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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update "Another Chance" )
« Reply #40 on: April 19, 2011, 05:39:17 PM »
@eSsIe21
read again n u will know whether minami is dead / not.  :grin: :grin:

@kahem
owgh... sorry for that....  :sweatdrop: well, will i could get your smile again when i post this???  :grin: :grin:

okay, this is my another One shot. a sudden fanfict i guess...  :sweatdrop: some one request this and really insist me to make it. but it kind a... uhmm... well.... yeaaah....  lemon , errr just read it.... :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop:

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"Ma..ma...maeda ojousama." She come closer n closer and I suddenly feel that her hand tracing from my neck to my body "why u call me that again minami!" She buried her face in my neck and bite it. I try to hold my moan and she keeping biting and licking my neck. "Ach....ach...acchan...u can't....we....can't..."
"U are my butler so u are mine and as u said u will do everything that I want." She Trying to unbutton my shirt as keeping nibbling in my neck then her hand back and cup my cheek.

"Ach....ach...acchan...sto...stop...we can't like this. U are my ojousama. It means this is forbidden. If master know it would be bad." She look at me with a sad look. "Don't u know my feeling?" I blink and stare at her "I don't care about that rule. That is stupid rule." I frowned at her and she continue "I already hold this feeling for a long time minami. I have fall for u. Is it wrong? I try to hold my self not to go near u and forget this feeling but I can't. I also envy all the maid that they can always near you." Oh my god. Is this real? I love her I admit that. But I never thought that its mutual.

I work as a butler in this house eventhough I'm a girl and I was trained since a kid to become a perfect butler. And when it come my master ordered me to become acchan butler. since then I always beside her. Prepare everything for her and I don't know why I feel something in myself. I could blush when look at her and get jealous when there is a guy approach her.

Today, no one at the house except me and my oujosama. She then suddenly go to my room and here we are got into this kind situation.

Then I hear a sob, she cries "why....?why...?why... I can't just be like the other ordinary person. Why...?" I can't stand looking she cries. I hurry hug her and try to calm her. "Shh...shh...don't cry acchan. Please...!!!" She grab my shirt and buried her face in my chess. "I love u minami... I love u.... I don't care what people said... I don't care about that stupid rule...I just wanna be with you"

I release the hug and try lift up her face so I could see her. I cupped her cheek with both of my hand "listen acchan! I also love u. U know, It makes me really jealous everytime I see u hangout with other guy. It's so painful. I wanna be with u too and its okay I'll become u'r butler as long as I could near you."

Our eyes meet and she whispered my name "minami...I...." "SShh....don't talk anymore." Hurry I reach her lips and we drown in a passionate kiss. Its soft and sweet. I try to explore every inch in her lips feels the sweetness and the softness. All I could feel is love and passion. Then somehow the kiss become so deep and intense. She kiss me roughly as she wanna eat me. I don't mind be eaten by her coz she is every thing for me. She then guide me to my bed and the both of us fall in there. We broke the kiss to catch a breathe. She was on the top of me. I look at her and she really pretty. She is an angle.
"So, what would happen after this?" She smirk at me. I just chuckle and grab her then we change our position. I giggle "well, I guess I have to serve my ojousama now." She smile and stroke my head. "Then... Please be gentle to me." I move closer and talk to her "if I would get punished after I do this I would never regret it." Then I kiss her again.

The kiss is more passionate and deep. She bit my lips and I could feel there is a bit blood flow but she then suck it. I then began to kiss around her neck. Make a mark of my love there. As I do that she moan and call my name. Its kind a music in my ear and I love that. Her hand  grabs my hair and as my kiss tracing along her breast she pull me up to kiss me again. We broke the kiss and I look at her. "Are u sure u wanna continues this?" She then wrap her hand around my neck and pull me down. She whispered in my ears. And only one words ishe said "please~". I smirk and go back to my destination place. I grab and playing with her breast. Grab it lick it and suck it. I could see acchan moan as I do that and it make me more turn on. Her voice. I like it. I keep licking, sucking and biting her breast. I know she can't resist it. "engh...mi..mi...minami...ple...please don't tease." I look at her and smirk. I back too kiss give a quick kiss at her and now my hand already tracing her tight. I give butterfly kiss to her stomach and then around her tight.

I could feel acchan is shiver I stop in the middle of her core and look at her. Waiting for her agreement. Coz, this is the line that I sure have to pass. If I pass this line then it would be change everything.

She smile and then pull me up for a kiss. She warp her hand around my neck and pull me down as our body press each other. "Are u sure?" She wishpered to me "make me scream your name." She chuckle as looking at my blush.

I smirk and the kiss her again as said. "I would make u won't forget today and scream my name." As said that I began to kiss around her tight. Enjoying acchan scent.
"Ah, I think u already wet in here acchan." I smirk to her and the lick her core making acchan moan. She said my name and grab my head as I lick, bite and suck her core. My tongue now inside her. Feeling the taste of my own ojousama. I could feel that acchan almost at her climax.

I pull out my tongue and reach acchan lips to kiss her. I could feel her hot breathe. Then I move forward to her ears and said "I'm sorry" as I thrust my finger into her core. She moan so loud as my touch. I stop and now my finger already inside her. "Are u okay?" "I..I...I..I am okay. Just continue." Then I begin to move my finger in and out in slow motion. Then I increase the speed as acchan already adjusted I thrust one more finger into her core and she buried her face in my neck. I begin to move it in and out "ach...acchan... U are so~ tight...I increase my speed and she then bite my neck and her grip tighten to my neck. "Engh...ahn...mi...mi...minami~ fast....faster....faster..." I know she almost at her climax and I obey her order. "As u wish princess." I thrust it faster and faster. I could feel my finger already wet with acchan juice. I buried my face in her chess and increase my speed again. "Engh...ahn...ahn... Mi...minami~ ... I'll..I'll come." "Atsuko...." And in one thrust she finally reach her climax as screaming my name. "MINAMIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!" As grab in my shoulder and her nail scratch my back as she come make me a bit scream coz it a bit bleeding.

Then I fall on the top of her. Exhausted. As I almost fall a sleep I could hear her word. "I love u" I look at her and kiss her b4 both of us fell asleep. "I love u more atsuko."

The next morning still in the same position I wake up first before her. I don't move, I just watching the angle that sleep under me. I stroke her hair and then suddenly she wake up.
"Minami...?" She calls me "yes , morning ojousama." I smile and give her a morning kiss. "So, this isn't a dream then." I snuggle into her and buried my face in her neck. "Nope, its not a dream." She hug me tightly then "please don't leave me minami." "I won't leave u ojousama." She look at me and pout "and don't call me ojousama." I smile "but , u are my ojousama." "U called me atsuko back then." I chuckle "okay then, I'll call u atsuko where we were alone. How about that." I said it as kiss her forehead. "That would be good." I then try to wake up but she stop me. "Where are u going?" "Prepare u'r thing." I said as wearing my shirt. She then pull me and make me fall on her top again. "Stay... I don't wanna go any where today." I smile and lied beside her. "Okay then , let's just sleep today." She kiss me and snuggle closer to me. "I love u." "I know and I love u more."


Fin~

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oookaaaaaaay.....  :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: this is my first M fict and i dont know if it good or not... but i guess this will be the last since i really cant do it...  :panic: :panic:

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update Sudden Fict!!!!!! )
« Reply #41 on: April 19, 2011, 06:14:16 PM »
.wah!!!   :shocked:....., ah!!!!!! :bleed eyes:..... Amazing!!!!!! :rofl: :on bleed:


.. :on asmo: nice fiction!!!!!!!!..... super luv it!!!!! :on GJ:


... :on gay: plz..., write more takacchan fictions!!!!!.... :kneelbow:

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update Sudden Fict!!!!!! )
« Reply #42 on: April 19, 2011, 11:14:38 PM »
Ohhh finally I read your sad update.
YOU DARE KILL MINAMI?!  :shocked AHEM I CANT ACCEPT IT  :shocked For the first time I was like T___T at the end of one of your updates.
But except this "little" thing, this was really good ^^
As for the other update... well I kinda stop reading as soon as I read the word "lemon" coz I have to do a really (like REALLY) important homework and I can't be distracted by anything XD So... will read it later and edit my comment later ^^

EDIT: Read it! Unusual for me to read stuff like that, but coming from you I had to! XD Thank for this fast update, I liked it  :oops: The butler thing is perfect for this situation since Minami has to obey to Acchan  :roll:
« Last Edit: April 20, 2011, 01:22:36 PM by bou-j525 »

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update Sudden Fict!!!!!! )
« Reply #43 on: April 21, 2011, 12:28:14 AM »
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well, will i could get your smile again when i post this??? 
If I'm not containing it by bitting my lips because I'm on the metro, it'not a smile that I would have but a banana xD
This fic is awesome!!! I'm also blushing :oops:

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update Sudden Fict!!!!!! )
« Reply #44 on: April 22, 2011, 02:21:57 PM »
@eSsIe21
 :lol: :lol: :lol: it seem u like this kind pf fanfict  XD XD and dont worry most of my fanfict is takaacchan ...  :thumbsup :thumbsup


@bou-j525
Ohhh finally I read your sad update.
YOU DARE KILL MINAMI?!  :shocked AHEM I CANT ACCEPT IT  :shocked For the first time I was like T___T at the end of one of your updates.

tsk...tsk...tsk....  :smhid :smhid :smhid u judge to fast bou-chan, how could i dare to kill her ... read the story one more and then u'll find out  :P :P XD :grin:

But except this "little" thing, this was really good ^^
As for the other update... well I kinda stop reading as soon as I read the word "lemon" coz I have to do a really (like REALLY) important homework and I can't be distracted by anything XD So... will read it later and edit my comment later ^^

EDIT: Read it! Unusual for me to read stuff like that, but coming from you I had to! XD Thank for this fast update, I liked it  :oops: The butler thing is perfect for this situation since Minami has to obey to Acchan  :roll:

 :shocked coz me me u read this kind of fict. so i'm the first then?  :w00t: XD XD some how hearing that make happy writing that fict  :lol: :lol: well, to be honest i guess this is will be the last time i write M fict since during writing that i feel blush furiously.  :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: but who knows..  :grin: :grin:

@kahem
 XD XD ah i see, but btw why are u bitting your lips...  XD XD

@All readers
thanks for reading my fict  :thumbsup :thumbsup :thumbsup

okay, this my other one shot. since i have a bit space during my final project at campus and I promise to my friend keichan for fast update today... i write it. hope u like it..  :thumbsup

lets get started  :mon firecrack:

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Lost Mermaid
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"yo takahashi...." a big guy approach me

"oh, hi there gori. whats up?" he smile and then put his both arms in my shoulder

"today, my wife will give birth so would u do me a favor?"

"owgh, omedetou gori san. so what can I do for you?"

"well, could u replace for my shift today??"

I frowned at him and my eyes widen "eeeeeeeehhhhhh??????? but....but...."

"owgh, please takahashi, u just sit and watch people. nothing gonna happen."

"but...but...but...."

"u already say that u'll help me so please take care all. jaaaaa~"

"go...go...gori-saaaaaan~"

he leave me alone and I gotta replace his shift. and now here I am, standing in the beach watching people coming around. I'm wearing a T-shirt writen "Life Guard" , a blue short and a hat. Many people recognize me as a guy but I'm a girl. am I really look like a guy? *sigh then suddenly I could feel someone is poke me from behind

"Hey there cute guy why are u just standing there alone." I turn around and yappari its her

"Mari-chan, how many times should I told u that I'm NOT A GUY!!" I pout to her and she begin to tease me again

"Owwwgh... dont pout!!! when u pout it really make u cuter." I could see her teasing smile to me "Shut up mari-chan, and btw why are u here? isnt u suppose to watch over there?"

she sit beside me and pull me down to sit beside her "well, there are to many guys over there and they keep flirting to me. Its annoyed. No one would flirting with me when mii-chan around." she sigh and then I smirk at her "hooo.... so~ u miss her dont you~" I chuckle and she just blushed "no..no...no...why should I. she just keep annoyed me by keep guard me from guys." I laugh "hahahaha, yappari u miss her, but u know she just trying to protect u. so where is she? I havent seen her around." "owgh, she said she has to do something today so she couldnt come." "ah, I see."

then from far away I see two girls running.... one wearing a shirt and a short n the girls who is chased wearing a bikini... "uhm....mari-chan, do we know them? they look familiar... " I try to focused my eyes to them so I could see they clearly. and both I and mari frowned..

"Let me goooo..... dont chasing me... mooooo~"

"Nyan....nyan~ I miss u.... dont u miss me?? I wanna hug you.... skin ship...skin ship.."

yappari thats yuko and nyan2 , yuko always be like that to her and nyan2 just keep ignore her. its look like she never give up. nyan2 run forward me and hide behind my back whether mari-chan chuckle.

"moooeeeee~ stop chasing me like that yuko..... mari chan takamina~ help meeeee~"

yuko stop and pointed to me "takamina, why youuuuu~ so as long I go u two...." I cross my hand and shake my head "No...no...no.... nothing happen between us. and yuko, please stop like that she scare to you, u know." still glare at me but then mari hit her head "oooouuuch, what was that for mariko?" she ask as holding her head "Nyan2 always thinking about u no way she like takamina. she is short and no cute and so otoko." I pout at her "Heeeeey!!!! are u try to help me or insult me here. I'm short but at least I have a lot of fan girls in this beach." they all chuckle then yuko look at nyan2

"sooooo~, nyan2 u really miss me?" nyan2 come out from my back and nodded. yuko the jumping like bunny. she so happy "YEEAAAAAAY.... my nyan2 really like me. okay, I'm sorry if I scare u. so how are the condition in here since I leave?" she ask me , well yuko have just coming from a hard training to improve her skill as a life guard "Ah, yeah, everything is fine no problem." "Is there something new?" as I wanna say something mari-chan cut me out

"Well, its look like minami, is in love with someone." I look at her and stare "wha....whaa...what is that? I didnt fall in love with anyone." I move my head to other way to hide my blush. then I heard everyone are giggle now "Yappari u like someone. We already been a bestfriend since long time minami so we already knew that. so tell me. I havent known anything." I walk and leave them all "Nothing to tell about. I got to watch the beach now we talk later. Bye guuuuuys~"

I ran to my guard position and leave them all . "Hey....Minami.... dont you dare to run away. We'll talk about it after dinner".

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I sit in my guard position and watching over the beach. Talking about what mari-chan said before I guess its true that I have fall from someone. since that incident her face keep flowing in my mind plus, why is she always spent her time in this beach. *sigh

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"whoooaaaaa, today is really hot. I wonder why beach is this so hot." I sit in my guard position to look around the beach. as I wanna a bit relax in my place I heard a screamming.

"KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAA~ SOMEONE PLEASE HELP MY OJOUSAMA~ OJOUSAMA~"

I hurried take my binocular and headed it to the sea. In there I see a young girl almost drown. It seem the one who scream is her maid. I then put back my binocular, take my equipment and hurry go to the beach. soon , I pass the maid and jump into the sea. I swim to the girl place and she almost drown. I grab her and take her out from the water.

I pick her up with both of my hand and place her in a sand. everyone then come approach to look.

"EVERY ONE MOVE OUT!!! MOVE OUT!!! GIVE SOME AIR IN HERE!!!" I scream so other people not disturbing my duty.

"O....OJOUSAMAAAAA~" the maid come and approach her "U know her?" I ask the maid. "Yes she is my master. Please save her!!!"

I hurry check her condition and pump her chess to let go out the water. the water only come out a little so I decided to give her a CPR. I then open her mouth then give some air through my mouth. to be honest it kind a embarrass me coz this is my first CPR. Finally she cough and the water come out from her. I take her head and put it in my lap "hey, are u okay?" I ask her and then her hand cup my cheek as saying "thank u!"

I see her eyes and suddenly my heart beating so fast. she is so cute, I think in my mind. then I back to reality as the maid call me, "Sir, thanks for saving my ojousama." I a bit piss coz again someone miss recognize me as a guy.

"uhm? ah, yeah... no problem. its already my duty." the maid then warp a towel to the girl and help her to stand. they then leave me and before she leave she turn back and smile at me. 'what the....?? why is she smiling like that.' but to be honest her smile is really cute. after that I back to my position again.


a couple days after that incident
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as usual I sit in my guard position. its noon and the weather is terribly hot.

It's been 3 days since that incident and everyday I could see her coming and playing in the beach. I guess she is having a vacation in here. Somehow every time I check the condition with with binocular its happen it directly to her position. maybe it just I'm worried that she'll get drown again. but wait?! why should I worry about her. we even dont know each other. part of me wanna know her better.

one day as usual, I try to take a glance to her with my binocular. somehow her eyes go through my binocular n she smile. I hurry move my binocular to the other way. I wonder if she realize that I have looked at her.

then I try to move my binocular back to her place before but she already gone. I try to find where is she but then a voice surprise me.

"Looking for me?"

I surprise almost drop my binocular and fall from my sit

"WHOOOAAAAAA......"

"KYAAAAA~ WATCH OUT!!!"

Luckily I made it to grab another side of my guard chair and manage not to fall down. I inhale and exhale my breathe as a sign that I'm relieve. she look at me worried and apologize for make me surprise.

"Ah, I'm sorry. I didnt mean to surprise u."

I look at her and a bit stunned 'oh my god she is so cute. uauauauaua.... wake up minami... stay cool... stay cool...'


"Uhm? oh that, Its okay. no problem." I smile at her and she chuckle.

"errrrr.... is that something in my face?" I scratch my head as asking to her .

she stop chuckling and smile at me "uhm... nothing.. its just that u are really different from the first time we met. U are more serious."

"owgh? really? well, its about someone safety, so I gotta be serious right."

she then approach me and it getting closer "is it including watching over me everyday?" I blush when she said that. so she know that I watch her through my binocular. 'some on taka make an axcuse' "uhm... well, I just dont wanna look u get drown again." she pout but then smile back at me.

"sooo, do u have a time today? I wanna treat you. coz u have saved me." 'eh?' "well, I gotta watch over the beach I guess I dont have a time." she pout and look sad. thats is my weakness. I couldnt bear to see someone sad , so I just blurt out "But, I'll be free around 10 minutes. is it okay?" I look at her and she then give a wide smile at me.

"Sure, I'll be waiting. no problem" "okay, now I gotta back to my place first. and by the way, u dont have to repay me for that." she move closer to me again as said "but I wanna too." I smile and look at her "well, its up to you. well, then see u at that ice cream stall then." I wave and leave her but before that she call me "wait, I havent known your name. what is your name?" "ah, yeah sorry for that. hahaha... My name is takahashi minami. but just call me minami. and yours?" "I'm atsuko maeda but just call me atsuko." "well, then see u later atsuko."

after leaving her I hurry try to find miichan. actually today is my full shift but I cant say no to her. so I gotta find a replacement.

"miiiiiichaaaaan~ Marikoooooo~"

"eh minami? it must be a really urgent since she calls u mariko."

"I betcha. It must be something important. are u think what I think?"

"yeah, it must be about that girl."

"miichan, mariko, u gotta help me!!"

"okay calm down minami. U must be wanna me to take your shift coz u gotta do something?" I amazed why is she already know "eeh? why u know that? well, yeah I need u too that. so could u?"

"hahahaha.... dont worry minami let me handle it." miicha said as wink to me. "woow, thanks lot mii you are the best." I then hurry to meet atsuko. she already in there waiting for me.

"hi there, sorry a bit late."

"dont worry. I have just arrived."

I give my hand and help her to stand "soo, go now?" she smile and reach my hand and clinging over me. "sure, lets go." we then go for a walk through the beach and playing in the water. after that we eat ice cream and sit in the beach to watch sunset.

"wooow, today really fun. I wanna play like this everyday." I look at her and smile. "yeah, its really fun today. hey, there is some Ice cream there." I said it as somehow my hand automatically wipe the ice cream in her lips. she a bit surprise with my action and when I realize I apologize to her "errr, ah, so...so...sorry!!!" "ah, it...its nothing really. no problem." I could see her blush.

there a strange silent, then I broke it "well, I guess its already late u better go home now. look your maid already pick u up" I see her maid already wave to her "well, yeah I guess I gotta to go home now." I got up and give my hand to help her to stand. I walk first and then she hold my hand

"will, we meet again?" I look at her and smile "of course we will." "and errr... I apologize coz my maid call u 'sir' back then." I laugh and grin to her "no problem. at least u notice that I'm a girl" she giggle and then leave me but she then turn back.

I look at her in confuse then she grabs my hand and pull me again.suddenly I could feel her soft lips in my cheek. "thanks for saving me." after saying that she hurry approach her maid and got into the car.

I still stand there , cant believing that she has just kiss me even only in cheek. then I realize that there is a paper in my hand. I guess atsuko give it when she grabs me before. I read the paper and there is a number written in there.

she gives me her number?!

I back to my home and headed to my room. I lay there and look at the number.

should I call her??

I think and think.... then, I decided to call her. I wait then she hang up the phone

" Moshi... moshi... minami???"

"eh? how u know that its me?" I could hear she chuckle

" I just guessing. Is it took a long time to call me?"

"ahahaha, sorry for that.."

then we have a long conversation.

the next morning I wake up with a phone in my ear. then I look at my phone there is a massage.

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From     : Atsuko

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ohayou, minami have u awake?

I just wanna say that today I'll have to go back to tokyo

I know this is so sudden I'm sorry,

The time I have spent with u I wont forget it

I hope we will meet again


atsuko


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I frowned to the mail. she have left. Its somehow there is a hole in my heart. After that I try to contact her but no answer. well, I guess I just give up.


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its have been 5 months since she left. I still thinking about her. I wonder where is she now and today is the same day when the first time we met. actually I just wanna stay at my home but since gori-san is away and I take his shift I gotta to watch over the beach this night.

"yooo minami..." yuko called me "what is it?" I look down and reply her calls. "its dinner time come down and go gather with us. we will have a dinner outside" I smile and just look in another way "I guess, I'll skip it. I dont feel hungry now. I'll catch up with u guys later." "ah, okay. but please be careful. today weather is not good. I think it will heavy rain." I noded and smile to her "yeah, I know dont worry." "and one thing, mari have told me everything. I'm sure u'll find your lost mermaid soon." yuko grin and left me. "The Lost Mermaid" they call atsuko that coz I met her in the beach and she just away and disappear  like a mermaid. then after yuko gone I keep an eye to the beach again.

not long from yuko gone it start rain. I keep in my place to check once more before leaving my place. I take my binocular and look around. suddenly I see some figure walking through the sea.

'what the heck that person doing.'


I zoom in my binocular to see who is it and I frowned. Its my mermaid. I hurry to approach her. what is she doing? is she trying to kill herself. sea in the night is danger. what if there is a tidal wave. I run as fast as I cant. I run under the heavy rain that fall into my body. not far from her I slipped and my body fall into the ground. I dont wanna something happen to her. so I shout her name.

"ATSUKOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO~"

she stop and turn around. I try to got up and hurry approach her but when I see her I couldnt move. why is she crying? then suddenly a tidal hit her I shock and shout her name as walking to the sea. I swim and found her body floating "ATSUKO....ATSUKO...." I swim to her and success grabs her. I take her to the sea shore and placed her near a rack there.

"ATSUKO..... BREATHE...... BREATHE..... I DONT WANNA LOSE YOU..... PLEASEEE BREATHE...."

I give her a CPR again and suddenly finally the water in her lungs come out. I hug her and then I could feel her hand wrap around my next reply my hug. OMG I couldnt imagine what would happen if something happen to her. I hug her tighly not wanna let her go then her weak voice call my name.

"minami....minami....is that you?"

"its me....its me.... dont worry. now I'll take u to my place. it will be save in there."

I give her a back pack and carried her to my place. as arrive there I place her to my coach, take a towel and take out my clothe from my cupboard. I give it to her and ask her to get change in the bathroom then I wait in the living room.

then I heard the bathroom door open and look at her. she is so pretty. her wet hair make her so sexy. OMG, If this is a dream I dont wanna to wake up. she smile and sit beside me. since no one at home so its only me and atsuko there.

I look at her and smile "hi there, how u feel now?" she look at her hand and answer it "better, thank u." the atmosphere a bit weird now. there is a silent. then I collect my courage to speak and ask her why is she do that.

"atsuko, could I know why are you doing that? u almost give me heart attack." she smile at my question "have u ever been in love before?" eh?what is she mean? I look at her in confuse then she chuckle "someone could do something crazy when she is in love." I a bit hurt when she said that

"so you are in love now?" she nodded and it make my heart broken. "sooo~ who the lucky guy then?" I ask her in serious tone. but she then giggle "I never said that I fall in love with a guy." I frowned and a bit surprise "sooo! who is the girl then?? and why u do that? u almost drawn"

she move closer and her face is about an inch from me "you must be know her. she also a life guard. " I think and try to make a list of an life guard member  sae is with yuki its impossible, miichan? naaah she is out. nyan2? impossible coz yuko. its impossible the member left is... I heard she is chuckle and then give me a gently smile. I look at her and pointed to myself as she nodded.

she begin to move closer and closer until without realize I already in the edge of the coach edge then fall "itttttttaaaaaaaaaiiiiiii......" "eh? minami.... are u alright???" I try to get up and sit in the coach. "I..I...I'm okay." damn, I embarrass myself in front of her. she is chuckle and push me to the coach. "ats...ats...atsuko..." "It is you that I fall in love minami." in no time her lips press against mine. it so soft and so sweet. she then press her body against mine and I try to deepened the kiss. It's full of passion and I could feel love in it. I try to got up and she wrap her leg in my waist then I carried her to my room. I automatically lock the door and headed to the bed. we both then fall in my bed still kissing but unfortunately we have to broke the kiss coz we both need air.

I look at her and ask her "so, how long u have like me?" she smile and leaned over me coz she is on the top of me "since I was a kid." "eh? how?" "moooeee, u must be forget. try to remember" I think and think then I remember "argh? u are that little kid that I saved when I was a 10." she hit me then "oooouch, what that for?" "I'm not a kid it just I have small body, actually I'm the same age as u." "okay...okay... I'm sorry. now go own.." she then continue "then I after that I always keep my eye on you." "ah I see, I'm sorry I didnt recognize u back then. U are different now." she smirk then "different?" "well, yeaah... u are cuter." I blush as I said that.

"oooowwwww.... I like it when u are blushing.... its so cute." she lean and kiss my cheek.

"and one more thing. why are u do that?" I ask her "u mean walk on the sea?" "yeah, its almost give me heart attack."

she smile and come forward to me "Its because I'm the mermaid and I wanna get my prince love." "so, I guess I get my mermaid love then" I smirk at her.

"I love u minami"

"I love u too"

after saying that she kissed me again and we fall in our passion.




A prince finally find his lost mermaid

but.....

in this case...

A princess finally find her lost mermaid




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soooooo~ how is it????  :huhuh :huhuh :huhuh

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« Reply #45 on: April 22, 2011, 02:46:52 PM »
 :cow:she smile and come forward to me "Its because I'm the mermaid and I wanna get my prince love." "so, I guess I get my mermaid love then" I smirk at her.:cow:


.... so chezzy!!!!!! :wriggly: :luvluv1:....., i super duper luv it!!!!!!!.... :thumbsup

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« Reply #46 on: April 22, 2011, 03:41:42 PM »
Wah!!!!! Thanks sorachan!!!! You are definitely quick I just checked fb and the next thing I know you've uprates already!!! Nice update as well it's different! And happy it's takacchan lovel lovel as we've been talking about it all day! Ahaha! Now I can go to bed happy as everyone has updated something! Except darkchan! You promised fnp update la!

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« Reply #47 on: April 23, 2011, 01:01:11 PM »
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but btw why are u bitting your lips
Because I tried to not laugh like a fool lol

Your last fic made me laugh so hard because it made remember a show, I don't know the name in english but in french we call that "alerte a Malibu". And I was imagining Takamina running in slow motion on the beach with the red swimsuit and the opening in backgroung  :rofl:
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« Reply #48 on: April 24, 2011, 05:50:52 PM »
Thank for updating ^^ You did a lot of OneShot recently... but how about your long fic?  :?
Ah, not that I don't like the OneShot, keep going, but I was wondering.

HAHA this maid is not really efficace when it comes to save someone's life  :smhid C'mon Minami, make a star of yourself :P That was cute ^^ I liked how Minami was trying to find who was the person Atsuko loved without inclunding herself   :lol: I was like (-.-)' and then (^_^) XD

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« Reply #49 on: April 28, 2011, 05:22:16 PM »
whohoho.......... awesome awesome awesome !!! that's all i can say...

sorakamiya-san all your fanfic is awesome...

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« Reply #50 on: May 17, 2011, 06:57:18 PM »
Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuyyyyyys.....  :panic: :panic: :panic: sorry for the very late update, i've been busy with my final project presentation. i make this as fast as i can. i hope u like it.  :grin: :grin:

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"Hey guys look at this"

"Wooow....who is she?she looks sexy!!"

"Naaah, u said sexy to every pretty woman."

"what can I say?! I adore pretty girls."

"U think she is pretty?"

"Well, only one thing that can prove it. Yoooo... Takahashi..."

I approach to them as they call me

"What is it?" I look at the magazine that they bought

"Well, we just wanna ask, what do u think about this girl?"

I grab the magazine and look carefully at the picture. It is writen there "New Idol Debute : Atsuko Maeda"

"Well, uhmm.. She is quite cute."

"HA?! See? Even taka said she is cute." I look at them in confuse "what are u guys actually discuss in here?" "Well, we are discussing whether this idol is pretty / not and if a takahashi said that she is cute she must be." They both laugh

"Yeah, yeah, yeah whatever." I then go and leaving them "hey, takahashi where are u going?" I wave my hand and keep walking "I'm going to work." "Ah I see, btw wait takahashi." I stop then my friend come forward me. "If I'm not wrong this is the agency where u you working right?" He grin to me and I look him as pull up one of my eyes "yeah, so?" "Send my regards to her." I sigh and shaking my head to left and right. I begin to step my foot again as saying "heee, whatever". I leave my friend and headed to my work place.
Yeah, my friend right. I work at the agency where that maeda girl debut as an idol.I have met her and our first meeting kind a embarrass for me.

Flashback

"Good morning takada san."

"Owgh, good morning "

"My...my, its looks like u are with someone here."

"Owgh, yeah! This is atsuko maeda. She has started her debut as an idol. Please take care of her."

I don't know why but suddenly I turn my head look at her. Only a second she already could make me stunt. That's girl really got an idol aura. Idk why but I could feel that she'll be a great idol. I back at my work setting all my camera and other stuff. An hour past  and my bos call Me

"Yooo, takahashi! Come here!" I leave my work and hurry approach her "yeah?! Can I help u bos?" I stand in front of him but I couldn't find that maeda girl. I think she already leave. But wait?! Why I think about her?! Tsk...

"Takahashi, go to the dressing room and take some costume from there. We will start today shot." I nodded and hurry headed to the dressing room and in there something bad will happen.

I open the dressing room as usually but in there I got another surprise. I freeze as I open the door. There is stand in front of me that maeda girl half naked. HALF NAKED!!! She then scream and throwing thing to me.

"KYAAAAAAAAAAA~ HENTAIIIIII!!!!! GO OUT NOW!!"

"Wait!!!!wait!!! I can explain this?!"

Haven't got any chance to explain anything a shoes already landing in my face. Then everything turn black. OMG what did I do wrong?!

A couple of minutes later I open my eyes and my head is already laying in maeda's lap. She look worry and stare at me.

"Are u okay?! I'm sorry, I don't know that u are one of the staff here."

I try to wake up and face palm "no, its okay?! I'm the one who fault here. No need to apologize." I look at her and she is a bit blushing "and maeda san, no need to worry coz I'm a also girl."

She look down and start to talk "I'm....I also don't know that u are a girl I'm so sorry! Its just you really look like a guy." She said it as bowing to me.

I smile and got into the dressing room to get the costume. As I got out I look at her again and said "its okay?!"    She reply my smile as give me her cute smile. My heart suddenly racing and I hurry leave he so she couldn't see my blush.

She shout and ask my name

"Wait!! What's your name?!"

"Takahashi"

And since that time I know her and she knows me.

End flashback

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Since that time my life change. It seem when I meet her I only got into trouble. It happen when she got a photo shot in a beach. Its a break time. That maeda girl can't be found anywhere so my boss ask me to find her. I search her every where but still can't find her then I hear a scream and I recognize that scream and hurry go to the source of that scream.

When I arrive I see maeda already unconscious and some guy gonna do something un proper to her. It make my blood boild and I kick that guy as hard as I can.

Flashback

"Arrrrght?!!!"

"You?! Don't ever u dare to touch her." I said it as pointed my finger to him

"Huh?! Who do u think u are?her boyfriend?"

Luckily he didn't recognize me as a woman "who ever I am I won't let u to touch her."

He smirk to me and try to punch me "oh really?!no one could disturb me." For first I could avoid his punch then counter it. Damn, my knuckle hurt. "What?! Shit?! Bloood? How dare u make my lips bleeding. Guys!!! Come here and help me." Suddenly 2 guys come and hurry hold me.
"U such a coward!!!!" He grin and punch me. I a bit beat up but I can't let they do something to maeda. I don't know where I could get that strenght in a minute I could let go my hand and beat up that 3 guys.

"Please....pleasee!!! Let me go... I promise I won't disturb her anymore."

"Now get your butt out of here and vanish from my eyes before I change my mind." I said it in a harsh tone. Then they all run away.

I approach maeda and look at her. I try to wake her up and I got another surprise.

"Hey!maeda! Maeda wake up!!" I give a light poke in her cheek. Then when she wake up

"LET ME GO!!!!" A punch headed to my face.

"Aaarrghhtt!!! IIIITTTTAAAAAIIIIIII!!!!! Its me! Is it the way u show thanks to your savior."

"Kyaaaaaa~ takahashi san gomen?! I thought u that guy."

I place my hand in my cheek "why every time we meet I always got beat up by u." She look at me and cheerish my cheek

"I'm sorry?! Is it still hurt?" She sigh "I guess I only make u got into trouble."

Grrrr, I really can't looking people down. I sigh then give her a hug to comfort her "heee....its okay. I glad u are okay." She a bit surprise with my action but then hug me back. Maaan, I really feel relax in her hug. But then a voice make us back to the reality

"Takahashi do u find maeda?"

I release the hug and she look pout "yeah, we'll go there." I look at her and stand up. She look me up and I help her to stand.

I walk first but then she hurry approach and clinging to me. Tsk, she is so cute.  She look me up and smile "ma..maeda what are u doing?" "Owgh, just call me atsuko. U already help me, from now we are friend. Okay?" I exhale but then smile to her. "Okay, but I will just call u atsuko when no body arround." She pout "I wanna u to call me atsuko." I face palm and just nodded. I look at her and she seems really happy. "Okay, so tell me your name then." She smile to me.

"Just call me takamina. All my friend call me that."

"Okay then I'll call u takamina." She said that as kiss my cheek "thank u for saving me today."

I just frowned and freeze.

End flashback

Without realize I already arrive at my office. I headed to the photo studio and she already in there doing some pose for magz cover. Beside that, I see a familiar figure there. And I guess now I would be in trouble.

"Okay maeda san we finish now. U could take a break. and itano san change your costume and we star in a 15minutes. Takahashi will help u."

What?why is she here?! Errrrr....I doom now. Well, for information this girl is itano tomomi, a former idol in my agency. Everyone said that she likes me. At the first I don't wanna believe it but she always try to seduce me and it a bit scary. then she has to change agency and I never heard any news about her.

Now she is back and again she looking me with that eyes.

"Hi there takamina, long time no see."

"Errrr...ye....ye...yeah!!! Long time.ehehehe... So let's find the costume for u."

She smirk to me and it make me chill. What will she do to me?! Suddenly acchan approach and clinging to me.

"Takamina~ what took u so long. I've been waiting for u."

I look at her and I could feel that tomochin is staring at me.

"Aaaaatsuko..."

Atsuko seem notice this and look at tomochin "oh, hi there itano. Sorry I didn't see u"

"Well...well...seems that u really close. Takamina never like someone clinging to her before." Tomo said as grin to maeda

"Ah, really?! But she never complain."

"Ah I see. Seem u already change takamina."

I know what she mean and if it continuing like this everything would be bad. I release my self from atsuko and take tomo to the dressing room.

"O..o...okay atsuko. I have to take tomo to get her next costume. I'll see u later."

I then run as fast as I can. I don't wanna something happen here.

In dressing room


I open the door and hurry get the costume for tomochin but one thing that I dont aware. Suddenly I heard the door closed and tomochin hug me from behind.

"to..to..tomochin~ what are u doing."

"uhm? I really miss u takamina."

I hurry try to release my self from her and look at her.

"Stop it tomochin." she pout and look at me with a sad eyes "why u always reject me takamina?" I sigh "I'm not reject you. I just not really feel comfortable when u do that." "but u just fine with that maeda girl." "its just....it...." before I finish my world she interrupt "u like her dont u?"

there is a silent. "I....I...." "Yappari, u like her." she said that as looking down.  "No....NO....No....I'm not."

"I could see in your eyes minami. U cant hide it from me. And she also like u. u know that but u try to avoid it." I only can silent. tomochin approach me and she is getting closer



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"And I also like u from the beginning until now. I cant blame anyone for this feeling" "to...to....mph..." before I speak she give me a short kiss. I frowned and freeze but suddenly there is some voice. the door is a bit open. someone must seen us.

"shit...someone must have seen us. why u do that?" She give me smile "I wanna do that for long time. I know u never can like me more than a friend. That would be my first and last kiss." I only look at her "Tomo I..." "Its okay takamina. Now , I bet that must me maeda. U should chase her. Tell her your true feeling."

I hurry open the door and I before I go I only said one thing "Thanks Tomochin." I smile at her and the hurry chasing atsuko.

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Its raining outside and I really worry about her. Argh..... where she could be gone. I search at her everywhere but there werent any sign about her. tsk...this is my fault. I should have told her. now she must be hate be. then I arrive at the nearest park and there I see a familiar figure. Its her. She sit in a park bench. She cover her face and I could saying she is crying.

I approach her and open my umbrella to cover her from rain. She look at me and smack my hand that holding the umbrella.

"why? dont u know how I like you all this long?" she said it with a tone of sadness.

I sigh "Listen atsuko, what u have seen is not what u think. Please give me a chance to explain it." she just ignore me by avoided my face and turn her head to the side. I sigh and then grab both of her shoulder.

"Listen atsuko, I'm sorry. I'm really sorry if I have hurt u. the truth is I..." there is a silent before I continue my sentence. "The truth, I Like u."

She finally look at me and I continue my sentence "I already like u from the first time we met. U maybe not recognize it but everytime u got a photo shot with a guy it irritate me. Its annoyed. Then if someone look u with an un proper look it make me wanna smack him. U know, every time I got near you I could do something weird and un usual." I try to breathe and then I could feel a hand landed in my face. She slap me.

It totally hurt but She got the right to do that, since its my fault. But after that I could feel a warm hug embrace me.

"That's for making me wait for long in here." I smile and hug her back. I whispered something in her ear "I'm sorry atsuko".

then we pull out. she look me and pout "But, u kiss her back then." I frowned and denied it "No...No...NO... I didnt kiss her, well, yeah she kiss me but I didnt kiss her back. Believe me." she look at me and cherish my cheek "I know. I believe u." I relieve and look at her. "I'm glad. I love u Atsuko." she keep closer to me "I love u more." then she kiss me. I could feel the warmest of her love in there and the rain become our love symbol of that night.


Love come without notice




Love is pain but also sweet



When u in love u cant blame anyone



Dareka no sei ni wa shinai~



Don't blame someone else




FIN~

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Okaaaaaay..... how about it guuuuuuuuuyyyyys......????  :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:

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« Reply #51 on: May 17, 2011, 11:24:34 PM »
The parts which Takmina was beaten by Astuko totally made me smile, nice fic!!!!!

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« Reply #52 on: May 18, 2011, 01:32:12 AM »
OMG TakaTomo  :panic: Thank for not breaking up our favourite pairing and if ever you think about doing this.........  :twisted:
Lol thank for updating ^

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« Reply #53 on: May 18, 2011, 03:35:58 AM »
sora-chan~ thanks for the update  :bow: goodluck on your upcoming presentation  :cow: :cow:

totally imagining takamina and acchan in the rain. wet hair  :drool: errr..don't get dirty ideas from the word wet

thankyuu again  :thumbsup

btw sorakamiya is my sister *proud imotou* not in real life tho  :(

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« Reply #54 on: May 18, 2011, 06:52:37 AM »
wew!!!!~~~...., nice fic!!!!! :bingo:.....


hhehehehehhehe!!!!

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« Reply #55 on: June 17, 2011, 08:29:22 PM »
That Good :hee:.
I so Totally LOVE the idea of Danso Team!!!!! :luvluv1:
I really wish Aki-p make one since the girls aren't allowed to date and for FANSERVICE :hee:

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« Reply #56 on: June 20, 2011, 07:05:42 PM »
hy guys.... sorry for the late update  :panic: :panic: :panic: thanks for everyone that have reading my fict....  :yep: :yep: :yep:

now lets begin the new story...  :on gay:

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*sigh why I do this by the way. As she said that she gonna do that I feel worried to her. She always do something that full of risk and it ended I gotta to handle all the thing.

A month before she come to me and then she said she had found her prince charming. Its a guy from the all boys kendo dojo near our school. She already get all the data about him. I'm not surprise about that since her family got a lot of connection. She could find anyone data in a few minutes.

Its something usual that a girl like a guy but you all not gonna believe what my best friend plan to do.

She wanna disguise as a guy to get closer to that guy.

I shock as I heard about it. I already told her that it could be really dangerous. And have an argument with her. But she keep insist.

"Mooooe, come on help me to cover me. If my parents ask u where am I u just said I got an out door activities. Okay?" She said as give a puppy eyes to me.

"But...but...it could be danger. That is all boy dojo if they found out that u are a girl they could do something to you."

"Pleaseeeeeee~ only you could help me. Pleaaaseeee~ " I sigh but still how can I resist this "okay, but promise me u gonna call me and tell me anything in there okay?!"

She look happy and soon give me a hug "yeeeeaaaaay, thank you, you really my best friend." I just nodded and smile at her.

So, soon she prepare all the thing and apply at the kendo student there. Now she already become student there. She go there every day to practice and meet her prince charming. She get me know all the thing and one day when I pay her a visit I could see she is really exhausted.

I told her to just give up but she still don't want. She told me that there also a summer practice and an opening for new student. The new student will also join to the summer practice. She wants to go to the summer practice.

"Whooooooaaaat happen to you? You really look exhausted. You should get rest."

"I'm okay don't worry."

"You said that okay?! Oh come on. You push yourself. Just give up."

"I can't. I gotta got more information about him."

I sigh and face palm "so, what info u got?"

"Well, uhm.... His name is Kenji and he is so quiet. Never talk and have a flat expression."

"Huh? Its not really your type then."

"Nooo~ I like him. I wanna know why he becomes like that. Based on the information I got he used to be really friendly and cheer full."

I face palm and she continue "and by the way, there is an opening for the new student plus a summer practice. I gotta to be ready."

"Whaaaaat? So u wanna join the summer practice? It so hard. I'm not sure u can handle that." As I wanna said something she approach and hug me.

"I know u really worried about me takamina but I gotta to do this. You are my best friend I need your support." To be honest I hate when she do that. I hate why I couldn't said no to her. I just nodded and agree with her.

"Okay, find. But u gotta be be careful acchan." She nodded and smile.

After meet her I go home. I sit on my desk and looking at our picture together. I feel not easy, I'm afraid something could happen to her. And maybe because the feeling have towards her. First I thought its just a usual feeling but I guess I like her.

So, after thinking for a long time I make my decision. I'll disguise as a new student there and keep an eye of her. I'll disguise as a guy but she shouldn't known that it is me.
I already make up my mind and tomorrow I'll go to my cousin house. She is an make up artist and really expert. She could help me in disguise.

The next day I meet her and explain all the thing to her.

"Ah, I see. So you wanna do that coz you wanna help your friend?!" I nodded then she smiles "hehehe, its an easy to make up you as a guy since you are already look like one." She laugh and I pouts.

"Hahaha, gomen2. Let's we begin then. So, what type of guy u wanna be?"

"As long as acchan didn't recognize me."

"Uhm....if that so, I guess I should attach a little mustache and a glasses."

"Whatever?! Just do the best."

Then my cousin do make over to me. It take around 3 hours coz she really make it in detail.

As everything finish my cousin look at me amaze.

"So, how do I look??"

"You....you....kyaaaaaaa~ minami u so kakkoiiiiii~" my cousin approach me and hug me.

"Owwwwgh, yuko stop it."

"Hehe, I just amaze that u could be this handsome." She said as wink to me.

"Now, you could go to the dojo and apply there."

"Okay, don't worry. Plus I wanna look whether acchan notice me / not." I said as give her a smile.

"Hahaha, okay. Gudluck?! I wanna go on date with nyan2 today if u need anything just call me."

"Okay, jaa." She waves then I go to the dojo.

Now here I'm. As I arrive I already recognize her. She looks the most girly from the other there. I approach her and talk.

"Excuse me, I wanna join to this kendo dojo."

She look at me and smile. OMG her smile so cute even as a guy "yeah please. Fill this form and give back to me." I take the form and fill it. I look around her and there are a lot of guy approach her n talk to her.

Seems every thing is in order now. As I finish I give back the form. She look at the form and read it "takahashi seiji. Owgh?! Welcome to the dojo and this is your dojo suit." I smile and then she give her hand "I'm maeda. Nice to meet u." I shake her hand "btw u have a same family name as my friend. Are u related?" I a bit shutter "errr...guess not. I have just arrived here."

"Owgh, okay?! I'm also new here. Hope we can be friend. See u tomorrow at the camp."

"Okay. See u".

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I go back at home and prepare everything for tomorrow. As I try to sleep someone mail me. I grab my phone and when I open it its from acchan.

To.          : takamina
From.      : acchan
Subject.  : guess
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Hi there takamina,

Tomorrow I will go to the summer camp

Wish me luck okay.

I'll miss u a lots (˘⌣˘)ε˘`)

Now I wanna sleep.

Oyasumi~


Acchan

PS: by the way, today I meet a guy. He has just apply the dojo and he has the same name as u. :)

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Acchan, if only u know that he is me.

I reply the mail and sleep.

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Next morning I wake up and hurry go to the dojo. All the dojo member have gathered. Acchan wave to me and I approach her.

"Takahashi kun~ come here." as she call me I feel all the member see me. It looks like they all stare with me.

"Ohayou maeda." I approach her and suddenly one of the member come "well, seem u already close with him maeda. Who is he?" I bow and introduce my self "I'm takahashi. Yoroshiku."

"Ah, takahashi." He then grab me "listen?! If u do anything to maeda u'll face me and the rest in here."

'heeeee? What with this guys. Wooow, acchan. Even as a guy u still famous.'

"Satou senpai, its okay. He is a nice guy."

"Do....don't worry senpai. I won't to anything to him."

He look at acchan and suddenly the leader come. Its him.

"What happen in here?"

Sasuga from the leader. All the member suddenly bow and silence.

"Ah kenji san. Nothing. I just give an instruction to him."

Tsk...this guy. One on one with me later and I'll beat u up.

"Great, I don't wanna there is any fight here.the bus is ready. Let's go. And satou, don't disturb the kyouhai." Satou then bow and follow kenji.

Finally I meet him, the person that acchan like. Some how I feel really jealous. But what can I do. Now all I have to do is keep an eye on her.

I go to the bus and sit. Suddenly acchan approach me and sit beside me.

"Hey, can I sit here?" I look at her and a bit confuse "ye...yeah, sure. Please?!" She smile and sit beside me.

"Say, where your stuff."

"Owgh, senpai help me to carry it."

I look outside and I could see the guys lifting acchan bag. I guess I worried to much to her. Seem she already make all the guy in here willing to change their orientation. I gigle and shake my head.

A couple of minutes later the bus move. We both just silence and I could see she always looking at that kenji. After that she look at me and talk.

"Hey, u didn't talk much here. Are u always this quiet?"

"Ah, sorry, I just thinking."

"Heee...what a lame excuse." She chuckle.

We keep talking and talking. It seems no end. But then finally we arrive at the place.in here every room fit with 2 person. So we have to get a roommate.

The boys suddenly ask acchan to be their roommates. I really couldn't stand it. I don't trust that guy.

"Maeda, come on be my roommate okay."

"No, maeda will be with me."

"No he is not..."

Suddenly there a riot. And acchan can't do anything. I sigh then finally speak.

"Hey guys. Why don't u ask maeda who he wants to be his roommate. Don't keep arguing will u." I look at maeda

"Eerrrr... I....I....I don't know." I face palm then approach her.

"U wanna be my roommate??" I ask her and then she look at me "sure." And she smile.

"Owwwgh.... Why u chose him? Look at him. He look like a yakuza.  He even got mustache." I look at him annoyed but then acchan cling to me.

"Well, but he is nice" suddenly everyone stare at me with a killing stare. I feel this gonna be really hard.

I go to our room with acchan and as we arrive there she place all her stuff then change her cloth. She go out and heading to the bathroom. She doesn't know its me so she thought I also a guy. And its my chance to get change too. As her arrive she sit in her bed and we have a conversation again.

"Well, maeda it seem they all really like u." I said as grin to her "owgh, yeah. They really nice to me." 'They all like u of course they'll do that.

"Seem I gotta be careful to your fans." She chuckle but then she said "u know takahashi san, somehow I feel we have already have known each other for a long time."

'Of course, its me acchan.'

"Really? Haha, seems it just a de ja vu." I wink to her.

She a bit a blush but then smile. "Well, I gotta go sleep first takahashi san. Oyasumi~" acchan turn off the lamp and cover her body with a blanket. I reply her and go to sleep.

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The next day we will start our training.

Every day acchan always got up earlier than everyone, I pretend to keep sleeping then after she finish its my turn to get change.

After that we start to practice. I could see all the guys be gentle toward her. But it pissed me out when I see some of them purposely hug acchan or cling to her. But, there is one person that not like that its the leader kenji.

Kenji treat acchan like the others. He is so strict. Lucky for me coz I already get used to the hard training since I have learn martial arts. One moment acchan have to face one on one with him and she really almost beat up. look at it I hurry to cover her with my body so she won't get the last strike from him. And my shoulder got hit and its really painful. I only stare at him and he goes. Whether acchan look me in worry.

She bring me to our room and try to take care of my wound.

"You sit here and don't go anywhere." She said in hesitate.

"Its ok maeda. I can handle it by myself."

"No its my fault." She grab my shirt and try to open my cloth.

I worry and afraid my identity will found out I hurry up make a distance with her.

"Arrrrr.....it...its okay maeda. I can do it by myself. Could u just turn over."

"Why?"

"Well, it kind a embarrass so please." I said as pointed to her.

She chuckle and then turn over.

I hurry place the bandage in my shoulder then wearing my cloth.

"Okay, its done." I said as smiling.

"Owgh, u already placed it by yourself." She approach then sit beside me then suddenly hug me.

"Ma...ma...ma....maeda.."

"Thanks for protecting me before."

"Ye...yeah...its okay that's what friend do." I said as trying to release myself from her.

She just chuckle and I scratch my head then we have a chat.

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Since that incident we become so close, well actually we are but this is the new me. Let's say we become a very good friend.

I still keep my real identity from her. She regularly send a message to my other self "takamina". I proposely keep my phone only in vibrate mode so she is not suspicious.

One day I gotta help the senpai so I won't together with her for the whole day and the worst I forget to bring my phone. As I finish helping my senpai I go back to my room n sit in my bed. Seems acchan haven't come back.

I reach my phone then I look there is 1 message. I hurry open it and its from acchan. I shock when I read the message.

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From    : acchan
To        : takamina
Subject : I will do today
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Ne, takamina, I guess I will confess to him today

and I'll admit that I'm a girl in front of them all

wish me luck


acchan


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I jump up from the bed and rushes to go outside. then I heard an announcement. Its acchan voice.


To all the member please gather at the dojo.

I have an important announcement for u guys.



I hurry go to the dojo and everyone have gathered there. I cant do anything so I just stand and see what will happen.

"Guys, u must be wondered why I call u all here." acchan said as walk through the dojo. all the members confuse and just stare at each other.

"Actually, I wanna tell u all that I am a......" as she speak she let go her wig and reveal her hair. other member just froze and look at her.

"Yeah, actually I'm a girl and the main reason I join here is I wanna get to know kenji san." she approach kenji and all the member start to give serious look.

"Ne, Kenji san. I'm sorry, but I like you and I have to confess to you." acchan then look down and waiting for kenji reply. kenji then approach her and put both of his hand to her shoulder as all the guys there stunned look at the scene.

"*sigh, I already know from the beginning but I'm sorry, I already have someone I like and she'll be back next week." acchan look down and I'm sure she is holding her tears now.

she lift up her face and start talking "ah, its okay kenji-san. I can understand." kenji smile and try to comfort her "I'm sure there is someone out there that really care for you." acchan nodded and face the entire guys there "Thank you for all your attention to me guys." she bowed and then running away outside. everyone back to their room but me? I try to catch up with her.

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It still raining outside and her emotion is still unstable so I need to comfort her. I search near the dorm but havent found her until I reach a big tree near the practice area. She sit there crying, alone. I try to approach her and automatically hug her from behind as whispered something to her ear to make her comfort.

"I know how u feel maeda but, please dont cry anymore. Every tears that drop from your eyes same as every pain that I could feel. "

"wh....wh...why it feels so hurt? I know I shouldnt be like this. but still it hurt."

"Loving someone means u also have to prepare to feel the pain maeda. Love is sweet but also deadly. You maybe couldnt get the one u like love u back but you must know that outside there , there is someone care a lot about you." I said as tighten my embrace to her. there is a silent for a minuets. and then she try to pull back from my embrace and I loosen my grip. she then begin to talk to me.

"At least, I know that there is someone that care for me." she smiles at me and then I could feel both of her hands cup my cheek. I just stare at her and look deep into her eyes. soon, I could feel her soft lips is in my cheek. and I suddenly I'm shivering. I just freeze there look at her. then there is something that make me really surprise.

"Thanks that you always take care of me this whole time but... you dont have to be like this minami." I frowned at what she said. how did she knows that this is me. My undercover is perfect. I think and think then try to pretend dont know what she saying.

"errrr....uhmmm..... minami? who is minami?" she get closer to me and stroke my hair "stop pretending minami." she smile and pull out my wig and my long hair exposed. I just sit there and look at her as gulp. "errrr.....aaaa.....aaaa....anoooo..... how you know its me?" she smirk at me and poke my nose "BAAAAAKAAAAAA~ Only minami that would comfort me in that way." Shimatta... guess my suberanai chara work in here. tsk...

afraid that acchan would pissed off at me I try to explain it "well.....uhm....errrrr....I...I....I cant explain everything."

"Then tell me."

"I....I...I do this coz I'm worried about you."

"Only worry?" she said as pouting at me.

"ah, uhm....well..."

"well..??? what is it minami?" she said as pouting to me. Guess I cant run away from this , this time. I'll confess.

"Heeee.... okay, I give up. I worry about you yeah I admit it and its true but There is also another reason, I couldnt let those guys do anything to you." I said as looking down to hide my blush.

"And why you wont do that?" sigh, acchan really gonna torture me today.

"It because, I jealous. U see, everytime you got out with a guy I just couldnt stand it. What I'm trying to say is I... I.... I love you. I'm sorry but I love you. it honest from my heart." I dont dare to look at her eyes so I just keep looking down. suddenly I feel that gentle hand again. she lift up my face and our eyes met.

"now u have to responsible." soon I could feel that smooth lips again but this time is not in my cheek. I could feel it in my own lips. She kiss my so gently , I feel I've kissing an angle. she then broke the kiss and pinch my nose "aach....ach....ouch...ouch....itttaiiii acchan..." "BAAAAAKKAAAAA~ All this time I also like you but u never realize my action. You deserve to get punish." she pouts at me and all I can do just apologize to her. "I...I'm sorry acchan. Please forgive me." I bow to her.

she then hug me tightly "Just promise me one thing."

"anything for my angle."

"dont ever leave me." she said as look through into my eyes. I get closer and said that vow there under the heavy rain "I will never leave my angle and I'll do everything just for my lovely angle." then I kiss her again as a sign that I'll keep that promise.

"Good, now you'll be forgiven." she said as give her cute smile to me. Suddenly the rain is stop and I put back my wig coz We still have to go back to the camp.

"Anyway minami, there is one thing." I look at her in confuse "errrr.... what is it?"

"well, I know that its is you undercover coz....." she stop her sentence and chuckle

"huh? what is it acchan?"

she then burst out a loud laugh "ahahahahah, it coz one of your mustache is unattached properly. So i know it is a fake."

I look at her and face palm "heee???" I blush and as seeing me she wrap her hand in my neck "but u still sexy though." I just keep blushing and she chuckling.



Love is sweet




but....




Love is crazy...





I'll do anything.....





Just for the one I love.







FIN~


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 :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: okaaaaaay guys..... how about thiiiiis???? hope u like it  :cry: :cry: :cry:

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update ' Just For You ' 21 june )
« Reply #57 on: June 20, 2011, 07:25:30 PM »
yeahy DANSO!!!!  :glasses:

the mustache part is funny~~  :wahaha:

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update ' Just For You ' 21 june )
« Reply #58 on: June 20, 2011, 07:34:33 PM »
women in disguise for their love's sake!!

Acchan confessed but got rejected  :cry: Takamina to the rescue!!!

a Love confession under the rain :mon crazyinlove:

i like!

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update ' Just For You ' 21 june )
« Reply #59 on: June 21, 2011, 02:32:41 AM »
Awww the end is cute  :heart: And Minami following Acchan too  :heart:  Awwww me look like  :tama-excite: :tama-lotsaluv:
Thank for the update!

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