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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update ' Just For You ' 21 june )
« Reply #60 on: June 21, 2011, 12:38:10 PM »
Santa has an update   :heart:

heeeheee. awww, that was really cute, specially at the end but i can't imagine a proper minami with a mustache XD lol
thanks for the update sora-chuuuuan. btw that kenji guy is stupid for rejecting a flawless girl.  :smhid

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update ' Just For You ' 21 june )
« Reply #61 on: June 21, 2011, 08:10:47 PM »
Well, guys i glad u like my story, thanks for reading  :love: :love: :love: and here a fast update for me. i hope u like it too...  :thumbsup :thumbsup :thumbsup

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Otaku Love
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flashback
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"Heeeey, otaku boy just play with your action figure / doll there."

"He is such a dorkie. Look the glasses that he is wearing."

Why they always be like this to me. Is being an otaku is weird. I don't thing so.

"Listen to me otaku boy, just go home there is no place in here for u." He then look at my glasses. He grab it from me and take it.

"Hey, give me back that. Its mine."

"Wohohoho, what happen otaku boy? cant see? here I give it back to you." He then drop that glasses and step it.

"NOOOOOOOO~ STOP THAT~" I then push that boy and he seems pissed up.

"You! How dare you?! Guys, go get him." Suddenly the other boy hold me and that boy the one I push begin to beat me up until....

"HEEEEEEY!!!! STOP THAT! WHAT HAVE U DONE TO HIM!"

"Arghhhh....run guys..." The boys then run away and leave me alone there.

"Urgh.... Acc.....acchan....??"

"Kyaaaa~ kai, u bleeding." She then take me to the nearest park and treat me wound there.

"Ouch...ouch...ouch...patient acchan."

"*sigh, why they do this to you kai?"

I look down and I could see she worries to me "Same as usual. They just bullying me coz I'm an otaku." There is a silent and then I start to talk again "say, acchan, are you okay be my friend? U see, I'm an otaku and everyone think I am a weird. I just don't wanna..." Before I finished my word she shut me with her finger.

"Don't say that, we are friend and I don't find anything weird about it."

I look at her again "are u sure?"

"Yeah, and we will always be together."

end flashback
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present
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"Kai....kai....KAI WAKE UP!!!"

"Owgh, mom~"

"Hurry up, get ready. Don't make acchan wait again."

"Huh?ACCHAN??? I hurry got up as hearing that name. I go to the bath room and get ready for school. As I done I headed down stair and hurry go out.

"I'm going mom."

"Kai, u forget your bento."

"Ouch, sorry. Thanks mom."

"The other one is for acchan don't forget to give it to her."

"Okay I will."

I go out and there already waiting for me my bestfriend

"Ohayou kai."

"Uhm...ohayou acchan. Ready to go? Here, mom made you a bento."

"Owgh, aunt so nice. Say my regards to her." she said as giving her cute smile. She really beautiful as usual.

"Ready to go?" She nodded but then ask

"Btw what's that?" She pointed to the magz that I hold.

"Owgh? This? As usual. An anime magz." I wink at her.

"U really such an otaku kai." she chuckle and I just smile.

Well, yeah... I am an otaku. And hello guys, my name is takahashi kai and this cute girl is my best friend. Maeda atsuko. We've been a friend since kid. She is really kind and the most important she is okay that I'm an otaku.

Many of my friends said that 'man, dude how come an otaku like u have a bestfriend like maeda. She is cute and an idol look.' Or 'man, kai I really envy you. You always together with that maeda.'. Yeah, they all said that. And there is one word that my friend ask me and it keep me thinking 'kai, how your feeling toward her? If I were you I would make her mine.' *sigh

Well, actually I really like her. I wanna to confess to her but I just can't. I don't know whether she likes me too or not and I afraid if I confess I would lose this friendship. Guess I just see what will happen.

Soon, we arrive at school and as usual all the boys already waiting for her and try to confess to her. But zannen, all that guy being rejected. I wonder why type of guy that acchan like.

Then, As we arrive at the her locker , the locker already full of love letter and chocolate and it end up she give it all to me. Ahahaha, she is soooo popular. But it kind a make me aware. How long my friend ship could lasted. I couldn't imagine if one day she found the guy she is looking for.

We then directly go to our class where my other best friends already waiting for me.

"Yoooo acchan, kai ohayou."

"Ah, ohayou, riku, kuu." We reply in union.

Then suddenly one person come "riiiiiiikkkkkuuuuun~"

Yeah, that yuko. "Yukoooo~ stop it. Its class."

"But I miss you~" yuko said as clinging to riku. They then go and acchan sit in her desk whether I and kuu having a talk.

"Say kai, how is it?" Kuu ask as smirk to me.

"What about?"

"Argh, u are so slow kai, about you and acchan. U have to confess to her."

"Sssstttt..... Calm down and don't said so loud acchan could hear it." I covered kuu mouth with my hand.

"*sigh, I can't confess to her. She must be reject me."

"Gggrrrrrr.... U even haven't tried it and you already give up. Listen kai, u should make a move if not you'll gonna lost her. U could see how many boys have tried to be her boy friend." I just sigh and scratch my head

"Well, how can I make her attract to me. Look at me. I'm an otaku, people think I'm a weird, I wearing a glasses etc."

"But, let me ask, if she doesn't like you then why she want go with you?" Kuu suddenly make me realize something , could it be I still have a chance.

Suddenly the bell rangs and the teacher come to the class with a tall guy?!

"Morning students, today I have some announcement. Coz I gotta go for an unknown periode , so you'll have sub teacher.. Please introduce yourself " owgh, so he is the new teacher.

"Morning class , my name is miyazawa sae and I'll be your sub teacher. Yoroshiku." After that teacher introduce his self all the girl in the class screaming except one. Its acchan but I could see she amazed. Somehow my hurt beating and I'm feeling not good. Tsk... What happen to me.

"Say, kai. Seems u already have a rival. I could see acchan admired that teacher u should be careful."

Tsk, what kuu said is right. I feel uneasy.

So , since that teacher coming I could see something changing, acchan, she is more cheerful and she always talking to that teacher. Is she like him? Its ok if she like him but coz of him my time with her is lessen. What should I do?

I sit at the cafe alone as reading my manga. Usually I come with acchan but she said she has to do something, I bet it has connection to that teacher again. I sigh then suddenly a voice make me awake

"Yooooo! Kai!"

"Whoooaaaa, kuu. What are u doing in here?"

"Hahaha, I suppose to ask you. Why u are here? Alone?" He ask as sitting in front of me.

"Well, what else?reading a manga."

"I mean, where is acchan u always come here together with her."

I just silent but I really can't hide anything from him. To be honest this guy has a special ability.

"Must be acchan have another business with that miyazawa guy right." Tsk, he always strike to the point.

"Heeee, okay I admit. Yeah she is with him."

"Heeee? Don't u try to do anything to it. Don't let that miyazawa guy take her from you." He said as gesture her finger.

I put my chin on the table and sigh "I know! But how?"

He lift up his eyebrow and then hurry grab me. "I know someone who can help you. Come on."

He then drag me to somewhere I don't know.

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Around 20minutes me and kuu arrives at someone house. I read the board family name there "Itano Residence"
'itano?! I think I have heard it.where could it be. Uhm....'

"Owgh, come on kai let's go." Kuu drag me and he then push the bell.

"Yes, who is it?"

"Its me kuu, I nees your help."
"Okay, wait a moment."

'Wait?! I know that voice. Itano.... Maji ka???' I frowned as the door open.

"Hi there kuu...and Owgh, so.... The otaku club leader"

'Tsk that's its itano from the cheer leaders club. I should have known it.' Well, sometime we the otaku got tease by the member of others club.

"Ahahaha, hy there, itano."

"Owgh hi there kai, please just call me tomo its okay. And don't be afraid I won't tease / bully you."

Yeah, she right. Among that people only yuko and tomo that never do that to us the member of otaku club.

"Please come in and have a sit." I and kuu come in and sit in the sofa.

"Well, I'll just to the point with you tomochin. My friend here need help." Tomo listening to kuu and just nodded. Kuu explain everything to tomo and she smiles.

"Aaaah, I see. Well, actually I kind a worry with the relation between you and acchan recently kai. I think she spend more time with that miyazawa sensei."

"Sooooo....what should I do then?"

Both tomo and kuu look and smile.

"Well, seems that he need my magic touch kuu."

"Oyeah, sure he is. I let u handle all the things."

"Heee? Wha...wha....what are u guys tryong to do with me..."

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the next day
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I look at my new style at the mirror and sigh.

'Heeeee, is it alright I go to school in this style?'

'Guess, just wait and see.'

I almost got late to school so I hurry go down stair and greet my mom.

"Ohayou mom. I go first."

"Ohayou kai.. And here you forgot your.....aaaaa~" my mom surprise looking at me.

"Kai?you are kai?" I smile and chuckle to her "of course its me mom."

"What happen to your style?"

"Owgh, errrrr, I just wanna try a new style mom. Not good?"

"Nonononono.... Its fit u well. Now here your bento and here is acchan. Don't forget to give it to her."

"Well, mom about bento for acchan...."

"Why?are u two fight? I rarely seing her now." She look confuse to me.

I just smile to her "no, she is just been busy lately."

"Well, I don't know what happen but anything happen just settle it in a right way okay."

I nodded and go right away to school. as I go out my house it seems so quite. usually acchan will wait for me to school but now. heee... I only can patient. I walk to school and on my way I could feel all the girls are looking at me as they want to eat me. I could hear also what they said 'kakkoii~' or 'that guy is so cute.' . I increase my speed and finally I arrive at school. but it getting worst. as I arrive at school all the girls start chasing me.

"HEEEEE? IS IT THE OTAKU BOY?? KAKKOOOOIIIII~"

"HEEE??? HOW COULD HE CHANGE LIKE THAT? MOOOOEEEEE~ "

"KYAAAAAAA~ KAI KUN DONT RUN AWAY~"

I run away and try to hide from that girls. as I run I almost bump into acchan but luckily I success avoid it her.

"ACCHAN GOMEN~"

I could see she looks confuse. I think she even not recognize me. I run and try to the rest room as text kuu so he could help me. finally I can hide in the rest room and wait kuu there. I could hear that freaking girls still chasing me. as I waiting kuu I remember what tomo said


whoooaaaaaa, kai, u look so kakkooiiiii~

I'm sure acchan will fall for you but remember one think....

Becareful when u go to school



*sigh, I hate to admit it but she is right. I totally have to be careful. I wait and wait for kuu and finally he comes.

"HEY KAI OHAYOOOOOU~" he said with a loud voice I hurry covered his mouth with my mouth "ssssstttttt~ be quite or they will find me." I look around and feel relieve that no one there.

"ahahaha, relax kai, and wooow u really change. " he smirk to me "heeeee.... thats because tomo has make over me." he then began to giggle and suddenly the bel rangs and we both hurry headed to the class.

"well, we discuss it later. now lets got back to class. I'm sure acchan will surprise looking at you."

as I and Kuu arrive at class suddenly it become quite. all my friends look at me and stunned there. I hurry go to my sit and have a talk with kuu and riku.

"uwooooogh, kai.... u really change." riku said as just stare at me. "naaaaah, I just wanna change my style a bit." suddenly acchan come and I just smile to her.

'okay here it goes. as like tomo said :

lesson 1
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you have to look cool and as usual nothing change.

'

'yooooosh, I can do this.' I walk toward acchan and greet her. "errrrr.... hi there, acchan. ohayou!" she look at me confuse but then recognize me "ah, kai. woooow.... what with the sudden change?" I scratch my head "well, I just wanna try something new. how is it? not good?" she shake her head and smile to me "nope, its really fit you. you are so kakkoi." I just look down to cover my blush "and anooo... here, mom made u some bento." I give her bento to her "aaah, aunt so nice, send my regards to her." "yeah, I will no problem."

then that miyazawa sensei come and acchan start to ignore me again. 'OMG what should I do now.'

If first move not enough do the second one. try to join the same club as the sensei usually teach.

'okay, I heard this sensei teach in basketball club. guess I gonna join. yosh.... ganbatte kai' and then I decided to join the basketball club.


after school
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"Okay, everyone who wanna apply for basketball club please gather at the sport hall now."

i hurry go to the sport hall and there I feel my heart gonna blow up. I see acchan with that sensei again. urgh, I feel i couldnt breathe. but I have to stand it. 'patient .... kai.....patient....'

I got into the crowd that gonna apply for basketball. I could see acchan and tomo there. they have their cheer club activities there.  suddenly one of my senpai come and try to flirt acchan.

"hai there maeda, having practice?" I could see that acchan annyed with that

"yeah, and you better leave senpai, we having a practice here."

"owgh, what with that pout. come on acchan go out with me. I'm the basketball capt." he grabs acchan hand and that what my patient over.

"let her go senpai." I approach him and release acchan from him.

"owgh, the otaku boy. u dare to fight me now huh?"

I hold acchan hand as standing in front of her "Even you are my senpai if there is about acchan I could do anything."

"well, then. let settle this in 1 on 1 game otaku boy." he said as lead me to the basketball court.

"Kai, dont do that. u could be beaten. you know he always make his opponent get hurt." acchan said as holding my hand. I turn around and smile to her "just believe in me acchan."

I follow him and the game is started.

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we play street basketball here. even though I'm an otaku but actually I usually go out for a basket ball practice. even acchan dont know about it. so, first ball is with him. he drible to pass my guard. and suddenly his elbow thrust my stomach. and I get down.

"uuuurrrrrrrghhhhh~"

"kaaaaaaaaaaiiiii~"

"Hahahahaha, ! point there otaku boy."

I look at him with anger and now is the time. the ball still in him. he dribble to me and try to pass me againa and do the same. but before he do that I make a counter and steal the ball from him and do a 3 points shoot and it in. I could hear everyone shouting and cheer me. I could see that he is pissed out but I already read how his pattern so it easy for me.

So in the end I am the winner. All the people cheer for me. then suddenly tomo run roward me and kiss me in the cheek. I surprise at her action and as I look at acchan I could see she look hurt.

"to...to...tomo, what are you doing?"

she just smile and grin "remember what I said yesterday. 'Make her jealous.' and I'm helping you now. "

"whaaaaaaaat???"

"u see her expression right. Now go find her."

I look at tomo and run as fast as I can to find acchan. I have searched for her but I cant find her anywhere. so then I decided to call her and text her but no reply. I sigh and just go home.

the next day I meet her at class but she Ignore me. she just leave , not letting me to speak to her. then after school I wait for her at the school gate.

"acchan, wait. I need to talk to you." she just keep ignoring me and go. I suddenly grab her hand.

"acchan please, tell me whats wrong?? "

"let me go kai."

"no, I wont let you go until you want to listen to me."

I then tighten my grip "Let me go kai, u hurt me."

then that teacher approach and slamp me to the ground. "you hear her, let her go." he approach acchan and look at her. I couldnt stand it anymore and saying something that hurting her heart.

"Fine, just do whatever you want. I'm just a weird otaku boy that nothing to you." she turn back and slap me "ittataiiiiiii... why you do that?" I cup my cheek as looking at her, and suddenly she said "I Hate you kai." god, she is crying. I have hurt her. what have I done. she then just run away and leave me alone standing there.

after that we never talk to each other. Its so hurt, so painful. everyday without her seem like a hell for me. kuu, tomo, yuko and riku worry about me.

"Sorry kai , I didnt know that it will be like this."

"Its okay tomo. Its my fault not yours. "

as I saying that miyazawa sensei call me and we have a serious talk.


"so, takahashi san, u know why I call you?"

I give him a confuse look "No, what is it?"

"heeee, takahashi san u know, I know you worried about maeda san. U better talk to her."

"for what? she already hate me."

"ahahaha, takahashi san u really like her dont you. actually I know you like her so I try to make you confess to her. but it seems u didnt got it. " the sensei said as chuckle.

"well, anyway takahashi, u know why acchan a bit ignore you a couple of day before?" I shake my head and ask "why?"

"It because she wants to give u this." the sensei give me a hand made hand band where and the letter there ...

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play this video as a background..




hello kai,

sorry recently I ignore you

I have to do that. I wanna give u a surprise.

soon will be our first meet anniversary.

yeeeaaaay~

So I make this for you.

there is your and my inisial.

I hope we will be always together.



Love acchan.



I wanna cry and smack my own self after reading it. "Now u know right takahashi. confess to her now." I nodded and run as fast as possible to her house. I know she is alone now so one will disturb.

as I almost arrive at her house I look she want to get into the house I call her but she then hurry got into the house and lock the door.

"acchan, please open the door. I need to talk to you its important."

"we no need to talk anymore kai, I hate you. I REALLY HATE YOU!!!"

"acchan, listen I'm sorry okay, I really sorry. I need to talk to you. Open the door."

there is no reply from her. "Fine , I'll just wait in here."

"You better go, it will snowing later. You'll be sick."

"No, I wont go anywhere until you open the door."

I could hear her step moving away from the door so I go a bit outside coz I know she heading to her room in second floor. I wait at the place that she can see me. I wait and still waiting. it already midnight and the snow started to fall down. lucky for me I wear a jacket but it still freezing. I wait there and wait until I fell asleep. I feel really dizzy and cant move. all my body become numb. but then I could hear someone approach me and hug me. I try to open my eyes.

"urgh...ach....ach....acchan, sor...sor....sorry I hurt you."

"baka, u have a high fever now. why u are so stubborn. "

I cup her cheek and said that "coz you are my heart beat. and I could still alive with my heart beat around me.'

that the last thing I could remember.

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a couple of minutes later I conscious and I lay in a bed where beside me is my angle holding my hand. I stroke her hair and she wake up.

"uhmm....? kai? are you awake?"

"owgh, sorry I wake u up."

"no its okay." there is a silent but then I started to speak.

"ano acchan about yesterday I'm sorry. sorry I have hurt you. sorry... but the one think I already wanna tell you for a long time is I love you. I wanna to confess to you for a long time ago but I'm to scare, U are a perfect angle and I'm just a weird otaku. I afraid of being reject. I also feel really jealous everytime u with other guy. I know maybe its to late for me but.... this hand band is make me realize that you are mean everything to me."

she still keep silence and looking down.

"all I wanna ask is the forgiveness from my beloved angle. will you forgive me?" I look directly to her eyes and then she getting closer and closer until there is no space between us. Her lips touch with mine. Its so sweet and so soft. she kiss me so gently and I could feel it full of loves. I feel I could make it lasted but we have to break the kiss coz we both need air. after kissing me she smile and cup my cheek

"I will forgive you kai. I also apologize that I have slap you before." I grab her hand "Its okay, if that slap could make me together with you and its okay for me to change just for you."

she smile and give me a quick kiss in my cheek "well, I also love u kai. u dont have to change for me."


I got up and hug her. "thank you acchan. you are everything for me. dont leave me."

she then hug me back and tighten the grip


"I wont .... "


"I really Love My Otaku Boy."


FIN~

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« Last Edit: June 22, 2011, 01:34:08 AM by sorakamiya »

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Otaku Love' 22 june )
« Reply #62 on: June 21, 2011, 08:22:05 PM »
i can only say wohoohohho

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Otaku Love' 22 june )
« Reply #63 on: June 22, 2011, 04:08:01 PM »
It's just so loving..
Love all the one shots written..  :heart: :wub:

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Otaku Love' 22 june )
« Reply #64 on: June 22, 2011, 05:21:55 PM »
Yeah otaku powaaa!

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Otaku Love' 22 june )
« Reply #65 on: July 09, 2011, 06:41:41 PM »
thanks for reading guys.....  :cow: :cow:

now lets just get started... hope u like it....  :grin: :grin: :grin:


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"Minami, look your brother you have to be like him."

"Yeah minami, stop playing around."

"See, your brother good at study."

"Don't...."

"I'm done eating."

I place my plate in wash bin and headed to my room.

"Minami, where u go?!" Mom call me but I just ignore her.

"I go look for her." My brother then chase me.

I hurry got into my room and close the door. And suddenly I heard my brother knock the door.

"Minami, are u okay?"

"Just go kai, leave me okay."

"Fine, do whatever u want."

Yeah right, u know, for the rest of my life since I was a kid I always haunted by my brother shadow. Takahashi kai and takahashi minami, twins, but different. I know my brother is way ahead smarter , diligent , handsome etc than me. Its irritate me when someone compare me to him. We are twins but we are different. Seems all the good is in him whether the other is in me.

At the first I'm okay with all that thing but it change since I know one reality that hurt my heart. Its when I know I'm in the middle of a relationship with my best friend Maeda atsuko or I usually call her acchan.

Me and acchan are always together. she always support me, always there when I need her and vice versa. I never notice that she and my brother have some relation or like each other. They never show it to me.

One day unaccidently when I have my evening jog I saw acchan headed to the park. I decided not to call her and just stalk her. Then as she arrive at the park I see she and my brother have a conversation. I don't know what they talking about. I just see they suddenly hug each other. I shock at what I see and run as fast as I can. I'm guess they notice me but I just keep running.

I really can't sleep that night. I feel betrayed. My heart hurt...really hurt...it like stabbed with a knife through my heart. I cry all night long until I feel I fell a sleep.

The next morning as usual I went to school but alone now. I avoided acchan as fast as I can. I don't wanna meet her. I need time to be alone. But she won't let me. One day after school she drag me to the school backyard where no one there. I just look down don't there to look at her. She ask me about that park incident. And I admit that was me at that time. She then try to explain to me that , that not what I saw. But I'm not letting her and just go leave her alone there crying on her knee. So since then I never talk to her anymore or even if I should I just being cold to her.

Now, I think its enough. I couldn't stand it anymore. My parents always pressure me , my bestfriend lied to me then nothing left for me.

I walk to the mirror in front of me and look at my self.

'This is me. Why they can't accept my ordinary me.'

'What do I wrong?'


I keep standing there and take the scissors. I have prepared for this for a long time. Now its the time.

'if they really wanna me to be like him. Then they will got that tomorrow.'

After that I got my long hair to be cut and then tomorrow is my new life.

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Next moring I wake up early and hurry to get change. I get my new uniform that I have made for this moment and now I stand in front of my mirror, look the new me. As I see me it remind me to my brother. The different is only the hair color. He got blond and I'm black. I grab my bag and headed downstair to meet my parent.

As I go down all the family member surprise looking at me. Specially my brother.

"MINAMI?! WHAT HAVE U DONE?" My parent said

"U guys want me to be like kai right? Now u have it. From now on this is me and u guys bare with it." I said it and then left house with my brother chase me.

"Minami wait." He then grab my hand

"What have u done?"

"What? Don't u like it? This is me now."

"Minami, u are a girl. But now look at u?! Short hair male uniform?! What got into your mind?!"

"SHUT UP! I hate to live in your shadow okay?! They want me to be like you and now here I am. I already be like you. Now excuse me I almost late."

I leave him and right away go to school. As I arrive at school all eyes looking at me I can hear the whispered 'huh? Is that takahashi? Takahashi kai?' Or 'no...no...no...kai have blond hair and its black.' As my brother come they realize that it is me 'that's kai's sister?? What happen?' 'Why she wear boy uniform.' 'They really look a like.'

I hurry got into my class and pass maeda. All I can see from her is her surprise expression as murmur my name

'Minami.... Why?'

I just ignore her and look at the other way.

Actually deep in my heart I still care for her but my soul have been sealed now. its already cold. I don't know what can recover that.

Time pass so fast everyone already get use to see me like this. Even my friend fine with it. I also make a new friend. One of my friend, miichan is a street racer. Every night she got into the street race. I got interesting and every night I sneak out with her to the street race. since her father own a car shop and a racer, she could get a car easily. She got her own mechanic, her name is sayaka and her assistant, names sae. Owgh don't forgot also my other friend haruna, she is the navigator.

One day, miichan ask me to join the race also. At the first I'm not really have a confident in that but as I ride it I like it. It can make me forget everything except the race and speed. And that day I won my first victory.

After the race I got home and as I wanna enter the home I got caught by my parents.

"Minami, where have u been?" My dad said and I just silence.

"minami answer you father." My mom look at me and hug me

"I go out to meet a friend."

"Hmph, why u can't be like your brother he is..." I shout as he said that. I got enough.

"YEAH!I CANT BE LIKE HIM. EVEN IF I ALREADY CHANGE LIKE THIS U NEVER THINK I'M EXIST. ME IS ME, DONT COMPARE WITH HIM. WHY U DONT GET IT DAD?!" There is a silence.

"Well it seem, I don't have any choice. I'll leave this house." I go get my things and prepare to got out from house.

"Noo, minami, don't leave me. Mom gonna change don't leave." My mom said as grab my hand

"Minami.... Don't go," my brother said

"Now u guys will live without me and be happy about that kai." And what broke my heart is my father said

"FINE, JUST GO. I DONT HAVE ANY DAUGHTER LIKE YOU."

Before I leave the house I turn back and face my father "U never have from the beginning."

I leave and I go to the park. I called miichan whether I can stay at her place at the moment and she response it happily. I come to miichan house and tell her what happen.

"Ah, I see. So what are u gonna do next minami?"

"Well, I don't know. Tomorrow I'll go to school to get my graduation certificate."

"Uhm.... Why don't u stay with us minami. We could make a great racer team and u could work with my father as a racer too. I know your skill." She said as smiling to me.

"Huh? Are u sure?" I surprise as what she said.

"Yeah, so???" She smirk at me and I agree

"Thank u so much miichan."

"U are welcome buddy."


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Next day I go to school to take my graduation certificate. As I wanna go a voice calls me.

"Minami!"

I turn around and that's maeda. I just look at her and ask what she wants "what is it maeda?"

"Can we have a talk?"

"For what?" I ask coldly

"Just 10 minutes. Please?!"

I nod and then we have a talk.

"I.... Kai has told me everything."

"Owgh, really?! Then what?"

"Why u do that minami? Its not u."

"Minami?! Who u call maeda? I'm no more minami. I'm nobody." I said to her harshly.

I could see the pain in her eyes but I just ignore it "why?why u be like this minami?" She starts to sobbing.

"Its already my destiny maeda." I turn so backing her and try to leave her.

Suddenly I could feel a hug from back "please...don't leave..."

"Let me go maeda." I try to release my body from her.

"Maedaaaa.... Let me go."

"YADAAAA!! I WONT LET U GO!!" Her grip become tighten to me and I stop moving.

"What's wrong with u? What do u want?"

"I wanna my old minami back." She still sobbing , buried her face in my back.

I hold her hand and release her grip from my body.

"Your old minami already dead." I said as leaving her.

At that moment I wanna cry so laud, but I can't. I don't know why but it seems my tear already dry.


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Soon after my graduation I move and live with miichan family. Her parent really nice to me. Her father flean san teach me everything about race and her mom nalyn san is a great chef. We all love her cooking. My tutor wisnu san really patient in teach me to be faster. I try my best to be a great racer. My senior sora san also really helping me. She always become my practice partner.

I take around 1 year to learn racing and soon I'll have my first national race. In this national race I'm with miichan father team. It calls "JhipsRace". Miichan is my manager, haruna still in her position as navigator and sayaka and sae my mechanic. In this first race I reach second position. for a beginner like me its already great and start from that time My rank increase until I become the champion and number one racer.

now , I'm a professional racer and finally I manage to get out from my brother shadow. Everyone knows me as Takahashi Minami the professional racer not as takahashi kai twin. I even got a nickname, now my nickname is takamina. I like the name and enjoy my live now.

Even now I already have my own life I still thinking about my family and maeda. I have been follow her actually recently. She is now a famous idol. There is some regret inside my heart. I havent heard her explanation and I already ignore her. will I got another chance? All I can do is sending her a flower every her performance and writen from "secret admire".

Soon I will have my final International race. I practice from morning till midnight. Today I have practice at 3. before that I will have a photo shot for a racer calender. They said I'll have a partner when the photoshop but I havent known who. so here I'm after the interview , waiting for the photoshot section. Then finally the photographer call me and introduce me to my partner. and it make me frowned.

"So, Takamina, she will be your partner." the photographer pointed to a girl

"Let me Introduce u she is Maeda Atsuko. And Maeda Atsuko she is takamina."

She shock as looking at me and then I just grab and shake her hand "I'm takamina, yoroshiku."

she just keep silent "well, lets get start then."

as she wanna reject being my partner I just take her hand and guide her to the photo session. I glad I can meet her but I just being cold to her well, except when the photo session then. after the photoshot I hurry grab my stuff and prepare for practice. but suddenly she grab my hand stop me.

"Wait minami?!"

"Uhm? can I help you maeda san?"

"u still call me that?" I just keep silence and then she ask me something

"Can... we have a talk?"

"uhm... I have a practice after this. If u want we can talk after that. wanna wait until I finish?" I said to her.

I could see her smile and it make my cold heart to her get melt "Sure, I'll be waiting."

then after that I hurry go to the practice area. soon we all arrive there and prepare for everything. as I wanna got into my car suddenly coach wisnu call me.

"Yooo, takamina."

"Yeah Coach , whats up?"

"U have a guest."

suddenly when I look at coach wisnu direction here there stand someone that I hate, My brother. I try to ask coach wisnu to said to him that I'm busy but he just shook his head and said 'Face It Now.' I exhale my breathe and meet him.

"What do u want?" I said in irritate tone

"I know maybe u still hate me. But please minami. Go home. Mom and Dad need you."

"No, remember what dad said?! He doesnt have any daughter." It like scar that cant be vanish in my heart

I could see kai sigh "*sigh I know u must be still remember about that. but now dad has changed. He admit that he is guilty to you.He is sorry."

"should I believe it?"

"come on minami u gotta believe it. and i just wanna tell u that mom is sick and she is at the hospital now."

I shock to what he has said "She really miss u minami. Please come home. here the hospital phone u can come anytime."

I take the name card and he just leave. I start my practice but now I cant focus. My mom is sick. My dad is apologize to me what should I do know. I keep moving fast and suddenly in  a sharp curve I lost my balance and hit the pit. My car crash and its on fire. Everyone hurry to take me out before to late. I got out and luckily I'm okay. All I can hear there is maeda shout my name and she looks really worry to me.

"Takamina are u alright?" sora san ask me

"yeah, its okay, I'm fine."

"Seems u arent focus there." coach wisnu said as look at me.

suddenly I have a news that my brother is hospitalize due to the physical harassment. I hurry go to the hospital also with maeda. She said she'll accompany me. As I arrive at the hospital a police talk to me and found a badge , its has my rival symbol. They said there is a possibility that they actually looking for me but since it already night they mistook my brother as me since we are twin. It make my blood boil. But now I gotta meet my brother.

I got into the ward and see he is there.

"Hey, are u okay?" he just smile to me and hold my hand "I'm fine."

"Dont worry, I'll gonna take a revenge for you in the race." I said as smirk at him.

"Haha, thank u minami. anyway, I saw atsuko before. have u two meet?"

"yeah, she is waiting outside. what is it? looking for your lover?"

"Minami, u should know something. I know I have made a mistake to you. But the truth is there is nothing between me and atsuko."

I frowned at what he has said "What do u mean? I saw u to embrace each other." I said with a glare

"No...thats not true. The truth, I dis confess to her but she reject me. She said she has someone that she like. and its u minami."

I feel my heart gonna stop and I feel more guilty now "What just u said?"

"She likes u minami. U should know that. She hug me, it just a friendly hug."

I feel my body weak now and just sit in the chair beside kai bed "Listen Minami, u still have a chance. Dont let her go."

I smirk at him and get out the room "dont worry. I have my way. I already forgive u and our parent now I have a race to do."


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as I got out the room I see maeda fell asleep. I look at her sleeping face. 'She is so cute. ' I take off my jacket and cover her body with it. 'Why U didnt said that to me. I'm sorry acchan.' I kiss her and then leave for practice.

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Finally the race day is come. I look at my rival face in anger. How could they use dirty way like that. Now, I'll get a revenge on u. I'll beat u.

soon everything is set and I get into my car race. I could look in the spectators sit My parent , my brother and acchan. my relationship with them already get better now. I visit my brother after my practice and then go to see my mother. My mother surprise at the first when looking at me so do my father. But then they hug me and apologize that they have abandon me for this years. as for acchan, after this race I'll go talk with her. I wave my hand to them and the race is start.

as the race start I hurry push my gas pedal into the max speed. I manage to the 5th position in the first lap. I keep drive fast until in the 10th lap I can manage in the 3rd position. Some cars are trying to crash me but thanks to haruna navigate I made it to avoid them. soon in the 20th lap I manage to be in the 2nd position. In this final I have 25 laps until finish. I keep in my position and now is the last lap. I keep in tail to my rival car and in a sharp twist I manage to cut my rival car. I keep moving and finally I get into finish whether my rival car hit the pit. the car loose it balance when I do the cut.

I got out from the car with a victory.

"YEEAAAAAAAAAH!!! WE DID IT GUYS!!!" I said in cheer

"TAKAMINAAAAAAAA!!!! As I thought U can do that." Miichan, haruna, sayaka and sae then hug me

"Good job kid." coach wisnu said as poke my shoulder

"HEEEEY MY FAV RACER!!! OMEDETOU." Sora san scratch my head.

after that I go to the podium and receive my trophy. I hurry got down and celebrate it with the other again.

"Well, u have done it kid u great." uncle flean said as give me a hug

"Yeah, u do great takamina. I'll make u your fav food today." aunt nalyn said as poke my head

"Wooooow, thanks aunt."


suddenly I could see my family approaching and meet miichan parent

"Thanks for taking care my child all this time. we dont know what to say and How we can repay u." my parent said as bow to miichan parent

"No its okay sir we are family and takamina is a good kid." they have their conversation whether now my attention is pointed to acchan

I approach her and greet her "Yooo...."

"Hi there, congratulation." she said as hug me

"ano acchan..." she broke the hug and look at me

"u call me with that name again."

"Listen, kai has told me everything and sorry for my attitude to u this whole year. I apologize. will u....uhm.... give me another chance?"

I said as bow to her. Soon I could feel a warm hand wrap around me and there she cries "My minami already back. Please dont leave me again."

"I wont, I'm sorry. I love u acchan."

"I love u too minami."

I hug her tightly and the without realize I already kiss her. I hold her waist and her hand wrap around my neck. we enjoy our moment together and suddenly our vision back to the reality as I heard miichan shout

"EHEM...EHEM....YOOO GUYS, GET A ROOM WILL YOU!!!" All the people there laughing whether I and acchan keep embracing each other.

"Lets approach them." I said to acchan she is nods. We approach them as holding our hand and wont let it got from each other.



now, my soul already be free~




FIN~

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dou guyssssss......  :panic: :panic: :panic: sorry it kind a long  :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: hope u like it  :cry: :cry: :cry:

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Free' 10 july )
« Reply #66 on: July 09, 2011, 06:55:05 PM »
HAPPY ENDING FTW!!!!!!

yey me the mommiee!! hahaha xD
Still shipping them early pairs. 1st generation ftw!

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Free' 10 july )
« Reply #67 on: July 09, 2011, 06:58:02 PM »
yey me the daddieeeee~~~  :lol:

haih~~ takamina!! Acchan always love you~~~  :deco:

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Free' 10 july )
« Reply #68 on: July 21, 2011, 09:25:16 PM »
I love it!!!!!!!
It almost made me cry! Really, it's great!!!!!

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Free' 10 july )
« Reply #69 on: July 25, 2011, 12:45:57 AM »
hi guys  :grin: :grin: thanks for reading, now lets just get started okay... :thumbsup

I have this idea as I wake up. :grin: :grin: hope u like it  :thumbsup :thumbsup


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Jealousy
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‘oouuuuch, what happen to me?’

‘its just a dorama. Its....its.....its..... aaaarrrrrghhhh.....’

‘as I seen that scene I feel my heart arching.’

‘i shouldnt have watch that.’




Fashback
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After the practice for the stage , me, haruna and  miichan having a stay over at miichan house since she also ask us to accompany her. Her parent is out of town now. After the dinner I cleaning the dishes whether haruna and miichan are in the leaving room watching. After I finished cleaning the dishes I approaching them.

“yooooo, takamina. Come here! Join us.” Miichan call me to gather them.

“So, what are u watching guys? Seems fun.” I said as have my way and sit beside miichan.

“owgh, we are watching acchan new dorama.” Haruna inform me.

“aaaaaah~ I see, I havent watched it.”

“takamina, u are so slow. Its already the second episode.” Haruna facepalm.

“Gomen!” I said as scracth my back. “So, what kid of dorama is it?” I ask curiously.

Suddenly miichan shows her usual smile , actually I kind a annoyed with her smile to me like that since its the sign that she’ll do something

“ne, takamina, u know what? Acchan playing as a student in all boy school in this dorama.”

“ALL BOY STUDENT SCHOOL???” I shock an then haruna try to shut me

“ssssshhhhh~ be quite its started.”

As the dorama begin, I cant take away my eyes from her. She is really kakkoii. Even as a guy she could make me stunned. She totaly  a great actrist. Her role in this dorama totaly amazing. She totally look like a boy. I just smile looking her in the dorama. But somehow , looking her around the other boys make me uneasy. I feel I wanna just got there and protect her from the guy touch. Arrrgh~ its make me irritate.

Miichan see my expression and smirk to me  “I guess someone is jealous in heeereee~ ” She said as poke my left arm with her elbow.

“Stop that!” I pout to her and I just could hear a chuckle from haruna.

When the commercial time I excuse myself to the bathroom. I wash my face and my hand then head back to them. But suddenly miichan and haruna come rushes to me and try to block my vision to the tv.

“Whooooaaaaa~ takamina dont see it.”

“miichan , what is it? Get away your hand from me, I cant see”

“Noooooo, u cant see this. ”

“why???”

“u just cant.”

We struggle and finally I manage to see.

“what are......” I stunned as looking at the wide screen in front of me.

“I have told u.” Miichan said.

I see the kiss scene between she and her co star.


end flashback~


Now I really regret watching it. What happen to me? I shouldnt feel like this.

‘Am I jealous?’

I just look and stare at the mirror in front of me. Now i’m at the theater practice for the next comming concert. Recently I kind a avoid her. The scene with her co start keep appearing in my mind everytime I see her. I cant forget it. Aaargh , it make me frustrate.

‘Why I have to fall to u acchan?’


Thats totally true, I really like her. I wanna tell her about my feeling but I resist it. Coz I’m afraid that I’ll lose it when u know it. I sigh and wash my face. I kind a dissapointed to her by not telling me that here will be a kiss scene like that. Same like her previous dorama before.


Wait?! When she has her first kiss scene she avoid me everytime she meets me and recently I found the same expression but I didnt notice it. Aaaaargh~ I fail again.


As I wash my face again I hear someone got into the toilet. And I kind a surprise that it is her.

“Minami.”

“owgh.,..owgh....acchan?!” tsk, why I stutter. She just keep silent but then look at me.

“errrr.... I guess I’ll just go back to meet the other.” I begin to leave her but then her words stop me

“why are u avoiding me?” she asks me

“uhm? Avoid you? Hahhaha, I guess it just your feeling acchan. I never avoid u.” I said with a nervous tone.

She grabs my hand and make me closer to her “NO! U are avoid me?!”

Our eyes meet and I see hurt in her eyes. And I see tears begin falling from her eyes.


“Atsuko...”

“U are avoiding me.”


We just keep staring at each other until then I got my hand to her cheek and wipe her tears.

“I’m sorry...”

“Why are u avoiding me???”


Acchan said as look at me , waiting for my answer.


I guess, I should tell her.



I sigh and smile to her “Its just that, I cant see u right now. “

“why?” she approach me and hold my hand

“Errrrr...it...it....just.... well.... uhm...”

“why minami????”

“well, I have watch your dorama and I see ‘that’ scene... ” suddenly she blush and I could she her face redden.”

“And...... every time I see you... I.....remember the scene. ”

“It just kind a.... uhm.... annoyed me looking that uhm.... u know.....”

I scracth my back and feel really nervous “ahahahah...Gomen ne~ Its a stupid thing that I have I do. I shouldnt have done that”


I look at her and now she got that smirk in her face “uhm.... soooooo~ u jealous?”

I just silent and my face redden now “I....uhm.....ano.... I....”

I try to give a proper answer but it come up I let go all m feeling “Owwwgh... okay, yeah thats right! I jealous. U even didnt tell me about that and your co star irritate me, he is annoyed plus all the boy in that dorama cling over u make memmmppph........”


Before I could finish the sentence I could feel her lips in mine. She kiss me roughly but then it soon become really gentle. Its so smooth and make me calm. I just stunned at the first but the kiss her back. Her lips so sweet. Taste like a strawberry. She kiss me passionally and I could feel her hand start to sneaked around my neck and I hold her waist, move her closer to me. I wish this will last forever but we both need air.So we broke the kiss. We then look at each other. She then hug me and burried her face in my neck.

“I’m happy!”

Huh?

“I’m happy u jealous minami.”

eeehhhh? She is happy?

“Atsuko....”


She the pull out from the hug and look at me “U dont know how afraid I’m. I feel uneasy with the scene though but I have too. I’m afraid that u would hate me if I told u. And I glad u jealous.” She then hug me again and said “That scene is mean nothing to me. U are the important thing. Andhmph....” before she finish her sentence now its my turn kiss her. Its a short but deep. “Dont said anything more okay?! I understand that.” We kiss again until  I heard someone call us.


“acchan , takamina are u there? Sensei called.” As we heard that voice we broke from the kiss and I sigh “Yeah, will be there in a minute.” I said and that person go.


“tsk....”

“what with the pout minami?”

“nothing.... now lets go acchan.”

I headed to the door but then I feel acchan cling to me and kiss my cheek

“We can continue that later” she said seductivly to me.

“haha, how u could be sure about that?”

“coz u like me.” She said innocently

“heeee????”

“so u dont?” she pout and she totally look really cute. I erase the pout by give her a short kiss on her lips “yeah u are right.” I smile at her.

“well, it obvious and why cant u see that I also have fall for u.”

“heeee???”

“u are so slow minami.” Acchan sigh

“uhm... but, I know it now.” I smile innocently

“hmph.... I should make u jealous more often then.”

“heeeee???? Why??”

“so u will confess to me every day.”

“mooooo acchaaaan~”



She giggle and we then headed back to practice.



Thanks my jealousy~


FIN~
 
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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Jealousy' 25 july )
« Reply #70 on: July 25, 2011, 01:00:28 AM »
 :luvluv1:

oh oh jealousy can rule also   :shy2:

aiz evil acchan   :kekeke:
Still shipping them early pairs. 1st generation ftw!

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Jealousy' 25 july )
« Reply #71 on: July 25, 2011, 02:19:17 AM »
Did the 2nd episode of hana kimi inspired you to write this oneshot?
It's really cute seeing Takamina being jealous and all......

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Jealousy' 25 july )
« Reply #72 on: July 25, 2011, 04:36:09 AM »
You read my mind!!...when i saw the chapter of danso game I thought that its a good idea to do a special group with the famous one... wel for me my fav are takamina, rena, mayu, sae, mariko and kojiharu... its gonna be a special group for me... gorgeous!!

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Jealousy' 25 july )
« Reply #73 on: July 25, 2011, 10:39:40 AM »
Hehehe jealousy is really useful ^^

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Jealousy' 25 july )
« Reply #74 on: August 10, 2011, 05:19:18 AM »
minna saaaaan~ thanks for reading....  :grin: :grin: :grin:

this is my next one shot i dont know how is it......  :cry: :cry: :cry: but i hope u like i....  :panic: :panic: :panic:

lets get started~


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Cant believe I love you
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"Takahashiiiiii come back right now."

"Nooooooo~ this is important to me I have to go."

Suddenly a girl block her way

"Where do u thing u are going?"

"Urgh, school council president????"

"U know the rule, no going out at night." She said

"Sachouuu, hold her." A girl from behind shout.

The girl keep come closer slowly try to grab takamina

'tsk, I'm dead now.'

"Yoooooo takamina."

Minami look out the window

"SAE??"

"Go out from the window and use the leader."

Minami go out a window and hurry jump in to sae bike.

"TAKAHASHIIIIIII COME BACK NOW!!!" The girl shout

"Sorry maeda, I have to go now." Takamina says as pull out her tongue and go away.

"Sachou, what should we do know?"

"That takahashi, always make a trouble."


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Takamina POV
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Yooooo hi there, my name is takahashi minami. Now I'm with my bestfriend sae. We heading to our performance place. We are a  band member. Today we have a performance and I need gone through a difficult situation since that student council president maeda atsuko block my way. Well, this isn't the first time I got into trouble with her.

I and her is like a cat and mouse. She always chasing me since well yeah I kind a rebel student. I coming late, my grade not to good, sometimes skip a class etc. But I'm famous and the leader of our school music club. Music is everything for me.

Well actually I don't wanna always argue with that maeda but can't help, she the student council president. A rebel student like me should face her. She is a good girl, smart but one thing, she is so strict of rule. She the perfect girl but she need to relax a bit.

Okay, back again to reality now. Around 15minutes we arrive at the performance place there already waiting miichan, jurina, tomochin, yuko. They are my band member. Jurina on keyboard, tomochin the DJ master, miichan on bass and yuko on back vocal and lead guitar. Whether me on main vocal and guitar and sae on drum. We are the AKBand. We take the name from our school, AKB48 gakuen.

"Minami hurry,  after this is our turn. " tomochin said as I and sae arrive.

“Okay!” we wait and hurry go to the stage after our band name is called. 

Today we will, perform the song that have been chosen from the producer that organize this event. The first winner will have a debut as new comer band and made a PV plus with album. That’s the reason why I should skip class today and must face that maeda. We all perform our best. We could hear the crowd screaming our name and go crazy as we perform. After we finish our performance we all gather and bow to the judge. Seems the judge pleased with our performance. We got down from the stage and waiting for the announcement.

“mooooou, I’m nervous now.” Tomochin said as exhale her breathe

“chill out tomochin , we already do our best. Now just wait for the announcement.” Miichan said

“do u think we have a chance?” jurina said , well jurina is our youngest member she is 1st  grade now.

“don’t worry jurina, lets pray.” I said to her.


Suddenly the judge come up to the stage and start the announcement,

“okay, guys!!!! We sure u all already waiting for this announcement.”

“all of u have perform well but as u see there is one is the best of the best.”

“now, for those who aren’t chosen don’t be sad. U still have so many chance. Now we will announce it.”

“the winner of this event is……”

*drumz rolll~

“AKBand from AKB48 High Schoooooooool~”


We all frown and then…..

“eh?? Its us… ITS USSSSS!!!!” Sae Shout

“YEAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH~” we all shout then go up the stage.


The judge give us the trophy and  we take a picture.

“Congratulation guys. U have do your best and tomorrow come to our JhipzTers agency at 9am. We will talk about your debut.” On of the judge said.

“Okay, we will.” We all nod and got down the stage.

We gather at parking lot where there is our friend waiting.

“Nyan- Nyaaaaaan~”  yuko hurry run towards haruna and hug her

“Moooeeee, yuko, not heeeeereeee, Let me goooo~”

“But I miss you….. ne, how is our performance.”

“great as well” haru  said as smile to her


Haruna is our best friend too, yuko really like her. She come here with mariko, yuki, chiyu and also mayu. They are our manager. U could said that. They manage the music club together with us. They come after they finished school.
“Ah, mari chan u also come.” Miichan said as smile to her

“why? U don’t like it?” mariko pout and miichan just giggle

Well mariko is our sensei and also miichan childhood friend she is older but soo friendly.


“Jurina u are sweating. Nice perform.” Mayu wipe out jurina sweat with her handkerchief

“a…a…thanks.” Jurina is blushing

Well, mayu and jurina is a classmate. Mayu always come to every our performance. She is really supporting jurina. I could see they like each other. So cute.


“tomochin~ chuuuuu~” chiyu said as closer her face to tomochin

“gaaarh, tomomi not in here.”

“moouuuuu~”

“don’t pout.”

Yups, that’s are the tomo tomo, since they have the same name then we call tomomi is chiyu.


“sae chan~ ”

“ah yuki!!” sae and yuki hug each other.

Yeah, last but not least this lovely dovely couple. Yuki is sae girlfriend.

“yooo takamina, what with that lonely expression.” Miichan poke me

“huh? Lonely expression?? Hahahaha, no I’m not.” I said as scratch my back

“well, u better find your destiny one.” Sae giggle “how about that maeda? U seem fits each other/”

“wha….wha…what…??? tsk, are u kidding? She wanna kill me every time we meet.” I shake my head and then I remember “Owgh !! Damn, it almost 10 the dorm gate will be closed. I gotta hurry.” I said to sae,

“owgh yeah u right, if we not hurry we will got trouble with your lover./” sae said as looking at her watch. I punch her hand then “iiiittttaaaaiiii yooo~ ”

“who u called my lover?”

“ahahaha, just kidding takamina. Okay guys we go first see u tomorrow okay?! I’ll go take takamina back to her dorm.”


I and sae leave them and go back to my dorm well, I’m the only one who live in the dorm coz my parent live oversea. Sae ride her bike as fast as she can and we headed our dorm and it already 11 oclock.

“ah , takamina the gate already closed.”

“its ok sae. I just climb it. I usually do that right.” I chuckle

“well, okay then. Beware not wake up that ‘girl’ or u could in danger.”  she giggle

“shut up! I wont, I move like a shadow.”

“ahahaha, okay, take care takamina.”

“okay, jaaa~”


As sae leave, I look around and start to climb the gate. It such a piece a cake, I can climb it easily. Finally I got in to the dorm area and heading to my room. I walk slowly and as I arrive there I open my room door slowly so I wont wake up my roommate. I got into and it so dark suddenly the lamp is on and I heard a voice

“where have u been takahashi??? U know the rule of this dorm right?”

I turn around and look at the girl in front of me. There she is my roommate.
“a…uhm…ahahaha…. Maeda, u haven’t slept yet.” I said as scratch my back. And yeah she is. That maeda atsuko our school student council president is my roommate.

now I’m doom I thought to my self.

“u haven’t ask my question takahashi.” She said with a sharp eyes

*gulp why is she so scary like this

“well, u know I’m in band and music club , so I have just from the band competition as….. usual and we win the first price and we will start our debut.” I explain to her with as try to keep smiling. She then just go to her bed and lay there not saying anything.

“we….we…well, I just go get change and oyasumi.” I start to go out the room then I heard a voice

“omedetou.”

I turn a round and look at her , but she already close her eyes.

“thanks,”

As I thought she is a good girl. I go get change and then sleep.


next day
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I wake up at around 7 and hurry go to prepare my self. I look at my room around that maeda already wake up and gone out. I wonder where she is usually go. i have my breakfast and then around 8 sae pick me up from the dorm and we arrive at the agency around 9. I could see that miichan, yuko, jurina and tomochin is already in there. we gather and enter the building. We go to the receptionist and she guid us to meet the producer there.

“Good morning Miss yang, u have a guest.”

“owgh, who are they?”

“they said they are the AKband.”

“aaaah~ I have been waiting, please let they in.”



We then get into the office and meet the producer there.

“Hello guys, I’m alive the producer here but just call me yang. ” she introduce her self

“ah nice to meet u miss yang.” We all bow to her.

“ahahaha, no need to be so formal guys. Now please sit and let talk about our business here.” She smile and start talking as we are sitting.


“Okay, I already know u guys, the 3 judge have give me all the information. I’m sure u all will be a great band and famous.” She said as let out the contract.

“right, this is the contract u can read it and sign it. U will be under our management for 3 years. There is no strict rule, u still can have your private live etc. All we want that u do your best and reach your dream.”

We read the contract carefully and then we have a discussion with each other . finally we sign the contract.

“Okay, from now on u we will work together. Yoroshiku ne.”

“yoroshiku.”


Next she let out another paper and hand it to us. “Okay, that’s your first single tittle and also song. U will have a practice and arrange the music start tomorrow.”

“Hard to Say I Love you?”  I look at her

“Yups that’s the tittle.”

“Wooooow, cool, when will we start our project?” miichan ask

“ahahaha, calm down. We can start today if u want.”

“YES WE WANT!” all of us said with anthusiastic expression.


She headed her desk and reach the phone there. Then suddenly a group of people arrive.

“Okay guys, this person will be your tutor from now own.” Miss yang introduce them to us and we surprise

“JHIPZTERS BAAAAAAAAAAAAND????”

“WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW.”


“Ahahaha, seems u already known them kid.”

“Of course we know. U guys are great.”

“thanks kid.” One of the member said.


“okay, here the music director wisnu,  flean will in charge tutoring your guitar and bass skill, sora will be tutor drum, nalyn and ceggie will tutor your vocal and last, taka J will tutor u your DJ skill and keyboard.”

“YOROSHIKU!” we all bow to them and they seems happy.

“Yoroshiku.”

“Now lets get to work kids.”

“OOOOOOSSSUUUUUUUUU~”


So, since then we busy with our debut. We got dispensation from our school since we are on our debut. We practice everyday and after that arrange the music. After the music done we take the vocal. I try to understand what the meaning behind this lyric. This lyric is so sad. I hope I can confess to someone that I like someday. If I have found that person.

Now my attention is full on our music, I even sometimes not coming back to the dorm and sleep in the studio with the other member. It so exhausted but fun. Finally we all can reach our dream. There is a time I come back to the dorm to get change or rest a bit. My room empty. I bet that maeda is busy with her student council business. Then I realize something.

why am I thinking about her anyway.?



Then finally after a month our song finished recorded. We gather to hear the result .

“Okay, guys this is your hard work for this 1 month.” Miss yang show it and play it in front of us

We listen to the result and it amazing “Wooooooowwww, its great. I bet we could be famous.” ,miichan said.

“hahaha, u look really happy miichan.”

“of course I am. ” miichan said as rise her fist in the air

Miss yang just chuckle and then give us one day off to get a rest. Then we will start our photo shot for our CD jacket the day after tomorrow. Well, weveryone already have plan to their partner and here I’m only laying in my dorm room. Alone again. I sigh and suddenly I a bit curious about that maeda. So today I plan to stalk on her. I don’t know why I do this I just wanna know about her since she is really cold.


Next day I wake a bit early but I pretend to sleep until maeda go out the room. I wake up prepare my self and wearing my black glasses plus a head in order to not get notice by her. I got out the dorm and follow her. First she go to the flower shop, then she go to the nearest supermarket. I see she buying lot of food. But I don’t know for whom. Next I follow her until I arrive in a kids hospital. I kind a curious what is she doin in here. I got into the hospital and there I look another side of her. She take care of the kids sick and play with them. I see one of the nurse and ask her. She said that, maeda is a volunteer. She always come here every weekend. She play with the kids in here and take care of them. I couldn’t believe it. This girl is really special. My eyes keep locking to her. This is the first time I see her smiling. Then suddenly one of the nurse call me and she turn her back too look at me. I hurry run away and dismissed from there.

I go back to my dorm and get change. Tomorrow I’ll have my photoshot and I gotta prepare for everything. After everything set I fall a sleep in my bed.  After a few hours I could hear someone open the door. I just keep closing my eyes and suddenly feel a soft hand stroke my hair and something cover my body.  She go out to get change and I wake up. She cover me with blanked. Suddenly  I feel something. My heart beating so fast, but I just ignore it and go back to sleep.


Here come our photo shot session. Our costume so cool and kakkoii. After the photo shot miss yang tell us something. “soooo, guys, u already finished the recording and cd jacket. Now time to make your PV.”

We look each other “PV? Woooow…”

“yeah, your PV. I want this will be a great PV but I wanna it look natural.”

“what do u mean miss yang?”

“We will have an audition for your PV model and your first perform at your school.”

“heeeeee??? Really???” yuko surprise

“Yeah, we will start as soon as possible. I’ll take care everything u guys just perform as best as u can.”

“OSUUU!” we all shout.


Then , the audition for our PV model will soon begin. I go back to our dorm and as I open the door. There is her sitting in her study table reading a book with her glasses. My heart beating so fast as looking at  her, I wanna ask her to watch our performance but I’m afraid she’ll reject it. But I have to try first.

Yoooosh…. I could do that.

“anoooo~ maeda~” I call her

“uhm?” she just answer that short

“u know, my band…. We will have our performance soon and there will be an audition for our PV model.”

“hmnnnn… I know that .”  She said with a cold tone.

Goooossssh, is she mad at me or what.

“a….ahahahahaha…. u already know that.”

of course she knows she is the student council president. Tsk… why I’m so baka~

Then she talk “well, I’ll be the supervisor there.”

“well, then please watch over us will u.” I said and smiling at her. Somehow I could see she is smiling even only a little.

“time to sleep, tomorrow will be a tired day. Oyasumi~ “ I said to her.

“oyasumi.”


Then next day we all prepare on the backstage. There we all wearing our costume. Everyone is waiting for our performance. There are a lot of people in the field. Woooow, its like a concert. We all happy. Today haruna, mariko, mayu, chiyu and yuki also come. They come to cheer us. Somehow I realize that I haven’t look at maeda. She said she is the supervisor so she must be here today. We will perform in 15 minutes so I decided I want to search here. I look around for her but haven’t found her. I go to the dressing room to look how I look. As I feel everything is set I go out the room and someone bump into me.

“ittttt….itaaaaiiiii…”

“ah gomen, takahashi.”

“eh??? Maeda???”  I look at her and she is in the top of me

“I gotta hurry, sorry.” She then hurry leaving me alone.

“heeey, wait….”

Heee,, she leave. But anyway, why I feel something different with her. Well I just got back to back stage and prepare to perform. We got up the stage and there the crowd already shouting and screaming.


“okay minna san. Today is our first performance. Please always support us.”

Everyone shouting, our name and holding our picture. I try to find that maeda in a crowd but I cant find her. I just sigh but suddenly I look someone over the tree watching me. I just smile coz I know who is there.


“Okay, minna san lets get started. Our debut song ‘Hard to Say I love u’ kittekudasaaaai~”

Then we begin singing. Somehow we are in our max tenshion today and I feel so in a high spirit. I don’t know why but we will doing our best today.


A couple of day after that event we are called by miss yang to her office. She said that today we will meet our model for our PV. So we are now at miss yang office waiting for her to introduce her,.

“Ah sorry kids, I’m late. There is a traffic  jam.” She said as smiling to us

“Now please meet your PV model.”

We all heard a foot step approaching and we all frown as we know who is that person

“MAEDA ATSUKO!!!!!!!”

“Eh?? U all already know her? Well good then now please sit maeda san/ I’ll explain the PV concept now.”

Maeda then sit beside me and she is blushing. Now I remember , so she is in hurry coz the audition.

“well, the concept is like this, you takamina will be maeda san bestfriend. Then as the time pass another feeling build inside you towards her. U like her but u cant said that to her. Even the feeling is mutual. Now u all already get it and I’ll leave u to get to know each other.” Miss yang then leave us.

“wooow, atsuko I don’t know u also get into audition?” sae asked her

“yeah acchan, I think u didn’t interesting again in this kind work.got a nother reason???” Yuko said as looking at me

“uhm…. Wait, u all seems already known her well.” I said as pointed to maeda

“well, we are in the same junior high school back then and acchan is popular among boys.”

I frown and only can say “heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee??????”

They only chuckle then sae said something “u’ll know when she metamorph.”

I just scratch my head and smile to her “well, maeda yoroshiku ne and just call me takamina.”

“I wont coorperate with u.” she said with a cold tone “until u called me atsuko.”

Oh my, I thought she is mad at me  “Well then atsuko, yoroshiku.”


Soon we start to make our PV. We already prepare and as atsuko come out with her costume my jaw drop. She is so beautiful. That white one piece really fit her. My heart start beating again. Whats wrong with me? It impossible that I… I like her am I?? sae then approach me and giggle

“see…. I told ya, atsuko really different when she is metamorph.”

“moooo, sae. Shut up!”

“u cant hide it or deny it takaminaaaa~” yuko then approach me too

“shut up u guys.” I could feel my cheek redden and they just chuckle.

“okay people, start the recording.”

“OSUUUU!”


~Click here for the back ground music~



We start the recording and it takes long time since miss yang wanna a perfect concept. Day after day we work on the PV and I getting closer to atsuko. We have a chat  together , we have lunch together etc. well since the recording we always together. In fact miss yang also ask us to always together so we can get to know each other. Well, it’s an opportunity for me too to get to know about her. And during that time something built inside me. I don’t wanna to admit it but I think….i think…. My feeling to her started deeper and deeper. There is one moment she fell asleep in the studio alone. I approach her and some how I almost kiss her, when a male staff try to flirt with her It pissed me of. I feel jealous. OMG what happen to me? we used to be hate each other but… now….

*sigh, God… what I have done?

Are my sin already too much u punish me with this?

Or this is the way how u guide me to a person that destiny to me?

I wonder how is she feeling toward me!!


Now, we are having our last take for the PV scene. This is the scene where we both gonna kiss on the lips but then in the middle I should resist and move to kiss her forehead and hug her. During the record I keep staring at her and I feel so calm and pain in her eyes. Slowly I move closer and then as she close her eyes I kiss her forhead then hug her. I feel melt in the warmness of her body. But a sound back us to reality

“ANNNNND CUT!! OKAY!!! THAT’S FINISH!!!!”

“OTSUKARESAMA DESHITA!!!”

The recording is finish then we back to our dorm. I lay in my bed then she go out to get change. I close my eyes and remember that last scene

if only I could telling her how I feel.

I hear the door opened and I just pretend to sleep. Suddenly I feel again she stroke my hair but then I hear she whispered something

“After this, I think everything will back to normal again. In this 2 weeks I feel so happy. Finally I can close to you.”

what is she saying?

“sorry I’m being cold to you this all time. I just cant show my true feeling. Every time you around I just feel un easy.”

atsuko….

“the truth is… I like you takamina.”

Then she kiss me. her action make me surprise but those lips, I cant resist. I begin to kiss her back and stroke her hair. She seems shock as I kiss her back but we keep kissing. Its so sweet and I could feel the taste of her lips. Its getting deeper and passion until we need to break the kiss for air.

“I like u too atsuko.” She look at me and start sobbing.

“don’t cry please” I wipe her tears with my thumb then hug her.

“I feel happy now, I’m sorry I always make u into trouble.”

“owgh, about that I couldn’t help. I’m a rebel student though.” I said as scratch my back. She then pull me down to the bed

“eh? Woowowow…. What is it atsuko?” she come closer and whispered in my ear

“I wanna punished you.” I blush but then giggle

“well, I don’t know that u are soo active like this.” I chuckle

“but….” I grab her and roll over so I’m on the top now.

“I’ll have to take a revenge cos u already got me into a lot of trouble this all time.” I smirk to her and start kiss her roughly.

She begin wrap her hand around my neck and pull me closer to deepen the kiss. I stroke her hair and make it messy. Her hand now tracing my back then snaked my neck. She undone my shirt button one by one but then I pull out from the kiss and look at her.  With her messy hair she is so sexy and cute. She cup my cheek and said something

“I love u takakmina.”

 “I love u more atsuko”

She then bring my face closer and we kiss again. Now more passion and deeper. My hand tracing her neck and I move my lips from her to begin kissing her neck.  And from that night she is all mine and I’m hers.




We always fight each other….

We always hate each other…

But Love comes….

I cant believes I love you…




Fin~

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Cant believe I love you' 10 aug )
« Reply #75 on: August 10, 2011, 06:15:52 AM »
Nice sora-san!  :thumbup

Actually I am hoping for the longer moment of AtsuMina on the bed  :grin: :grin: <--- I am such a perv  :nervous

I'm waiting for your next fic  :twothumbs

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Cant believe I love you' 10 aug )
« Reply #76 on: August 10, 2011, 12:33:29 PM »
Awesome !!!!!!! Atsuko pervert as always xD

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Cant believe I love you' 10 aug )
« Reply #77 on: August 10, 2011, 01:07:38 PM »
Nice!!! I love the atsumina moment  :heart: XD :heart: ..................but the last scene is a bit short!  :P
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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Cant believe I love you' 10 aug )
« Reply #78 on: August 10, 2011, 02:04:02 PM »
nyahah  nice one ma daughter   :grin:

a band  :kekeke: 

i'm in reading and comment mode (updates...dunno)   :OMG:
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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Cant believe I love you' 10 aug )
« Reply #79 on: August 10, 2011, 03:17:26 PM »
Wahahah! Your fics never make me failed to grins!
Too bad you make the TakAcchan / AtsuMina moments too short
Afterall, Nice fic! keep writing! :glasses:
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