Author Topic: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [COMPLETE - EXTRA: Ch. 101 - (12/1)] (Read 242781 times)

fallenxangel24952 · « **Reply #480 on:** August 06, 2010, 06:55:55 PM »

reina...alone with eri you mustn't have this much self-control

I think i will love the nxt chapter too

Thor87 · « **Reply #481 on:** August 06, 2010, 07:00:33 PM »

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But it was too late. Reina started getting up, which rocked the small boat and eventually tipped it over, sending the couple into the water. Eri tried to open her eyes underwater but she couldn’t. She felt an arm around her waist pulling her up to the surface. The turtle met the air with a loud gasp, feeling the stinging of water up her nose.

“Reina-chan!” she shrilled.

“Sorry, sorry!” the yankii laughed. She moved her girlfriend’s wet bangs out of the way, allowing Eri to open her eyes. “Are you okay, baby?”

“Do you think I’m okay?” Eri yelled. Her actions didn’t match her angry tone of voice, because she wound her arms around Reina so as not to sink.

“I can tell you’re fine from the way you’re screaming at me,” the younger girl laughed again.

“… You’re ridiculous,” Eri grumbled.

so .. Eri is the first ever Kame in the world .... who can't swim ..

really nice chappy SarangAi

Waiting for next Update ...

rndmnwierd · « **Reply #482 on:** August 06, 2010, 07:53:33 PM »

You are so evil. I beg, no demand, no beg for more!

Michi.Pinku · « **Reply #483 on:** August 06, 2010, 08:40:01 PM »

Nee I really want Reina loses her patience X'DD. You have to give us the perv Tanakame

>O< waiting the next chapter

xrainbowgumdropsx · « **Reply #484 on:** August 07, 2010, 12:50:52 AM »

You tease. D: Screw self-control, Reina! Although, Eri taking Reina out for her birthday was sweet. <3

kano-chan · « **Reply #485 on:** August 07, 2010, 01:24:07 AM »

Lose your patience, Reina!

Dang...hahaha..I was expecting something...That was pretty darn hawt...

Why did she get out of the tub???

Me likes the chapter!

Good Job!

sapphire · « **Reply #486 on:** August 07, 2010, 03:01:37 AM »

All righties. I am here to post, finally.

I really love the past few chapters. It was really sweet how Ai gave Risa a pendant with her picture in it. That way, they could be in each other's hearts forever~

Yosh, TakaGaki moment in ferris wheel was too hot.

And Kamei being the seductive one? Now, this is getting seriously interesting. It must be hard for Reina to keep her self control. I have an idea, just give in!

Btw, please don't "abandon" Tanakamei even if you prefer Takagaki more.

There's a lot of Tanakamei fans, like me, who would really appreciate it if you would write as many Tanakamei as Takagaki. Truthfully, I was a little sad at first when you "got over" Tanakamei so quick so you can get on with Takagaki. But that's all right, because all writers have their preferences. Just thought I'd share a bit of my opinion. I can't wait for the next chapter~

xanimefreak13x · « **Reply #487 on:** August 07, 2010, 04:39:00 AM »

Whee~ Even your comment replies are awesome!

Omg, I crack you up!? Seriously?! Aww, thanks~

people usually tell me that I'm boring

Haha, I'm glad that I'm away from prying eyes cuz I'm grinning like an idiot again.

OMG~ a KAME can't swim!? LOL.

Heh, as awesome as Eri is, I don't think I can trust her with a map either, but hey, tanakame got there safely. And WOAH, they drove all the way back in their soaked clothes!?

I wonder how far away they were now~ since they were away from civilization and all.

mmm, the foreplay...

No, no~ it's not torture at all~

I actually think that it's wayyyy awesomer than the actual perv

the more the better, eh?
Haha, I love it~

-will edit later, maybe-

SarangAi · « **Reply #488 on:** August 07, 2010, 05:47:57 AM »

@Ada: I dunno, I felt too lazy to describe the lingerie...

@fallenxangel: lol i hope a lot of ppl will love this next chapter

@Thor87: LOL I thought that for a while too, but then I thought, whatever

@rndmnwierd: lol i'm giving it whether you beg or demand

@Michi.Pinku: yes, the TanaKame perv is HERE

@xrainbowgumdropsx: I do tease. Yes. yes I do.

@kano-chan: lol everyone's waiting for Reina to just lose it

@sapphire: awww really? I kind of divided this story into two arcs without even realizing it, actually

but don't worry, TanaKame action will stay~

@xanimefreak13x: LOL I agree that foreplay is better than the actual perv...

So I found out from writing this chapter that i'm better at writing foreplays than the actual main course

But I hope you still like it~

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Chapter 68

Some more TanaKame Hawtness Perv: http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=25888.msg754706#msg754706

Exclusively for Lurkers/non-Pervers: http://sarangaifanfiction.wordpress.com/2010/08/07/kokoro-no-uta-ch-68-tanakame/

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Yes! I set up a blog for my perv chapters~

As much as I loved watching all the lurkers come out of their holes, it wasn't all that fun sending 12 pms per day

But you all still better come back and comment!!!

Thor87 · « **Reply #489 on:** August 07, 2010, 06:10:57 AM »

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGg ...... that was so HawTTTTTTTTTTTT

What a nice piece of perv chappy

Wahhhhh .. love it so much ..

You are the best .... SarangAi

kuro808 · « **Reply #490 on:** August 07, 2010, 06:13:02 AM »

Nice set of chapters

Get to the TakaGaki already

Ada XD · « **Reply #491 on:** August 07, 2010, 06:17:12 AM »

^ Ada agrees xD AIGAKI! AIGAKI! AIGAKI! *chants*
xD

I can't believe I`m saying this... but this perv was so cute xD <3 LOL It had hot moments too, but it left me with a big smile afterward

kano-chan · « **Reply #492 on:** August 07, 2010, 06:23:16 AM »

Oh dang!

That was

I had to stop a couple of times to recollect myself.

They were cute!

Nice Chappie!

fallenxangel24952 · « **Reply #493 on:** August 07, 2010, 06:24:15 AM »

^
^

must reply before... i pass out from... lost blood

yeah aigaki, aigaki, aigaki,... !!!!!

anyway nice pervy chap

Good Job SarangAi!

and lost too much blood now and....

kawaii beam · « **Reply #494 on:** August 07, 2010, 06:46:58 AM »

dang.....idk what to say

that was hott! and pretty cute that eri wanted to be reina's 1st in something nice smexy perv and just keep practicing and u'll be a pro for takagaki

yellow · « **Reply #495 on:** August 07, 2010, 06:59:15 AM »

Chapter 65 - haha... Eririn spoilting the hot make-out sessions of Takagaki... and ask those clueless questions...
Chapter 66 - i kind of like the goal they have set... getting better each time... (just wonder when will be Takagaki's turn for the prev post~~)
Chapter 67 - nice teasing
Chapter 68 - i feel that Eririn is kind of cute to get so bother about being the first in something to Reina...

gab98 · « **Reply #496 on:** August 07, 2010, 07:15:51 AM »

yeah!!!!!!

very nice chapter , jojojo

now takagaki perv please!!!!

xkennax_love · « **Reply #497 on:** August 07, 2010, 07:39:36 AM »

..... ~'.'~

Now we just need some TakaGaki smex and all shall be fantastic... Hehehehe

rndmnwierd · « **Reply #498 on:** August 07, 2010, 01:24:09 PM »

Homina homina homina hawt. Eri has unleashed a beast, methinks, a hungry sex kitten, a growling vixen, and she is the willing prey. Though, I can't wait for the chapter where Eri takes the lead.

Now, for Takagaki's turn. *sits cross legged and waits patiently*

xanimefreak13x · « **Reply #499 on:** August 07, 2010, 01:52:38 PM »

Haha, I LOLed at "non-Pervers" for some reason. It just sounds so funny.

OMGAH~ this chapter's sooo CUTE!

and oh, it was all kinds of hot too~ but cuteness and sweetness of it just totally won me over

for some reason I imagined that... Eri would crawl on top of Reina after she dropped her towel, just to mess the heck outta Reina's brain

Let's see... my reactions for this chapter...

*cue in Eri's questioning*

Me=

and more questioning... Me=

way to break the mood Eri

I'm quite surprised that Reina didn't get irritated at her questioning, ahaha, cuz I know I was! I tend to scroll down, line by line, at the end of the page/screen when I read fanfics, so yeah... it was like, "Eri you...

stop asking so many questions, UGH!!" Haha, I can't stay mad her though.
LOL~ Did Eri forget about what happened at the party?

Ahh~ The last line was sooo much love!

Aww, the ending was so sweet~