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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 91 - (8/25)]
« Reply #740 on: August 25, 2010, 03:12:08 PM »
O M G

SarangAi, you update too quickly, my friend  :nervous
With school and work I can't possibly catch up to your speed of updating, but then again I'm not taking this as a bad thing  :lol:
I just don't have the power right now to sit through and comment on each individual chapter.. not when I'm feeling this ill  :cry:

I was actually expecting a lot more angst between TakaGaki, why didn't you make them suffer more?!  :twisted:  I was seriously expecting Sayumi evil to reign another 20+ chapters or so, but no, that wasn't quite the case. You couldn't stretch it out anymore? You know, the pain and the heartache? Aw dang, maybe it's just me and my twistedness >.<
The moment when Ai begins feeling Risa up against her will...  :OMG: that really gave me a shock, I wasn't quite anticipating that to happen. But it was oddly enjoyable to read. I hope I'm not coming across as some monster  :sweatdrop: but you know, I was sure deep down Risa loved Ai and that kind of thing to happen between them wasn't so bad.. it was just the rough, ruthless manner in which Ai carried out her actions..

Anyways, like a lot of people have commented, things were really starting to unravel like a K-drama.. and usually for me, that would be a bad thing because I'm kind of sick of K-drama drama, it's usually unrealistic and been recycled to death. Damn that Sayu. Is she even human?! I can't understand how somebody can be that selfish, that BLIND to the feelings of the people around her. How she ever managed to be that evil and inconsiderate (from a young age!) is beyond me. She's probably Satan's child in disguise  :twisted: OK, she's not really that bad.. but you know what I mean...

But the drama was oddly satisfying to read here, when Gaki-san was able to catch all those nasty secrets Sayumi spilled to Eri, the confrontation, finally everything being resolved between TakaGaki. That was SO sweet. Ai-chan...

And the perv...  :on bleed:
I especially enjoyed the conversation they had leading up to the smoking smex, can't get enough of these two!  :heart: :heart:
Thank you for your pervs, they're awesome and I always look forward to reading them!  :bow:
(why wasn't there a TanaKame version though? xD)

And this latest chapter...
 :shocked: :shocked: :shocked:
I think it was kind of expected that Sayu would do something like that, considering all her, 'I can't live without you!' whining.  :thumbdown:

But TANAKA!
 :bow: :bow: :bow:
The way she stormed into the room and gave Sayu a piece of her mind (with Ai-chan clinging onto her like that, added hotness)..  :mon crazyinlove:
YOU GO GIRL!

But now, I'm just...  :angry:
You better not have killed of Jun! Or maybe, you have... and that means Sayu having to live with the guilt for the rest of her life...
But I still prefer Jun to stay alive and Sayu finally coming to her senses and spending the rest of her life making it up to Jun  :twothumbs

Anyways, THANK YOU for your updates, and really can't wait to find out what is going to happen next!

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 91 - (8/25)]
« Reply #741 on: August 25, 2010, 04:25:11 PM »
Don't kill Junjun now :cry:

Hope Sayu Realize something...*cough*Like she like Junjun*cough*

And Reina FTW~ XD

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 91 - (8/25)]
« Reply #742 on: August 25, 2010, 07:18:04 PM »
No comment replies again... I started to write out the replies and then I realized I was spoiling everything in this chapter XD

But it all came down to two things, I think:
1) you're all worried about Junjun  :cry:
2) Reina is KICKASS  XD

Onwards~

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Chapter 92

   The sunlight shines on the girl who just interrupted her thoughts by walking into her room.  She has a black stool tucked under her arm; next to her is a keyboard on wheels.  Her hair is jet black, just like her own.  Her eyes grow wider and wider… she utters a word… beautiful…

   It makes the patient happy.  Just for a split second, she forgets about the person she was originally thinking of, and concentrates on this visitor.  She seems kind of spaced out, stuttering like that.  But her eyes are sincere, especially when she plays the piano.

   Michishige Sayumi-san? My name is…  Nice to meet you.

   Michishige-san…

   Sayumi…

   “Sayumi!”

   “Look, she’s waking up!  Sayumi!”

   The black-haired girl opened her eyes, waking up from her dream.  She could see familiar faces, looking down at her happily yet worriedly.

   “Risa-chan…?  Eririn…?”

   “Thank goodness you’re alright!” Eri sighed, smiling.  Her eyes were a little puffy; had she been crying again?

   “… What happened?” Sayumi moaned, slowly getting up from the comfy bed.  Surprisingly, nobody tried to stop her.

   “Do you remember, Sayu?” Risa said quietly.  “You fell from the third story and blacked out.  You’ve been asleep for a whole 24 hours.  You have some cuts here and there, but no serious injuries.  The doctors were surprised too; you should be okay in a couple days.”

   “Thank goodness…” Eri mumbled again.

   Sayumi rubbed the side of her head, feeling a constant buzz inside.  Her muscles were a little tight but not painful.  How could she have fallen from the third story and not die?  Much less, how could she get away without a single injury?  She gasped sharply.

   “Junjun!” she suddenly yelled, the previous event and her dream washing over at the same time.  “W-where is she?  Where’s Junjun?  Is she okay?”

   Neither of the girls answered her.  Risa looked away to the side while Eri bit down on her bottom lip.  The black-haired girl could feel the anger rising in her.

   “Where is she?” she shrilled.  “Why aren’t you answering me?  She’s not… she’s not…”

   “Lower your voice, Sayumi,” Eri hushed, putting a hand on the bunny’s shoulder.  “Junjun’s not dead, don’t worry.”

   “Then where is she?” the younger girl growled.

   “She’s in a different room, a couple doors down the hall,” Risa answered.  “She’s had medical attention; the doctors are doing their best.”

   “Doing their best to do what?” Sayumi shouted.  She needed to know the exact condition this girl was in!

   “Sayumi, she was underneath you when you two fell,” Eri said quietly.  “She basically cushioned your fall, so all the shock went to her.  A couple bones broken, here and there, but to be honest… that’s the least of her problems.”  Eri leaned in a little closer to her cousin, as if to console her.  “Sayumi… Junjun suffered a severe head injury.  She’s asleep right now.”

   “Like… a coma?” the younger girl whispered.

   “We don’t want to think of it that way,” Risa cut in.  “A coma is usually untreatable, but the doctors aren’t sure whether Junjun will be able to wake up or not.  All we can do is hope now.”

   Sayumi exhaled sharply as she looked down at her hands.  They were clean now, but she could still remember the way it was covered in blood.  This girl… she had thrown herself off a building to save her.  She may never be alive again because of her. 

   “I want to see her,” Sayumi suddenly declared.  “I want to see Junjun.”

   “Sayumi, I think you should rest for a little longer—”

   “No, I want to see her now!”

   “I’ll take you.”

   The three friends turned to where the voice came from.  The two High-Queen members were standing by the door; how long had they been there?  The younger idol grabbed the wheelchair in the corner and kicked it open.  Her face was expressionless.

   “You… you’ll help me?” Sayumi asked, her eyes widening.

   “The need to be with the one who saved you…” the yankii murmured, glancing at her girlfriend, “I know that feeling.”

   Eri smiled a little at her lover’s words.  Risa looked worriedly at her own girlfriend, who gave her a smile to comfort her; she obviously had some sort of fate in her partner.  Sayumi stayed frozen for a couple seconds, but determined that Reina was being sincere.  So with her friends’ help, she slowly got up from the bed and limped towards the wheelchair.  After she sat down, Reina herself wheeled her out of the room followed by the other girls.

   After passing by a couple doors, they managed to find the room with the correct nameplate.  Ai opened the door and walked in first, followed by the patient.  There was a nurse sitting on the chair by the bed, writing something on a clipboard.

   “Excuse me,” Ai said, causing the nurse to look up, “we’re Junjun’s friends.  May we stay here for a while?”

   “Yes, I was just writing down some last comments,” the nurse replied, smiling.  “Try not to be too loud.”

   The young nurse got up and started to walk out of the room.  But before she closed the door behind her, she said one more thing.

   “By the way, the doctor thinks that the patient may be able to hear us, although she may not respond.”

   After the door clicked close, Reina wheeled Sayumi over to the side of the bed.  There was an oxygen mask over Junjun’s mouth while gauze wrapped her head.  Her eyes were closed as though she was sleeping; she had actually never looked more peaceful in her entire life, compared to the pained expression she always had. 

   Sayumi stared at the silent girl for a while with shocked eyes.  Then, she slowly reached out and took her cold hand.  She opened her mouth to say something, but nothing came out.  There was definitely something she needed to say… some sort of regret, repent… But nothing came out except for tears.

   “You idiot!” she cried out.  “You… Why would you sacrifice yourself for someone like me?  Even though I never paid attention to you… Why didn’t you just give up on me…?”

   Sayumi bent down and pressed her forehead against Junjun’s hand as she continued to cry.  This girl was always there, trying to find some way to make her happy.  This girl had always loved her, even after she found out the truth.  This girl always knew that she could be so cruel… but she still risked her own life for her.  Sayumi needed to say something… needed to say…

   “I’m sorry…” she whispered hoarsely, still sobbing.  “I’m so sorry…”

   Suddenly, the black-haired girl felt a slight pressure on her hand.  Something was squeezing her.  She looked up at the sleeping girl’s face but detected no change.  But… she was holding her hand.  Junjun was gently squeezing her hand right now; she could hear her.

   “Junjun…” Sayumi breathed.  She squeezed back as she pressed her face against the Chinese girl’s hand again.

   Risa and Eri silently watched their friend repent with mixed feelings.  On one hand, it seemed as though Sayumi had changed, which was good.  But on the other, she had changed at a price.  The two singers silently walked to the door and stood there, waiting.  Ai gently knocked Reina’s head with a fist.

   “You did a good job,” she smiled.

   “I still don’t like her,” the yankii grumbled.

   “That’s okay,” Ai grinned.  “I’m still not that fond of her either.”

   Soon, the black-haired girl’s crying started to fade away, as she just stared at her savior with blank eyes.  Eri placed a hand on her shoulder.

   “Sayu, I think you should go back now.”

   “No,” the bunny mumbled, “I want to stay here.”  She can hear me… She can wake up…

   “Let her stay,” Risa said.  She gently patted the younger girl’s head.  “I’ll see you around, Sayumi.”

   “We’ll visit again,” Eri said, bending down to give her a quick kiss on the cheek. 

   The two friends slowly walked towards the exit, where their respective lovers were waiting.  Before they could close the door, the hoarse voice of the young girl stopped them.

   “I’m sorry.”

   All four girls turned around to see Sayumi’s back; it seemed as though she hadn’t moved, but there was still something different.  She turned her head a little bit, just enough to reveal the side of her face.

   “I’m… sorry,” she repeated.  “And… thank you.”

   Eri blinked a couple times before realizing what her cousin had just said.  She smiled and ran back to the younger girl and gave her a big hug.  Risa smiled a little as Ai patted her head.  Reina watched the entire scene with no expression whatsoever.

   The turtle skittered out of the room and closed the door behind her.  Reina immediately wrapped her arm around her waist.  Ai gave a kiss on the bean’s head.

   “We did good, didn’t we?” Risa grinned.

   “Mm-hm,” Ai answered.  “I’m proud of you.”

   “Now, all we have to do is pray for Junjun,” Eri said, smiling sadly. 

   “She’ll wake up,” Reina said.  “Considering all the things she’s put up with so far, this may not be the worst.  She’ll definitely wake up.”

   “And we’ll keep believing that,” Ai said.  “Come on, let’s get you guys home.”

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So the bunny is slowly gettin a heart :lol:



btw guys, I'm starting to brainstorm a little for my next fic (I know, fast, right?) XD
I don't know when I'm going to start it after Kokoro no Uta is over, but I'd like to have all your opinions beforehand :)

So I'm setting up a poll so you can vote for your favorite couple!!! XD
The couple with the most votes will be the main, the next largest amount of votes will be the sub-main... and so on :twothumbs
show some MoMusu love~ XD


 :byebye:
« Last Edit: August 25, 2010, 07:26:12 PM by SarangAi »

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 91 - (8/25)]
« Reply #743 on: August 25, 2010, 10:28:19 PM »
I'm seeing Takagaki in the future, but I'm actually hoping for Tanagaki.  :lol: I really love both pairings! whatever comes next, I'm sure it will be great.


Unless it's RenAi and GakiKame... :mon cweepy: :mon uggh:

Whew! Jun's not dead! That's a load off. And Sayu seems to be slowly, slowly coming around. Now, how are you going to finish up the story? I'm excited to see the next wight chapters!

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 91 - (8/25)]
« Reply #744 on: August 25, 2010, 10:35:26 PM »
Anyway i choose TakaGaki :lol: :lol: :lol: hope TakaGaki would win :twothumbs

It's a good nothing happened to Junjun :sweat::
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“Sayumi, she was underneath you when you two fell,” Eri said quietly.  “She basically cushioned your fall, so all the shock went to her.  A couple bones broken, here and there, but to be honest… that’s the least of her problems.”  Eri leaned in a little closer to her cousin, as if to console her.  “Sayumi… Junjun suffered a severe head injury.  She’s asleep right now.”
lets say nothing bad :sweatdrop:

and now come JunSayu :cool1:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 91 - (8/25)]
« Reply #745 on: August 25, 2010, 10:50:47 PM »
I had to throw one in for TanaKame :D ......but I would love to see RenAi written by you. I like the thin line they seem to be treading in Kokoro no Uta. I kind of wanted to see Risa have a bit of a go at Reina's 'past history' with Ai, the morning after she heard about it from Ai herself XD
It would be refreshing to see a new pairing in your new fic (as long as it's not GakiKame or KameShige :smhid)


Junjun is still in a coma. Maybe that will be a blessing in disguise for her, maybe she'll wake up and turn out that she doesn't remember anything so she and Sayu can start anew :D

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 92 - (8/25)]
« Reply #746 on: August 25, 2010, 11:13:14 PM »
YAY!!!!!! >o< *fangirl scream* jajajajaja

ThankGod (SarangAi) JunJun's still alive =3
I think it's time for Sayu to taking care of her.

TakaGaki & TanaKame =) I love those pairs >o<!!!!!

look forward it ^^


God!! She knows she's HOT!

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 91 - (8/25)]
« Reply #747 on: August 25, 2010, 11:19:14 PM »
Wow! I missed so many chapters! :banghead: Sorry for the lack of posts/comments. :sweatdrop:

Anyways..

Ch. 86
:mon cry: But I'm relieved that Gaki wasn't entirely against what Ai-chan did. :mon firecrack:
Go Kame-chan! talk some sense into the EBIL Sayu! :mon blowhorn:

Ch. 87
Grrr!!! That Sayu! Aaahhh! I can't belive that girl! :mon headbang: But yay! Gaki heard everthing. :mon money:

Ch. 88
LOL! Thanks to Reina, Gaki had to run extra laps. :hiakhiakhiak:
and Yes! yes! yes! Everything is clear! :cow: That made my day! :gmon flowers: and grr...You better keep that promise! :mon tantrum2:

Ch. 89
Awww~!! That little Tanakame moment. :mon inluv:
And yes! This is going to be great! I wonder if Sayu would change and get together with Jun. :D

Ch. 90
Oh My Gosh... :mon speechless: :mon bleed2: :imdead: **speechless**

Ch. 91
Hehe... Looks like everything is coming together.. :w00t: except for the fall of Jun. :cry:
Reina talked some sense into that Sayu! Amazing! :onioncheer:

Ch. 92
Yay! Someone like Sayu can change! :on ksweat: Wooo! Jun would definitely wake up! :mon determined:

Awesome chapters, by the way! :farofflook:  :twothumbs

And I agree about your story! :thumbsup It's one of the best fanfic I've ever read! :w00t: :bow: :mon fyeah:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 91 - (8/25)]
« Reply #748 on: August 26, 2010, 01:01:42 AM »
catching up with comments time~ sorry, if it's all over the place! I just wrote down everything and didn't check it over.  :nervous

Ch. 83 : OMG, song fic! This chapter is sooo awesomely perfectly well written! It was so sad T^T tears ended up rolling down my cheeks because of it. I think if I hadn't taken a break from the angst and just continued from before I wouldve ended up bawling instead XD

Ch.84: Lol, Junjun standing in the corner seems kinda creepy to me, like stalker status much? or a bodyguard...lol. ARGH, SAYU :angry: Oh, and I'm loving Eri in this chapter :)

Ch.85:
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“I don’t like this!  This isn’t the Ai I know!”
Gosh darn! You know how much I like possessive Ai, right? :twisted: mmm, she even marked her territory. this chapter was MEGA AWESOME! I was actually waiting for something like this to happen soon, but mann, that was legittt~ :on_hot: too bad Risa. XD sorry, I'm just sadistic like that :roll:

Ch.86: :cry: aww, Risa is such a sweet and caring girl. She can just totally cheat on Sayu with Ai, but she's so dang awesome being faithful and all. :sweatdrop: To act like she has in a situation like that, takes a lot of strength and courage, especially when her true love is right in front of her eyes.  :oops: Mega props to her!

Ch.87: OH SHIZZ~! :shocked Kame was in love with Risa?!?!?!  :O love hexagon alert~ aww mann, Eri's story... it hurts...  :cry: (Heh, this sounds like a really good fic idea! Maybe turn it into a prequel? after you finish this :)) ACK, Sayu knew? Wow, she's more evil than I thought.
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“The one who separated Ai-chan and Risa-chan,” Sayumi said, “… was me.”
I KNEW IT!  :thumbsup it couldn't have been as simple as Aichan just leaving cuz she was mad or else why would everyone want to keep all hush-hush about it! *reads Sayu's explanation* Oh, hmm, yeah, it was pretty simple. :P I thought Sayu had some really evil plan up her sleeve even back then, but I guess not.  XD WAIT, ACK, something's not connecting in my brain... so how did Ai find out about all this? and why is it still a secret @__@ I think I need to go reread... I'm lost  XD been away for too long playing games...
*Risa walks in*
OH SNAPS~ b*tch fight time~~  :panic: :panic: :cow: I totally did not expect that to happen!
*Risa runs out*
Aww, darnnit, no b*tch fight :(
Poor Eri...  :cry:
That was ONE INTENSE CHAPTER!  :panic: GOOD JOB!  :cow:

Ch.88: I LOL'd at Risa throwing her phone on the ground and then picking it up again. :lol: nice use of comic relief there!  :)
*Risa running around* dang that girl has a lot of energy! She's so frantic... over energized bunny status XD It's sooo funny trying to picture her like that, hehe.
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“Oh, I know you, Niigaki-san!” the lady said brightly, clapping her hands together.  “Your songs are very nice!”
LOL at the DFA lady! More comic relief there? AHAHA. Awesome stuff.  :twothumbs
*Risa running around again:shocked wow~ over energized indeed. or just really impatient to see someone  :fap
*Risa running around yet again" OMG, I think I'm getting tired for her here @__@ dang, you go girl!
Cute Aigaki scene FTW~~  :wub:

Ch.89: Reina ditching work for Eri  :wub: w00t~ and aww, Gakikame hug~
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“Not that I’m not digging the sweet moment,” Ai said slowly
LOL~ Ai, you're just jealous  :smhid
Ai being Ai... :thumbsup taking charge of the situation.

Ch.90: OSOI YO~ dang Aichan is slowwwww!
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“That kind of thing… it was you HOT, so it doesn’t bother me.”
  :jerk:  ;)
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“I like my natural leader abilities,” the singer joked again.
Heh, you're not the only one that likes then :lol:

Ch.91:
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“If I can’t have you, then I’d rather die!” the black-haired girl screamed back.  “Risa-chan… please, stay with me…”
OMG~ :shocked this totally screams Kdrama to me  :lol:
 :cry: Junjun... so selfless...  :smhid

OMGGGG~ FINALLY done with catching up~!  :cow: Hehe, I will crown Chapters 87 and 91 as like the official Kdrama chapters  :theking lol, it totally felt like I was reading some sort of Kdrama :D I guess it is in your blood, huh? :twothumbs w00t~ Awesome job as always! :mon inluv:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 92 - (8/25)]
« Reply #749 on: August 26, 2010, 02:02:05 AM »
OMG =O

The pull says.. everyone want TakaGaki >o<!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

maybe is cause they are the best pair ever =3

Love is in the air ~


God!! She knows she's HOT!

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 92 - (8/25)]
« Reply #750 on: August 26, 2010, 04:02:59 AM »
Sorry for not commenting on your latest chapters. School has started for me and I'm currently really busy.
I'm so happy that Sayumi is beginning to realize that was she did was wrong.
So sad for Jun though. :cry: I wish she's fine.

I voted for TANAKAMEI! Since you focused more on TakaGaki this time, I really want you to write a good Tanakamei fanfic with a strong plot. Please please please let it be Tanakamei!!!!!

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 92 - (8/25)]
« Reply #751 on: August 26, 2010, 06:22:48 AM »
@rndmnwierd: lol not a GakiKame fan myself, but I still love all of MoMusu so... XD

@fallenxangel: yup~ I don't like killing off my characters, unless they're dead before the story even starts XD

@aussie: Yeah, I thought it would be refreshing too but it looks like i might stick with the same couples... :nervous

@Haruka: lol I love Jun, I couldn't kill her XD

@kano-chan: yay~~~ I'm glad you think my fic is good, that means a lot to me~ :twothumbs

@xanimefreak13x: YO I missed you XD I keep on trying to avoid the Kdrama road, but I like drama in general... can't help it :nervous

@Haruka: I know, right? :D

@sapphire: rly??  I feel like I focused on TanaKame much more than I planned for in this fic... maybe it's cuz TakaGaki came second? XD


So I like the responses i'm getting~~ things are getting pretty exiciting, aren't they? :twothumbs

I thought that it would be nice to write about a new couple, but it looks like I may stick with the same pairings... :nervous

Maybe it's because I'm the author so you guys wanna hear another story about the same pairings? Or maybe it's because everybody reading this is a TakaGaki/TanaKame fan, so everybody's voting for them XD

anyway, poll closes on monday, but i might make my decision on sunday... you know you guys can vote twice, right? :D

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Chapter 93

   “Are you kidding me?” Reina growled.  “I’m not singing any of this!”

   The yankii threw down the pile of scores on the table and crossed her arms across her chest.  Risa laughed as she set the music sheets into a neat stack again.

   “Why not?” the bean grinned.  “I think you would sing these songs wonderfully.”

   “I’m not doubting my singing abilities, Gaki, you know that,” Reina shot back.  “You’re doing this on purpose, aren’t you?”

   “Am I?” Risa asked, making a mock gasp.

   “I hate you.”

   “Saying that to me is saying it to your girlfriend,” Risa smirked.  “That’s right~ Kameha and I are just that close.”

   “Good job, that just made me hate you even more,” the yankii said, putting on a fake smile.

   Risa grinned as she watched the yankii idol puff up her cheeks and glare down at the table.  Today was the day for High-Queen to plan their coupling solo songs with their song writer for the next single.  Risa had picked out a couple pieces for Reina that was completely unsuited for the tough yankii, with soft and girly lyrics.  The young singer was obviously frustrated by that.

   “Reina, I picked these songs out for you for a good reason,” Risa explained.

   “Try me,” the younger girl scoffed, rolling her eyes.

   “Look closely at the lyrics of these songs: they’re all about love, isn’t it?  I think it really shows the cute and sweet side of a girl’s love.”

   “… You know that doesn’t convince me one bit,” Reina muttered.

   “I’m not finished,” Risa said, rolling her eyes. “The only time you lose your cold image is in front of Eri.  Don’t try to deny it; you know I’m right.  As much as you show your warm side to her, there still are certain things that you wouldn’t say to her even though it’s how you feel… Are you getting my drift?”

   “Like… mushy stuff?” Reina asked, wrinkling her nose.

   “Yeah: cheesy, corny, whatever,” Risa grinned.  “But they’re all still sweet and different words of love.  Wouldn’t you like to say these kinds of things to Kameha for once?  It would make her pretty happy…”  Reina didn’t answer.  “I’ll take that as a yes.  So here’s my solution: I say sing what you can’t say.”

   “Sing what I can’t say?”

   “Exactly.  These lyrics are exclusively written this way for you to express your feelings for Eri.  You would never be able to say these things to her directly; so I want you to sing it out.  Music is a way of communication, you know.”

   “I know…” Reina mumbled, slowly getting convinced by the bean. 

   She started to slowly flip through the pile of scores again.  Could she truly pull of such songs?  All these ballads and happy songs… If it’s for Eri, could she sing it?  Finally deciding on her choice, the yankii bravely pulled out one score and separated it from the rest.

   “This one,” she said.  “I want to sing this one.”

   “Really?” Risa questioned, raising an eyebrow.  “You… really want to sing this one?”

   “Is there a problem?”

   “No, no problem, it’s just that… this song is the girliest piece I brought.”

   “So?” Reina muttered, blushing a little.  “I like challenging myself.”

   “… You’re really getting into this, aren’t you?” Risa smirked, pulling the score to herself.  “Quite daring, Reina.”

   “Whatever.  We’re done now, right?”

   “Yup,” the bean nodded, packing the stack of scores away in her bag and pulling out another batch.  “Send in Ai-chan for me.”

   “Already present,” a chuckling voice said.

   Risa turned her chair around to see the High-Queen leader standing in the doorway.  Reina walked past her out of the room but something made her stop.

   “I think you’re pretty daring too, Reina,” Ai smirked.  “I’ll be looking forward to this girly song.”

   “Shut up,” the yankii growled.

   The older idol laughed to herself as she closed the door behind her and sat down next to the bean.  Risa frowned at her.

   “You can’t tease her like that,” she scolded.  “You weren’t even supposed to be listening.”

   “I was just trying to make sure she didn’t make a move on my girl,” Ai said innocently.

   “Me and Reina?” Risa scoffed.  “Funny, Ai-chan, very funny.”

   “I try.”

   “So, let’s get down to business,” Risa said, pushing the pile of music to her girlfriend.  “Take a look at these for a while.”

   “Actually,” Ai grinned, pushing the stack of papers back, “I already have a solo song.  Tsunku-san approved it too.”

   “… You do?” the bean asked, confused.  She didn’t remember giving the leader a song.  “How come I don’t know anything about this?”

   “Because I wrote it,” Ai announced proudly.  “And I wanted to keep it a secret from you.”

   “Really?” Risa exclaimed.  “You wrote it?  That’s amazing, Ai-chan!  Let me see!”

   “No way,” the leader shook her head.  “It’s still a secret to you.  You’ll hear it at the Christmas live.”

   “What?” Risa shrilled, frowning again.  “So you’re keeping me in the dark about this until Christmas?  The recording, the producing, and everything?”

   “Yup!” Ai answered cheerfully.  “I only want you to hear the best, and that will be after I complete the recording and get plenty of practice.”

   “I don’t like the sound of this,” Risa muttered.  “I thought I was part of the producing staff.”

   “You are, sweetheart,” Ai cooed, putting an arm around the younger girl.  “But hey, good things take time.  Like us.”

   “…Still corny, but sweet,” Risa grinned, snuggling a little closer to Ai’s chest.

   “As long as you like it,” the older girl murmured.

   “So we’re done now, right?” Risa said, backing away from her girlfriend.  “Let’s get out of here.”

   “No, stay,” Ai pouted, pulling the bean back down to her seat.  “We still have another half an hour in this room… Let’s stay for a while.”

   “What can we do in here?”

   “I don’t know, talk?”  The leader put one cheek on the table and gazed up at her girlfriend.  “Or we could just stay like this.”

   “With you staring up at me like that?” Risa asked, raising an eyebrow.

   “Yeah,” Ai chuckled.  “Or we could do something like this…”

   The leader reached up and pushed her lover’s head down towards herself.  Their lips met together as the warmth and the softness was transferred into each other’s mouths.  Risa let out a quiet moan, enjoying the loving moment.  Ai slowly lifted her head without breaking the kiss, and pulled her girlfriend’s waist closer to her.  Risa got heaved out of her seat and landed on her girlfriend’s lap as Ai broke their lip-lock and buried her head in the younger girl’s shoulder.  The bean smiled as she cuddled a little closer to her girlfriend’s beating heart.

   “Can I ask you something?” Ai whispered.

   “Mm?”

   “Do you ever regret giving up on being a singer?”

   “… There are certain days,” Risa answered quietly.  “Sometimes, I dream of it all over again: being on stage, singing for other people, the never-ending applause…  I do miss it.  But I think I’m pretty happy right now, so I’m okay.”

   “… Do you ever think about wanting to become a singer again?”

   “I can’t; I get stage frights.”

   “Disregarding that fact.”

   “Well… I’m pretty content being a song writer,” Risa answered.  “I still get to have a part in the music world, which I love.  I don’t need to be a singer to truly know this kind of art, you know?  Besides, if I didn’t change my career path back then, I may not have ever met you again.”

   “I don’t know about that,” Ai contradicted.  “I think you still would’ve been able to debut as a singer, and I would’ve chased you down one way or another.”

   “Still, things could’ve been different,” Risa sighed.  “But I’m happy like this… I’m happy with what I do, my friends, and you.”  She craned her neck and gave her girlfriend a quick peck on the cheek.

   “I guess that’s all that matters,” Ai smiled.  “But I still miss your singing.  The CD you sneaked into my bag before wasn’t exactly what I had in mind, though.”

   “Sorry,” the bean mumbled.

   “But it was still nice,” Ai chuckled.  “I like hearing you sing.”

   “I’ll sing some more for you another time,” Risa promised.

   “Yeah…” the leader mumbled.  “Another time…”

   She heard her girlfriend laughing softly as she snuggled a little closer, if that was possible.  Ai leaned on the bean’s head and sighed contently, thinking about the way she could make her wish come true.

   “Maybe… if I do that… Maybe…

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7 chapters left!  This is quite emotional XD

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 93 - (8/26)]
« Reply #752 on: August 26, 2010, 08:05:31 AM »
Hmm, sneaky Risa, she really knows how to pull Reina's strings, especially when it comes to a certain turtle. The kitty didn't stand a chance. :lol:

And lol, sneaky Ai, writing her own song for her lover. I wonder which one it is, there are so many to choose from after all. And aww, Takagaki lovin' is so cute.

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 93 - (8/26)]
« Reply #753 on: August 26, 2010, 08:16:42 AM »
I wonder what Ai has in store for Gaki
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 93 - (8/26)]
« Reply #754 on: August 26, 2010, 09:06:25 AM »
If I were Ai I'd take some of Risa's lines from Never Forget and I'd add some of mine, to make it a duet  :heart:
But idk xD And a song suitable to write for Gaki I think it is Koe  :wub: I'm also curious about what song Reina's gonna sing for Eri  :lol:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 93 - (8/26)]
« Reply #755 on: August 26, 2010, 09:31:43 AM »
Wooo! Cute cute chapter! :mon inluv:

lol....Reina chose the girliest song!  :lol:

I wonder what song Ai-chan wrote for Gaki... :roll: :heart: hmmm....and what is she planning? :mon dunno:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 93 - (8/26)]
« Reply #756 on: August 26, 2010, 01:09:56 PM »
Aww, yay~! you missed me? Hehe, 나도 너 보고싶어! :)
Lol, I never said going down the Kdrama road was a bad thing, did I? XD
Hmm, new fic idea, eh? I'd say either write a prequel to this fic as a side project or another Takagaki + KameShige fic~ or TakaGakiKame love triangle thingy lolz :nervous I like em complicated relationship stories :thumbsup

Ahh, I missed a chapter~!

Ch.92: OMG! Junjun ish alive~ :w00t: I'm glad that Sayu has changed... even though it did take a great shock to her system for that change to happen :roll: I guess people are like that huh? People usually never realize their mistakes until some crazy event pulls them back to reality :smhid

Ch.93: LOL~ Reina got PWNed! :lol: hehe, takagaki alone in a room for 30min... ;) what happened to the hot make-out session XD I wonder what Ai's solo song is gonna be... hmm, yume kara samete? :wub: Me wantz a Takagaki duet~~
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:shocked what is she thinking of doing!?! disbanding High Queen and making a new unit with Risa? Heckk, I'm all in for that! :twothumbs

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 93 - (8/26)]
« Reply #757 on: August 26, 2010, 02:40:29 PM »
Hmm only missed two updates, I think that's a record  :lol:

Chapter 92: I knew your Jun love would win through in the end and you couldn't let her die :sweatdrop: I really like this chapter Sayu reactions towards Jun a great, how she still demands to see Jun and stuff like a child but looking at Jun there in a coma she ralizes her own shortcomings, as you said at the bottom of the chapter the bunny may indeed be getting a heart.....

Chapter 93: Ha Ha Gaki wrapping Reina round her little finger, I wonder what Eri will think of Reina's girly song, Ai wrote a song herself, I wonder what in it that she has to keep it a secrect from Gaki, Ai wants Gaki to sing, I wonder what she's got planned?

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 93 - (8/26)]
« Reply #758 on: August 26, 2010, 03:05:51 PM »
I was clicking the pages for my missed chapters and I just realized I'm 24 PAGES behind :fainted:

I will read them in one sitting, say tomorrow  :D

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 93 - (8/26)]
« Reply #759 on: August 26, 2010, 05:02:23 PM »
thats so cute~ :twothumbs
wonder what song reina sing....cheesy, corny....  :hehehe:
and what song did ai choose? :hee:

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