coming… right?” Ai slowly said.

   “Yeah, it’s October 20th.  It’s in a couple days, actually.  But how did you know?” Eri asked.

   “Oh.  Um… I, uh… looked at the High-Queen staff files,” Ai said quickly.  “But here’s my point: I don’t want either of you guys to celebrate it.”

   “Why not?” Eri pouted.  “I was going to throw a big party…”

   “You don’t have to, though,” Ai grinned.  “Because I’m going to throw a party.”

   “What?” Eri gasped.  “And you’re not inviting us?  But… I’m Risa-chan’s best friend!”  The turtle looked at her girlfriend with a pout.  The yankii turned to her leader and glared.

   “Oh, that’s just low, Ai,” Reina growled.  “Eri wants to celebrate too.”

   “Wow, you’ve really gone crazy for her,” Ai said.  “Normally, you wouldn’t care about these things.”

   “Well, when it comes to my baby—”

   “It’s okay, Reina-chan,” Eri cut her off, sniffing.  “You better have a good reason for leaving us out on the party plan, Ai.”

   “Well…” Ai scratched her head.  “Yeah, I do.”

   “I’m listening.”

   “… I’m planning on asking her out,” Ai finally said.

   The hallway was silent.  Eri’s eyes popped wide open.  Reina raised an eyebrow.

   “Wow, that was pretty quick,” the yankii said.  “You just can’t stay away from her, can you?”

   “Yeah… well… I love her,” Ai mumbled.

   “I know that feeling,” Reina grinned.

   “Well,” Eri started, “I don’t have anything against that.  I mean, I think Risa-chan will be happy with you too… You’re a good person, Ai.”

   “Thanks,” Ai smiled. 

   “So do you have some special plan?” Eri asked.

   “Yeah… so here’s what I’m doing and what I need you guys to do…”

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This should be an exciting moment for TakaGaki fans :inlove:
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 56 - (7/28)]
« Reply #348 on: July 30, 2010, 05:50:08 AM »
olyG ASgboyans YES that's ginerish!!! XD if there's gibberish that means its good lol XD

i realy want ot see what ai does now~ hopefuly sayu wont ruin it >.>
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 56 - (7/28)]
« Reply #349 on: July 30, 2010, 05:59:47 AM »
hmm its really interesting for Ai to take an incentive to ask Risa out
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 56 - (7/28)]
« Reply #350 on: July 30, 2010, 06:34:54 AM »
Yes, you're right, this story DID lack some more serious AiGaki moments xD

Oh yes  :inlove: :wub:
Ai and Reina are two sexy beasts  :lol: :w00t:

And Gaki bday coming soon  :heart: Okay so. If Sayu does something to ruin this, I will be VERY mad >: D
Can't wait for the confession (?)
You promised it will be even cuter than TanaKame's so I'm waiting excitedly for your next update  :oops:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 56 - (7/28)]
« Reply #351 on: July 30, 2010, 07:22:54 AM »
omgah~ you update fast! (which is a good thing!) I walk away from the comp for dinner and you have two chapters up :twothumbs
awesome, awesome chapters~  :heart:
sorry, my brain isn't functioning right now for me to write up a comprehensible comment because right now all I all that's coming up is... *squeal mode on* KYAAA~ that was so much :wub: takagaki ftw! please dun let sayu ruin things, even though I truly do feel sorry for her...

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 56 - (7/28)]
« Reply #352 on: July 30, 2010, 07:51:16 AM »
HOLY CRAP BUCKETS!!!!  :shocked
I almost jumped out of my chair after the first chapter ended and then you hit me the next!!!  :panic: :panic:
I'm going crazy over TakaGaki!!!!! 
:mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff:
Aichan!! That's such a cute plan!!! even tho i don't know the whole thing yet  :nervous
Making her best friend seem like she forgot Risa's birthday and then going to comfort her...you sly puppy you~  :twisted:
AGH!! I can't wait for more chapters!!  :bleed eyes:
SarangAi...you are SO AWESOME!!  :wub:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 56 - (7/28)]
« Reply #353 on: July 30, 2010, 08:57:28 AM »
Sexy dancing ftw! Tanakame seems to be progressing quite nicely, I wonder how far they would have gone in the elevator if Takagaki hadn't shown up?

Finally! Ai's going to ask Risa out!! Will it go as planned though or will a certain bunny mess things up?

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 56 - (7/28)]
« Reply #354 on: July 30, 2010, 09:05:48 AM »
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nooo lol ai-chan just had to stop them! XD

KYA~!!!! i think i just died of tankamei and takagaki hot dancing~!!! XD

wow lol you update FAST!!   :w00t: :w00t: i miss a day and i feel so behind already XDD

ai-chan asking risa out? lol the plot thickens  8)

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 56 - (7/28)]
« Reply #355 on: July 30, 2010, 10:03:17 AM »
{out} Na na...I'm not really a new commenter...
I commented one time
and then I return at my lurker mode :nervous  :nervous

but now I wanna try to comment more often when I see
ur update^^

{In the chapters}
OMG Damn the dance chap. part is so freaking awesome
and hawt :heart: :heart:
and it really surprise me when I go down a bit and see that
there is another chapter updated.....
You really make my day better and now my co-workers
wanna know why I have a big smile on my face <_<

Cool can't wait for Lovely confession to the Bean ^_~
but I feel like that it will not be easy...
There wanna has the bunny who will ask the Panda to stop them.......
Like I didn't hear it, like I couldn't hear it.... I shouldn't have heard your love in the first place
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 56 - (7/28)]
« Reply #356 on: July 30, 2010, 02:57:27 PM »
Hmm seems like Reina is gaining back control of the relationship from Eri  :lol:

Poor Risa put in another steamy moment with Ai and she gets flustered again  :lol:

I hope Sayu dosn't find out and Ruin the plan.

P.S. If Jun is one of your favoriets you can atleast give her a happy ending even if the rest of her story is tragic, cant you?  :cry:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 56 - (7/28)]
« Reply #357 on: July 30, 2010, 10:33:43 PM »
@kawaii beam: yay! i love gibberish XD

@kurosawa87: yup. She decided she couldn't keep on being the mature responsible one anymore... she's gonna do whatever she likes :D

@Ada: oh yes~ i'm working hard on the confession scene :D

@xanimefreak13x: lol usually it's one chapter per night... but it's the weekends so i figured "what the hell" XD and squeal mode is good, it's the right mode :wub:

@Swtme03: no, YOU'RE AWESOME! :twothumbs did I ever mention how much I love all those emoticons you use?? XD

@rndmnwierd: hm... i wonder the same thing.. :w00t: read to find out! :P

@lonewind: don't worry, the elevator is always there...  :twisted:

@YumePouk: sorry! comment often so i don't forget XD aww~ i'm glad i made your day better~ careful around your co-workers though.. XD

@oddball: oh, the TanaKame controls will flip back and forth :lol:  as for Jun... well, I'm not sure what to do with her yet... :cry:


thanx fo the comments, peeps.. MAKES MY DAY :cow: :thumbsup
onwards! XD

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Chapter 57

   Risa moved silently with plastic bags in both hands.  She was walking back from the supermarket with bags of groceries.  As she walked down her street, she kept on thinking about the events in the past week.

   Starting from the day after the “dance” incident, everybody had started to act weird.  Eri was spending an awful lot of time with her girlfriend.  Some nights, they wouldn’t even come home and Risa would be left alone in the house, wondering where they were… But in the end, it always turned out that they spent the night at High-Queen’s apartment, because they were too tired.  Ai always confirmed this fact.

   Risa had nothing against the couple wanting to spend time together.  But for some reason, she felt like Eri was trying to avoid her.  She would put on the shaky smile and laugh nervously and run way.  And Reina just seemed bipolar now; she would be all happy in front of Eri but when the turtle wasn’t present, she usually didn’t say more than a maximum of three words in a sentence.

   Ai wasn’t exactly normal these days either.  She had asked if she could borrow the bean’s song notebook, because she wanted to look through it.  It still hadn’t been returned.  Also, the leader never seemed to be there with Risa as much as she used to be.  Right after a meeting or a practice, she would run off somewhere and leave a simple text for the younger girl, which usually said something along the lines of ‘sorry for leaving early’ or ‘good night’.

   Today, Risa was especially upset that everyone seemed to avoid her.  One of the reasons was the fact that Eri asked her to go grocery shopping when it was her birthday.  When the bean woke up this morning, nobody wished her happy birthday, not even Eri.  Sayumi had come by the house with Junjun in the morning, but she had a check-up with her doctor to see if she could stay on release for a little longer.  So basically, Risa felt completely alone.

   “Why did Ai ask me for my notebook?” Risa thought.  “And why is she never there anymore?  Is she upset about something?  And what is up with Kameha these days? She’s my best friend; the least she could do is wish me happy birthday.  It’s not like I wanted a party or anything, but still…

   The bean sighed as she finally reached her front steps.  She unlocked the door and walked in.

   “Tadaima!” Risa yelled into the house.  When only silence greeted her, the bean cocked her head to the side and dropped the grocery bags.  “Kameha?  Where are you?”

   She slowly took off her shoes and walked into the house.  There were no lights on at all.  Risa slowly turned left into the living room.  She could see something moving in the far wall.

   “Kameha?” she whispered.  She found the light switch and flipped it on. 

   In the far wall, near the side of the sofa, was Reina who had Eri pinned up against the wall.  They were in a pretty intense make-out session, very much like the time in the elevator. 

   “GAH!” Risa yelled in shock.

   “KYAH!” Eri screamed, surprised.  She immediately pushed her girlfriend away on impulse, which sent Reina stumbling backwards, falling on the sofa, head first.

   “Ow!” the yankii complained, rubbing the back of her head.  “Hey, that hurt!”

   “What are you two doing in my living room?” Risa shrilled.  So Eri had sent her out to get groceries, invited her girlfriend over, and started to make out with her… on her birthday.

   “Well… Reina stopped by to drop something off… and she ended up coming in to stay for a while… and… well… yeah,” Eri squeaked hesitantly.

   “Kameha, I know this is our house,” Risa growled, “but now, I’m not so sure if I can ever touch that side of the wall again.”

   “We didn’t get that far yet,” Reina mumbled, crossing her legs on the sofa.  “We might’ve, if you didn’t come in…”

   “Reina-chan!” Eri yelled, her face blushing. 

   “You know what?” Risa said, irritated.  “It’s either you guys leave, or I leave.  Since you two already made yourselves comfortable, I think I’ll go out for a while.”

   Reina mumbled something under her breath again, and Eri slapped her arm as she walked towards her friend.

   “Well, Reina-chan told me Ai is eating dinner in a café right now,” Eri started slowly.  “Do you want to go there?”

   “Yeah, sure, why not,” Risa said.  The thought of being with Ai cheered her up a little.  But at this point, Risa really didn’t care where she went… as long as she was away from these two lovebirds.

   “Okay then!” Eri said.  She ran to the coffee table to get a notepad and a pen.  She wrote down a couple things, ripped off the page, and gave it to Risa. 

   “Thanks,” Risa mumbled.  “Thanks for forgetting my birthday…

   With that, the bean turned around and walked out of her house, slamming the front door.  Eri’s smile dropped as she turned to face her girlfriend.

   “Did you see her face?” the turtle cried.  “She’s miserable!  I almost blew the secret right then and there!”

   “It’s good that you didn’t,” Reina said, walking over to her girlfriend.  “I’m sure Ai has something special planned.”

   In an attempt to comfort her, the yankii pressed her lips against the older girl and wound her arms around her waist.  Eri slowly slid her hands up to Reina’s shoulder.  After a couple seconds, she pushed her away.

   “I’ve never missed her birthday ever since we met!” Eri cried again.  “She must feel betrayed… how do I live with this?”

   “Calm down, baby,” Reina whispered into her ear.  “Everything will be fine.”  She nibbled on her ear but Eri didn’t seem to notice.

   “What if she never forgives me for this?” Eri babbled on.  “What if Ai’s plan goes wrong?  What do I do then?”

   Sighing, Reina finally backed away to meet the turtle’s eyes. 

   “Well…” Reina started slowly, “Ai said our job was to direct Gaki to the café… but she never said we couldn’t go there after our mission.”

   “Can we go there?” Eri asked, her eyes lighting up.  “Would you take me?”

   “I’d much rather stay here and continue what we were doing but…” Reina thought.  “Anything for you, baby.”

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   “Terrible!” Risa thought, stomping down the loud street with chains of shops.  “How can Eri do this to me? Something is definitely wrong here!

   Risa finally approached the address that the turtle had written down.  All the lights in the café were off.  The bean tried the door to find it unlocked.  Hesitantly, she walked into the shop to face a dark corridor.  She started to walk down the hallway.

   “Why do I feel like I’m being duped?” Risa thought to herself. 

   She finally felt her foot crossing over a threshold.  Through the darkness, Risa could tell that she was no longer in a hall, because she wasn’t enclosed by narrow walls anymore.

   “Hello?” the bean squeaked.

   At that moment, the dim yellow lights came on in the large area.  Risa gasped out loud.  All the small circular tables and chairs were pushed off to the side.  Instead, the room with filled with pastel colored balloons.  Ribbons and glitter decorations sequined every wall. 

   There was a small stage in the far wall.  The spotlights came on to reveal a smiling girl holding a mic.  She was wearing a plaid shirt over a white tank top with jeans.  Her brown hair was long and straight.

   “Happy Birthday, Risa,” Ai’s voice echoed in the room.  “This one is for you… ‘Koi ING’.”

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Oh, I'm just torturing all of you now :twisted:
 :byebye:

avii&sig by the wonderful kawaii beam~!

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 57 - (7/30)]
« Reply #358 on: July 30, 2010, 11:05:02 PM »
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW  :heart:
*squee*  :wub:
Yeah. this is torture x_x

Can I hope of a new chapter in an hour or so, just how it happened with 55 & 56?  :grin:
Nah, I'm just dreaming xD
I can't wait for the next oneeee  :cry: It's probably the one that I'm expecting most eagerly, out of all chappies of your story  :oops:
Well together with the Aichan bday party too xD
I love Bday parties  :inlove:


PS: TanaKame are so naughty  :rofl:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 57 - (7/30)]
« Reply #359 on: July 31, 2010, 12:12:33 AM »
Tanakame makes me totally laugh, I love how they always seems to be making out. Omg, Ai's plan is already so romantic, if a little frustrating, I can't wait to see how it turns out.

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Um, yeah, you definitely are. XD

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