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The exchange: chapter 6 : Preparation 11/29
« on: April 19, 2011, 01:17:31 AM »
I have an idea for my first long story. I hope you'll enjoy it ^^
So there is the prologue :

Prologue

Hi everybody! Me y name is kahem, I'll be the your narrator for this story. So our story takes place in a world where the gender doesn't matter. A man can love a women or a man and a women can love a man or a women. A couple of mans or of womens can have child by themself. In rich family, each member often is followed by a buttler or a maid. They have a strong link with their master, they can be their best friend, their confidant... But there is an old rule which says that a master can't love a servant. In this story we will follow the Takahashi family and the Maeda family.

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Sorry for the lame prologue and I'll try to write the first chapter soon.
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Re: The exchange (prologue)
« Reply #1 on: April 19, 2011, 02:17:02 AM »
....... i'm confused :?...., update?..........


... :prayers: i wish its a TAKACCHAN fiction!!!!!!!!! :w00t:....

heheheheheheheh......., plz update!!!!! :kneelbow:

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« Reply #2 on: April 19, 2011, 02:57:00 AM »
Sounds Good Already <!!!! Update Soon!!!!
I agree with  eSsIe21, Takaachan all the way!!!!  :wub: :wub: :twothumbs :twothumbs

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Re: The exchange (prologue)
« Reply #3 on: April 19, 2011, 10:20:09 PM »
This sounds pretty interesting!!

lol just like the 2 abovee Takaachan!!!!!

updatee soon!

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« Reply #4 on: April 19, 2011, 11:10:24 PM »
Yeah this is interesting... but I can't really tell more just by the prologue so... first chapter?  :grin:

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Re: The exchange (prologue)
« Reply #5 on: April 20, 2011, 05:36:18 PM »
TAKAACCHAN! First chapter please!

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« Reply #6 on: May 01, 2011, 12:42:17 AM »
There the first chapter and yes it's a Takacchan fic but it also would be others pairing hehehe^^


Chapter 1 : The meeting

Well, first I'll introduce the Takahashi family. They lead a Japanese toys company: the AKB Corporation. They are the best in Japan. Takahashi Ciel is the head of family and the president of the company. He has an S rank butler named Sebastian who also is the butler chief. Michaelis Sebastian is Ciel's confident and he always is loyal to his master but they are not friend. Ciel is married with Takahashi Elisabeth. She's a smart and pretty women but she is also very kind. She manages the financial part of the company. She is followed by Jones Paula an S rank maid. Paula is always happy and cheerful like a kid but can be really serious if she has to. She is Elisabeth's only friend indeed when she was kid the others rejected her because come from the Phantomhive family. This family is very mysterious, they are rich but nobody knows how, so people think they do illegal things. The Takahashi couple lives with 3 of their children. The eldest daughter: Takahashi Sayaka is a lawyer and works for the company. She practices aikido and looks like a strong women but she is not that strong inside. She can defeat a bunch of guys alone but she is weak if the fight is not physical. But her butler and also best friend, is always protecting her, if someone harms her they would deal with Miyazawa Sae. Sae is an A rank butler and she would become an S rank soon. She is pretty boyish and people often think she's a boy. Takahashi Minami is the middle daughter, everyone calls her Takamina. After her father she will be the next president of the company, so she works at the company as the vice president. She often fails but everyone likes her because she's funny and very kind. Her butler is named Oshima Yuko and she is a Z rank. No I'm joking, the ranks decrease until F but if would be a Z rank she would be that rank. Indeed, she is surely the worst butler ever. She is almost never serious and she always joking. Each evening she is with a different girl, such a playgirl. But if her master and also best friend, is in trouble she would always be by her side. Takamina doesn't need a super butler, she just need a super best friend like Yuko because of that the Takahashi family didn't fire Yuko. Finaly the younger daughter is Takahashi Jurina, she still is in high school and is a bit a rebel and never let anyone insult her or her family. When her siblings are in trouble she would always defend them. She is followed by Ishida Anna, a D rank maid. You can notice that she's ranking better than Yuko who is at the service of the Takahashi family longer than her. But it's Yuko, so is normal. Anna is Jurina best friend and like her master she is not someone who let the others harm her without a fight. The family lives in a big house with 48 rooms and a garden of 373 km2.

So, after the Takahashi family, there is the Maeda family. The head of family is named Maeda Megumi AKA Meetan. She is the kind of women you must not mess with or your life would become hell. But she's a good person just don't mess with her, SERIOUSLY DON'T MESS WITH HER. She has a model agency which the models are very popular. Her maid is very young but is an S rank maid. Indeed Oku Manami is the younger S rank maid, she's a genius. Maeda Yukari AKA Yukarin is Meetan's wife and a chef in a restaurant 4 etoiles. She is a kind and calm person. She is also followed by a S rank maid: Sato Amina. She has a cute voice but can be scared sometime. You can wonder why the couple has only 2 children because when the both of them are alone they... Well I'll let you imagine... Whatever, they have 2 children Maeda Atsuko and Maeda Mayu. The first inherited of the Yukarin’s kindness whereas the second inherited a bit of the Meetan’s evil side. You can notice that this family likes the nicknames, so Atsuko's one is Acchan. She studies in a medecine college in order to become a doctor. Her maid, Kojima Haruna is an A rank she'll become an S rank soon. Even if she's an airheaded, she is really a good maid. Mayuyu is the Mayu's nickname, she is in high school, the same that Jurina but we'll talk about later. Mayuyu is very smart and like I said before she has a little evil side but she's not a bad person. Her maid Hirajima Natsumi AKA Nacchan is a bit older than her and is like another big sister for her she's always taking care of Mayuyu. She's a rank B. They all live in a huge cast, yeah a cast like in fairy tales, the couple Maeda is really special.

So, now you know a bit better those 2 families let's start our story.

Takamina is in a night party in a college where Yuko brought her. She is not very at ease with all those people who are drinking alcohol, vomiting and making out.

"I think I'll go home." She says.

"Oh come on, we just arrived." Yuko protests with a girl in an arm and a glass of scotch in the other hand.

"You can stay if you want. I'll go home alone."

"Ok, see you later at home." Yuko says joyfully.

Takamina just shakes her head and leaves. When she is walking outside there are 2 persons walking in front of her. The first is a girl, she seems be a student. The second is a man in the thirties. He walks just behind the girl. 'What is he doing in a college party? I'm sure he's not a student.' She thinks. She can talk but she isn't a student either and she is there because Yuko's new conquest is a student of this college. Then the man touches the student's ass and quickly walks away on the left. The girl stops and turns around. Takamina was just behind them, so now she is just behind the other girl. She slaps Takamina angrily.

"Pervert!" She shouts. Takamina touches her cheeks which just be slapped.

"Wait you're wrong I'..." Takamina tries to defend herself.

"Don't try to make excuse! I hate the perverts like you who attacks young girl!" The student cuts.

"But I..." This time she is cut by another slap. Then the girl walks away.

"What was that?! I even couldn't explain myself! That girl was fool!" She shouts as the people who passing near her looks at her like she is fool. She shouldn’t blame the student  since she's the victim after all.

The day after


Takamina wakes up, dresses up and goes down to the dining room in order to eat her breakfast. Elisabeth is sitting at the table with Paula standing up near her. Takamina joins her mother at the table and sits down.

"Good Morning Minami. So, where did Yuko bring you this time?" Elisabeth asks.

"Morning mom. In a college, it was worst than night clubs, students are really fool." Takamina answers.

Elisabeth chucks. "It's your butler and when we asked if you want to change, you said 'no', so don't complain."

"I know, I'll change her for nothing in the world. By the way, where is her?"

"She's still sleeping, she came back at 2am." Paula answers.

"Oh so. And where are the others." Takamina is surprise that they are just 2 at the table.

"Sayaka went to work and Jurina to school with Anna. It pretty late you know. And I'm waiting for your father who is calling someone. I think he almost finishes." The other women said.

The young girl looks at her watch. "Oh shit, I'm late!!! I have to go mom see you later."

"You don't have to go work today." Ciel's voice stops her.

"Hein? Why?" Minami is confused.

"Because you have to meet someone."

"Who?"

"Your fiancee."

"What?!!!!!!" She exclaims.

"I had a friend at the special high school where I was but after high school I didn't meet her again. And yesterday I met her at her wife's restaurant. We talked and she also has a daughter who is 20 like you, so we decided we'll marry both of you." Ciel explains.

"What?!!!!" The girl exclaims again.

"Her name is Atsuko, she's studying in order to become doctor and I'm sure you'll get along."

"I don't care who she is. I won't marry her or even meet her." Takamina says firmly.

"It's already decided that you'll meet her at her mother's restaurant in 2 hours. You have to go, if you still want become the next president of the company."

"It's not fair why should I marry a girl who I don't even know in order to succeed you? Mom says something!" The young searches for her mother help.

"Don't be like that Minami, I'm sure she's a nice girl and arranged marriage is not that bad. My marriage with your father was also arranged." Elisabeth smiles at her daughter.

“It’s not the same you and dad know each other since childhood and it was the love at the first sight.”

“Yeah, it’s true. Come on, just go meet her and we’ll talk about later.”

“Ok.” Minami sighed.

“Good job, Lizzy.” Ciel kiss her wife. “Minami wake your butler up and go to the meeting.”

“Yes, dad.”

“Good, Sebastian, it’s an order, prepare her car since her butler can’t do it.” Ciel orders.

“Yes, my lord.” The butler answers. It’s always like that Ciel orders with “it’s an order” and Sebastian agrees with “yes my lord”, God knows why.

Takamina walks in a corridor and meet Sae.

“Oh, Sae morning! Why are you wearing the same clothes than yesterday? Don’t tell me, like Yuko, you slept at a girl’s place?”

“Euh, yeah.” The butler answers.

“Oh no, I don’t want Sayaka blame me because you start to act like Yuko.”

“Ah don’t worry, I don’t do that often.”

“Whew. I’ll wake Yuko up see ya.” Takamina continues her way to Yuko’s room. She enters without knock. She removes the sheet but the other girl doesn’t seem to move. So, she decides to grab her by the shoulders and shake her.

“Yuko!!!!! Wake up!!!”

The squirrel began to open her eyes. “Mou Takamina what’s up? It’s too early.”

“We have a big problem. My dad decided to marry me to his friend’s daughter and if I refuse I wouldn’t succeed him as president. I’ll meet her in a restaurant, so hurry up and dress up.” Takamina explains.

“Indeed it’s a big problem. By the way, you went home without problem yesterday?” Yuko asks.

“Yeah but I just met a fool student who slapped me because she thought I molested her.” Yuko explodes of laugh. “It’s not funny, it’s was hurt. And you how it was with the girl.”

“I can tell you one thing: medicine student know how to partying.” Yuko winked. “So how will we deal with our problem?”

“Hum, I want to be the next president but I don’t want to marry a girl I don’t know.” She thinks during a moment and… “I know! Come here.” Yuko approaches her and she whispers.

At Maeda Castle

“I would have a meeting with who?!!!” Acchan exclaims.

“Like I said, you’ll go to your mother’s restaurant to meet your wife-to-be. And if you don’t, I’ll stop paying for your studying.” Meetan answers with a smile.

“No way!!!!! Yu-mama help me.”

“Try just to know her and maybe you would like her. By the way, I won’t be at the restaurant today because I’ll buy new ingredients.” Yukarin says as she hugs Meetan then the other girl kisses her.

“I don’t know why I try to get her help since they always agreed with each others.” Acchan sighed.

In Haruna’s car

Haruna is driving as she talks with Atsuko.

“Your mother really didn’t let you chose.” The driver says.

“Why have I only problem. There was what happened yesterday and now the arranged marriage.” Then she says: “I have a plan.”

At the restaurant

Acchan and Kojiharu are waiting at a table when they see 2 persons enter. The both of them are not very tall, one of them is wearing a black little ribbon and the other in a way looks like a squirrel. Then when they approach…

“YOU!!!!”
“YOU!!!!”

TBC

So, how was that?
« Last Edit: July 12, 2011, 12:27:01 AM by kahem »

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Re: The exchange : UPDATE CHAPTER 1
« Reply #7 on: May 01, 2011, 09:34:33 AM »
this is the best story!!!!.... :thumbsup :on GJ:... love the pairings!!!!! (especially takacchan!!!)


.. plz... continue writing this story!!!!!!!! :kneelbow:  i'm counting on you!!!!!!!! :farofflook:




...heheheheh!!!!! :luvluv1:


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« Reply #8 on: May 01, 2011, 09:37:33 AM »
Weeew that was way better than what I expected.

I really like the elaborate famjam :)

Please update soon!

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« Reply #9 on: May 02, 2011, 02:39:30 PM »
LOLOL. CIEL AND SEBESTAIN! KUROSHITSUJI ! OMG :D .
IM SO LOOKING FORWARDDDDDDDD.
WEEHOO TAKAACCHAN ? XD

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« Reply #10 on: May 06, 2011, 11:47:31 AM »
i love the story...!! :luvluv1:

i like their names!! :ding: :luvluv2:

i like the pairings  too!!

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Then the man touches the student's ass and quickly walks away on the left. The girl stops and turns around. Takamina was just behind them, so now she is just behind the other girl. She slaps Takamina angrily.

"Pervert!" She shouts. Takamina touches her cheeks which just be slapped.

"Wait you're wrong I'..." Takamina tries to defend herself.

"Don't try to make excuse! I hate the perverts like you who attacks young girl!" The student cuts.

"But I..." This time she is cut by another slap. Then the girl walks away.

"What was that?! I even couldn't explain myself! That girl was fool!" She shouts as the people who passing near her looks at her like she is fool. She shouldn’t blame the student  since she's the victim after all.

i feel bad for takamina.. :on lol:

please update soon.. :farofflook: :kneelbow:

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Re: The exchange : UPDATE CHAPTER 1
« Reply #11 on: May 24, 2011, 11:16:50 PM »
@eSsIe21: Thx I think is one of my best story too but not the best story ^^

@Arakawa: Thx ^^ yeah family sometime is really boring xD

@TakahashiJ: Yep I took their name because I like the characters ^^ and thx for reading it

khryz0421: Thx I'm glad you like it. I  also felt bad for Takamina but it was so funny and this scene is important for the chapter 2


So there is the chapter 2 I'm sorry for the delay I'm really slow for writing lol I finished fryday but I was in the staff for a manga convention last week end, I just slept 1 hour, so I didn't have the time lol This chapter was 100% written on the metro lol


Chapter 2 : The plans
"You!" 2 voices shout at the same time.

"You know each other?" Yuko asks confused. On Haruna's face you can read the same question.

"It's the pervert of yesterday!" Acchan exclaims.

"It's the fool!" Takamina exclaims at her turn.

"Ah." Yuko and Haruna say.

"What are you doing here? In this restaurant we don't accept pervert like you." Acchan asks.

"I'm Takahashi Minami, there is my butler Oshima Yuko and we are here to mee~" Yuko is cut by Takamina.

"Who are you to say who can be here or not?"

'Wait, they are who we have to meet?' Acchan thinks. "It's m~her mother’s restaurant!"

"I'm Maeda Atsuko and there is my maid Kojima Haruna." Haruna says. Yuko and Takamina looks at each other with a look which says "It's her."

I assume you are a bit even very confused. Why did Yuko said her name is Takahashi Minami and Takamina's one is Oshima Yuko? And why did Haruna do the same with Acchan? We have to come back a bit in the pass in order to understand.

2 hours ago in Yuko's room

"We'll exchange our identity." Takamina said.

"I don't get how it would help us." Yuko seemed confused.

"It's simple, you become me, you act like a playgirl as usual, the girl won't like you and will cancel the wedding."

"Oh very smart."

"I know."

This was for Takamina and Yuko. Now let's see for Acchan and Haruna.

In Haruna's car

"Let's exchange our identity." Acchan said.

"What?" Haruna exclaimed as she curbed in the middle of the road luckily there was nobody since they were still on the Maeda's property. Haruna restarted the motor.

"WOW you shouldn't do that."

"It's your fault you startled me with you idea! And would you exchange our identity?"

"Ah yeah sorry. Since you know how to manipulate people who love you, you will make the girl fall for you, play with her and let her think you could be together. Finally you'll show up with someone else who will be your fake lover. Afterward she would never see you again and I'll be free." Indeed Haruna is a real beauty and she often manipulates people who fall for her.

"There is no problem with but it's rare that you would be so cruel toward someone. And how would we do if the girl would always be with me?"

"It's just I don’t want to marry to someone I didn't chose. And don't worry about the girl. You have just to say that during the time you know her you were with several people."

"I think it could work."

Ok, it seems that Acchan also a little bit inherited of the Meetan's evil side. But it’s always less than Mayuyu or even Meetan. So, let's come back to our story.

"Nyan Nyan!" Yuko shouts as she hugs Haruna.

'It was fast!' Acchan and Haruna think.

'I hope Yuko knows what she is doing.' Takamina think.

"Nyan Nyan? What is that?" Haruna asks.

"It's my nickname for you. I think it suits you, it's cute like you." Yuko answers.

"Ah thank you but you are too close." Haruna pushes the squirrel away.

"It seems the master is a pervert like her butler." Acchan says.

"I'm not a pervert! Yesterday you slapped me without even let me explain myself." Takamina shouts.

"I don't need pervert's fake excuse."

"Arghhhhh! I have enough. Yu~Minami let's go." Takamina grabs Yuko hand and leave.

In Yuko's car

"Why did you jump on her?" Takamina asks.

"You told me to act like usual and usually when I see beautiful girls I can't help but hug them. But don't worry I'll make her hate me like almost all my ex." Yuko answers.

"Fine I hope you what you do."

"Leave it to me." Yuko winked.

~ai wa hane wo ushinatta tobenai tori~

Takamina picks up her phone.

"Moshi moshi. Hi... Fine and you?... Lunch? Ok... See you later." She hangs up. "Yuko, we'll have katsudon for lunch."

In Yukarin's restaurant


"The master is really weird. You can't marry that girl." Haruna says.

"Yeah and her butler is big pervert!" Acchan adds.

"The butler is the girl who molested you. The world is little."

~cherry cherry boy cherry cherry girl~

Acchan's phone is ringing.

"Moshi moshi... Oh Tomochin what's up?... Ok where?... I'm waiting."

"What happen?" Haruna asks.

"Tomochin want to eat with me and Mariko. They will come here."

"Ok."

30 minutes later

2 person enter to the restaurant and sat at Acchan and Haruna's table.

"Hi, Mariko! Tomochin! By the way, how is Tomoomi?" Acchan asked.

"It's because of her if I have to talk to you." Tomochin says.

So Shinoda Mariko is a model in Meetan's agency, she's the second best model in the agency and she is a good friend of Acchan and Haruna. Itano Tomomo AKA Tomochin knows Acchan and Haruna since their childhood. She is a stylist and often works with models from Maeda agency. She's probably the youngest stylist of Japan. But she's really good at fashion. She's married, yep she's only 20 but she already has a wife. Her name is Kasai Tomomi AKA Tomoomi, she's 20 too. She's a writter and her books are really popular. Both of them kept their maiden name since they have the same first name. They are a famous couple, they are known as 'the fresh artistic pair'. There is a lot gossip about them. Some say that they would not be together for a long time because they were just 18 when they married. Other says that they cheat on each other all the time. But those gossips are completely wrong, the couple never stopped to love each other passionately.

"I need to live at one of your house for a few days because we had a fight and she throw me out."

Or not. We will talk about it again later.

"What?!!!" The others exclaim.

"And what do you mean by 'a few day'?" Mariko asks.

"I don't know 3 days, one week, or two weeks. The time she needs to calm down."

"It's strange, both of you are always sweet with each other. It was really cute." Acchan says.

"I know! Why did my Tomo do that to me? She said that I can't understand what she feels." Tomochin's head drops on the table. She's desperate.

"I'm sure it's not that bad. You should call her. She probably already calmed down." Acchan says.

"You think? I will try." Tomochin take her phone. *tou… tou… tou…* "Hi honey it's me, I..." "She hanged up." Tomochin's head drops again on the table. "What can I do?"

"Wow it'seems it's really bad. But you can't come in my house I don't think my cousin would let you stay." Mariko says.

"You can come at mine it's big and I don't think my parents would mind it." Acchan says.

"Thank you, I hope Tomoomi would not be mad at me for a long time." Tomochin sighed.

In another restaurant


A long hair girl with sunglass and a white dress waits at a table. Then she saw the person she was waiting.

"Minami here." She waves at the girl.

"Ray!" Takamina sat at Ray's table.

Ray is the number one model of Japan and she's in Maeda agency. She is Mariko cousin. She was born in America but she come live with Mariko at 7 because her parents died in a car accident. When they were 20, Ray and Mariko left their house in order to become model and now they live together.

"Why did you bring her too?" Ray points Yuko.

"Oh" Yuko protests.

"She's my butler and my best friend why wouldn't I bring her?" Yuko tongues at Ray.
Ray likes Takamina and tried many time to make Takamina her girlfriend. But it seems the other doesn’t share the same feelings, for her Ray is just a good friend.

TBC
« Last Edit: July 12, 2011, 12:27:32 AM by kahem »

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Re: The exchange : UPDATE CHAPTER 2
« Reply #12 on: May 25, 2011, 02:38:11 AM »
Ohh this is getting really interesting now... Well, not that it wasn't before but... yeah, you know what I mean.. I hope  :nervous YOUR STORY IS GREAT. Here it is, very clear :D
I like they identity exchange XD It means only one thing: Drama to come XD
Now I kinda have an idea of what is going to happen, but I'm glad you included TomoTomo, Mariko and even RAY in the story  :twothumbs
Waiting for the next chapter  :grin:

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« Reply #13 on: May 25, 2011, 10:45:29 AM »
Hot damn this is getting elaborate!
Mariko and Ray!
May I ask where miichan is? Lol

Hope you update soon :)

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« Reply #14 on: May 28, 2011, 03:17:18 PM »
wonder what happen to Tomo~mi-chan!  :panic:
update soon!!!!
thank you for a great story!  :D :D :D

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« Reply #15 on: May 31, 2011, 11:21:13 PM »
@bou-j525: Thx but I think you will wait the chap 5 for the drama ^^'

@Arakawa: For Miichan is also for chap 5 ^^ thank you

@aoi_sora: ahah what happened to Chiyuu? suspens lol thx for reading


So there is the chapter 3


Chapter 3 : A new friendship


At Majisuka high school


Majisuka high school is a special school for students from rich family and their butler. It's a huge school with a huge garden. There are master classes and servant classes. The masters learn how to become on the top of society and the butlers and maid learn how to serve their master. It's in that kind of school butler rank are assigned and when the masters graduate, it's the Butler Association which do it. Jurina and Mayuyu attempt to this school but they didn't know each other at last not yet. Nobody wanted or dared approach Jurina and they all moved their desk away from her. People are afraid of her because she's the worst student of the school and she seems like a delinquent. But she didn't care about what the other can think of her. Only Anna is with her when it's break time. Mayuyu is the most popular girl in first year because she's very cute and smart but she's a lone wolf type. She never talked with anyone and she only see her maid during her break time. People find her dark side is cool.

In Jurina's classroom

As usual Jurina was sitting at her place as she slept. Between her desk and the other desk there was a big nothing. The others were talking as they waiting the teacher. Then the head teacher and their teacher entered with 3 persons. The head teacher saw Jurina sleeping and walked towards her. Once arrived, he cleared his voice.

"Takahashi-san is not the time for a nap!!!"

"Hein? What? The school is finished?"

"No. It just began. Whatever listen, I'll make an annoucement."

The others were whispering.

"This girl is hopeless."
"She's in trouble again."
"If we are near we could be in trouble too."

"So today, you will have 2 new classmates. First there is Maeda Mayu who already is in the school but since in this class you are only 15 I decided to transfer her here." The old man said. The students whispered again.

"Oh my god it's Maeda Mayu the most popular first year."
"She's so cute."
"Her dark look is so cool."

'Who is that?' Jurina thought.

"And here there is a new student: Yagami Kumi and her maid Hiramatsu Kanako. So, I'll let those 2 to your professor and I'll bring Hiramatsu-san to her class. Then Yamada-sensei I leave it to you." The head teacher left the room with the maid.

'Why the principal did the head come in person for those two?" Jurina wondered.

"So, Maeda-san, please write your name on the black board and introduce you." The teacher said.

Mayuyu finished writing her name.

"I'm Maeda Mayu."

"Euh well, Yagami-san is your turn."

"My name is Yagami Kumi, nice to meet you. Please since now take care of me." Kumi said.

"Mayu is cute but the new student too. We are really lucky." Some students whispered.

"Well now that the introduction is done, Maeda-san, you can choose a place." Everybody except Jurina waved at her in order to be chosen. But Mayuyu just take a place alone at the back of the room. "Well, Yagami-san, since you're new, you'll choose someone to show you around and sit next to this person." Everyone except Jurina was waving again. Then Kumi pointed Jurina at everybody surprise especially Jurina. "Are you sure? I don't think it's a good idea. You can choose someone else if you want." The teacher tried to change Kumi's mind.

"No, it's her who I choose." Kumi said.

"Euh well, Takahashi-san at lunch break you will be Yagami-san's guide."

"Euh ok." Jurina said.

"So, please Yagami-san take a desk and a chair and sit near Takahashi-san."

"Why did she choose that delinquent? We are a best choice." Some student whispered.

Lunch time

Kumi turned towards Jurina. "I already introduced myself, now it's your turn."

"Ah yeah, my name is Takahashi Jurina." Jurina said.

"Nice to meet you Takahashi-san."

"Euh just call me Jurina. I don't like formalities."

"Ok but you have to call me Kumi." Kumi smiled.

"Ok, Kumi."

"So, Jurina-chan, you have to show me the school." Kumi said exciting.

"Yeah but before I have to eat. I'll wait my maid and go to the dinner room."

"Can I go with you? Like that you can show me the dinner room first."

"If you want." Jurina answered. Then 2 persons entered in the room.

"Jurina, sorry I'm a bit late but today I have to show the school to a new maid." Anna said.

"Don't for that. I have to do the same with her too." Jurina pointed Kumi.

"Oh Kanako, it seems you also have a guide." Kumi said.

"Yes, Kumi-sama." Kanako said.

"It seems I have the master and you the maid, Anna. Well let's eat."

After eating Jurina and Anna showed the school to Kumi and Kanako before they returned in classroom. After the school, Kumi, Kanako, Jurina and Anna left the school together. It seemed they were getting along.

Mayuyu was alone waiting for Naachan in a part of the garden.
Suddenly she was surrounded by 15 persons wearing a mask.

"Well well, who is here alone? Maeda Mayu isn't she? Today you'll pay for your arrogance." One of the guys said.

"Oh 15 vs 1, really brave." Mayuyu clapped.

"Shut up! Catch her!" The guy ordered. The others started to attack her but Mayuyu knew how to fight, so she can handle it. But they were too much and a girl was about to punch her by behind. At the same time, Jurina appeared and kicked the girl. Mayuyu and Jurina get in position back to back and fought. They handled the situation very well until Jurina was hold by several guys and Mayuyu can't help her because she had to deal with 5 persons at the same time. Then Anna joined them, she helped Jurina and and now they were 3. Kumi and Kanako were looking away on the side. The group of three defeated the other group.

“Let’s withdraw, I don’t care if I’m not accepted in the club. They are too strong.” One of them said and the others agreed. Then the aggressor group ran away.

“Thank you for the help. You are strong.” Mayuyu said.

“You’re welcome and you’re strong too.” Jurina said.

“I’m Maeda Mayu. Nice to meet you.” Mayu present her hand to Jurina. And Jurina shake her hand.

“Same here. I’m Takahashi Jurina.”

“I thought there was only boring people in that school. But I was wrong there is also interesting people like you. At first I thought you were an ijime because your desk is away from other but in fact it seems they are scared of you.”

“And I thought people of the school were all snobbish especially you but I was wrong. You seem really nice. I think is the beginning of a great friendship.”

“I agree.”

“*cough cough* Don’t forget me.” Anna said.

“Ah yeah sorry Anna. Mayu, there is my maid Ishida Anna.” Jurina introduced her maid.

“Well, nice to meet you Anna. You are also strong.”

“Thank you. Nice to meet you too.”

“Oi! Jurina-chan! Anna-chan! It was a great fight! Both of you are awesome!” Kumi shouted. Suddenly, a huge tree was about to fall and Anna was just underneath. Then Kumi rushed towards her, grabbed her by the waist and pushed the tree away. Their gaze met and there was a few seconds of silent before Anna interrupted it.

"Thank you."

“How did you do that?" Jurina asked. Everybody was amazed even Kumi.

"I I don't know." Kumi let go Anna and looked at her hands still amazed. Kanako came back to quickly reality.

"It's probably an adrenalin rush, Kumi-sama."

"Probably." Kumi said.

"But it' strange anyway. Yagami Kumi and Hiramatsu Kanako, right? I'm sure I already heard those name. But where?" Mayuyu said as both new students seemed a bit panicked.

"Oi kids! Are you alright?" A man called them and approached them.  "I'm the gardener, I came when I heard the noise and I had to cut this tree which is rotten." He said.

"Everybody is fine but it was close.” Jurina said.

“I’m released. Well I have to go because the head teacher wants to see me. Good bye.” He left the group.

“Mayuyu!” A girl shouted and ran towards Mayuyu. “Sorry for being late but the teacher wanted to talk with me. But why does your face bleed?” The girl was panicked.

“It was nothing just a fight and those people help me and became my friends, don’t worry Nacchan.” Mayuyu said.

“Oh my god Mayuyu! We have to go to the infirmary!” Nacchan said.

“But Nacchan.”

“No buts. We’ll go. But before I’ll thank your new friends.” Nacchan said firmly.“I’m really thankful for helping my master. My name is Hirajima Natsumi.”

“My name is Takahashi Jurina.”

“I’m Ishida Anna, her maid.”

“I’m Yagami Kumi and there is my maid, Hiramatsu Kanako.”

“Nice to meet all of you. So, if tell me what happened.” Nacchan said. They told her the entire story.

“Who were those people? Who did dare to touch my Mayuyu?!” It seems Nacchan is overprotective toward Mayuyu.

“I don’t know but they said something about a club, right?” Jurina said.

“They are probably the newbie of the popular club. They had the badge on them.” Mayuyu said. What is the popular club? I know it’s a name completely *bip*. It’s a club with the most popular students and they lead the school.

“The other day, you refused to enter in the club. They probably want to make you pay for that. I’ll kill them.” Nacchan said.

“Don’t worry Nacchan, I’ll fight with them whenever they want.”

“Yeah yeah. For now we’ll just go to the infirmary.”

At the infirmary

Nacchan opened the door. “There is somebody here?”

“Yes, enter. What happen?” A woman said.

“My master is hurt. I’ll let you take of her, I’ll bring the car.” Nacchan said and left.

“I’m Kashiwagi Yuki the school doctor. Please sit on the bed like that I could examine you.” Yuki said. Mayuyu was frozen. She was looking at the most beautiful woman she never saw. “Euh eh oh are you listening? What is your name by the way?”

“Gorgeous…”

“Gorgeous? Where did the name come from?”

“Ah name? Last name: Watanabe. First name: Mayu.” Mayuyu said with a cyborg voice.

“So, Watanabe Mayu-chan, please sit on the bed.” Once Mayuyu sat, Yuki began to examine her and Mayuyu began to blush. “So, what happened?”

“A fi fi fight.” Mayuyu sputtered.

“Oh I see, I thought this school was too calm, I didn’t have work and I felt a bit lonely but now you are here.” Mayuyu became reder and reder.

“Wouah you’re a bit hot. Maybe you have a fever.”

At AKB Coporation

Jurina go to the family company almost every day after school since 3 months. Why? You'll know soon.

"Good afternoon, Jurina-chan. Did you come to help again?" The receptionist asked.

"Good afternoon. Yes I'll help again." Jurina answered.

"Go see your parents."

"I'll."

First she went to see her mother.

"Hi mom."

"Oh Jurina. Come help again?"

"Yep. I'll go see dad. See you later."

Then she went to see her father.

"Dad, I'm here."

"Jurina you come to help?" Jurina nodded. "Nice timing. The administrative department has a lot of work.”

“Ok, I’ll go then. Bye.”

At the administrative department

“Oh Jurina-chan. Nice timing, come here and help me.” The chief of the administrative department said.

“Of course, Rena-chan.”

Matsui Rena is the chief of the administrative department and why Jurina is here. Indeed she is in love with her. 3 months ago she went to the company because Takamina promised to go to the cinema with her after work. She lost her way and went to Rena’s office. She fell for her at the first sigh.

At the head teacher’s office

The head teacher was calling someone. “Don’t worry your daughter will be fine… ok bye.”

The gardener entered. “Takahashi, Maeda and what is the name you invented? Ah yeah Yagami. It seems you want to recreate the group.” He said.

“Exactly.”

TBC
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Offline RenaChii

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Re: The exchange : UPDATE CHAPTER 2
« Reply #16 on: June 01, 2011, 12:22:07 AM »


“I’m Kashiwagi Yuki the school doctor. Please sit on the bed like that I could examine you.” Yuki said. Mayuyu was frozen. She was looking at the most beautiful woman she never saw. “Euh eh oh are you listening? What is your name by the way?”

“Gorgeous…”

“Gorgeous? Where did the name come from?”

“Ah name? Last name: Watanabe. First name: Mayu.” Mayuyu said with a cyborg voice.

“So, Watanabe Mayu-chan, please sit on the bed.” Once Mayuyu sat, Yuki began to examine her and Mayuyu began to blush. “So, what happened?”

“A fi fi fight.” Mayuyu sputtered.

“Oh I see, I thought this school was too calm, I didn’t have work and I felt a bit lonely but now you are here.” Mayuyu became reder and reder.

“Wouah you’re a bit hot. Maybe you have a fever.”



At the administrative department

“Oh Jurina-chan. Nice timing, come here and help me.” The chief of the administrative department said.

“Of course, Rena-chan.”

Matsui Rena is the chief of the administrative department and why Jurina is here. Indeed she is in love with her. 3 months ago she went to the company because Takamina promised to go to the cinema with her after work. She lost her way and went to Rena’s office. She fell for her at the first sigh.



Finally my two favorite couple~  :mon inluv:

Please update soon~  :mon innocent:

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Re: The exchange Takacchan and many others : UPDATE CHAPTER 3
« Reply #17 on: June 01, 2011, 04:25:13 AM »
Men-Dol and Majisuka Gakuen at the same place. This should be interesting. And my lovely pairing (MaYuki and W Matsui) is in the story too. Thumbs up for you.  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

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Re: The exchange Takacchan and many others : UPDATE CHAPTER 3
« Reply #18 on: June 01, 2011, 09:53:31 AM »
at first i thought this is Mayuyu X Jurina  :cry:
but when the school doctor appears...  :cow: :cow: :cow: :cow:
yey!!!!! jumpin' up and down!
Cyborg Mayuyu so cute!!!!
MaYuki and there's WMatsui too!  :w00t:
Kumi X Anna X Kanako love triangle????
Kumi-sama and Maid Kanako from mousou deka  :heart: :heart: :heart:
update soon!  :bow: :bow: :bow:

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Re: The exchange Takacchan and many others : UPDATE CHAPTER 3
« Reply #19 on: June 01, 2011, 11:12:18 AM »
whohohO!!! mayuki is here~!!  :inlove: :inlove:

interesting story!  :twothumbs

please update soon^^

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