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Since I saw this today (April 2nd), I flipped a sh*t  :dizzy: XD
My reaction was pretty much: "*Reads first post* :grr: :gyaaah:... *Looks down at next post*...  :scolding: OH YOU SON OF A- I TOTALLY SHOULD HAVE SEEN THIS COMING." No one pranked me at school, so I kind of forgot about April Fools XDD; you scared me thar  :sweat:... Don't do it again~

Anyway, AWESOME chapter <3!! I love how Mama Gaki approves  :on woohoo:
Bwaha, sekrit between Mama and Sensei >D...
The kiss at the end was just... :luvluv2:~~~~

I needed this chapter like you don't even know <33 Arigatou, ne :D!!
Waiting for your next update  :stuffed:!!
I'm the cool kind of "Avatard"; the one who was here first >3!!

Takagaki and Tanakame are rabu-rabu <3~

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i was actually on the look out all day,  :P and i was also planning to do something similar..  :nervous
good thing i was alert, or else i would have completely fallen for it too and have a heart attack... :panic:

Mama Gaki got sixth-sense.. :grin: very understanding and open minded person.. we need more of those..  :)

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   “—about that time when you were a toddler and ran all around the house with a towel around yourself, naked, yelling, ‘I’m Super Omame’!” Mama Gaki interrupted, smirking.
mothers.. :smhid but super Omame??!!  :rofl:

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    “You know, all you had to do was ask,” Ai whispered, chuckling.  “It’s not that hard to do.”
ask and thou shall receive!  :lol:

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Please, if there is a god, Risa prayed silently, please don’t let these happy days end… 
yes please don't!!!  :cry: or maybe i should tell it to author-san..  XD

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you updated :D
I actually didn't fell for the joke since I saw the date  :lol:
OMG! Ai meets Gaki-mama  :shocked
Gaki-mama is a really kind mama  :heart: I'm surprised she just approved Ai like that. but Gaki is a really good and responsible kid, she can be trusted  :)

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@kawaii beam: lol I plan for Mama Gaki to come out a couple more times...  XD

@Shiawase_Honoo: lol see, you have to be clueless to fall for it XD

@Bamtai: LOL scaring people is my specialty :twisted:

@Haruka: yea, i am pretty mean :lol:

@sapphire: lol don't worry, I won't ever abandon something I started.  it's unfair to the people who dedicated their time to read :D

@Avatard: LOL sorry for tricking you!  But I was bored... cuz nobody I know even tried to pull a prank :nervous

@mmsuki: lol to end the happy days or not... hehehe...  :twisted:

@eruchan: lol yeah, I guess it was a major clue that I wrote the date next to "sad announcement"  XD


thank you for waiting~~
here's the sayujun chapter~~  :D

It's not my best writing, but i think it gets the point across... so yeah :nervous

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Chapter 46

   Sayumi gasped in the darkness as she tilted her head to give her girlfriend more room.  She felt one of her lover’s hands stroking her hair while the other wandered around her body, touching her chest to her waist to her stomach to her back.  A low moan sounded from the dominant girl, as she licked and kissed the bunny’s neck to mark her territory.  She backed away a little to look at the result of her handywork and smirked, satisfied.  She then slowly made her way towards the middle of Sayumi’s chest as she started to unbutton the shirt.

   “Wait, Junjun!” the bunny gasped.  “N-not here… We’re still in school!”

   “Eh~ does this mean you’re backing out on our deal?” the panda teased.  “I thought I had permission to kiss you elsewhere beside your lips if you couldn’t hold your breath long enough.”

   “Y-yeah, but…”  Before she could continue, Sayumi’s words turned into a soft moan as her girlfriend started to gently kiss the area between her breasts

   “If you really didn’t want me to,” Junjun murmured, “all you had to do was win.  You can still breathe while we kiss, you know.”

   “It’s… not… that easy…” Sayumi said, breathless.

   “Here, why don’t you try again,” Junjun offered, chuckling. 

   Soon, the bunny felt a pair of lips pressing against her own, and her mouth being infiltrated by a familiar tongue.  She couldn’t stop her moans in her throat as her skilled lover reached into her shirt to stroke her smooth back.  She didn’t want to admit it, but the thought of making out like this in a small closet while still at school kind of excited Sayumi.  Not to mention that Junjun was just very experienced in this area, making it difficult for Sayumi to refuse her advances.

   Unconciously, the bunny wrapped her arms tighter around the panda’s neck, reluctant to let go.  Junjun took this as a good sign, and proceded to hitch her girlfriend’s leg up to her waist, caressing her smooth thighs.  Sayumi mumbled her name into their kiss, allowing the yankii to decide that it was safe to reach further up the bunny’s skirt.  But before she could get to the ultimate destination, the sound of the school bell resonated.

   “Not again…!” Junjun groaned, dropping her head onto Sayumi’s shoulder.  “Break time between classes is way too short!”

   “I-I think it’s just the right amount,” Sayumi said quickly, pushing her lover back a little.  “We’re still in school, Junjun…”

   “Yeah, yeah, I know,” the panda muttered.  “Come on, I’ll walk you to class.”

   “Okay, just, let me…”

   Sayumi proceded to pull down her skirt and fix her hair.  Then, she reached for the buttons on her shirt but her fingers were too weak from the previous action that she continued to fumble with it.  Her girlfriend laughed to herself as she offered a helping hand.

   “Here, let me,” she said.  Swiftly, and much more efficiently, the yankii leader buttoned up her girlfriend’s shirt.  Sayumi blushed and nodded in thanks as she tucked in her shirt as well.

   Junjun opened the door to the hallway and walked out into the bright light.  There were students busily walking around, trying to get back to their classrooms, so the couple blended in right away with the crowd.  A couple of girls were running down the hallway to quickly get to their classes, and started to bump into Sayumi (and only Sayumi, of course, since no one dared to bump into Junjun, the queen).  The bunny cringed, trying to make her shoulders as narrow as possible.  Intrigued by her girlfriend’s cute reaction, the yankii leader grinned as she wrapped an arm around Sayumi, pulling her closer.  The shy girl blushed and nodded again in gratitude silently. 

   “You’re welcome,” Junjun chuckled, confident in her abilities to read the bunny’s mind now.

   Soon, the couple reached the destination where they would part for another period before meeting up for lunch.  Sayumi looked at Junjun before going into her classroom.

   “You should go too, quickly,” the bunny said.  “Classes are starting.”

   “It’s not a big deal if I’m a little late,” the yankii shrugged.

   “You better not be ditching,” Sayumi said threateningly, scowling.  “Remember what I told you before?”

   “Yeah, yeah, be more classy, I know,” the panda recited, rolling her eyes.  “Well, I’m can’t fix up my actual personality, Usa-chan, but I’ll at least go to class regularly now.  It’s the least I could do.”

   “Arigatou,” the black-haired girl mumbled.  “Okay, go now.  And hurry!”

   “I will,” Junjun grinned, leaning into plant a kiss on her girlfriend’s cheek.  “I’ll see you later.”

   As the yankii leader turned to leave, her lover also did the same and walked into the classroom. But before Junjun could even put a decent amount of steps between her and the classroom, somebody grabbed her arms from behind.  The panda immediately looked around to discover who the person was, as she realized it was actually two somebodies.

   “Mittsi?  Linlin?” the panda asked, looking at the two girls who had grabbed her arms and pulled her back.  “What’s going on?  I thought you guys already went back to class.”

   “We thought that you should know something right away,” Aika explained.  “Apparantly, things aren’t as peaceful as we judged it to be.”

   “What do you mean?” Junjun questioned, turning serious.

   “See for yourself, senpai,” Linlin sighed, gesturing back to the door of Sayumi’s classroom.

   The tall girl marched back to the closed door and peeked through the small window.  Her eyes automatically went to her girlfriend’s desk, where she was seated with her body hunched over.  The sight wasn’t exactly what Junjun had expected to see: Sayumi was staring down at her desk with a frightened expression, frozen still.  There were black scribbles all over the bunny’s desk, which the panda couldn’t quite make out from so far away.  But she could tell that it wasn’t a kind message.

   A group of girls walked up to Sayumi, snickering to themselves.  They said something to the black-haired girl and started laughing hysterically.  Sayumi bit down on her lips before she flipped her head up with a smug smile of her own.  She replied back with a certain attitude that she had when she was acting like a high and might rich girl, and the other girls fumed with anger.  One of the girls raised their hands and slapped Sayumi across the face.

   “That bitch!” Junjun hissed.  But before she could burst through the classroom, she felt her two lackies grabbing her arms again to stop her.

   “Don’t, senpai, stay out of it for now!” Aika advised.  “I don’t think it’s a good idea to drop in now.”

   “What the hell are you saying?” the leader growled.  “Didn’t you just see what happened?  That bitch dared to hit Sayu!”

   “But if you interrupt now, the bullying is only going to get worse!” Linlin yelled, allowing the older panda to freeze.

   Bullying.  Sayumi was being bullied.  And the chances were that it was getting worse day by day with every kiss that Junjun gave her, and every reflexive insult that the bunny shot back at them unconsciously.  And worst of all, Junjun hadn’t known this all along, despite being the “queen”.  She had figured that everything was peaceful now, but Sayumi hadn’t told her that she was still being bullied.

   “Shige-san probably doesn’t even think of this as bullying, senpai,” Aika explained, seeming to read her leader’s mind.  “Because this had been going ever since she came here anyway.  The bigger problem is that she’s still very antisocial.”

   “We’ve kept our eyes on Shige-san like you asked us to,” Linlin continued, “and the most notable thing we discovered was that Shige-san just doesn’t know how to make friends.  When you’re not there, all she can do is blurt out rude things.”

   “So that’s the problem?” Junjun asked in disbelief.  “Usa-chan is just too antisocial?”

   “Basically, yeah,” Aika nodded.  “She’s pretty hated by the student body at this point.”

   “And you’re saying I can’t just warn everybody not to touch Sayumi anymore, because it’s going to make things worse?”

   “Exactly,” Linlin nodded.  “But don’t worry, we have another plan!”

   “Rather than us inforcing Shige-san’s reputation through our popularity,” Aika explained, “I think it’s better if we have Shige-san climb up that ladder herself.  We need to help her become more social with the other students, and gain popularity through her own means.”

   “Easier said than done…” Junjun muttered.

   “Well, it’s the best plan we’ve got,” Linlin shrugged.  “Unless you have a better idea?”

   “… Not really,” the panda admitted, sighing.  “Are you guys sure we can do this?”

   “Sure we can!” Aika said energetically.  “It’s an Usa-chan Revolution!  We’ll instruct her on how to be social and how to make friends.  That way, she won’t have to be bullied anymore.”

   “Okay, it seems like I have no choice,” Junjun said, tightening her fist.  “Let’s do this.”  Just wait a little longer, Sayu… I’ll definitely protect you, even if it’s the last thing I do!

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And that's the setup for ShigeJun in Arc 2~ XD

Next up is back to our main couple: TanaKame! :twothumbs

things will start to change for them too, so look out for it! :thumbsup


And in case you guys haven't noticed, I changed the poll again, just for fun.  It's random but I was honestly curious about it, so I made this new poll about ShigeJun.  The question came forth because a lot of people have been saying that they've never read much ShigeJun before but they can actually see it now.  So I got curious. XD

*btw, the other poll ended up with: TanaShige, KameShige, TanaGaki, GakiKame, TanaJun, Reika*  Like it said, it was a survey so i'm not necessarily promising these couples as leads.  we'll see how things go :thumbsup

please vote!  :twothumbs

 :byebye: :sleep:
« Last Edit: April 07, 2011, 04:53:59 AM by SarangAi »

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yes i never read ShigeJun before  :huhuh ...was strange the first time but  :? :doh: ...now i think...is really awesome  :shocked :wub:... unique  :w00t: ...and hot  :drool:

and this only happen with your fanfics... for this  reason i love you!  :heart:  :oops:


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I was never really a shigejun fan.. but the way you write them is kinda hard not to ship :nervous

Steamy closet scene :on_hot: At school too! Naughty..  :roll:

Ah poor sayu.. Are they gonna tutor her in social skills? :lol:

Can't wait for tanakame!! I wonder what new developments await :hee:


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“I thought I had permission to kiss you elsewhere beside your lips if you couldn’t hold your breath long enough.”
ooooohhhhhh.. they're still playing that game..  :kekeke:

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...the sound of the school bell resonated.

 “Not again…!” 
i thought i destroyed that annoying bell already??   :on voodoo: 'oh wait.. that was on GakiKame's school.. so there are two bells to destroy..  :thumbdown:
on it..   :mon headbang:

soooo.. Sayu is still having problems with her bullies..  :smhid looking forward to the Usa-chan Revolution!!

arghhhhhh.. can't wait for the TanaKame arch2..  :panic:

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Great update once again~ I really like how SayuJun is turning out and the fact that Sayumi has to learn on her own to become more social and popular so that she can be accepted. Hopefully she will be able to overcome this obstacle and be accepted by the entire student body as "the queen's" princess. :wub:

As for the poll, I voted for the first one. I'm actually a combination of "I've never imagined them before, they're not my favorite couple but I find them cute, and now I can totally see them as a couple." XD

Please update soon~~~ :panic:

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lol....I don't just become a fan of any couple. At least one of my favorites have to be there. XD I'm not a FAN of ShigeJun, but I do like them together. It's cute. Although, it's still kinda awkward for me when they're making out. That's just my problem. Your writing made me like the pair so it's all coool. :twothumbs

Wow...In the closet? Barely any oxygen! :lol: How can expert Jun expect the noob Sayu to keep up? :on cigar: But I gotta say; Jun got the best deal out of the game! :lol:

Omg, if I was in front of THAT(Buliied Sayu) scene, I would slap that BiOtch right up! :angry: Yikes(being bullied everyday). :bleed eyes:

And since you said "STUFF" were going to happen with these couples, I thought Jun was going to ignore Sayu again so she won't get in trouble with other girls. She didn't, yet...so that's a breather. :mon exhaust:

I can't wait to see how "DIFFERENT" things are going to be with TanaKamei. :grin: :( :grin: :( :panic:

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I like you're fiction too much that I check it everyday.... And when there's something new I read it right away, looking forward for more of you're fics, More Power!

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I had no time to comment = /
but when I saw you posted sayujun
I went mad and I'm commenting now hahaha

I loved  :shy2:

More More More  :tantrum:

thank you  :D

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OMG!

Dirty little secrets ammmm AT SHOOL! *Q*

When I start reading I thought "WTH! This shouldn't be here!!.. What's the H!P Perv Fanfics for?!?!"
And then I just continue reading and let my mind slow down my conclusions XD

And there was just "That was HOT"

Don't like a bullied Bunny (should be Ilegal)...
I must admit I'm amazed by the fact that she might learn new vocabulary.. for example.. to compliment someone XD

Wow it's 2:22 a.m X_X I should go back to sleep and don't go to work ¬¬ I'm really thinking of it right now =_=
Well a little nap don't kill no one =)


God!! She knows she's HOT!

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Ahh, shigejun love  :luvluv1:  in a closet!  :imdead:

Seems as though Sayu's still getting bullied though because she's anti-social, it's even got worse because she's not dating Jun :doh:, Well, at least Aika and Lin have spotted the problem and have come up with some sort of plan to get her to make herself more popular......

I wonder though, will it perhaps make Sayu move away from Jun, as jun leaves her alone so she can grow on her own,,,,,,

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Wow!!! Junjun and Sayu are just so HOT!!  :drool: And I like this softer and affectionate side of Junjun, it's so cute!  :wub:
Aww, Aika and Linlin are being so good kids  :heart: You couldn't give them little bit more screen time, coul you???   :P
You're kind of making me addicted to this fic  :lol: Can't wait for more!!  :cow:

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Have I read SayuJun? I'm sure I have, though it is a pretty rare pairing. I know I've thought about it though.

Oh noes! Sayu's being bullied! Still. I've always kind of thought that the best way to end bullying was to crack a chair over the bully's head, but I guess she couldn't do that to most of the school's population. XD So, social lessons? That's going to be interesting.

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Well, first of all, i love Gaki Mama  :heart:
and second of all, poor Sayu...  :pleeease: but i can actually kinda see that happening in reality LOL

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Sayu being bullied  :(
guess everyone gets jealous when you're dating a popular senpai... Sayu being anti-social just makes it worse  :doh:
so, how will Aika and LinLin helps Sayu learn how to make friends? looking forward to the Usa-chan Revolution  XD

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@gab98: yay! glad i converted you  XD

@astro18: lol yeah, basically, "How to live life 101"  :lol:

@mmsuki: LOL you know, i'm always going to find a way to bring the bell back...  :twisted:

@sapphire: lol~ sorry, i missed that combo XD

@kano-chan: I think at this point, Junjun is WAY too obsessed with the bunny to stay away... she's more like "I'll protect you so it's fine" type now... :lol:

@black_inu09: NEW PERSON  :otomerika: :yossi: :cow: awesome!  I'm glad you like my fic~~ thank you!  :D

@Airidoki: LOL glad you were able to make a post, even while having no time~ thank you~ :lol:

@Haruka: psht~ that wasn't even close to a ShigeJun perv...  :twisted:

@oddball: we'll see how things go~ I'm actually not exactly sure how i'm working them out, but i'm brainstorming :P

@Bamtai: I'm actually planning something special for AikaLin soon. not exactly sure what it is, but i'm planning! XD

@rndmnwierd: LOL chances are, Junjun was about to crack a chair on that girl's head after she slapped sayu...  :lol:

@taylortot: GakiMama rocks! I love her too.  XD

@eruchan: Actually, i'm not sure yet either but i'm thinking..  :D


Thank you everyone, for the long comments!  I appreciate them very much!!  :cow:

And I appreciate all the votes as well, it's kind of interesting to know how many people I've managed to convince and stuff like that  :D

I may not be able to update this weekend because I'm traveling somewhere, but I'll do my best to get something done! :thumbsup

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I have to fight with my laptop (again) :angry:
but you still give me a great chap like ever :wub:
Wait for what do the little panda and puppy do for help their senpai's girl :w00t:

p.s. April, 11th...I will turn to 20...I don't want to be mature!!! :bleed eyes:

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Oh man, I finally caught up with all the chapters I've missed so far.

Your pairing resolutions were fantastic. Despite the "no bunny/turtle?  :cry: feel's weird" comments, I thought every pairing and character was done very well- it didn't feel forced at all. Your depiction of the hachikies has kick-started me into loving them more than just 'the new kids in MM'. You know very well how I feel about your badass Aika and Linlin's limitless 'magic pocket'.

What a wonderfully long and strange journey you've brought all your readers through. Thank you for writing this.

It's pretty awesome to know that despite the tentative happily ever after, we can trust you to wring some drama out of it. I await Arc 2 with much anticipation.  :heart:

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