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Author Topic: [AKB48] One Shot (~Kai x Atsuko (Forbidden : After Story) 3-8-2012  (Read 78836 times)

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Cant believe I love you' 10 aug )
« Reply #80 on: August 10, 2011, 03:34:23 PM »
 :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: thanks for the reading guys.... seems u all want more of atsumina in last scene huh?  :grin: :grin: :grin:

well, i can make the continuance but later, since its fasting day, i a bit lack of inspiration in "that" part  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

wanna wait or i just let it be????  :grin: :grin:

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Cant believe I love you' 10 aug )
« Reply #81 on: August 10, 2011, 03:46:01 PM »
I definitely will wait! Since I'm fasting too...
I'm sure it'll be a good stuffs to read when I'm bored of visiting my big family
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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Cant believe I love you' 10 aug )
« Reply #82 on: August 11, 2011, 07:50:22 AM »
you're really good sora-neechan!  :on GJ: :on GJ: i love you sora-nee!  :mon kissy: :mon kissy:

takamina! always cool! ilove you takamina!!   :mon crazyinlove: :mon crazyinlove: :mon crazyinlove: :mon crazyinlove:

btw sora-nee i want more of that scenes too!   :mon cute: :mon cute:
i want more sora-nee!  :mon whimper: :mon whimper:

btw thanks for always mentioning me in your fic! ^^
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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Cant believe I love you' 10 aug )
« Reply #83 on: August 11, 2011, 08:48:58 AM »
I WILL BE WAITING FOR SURE!!!!  :wriggly:

I really want "that" scene, too bad it was too short  :grin:  :grin:

Need the longer one! And I am definitely waiting for it  :on bleed: :on bleed:

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Cant believe I love you' 10 aug )
« Reply #84 on: August 11, 2011, 07:21:59 PM »
 :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: seems everyone willing to wait for it huh  :P :P XD XD XD

okay, i'll do my best in working it that  :grin: :grin: but before that i think i'll entertain u with this first okay....  :grin: :grin: :grin:

and ceggieee~ u are tooo young for "that" kind  :smhid :smhid :grin: :grin: :grin:


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Love Dance
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“You have to learn latin dance.”

“What?! Why so sudden??”

“Here, your single will be a latin rhythm so u need to learn to dance latin.”

“Bu…but….but…”

“No but. I already find the best tutor for your latin dance. U are lucky since he is my friend and he accept my request .”

My producer give me the address and he said I have to meet him today.

“Okay, now get your stuff and heading there. I already told him.”

“Alright, I’ll go there now. Please excuse me!”


I leave my agency and heading to my dance teacher dance studio. Well, I’m in my debut now and this is my first single. I wanna my first single is beyond the ordinary. So my producer got an idea to bring a latin concept in my single. Its not that I don’t like the latin concept , I just never been in there and I’m afraid I’ll ruin everything. But I’ll do anything to reach my dream. I must can mastered this latin dance.

Then , finally I arrive in the place that my producer give me. It so quite and no body in the front so I decided to go in there.  I hearing a latin song from the second floor so I decided to go upstair. I walk to the door near the window, its wide open and as I look in there I just stun, amaze with what I see in front of me.

Is that a latin dance??

There is around 5 couple that dance there. I could see every move is full of passion and so beautiful. Then my sight attach with this guy. He is not really tall, blond hair, and got a nice body shape. He must often work out but its common for a dancer I guess. Suddenly the music stop and everyone stop dancing. This blond guy then move away from his partner and stand in the middle.

“Okay guys, enough for lesson today.”

“OTSUKARESAMADESHITA~”


All the people start leaving the room and I see he is sit on the floor seems tired. I walk to approach him and greet him.

“Ano, Sumimasen!” I try to get his attention

“Owgh, yeah what can I help you?” he then try to stand up as wipe his sweet.

’OMG What is this??? He is so HOT!!! I could see his abs.’

“Anooo, miss can I help you??” Shimatta, why I look at him like that. Okay, just be cool now.

“huh, hmm… my producer told me that I should meet….”

“Kai, just call me kai, and you must be Maeda Atsuko. Akimoto san has told me about you.” I just blink my eyes and surprise.

“well, listen here maeda…”

“just call me atsuko.”

“okay, atsuko listen, latin dance is not easy to learn and you only got time 1 month to practice with me, so I don’t want a cry baby girl here. Do u understand??” he talk to me as staring to my eyes.

“o..o…okay! I’ll do my best.” I said to him, why should I stuttering

“Well ,then…..”

“huh?? Eeeeh…. Wa….wa…waiiiit…”

he grabs my hand and warp his hand around my waist as grabing his other hand to me. Now our distance is so close, I could feel his hot breathe. He then smile to me and I gotta hiding my blush as looking down to the floor. He grab my chin and make me facing his face.


“Well, atsuko! In dance no need to be shy. Dance is a passion. Just relax and feel your partner move.” He said as moving slowly with me and swing me with his one hand. What is this feeling. My heart beating so fast and I could heat is increase in my body.

“Okay now atsuko, do you got it what I have show u before?”

“ye…ye..yes!!” aaargh, why am I stuttering again.

“Okay, now u go ahead try by your self. U take the lead.” He said and our face is only an inch.

I try to move slowly and do his command. Somehow, I enjoy this lesson. Then suddenly after a couple of minutes practice with him as my partner in dance he let go off me and we start to practice my coreo for the PV.

“Now lets start practice your move. I have think about it as listening to your song.” He stands beside me and we facing the mirror there. He show me the move and I look at him. My mind still cant focus. I don’t know why but as he let me go I feel I miss that embrace. Then his voice snap me back.

“Oooiiii, atsuko are u paying attention to me???” he look mad at me

“aa..aa…yeah…yeah…sorry… I pay attention to you.”

“*sigh please be more focus! Now let start over, okay…. 1 2 3 4…. 1 2 3 4…. Great slow and smooth.”


So since that time every day I come to his studio dance to practice. I practice from 10am to 6pm. Its so exhausted and latin dance surly difficult. But somehow, that not make me give up. Kai really patient in teaching me the move. The move is full of passion, love and so sexy. Today I come a bit late coz I gotta finish my interview in the radio. I have told kai and he is okay. I hurry go to the studio as finish the interview. I go to the studio room and he already waiting. He wear a black sleeveless shirt and a black training. He looks really sexy. OMG what am I thinking?!

“Ah, atsuko how long will u stand in there???” Kai said as cross his hand in his chest.

“Owgh, so….sorry?!” I approach him and then a voice call him

“Yooooo Kai?!” a guy with an hip hop cloth called him

“Owgh Kuu! Come in! whats up? I’m working now.” He approach kai and look at me

“well…well…well….seems your work fun.” I blush and he just chuckle.

“Heeey, don’t look unproper like that to my student.” Kai glare at him

“Ahahah, I just kidding. She is so cute. No wonder u could stay in here for that long.”

“Tsk, shut up. Anyway, this is maeda atsuko n atsuko this is kuu. He is also a dancer. His specialist is in freestyle dance.”

“Hi there maeda nice to meet u. I’m kuu.” He smile and shake my hand.
“Nice to meet u too kuu san.”

“ah, don’t be so formal just call me kuu.”

“okay then.”


Suddenly I feel a bit tenshion around me.

“okay….okay…enough….we have to practice now goooo and doo your stuff.” Kai interrupt as pushing kuu out of the room. Is he jealous?? Can I hope it??

“mooo….ka…kai….we have just met.”

“no but, just go.”

“ahahaha, geeez kai, u are really easily got jealous. Well then see yaaaa~”

After saying that kuu leave the room. I could see kai sigh and walk approach me.


“Sorry, for that. He always like that look like a flirt type but he is a good person.”

“no need to worry kai. Its ok.” I said as smile to him.

“okay now, lets try yesterday move. I’ll watch it.”

I nod then I begin to dance and practice my move yesterday. Yesterday is so difficult I haven’t mastered it well, suddenly kai stop my move.

“wait…wait…wait… stop it.” He approach me and look give an example to me.

“look at this, u should move your hips freely. Just relax and enjoy the music okay? Try again.” I nod and try again. Haven’t finish the move he said again

“Urgh… atsuko, its not like that. Move your hips freely okay. Here I lead you.”

He then standing behind me. his left hand holding my left hand and bring it up in my shoulder height whether the other is in between my hips and my waist. OMG I feel so nervous. He is so close with me. I could feel his breathe since his face now attach to my cheek.

“Okay, now close your eyes and hear the music beat. Feel it…. Feel the passion, feel the move, relax atsuko~” he said so gentle and I start to move. I couldn’t believe it. I enjoy this time I hope it never end but then he pull back and our eyes meet. He looks at me with a gentle eye. Its hypnotize me. we get closer and closer until….
“Yoooo Kai.” Yups, that’s voice snap us back to reality. He then hurry pulled out.

“huh? Uhm…. Okay, tha…that’s how is it. You…you go try I gotta meet this person.” He leave me to meet that guy. Funny but is he blushing…?? He really cute when he got blush like that. I just chuckle and start to dance. After a couple of minutes he comes with the guy.

“Hi there, my name is riku, I’ll be your partner for the PV.” Eh, why is not kai? I a bit disappointed.

“Owgh, hi maeda atsuko desu, yoroshiku ne.” I bow to him.

“yoroshiku!” he said as wink to me.

“Okay, atsuko, he’ll be your partner now lets get started. I’ll be watching.”

Riku grab my hand and wrap my waist as whispering something “Sorry, if my friend a bit strict with you. He always be like that when with the girl he like.” I blush and he just chuckle. Huh? But is it mean kai like me? no…no…no… he must be joking. But… could I have a little hope here?

Well, that day I practice with riku and I could see kai watch over me. Then finally the practice finish. Riku hurry go out and I could see from the window there is a girl waiting for him. Seems she is his girl friends. What a lovely couple. I look around and see kai holding something. He calls me and I approach him.

“Yooo atsuko, come here.”

“yeah? What is it?”

He suddenly hand me something “Here watch it, it could help u. after u watch it if u interesting u can come here to practice it. After your PV ofcourse.”

I take the dvd and smile to him, he seems blushing “Thanks kai.”

“huh? Uhm…hmm… iie no need to thanks.“

That day kai offer to walk me home since its already night. We walk side by side and not talking until I arrive at my home.

“well, see u tomorrow kai.”

“yosh, sleep well.”

He go and I got into my room. Smiling all the time as looking at the dvd that kai give it to me. its written “Lambada Dance”. I hurry watch it and amaze. I want to learn it. The dance is full of passion. I watch it that night. But I gotta sleep hurry since I have another practice tomorrow. So I decided to watch it again later and now go to sleep.


Start that day, everyday I practice with riku. Kai only watching and look at my move. Make sure it right. and then finally it’s the day when I will have the PV shot. At the PV shot I see kai already there. I call him and approach him.

“Kai!!!”

“Owgh, atsuko. Nice costume. Good luck!” he smiles to me.

“Thanks, why are u here?”

“Well, u see… ” he scratch his back and sigh

“Riku couldn’t come. He got something to do and its really urgent so I ….”

I grab his hand and jumping happily “You will be my partner??? Yeeeeeaaaaay!!!”

He look at me in surprise but then smile “Yeah, yoroshiku ne~” he said as pinch my cheek, and I pout.

“Don’t pout or you will cuter.” He said as pats my head and it make me blushing.


So, the recording is started and I and him begin to dance. I could feel that my body move by its self. all my move with him is full of passion and in synchronize. I see everyone in the studio watch us amaze. We have a recording from morning till night. And finally the recording finish.

“YOOOOOSH OTSUKARESAMADESHITA~”

Everyone said and bow to each other. I go to my changing room to change my cloth and as I finish and get changing I go out the room. Looking for kai and what did I see? I see him with a girl warp her hand in his neck. I feel pain in my heart as I look at the scene in front of me. I accidentally drop my bag and it make kai look at me.

“Atsuko??? ATSUKO WAIT!!!”

I hurry get my bag and run away from the recording studio. I know he chasing me. I run as fast as I can in the middle of the rain. He keep chasing me and finally he manage grabs my wrist and hold my hand. Now both of us wet in the middle of the rain.

“Atsuko, why are u running???” he asks me

“Why u chasing me? you left your girlfriend there alone.” He sigh  and hold my shoulder

“She is not my girlfriend. She just a fan.”

“I don’t believe you.” I said as looking away from him

“Listen atsuko, Look at me. Look into my eyes. Am I laying to u??”

I look deep into his eyes and his eyes is honest. He hugs me tightly as saying “How could I laying to a person that mean everything to me.” as hearing that I hug his back and we keep like that until he break the hug.

“u are wet, lets just go to my studio. I don’t wanna you get sick.”

Then we go to his studio. I’m totally wet. As we arrive he go get his towel and his shirt then give it to me.

“Here, go get change. I don’t wanna make u sick.” I nod and head to the change room. I got change and wearing kai cloth. It too big for me and it smell kai scent. So sweet.

I go out and go sit beside kai, we keep silent until he break the silent.

“uhm… listen atsuko, I guess I couldn’t keep it anymore.” I look at him confuse but I just keep silent.

“u know, I don’t know why but actually, I ….I …” he stuttering “I like u atsuko.” I surprise with his sudden confess. Am I hear right? So its not one side love.

“I like you a lot, I love you. I don’t wanna lose you. Actually the one that should be your partner from the beginning is me not riku, but I ask him to replace me coz I’m afraid.”

I hold his hand as ask him “why? Why u afraid?”

“I’m afraid that I couldn’t resist my self to touch and feel you more.” He then cherish my cheek and moving closer to me.

“I’m afraid that I couldn’t resist my self to feel your…” his lips getting closer

“to feel what kai?” I said in a soft tone as closing my eyes

“to feel your lips.”


As he said that our lips meet each other. He kiss me slowly and gently. I kiss him back. I finally can taste his sweet and soft kiss. I begin to wrap my hand around his neck and his hand is around my waist. We kiss with passion and love. I pull him closer to deepen the kiss and he start make his tongue work on my lips. Soon his tongue and mine fight for the dominant. The kiss begin a bit rough but its ok for me. I could feel his warm tongue explore my mouth and I enjoy it. We wont stop but we got to break the break coz we need the air. As we break the kiss kai attach his forehead with mine. We both close our eyes.

“I love you atsuko.”

“I love you too kai, I really love you. I wanna be with you.”

“I will always be your side atsuko.”


We look at each other and he smiles as stroking my wet hair.

“U really sexy atsuko.” I blush

“ahahaha, u are really cute when u are blush I like it.” He give me a short kiss on my lips then he stand up. He open his shirt and I could see his abs and his muscle. Is he gonna…. My face redden as look at him

“eh? Atsuko?? Why are your face that red? Don’t tell me u think about that.” He grin at me. he approach at me and whispered to me “I think I wanna see what inside that cloth, I bet u are more sexy.” He said with a seductive tone and make me really red and he just chuckle

“Mooooooo, kai hentai.”

“eh? U are a perv then u think that.” He giggle again but then he ask me “anyway, have u watch the video I gave u?”

“yeah, why?”

“have u learn it?”

“a little.”

“wanna try?” he give his hand to me.

“who scare??” I take his hand and he hurry prepare the song.

click this for the background song~



Now we facing each other. Our hand meet and his other hand is in my waits.

“ready???”

“never been better.”

As the music start we begin our move. We dance in synchronize and full of passion. I could feel that my body is one with him and every move is full of our passion of love. I could feel his bare skin and a warm embrace.

“hmm….. not bad, u are got for a beginner.” Kai chuckle as we still dancing

“well, don’t underestimate me.” I wink to him

“ahahah, yeah… yeah… u are such a multi talented girl.” He said as kissing me

“heeeee… is it allowed in the dance??” I pout at him

“well sort of.” He giggle

“then, I could do this.”

I pull him closer to me and move my hips in a seductive move. I take his hand tracing all over my body and he seems enjoy it.

“My atsuko soooo sexy~” he said as kissing my neck.

“U are also soooo sexy kai.” I then whispered to him then bit my lower lips “I want you kai~” I could see  he is blushing but then look at me with a gentle eyes.

“I want you too atsuko. Be mine.”

He said and start kissing me again, me kiss as we dance and soon my concentration is only kissing him. He kiss me passionately and I warp my hand around his neck. The situation then begin Hotter and hotter. I don’t know but I wanna him now and he want me too. I now begin to warp one of my feet to him and he then lift me. now I’m clinging to him. Still kissing and he guide me to his room.

As we arrive there he take me to his bed and start to kiss my forehead, my lips and then lick my neck. He mark me there and he pull out looking at me  “u sure u wanna this?” he ask. I answer with a seductive tone to him “I want you kai, be mine. Make me yours.” He smiles and kiss me as saying “you are mine, and I’m yours.” we start to kiss again. I snake my hand in his neck and pull him to deepen the kiss. His hand then working out to un button my shirt, well his shirt actually. He then begin kiss my neck again and lick it and bite it make me moan in pleasure. I call his name and he keep kissing my neck and colar bone.

“uhmn… k…kai…”

“u are soooo sexy atsuko… let me feel u…”

“hmnnm….ka…kai…. ”

I stroke his hair and bring back his lips to meet mine. Then after that I don’t know what happen again. All I feel is passion, all I feel is passion of love, our love and lust. Gather into one and we keep feeling each other presistance.



FIN~

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doouuu???  :huhuh :huhuh i make it longer now... am i???  :panic: :panic: :panic:

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Love Dance' 12 aug )
« Reply #85 on: August 11, 2011, 07:49:32 PM »
let's dance the lambada!!!!!  :mon trannie:

ohhh that was greato!!! that sure was fast   :gmon sing:
Still shipping them early pairs. 1st generation ftw!

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Love Dance' 12 aug )
« Reply #86 on: August 11, 2011, 10:50:43 PM »
sexy dancing :drool: I love  :heart:  XD



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« Reply #87 on: August 12, 2011, 02:13:01 AM »
yah!!! I haven't comment on the post before, u already post another one???  XD

nice2... me want AtsuMina moment too!!!!  :inlove: :inlove:

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Love Dance' 12 aug )
« Reply #88 on: August 12, 2011, 05:18:57 AM »
oh my master  :bow: :bow: just kill me already with AtsuMina's moments  :thumbup  :shy2:
so romantic  :on bleed: :on bleed:
I guess there will be bed's scene :grin: :grin:
and lol at Kai's shirt is bigger when Acchan wears it  :rofl:

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« Reply #89 on: August 12, 2011, 09:08:10 AM »
ceggieee~ u are tooo young for "that" kind  :smhid :smhid :grin: :grin: :grin:

heheXD i'm not that young sora-nee..^^  :hehehe:  :hehehe: :hehehe:

ahhah! nice fic! i like it !  :shy2: :shy2:

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Love Dance' 12 aug )
« Reply #90 on: August 17, 2011, 12:15:12 PM »
hy guuuuys  :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin:

thanks for reading my fanfict... i havent work on that scene yet. havent got any mood.   XD XD

now i make another short one shoot i guess. since i have heard that acchan now living alone plus taka got the spare key of her apartmen *thats base what i got information *

soooooooooooooo, here i make the fanfict. hope u like it.... enjooooy~  :thumbsup :thumbsup


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*hosh...*hosh....*hosh...

"Now I'll doom. I bet all the girls already at her house."

I run as fast as I can from the photoshot place. I remember when I got a call from her.

'don't forget to help me moving tomorrow minami.'

'But...but...'

*crak...


"*sigh, she won't let me explain and just hung up the phone yesterday."

Well, today acchan will start to live by her own. We all agree to help her moving a couple days before but suddenly I got some photoshot. I hope she could understand that.

"I gotta hurry. Luckily I have bought some drink and food for them."

Finally I go get her apartment. I ring the bell and then she open the door.

"Yes who is it???"

"Hello there acchan... I..."

*blam, she close the door as she look at me.

"He?? Oiii....acchan...atsuko...open the door." I knock it repeatly so she will open it

"No! What are u doing here? I told u to come at 8 and look what time is it?"

"Okay....okay....that's my fault. But I got a photoshop today. I wanna to tell u but u already hung up the phone yesterday. I'm sorry okay!! Acchan..."

No reply for her.

"Acchan I bought some food and water for u all too there. Open the door please!!"

I beg to her but still no reply.

"Well, fine. I just gonna leave the food here. I'll go now."

As I wanna step my food I hear the door open. I turn back and look at her.

"Sooo.... Will u forgive me?"

"If u help me right now. Come in minami."

I smile at her and then come in inside.

"Yoooooo, guuuys sorry for waiting."

"Mooouuuu, u should coming earlier minami." Miichan pout to me as bring some stuff to the kitchen

"Yeeeeaaaah, acchan start begin scary u know." Mariko chuckle and start cleaning the window.

"Aaah, I'm sorry guys. I got something to do." I bow to them.

There are miichan, nyan nyan, mariko and yuko helping acchan today. Acchan approach me and hand me a big box.

"Here, bring this to my room."

"Whoooaaaa, so heavy. What is this?"

she just smile and show me the way to her room.

"U'll find out later. Now place it in there."

"Okay. Then what else I should do?"

Acchan come approach me and we sit on the floor. She asks me to open the box.

"Open it." I nod and open the box. I surprise as I look inside.

"Whoooaaaa...this are our old photo, this are great."

"Look this picture, u are really boyish minami." She said as chuckling to me.

"Heeeey, what can I do. I'm boyish but I still a girl. I wonder why u guys always saying I'm a guy." I pout at her and she then suddenly give me a short kiss on my lips.

"Ach...ac...acchan...not right now."

"Hehehe, can't help minami, u are so cute when u are pouting."

I just sigh and she is chuckling again.

"Okay then let's get clean this room." I said and she is nod.

So, we all start cleaning and placing all the stuff there. Acchan aparto is really nice not bad big. Its so comfortable and the view from her window is beautiful. Finally after 5 hours working we finished all the work.

"Otsukaresamadeshita." Miichan shout.

"Finally we finished." Mariko relieve and wipe her sweat.

"Yuuukooo, stop clinging to me."

"But I'm tired nyan nyan. I need something to support my body and you are the perfect one." Yuko said as snuggling to nyan nyan.

"Well, thanks lot for helping me moving today guys. Let's have some food." Acchan suggest.

"That's great, what u guys wanna?"

"Since u are already helping me today I'll treat u guys a sushi." Acchan said

"Yeeeaaaaay sushi..." Miichan shout in cheer.

"Hahaha, miichan u really like to eat. Ne minami could u help me to order the sushi?" Acchan said as smiling to me.

"Sure no problem." I said as try to call the shushi shop

After I order the sushi we all have a chat together as waiting the sushi come.

"So acchan why u start living alone anyway?" Mariko ask

"Uhm... No special reason."

"Aah~ but I think your aparto is not bad big for your own. Planning to stay with someone?" Miichan said as looking at me.

I try to avoid miichan glance but suddenly acchan said something

"Well, yeah. If I find that person." She said as looking at me and that make me blush.

"Heeee... What's with that blush minami??" Yuko look at her.

"Wha....what yuko?" Why I speak stutter

"Don't tell me u wanna stay with acchan?" Yuko grin to me

"He? N...n....no... Why?" I hurry cross my hand

"So u don't want to?" Acchan said as pouting to me. Aaargh...that expression

"N...no... Its not that I don't wanna."

"So u wanna??" She then smile to me and I just keep silent to and look the other way to hide my blush.

"Mooouuuu so cute.... Atsumina will start living together. Ne nyan...nyaaaan...let's move together too..." Yuko said as shaking nyan nyan body.

"Heee? Who said I want to stay with u??" Nyan nyan said as struggle from yuko hug

Suddenly

"Excuse me, sushi express."

The sushi come and we start to eat. During the dinner I think about something. What happen if I stay together with acchan. I think it would be really nice. We have been a couple for a year and I wanna be always beside her. But I haven't sure enough is this the right time whether I should stay with her.

Actually I kind a worry to leave her living alone. Since this is her first time. I guess I should be more pay attention to her.

After the dinner and help acchan clean the dishes the other member excuse their self. And now only me and acchan at her aparto.

'Gosh, now only me and her. I guess I better be going now.'

Acchan then move in front of me block my way.

"Ac...acchan..."

"Ne...minami~... Since I'm living alone now I think we could have our time now... " She said it in seductive way and warp her hand around my neck.

"Well, ac...acchan its already late. We could have our time later. I better get going now." I smile to her

"U will go this fast?" She loosen her wrap and pout to me.

"Well, tomorrow we will have practice we better take a rest now." I said and start leaving her. She then grabs my hand and hand me something

"Wait, minami. Here take this."

"Uhm?" I look at the thing that she gaves me and its a key.

"Eeh? It this..."

"That's, my aparto keys. I wanna u to have a spare."

"Ah, I... I see. Okay thank u, don't worry I'll keep it. Now I'll be going." As I wanna go she calls me again.

"Mi..minami...I'll miss u." Oooowwwwgh....that look. Not that look. I could see her sad expression.

I approach her and give a short kiss to her lips "we...well, I'll miss u too atsuko. Please be careful. If u need anything just call me." She look at me and then smile

"Don't worry, I will."

With that I begin to leave her aparto. Somehow I feel kind a guilt since this is her first time living alone.

That night as I arrive at home. I can't sleep at all I think about her. I'm worried plus its rain now. Atsuko not really like rain. She must be scare by now. Thinking about that make me uneasy. So I decided to go to her aparto again in the middle of rain. I run as fast as I can. And finally I arrive at her aparto.

Luckily she gaves me her spare key so I used it to open the front door. As I walk in the room already dark. its 12am now. I wonder if she is already sleep or not. So I walk slowly to her room and open the door. Suddenly acchan scream as the thunder sound.

"KYAAAAAAA!!!!!!" She scream as cover her whole body with blanket and cover her ears.

"Atsukoo....." I hurry approach her and hug her from behind.

"Mi...minami....I scare..." She hug me tightly and I try to reasure her

"Shhh....calm down....I'm here now. U don't have to be afraid. Calm down now.."

"Minami...."

We keep hug each other until the rain start to stop. I'm laying beside her and she snuggle closer to me.

"Ne, minami... Thanks for coming.."

"Its alright. I can't sleep and always think about u. I...I'm worry. Sorry atsuko. I'm not suppose to leave u alone."

She then lift up her face to look at me.

"Minami..."

"Atsuko...."

We look each other and move our face closer until suddenly her lips press againts mine. She kiss me slowly and steady. Her hand start to cherish my cheek and then I move so I'm on the top of her. We still kiss each other and her hand snaked around my neck. She then stroke my hair and grab it. After that she pull me closer to deepen or kiss. Our kiss begin a bit rough now. I suck her upper lips. Its taste so sweet. I feel I couldn't resist the passion in my self now. I want her. I start licking her lower lips and it give me an access to her mouth. She moan at my action and I begin to explore every each of her mouth. Our tongue battle each other and I win the battle. I break from the kiss and begin to kiss her neck. It make her arch back as I begin biting, kissing and licking there give her the mark. Suddenly she grab my head and we start kissing again but then she break the kiss. We look at each other as breathing heavily.

"Ne minami..."

"Yeah..?"

"I really miss u minami."

"I miss u too atsuko."

"I want u always beside me. I wanna to feel your embrace , I wanna to kiss your lips. I want all of u. I love u minami."

"Me too atsuko." I said to her as give her a short deep kiss.

She move forward, wrap her hand around my neck and hug me tightly "please stay with me in here."

"Eehhh?" I surprise at what she saying

"U don't want to?" She said as looking at me. I look at her and smile

"I do want to live together with you. But I don't know when the right time is. I guess I haven't ready yet." I said as stroke her hair. I could see the disappointed in her eyes. I kiss her fore head as said

"I maybe haven't ready yet to stay together but I also haven't ready to let u live alone now."

"Eh? What do u mean?"

I move closer and kiss her neck as saying "I'll accompany u every day, every night until I'm sure with my decision."

She grabs my head and make my hair messy "minami..."

"Let's just keep it like that how is it?" I smile and look at her

She smile and nod "I think its better. But..." She bring me closer to her and whispered in my ear "let's have our time now minami.." I blush as I hearing that but then I smile to her.

"Sure, I love u atsuko."

"Love u too minami."

I said as we kissing each other and enjoy our night full of passion together.



FIN~

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so how is it guuuuuuy????  :panic: :panic: :panic:

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Stay with Me' 17 aug )
« Reply #91 on: August 17, 2011, 01:03:45 PM »
hahaha... nice one sora... my imagination runs wild~~ :mon mischief:

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Stay with Me' 17 aug )
« Reply #92 on: August 17, 2011, 01:28:18 PM »
haha daddy  focus focus XD

weee nice one sora u really made that one  :lol:

me want progress progress :d!!
Still shipping them early pairs. 1st generation ftw!

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Stay with Me' 17 aug )
« Reply #93 on: August 17, 2011, 02:33:10 PM »
nice so cute  :wub:

I coulnd't stop smiling the whole time!!! XD

this is making my imaginations run wild  :grin:

I wish this true! So that ATSUMINA will be official  :P XD

I love it!

update soon..........

and I'll update mine in a bit sorachan

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Stay with Me' 17 aug )
« Reply #94 on: August 17, 2011, 03:43:39 PM »
12am, dark, alone in the room  :drool: :drool:

this is so gooooood!! I hope this gonna be real  :grin:

Acchan needs someone to prepare her breakfast  :cow: :cow:

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Stay with Me' 17 aug )
« Reply #95 on: August 18, 2011, 04:28:11 AM »
If this is the reality, it will be so nice and sweet.
then Atsumina will be superb official.

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Stay with Me' 17 aug )
« Reply #96 on: August 18, 2011, 06:41:17 AM »
Good chapter of atsumina!! :D

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Stay with Me' 17 aug )
« Reply #97 on: August 18, 2011, 06:46:36 AM »
Thanks sora ^.^

nonichan I don't think Flean can focus anymore, we lost him in his thoughts:lol:

Time to let the imagination run wild keke

Atsumina should just move in together in reality.

Please update soon  :twothumbs

I guess I'll go update mines soon too  :P

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot (Update 'Stay with Me' 17 aug )
« Reply #98 on: August 30, 2011, 07:13:28 PM »
hy guuuuuuuuys long time no seeee.... sorry for the late update...  :( :( :(

Okay guys now I try to make some 2shot i guess that come up in my mind related to majisuka gakuen. Hehehehe~ hope u like it. Lets just started.

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Part 1 : Second Chance
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“Minami…”

A-tsu-ko

“No Minami…”

I’m sorry atsuko.

“This is not real right minami?!”

Sorry…

“MINAMIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII~”

All I could remember is just her shouting. Calling my name.

Astuko. I’m sorry. Please live serious. Remember our promise.



After that shout everything turn dark. No one around me. I’m alone. But suddenly I could see a light. I go to where the light come from. And now suddenly around me turn to white. I try to explore the place then I could hear a voice.

Minami…

“Huh? Who is it? Where am I ?”

you are already in a spirit world minami.

“eh? That’s mean I ….”

yess minami, u already dead.

“souka… then who are you?”

I’m the spirit guardian in here. I guide all the spirit go to the spirit land and rest in peace in there.

“ooookaaaay…. Then why I still in here alone?”

that’s what I wanna to tell you minami. Now let me show u  something.

After the spirit guardian said that I could see some vision in there. I shock as I look at the person in front of me. its atsuko. But different atsuko. Why? What happen? I ask to my self. I feel pain in my heart looking her like that. She looks so lonely. The vision then disappear and the voice come back.

there, have u seen that. That the reason I couldn’t send u to the spirit land right now. u still have something to settle up.

“what do you mean?”

you have to help that girl to get out from her desperate. She still feel guilty for what happen to you.

“I’m the one that make atsuko like that. I … I ….”

its not fully your fault minami. The man reason that u haven’t do one thing…

“huh? Whats that? I think I didn’t make any promise or something.”

hmm… do u forgot that you have a promise to go to the amusement park with her and in there u plan to tell her your true feeling.

I frowned at what the spirit said. Yes it true that I plan to tell her my feeling to her. I … actually already fall for this girl, my own best friend. But now I gotta to help her out from this situation.

“so, how could I help her?”

here I will bring u to somewhere.

With that word the sipirit bring me to some place.


Here I am. I arrive in a room. The room looks familiar. I look around and realize that I’m in a ward. I see someone laying in front of me.

here we are minami. As u can see. This is a ward and the one u see in there is the patient. She is a detective and her live is already in danger. Only miracle that could help her.

“so what u wanna me to do?”

hmmm… help your atsuko through her. get your spirit inside her and talk to herself in her underconscious. I know she will help you since I already pay attention to her. she a good detective. She will have a chance to get up from her coma and you will have a chance to help your atsuko.

“uhmmm…. So I just need to come inside her body and be part of her?”

yes u right. Now go and do your work

I nodded and then begin walking to the detective body.

owgh and one more thing. Atsuko cant know that u are inside her body, she mustn know about you minami. U understand?

“I understand”

Soon my spirit got into her body and my work begin.


~a couple months after that~

“Detective takahashi, we should hurry find this school girl.”

“I know that, its our job to get rid all of that bad guys. Find more information.”

“Right away mam.”

The assistant inspector left the room and leave the detective alone.

“hey, why u wont come up now? nobody here.” the detective said as standing in front of the mirror in front of here.

Then a shadow appear beside the detective and there stand a school girl spirit with a yankee look alike “maa…maaa… I gotta make sure that u are alone detective since they cant see me it would make u look stupid if u talk by your own.”

“hahaha, I guess u right.” The ponytail detective said as fixed her glasses

“sooo, what news u get for me detective?”

“uhm…. U will be surprise what I found in the crime scene yankee girl.”

The detective pull out something from her pocket and showed it to the spirit. It’s a pin of majisuka gakuen.

“that pin is…” the spirit shock
“Yeah u right minami. We almost found her.” the detective grin to her.

“I see, so what will u guys do now?”

“we will catch her. because this already a criminal. To get rid the bad people is police job. Your friend already across the line.”

“hmm…. I see… then do whatever u think it will be good.”

“yeah I will minami. I already promise to you that I would help u. and I also owe you.”

They smile to each other and then begin talking.

“so minami, tell me why u could stuck in this situation.” The detective ask her

“well….”

“if u wont tell me its ok…”

“naaaaah, u need to know everything detective. U see, she is my very bestfriend and because of me she become like that. She feels guilty after my dead. I cant see her like that. Still got into a depression.”

“uhm…. I see… u really care of her don’t you?! I could see something in your eyes.” The detective smile to minami

“huh? What are you talking about detective?” minami look other way to hide her blush and the detective just chuckle.

“ahahaha, relax minami its not like I cant see that.”

“*sigh okay….okay…I admit about that. But please stop teasing me.”

“okay, gomen. So tell me about her? I should know about the girl that I will handle right?”

“well, she is a calm girl but also could be fierce at the same time. Even actually she is a nice girl. I’m sure u will like it when u know her. ”

“hmm…. Interesting girl… I have just pass away her I guess but I haven’t can recognize her.”

Suddenly there is a knock at the door and minami spirit go back inside the detective body.

*knock … knock…

“Come in.”

“Detective, I’ve got news, that today we will found that girl.”

“tell me”

“there will be a yankee war between 2 gakuen and I’m sure she will come there and we can catch her.”

“great news, now gather all the unit to go there but remember don’t do anything without my command. U understand?”

“yes detective.”

“now gow.”

“excuse me.”

The assistant inspector left the room and detective takahashi prepare to go.

“so, u will catch her?”

“don’t worry minami. I wont do anything to her.”

“do anything that u think its right.”

“I will.”

With that the detective leave the room and headed to the yankee war area. As arrive there all the police are on guard waiting for the detective order.

“why we are just stand here detective?”

“hold on. Let them settle up this. Infact maeda haven’t come yet.”

“I understand”

They keep waiting as watching the war between yankee school. This war is common. The war between yabakune and majijo gakuen. This two gakuen never can be live peacefully. After 1 hour of waiting finally the girl that they waiting come and settle her business first.

“detective lets catch her now.”

“wait, she still has to settle her business.”

They waiting again until atsuko go out the building and surrender herself to the police.

“Ready to go?”

“hai”

Finally they catch maeda atsuko and got her to the police station. As they arrive maeda is brought to the Interrogation room and leave in there alone while the detective just watching her from the other room alone.

“hmm…. She is really something.”

“heeey, what are u saying?”

“owgh finally u come out minami. There is your bestfriend.”

“I know, so what will u guys do to her now.”

“uhm… still she is surrender herself to us I think she wont got a heavy punishment infact she could be ask to become one of us?”

“huh? U mean help u guys?” minami ask in surprise

“yeah. And aaaah~ seems she is sleeping now. wont u talk to her in her dream. Its your chance.”

“well, I guess u right. I’ll excuse my self first.”

“gudluck yankee girl.”

Minami then got into atsuko dream.


“Atsuko…”

“Mi…minami…” atsuko look the figure in front of her

“Yeah, its me atsuko. Please don’t cry.” Minami said as wipe atsuko tears with her thumb

“Minamiiiiiiiiiiiiii…..please don’t leave me…. I miss you, I need you.” Atsuko said as rush and hug minami tightly

“I miss u too atsuko but I’m sorry. I cant be with you after this. I must get back to the place I belongs.”

“nooo…. Don’t leave me… please…”

“*sigh listen to me atsuko, even I cant be with u physically but I still in your heart. I always be with u there. Please continue to live seriously and reach what you want. Now I’ll be with your yuko senpai.”

“minami… ”

“and one more thing that I have to told u atsuko.. I love you..” she said that as give atsuko a short kiss full of her love there. And then the detective could see a light coming out from atsuko body and headed to the sky.

Looking that the detective only can smile and said “Congrats yankee girl.”

Atsuko then wake up as touch her lips “minami…”

She starts to cry and then the detective come into the room. She looks at the girl in front of her in disbelieve. A fierce girl that could take down 5 man in a row now crying defend less in front of her. she approach the girl and hug her.

“u know, its okay to cry once a while.” Somehow looking this girl like this make the detective in pain.

Atsuko cry as hard as she can and then start calm in the detective embrace.



I will still keep my promise to you minami.



TBC in part 2

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dooooouuuuu???????  :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:

well, since tomorrow i'll be going coz tomorrow is Idul Fitriiiiiiii~  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

i will try to finished the second part tonight. wish me luck...  :yep: :yep: :yep: :yep: :yep:


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Re: [AKB48] Two_shot Majisuka Gakuen (Part 1 'Second Chance' 31 aug )
« Reply #99 on: August 30, 2011, 07:17:55 PM »
me want second part!!!! :bow: :bow:

Selamat Hari Raya btw...  :cow: :cow:

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