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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 93 - (8/26)]
« Reply #760 on: August 27, 2010, 04:30:04 AM »
@rndmnwierd: lol  Reina seems to be rly tough, but she's actually quite easy to manipulate XD

@kurosawa87: keep wondering :D

@Ada: LOL but NeverForget is such a personal song in this fic, Ai probably wants to keep that to herself :D

@kano-chan: oh it'll be fun XD

@xanimefreak13x: omg did you just type in effing korean??? THAT'S IS MAD COOL OF YOU YO :cow: XD and High-Queen is way too smexy for me to disband XD

@oddball: lol see what visiting often gets you? a new record~ :yossi: XD

@kRisZ: LOL i haven't seen you around in a LONG time XD  Read, read~ :D

@fallenxangel: well, i'ts cheesy and corny to Reina, considering her character in this story  XD


Sorry for only one update today... I had to leave my house for the entire day to stuff envelopes (don't ask) :nervous

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Chapter 94

   “You know how I really hate music?” Sayumi asked, walking back and forth slowly by the foot of the bed.  “Well, there’s only one song in the world that I like.  Do you want to know what it is?”

   Silence answered her.  After all, the only people in the room were the bunny and her panda friend, who was currently asleep.  The constant beep of the heart rate machine resonated every couple seconds.  Other than that, the room was rather quite whenever Sayumi stopped talking.

   “Mariage D’amour,” the black-haired girl sighed, sitting down on the chair by the bed.  “Do you remember?  It’s that song you played for me when we first met.  Don’t misunderstand; it’s not because you played it or anything.  But it has that sad tone to it, so I like it.  I may actually start to listen to more piano songs from now on.  Doesn’t that make you happy?”

   Sayumi paused and stared at the sleeping girl’s face, her mouth covered with an oxygen mask.  The younger girl smiled a little before taking the panda’s hand.  It had been a week since the accident; Sayumi was able to walk around now, although her body was still weak compared to other people’s.  However, Junjun hadn’t made much progress.  But it was the bunny’s secret that sometimes, when she started talking, the older girl would squeeze her hand a little.  It seemed like the biggest hope in the world that she would wake up.

   “So you better wake up again,” the bunny mumbled.  “You have to play piano for me and introduce to me to some other songs too.  You better wake up…”

   Suddenly, the beeping of the heart rate machine quickened.  Sayumi looked up with an alarmed expression; the beeping got faster and faster until the waves changed from yellow to red. 

   “Somebody, help!” the young girl screamed.  “She’s dying!  Someone help!”

   A doctor and two nurses rushed into the room with a cart after hearing her cries.  The doctor checked the panda’s pulse and nodded at the nurse.  The beeping ceased as the sound changed into a single tone; her heart had stopped.

   “No, Junjun!” Sayumi screamed.  “Please, help her!  Please!”

   “Please step away,” the doctor ordered.  One of the nurses handed him two pads of metal.  The doctor rubbed them together for a moment while the other nurse opened up the panda’s shirt.  He placed the pads on each side of the patient’s chest. 

   “Clear,” one nurse announced.

   A shock of electricity traveled through Junjun’s body, causing her to twitch a little.  But her eyes still did not open and the tone of the heart rate box continued.  Tears started to stream down the bunny’s cheeks as she covered her head with her hands.  The doctor rubbed the two pads again and pressed it against the patient’s body.

   “Clear.”

   Another zap of electricity was sent out, but to no avail.  Sayumi clenched her teeth as she tried to keep her whimpers to a minimum.  The doctor rubbed the pads together again and placed it on Junjun’s chest.

   “Clear.”

   “If you love me, you have to wake up NOW!” Sayumi screamed.

   A jolt of electricity shot through the panda again.  The heart rate box’s tone got cut off with steady beeps again.  The sound of air being sucked out of the oxygen tank was heard, and the doctor let out a sigh of relief.

   “She… she’s okay?” the black-haired girl stuttered.

   “Yes, her heart rate is back to normal,” one of the nurses confirmed.

   “Yes…” the doctor agreed, looking at the machine with a curious expression.  “It’s… too normal.”  He gently placed a hand on the panda’s wrist.  “… Junjun-san?  Can you hear me?”

   Sayumi’s eyes widened as gazed at her savior.  She took her hand again and sat down by the bed. 

   “Junjun…?”

   The patient’s eyelids flickered at the bunny’s voice.  As Sayumi watched in awe as the older girl slowly opened her eyes.  She breathed steadily as she turned a little to look at the girl next to her.

   “Junjun…!” the younger girl breathed. 

   The panda’s expression didn’t change as she seemed to space out.  However, Sayumi knew that Junjun was back… for the squeeze her hand was receiving was stronger than ever before.

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   Four girls dashed down the hallway without any desire to stop.  The turtle got to the destination first, followed by her friend and the two idols.  She pushed the door open and stared at the two people by the bed.  She exhaled sharply as the bean next to her sighed in relief.  The older singer grinned as her partner smiled smugly. 

   “Kamei-san, Gaki-san…” Junjun whispered softly, smiling.  “And Takahashi-san and Tanaka-san too.  Please come in.”

   “I got your call, Sayumi,” Eri grinned, walking towards the bed with her friends.  “Good to see you up again, Jun.”

   “You look great,” Risa chimed in.

   “There’s still some good in the world, huh?” Ai teased.

   “I told you all, didn’t I?” Reina said, flipping her hair.  “This girl won’t go down that easily.”

   “Thank you, everyone,” Junjun chuckled.

   The panda was sitting up, thanks to the bed being able to bend back and forth by remote-control.  Sayumi was sitting on the foot of the bed, her hand still tightly locked around her savior’s.  She stared down at the white sheets, expressionless and wordless.

   “Isn’t this good, Sayu?” Eri asked.  “Now you can repay her back.”

   “I already did, so shut up, Eririn,” the bunny muttered.  Her cheeks blushed into a soft pink.

   “Yeah, um… she already did,” Junjun said, biting down on her lip while smiling.

   “Wait a minute!” the turtle yelled.  “Are you two already—”

   “No, we’re not!” Sayumi interrupted.  “Don’t say stupid things.”

   “We’re really not, Kamei-san,” Junjun confirmed.  “It was just an expression of gratitude, that’s all.”

   “Well… I’m glad things are settled then,” Eri mumbled, stilling eyeing her cousin suspiciously.  “I guess we really just came to see you again, Jun.  Glad to see you up and talking.”

   “Speaking of talking, I have something to say,” Junjun announced, turning serious.  “Takahashi-san, Niigaki-san… I want to apologize for the trouble I’ve caused you.  It was wrong of me to request such a thing to Gaki-san, and I realize my faults.  Please forgive me.”

   “Of course, Junjun,” Ai smiled.  “You had your reasons for doing such things and I understand that.  Anyway, it was kind of my fault too; I shouldn’t have let Risa go so easily like that.  But you taught me how to be persistent in what I truly want… so thank you.”

   “I think you’re the bravest one out of all of us, Junjun,” Risa grinned.  “I respect you for that.  Don’t worry about what happened, okay?  Just concentrate on recovering now.”

   “Thank you,” the panda smiled, touched by the kindness of the couple she had once come in between.  “Thank you so much…”

   “Well, we’ll get going then,” Eri sighed.  “We all kind of ran out in the middle of work; it was a good thing Tsunku-san wasn’t with us in the room.”

   “I would suggest getting back before he does come to check on us, though,” Risa mumbled.

   The four friends headed to the door and walked out of the room.  Before closing the door, Eri gave a quick wave to her cousin and the pianist. 

   “You really do have nice friends, Shige-san,” Junjun sighed.  “You’re very lucky.”

   “I know that,” the bunny mumbled, “… now.”

   “Better late than never,” Junjun grinned.  She squeezed the hand of the girl she loved, allowing Sayumi to look up.

   “Are you sure you’re okay with just staying like this?” the younger girl whispered.  “You would still visit me and hang around me?”

   “Of course I would,” Junjun said, matter-of-factly.  “I can’t leave you no matter how much I try.”

   “… You know I don’t love you.”

   “I know.”

   “And we’re not going out.”

   “I know that too.”  The panda smiled as she leaned in a little closer to the bunny.  “But considering the way you gave me a kiss to repay me back before… Can I take that as allowing me to be a possible choice to you?”

   “… Yes,” Sayumi said quietly, looking down.  “You can think that.”

   “Then I’ll wait for you,” Junjun grinned.  “I’ll wait as long as it takes for you to realize I’m the one for you.  But this time, I won’t just watch from the sidelines.”

   With that, the panda stretched forward and kissed the younger girl’s lips, despite her surprise.  She kissed her several times in an increasingly passionate way before slowly backing away.  Sayumi’s eyes were wide for a moment, but then they narrowed.

   “If you weren’t a patient right now,” she growled, “I would so slap you.”

   “Then I’m pretty happy with my current status,” Junjun joked.  “Maybe I should fall off buildings more often.”

   “That wasn’t funny!” Sayumi yelled, getting up from the bed.  She marched over to the door before the older girl stopped her.

   “You’re leaving me?”

   Sayumi paused for a while.  But then, she turned around and slowly walked back to the patient and sat down on the chair by the bed.  She crossed her arms and pouted.

   “I owe you too much,” she grumbled.  “Just go to sleep.”

   “Will you be here when I wake up?”

   “You have two hours.”

   “Okay, then.”

   Sayumi pressed the remote control to recline the bed back into its original position.  Junjun closed her eyes and sighed contently.  She licked her lips with a smile before drifting off to sleep, hoping to dream of that very sweet taste of the previous kiss.

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Now aren't we all happy~ XD

Btw, I myself am not taking part in this poll but I think TakaGaki and TanaKame are kind neck-to-neck now, aren't they?  :D
I already have a couple possible storylines but the final choice depends on the final couple :)

keep the votes coming~ those who didn't vote yet :twothumbs

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 94 - (8/26)]
« Reply #761 on: August 27, 2010, 04:56:55 AM »
Aww~I like the past two chapters.
I'm really excited to find out what song Reina is going to sing.
Yay~junjun now  has a chance to date Sayu
The past two chapters are so sweet :wub:

Btw, you said we could vote twice...right? XD I don't really see that option cus the poll won't let me vote twice. Oh and also it is right that you wrote more Tanakamei for this fanfic. But as you stated, you wrote more than you thought you would write. That's not considered "a lot" in general. Though, TakaGaki is a very great couple too. I like your writing, that's why I want to see you write Tanakamei. :)

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 94 - (8/26)]
« Reply #762 on: August 27, 2010, 05:06:03 AM »
Oh well they can at least stay friends for now
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 94 - (8/26)]
« Reply #763 on: August 27, 2010, 05:11:15 AM »
So sweet~!!! :heart: JunSayu is cute! :wub: I bet Sayu would fall for Jun soon because she's actually noticing her this time. :inlove:

Oh and I'm totally fine with TakaGaki or TanaKame. :D You're an awesome author for these two couples. :w00t: :thumbsup

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 94 - (8/26)]
« Reply #764 on: August 27, 2010, 05:55:53 AM »
l<nfklsajdnfkdsakb GAH!!!!

Kawaii >o<!!!!!! I have this picture of Sayumi's blushing face in my head looking at her feet squeezing Jun's hand =3

That was very very cute... And that running scene makes me remember when my friend passed out
And I was running a very long hallway with never ending white walls >o<... so frustraiting >_>...
And when I reach her room.. she was there... so beauty... so angelic... sleeping peacefully... with her boyfriend by her side >_>... damn bastard XD

But well... it was a great chapy XD
I Like it pretty much =3
And I wonder how are the preparatives for their solo going on =O?

Cool ~
time to sleep >o<


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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 94 - (8/26)]
« Reply #765 on: August 27, 2010, 07:46:07 AM »
Wow... three chapters behind...again... :smhid
I'm failing as a reader!! :gyaaah:

BUT OMG!!!! :w00t:
I totally love how sayu is now!! :shocked She's still trying to be evil, but she finally gets it!!
Now that I think about it...her and Reina are a lot alike, aren't they?  :huhuh
Ahh well  :roll:...I love it!!  :love:

I can't wait to see what these two solo songs are gonna be!!  :mon lovelaff:
Sounds to me like more CUTENESS!!!!!  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

Sorry for the short comment  :cry:
and lack of Emos...  :mon emo:
I've been so busy lately, I'm almost going insane  :mon ehh:
I can't wait for more cute  :love:/happy  :w00t:/awwww~ :mon inluv:/OMG!  :mon wtf:/ SO HAWT!!! :mon bleed2:/WTF??!! :mon runcry: moments!  :)

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 94 - (8/26)]
« Reply #766 on: August 27, 2010, 12:40:30 PM »
Look at this commenting on two consecutive chapters!!!!!!!!!!????????????!!!!!!!!!  :panic: :? :panic: wat is the World coming to?

Somehow I felt like the interaction between Sayu and Jun in this chapter was sweeter ta anyting you had done with the other two pairs, I suppose it was the apparent awkwardness which jus made i really sweet and endearing!

I am glad that Jun is up and about, ;m sure she'll get her girl in the end...

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 94 - (8/26)]
« Reply #767 on: August 27, 2010, 02:17:24 PM »
LOL~ thanks! :) but my korean ish epic fael >.>

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Don’t misunderstand; it’s not because you played it or anything.
LMAO~ That is like totally Sayu! You so nailed it, haha. :twothumbs awesome job~ :cow:
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“Somebody, help!” the young girl screamed.  “She’s dying!  Someone help!”
Hrmm, I don't know why, but when I read this and pictured Sayu saying it in my mind... I started laughing :? Yeahh, I guess I'm weird like that.
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The beeping ceased as the sound changed into a single tone; her heart had stopped.
And then this line hit me...  OMFG ASDFUAGHFOIJEQNR!!?! DON'T KILL JUNJUN~~ T^T
ME: :on lol: > :shock: > :frustrated: > :pleeease:

BUT PHEW! I'm glad that Junjun is ok~ :mon exhaust: Haha, I seriously thought you were gonna pull some trick on us with that... and make things complicated. XD

Yay at the SayuJun moments/talk :cow: hehe, so cute~~~ :wub:

omg! I just realized that it's 5am over here... :shocked I got so sidetracked today that I lost track of time completely... ahem, playing stupid mmorpgs.. :smhid until I realized what time it was when I decided to check up on your fic. lol  :P

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 94 - (8/26)]
« Reply #768 on: August 27, 2010, 03:26:47 PM »
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her heart had stopped.
Omg, I think my heart stopped there!

Whew, she wakes up in the end :bow:

AND everything works out between Takagaki and Jun! AND AND Jun gets a kiss. :wub:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 94 - (8/26)]
« Reply #769 on: August 27, 2010, 05:26:14 PM »
@sapphire: oh, you were supposed to pick two choices when you vote in the first place XD

@kurosawa87: yeah... if SayuJun got together, it would've been too perfect for my taste XD

@kano-chan: I think i may be writing about those two again :lol:

@Haruka: omg stop predicting gosh! :shocked XD

@Swtme03: LOL that was PLENTY of emoticons XD

@oddball: I KNOW I'm impressed~ :twothumbs

@xanimefreak13x: wait, r u korean?? or was taht korean typing for my own benefit? XD

@rndmnwierd: yup yup~ jun gets the prize XD


Here we go~ onwards!

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Chapter 95

   “I can’t believe you’re doing this to me!” Eri yelled, trying to keep her weight in one place.  “Stop pushing me!  No, I don’t want to leave!”

   “Can’t you just get out quietly, Kameha?” Risa groaned, rolling her eyes.  “It’s Reina’s turn to record and she wants you out!”

   The bean continued to push her friend towards the door; the turtle tried to lean back but it didn’t help much.  It was finally time for High-Queen to record their coupling solo songs, and Reina was up first.  Since the yankii had wanted to keep the song a secret from her girlfriend, Risa was trying to kick the turtle out of the studio.

   “But I want to listen!” Eri whined, almost at the door.  “Reina-chan!”

   The yankii bit down on her lips, her resolve weakening.  “… Maybe it’s better if she stays—”

   “Stay strong, Reina,” Ai reminded.

   “You’re right, you have to leave babe,” Reina said right away, snapping out of her guilty conscience.

   “Reina-chan!” Eri yelled in disbelief. 

   “You heard your girlfriend,” the bean grinned.  “Out!”

   With that, the turtle was shoved out of the studio behind the locked door.  Risa skittered over to the sound panel and put on her headphones.  She looked up at the yankii who was already in the sound booth, giving a thumbs-up.

   “Let’s make this quick,” she said.  “I don’t want to keep Eri waiting too long.”

   “She’ll be back within the next three minutes if you finish this in one try,” the bean said.  “Are you ready?”

   “Hit me.”

   As Risa pressed the play button, a slow instrumental started to flow out of the headphones and the speakers.  Reina closed her eyes to concentrate, and started to sing.

    The lyrics were sweet and cute; it was actually quite unfitting for the yankii idol.  However, her passion for singing was enough to completely change her image that was perfect for the song.  In Ai and Risa’s eyes, Reina was not the cold ice princess anymore; she was just another girl in love.

   With the yankii’s entire focus on the recording session, she was able to create a soundtrack in one try.  After the song ended, Risa couldn’t help but applaud.

   “That was awesome, Reina!” she praised.  “I knew you could pull it off!”

   “Could you let Eri in?” Reina asked, stepping out of the booth.

   Ai smiled proudly at her partner as she unlocked the studio door.  The turtle immediately skipped in and attacked her girlfriend, kissing her a little too passionately considering there were two other people watching.  Reina’s eyes widened as Risa’s mouth popped open.  Ai just raised an eyebrow as she cleared her throat.  Eri backed away a little and smiled as sweetly as she could.

   “Please let me hear your recording?” she asked, giving her girlfriend that innocent look.  “Please?”

   “… I’m sorry, baby, I’m not falling for that,” Reina grinned.

   “It was worth a try,” Eri grumbled, removing her arms from around the yankii’s neck. 

   “Interesting way to get your girlfriend to do things for you,” Ai smirked.  “Maybe I should try that some day.”

   “Don’t, because I have weak resolutions,” Risa grumbled.  “Thanks a lot, Kameha.”

   “Don’t mention it,” Eri grinned.  “It’s your turn to record now, right Ai-chan?”

   “Yup.”

   “May I do the honors?”

   “You may,” the leader smirked again.

   In a flash, Eri pulled her friend out of her chair and swung her out of the studio.  Risa started to say something but the turtle started to close the door.

   “How does it feel to be left out?” Eri taunted.  “Now you’ll know exactly how I felt!”

   The turtle stuck out her tongue and slammed the door.  The bean fumed for a while but she knew there was nothing she could do about this.  Ai was quite determined in not letting her hear the oh-so-special song before the Christmas event on Song Fighter.  So the bean made herself comfortable by leaning on the wall and waiting for the recording session to be over.

   After what seemed like hours when it only had been minutes, the door finally clicked open.  Eri and Reina walked out, already wearing their coats. 

   “So?” the bean questioned her friend.  “Tell me something!”

   “There’s only one thing I can say,” Eri breathed.  “You’re girlfriend can sing.”

   “She’s a singer, Kameha,” Risa said, rolling her eyes.

   “No, I mean, she can seriously sing,” Eri breathed again.  “I think you’ll like it.”

   “… Gee, that helped me so much,” Risa grumbled.  “It’s Ai’s song; of course I’ll like it.”

   “I guess that’s true,” Eri smiled.  “I’m going to get lunch with Reina-chan, okay?  I’ll meet you back at home.”

   “Okay,” the bean mumbled. 

   After waving her friend goodbye, the short-haired girl walked back into the studio.  Her girlfriend was gathering her things and organizing the sound panel. 

   “If I kiss you right now,” Risa started, “would you let me listen to the recording?”

   “It’ll weaken my resolve,” the leader grinned, “but the answer will still be no.”

   “I won’t even attempt, then,” the younger girl muttered.

   “But if you kiss me right now,” Ai said, slowly walking up to her lover, “I’ll kiss you back.  Is that good enough?”

   “… For now.”

   Risa smiled as she placed her hands on the older girl’s shoulders.  Then, she kissed those lips that she loved, gently at first but a little more roughly after.  Ai returned the kiss with the same passion as her arms wound tightly around the bean’s waist.  Their tongues swirled around each other as if it were tying a knot, allowing the couple to taste each other effectively.  Risa let out a soft moan as she pressed herself against the idol a little more.  Ai let out a small laughter as they tapped their foreheads together. 

   “What would you say is your favorite memory with me?” the older girl questioned.

   “That’s too hard,” the bean murmured, pouting.

   “Name one,” the singer insisted.

   “… Our first night,” Risa mumbled, blushing a little.  “And our second.”

   “I like those memories too,” Ai chuckled.

   “What’s yours?”

   “Just… this.”

   Risa backed away a little, raising an eyebrow.  “This is your favorite memory of us?  Kind of weak, isn’t it?”

   “Not this specifically,” The leader laughed, pulling her girlfriend to her chest again.  “My favorite memory is this, as in the present.  Any moment that I’m with you in time will be my favorite.  As long as you’re with me, everyday will be a wonderful memory.”

   “That was kind of poetic,” Risa giggled.  “Alright, you beat me.”

   “It’s okay,” Ai whispered, grinning.  “My favorite moments include having sex too.  And I intend to make a lot of those memories.”

   “I’m not sure how to react to that,” Risa mumbled, turning bright red.

   “Come on,” the leader laughed, pulling away from her girlfriend and taking her hand instead.  “Let’s go get some lunch.”

   “Okay,” Risa agreed. 

   On the way out of the studio, the bean quickly snatched her coat from the sofa.  Then, the two lovers walked through the door, side by side, on their way to make another favorite memory of the present.

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It looks like I may be writing TakaGaki and TanaKame again... but TakaGaki is winning XD
We'll see how this turns out by sunday... i'm actually quite intrigued XD

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 95 - (8/27)]
« Reply #770 on: August 27, 2010, 07:13:34 PM »
=O
Suspense....... XD

I wanna know that song >o>...

I guess we should made a bet... which song are they gonna sing? Mmmm....

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« Reply #771 on: August 27, 2010, 07:55:54 PM »
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   “Please let me hear your recording?” she asked, giving her girlfriend that innocent look.  “Please?”

   “… I’m sorry, baby, I’m not falling for that,” Reina grinned.
Eri's evil! XD

I love how Eri and Risa play around with each other, XD so cute!

And Ai, I think she's getting more smooth. That was a great romantic line.

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 95 - (8/27)]
« Reply #772 on: August 27, 2010, 08:12:09 PM »
Do I smell more than 100 chapters??  :jerk:
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Now that I think about it, you're story is the longest one I've ever read!  :shocked
Well, more like, yours is the only long one I've been addicted to to read for this long  :lol:
You've stolen my reading heart  :love:

AGH!! I so wanna know what these songs are!!!  :angry:
Christmas can not come soon enough!   :(
*sigh...but I'm willing to wait  :roll:

Oh!! I want some more TanaKame sexy time please!  :drool:
Maybe some Eri dominance?  :roll:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 95 - (8/27)]
« Reply #773 on: August 27, 2010, 08:18:18 PM »
XD
I agree with what Swtme said 8D Your story is the longest Ive read, amazing enough to keep me hooked for so much time xD

And omg songs i wanna knowwwww <3

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 95 - (8/27)]
« Reply #774 on: August 27, 2010, 10:36:24 PM »
94: Yeah! ShigeJun! that was so cute :wub:
      and sayu give up already you can win against junjun now :wub: :wub:
      but the heart beeping things was quite scary for one second i gonna thinks thats junjun was gonna die :shocked
      and super cute at ShigeJun little kiss :k-inlove:

95: Now I really want to know what Reina an Ai gonna sings :tantrum:
      and love how they kick Eri out from the studio :mon lovelaff:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 95 - (8/27)]
« Reply #775 on: August 27, 2010, 11:06:09 PM »
When Ai-chan said she wanted to make some more of those "you know" memories, I was like :mon blood: Gosh, so straight forward! XD :inlove:

Anyways, really cute chapter. :wub: And is Reina and Ai-chan going to sing real songs? :huhuh

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 95 - (8/27)]
« Reply #776 on: August 28, 2010, 01:26:21 AM »
Ai is quite a poetic seemingly passive aggressive XD

Well keep up the writing
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 95 - (8/27)]
« Reply #777 on: August 28, 2010, 05:20:07 AM »
The turtle knows how to work her kitty :lol: Though the kitty held up well this time.


So TakaGaki and TanaKame going neck-to-neck with each other. Not really surprising, they are the two most popular pairings around out of the GoRokkies - there must be something about these them paired with each other that everybody just can't help but be drawn to. As I'm more of a TanaKame fan I must say, I am slightly worried that Eri's graduation will signal the end of TanaKame fics all around (or at least fading away). Yeah, forever the selfish fan I am  :sweatdrop:
Instead of setting aside one main couple and one sub-main couple, since there are two clear runaway candidates how about just make it a TanaKame/TakaGaki fic? Kokoro no Uta felt more like a TakaGaki-central fic, because of their past history together and with Sayu in the mix as well. And yeah, I think this is the longest fic I kept up with too. I sort of like the looseness of the story, I've enjoyed it so far.

(I'm also quite surprised at how much more popular RenAi was than I had expected, according to that poll.)

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 95 - (8/27)]
« Reply #778 on: August 28, 2010, 06:30:59 AM »
@Haruka: lol don't even try to guess, or i'm gonna skip comment replies again  XD

@rndmnwierd: psht Ai was always smooth~ her natural smexyness makes up for everything XD

@Swtme03: no, it's still a 100  XD  a promise is a promise~

@Ada: you'll have to wait for the songs~ :D

@fallenxangel: ahh the ShigeJun moment was so much fun to write :lol:

@kano-chan: ... NO they're singing fake songs XD of course they're singing real songs, what do you mean?? :lol:

@kurosawa87: I WILL keep up the writing :twothumbs

@aussie: well, they're neck and neck but there's still a difference... at the moment, i think there's more takagaki, right? XD and i was surprised by the ReinAi supporters too! :shocked


So I got a shot today which was a pain in the ass (technically, in my right arm) cuz it was painful for me to type :smhid
But I wrote anyway, cuz i know you guys are waiting :D

And I'm so happy to know that this way-too-long fic has kept you guys hooked long enough!
Thank you for your support~ i WILL continue to write on :onioncheer: :kneelbow:

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Chapter 96

   “So everything is recorded and the album is being produced now,” Tsunku announced happily.  “Good work, everyone!”

   A short round of applause sounded in the meeting room, along with High-Queen’s grins and their girlfriends’ smiles.

   “So we’re a little less than two weeks away from the special event,” Tsunku continued.  “The Song Fighter program will broadcast live the day before Christmas Eve.  It will be viewed by all of Tokyo, even Japan.”

   “That’s a lot of people,” Risa mumbled, eliciting a giggle from the turtle.

   “So basically, the set-list is this,” the producer confirmed, putting a piece of paper on the table.  “High-Queen will perform ‘Shouganai Yume Oibito’ first.  Tanaka’s solo will be next, followed by Takahashi’s solo.  But there’s just one problem.”

   “What’s that?” Risa asked.

   “It’s a problem that I should solve, but can’t,” Eri sighed in reply to her friend.  “After High-Queen performs their new single, Reina-chan needs time to change costumes.  But this is a live broadcast, so the show has to go on non-stop.  We can’t have a break in between songs…”

   “So that’s why I’ve thought of a possible solution,” Tsunku said, clearing his throat.  “I decided that in between the duo performance and the solo performances, we should have another program.”

   “… But we only have two singers, Tsunku-san,” Risa said, raising an eyebrow.  “And having an MC isn’t a possibility either, since this isn’t a concert; it’s a performance broadcast.”

   “Exactly, it’s a performance broadcast,” the producer agreed.  “So we’re going to have another performance during the break of the costume change.”

   “But we only have two singers—”

   “I’m not talking about Takahashi or Tanaka,” Tsunku interrupted.  “I’m talking about having a special guest that High-Queen fans will be interested enough in.”

   “And who would that be?” the bean questioned.

   “… Well, I heard that you are quite the singer, Niigaki-san…”

   The room fell silent.  Risa’s eyes widened as her mouth popped open.  Eri gasped out loud.  Reina raised an eyebrow in curiosity while her leader’s face remained expressionless.

   “… What are you saying, Tsunku-san?” Risa said in a low voice.

   “Well, considering you composed High-Queen’s last two singles, which were big hits, the fans are actually quite interested in you,” the producer explained.  “They heard that you were an amateur but they love your songs.  And since I’ve been informed that you’re actually a vocalist as well… I thought maybe you could make a special appearance.”

   “No way, uh-uh,” the bean said quickly, shaking her head.  “You just said there will be a lot of people in the crowd, not to mention the rest of Japan.  I can’t sing on stage and I’m not even good enough in the first place.”

   “I’ve heard your sample recordings of High-Queen’s singles, Niigaki-san,” Tsunku said.  “I believe you’re a very competent vocalist.  And didn’t you want to be a singer in the first place?  That’s what I heard—”

   “Who told you that?” Risa yelled while jumping up, almost knocking her chair down in the process.

   She glared at the producer, who looked away without answering.  The bean’s eyes immediately went to her friend, who shook her head.  She then turned to her idol girlfriend, who was keeping up a nonchalant mask.  Risa narrowed her eyes.

   “It was you!” she said through her teeth.  “You’re the culprit!”

   “Now, now, let’s not blame anyone,” Tsunku said, waving his hands.  “I’ve noticed your vocal talents before Takahashi even told me anything, Niigaki-san.  And I want you to be the special guest on High-Queen’s Christmas event.”

   “No, I can’t sing on stage, Tsunku-san,” Risa sighed, shaking her head.  “I really can’t do it.”

   “Well, we already listed you in the program though…”

   “WHAT?” Risa shrilled, her voice climbing up a couple octaves.  “How… wha… HA?”

   “So it would be nice if you just sing one of the songs that you already have written,” Tsunku continued, ignoring the song writer’s reactions.  “Please do this for us, Niigaki-san.  Please do this… for High-queen.”

   Risa bit down on her lips with a worried expression.  She turned to look at the two idols.  Reina was looking at her through narrowed eyes, with a face that said, “just get on the damn stage and sing, you idiot”.  Ai was looking at her with that smile and those eyes that she knew her younger girlfriend couldn’t resist. 

   “… Okay…” the bean mumbled, regretting her decision as soon as she said the word.  “I’ll do it…”

   “Great!” Tsunku exclaimed, clapping his hands together.  “So that issue is settled… Takahashi and Tanaka, prepare the performances immediately with Skye-sensei and Yoshiko-sensei.  Kamei-san, I’ll leave the costumes up to you.  Niigaki-san, please prepare your special performance.  Meeting over.”

   The producer quickly walked out of the room before ha certain staff member could change her mind.  Risa immediately stood up and marched around the table to her girlfriend.  She bumped Reina’s shoulder as she passed by; the yankii was about to say something rude but the bean’s glare immediately zipped her mouth shut. 

   “You!” Risa growled, stabbing a finger at her girlfriend.  “I’m not even sure what to say right now to describe how furious I am!”

   “Stop being such a wimp,” Reina muttered as she walked around the table to her own girlfriend.

   “Be quiet, yankii, this is none of your business!” Risa snarled angrily.

   Reina’s eyes widened at the bean’s attitude.  Eri sighed and shook her head as she put her arm around the younger singer. 

   “Let’s leave before we get involved?” the turtle suggested.  “They’ll figure this out for themselves…”

   “Well I hope your friend doesn’t bite my leader’s head off before she even gets to defend herself,” Reina muttered.

   Eri rolled her eyes as she led her lover out of the room, leaving the older couple behind.  Risa kept both of her hands suspended in air, wanting to hit something but also not wanting to hurt her girlfriend.  Ai just sighed as she grabbed the bean’s wrists.

   “Look,” the leader said, “I asked Tsunku-san to do this so you can get over your stage fright.  I know how much you love to sing, Risa, but your fear is getting in the way.  I want you to sing again, realize what it feels like to perform, and know how that is exactly what I feel when I sing.”

   “… You want me to be a singer?” Risa breathed.

   “Not necessarily,” Ai replied.  “I just want that stage-fright memory of yours out of the way.  Don’t you wish that you can sing and share your voice with other people?”

   “… Sometimes,” Risa admitted.  “But I still can’t do this, Ai-chan.  I’m going to freeze up; I really can’t do something like this!”

   “It’s one song,” the idol insisted.  “And I’ll be watching from behind the curtains.”

   But Risa still wasn’t convinced.  She whimpered a little as though she was about to cry.  She was honestly scared; she didn’t want to go through that terrible experience of freezing up on stage and letting everyone down again.  And she most definitely didn’t want to ruin her girlfriend’s event in any way.  Ai smiled a little as she embraced her lover.

   “Remember what I promised you?” she whispered.  “I’ll be there whenever you need me.  That promise will be valid until the end of time.  Can you trust me on that?”

   “… Yes,” the bean squeaked.

   “Then I want you to please grant my wish and sing,” Ai said.  “I want you to at least try.  Please?”

   “… Okay,” the younger girl sighed.  “I’ll do it… for you.”

   “That’s what I want to hear,” Ai grinned. 

   She slowly leaned into give a kiss but Risa jumped back and covered her mouth with her hands. 

   “Uh-uh, no way!” the bean declared.  “If I’m going to be doing this special performance thing, I’m going to need all my focus on this only!  So you better not do anything to distract me!”

   “… And kissing counts?” Ai asked, raising an eyebrow.

   “Yes.”

   “Making out?”

   “Of course.”

   “How about sex?”

   “Most definitely!” Risa yelled, blushing.

   “… For some reason, I don’t like the idea of you performing anymore,” the leader muttered.

   “Too late!” Risa said, sticking her tongue out.  “There’s always a price for everything!”

   With that, the bean skittered around the table and grabbed her stuff.  Before she could be stopped, Risa dashed out of the meeting room, determined to start producing her song right away.

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By the way, I had all the songs chosen but I recently switched them cuz I found better ones XD

Only four chapters left~

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 96 - (8/28)]
« Reply #779 on: August 28, 2010, 07:21:01 AM »
O<G XD i'd been lurking cus college work whipped me XD but dang! poor risa was totaly pinned to do that XDDD she's lucky ai's pretty hard to say no to XD

the distraction thing was pretty cute XD does that mean a horny/lustful ai will be ready for risa by x-mas? XDDD i hope risa can get over her stage fright though if anything im sure maybe ai will help her out and it'd become a duet or something XD
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