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Glad that I could help and congrats for the 90th post.
I'm wondering too, but I guess you just update at the time when I'm online? (like now) nah, you're not that weird...kidding!
Another TakAcchan!  :deco:
Truth and dare is one dangerous game to be played...especially with Acchan lol
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And I’ll promise you that I’ll take care of her even if the whole world ends ‘cuz she’s important to me
For someone who doesn't like cheesy things, Takamina sure knows how to say sweet words  :P
Nice dare Acchan  :twothumbs

Edit: Eh? It seemed I did manage to be the first again and with a new page too  XD
Ps. You can actually drop the san or just call me C.
« Last Edit: April 15, 2011, 10:00:49 PM by pretend_2besome1 »


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 :shocked :shocked :shocked alexiel17  :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: u really granted my wish uh i mean u really give me my present...  XD XD XD thank youuuuu....

well, i dont mind u use my last name...  :grin: :grin: but u really like to keep the story hanging uh... :smhid :smhid make the reader guess uh...  :smhid :smhid uhmmmmmmm.... but i like it...  :grin: :grin: and what's wrong with that "-san"  :smhid we are friend right....right...  :mon misch: just call me sora :mon innocent: plus i'm not hate u sistaaah...  :gmon bang:

like your story and keep update  :thumbsup :thumbsup

btw i have also granted your wish for the tragic fict. but i dont know whether its already tragic / not for u....  :kekeke:

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I never said what I was thinking, it could be anything   :D maybe is you the one perv for imagining thing hehehe :grin:e
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Anyway, thanks for letting me call you kahem (without the san) it only means that....   I dunno   what does that mean anyway... ehehe
I don't know neither lol

So the dare, it probably an interessing dare hehehe ;)

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You like to end your fic at the important part don't you  :smhid First the gift, and now that  :roll: But thank for the update, I enjoyed reading it ^^ I'll be waiting for your KojiYuu update and hope nothing bad will happen to you again XD

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Awesome!
I look forward to moarrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.
Atsuko is dangerous :B .

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nice fanfic  alexiel17....... =)

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Re: My haphazard fics (Updated for my 97th post) :p – alexiel17 :]
« Reply #26 on: April 29, 2011, 09:12:00 PM »
WHAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  :panic: :panic:  :scared:  I’m really so sorry that this is a NG!!!  :panic: This is really a NG since the writer is a NG in the first place….  :err: Huhuhuhuhu……  :fainted:
Sorry for the errors ‘cuz I do not have the courage to check this and reread this ‘cuz it’s………………  :on blackhole: EMBARRASSING!!!  :mon zoom: :mon mad:  :mon fire: :mon slapself: DAMN IT!!  :banghead: Why did I even create this fic in the first place….. fjdbngrhvnhbtgirhnhbrvm (I’m a bit frustrated)

Just to Add: I’m really happy that this thread is becoming popular!! :] ehehehe :]
Anyway, since a lot of Authors/Readers are showing up, I really want to say Thanks to everyone :] ehehehe :]



Title: I Want to Know You (this is terrible.. so terrible…)


Two figures were walking down the streets. One was grinning while the other one was in deep thought of what had happened with them awhile ago.

“Ei Minami, still thinking about what ‘we’ just did?” the tall girl said with a cunning tone of voice while pinching the short girl’s cheeks. The girl did not reply but blushed because of her friend’s question. The ace saw this and removes her hands on the girl’s cheeks.

“Acchan, y-you know, w-what I d-did, it’s umm… it’s” the short girl was trying to correct her friend’s statement because what happened between them during their practice was her entire fault. The tall girl, knowing that her friend was still regretful for the incident, cuts her off because she doesn’t want her friend to explain further, because she did like it. 

“Minami, I know it’s all just an accident, that you kissed me in front of the rest of the girls, I really don’t mind it at all.” Acchan assured the other girl with a small smile on her face. The smile she was giving was not really a happy one since she did enjoyed it, even if it’s just simple peck on the lips, adding the thought that it’s really a pure accident made her even sadden.

Minami noticed the sudden change of her friend made her worried. She doesn’t want to talk about this, but seeing her friend like this, even if this makes her uncomfortable, she decided that she needs to clear things up.

“Umm… A-Acchan, umm… is uncle and aunty in your house right now? I just want to t-talk with you about the, umm… the i-incident.”  Acchan was a bit surprised with her friend’s question. She smiled thinking that when they did reach her house, instead of going inside, Minami would bow down to her, saying she’s sorry and run as fast as she could. Yup, she would do that, she thought.

Umm… Acchan? Are you listening?” The small captain asked, a bit concerned that her friend was spacing out. She is now quite scared because her friend might think weird of her ‘cuz she somewhat said that she wants them to be together, alone despite of what happened.

“Huh? Ah, Yes. About my parents, they are not around.” She said looking at her precious little friend with her soft, calm eyes that she rarely show because she only gives that look to her special someone.

“Ah, that would be great.” The captain replied back, not thinking anymore her messed up ideas. Looking directly within those eyes made her realize, does she still treat her as her friend? Does she regret kissing her? What’s been bothering her right now is the realization that maybe she did enjoy her simple kiss with her friend and that, she’s craving for, well, for more. ‘No, Minami, stop thinking those things. She will be your friend forever.’ She chats repeatedly inside her head just to stop her from thinking those weird ideas.

“Minami, just a few steps and we‘re near my house.” The ace said with a smile on her face. She’s thinking that her friend might not really go in her house and just apologize instead. Since the ace was busy thinking, a motorcycle was in her way that she didn’t notice. Minami saw this and hold the tall girl’s left wrist, pulled her near her body while her other hand hold Acchan’s back, in a protective way.

“Acchan, you scared me, you know that. You almost hit by a motorcycle, for crying out loud!” The captain said tightening her holding on the ace.

Acchan stayed silent, she’s absorbing what her friend had just said. Minami notice this, and just to make her friend relax, she caressed her friends back.

“Acchan, are you really prone to accidents? Remember the time that I tripped just to save you from a motorcycle? Really, it’s like déjà vu or something.” Minami said, recalling that event once again. (Refer to my first fic; You’re My… (♥Takacchan♥) ehehehe :])

When the short girl was about to loosen her hold, Acchan griped the captain’s shoulders, leaned to her and kissed her on the lips. Minami was shocked with her friend’s action but the girl’s lips was so inviting that she decided to close her eyes and enjoy the kiss. Her lips being pressed on her friend gives her a tingling feeling, a feeling that she doesn’t want to end. Acchan, feeling her friend’s lips on hers, made her so happy. She wants to know if her friend does feel the same way toward her that’s why she decides to deepen their kiss by licking her friend’s lower lips. Minami slightly moaned with her friend’s action. She was just thinking this awhile ago and now they are doing it, in the middle of the streets. She really can’t believe that this is really happening; feeling those warm, wet lips being pressed on hers makes her a bit arouse. (O_O)

Her hand that was on the ace’s back, moved upwards, pulling her towards her, deepening their kiss. Acchan felt the girl’s hands on her hair, messing it a bit but she didn’t care. Since the kiss their sharing was quite intense, she took a quick breathe and then pulled Minami in another passionate kiss. Minami felt something different with this kiss, she then felt Acchan’s tongue inside her mouth. The little captain moaned more with the strong sensation she’s feeling. She decides to imitate her and made Acchan moan this time by sucking the girl’s mouth. Acchan wanted to do more than kissing Minami that’s why she pulled back from their kiss which Minami wondered in frustration.

“Minami, I want to do something more than kissing. Will you let me do it?” The ace said, still breathing heavily because of the passionate kissed they’d shared. Minami, a bit flushed, smile in response with the ace’s request. She still can’t believe that all of it happened. Awhile ago, they were a bit awkward with each other, well, it’s actually her that’s been uncomfortable since Acchan was cool with their simple peck in their practice room, (Yup, it’s just an accident) but now, she can’t believe it. It’s like they are both waiting for the right moment, they were craving this from the very beginning to happen, and it did.

Minami was still in deep thought about the sudden contact with her friend. She’s now thinking; Are they still friends? Is this just a spur of the moment kind of thing? She’s hoping it isn’t.

Acchan notice that her beloved was a bit shocked that’s why she grabbed her wrist and lead her inside her house since they are just a few steps to her house.

Minami just realized that she’s now inside of her friend’s house. She was just standing there, in her living room, blushing hard because she remembered that nobody’s around exempt the two of them. Acchan, still holding her little captain’s wrist, notice that her friend was a bit shaking which is kinda cute for her. She then decides to tease her friend.

“Umm.. Minami, what do you want to eat? I think you’re spacing out too much lately.” The ace said while holding her lips with her index finger like she’s thinking of a food to serve her beloved, or that she’s hoping that she will be her food instead. (O_O)

 Minami blushed more when she knew what her friend was trying to tell her. She then decides to answer her back.

“Umm… Acchan, I-If you want, I’ll cook for you instead since I know you’re a bit tired.” I don’t know what you’re thinking right now but Acchan interpret it in a different way, imagining Minami on top of her. (O_O) She then covers her mouth with both hands, blushing hard.

Minami noticed this and without a word, went to the girls’ kitchen and started to gather all the ingredients she’ll make for her ace. Acchan is still in her lala land, imagining things with the girl she’s with right now. She then went back to reality when she heard her stove being opened. Minami peek at her friend and noticed that she’s going to the kitchen; she told her that she’ll take care of their food and requested Acchan to sleep first. She followed Minami’s simple request since she’s a bit sleepy and decides to have a quick sleep in the sofa. She’s thinking that when Minami wakes her up, she’ll be able to know Minami, a lot more….. 


I Can’t Do This Anymore!!!!!!!

~THE END~




Sorry I was planning to create 4 fics for my 100th post!!!  :yep: And this was on the list…. Huhuhuhu…. (TT_TT)

I was a bit surprised that I only have a few posts to go till I’ll reach 100 that’s why I want my post to be fics instead…. Me also wishing that I post those 4 fics this weekend… (I hope I can do it…..)

I really can't do it..........*bows 180 degrees*  :kneelbow:

Actually, the other stories are still on the making that's why I think I can't do it.....  :gyaaah: I really can't.... (TT_TT)  :pleeease:

Anyway, about this fic of mine…. I don’t wanna talk a bout it, ok…..
I was trying a different kind of umm… let’s say I’m trying if I can go beyond the fluffy level. I’m actually experimenting different styles of writing, that's why....  :on speedy:

To tell you honestly, when the story was inside my head, (O_O) it was supposed to start with a lemony scene (yes, the bed scenes) but when I was about to write it, my fingers were holding me back. It’s like they don’t want to type it… And when I was typing the fic; in every paragraph, I would stop and roll on the floor for about 20 minutes….  :tantrum:
I really can’t write the infinity and beyond kinda level…. I know, I’m useless……. Please forgive me!!!!!

I feel so violated while creating the scenes inside me head… (I want to kill myself for even trying!!!!  :mon fire:)
So this is the most useless, despicable, and the worst fic I’ve done and posted…. I’m still thinking/planning to delete this afterwards…..  :mon determined: AHHHHHH!!!!  :mon mad: I’m feeling so unclean!!!!  :mon runcry: I’m so sorry TAKAMINA-SAMA and ACCHAN!!!!  :mon scare: AHHHHH!!!! Now, I can’t look at them!!!! I’m unworthy…. Huhuhu…  :cry: :cry:



Anyway, I’m gonna reply again..... I’m so embarrassed because my stories are not good compared with everyone here....  :cry:
Hmmm.... what if I suddenly stopped writing?  :mon dunno: That would be good, right? :on GJ: :thumbsup I'm serious.....


pretend_2besome1-san. Umm, I mean C! WAZZAP!!!  :mon yoyo:

I’m really sorry that this update is a lousy one  :err: ‘cuz I dunno, when the fic was inside of my head, it was really different from this…. I dunno what happened to me…. I’m sorry,  :kneelbow: I think because of this post of mine, you’ll stop reading me fics…. I’m so sorry!!! Huhuhu….  :frustrated:

But if you really did not like this, it’s ok, I'll understand ‘cuz it’s entirely my fault…. *sniff, sniff….*  :mon whimper: If you’ll stop supporting me, it’s ok…. (I’m crying right now….)  :cry:

But I want to say thank you for everything, thanks for the support you’ve given me, the comments you’d said to me, for letting me reach second page….  I’ll treasure it all…..  :mon whimper:
Thank you C!!!! My first commenter, my friend…. huhuhu… T_T


Sora. Dude, thanks for liking me previous fics, I do appreciate it…  :twothumbs  :on gay: I know that you’ll stop supporting me ‘cuz I’m not really a good writer. Am I even a writer to begin with?  :dunno:
Anyway, Thanks so much for the funny comments and the cute gifs you’ve given me…. I will cherish them.…. huhuhu….  :cry: I know that this latest update did not satisfy you, it might annoy you since it’s not really good… huhu *I’m crying*

But anyway, I hope that you’ll continue to update, cuz I promise you that I’ll support you as long as I can, Sora!  :mon determined: Huhuhu…  :mon whine: I'm no good....  :(

I was trying if I too, can write a lemony fic ‘cuz since you’d created yours, I decided to create mine but it turns out like this… I’m not good Sora…  :(  But really I wanna say Thank you for everything…. Huhuhuhu…. Thanks soo much for considering me as your friend… You are my friend, really….. huhuhuhu…



Kahem.  Thanks for letting me call you Kahem, you are the first one to request that and I thank you for it……  :kneelbow:

About my message with you and your reply, you are quite right… Sorry, I’d doubted you as a perv, I sometimes jump to conclusion so fast that I end up getting beaten…  :on beatup  ehehehe :]  Anyway, thanks so much for the support, the comments, I really, really am touched… I really want to hug everyone right now!!!

HUHUHU….  :cry: Like what I promised Sora, I will also support you, Kahem…  :thumbsup so please, update you fics as fast as you can (Hope I’m not forcing you… ehehehe :])

Thanks so much for everything…

Oh and btw, I was planning on something (about your new multi-chap fic…) but I’ll inform you more about my plans if I can really do it to begin with… ehehehe :] that’s is, if you’ll allow me to do it :] ehehehe it’s a secret :] I suddenly dropped the idea since I might quit writing.....  :cry:



bou-j525-san. You, along with the cool authors here that I adore pushed me to post my stories here, and with that, I really am grateful that I met you all guys....  :mon waterworks: You might not know me completely, but you did made me feel a bit special, I mean everyone made me so happy that I feel that I’m not worthless….

 Thanks so much for everything, bou-j525-san.... *Gosh, I wanna cry*
   
Anyway, I hope that you'll never stop updating your cool fics….  :thumbsup I also promise you that I’ll support you, cross my heart :]  :yep: :yep:

Thanks so much bou-j525-san, I don’t know what to say but thanks really that you’re there…. I’m really happy….. :]
Thanks for everything, my dear friend… :]

TakahashiJ-san. I was really happy that I have a new reader!!!  :w00t: I’m really so touch ‘cuz  compared with all the awesomeness authors here, I’m just really a noob in the fanfic world…  :mon surr: I don’t know what else to say but thanks soo much… I’m really happy that you’d even bothered leaving me a comment…  :mon crazyinlove: I’m so touched… *I so wanna cry… * huhuhu…  :cry: So sorry that I’m a bit simple…. That’s how I really am… ehehehe :]   :yep:
TakahashiJ-san, thanks so much, even if you think that your comment is simple, for me, it’s something really precious since I was happy while reading it… It inspires me to write more…. But I really need help right now.....  :mon ghost:

khryz0421. OHMIGAAA!!!  :mon runcry: I'm so terribly sorry that I'm being an ass  :shakeit:, This is really the first time I felt this way... Oh, mi gawsh, I'm so selfish..... I'm really so sorry....  :mon whine: huhuhu...  :cry: *having heart attack*
I'm truly so sorry khryz0421-san.... huhuhu.... I don't know, what I'm feeling right now...  :( But really, thanks for leaving a comment here.... huhuhu.....  :cry: I'm so touched...  :fainted:

Thanks so much, I hope I'll see you here more often (I'm hoping that I'll continue writing...  :cry:) I really want to write more fics.....  :gyaaah: Thanks really for the message....


TO EVRYONE WHO IS READING, THANKS SO MUCH!!!! >.<
I TRY TO IMPROVE MYSELF MORE!!!!
I might not improve myself if I'll stop writing.....  :cry:


Alexiel is a bit sad…..  :fainted:  :on cloudeye:

So truly sorry guys!! Maybe I'm just embarrassed at myself (add the update I'd made) I don't know if what I'm feeling right now is temporary, (I hope so...) but if it goes worst, I might stop myself from writing, for real....... (What's happening to me.....  :panic: )
I don't know, I'm feel so worthless (I'm so sorry, I was bullied when I was a little girl and my high school life wasn't that good either.... 'cuz a lot of people bullied me too... That's the reason for the "feeling-so-worthless" thingy...) I'm so sad.... I need help....

This might sound weird but despite the funny comments I give, my life sucks (well, my life is somewhat ok right now since at school, nobody bullies me, for now... and at least I eat 3 times a day.. ehehe :]) I just didn't know why I suddenly feel so... lonely... Maybe because I was all by myself when I was bullied, I was pretending to be strong by saying that it's alright but I was really lying to myself..... I was alone crying.... I'm all alone..... But, that belonged to the past now.... ehehehe :]  :lol: I'm weird thinking of that all of a sudden......  :sweatdrop:


Alexiel is a bit sad…..


Umm.... Maybe I might post another fic so pls. wait for it :] ehehehe :]  :) :) Still in a process of recovering myself.... *sigh*
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Re: My haphazard fics (Updated for my 97th post) :p – alexiel17 :]
« Reply #27 on: April 29, 2011, 09:30:27 PM »
I saw this update and about to comment later since I'm supposed to be studying for my exam, but I skimmed through and saw your comment at the end and I just have to say "Calm down, I won't stop reading your fic because of this post, kay?  :)"
Okay, so technically I haven't really read it, but I don't think it'll bad --> this comment is actually to let you know that.
Don't stop writing, this fanfic thread needs all the author it could get! And if you could follow your plan to post more fics then please do, I'm sure others would be happy.
That being said, I'll come back with a proper comment when I get some time! Don't feel lonely!


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Re: My haphazard fics (Updated for my 97th post) :p – alexiel17 :]
« Reply #28 on: April 29, 2011, 11:47:11 PM »
Hum if you can't wite anymore I wouldn't force you but I think your fucs are great ^^
For my fic if you have idea I'll listen with pleasure, I'm at the end of the first chapter
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:twothumbs eating is the most important thing in the life with the AKB, my stomach is my second brain some people says that is my first lol  If you're sad eat. The food can heal a lot of thing especially chocolate  ^^ or you can talk with people on internet if you can't with people  irl it's could help too but eat first. You can also listen korogaru ishi ni nare, it give you energy and the fight spirit :)

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Re: My haphazard fics (Updated for my 97th post) :p – alexiel17 :]
« Reply #29 on: April 30, 2011, 01:09:40 AM »
woooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwww :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: nice fict there like it so much....  :thumbsup :thumbsup I like the way how u writing it. keep up dude...  :thumbsup :thumbsup and I demand another....  :grin: :grin: and this fict of yours is not terrible.... its good and really good... keep up update... and about this :

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Hmmm.... what if I suddenly stopped writing?  :mon dunno: That would be good, right? :on GJ: :thumbsup I'm serious.....
dont dare to do that... keep writing.... since i'm u'r fan and u also already read my fic...  :grin:

keep writing okay?!

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Re: My haphazard fics (Updated for my 97th post) :p – alexiel17 :]
« Reply #30 on: April 30, 2011, 09:34:01 AM »

khryz0421. OHMIGAAA!!!  :mon runcry: I'm so terribly sorry that I'm being an ass  :shakeit:, This is really the first time I felt this way... Oh, mi gawsh, I'm so selfish..... I'm really so sorry....  :mon whine: huhuhu...  :cry: *having heart attack*
I'm truly so sorry khryz0421-san.... huhuhu.... I don't know, what I'm feeling right now...  :( But really, thanks for leaving a comment here.... huhuhu.....  :cry: I'm so touched...  :fainted:

Thanks so much, I hope I'll see you here more often (I'm hoping that I'll continue writing...  :cry:) I really want to write more fics.....  :gyaaah: Thanks really for the message....


Alexiel17-san  don't say sorry... :frustrated: hehehe.... i leave a comment because i really like your post.. :luvluv1: i'm really grateful that my comment makes you happy.... :shy2:

you're always welcome.. :welcome 
hope you continue soon.. cos I am your fan...  :mon cute:

and don't stop writing....
« Last Edit: April 30, 2011, 09:48:41 AM by khryz0421 »

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Re: My haphazard fics (Updated for my 97th post) :p – alexiel17 :]
« Reply #31 on: April 30, 2011, 06:39:14 PM »
I feel like I'm gonna write a lot... why isn't there a spoiler button -.-'

Okay, first of all, after finally noticing it, I think you don't need to call me bou-j525-san XD  Just call me bou like everyone... since everyone here forgets about the "j"... the "j" is important!  :smhid XD

Thank for the update! I'm kind of reading it while doing an English homework and at first I wasn't even supposed to answer to you (ya know... just clicking "thank you" for this time), but after reading everything you wrote including the end note, I think I can take a few minutes to write you something  :nervous

First, I have to say that each time, NO EXCEPTION, you write, it always, ALWAYS, reminds me of a friend I had before. She was speaking/writing exactly the same way you do. When sometimes I read some of your comments, I don't know if it was just me, but I felt like there was something... you know, not fake, but forced. Like, the kind of person pretending everything is fine and doing jokes all the time and talking always with a fake happy tone while in fact they are depressed and can't stop insulting themselves. My friend was this way, and I can tell you that it was easy to guess when she was pretending to be happy. That's why you know... don't just pretend to be happy. Be truly happy  :) And when you are not, there will always be people ready to support you.
And you know I can't tell you what to do because I don't know at all what it is to be bullied or anything like this, but I seriously think you should trust yourself more. It is not because you can't write or do something that you are useless. I mean, the first thing I read at the beginning of your update was that it was going to be horrible. And I went like "WHAT SHE KILLED SOMEONE?!" And at the end I was like "Horrible? What was horrible?" You know?  And after I think you told me "thank you"  three times in four sentences so I went "Yo I should be the one thanking you for updating your fics!"  :theking

Anyway, all this just to tell you that you should not think in this negative way about your fic or what you're doing. I will never tell you "your fic is horrible" because it is not. Everyone writes in a different ways, that is why I enjoy reading different stories, including yours. If you suddenly stopped writing, I would be sad because I enjoy reading your fic and it's always nice to see you won against your fear of posting here. I mean, you started posting here after so much time... you can't just suddenly stop! That would be  :shocked to everyone reading your fic! XD

Pfff, let's stop talking in such a serious way (HOLY SH*T IT TOOK ME LIKE 30MIN 40MIN TO WRITE THIS COMMENT WHEN I WAS SUPPOSED TO TAKE ONLY 5?!? ARGH TIME'S MISSING :banghead: ) So yeah, you know what, I'll be waiting for your next update! Because this one was great ^^ I don't care if you can't write bed scenes you know, it's not the most important thing I want to read XD  So yeah.... update soon coz you know I'll be there to read your fics... ;)

By the way, if I have time, I'll post a KojiYuu OS tomorrow, so come and read ^^ It won't be sad this time, I promise :P

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Umm…. Ok, so this is my 98th post…  :)
Umm… this is kinda different from the other fics I’ve written (so far…)  :yep:

Ummm…. sorry that this time, umm… I haven’t replied with all those who commented on my fic (and those who are shy but who really are concern for me….  :inlove: Ehehehe….  :grin:) since, it’s 4:40 am here and I’m still in the process of recovering myself…  :nervous (I'm sleepy...)
But guys, thanks so much…

I’m really stupid ‘cuz I only realized right now that I’m somewhat, umm… important too, well, in fact you all keep on supporting me… from the very beginning… :]  :thumbsup
I’m really sorry for all the drama….. hehe :]  :sweatdrop:


I’ll promise that I’ll edit this later….  :yep: Since I’m really sleepy right now…. Ehehehe :]   :sweatdrop:




Title: The Unexpected Guest   (Guess the pairing! ♥♥♥)



It was midnight at that time. Three people are heading to a small condominium where their old friend lives alone, well she’s not really all alone since she’s now a mother which really gave the three the most surprising news yet.

Obviously, the three missed each other even though they’re denying it.  They’d miss the time when they’re together, being admired by their kouhai’s, the punches and bruises they’d given when they were in a fight with some worthless Yankees, the power and the authority they had, and especially the time they had with their beloved leader. Those were the days.

Now, they are mature, well, forced to be mature because of life. Even if they didn’t want to, just to survive, they need to do it. Getting older makes people forget what they really were before, forgetting their childhood fantasies, their teenage attitudes, just to wake in a world where you need to survive just to live.  (Wow, this is deep….. O_O)


The three remained silent. It was really unusual since they were a bit awkward right now. Maybe because they were waiting for someone to speak first or that they’re treasuring the moments they are currently having. It’s funny, really, but sometimes you don’t need to speak just to be understood. Words sometimes aren’t needed to convey your feelings….. (Alexiel’s a bit deep right now…. :3 )


Finally, someone broke the silence.

“Hey guys, you sure that Black lives here?” The tallest girl said, still wearing her nursing uniform. She really wants to see Black again but not in that kind of clothing; since she rushed from work when she saw Shibuya’s message, she had no time to change. It did give her a surprise that the fashionista messaged her and wanted to meet her, since she knows that when they were still under Yuko’s wings, the two were always in a brawl.
The tall girl was now looking at the shortest girl with suspicion.

“Are you testing my instincts? Of course we’re in the right direction Sado, or is it Nurse Ma-ri-ko~?” The girl with a pink strand of hair said teasing her old friend because of her career and obviously because she’s wearing her uniform.

“You both haven’t changed a bit.” The third girl smiled. “If you both end up fighting, I will not stop you.” She added in a bored way. She is holding a plastic bag containing foods as a gift for their friend. If you want to know, she is also wearing her ‘job outfit’.

“I don’t know Torigoya, but your ‘job’ is a bit different compared with the both of us.” The shortest girl said looking at Torigoya while pointing her finger towards herself and Sado. She’s quite surprised that her airhead friend chooses that kind of work. Well, it did make the airhead girl a bit annoyed with Shibuya but since she also missed her, she just let her go this time.

“That’s the only job I was accepted, ok. Deal with it.” Torigoya said while pouting.

“Shibuya, why aren’t you in your working attire? I’m just wondering.” The tallest girl asked just to change the topic. Well, she was a bit pissed that she and Torigoya are wearing their worst clothes but Shibuya was in her casual attire. I think Sado’s a bit jealous ‘cuz she too, is onto fashion.

“Yeah, Sado’s right. What are you, fired or something?” The other girl said, but unknown to her, she did hit the nail.

“What? You both are annoying! I’m still working. You just don’t know how hard it is.” The short girl stands her ground. She’s really lying but she’s telling the truth that her work is difficult especially when she doesn’t like it. How can you like your work when your boss always makes fun of you in front of your co-workers?

The former Vice president and the queen noticed that their friend was silent for awhile. They noticed that maybe she did get fired. Unknown to them, she’s currently doing something ‘Majisuka’ related, but anyway, just to end their silence, Torigoya spoke.

“Well, if you did get fired, I’ll help you out. I thinking my job is still looking for~” Torigoya wasn’t able to finish her statement when Shibuya was glaring at her. “I’m just saying.” The airhead queen added.

“Well, I think you could enter a job related to fashion or be a model instead, since you’re a fashionista to begin with. I think that suits you better.” The nurse said with a smirk on her face.

“Well, that’s a bit surprising coming for the Vice. I think you should be a model instead than being a nurse. And I really, aren’t your patients a bit scared because, well, you are Sado after all.” The short girl said just to change the topic. She really wants to have a great time with them again that’s why she decided to call those two. 

Even though the three are mocking each other, they know that it is their way of showing that they’d missed each other, that they’d created a bond which they hope would not be broken as they grew older. 

They were quite noisy bantering with each other when they reached Black’s place. They stopped when they were in front of the queen’s door. Torigoya was the one who pushed the doorbell since the two are a bit tensed; maybe because they don’t know what to say to their friend when they met her. The door opened and saw Black wearing an apron with a knife on her hand.

Torigoya screamed. Luckily, Shibuya covered her friend’s mouth.

“Ahahaha, umm….Nice to see you again Black-san.” Shibuya said still holding the other girl’s mouth.

Black was surprised that her friends are in front of her house right now. She’s still cooking her food ‘cuz she did not expect the three would come. Well, she really didn’t expect visitor since there’s no occasion to begin with and really, it’s been a long time since she saw them. She also has no news with her friend’s lives that’s why she’s still in a shock.

“Black, we hope we’re not disturbing you or anything.” Sado said with a blush on her face because of the look that Black is giving her. Black was really surprised that Sado was wearing a pink nursing outfit. (Who wouldn’t be?)

She went to her senses and swiftly went inside her house and fixed everything, her sofa, her kitchen, all in a split second.

She went back to her friends and welcomed them in. She’s now wearing a plain white shirt and a black jogging pants. The three girl’s notice that her house was a bit small but they made themselves at home. The three visitors, now sitting on her small sofa, were a bit quiet.

Haruna was getting a little bored. She decided to put the plastic bag she’s holding in the kitchen, where Black is currently busy cooking their food.

The two girls that were sitting in the sofa were a bit bored too, that’s why they decided to help the two girls in the kitchen.

When the four girls were done cooking, they sat on the sofa and started to chat.

“Black, is it true that you’re a mother now?” A trace of happiness can be found on the little queen’s voice.

“Yes and the baby is sleeping right now.” Black replied with a blush on her face.

“Well, you really surprised us with that. I can’t believe that one of our friend is already a mom! At last, I’m gonna be an Aunt! Can you believe that?” Torigoya squealed a bit, she was looking at the two if they’ll agree with her but they were looking at her uncaringly.

“We are really happy for you Black. If you need help, you can just approach us anytime you want, ok?” The tallest girl said, with a cool tone of voice. She really is happy, but since she is Sado, she wants to be cool in front of them.

“Really, I was thinking that Torigoya was the first to be the mother in our group. This is really a surprise to all of us, Black.” Torigoya was really getting angry with Shibuya. First, she criticized her because of her job, and now this. Who wouldn’t be mad anyway? She was planning to be married before she becomes a mother but that would be impossible since the person she wants to spend her entire life, already left this world. And the said person was also a girl, so it’s really impossible to be pregnant to begin with. Anyway, that’s her little secret.

She was about to punch the other queen but Black spoke. 

“Guys, you really did surprise me. I don’t know what to say. If Yuko sempai was here, she might~” Black was a bit teary ‘cuz she does miss her friends that much especially their leader. She thought that they might hate her for keeping her secret to them but they weren’t, well, actually she did told her secret to someone but she’s not with them.

“Yeah, she might have killed you, you know? For keeping your pregnancy to all of us.” Torigoya said in a funny way while hugging Black.

“Well, I think she might have killed us because we let you fought with Maeda’s friends alone.” Sado said while holding the girl’s shoulder, hoping that it would stop Black from crying.

Shibuya was a bit pissed hearing the name of the girl who’d defeated her with a single headbutt but she wants to have fun with her friends right now instead of creating a plan for defeating the said girl.

“Hey, I think Yuko sempai would be happy that she too, would be an Aunt, well, a nee-san to be exact.” the three queen looks at her with a surprised look on their faces.

“What? What did I say?” She’s a bit confused with the look that her friends are giving her.

“I don’t know but Shibuya, you’re a bit sweet today.” Black said, smiling at the girl who is now blushing hard. She can’t believe that their reckless and a bit of a hard headed friend is now a changing, she smiled at the thought that they really are starting to be adults.

“I don’t know what you’re saying but really, you need to have fun once in a while since having a baby is a tough job.” The small girl said without looking at her friend.

“Oh, how did you know, Shibuya?” Torigoya wiggles her eye brows to the shorter queen. She’s enjoying this moment because finally, she’d teased the girl. Sado and Black just laugh with their two friends. 

“Thanks you, Shibuya. And thank you Sado-sempai and Torigoya.” Black said, now calming a bit. She’s also entertained with her friend’s funny arguments. She does miss this so much.

The two girls who were comforting her nodded. Sado and Torigoya did realize that Shibuya does have a point, that they’re there to have fun in the first place.

Torigoya loosen her hold on Black and went to the kitchen to get the liquor she’d brought awhile ago, and went to the living room where her friends are.

“So, shall we begin?” The other girls smiled at her and helped her prepare the said drink.

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The four girls were having a good time with each other. They talk about a lot of things; their work, their plans in the future and of course, the time they were part of the Great Rapapa.


“Hey, you might find it funny, but I think if Gekikara was here, this small get together party we’re having might’ve been perfect.” Torigoya said a bit drunk. The two agreed with her but Black seemed to be quite that ever.

“I wasn’t really surprised that she’s not here with us.” Black said in a soft voice, hoping that her friends will not hear her because they are, a bit drunk.

“Well, I called her but I forgot that she doesn’t have a cellphone. And really, I think Gekikara’s a bit scary.” The fashionista said, embracing herself for remembering the other Queen’s actions.

“She’d changed, Shibuya.I heard that she’s really studying hard because she promised Yuko that she’ll graduate this time. The former vice president said, defending the other queen.

“Well, since we’re talking about her, I did actually told her about me getting pregnant.” Black looked at her friends and decided to continue her story since the three were looking at her in a baffled way.

“When I told her about it, she was really mad at me.” Black chuckled a bit, remembering the time that she confessed that to Gekikara.

“Are you serious!?” the three blurted out loudly. Black just made them a bit calm since her baby is really sleeping right now. The three girls apologized quickly.

“Wow. I never knew you two are that close.” Torigoya drank a bit, and still shocked from what she’d heard.

The other two were really surprised by that especially Shibuya. She can’t believe the former silent queen was a bit intimate with the crazy and barbaric queen.

Sado was just quiet, and smirked a bit. She really didn’t expect this.

“Well, if you said it to me, I might think you’re joking.” The former vice said. “But that’s not really your personality so I might as well believe you.” She added, sipping her cup.

As they were still stunned with their friend’s confession, they suddenly hear the baby crying. The four quickly went to the baby’s room and there they saw a black figure, sitting on a chair near the baby’s crib.

They really can’t believe it, that the person inside the baby’s room was the same person they were talking about. Well, the thing that surprised them was that the said person is holding a book, a story book to be exact.

“And as always, they all live happily ever after. The end” The figure said a bit bored. She obviously knows that her friends are there but she didn’t care. She just wants to stop the baby from crying, and really, she did.

“The baby is clever. When I was on the part that the leader of the wind instrument died, the baby suddenly cried, that’s why I ended the story quick.” the figure that was holding the story book said and was looking at the baby. She then closed the book and caressed the baby’s face with her gentle hand.

“Gekikara.” The three said. They really can’t believe that the insane queen was there in front of them, caressing the baby’s face.

“Nice to see all of you again.” Gekikara gently removed her hand on the baby’s face. She stands up, went near the opened window where she entered Black’s place and was about to leave the room.   

“Wh-where are you going, Gekikara?” Shibuya was now a bit in her senses. She really thought that she’s dreaming because the queen was showing a motherly complex with the baby awhile ago. She thought that Sado was right, that the said girl was changing. Even if Gekikara gives her the creeps, she does miss the other queen.

“Y-yeah, you should have told us that you’re here since, well, we rarely have the time to be all together.” Torigoya stutters since she too cannot believe what she’s seeing right now, but she’s happy that they’re all there, except for their beloved leader which she really loved more than anything.

“Gekikara, you should stay.” Sado commanded Gekikara. She too, did miss the girl since she rarely sees her, especially now that they are busier than ever.

Gekikara was smiling. They really can’t she her face ‘cuz she was now facing them with her back since she was planning to go. She then decides to stay for a bit because she hasn’t heard her friend’s voice yet.

She walks to where her friends are and stopped when she was in front of Black. She handed her the book that she was reading awhile ago.

“I haven’t told the ending yet so I thought that you should be the one to finish the story.” Gekikara was looking at the story book she’d made herself. She smirked seeing the small blush on the other queen.

“I will.” Black said, now holding the book on her hands.

Gekikara nod and went to the window once again.

“You shouldn’t let the windows open ‘cuz a psychopathic freak might enter the baby’s room.” Gekikara said while leaving.

The three that were shocked was now a bit disappointed that the queen left them just like that. They went near Black to look at the book that was handed to her by Gekikara. They were now wearing a goofy smile on their face since it’s a picture book. The funny thing is that the title is cute.

“The Unforgettable Story of the Rapapa.” The three said in unison. Well, it really is cute because they really can’t believe that the queen created this book to begin with.

“Well, Gekikara’s really sweet if you know her that well.” Black said, giggling a bit.

“Well, if you asked me, I can’t wait to read this too.” Torigoya laugh a bit but she really wants to read the book.

“Me too! Let’s read it right now.” Shibuya replied. She really can’t contain her joy.

“Hey guys, keep it down since the baby’s sleeping.” Sado said in a soft voice.
(Well, she does have a point) The three quietly went outside the room when they’d sense that Black was giving a different feeling; a feeling she release when she’s with Gekikara. When if it’s just the two of them.

Black was still looking at the closed window, still recalling her friend’s departure over and over again.

She knew that her friend has forgiven her. Even if their conversation was short, mere action were enough to show what their emotions were…..

“Thank you Gekikara, my dearest friend……” She said while hugging the book closely to her heart…..




~END~


PS: I'll edit this out soon.... this is just a part of the list I said... I do hope that you liked it.... (even just a bit... :) )

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Offline TakahashiJ

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Hmmm. I love the TakaAcchan fanfic <3 . :x .
Black x Gekikara fanfic ? Sound pretty new to me.
And i like how Gekikara being so sweet over there ><.
Thanks for the updateeeeeeeeeeeeee !

Offline RenaChii

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I LOVE BLACK X Gekikara~!!  :luvluv1:

PLease continue~!  :kneelbow:

Thanks!  :on GJ:

Offline crazywota

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BLACK x GEKI ~ i ship them  :bow: :bow:

Geki is so cuteeeeee, i could imagine her doing that  :heart:

thankyuu for the fic, i really like it  :cow:

Offline kahem

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A sweet gekikara is interessing ^^ I like this pairing ;)

4am?!!! It's too early !!! You have to sleep more!

Offline bou-j525

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Just passing by, saying thank you for the update  :)

AND

I’m really stupid ‘cuz I only realized right now that I’m somewhat, umm… important too, well, in fact you all keep on supporting me… from the very beginning… :]  :thumbsup

Well... hope it will stay on your mind for a long time  :grin:

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so gekikara  can be sweet sometimes huh... :hehehe:

black x gekikara??  :glasses: sounds good... :shifty: :nya:

please :pleeease: post more fanfics... :kneelbow:

Offline pretend_2besome1

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Okay exams are over, time to comment.

It's not terrible, I found it funny that Acchan's mind goes all perverted  XD
I haven't watched Majisuka so I'm not exactly familiar with the fic. To read a story to a baby is one thing, but to create one is quite something. Not to mention it doesn't suit Gekikara's image  XD but it's still sweet.

Now that's the spirit, keep posting your fic!  :thumbsup


TakaSemaru  :heart:

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