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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 75 - (8/13)]
« Reply #580 on: August 13, 2010, 06:12:00 PM »
That is so adorable~! Sleepy turtles and sweet kitty cats, oh my! Are you giving us complete fluff before you put in some psycho Sayu?

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 75 - (8/13)]
« Reply #581 on: August 13, 2010, 07:13:53 PM »
TanaKame KAWAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 75 - (8/13)]
« Reply #582 on: August 13, 2010, 08:50:45 PM »
Ah~Tanakamei is really cute. :wub: That's why I love this couple so much. They're really innocent and adorable and is just.....perfect for each other.
Lol at the reaction queen. XD Though, her reactions are understandable.

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 75 - (8/13)]
« Reply #583 on: August 14, 2010, 04:39:38 AM »
Chapter 74
AiReina! Woooo! I'm actually fine with that couple even though I really love TanaKame. And round too! :mon bleed2:

Chapter 75
Awwwww~!!! :heart: So cute~!!! :heart:

I hope doesn't mess up TakaGaki... :O

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 75 - (8/13)]
« Reply #584 on: August 14, 2010, 05:18:57 AM »
@kawaii beam: i kno, right?? with her half-open eyes... :wub:

@fallenxangel: they're always cute XD

@Thor87: oh yes, Sayumi... :twisted:  WOOT pg. 30! :cow:

@rndmnwierd: the contrast is amazing, isn't it?  Fluff vs psycho-ness... XD

@kurosawa87: RIGHTTTTT?? :wub:

@sapphire: lol they're not always innocent :twisted:

@kano-chan: oh TakaGaki's future.... :twisted:


wow, so i post two chapters per day and i get to read more of your comments.... not bad :twothumbs

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Chapter 76

   “Risa~ Wake up~”

   “Just five more minutes, Ai…”

   “If you don’t get up now, I’m going to touch you~”

   “Five minutes…”

   “I warned you; here I come!”

   Ai smirked and pounced on her sleeping girlfriend and started to tickle her waist.  Risa jumped up, giggling and trying to wrap her arms around herself to fend off the idol’s attack.

   “Stop, stop!” Risa laughed.  “Okay, I’m up!  I’m awake now, stop!”

   “It would’ve been easier if you just woke up in the first place,” Ai grinned.

   The two girls were sitting on Risa’s bed as the morning sunshine settled into the room through the open windows.  Risa was wearing a tank top and shorts with a thin sweatshirt over it.  Ai was wearing a white button down shirt with only her underwear; the collar shirt was borrowed from the bean. 

   “Aren’t you even tired, Ai?” Risa yawned.  “I’m still exhausted from yesterday’s trip…”

   “I’m tired,” the singer nodded.  “But I’m hungry too.  Make something for me to eat, Risa.”

   “You can cook, can’t you?” Risa mumbled, hugging a pillow.  “Make your own breakfast.”

   “But I want you to do it for me~” Ai whined, wrapping her arms around the reluctant bean.  “Make me something.”

   “What happened to you over night?” Risa asked, raising an eyebrow.  “You’re a lot more childish than usual.”

   “There’s nothing wrong with wanting to be spoiled by my girlfriend,” Ai giggled, nuzzling closer.  She planted a quick smooch on Risa’s lips.  “Come on, we’ll make breakfast together.”

   “Together sounds better than me, myself, and I,” Risa grinned.

   The couple got up from the bed.  Before Ai walked out of the bedroom, Risa whistled loudly.  The idol turned back to have something gray hit her head.

   “Put those on,” Risa ordered.  “Don’t walk around my house short-less; Eri could walk in any time she wants.”

   Ai smiled and started to say something back, but she stopped herself before she annoyed her girlfriend too much.  She obediently put on the shorts, took Risa’s hand, and walked out of the room.

   When they arrived in the kitchen, the bean shuffled over to the refrigerator and took out two eggs.  She walked over to the pantry to get the black frying pan and placed it on the stove.  She turned the switch to bring out the blazing fire.

   “Ai, could you get the spatula from the counter for me?” Risa requested, cracking the eggs into the pan.

   “Sure,” the idol answered.  She got the cooking tool and placed it next to the stove.

   “Thanks,” Risa said, washing her hands in the sink.  She grabbed her long hair and twirled it around on top of her head.  She removed the hair-tie from around her wrist and secured the bun.

   “Nee, Risa,” Ai called, looking into the refrigerator.  “I see strawberries; can I have some?”

   “Yeah, they’re already washed so you can just eat them right away,” Risa answered, concentrating on the sunny-side up eggs on the frying pan.

   The singer removed the clear container full of strawberries from the refrigerator.  She popped open the cover and took the berry into her mouth.

   “Okay, the eggs are done,” Risa announced.  She turned around and put down the plate of eggs on the table.  She walked back around the counter and leaned on it.  “What else can we eat?”

   “I think just eggs and this is fine,” Ai said, holding up a small piece of strawberry.  “You want some?”

   “Sure.” 

   Risa reached for the fruit in the idol’s hand but Ai quickly popped it into her own mouth.  The singer trapped her lover between her arms and kissed her, pushing the strawberry into the younger girl’s mouth.  Risa let out a small whimper as the cold berry hit her teeth, followed by the older girl’s warm tongue.  The fruit was sweet and tasty, just like Ai’s flavor. 

   “Does it taste good?” Ai whispered, smiling.

   “It’s sweet,” Risa answered, blushing.  “I want more.”

   The bean leaned forwards to meet her girlfriend’s lips once again.  Their tongues intertwined, trying to taste each other as much as they could.  Risa just wanted to stay like this forever.  Having Ai in front of her like this was her most treasured moment.  She could truly understand what a wonderful thing it was to have the one you love always beside you.

   Suddenly, the sound of glass shattering echoed in the room.  Ai and Risa broke their kiss, turning around to look at where the disturbance had come from. 

   Two black-haired girls were standing at the entrance of the kitchen.  The younger girl in the front was pale with her eyes wide in shock and her lips trembling.  Her hands were suspended in air; it was she who had dropped the glass plate.  The older girl in the back had her hair in a side ponytail; her eyes also widened but she seemed more in control than the other girl.

   “Sayu!” Risa exclaimed, breaking free of her girlfriend’s embrace.  “You got released from the hospital?  You should’ve called us; Kameha and I could’ve gone to get you!”

   “Risa-chan…” Sayumi said, her voice trembling.  “You… and… Takahashi-san…”

   “Huh?”  The bean looked back at her girlfriend, who had a serious expression on.  She blushed, realizing what her friend had seen.  “Oh… um, yeah.  I didn’t tell you yet, right?  Ai and I are going out.”

   “You’re… going out… with her?” Sayumi asked shakily.  Her eyes were burning with fury now.  Her entire body was trembling with rage.

   “Yeah…” Risa answered, confused by her friend’s reaction.  “Sayumi, are you okay?  Why did you drop the plate?  Now I have to clean this up—”

   “Risa-chan, how could you do this to me?” Sayumi screamed, taking a step back.  Risa looked at her in surprise.  Ai clenched her fists tightly. Junjun pursed her lips.

   “Do what?” Risa asked, completely oblivious.  “Sayumi, what’s wrong?”

   “You… after all the times I’ve confessed my love for you…” Sayumi sobbed, tears of betrayal streaming down her cheeks.  “How did she convince you, huh?  Why did you take her seriously but not me?  Risa-chan, how could you?”

   “Sayumi, I don’t understand—”

   “I love you!” the younger girl cried.  “I love you more than anything else in the world!  But you never even took my feelings seriously… How could you do this to me, Risa-chan?”

   Before the bean could say anything, Sayumi ran out of the house as fast as she could.  Ai gripped at the counter until her knuckles turned white.  Junjun turned to look at the wide-eyed Risa, who was trying to comprehend the situation.

   “You know, Gaki-san,” the panda said quietly.  “I knew you could be oblivious but I didn’t know you could be that insensitive.”

   “Sayumi… she… loved me?” Risa breathed.

   “She still does,” Junjun answered.  “Every single time Shige-san confessed, you never took her sincerely.  Every single one of your empty ‘I love yous’ hurt her.”

   “I… I hurt her?” Risa gasped.

   “So many times,” Junjun replied.  She glared at the awe-stricken girl for a while, and then ran out of the house after the girl she loved.

   Risa leaned against the doorway to hold herself up.  Sayumi had been in love with her the whole time.  Every time she expressed her feelings, she had taken it as a joke, hurting her in the process.  Yet she took Ai seriously and never glanced once at the younger girl.  She had hurt her over and over again…

   “Go after her.”

   Risa turned around to see her girlfriend right behind her.  Ai’s face was smooth and expressionless, but there was still something off about her.

   “You want me to go after her?” Risa whispered.

   “She’s your friend,” Ai explained.  “If you don’t set things right with her now, you’ll regret it later.”

   Risa stared at the idol for a moment; she then kissed her on her cheeks and whispered a word of thanks in her ears.  The bean quickly ran out of the house, shoving her feet into her sneakers in the process.  Ai was left alone in the kitchen, staring down at the broken glass on the floor.

   “Why didn’t she reveal me?” she thought.  “I didn’t expect Sayumin to lose it like that; she could’ve just told Risa everything… so why didn’t she?  What did she have to lose?

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Yes, the happiness is OVER and the angst is HERE :panic:
Get ready for the Main arc of Kokoro no Uta :)

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avii&sig by the wonderful kawaii beam~!

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 76 - (8/13)]
« Reply #585 on: August 14, 2010, 05:44:54 AM »
Sayu is ready to throw punches

the firestorm has come
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 76 - (8/13)]
« Reply #586 on: August 14, 2010, 06:00:57 AM »
D: oh snap...why couldnt the happiness last longer??? and that is true...why didnt sayu reveal ai to risa? unless she'll tell her when risa catches up to her? plus sayu couldnt've gone too far XDD

nice transition from happiness to emoness~!

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 76 - (8/13)]
« Reply #587 on: August 14, 2010, 06:59:30 AM »
now .. there is Sayu ...   :grin:
What a nice chappy ..  :roll:
Can't wait for the next Update ...  :panic: :panic:
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 76 - (8/13)]
« Reply #588 on: August 14, 2010, 07:11:39 AM »
I felt a little bad for Sayu when she witnessed TakaGaki. Even if she's the villain, I can't help but understand when she said Risa never took her seriously. :(

And FINALLY, the main arc of the fanfic is here. :smhid XD
Btw, I meant that Tanakamei is innocent in general. That does not include their private moments. XD

Update soon, as usual. ^^

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 76 - (8/13)]
« Reply #589 on: August 14, 2010, 07:13:51 AM »
Ch75: love = happiness  XD XD XD

Ch.76:
haha... really a nice transition of happiness to emoness~~~
finally, Sayu appear... and I have somehow anticipate she will react so when she learnt about Takagaki going out...
wonder what is the mystery identity of Ai to Risa? What will happen after she learnt about it?  :? :? :?

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 76 - (8/13)]
« Reply #590 on: August 14, 2010, 08:51:05 AM »
Ok so I was expecting to be like "sayu, GTFO"  when she would appear again, but I can't help but feel sorry for her  :cry:

so the angst is closing in 8D  wonder what'll happen next oxo

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 76 - (8/13)]
« Reply #591 on: August 14, 2010, 01:23:18 PM »
Man, Ai is something else to tell Risa to go after Sayu. Is she doing it out of gratitude for the other girl not revealing her to the bean? Either way, I feel that was the right course of action, maybe things will get better instead of worse. Or maybe Sayumi will take the time alone to tear Ai down in Risa's mind by telling her lie.

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 76 - (8/13)]
« Reply #592 on: August 14, 2010, 02:18:39 PM »
Woahh, I missed out on so much today! Two chapters in one day~ awesome job! :cow:
Ch.75: aww, Tanakame's quite cute :) What wowed me was how Reina carried Eri all the back by herself... XD she's quite strong for her small size! :roll:
Ch.76: awww, hehe, takagaki being all lovely and cute~  :wub: mmm... strawberries... mmm, takagaki makeout session  :drool: oh shietttt Sayu!!  :angry:
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Suddenly, the sound of glass shattering echoed in the room.
O_O Lol, at first, I actually thought that Sayu was spying in on them and got so pissed at the sight that she broke the sliding glass door XD or she just so happened to break into the house at the wrong time...
So Sayu was there the whole time, huh? I wonder how she got in there and how long she had waited :P

Yessss, the angst is here!! I'm loving it all~ and good timing too... cuz I've been pretty pissed off recently and wanting to read some of it ;)

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 76 - (8/13)]
« Reply #593 on: August 14, 2010, 05:58:46 PM »
1st TakaGaki aww... :inlove: :inlove:
but then sayu and jun :(
i think ai-chan did the right thing thats gaki-san should run after sayu

would sayu tell gaki-san about ai-chan? :?

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 76 - (8/13)]
« Reply #594 on: August 14, 2010, 07:21:56 PM »
I'm 2 pages behind!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:panic: :panic: :panic: :bleed eyes: :bleed eyes: :panic: :bleed eyes: :bleed eyes: :bleed eyes: :panic:

but at least i got to read 3 chapters in a row~  :P :cow:

Oh my~  :drool: TakaGaki first time was DELICIOUS!!! :lick:  :twisted: I loved every second  :inlove:
So much that I read it 4 times  :shocked .....  XD
Now I'm all worked up for some of my own activities  :roll:  :twisted:

TanaKame scene =  :wub: :wub: :wub:
Reina still trying to be naughty, even when she's exhausted  XD
Loved it! and Eri's sleepyness is so adorable  :yep: :heart:

TakaGaki morning scene is  :wub: :inlove: :drool: :twisted: :heart:
Then, HOLY CRAP!!! SAYU!!!!!  :shocked :shocked
 :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:
Risa finally understands her true feelings  :cry:
Aichan is such a great girl friend for telling her to go after her. Even tho it might reveal her big secret  :bleed eyes:
I also wonder why Sayu didn't just say anything then and there  :huhuh
angst, Angst, ANGST!!!!!!!!  :bleed eyes:

More please  :)
HOLY CRAP!!! SAYU!!!!  :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 76 - (8/13)]
« Reply #595 on: August 15, 2010, 01:20:22 AM »
Childish Ai-chan is so cute! :mon lovelaff:

Oh noes!!! :shocked: Sayu and Jun! :mon curtain:

I don't like this, I don't like this! :mon whine: (uhhh...I just didn't like what happened, but this is good!!!) :twothumbs

So Sayu didn't tell Gaki everything because she probably did something wrong, huh? :mon dunno: :twisted:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 76 - (8/13)]
« Reply #596 on: August 15, 2010, 04:41:12 AM »
Spoiled Aichan is adorable! <3

I wonder why Sayu didn't say anything right then and there, though. Nonetheless, BRING ON THE ANGST I hope everything works out all right. :D

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 76 - (8/13)]
« Reply #597 on: August 15, 2010, 06:02:07 PM »
Ahhhhh! Catch up time!  :P
Sorry for falling behind... I kind of fell into a bit of a depression after the grad announcements, on top of uni work building up. But back to do a bit of commenting, a huh  :)

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@Beecubed: I LOVED reading your comment, I'm a sucker for long comments
 

I think everybody is a sucker for long comments  XD
I'm glad you enjoyed it though  :thumbsup

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your words really encouraged me, thank you for taking the time to write that up!

You're welcome and really, it's my pleasure. I love writing up comments.  :wub: I don't know if that's strange, but I really really do.  :yep:
And that's exactly one of the reasons why I love writing comments... because I love seeing my authors being encouraged to continue to write! For me and for everybody else supporting her/him!


Chapter 70:

HOLY COW... Tanakame  :bleed eyes:
In front of Ai-chan too?!?!? That's... so shamelessly hot  :inlove:
These guys are so touchy feely, Reina, you bad-ass, can't you wait a bit and get yourselves a room! Holy...  :fap
(I'm beginning to suspect Reina may be a nympho... or maybe Eri is really that irresistible..  :drool:)

Only adding to the burning fires of desire between TakaGaki, I'm sure, so I guess in a way they're helping  :twisted:
AND yet another thank you to Eri, for forcing Gaki to bring along lingerie... I'm loving the conversation going on between TakaGaki, the tension is extremely delicious, I'm lapping it all up  :love:
I really can't wait to keep reading... onto the next chapter!


Chapter 71:

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“Is it one, two, three then take the towel off, or is it one, two, and take it off at three?” the turtle contemplated seriously.

I echo Ai's question: does it really matter?  XD

I wonder if Ai knows what's really on her bean's mind... I think she might  :oops: awww, it's so cute, Gaki's uneasiness. But it's just making me even more excited, knowing that a perv is to come pretty soon... squeeeee...

ReinAi water fight. The rougher, the yummier.  :w00t:

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“And you look pretty astounding in that bikini, my dear.  I’m almost considering taking you back to the hotel so nobody else would be able to see you in that.”

I'm pretty sure Ai had something else in mind when she said this... 

:grin:

You're only delaying the inevitable, the perv is still coming, I'm not worried... I have to say, the tease itself is pretty thrilling itself!  :twothumbs


Chapter 72:

*Moments under the towel*

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Gaki-san GO!  :onioncheer:

...

 :O

Oh nos, poor Gaki, she needs to realise she can't skip out on sleep, no matter how uneasy/nervous/excited she may get. Though I don't blame her... if you're about to be bedded by someone like Ai-chan, you're bound to be all  :panic: :panic: :panic:


Chapter 73:

KIIIIIITTTAAAA~~~!!!!!!!!!

OH MY GAH.

TakaGaki yeaaaaahhhhh  :farofflook: :luvluv2:

I really loved the mood you set at the beginning, it was so mushy romantic... then quickly sped along to sexy sexy... wow  :shy1:
I didn't expect Gaki to the be one speeding things up either.  :shakeit:

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“You’re in big trouble now,” Ai smirked.  “I don’t think I can hold myself back after you’ve seduced me like this.”

*whispers*: No, Ai, please don't... for all our sakes...  :bow:

............



 :mon blood:


Is it Ai's first time too? I wasn't aware of that  :nervous I thought she was an experienced woman! That was the impression I got in the beginning anyway...
But wowwowoowowow... for somebody who is doing it for the first time, Gaki-san sure confident   :inlove:

Very very hot and sexy and everything I expected it to be. All sorts of win this chapter was.
 :wub:

I don't think we'll ever become immune to your pervs...

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Chapter 74:

The "morning-after" talk can be so  :wriggly:

I'm falling more and more for TakaGaki here. I hope they don't get all perv-maniac like TanaKame have... we need a good balance  :lol:

Soooooo sweet.

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“Can we talk about last night,” Ai sighed, “and how wonderful it was?”

 :mon cute:

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  “You got pretty close?” Risa shrilled, shooting up again.  “With who?  When was this?”

   “Sweetheart, you need to calm down,” Ai laughed, pulling her girlfriend back down to the bed again.  “I got close with her, but nothing happened.  We’re okay now.”

   “You still see each other?” Risa asked again, automatically shooting up like a jack-in-the-box.

   “If you get up one more time, I’m going to pin you down so you won’t be able to move an inch,” Ai threatened, pulling her girlfriend towards the bed again.  “Yes, we see each other everyday.”

 :rofl:

Epic TakaGaki moment.  :wub:
You keep serving up such good stuff... I'm impressed.  :heart:


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“It’s Reina.”

:shock:

OK, I admit I wasn't expecting that...

Ohhhhh, so that's what happened. Damn.

Love how it ends. And I'm happy for you to leave it at that, my imagination can take over now  :twisted:


Chapter 75:

I love how Eri is always the one being pampered in fanfics  :nervous She's just that kind of person, isn't she. Adorable  :heart:

I totally HEART gentle, caring Reina... please keep up with writing her this way. Sexy, mischievous Reina is good too, but we need more of this Reina, seriously. Gorgeousness.  :thumbsup

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“But I can’t see you while I sleep,” Eri mumbled.  “I missed you.”

The things that spill from our turtle's mouth...   :nya:

And then the naughty Reina appears... she can't stay away for too long, can she. Hehe.

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Absorbing each other’s warmth, the couple slowly drifted off to dreamland where they had promised to meet.

AHHHHHHHHH, so 'effing cute!!!  :mon lovelaff:

I honestly find it hard to pick which couple I love more! They're both so awesome! You're so awesome!

Everything's just so fine and dandy, bring on the Sayumi I say! *rubs hands together* I'm not evil, just that I've accepted what's to come and I think we need to shake things up a bit!  :D


Chapter 76:

Sweet Jesus, a childish wanting-to-be-spoiled Ai-chan is so my kind of thang  :inlove: Again, the fact that you can dish out so much fluff chapter after chapter and still have everybody melting is pretty amazing... damn SarangAi, you're doing a mighty fine job  :thumbsup

Strawberry kisses  :yep:


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Ai and Risa broke their kiss, turning around to look at where the disturbance had come from. 

   Two black-haired girls were standing at the entrance of the kitchen.


 :mon wtf:

And so you have shaken up the story... let's see what's going to happen now.

I'm EXCITED!

I'll have you know that I love me some angst, so you bring it on in tidal waves if you can, I'll savour every bit of it. Because really, you don't know what's good unless you experience the bad, I can only imagine going through heartache and the like will only solidify TakaGaki's feelings for each other, even if it hurts us all in the process to read about it. I'm also guessing that TanaKame will be left alone until the end? Seems about right.

Ai-chan... how strong she must be to let her bean go like that, knowing fully well what kind of person Sayu is.  :cry:

Looking forward to the next updates... I'm sure we're in for some good stuff pretty soon...  :twothumbs

Thanks for everything you've written again so far. Such entertainment.  :love:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 76 - (8/13)]
« Reply #598 on: August 15, 2010, 07:28:48 PM »
My jaw literary dropped when it was sayu who dropped the glass i think she's too shock to revel anything bout ai

well... least for now ><

can't wait for the next chapter

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 76 - (8/13)]
« Reply #599 on: August 16, 2010, 05:17:39 AM »
@kurosawa87: oh yes, firestorm is a good word :)

@kawaii beam: ahh so the new question arises :P

@Thor87: yes, SAyu will make a frequent entrance now XD

@sapphire: yeah, Sayu's character is supposed to give you split feelings :(

@yellow: oh Questions are very good to have :D

@Ada: the angst will get angst-ier XD

@rndmnwierd: Ai's in a pretty confused state right now; she thought she knew the whole story but Sayu's action is confusing her :?

@xanimefreak13x: well, she just entered and saw the love of her life making out with someone else XD

@fallenxangel: we'll see~ :P

@Swtme03: AH I missed your comments! XD

@kano-chan: you're on the right track :twisted:

@xrainbowgumdropsx: oh the Angst will appear... as for the ending, we'll see :twisted:

@Beecubed: I loved your "essay"  XD  it encouraged me a lot again, i'm glad that you're enjoying all this... it makes everything seem worthwhile (and that goes to all the otehr commenters too) :D :wub:

@lonewind: next chapter is HERE :lol:


Sorry for the lack of updates yesterday... it was my birthday so I was chilling with some friends XD
But i'm back and ready to roll~ :twothumbs

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Chapter 77

   The crying girl ran down the streets with no desire to stop.  People stared at her for a good reason; her long jet-black hair was flowing behind her and her skin was deadly pale.  She wanted to run far away, but she knew she had to stop soon.  After all, her body was weaker than most people’s and if she overexerted herself, she could wind up right back in the hospital.

   She crossed the street when the light turned green and stopped to catch her breath.  She shuffled over to the inner part of the street so as not to disturb anybody walking by.  Somebody crossed the street and stopped in front of her.  The girl could tell who it was without even looking.

   “What am I going to do, Junjun?” Sayumi sobbed.  “Risa-chan… she already has someone!  Where does this leave me?”

   “Shige-san, please don’t cry,” the panda pleaded.  “When you cry, it drives a stake through my heart.

   “But I love her so much!” Sayumi yelled, tears streaming uncontrollably down her pale cheeks.  She wrapped her arms around her caretaker and cried into her shoulders.  “I don’t know what to do anymore!  She never took me seriously and now it’s too late!”

   “Shige-san…”  Junjun embraced the weak girl in an effort to console her.  “You have no reason to cry over someone like her.  Why can’t your love be for me?  I would never make you cry…

   “Sayu!”

   The two girls turned around to spot Risa, her long brown hair ruffled in the wind.  She watched the light turn green and crossed the street.  Sayumi looked down at the ground.  Junjun bit down on her lips.

   “I want to be the one for her,” she thought.  “But the person Shige-san needs isn’t me.

   The panda patted Sayumi’s shoulder and smiled gently.

   “I’ll wait for you at the end of the street,” she whispered.  She shot a glare at the out-of-breath bean and walked away.  Risa straightened her back and looked at her sniffling friend.

   “Sayumi, we need to talk.”

   “There’s nothing to talk about,” the bunny mumbled.  “You clearly made the contrast between me and Takahashi-san; it’s too late for me now.”

   “Listen to me, Sayu,” Risa insisted.  “You’re my best friend along with Eri; I’ve known you since we were children.  I don’t want anything to get in the way of our friendship.”

   “That’s why you’re rejecting my feelings?” Sayumi shrilled, looking up to reveal her red face.

   “No,” Risa whispered.  “I’m rejecting your feelings because I’m in love with someone else.  I’m sorry Sayumi, but I’ve never thought of you as more than a friend.  But you’re still precious to me and I don’t want to lose you.”

   “But why her?” the younger girl cried.  “Why can’t it be me?  I met you first and I’ve known you longer… why isn’t it me?”

   “Time doesn’t matter in emotions like this,” Risa explained.  “For me, there’s only Ai.  I’m sorry.”

   “Risa-chan,” Sayumi sobbed, grabbing the older girl’s hands, “please don’t do this to me.  I need you; please don’t leave me like this…”

   “I’m so sorry,” Risa murmured.

   She pulled her hands out of the crying girl’s grasp and quickly walked across the street while the light was still green.  Sayumi’s eyes were wide for a moment as she tried to grasp the situation: the girl she loved had just rejected her.  She was going to leave her forever.  They would never be together…

   “Risa-chan!” the black-haired girl screamed.  “Please don’t go!  Risa-chan!”

   Sayumi ran into the road as the light turned red.  Junjun called her name from the edge of the street but she couldn’t hear.  The honking of a car resonated, followed by a familiar scream.  Risa turned around to face the horrible scene on the black pavement.  She saw another girl run into the street from the opposite side.  She also dashed into the road, screaming the name of the one she subconsciously started to pray for.

   “SAYUMI!”

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Sorry this is such a short chapter :nervous

This fic is about to get a WHOLE lot more serious :bleed eyes:

 :byebye: :sleep:

avii&sig by the wonderful kawaii beam~!

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