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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 65 - (8/5)]
« Reply #460 on: August 05, 2010, 07:28:01 PM »
Damn Eri! >_> but I must admit that it was funny and really awkward LOL

Ow how bad that you have writers block T_T but it's ok, just take your time and don't push yourself to hard, we will be waiting :3

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 65 - (8/5)]
« Reply #461 on: August 06, 2010, 04:11:29 AM »
Oh Gaah! My first time hating Kamei is in your fic  XD.
She broke the best moment  :smhid.
Hot Takagaki is exciting  :bleed eyes: Moaar TakaGaki!!
Ye~~~y! Kamei was EPIC. X'DDDDDDDD. So cute anyway.
She got Ai all nervous, so awkward. Now i'm waiting insanely Reina's birthday  :panic: :panic:.
Excellent Job  :twothumbs as always ;D

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 65 - (8/5)]
« Reply #462 on: August 06, 2010, 06:18:27 AM »
@kurosawa87: i FAIL at writing one shots... For this story, I actually only planned for 50 chapters in the first place and now look at it.... :nervous

@kano-chan: lol~ there will be more :D

@Ada: you have NO idea how much I want to write that TakaGAki perv. But there's a reason I'm not writing it now, so... :nervous

@Thor87: I hope to pull out all the lurkers XD

@rndmnwierd: Diligence is so important to me, I don't think I'll be able to bare taking a break :cry:  and i'm trying to rememeber what inspired me XD

@xanimefreak13x: omg SAYU. you just made something click in my head. Get ready for some angst :twisted:

@fallenxangel: Can't do one shots~ look how long this story is by itself XD

@oddball: Sorry i'm too fast... :( and YES I had an epiphany about sayu! :twisted:

@kawaii beam: ahh there's a reason for not writing a TakaGaki perv at the moment... so sorry! you'll have to wait longer (torture) XD :twisted:

@NekoMioko: well,  you don't need to wait any longer! XD

@Michi.Pinku: oh, Reina's birthday... :twisted: XD


That was the SHORTEST writer's block i ever had XD
You guys just broke down my Writer's block/wall :cow: XD 
Especially thanks to animefreak, because she mentioned Sayu for me! Now the plot will grow... XD

But until then, you can enjoy this TakaGaki chapter that I wrote to satisfy myself... I could've skipped to TanaKame but I decided to fit this in :D

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Chapter 66

   “Really, Ai?  Really?” Risa laughed.  “I thought you had some big surprise planned for me, but… it was this?”

   The couple was standing in front of a big colorful gate; it was the entrance of the same amusement park that they had gone to during the summer.  Ai had, once again, kidnapped Risa out of her house and dragged her into the city. 

   It was the yankii idol’s birthday today, so Eri had told them to keep out of her way.  So the leader had decided that she and her girlfriend might as well do something fun together too.  It was also to keep her mind off of what the turtle might have in store for Reina.

   “Well, our last trip here ended in a pretty bad way,” Ai explained.  “I thought that maybe we could have a better ending this time.”

   “It was a pretty bad ending,” Risa agreed.

   “So let’s overlap that with an even better memory,” the leader suggested, taking her girlfriend’s hand.  “Come on, let’s go have some fun!”

   The two girls entered the amusement park and faced various roller coasters and rides.  Risa was okay with the spinning rides, but when it came to height, she wasn’t so happy.

   “Ai, I don’t want to do this!” the bean yelled as the roller coaster inched uphill, little by little.  “This was a mistake, this was a mistake!”

   “It’ll be fine, Risa, I promise,” the leader laughed.

   “AI!  I’M GOING TO DIE!”

   “You’re not going to die.”

   “AI, BEFORE I DIE, I WANT TO LET YOU KNOW THAT I LOVE YOU!”

   “I love you too, sweetheart.”

   “AI, I’M GOING TO DIE!”

   “Oh, we’re going down now.”

   “Ai—KYAAAAAAAAAAA!”

   The younger girl screamed at the top of her lungs as the roller coaster sped down the rails, while the older girl fist pumped and cheered.  Ai was almost sure that the blood circulation in her hand was cut off because of her girlfriend, but she didn’t care.  She just held her hand back just as tightly.

   “That was way too scary,” Risa gasped, after getting back on solid ground again.

   “I thought it was a little boring,” Ai said.  “Maybe it’s because we went on it twice…”

   “Ai, I really can’t understand you—”

   “Hey, look!  Isn’t that Takitty?”

   The two girls flipped around to find a group of students in uniforms, staring at them. 

   “Oh my gosh, it is Takahashi Ai!” one of the girls screamed.

   “I’m starting to think there’s a little déjà vu going on here,” Risa whispered.

   “Here’s another déjà vu,” Ai gulped.  “Run!”

   The leader grabbed her girlfriend’s hand and ran through the amusement park with her fans hot on their trail.  Risa started to recognize the food and game stands that they had encountered a couple months back. 

   “She can’t be going there… can she?” the bean thought.

   But Risa’s prediction was right.  Ai turned a couple corners and pulled the younger girl into a tight space between two walls: the place of their first kiss.  Ai peeked out, stuck her head back in, and sighed.

   “I’m kind of glad they appeared,” Ai laughed.  “I wondered if I would ever have the chance to come into these walls with you again.”

   “Why would you want to?” Risa questioned.

   “Like I said before,” Ai whispered, leaning into her girlfriend’s face, “we’re here so we can overlap the bad memories with good memories.”

   With that, the singer kissed her girlfriend passionately on the lips.  Risa let out a soft chuckle before kissing back with the same amount of effort.  It made her happy to know that they could satisfy their desires so easily now, instead of asking beforehand or wondering whether it was okay to kiss.  Ai smiled as she leaned her head back a little.

   “That should’ve been our first kiss,” she sighed.

   “I don’t think our first kiss was that bad,” Risa claimed.

   “You ran away and took a cab home,” Ai smirked.

   “… I guess it was kind of bad,” Risa smiled guiltily.  “But that’s the one part we’re not going to have a déjà vu about.”

   The bean pulled her girlfriend out of the tight space between the walls, and dragged her towards the Ferris wheel.  Fortunately, the line wasn’t that long so the pair was able to get into a car in a couple seconds.  Ai and Risa sat across from each other.  The door closed and they were levitated into the air slowly.

   “By the way,” the younger girl started, pulling out something from her jean pocket, “I have the picture you wanted.  I cut it up to fit the locket.”

   She reached out and took the pendent chained around Ai’s neck.  She opened the locket and placed the small circular picture inside, and snapped it shut.

   “Now, I’ll always be in your heart,” Risa grinned.  “And you’ll always be in mine.”

   “I like the sound of that,” Ai smiled.

   “Wow, look outside,” Risa breathed, turning to look out the window.  “You can see the entire park from in here, and we’re not even at the top yet.  This Ferris wheel is slower than I thought it would be.”

   “I don’t want to look outside,” Ai teased.  “I’m too busy looking at you.”

   “Corny~” Risa sang, laughing.  “But that was better than the other lines.”

   “Good,” Ai grinned.  “That means I’m showing improvement.”

   “Speaking of improvement,” Risa said, leaning in, “let me show you how much I’m improving.”

   “I’d like that,” Ai smiled, as she also leaned in.

   The younger girl pressed her lips against her girlfriend’s.  Ai slipped out of her seat and kneeled on the floor.  She reached her hands out towards the wall to balance herself, trapping Risa between her arms.  Their kiss got deeper and more passionate, as their tongues moved restlessly against each other.  Ai slipped one hand down to firmly cup her girlfriend’s perky breasts.  Risa moaned and broke away from the kiss.

   “Why do you always get to lead?” the bean grumbled.

   “I’m older than you,” Ai joked, planting one kiss on Risa’s neck. 

   “I really hate that excuse,” Risa growled playfully, her eyes turning dark.

   Before Ai could comprehend her girlfriend’s tone of voice, she found herself being pushed back into her seat.  Risa climbed on top of her girlfriend’s lap and straddled her.  She wound her arms around the idol’s neck and started to kiss her passionately.  The leader’s eyes opened wide in shock for a while, then she decided that she liked this other dominant side of her girlfriend, and kissed her back.

   “Is this the continuation of our experiment?” Ai mumbled into Risa’s mouth.

   “Our goal is to get a little further every time, isn’t it?” the younger girl answered.  “That’s the impression I had.”

   “I think I like that goal,” Ai grinned. 

   She tilted her head to the side and started to nibble on Risa’s ear, bringing out a moan in return.  But when she started to lick it, Risa slightly shifted away from her and dipped down to Ai’s neck.

   “Nuh-uh, I’m in charge today,” she whispered, as she licked her girlfriend’s smooth skin.

   Ai let out a small whimper.  Risa pulled down the collar of the singer’s shirt to get a little closer to her shoulder and collarbone.    She continued to work her lips and tongue while firmly cupping Ai’s breast, which made the older girl moan even louder.

   “Risa,” the singer breathed, “if you keep doing that, I won’t be able to control myself…”

   “Then don’t,” the younger girl replied.

   “Are you sure?” Ai smirked.  She placed her hand on Risa’s private area, over her tight jeans.  The bean flinched a little but didn’t make any move to move away.

   “Try me,” Risa dared. 

   She then blocked Ai’s mouth with her own and immediately plunged her tongue deep inside.  The leader was surprised, but she accepted her girlfriend’s challenge.  She started to move her hand against Risa’s crotch, causing the younger girl to moan into their kiss.  Ai only massaged gently at first, but soon couldn’t hold back anymore.  She unzipped Risa’s jeans and slipped her hand inside the denim material.  The younger girl gasped and broke their kiss; but instead of moving away, she started to work on Ai’s right ear.  Ai took this as a good sign, and started to rub the bean’s private area through the thin material.

   Everything surrounding the older girl was about Risa now.  All she could hear was Risa’s heavy breathing and moans in her ear.  All she could see was Risa’s long brown hair, traveling down her back.  All she could feel was Risa’s wetness through her damp underwear. 
But being the responsible one, Ai didn’t manage to completely tune out all her surroundings.  Soon enough, she sighed, removed her hand from Risa’s jeans, and zipped it up. 

   “Risa, you have to stop now,” Ai whispered huskily.

   “I don’t want to,” Risa mumbled, still kissing her girlfriend’s neck.  “I can go a little further.”

   “I’m sure you can, sweetheart,” Ai laughed softly.  “But you still have to stop.  We’re almost back on ground.”

   Only then, Risa realized that they were inside a Ferris wheel car and jumped away from her girlfriend, blushing.  The door opened and the amusement park attendant peeked inside.

   “That was one lap,” the happy lady said.  “Did you enjoy your ride?”

   “I know I enjoyed my ride,” Ai grinned, getting out of the car.  “How about you, Risa?”

   “It was a nice ride,” the younger girl answered, blushing while smiling her bright smile.  “Definitely a better memory than last time.”

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So, next up is TanaKame :)

One question: you guys all seem more excited for TakaGaki then TanaKame so...
Would you guys kill me if I skipped writing out TanaKame's perv and just imply it? :nervous
I mean, I don't mind writing it but if nobody really cares then... XD

That was a legit quetion, I'm really asking you guys XD
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 66 - (8/6)]
« Reply #463 on: August 06, 2010, 06:58:38 AM »

 I can't really remember where i stop the comment from before XD

But i do read every chapter and about what goes on~ <- bad reader~ haha.. I really love to see where this story is going on and stuffs~ especially the fluffs~ XD nothing makes us more happy than fluffs~ I mean who wanna be depress if they can choose?  :huhuh <- going out of topic. lol

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“AI, BEFORE I DIE, I WANT TO LET YOU KNOW THAT I LOVE YOU!”

   “I love you too, sweetheart.”

   “AI, I’M GOING TO DIE!”

XD that was cute~

Haha.. I can't help but wonder.. with all the stories on amusement park and stuffs due to Miss Niigaki Risa's famous adoration on Disney..... would you ever think of amusement park the same way again?! haha.. I wrote something about Gakikame in a Ferris wheel.. but they were totally innocent~ haha.


Good luck on writing~ If you ever get writer block again (don't worry.. i had mine since feb~ lol) add some pets maybe? they are ton of fun to write with :)
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 66 - (8/6)]
« Reply #464 on: August 06, 2010, 07:10:04 AM »
Wooo! :inlove: The first half was totally cute! :mon lovelaff: And the second half was hot! :mon crazyinlove:

Good Job!! :twothumbs :cow:

hmmm...I wonder if Sayu is going to carry out some evil plan to steal Gaki back... :mon evillaff:

I guess I'm expecting Takagaki perv to come after all the misunderstandings clear up...? :mon dunno:

And I'm glad we managed to break the wall for you! :mon kungfu:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 66 - (8/6)]
« Reply #465 on: August 06, 2010, 07:17:09 AM »
I for one am a little more excited about TanaKame so I for sure don't mind their pervs  :twisted:
I think people are more excited for TakaGaki because it's taking them so long to actually get there in this fic :lol:



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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 66 - (8/6)]
« Reply #466 on: August 06, 2010, 07:18:31 AM »
The TakaGaki part was really funny and might as well write out both because its enjoyable both ways hehe

and its not failing more like to challenge yourself
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 65 - (8/5)]
« Reply #467 on: August 06, 2010, 07:24:49 AM »
   “Ai, I don’t want to do this!” the bean yelled as the roller coaster inched uphill, little by little.  “This was a mistake, this was a mistake!”

   “It’ll be fine, Risa, I promise,” the leader laughed.

   “AI!  I’M GOING TO DIE!”

   “You’re not going to die.”

   “AI, BEFORE I DIE, I WANT TO LET YOU KNOW THAT I LOVE YOU!”

   “I love you too, sweetheart.”

   “AI, I’M GOING TO DIE!”

   “Oh, we’re going down now.”

   “Ai—KYAAAAAAAAAAA!”
Thats was somehow cute :nya:

and happy thats you don't have writers block anymore  :hiakhiakhiak:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 66 - (8/6)]
« Reply #468 on: August 06, 2010, 07:41:33 AM »
....i actualy read this chapyter while litsening to DANCE suru no da! XDDDD such a contrast at the feriss wheel part XDDD

overall glad u got over the block! and  that uber nice takagaki day~ i enjoyed that ride too :drool: :inlove: XD

and do u realy want my awnser? XD I WANT A TANAKAME PREV!  (as long as the takagaki one is 20 times better)

keep up the great work ne~ X3 now off to sleep~! :yawn: :heart:
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 66 - (8/6)]
« Reply #469 on: August 06, 2010, 09:39:35 AM »
w00t~ writer's block is broken! :cow: it's funny how I can't break my own writer's block though... :nervous
aww, you don't have to thank me~ but I have to thank you LOTS for writing this AWESOME fic <3
OMGAH~ this chapter made me grin like an idiot... :on lol:  I couldn't keep myself from smiling so retardedly  :mon heh:
Mannn, I love dominant Risa soooo much :mon inluv:  hehe, she's finally claiming her property, eh?  :mon misch:
Ackk, you are so cruel to Takagaki! Leaving `em both hanging like that :O but the ending was hecka funny though~ :yep: Heh, Risa's losing it~

Oh and...WRITE THAT TANAKAME PERV *pulls out a dagger* :shifty: Even though I'll admit that I kinda want Takagaki to progress, you really shouldn't just pass up on some Tanakame!
make it...hot and throw in lots of description... ;] JK. what I mean is... take it slowly? I felt like the last one flew by too fast XD Well, it doesn't have to be too pervy also, if it's easier on you~ just like in this chapter is already awesome!

Oh shoot, you're really gonna write me that angst, huh? :shocked I don't know if I should be happy or sad, LOL, Takagaki's soooo cute and happy right now! but I do love me some angst  :twisted: Heh, I can totally imagine it right now...
*gakikame goes to visit sayu at the hospital*
*Risa goes in to hug Sayu*
Sayu: Risa! Do you know how much I've missed you!?!
Risa: Aww, Sayu, I missed you too! *Risa slowly pulls away from the hug*
As the pale hospital light illuminates the pair, Sayu's eyes immediately catches sight of a shimmering and glistening object that dangles loosely from Risa's neck.
Sayu: Risa... what is this?
Risa: Uhh...
Sayu: This isn't what I think it is... is it? YOU %*$(#&%*@^#$! <--jk!
*cue in b*tch fight*
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AHAHA~  :mon lmao:
Argh, I'm late on commenting today! I need to stalk this thread more diligently~ :mon cam: :mon inluv:
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 66 - (8/6)]
« Reply #470 on: August 06, 2010, 10:20:53 AM »
"Would you guys kill me if I skipped writing  out TanaKame's perv and just imply it?"

I don't mind  :grin: At all actually  :heart: bring out the AiGaki smex love 8D
But peeps around here would love to read another Tanakame perv xD
So I'll be willing to read it too 8D don't forget to pm it to me please?  :wub:

So we have TanaKame that already made that step, it was nice and all, and we also have TakaGaki that they've held their urges so much that it's gonna be scorching hot when they finally do it. Right?  :D
I don't know why but I have this idea that even though Eri and Reina are more perverted, (lol xD) AiGaki will be wilder 8D lmao

Glad you don't have any more writer's block <3 And I can't wait for the updates  :w00t:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 66 - (8/6)]
« Reply #471 on: August 06, 2010, 10:54:01 AM »
Blimey, I not sure how much more TakaGaki smex I can take :drool:, Perhaps writing some TanaKame will help balence things out?  :lol:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 66 - (8/6)]
« Reply #472 on: August 06, 2010, 10:56:14 AM »
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One question: you guys all seem more excited for TakaGaki then TanaKame so...
Would you guys kill me if I skipped writing out TanaKame's perv and just imply it?
PLEASE GIMME THE TANAKAME :shocked: :shocked: :shocked: :gmon shy:
please..... please no skipping Tanakame :cry: SarangAi :cry: :gmon nya: :heart:
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 66 - (8/6)]
« Reply #473 on: August 06, 2010, 11:32:25 AM »
HOLY CRAP!!!  :drool:
Those last two chapters were on the EDGE, almost falling off, of the cliff to the perv category  :bleed eyes:
AGH!! I loved them so much!!!  :inlove: :inlove:
The fact that Risa is getting closer and closer to it is driving me insane!!!  :frustrated:
I want her to get it over with!!!  :farofflook: But at the same time the foreplay up to it is oh so :lick:  :drool: I actually don't want her to do it yet cuz I like the foreplay more  XD





Oh and DON'T YOU DARE SKIP THAT TANAKAME PERV!!!  :scolding:
If you do, then I want an extra long TakaGaki, fully detailed, lots and lots of foreplay and more than one peak point for both in 2 or 3 different places in one day :mon evil:
:P
But still....please don't skip TanaKame  :cry: They're just as sweet  :wub:






P.S.
I'm working overtime at my job for the next couple weeks  :bleed eyes: So I don't get home until 4am every day  :fainted:
So I might not comment as much. But I WILL read...I will  :farofflook:

Can't wait for more chapters!! :thumbsup
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 65 - (8/5)]
« Reply #474 on: August 06, 2010, 11:53:10 AM »
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   “AI!  I’M GOING TO DIE!”

   “You’re not going to die.”

   “AI, BEFORE I DIE, I WANT TO LET YOU KNOW THAT I LOVE YOU!”

   “I love you too, sweetheart.”

   “AI, I’M GOING TO DIE!”

   “Oh, we’re going down now.”

   “Ai—KYAAAAAAAAAAA!”
that's really cute writing of you!  :roll: ..... they are both so lovely  :wub:
by the way .. I am realli glad that u broke down the writer's block  :)
about the plot, u've already had something in ur mind with Sayu rite?  :huhuh .... but pls dont' stir up too much on my beloved TakaGaki  :D instead why don't u add some character n' stir up TanaKame peaceful life  XD j/k
*run away from TanaKame fan*

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 66 - (8/6)]
« Reply #475 on: August 06, 2010, 12:04:15 PM »
I need TanaKame !!!!! :banghead:

please don't skip it :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :cry:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 66 - (8/6)]
« Reply #476 on: August 06, 2010, 01:18:05 PM »
Omg! NO SKIPPING TANAKAME!! You can't!! You shouldn't!! You won't!... Right?

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 66 - (8/6)]
« Reply #477 on: August 06, 2010, 01:19:07 PM »
I love Takagaki. I love Takagaki make-out sessions. I love it when Takagaki make-out sessions get farther every time. I also love short writer's blocks XD

Risa freaking out on the ride was a cute part and so was the replay of their first visit, this time with a much better ending.

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Yes, yes we would. :twisted: Kill you.

Are you asking this just to reveal more lurkers? :lol:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 66 - (8/6)]
« Reply #478 on: August 06, 2010, 06:22:29 PM »
@amEthystx: YES now, whenever says "disney", I immediatley think of Gaki-san XD

@kano-chan: you're right about the TakaGaki after the misunderstanding.. :)

@aussie: yeah, I think that's it too :lol:

@kurosawa87: yeah, I think i'm writing it out XD

@fallenxangel: YEah, I'm happy too :D

@kawaii beam: LOL okay, I'll give you the TanaKame perv XD

@xanimefreak13x: LOL you crack me up, I literally laughed out loud and my brother just asked me if I was mental XD :lol:

@Ada: I think I imagine TanaKame as doing it more often but TakaGaki doing it more wildly :twisted: XD

@oddball: lol really? I always feel like there's too much TanaKame... maybe I'm just deprived of TakaGaki :D

@Fushigidane: LOL I can tell you really want that perv from the way you thanked everybody's posts XD

@Swtme03: oh I'll definitely spend more time on TakaGaki when their time comes... :twisted: and you know there's always gonna be more chapters XD

@Thor87: TanaKame is pretty much set now, but they still have some hardships :D But yes, Sayu will stay evil :twisted:

@junejy: I won't! :lol:

@stefy: no, I will not XD

@rndmnwierd: No, you all just seemed so much eager for TakaGaki than TanaKame so I really was just asking XD


I am VERY happy because the comment replies alone took me 20 minutes to type up XD
And yes, i WILL be writing out the TanaKame perv~ take it as my last gift before I start to stir up the plot a little bit :D
And it's like practice so the TAkaGaki can be BETTER :twisted:

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Chapter 67

   “Eri, we’re getting further and further away from civilization right now,” Reina groaned.  “Are you sure we’re going the right way to… wherever you’re taking me?”

   “I’m absolutely sure!” Eri insisted, burying her head into the map.  “Okay, turn left here.”

   “But it’s not even a road anymore!” the yankii yelled.  “There’s only dirt here!”

   The two lovers were driving in the singer’s silver sports car down an empty highway.  Eri was taking Reina out for her birthday, and she had something special planned.  But being as they were practically in the middle of nowhere, Reina was getting irritated.

   “Trust me; it’s this way,” the turtle giggled.

   “I’m not sure if I can trust you with that map anymore,” Reina grumbled.  “I don’t even know where we’re going!”

   “Please?” Eri whispered, lightly stroking her girlfriend’s cheek with the tip of her fingers.  “For me?”

   “…Oh, you’re just plain devious,” the younger girl muttered, as she turned into the dirt trail.

   “It’s a talent,” Eri laughed.  “We’re almost there, so just hold on until then, Reina-chan.”

   Soon enough, the dirt trail turned into a concrete road again as they reached a small parking lot.  Reina and Eri got out of the car.  The singer had sunglasses on, even though it was the middle of autumn.

   “Where are we?” Reina asked.

   “Look over there!” Eri said, pointing to the edge of the parking lot.

   The concrete area ended with trails of autumn leaves downhill.  Eri pulled her girlfriend towards the wooden steps and ran down.  As soon as she hit solid ground again, Reina saw a vast lake, surrounded with red, orange, and yellow-coated trees.  There was a group of people gathered on the small deck, leading into the water.  Reina could see a couple row boats scattered around in the water.

   “This is your surprise?” the idol gasped.

   “I figured it would be a nice way to take in the autumn season,” Eri grinned.  “The trees are really pretty and the water is really clean so… Do you like it?”

   “I think it’s lovely,” Reina smiled, taking her sunglasses off.  “Thank you.”  She placed a single kiss upon Eri’s lips. 

   “Come on,” Eri giggled, pulling her girlfriend towards the deck.  “I have us reserved, so we should be able to get a boat right away.”

   Surely enough, the couple was in a row boat together in no time.  Reina insisted that she would row, but Eri refused to make her girlfriend work on her birthday. 

   “It really is beautiful here,” the younger girl breathed.  “I can’t believe I never really appreciated my own season before.”

   “I wanted to take you away from all the publicity for today,” Eri said.  “Something more peaceful, you know?”

   “Yes, I really do like this,” Reina smiled.  “Arigatou.”

   The yankii leaned into her girlfriend and gave her another kiss on the lips.  Eri smiled while watching her girlfriend being bewildered by the scenery around her.

   “Are your arms getting tired?” Reina suddenly asked.

   “I’m okay,” the turtle answered.  But the truth was that she was exhausted.

   “Here, I’ll row from now on,” Reina said, reaching for the oars.

   “You can’t row unless you’re in the seat I’m in, Reina-chan,” Eri chuckled.

   “Then we’ll just switch.”

   “No, wait!  You’re not supposed to stand up like that—”

   But it was too late.  Reina started getting up, which rocked the small boat and eventually tipped it over, sending the couple into the water.  Eri tried to open her eyes underwater but she couldn’t.  She felt an arm around her waist pulling her up to the surface.  The turtle met the air with a loud gasp, feeling the stinging of water up her nose.

   “Reina-chan!” she shrilled.

   “Sorry, sorry!” the yankii laughed.  She moved her girlfriend’s wet bangs out of the way, allowing Eri to open her eyes.  “Are you okay, baby?”

   “Do you think I’m okay?” Eri yelled.  Her actions didn’t match her angry tone of voice, because she wound her arms around Reina so as not to sink.

   “I can tell you’re fine from the way you’re screaming at me,” the younger girl laughed again. 

   “… You’re ridiculous,” Eri grumbled.  “But I love you anyway.”

   “I know you do,” Reina grinned.  “Now let’s get out of here before we catch a cold.”

**  **  ** 

   Reina walked out of the bathroom and into her bedroom where Eri was standing there with a large towel around her body.

   “The bath is ready,” the yankii announced.  “You can go in now, Eri.”

   “Um… you can go in first, Reina-chan,” Eri said quietly.  “I’ll go after you.”

   “Are you sure?”

   “Yeah, I’m sure!  Go on, now.  I don’t want you to catch a cold.”

   Reina narrowed her eyes in suspicion, but she left the room obediently.  Eri made sure the bedroom door closed before she started stripping down her drenched clothes.  She even stripped out of the new black lingerie that she bought for Reina’s benefit.

   She was in High-Queen’s apartment now, so that she could dry herself before leaving.  But Eri didn’t plan to leave; she planned to stay right there, with her girlfriend, all night long.  Although her plan to show herself to Reina in the sexy lingerie was over now, Eri had another plan in mind.

   “I really hope I can do this right…” the turtle thought, blushing.  “She won’t think I’m being stupid, right?

   Although she still had doubts in her head, Eri covered herself with the towel and walked out of the bedroom.  She found the bathroom door unlocked so she immediately walked in.

   “Eri?” Reina called. 

   The idol was submerged inside the bathtub.  She turned around to find her girlfriend, blushing and clad in only a towel.  The yankii’s eyes popped wide open in shock as her own cheeks started to turn light pink.

   “I… I decided that it would be faster if we take a bath together,” Eri said hesitantly, refusing to meet her lover’s eyes.  “Um… may I?”

   “Uh… yeah… um… sure,” Reina mumbled, working hard not to get a nosebleed.  “She’s really testing my patience now!

   Eri inhaled and exhaled to calm herself down as she dropped the towel from around her body.  As the older girl walked over, got into the tub, and balled herself up across the yankii, Reina didn’t take a single eye off of Eri’s bare body. 

   “You have a nice figure, Reina-chan,” Eri commented, staring at her girlfriend’s perky breasts.  “I guess it’s only natural, the way you work out.”

   “Um… yeah, I guess…” Reina mumbled.  “But I like your body better.”

   “Really?” Eri said, cocking her head to the side.  She slowly changed her position into a kneel and started to inch closer and closer to her girlfriend until she was practically on top of her.  “But I think you have a slender body.”

   “Uh, yeah…” Reina stuttered, feeling her cheeks burning up.  “Um, Eri… you’re, ah… little too close…”

   “Since when is there such a thing as ‘too close’ between us?” 

   With that, the older girl claimed the yankii’s lips, moving diligently against the softness.  Reina’s hands stayed paralyzed to her sides.  But Eri’s hands traveled down from her girlfriend’s face, to her shoulders, and to her chest.  When the older girl’s leg brushed over her sensitive spot, Reina broke their kiss and pushed her girlfriend away.

   “I, uh, I think I’ll get out of bath now,” Reina stuttered. 

   “So soon?” the turtle asked innocently.

   “Yeah, um… I’m all washed up already,” the yankii mumbled. 

   She slowly got out of the tub, conscious of her girlfriend’s eye on her naked body.  Reina grabbed a towel from the rack and ran out of the bathroom and into her own room.  She grabbed her undergarments, a t-shirt, and sweatpants from her closet and put it on.  She then parched down at the edge of her bed and stared into random space.

   “Damn it!” Reina thought.  “How am I supposed to hold back if she approaches me like that?  If she thinks I have that much self-control… she better leave soon because she’s wrong.

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Oh, how i love torturing people with foreplay :twisted: :D
 :byebye:

avii&sig by the wonderful kawaii beam~!

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 67 - (8/6)]
« Reply #479 on: August 06, 2010, 06:50:43 PM »
Ohoho :D
Ada likes so far  :grin: And I have a feeling I'll love the next chap even more xD

Aaaah you're cruel D: Why would you take away from Reina the pleasure to see her turtle in sexy lingerie?  :cry:

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