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« Reply #280 on: August 03, 2011, 01:30:58 PM »
Gah!!! I'm so happy takamina and acchan are married now!!!  :luvluv1:

sorry if the first night scene not that good~~  :kneelbow:  i've just write it before taking a nap... LOL...  :on lol:

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« Reply #281 on: August 03, 2011, 02:10:26 PM »
WHAT?   :huhuh

r u crazy? everything is great.. :twothumbs

 thank u...! :D

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« Reply #282 on: August 03, 2011, 02:12:30 PM »
Oh Yuko :rofl:
FInally Together!!!!!!!!!! :inlove: :grin:
what going to happen next?!
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« Reply #283 on: August 03, 2011, 05:16:41 PM »
I finally finish reading all your chapters that you updated so far
They finally got married yay  :cathappy:
Your story is wonderful
Can't wait for next chapter Update soon
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« Reply #284 on: August 03, 2011, 08:24:15 PM »
They are married yeah!!!!!!!

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« Reply #285 on: August 04, 2011, 04:03:20 AM »
Like finally they are married but how about KojiYuu... :cry: ...


They ought to be the first pair but never mind Atsumina is just so loving too... :wub:
Update soon.. :lol:

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« Reply #286 on: August 04, 2011, 11:04:51 AM »
And it revealed the naked Acchan behind the robe. :]]]

It was soooo cute of Yuko wanting to touch Haruna's ears. (And I'm here thinking some other perverted things) haha. Ear fetish of Yuko. xD

Now I'm willing to know what's Haruna reaction about the Takacchan's wedding and the depressed Yuko. :[
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« Reply #287 on: August 04, 2011, 11:09:39 AM »
 i'll post the next one in hour..!  :)

if you don't mind to wait..! :cathappy:

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« Reply #288 on: August 04, 2011, 11:40:40 AM »
absolutely not!  XD
waiting~  :cow:

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« Reply #289 on: August 04, 2011, 12:28:20 PM »
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JAPAN 21:00

yuko and nyan nyan got home.. 
yuko haven't say a word all the way home and haven't try to do skinship..(which is weird to nyan nyan)
nyan nyan sighs and asks  yuko are you okay? 
yuko pouts and murmures yes..
really? beacause it doesn't seem so! 
yes nyan nyan..!yuko says with a depressive aura and walking to the kitchen 
yuko number 1: i can't believe those two stole my dream!
yuko number 2:  ahhhhh i hate you! why you didn't propose earlier? 
yuko number 3: well is not a good idea to marry,we are busy with our work!
normal yuko: it was you,the one who made doubt right? 
yuko number 3: don't know what you're talking about! 
yuko number 1: it's not going to save you pretend that you don't know nothing!
yuko number 2: let's put her some tape to shut her up..!
Yuko! Yuko! nyan nyan shouts interrupting yuko's thoughts 
what is it nyan nyan?
please can you pass me a towel..? nyan nyan says while she's in the tub 
ok! yuko answers
normal yuko: you're safe thanks to my angel but "I'LL BE WATCHING YOU!  NEAGTIVE YUKO...!"
(yuko number 1 and 2 stuck their tongues out to yuko number 3)
yuko eneters to the bathroom and sees nyan nyan standing there in "red  lingerie"
yuko number 1: OH MY GODDESS! 
yuko number 2: NOSEBLEED...!
yuko number 3: hmmm hhmmm (normal yuko,yuko number 1 and 2 shouts at the same time "GREAT IDEA ABOUT TAPING HER MOUTH hahaha")
so yuko i heard that you were depressive..! now you're going to tell me why? nyan nyan asks with a seductive tone of voice and  touching yuko's body with her fingers 
ny-an ny-an.. yuko says totally red and stuttering 
now you're going to tell me or what?nyan nyan says while pushes yuko against the door and starts stripping her..! 
yuko shouts nyan nyan..!
MEANWHILE : LAS VEGAS 
is the next day..
takamina wakes up earlier she stares acchan sleeping and can't help murmure
"wow!  is a wonderful feeling! YES who ever thought that word would give me so much joy and it's all because of you MAEDA ATSUKO now i know that i don't want to be apart from you ever again" 
acchan wakes up hearing takamina's words which makes her heart beat fast
acchan climbs on top of takamina and give her a soft peck on the lips,acchan takes takamina's hand and says you see this ring takahashi minami? this ring means " "THAT YOU'RE MINE AND I'M YOURS"
nobody else can't come above! takamina says 
yes! nobady else can't come above...! acchan replies while hugging takamina and kiss her on her neck 
NO WAY! ANOTHER ROUND..! takamina says complaining 
I TOLD YOU..!  hahaha acchan says smiling 
MEANWHILE 
mayu it's been spending everyday taking care of yuki at the hospital..
ahhh i'm tired and boring of being here, i wanna go home ..! yuki says complaining 
yuki calm down! it's not that bad being here! mayu answers smiling 
yeah you say it because you don't know how is like! yuki replies pouting
mayu jumps on top of yuki and starts kissing,tickling and biting yuki's stomach ...
mayu what are you doing? haahahha stop hahahah 
no, you said that you were boring so i will do this till you get tired.! hahahaha
mayu no hahaha...! 
MEANWHILE 
nyan nyan and yuko were lying on the floor all sweat and tired..!
"THAT WAS ONE OF BESTS" yuko shouts happy
so that was it? you were jealous because acchan and takamina will marry or they married.. nyan nyan says laughing..
what? it's not fun nyan nyan! i wanted to be the first one! 
nyan nyan takes the towel and gets up...! 
where are you going nyan nyan? are you mad? i will shut up so come back! yuko shouts while looking at nyan nyan
nyan nyan says aha! found it..!
what did you find nyan nyan? 
nyan nyan gets back to yuko and show her a book with maps of the world..
what is it nyan nyan? 
close your eyes and poit somewhere..! nyan nyan says wiking 
yuko does what she was told and moves her finger around the map then stop and opens her eyes..! 
nyan nyan reads the country "CANADA" i like it! 
what is that mean? yuko asks looking at nyan nyan serious 
well yuko that's the place were we are going marry..! nyan nyan answers smiling 
what? really? yuko asks with shiny eyes and kissing nyan nyan
OSHIMA YUKO WOULD YOU MARRY ME? 
Yes, nyan nayn of course..!
sorry i know you guys wanted to know about the other reaction about atsumina's wedding but i had this idea and i had to use it..! it's 5:00 am and i'm tired

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« Reply #290 on: August 04, 2011, 12:46:07 PM »
KojiYuu are getting marry too~~~  :inlove:  :deco:

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« Reply #291 on: August 04, 2011, 03:28:14 PM »
Go to sleep and once you've regain you strength and brain power then update XD
The Kojiyuu is also going to get married!!! So there coming here, in Canada!!!! YAY!!! :w00t:
I'll go to there wedding, be the witness :P

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« Reply #292 on: August 04, 2011, 03:39:06 PM »
 :heart: :heart: :heart: My lovely KOJIYUU ARE GETTING MARRIED TOO!!!!  :wub: AND IT IS KOJIMA HARUNA WHO PROPOSED!!!!!!

Me too, me too! I'm buying a ticket now to Canada and wait for them in there! >:]]  :shakeit:

But... they are married in Guam, so meaning they're doing a second wedding in Canada right? :]]] Haha.
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« Reply #293 on: August 05, 2011, 09:53:57 AM »
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Hey everyone..! you know somebody told me that he or she read my fanfic in three days so i did the same thing then i relized that i'm a terrible writter hahahaha xD 
I'm very grateful that you followed all my chapters regardless of the spelling mistakes that i have in all of them :D hahahaha so THANK YOU..!
btw what is this mean " marry in guam"? 

takamina and acchan were hugging in bed trying to not think about their responsibilities and jobs..!
takamina..! 
yes acchan? 
i'm so happy! acchan says smiling from ear to ear..
me too..! takamina says while hugging tigher to acchan
now i am  Miss Takahashi! or Takahashi Maeda and i love it!  acchan says smiling 
hahahahaha! takamina laughs and asks you really think about that stuff do you? 
yes,of course! now you're going to live in dept and we will be happy ever after..! answer acchan winking 
yes ok,ok but i got a bad news! takamina says
what is it minami ?acchan asks concerned
well..hmm.. we have to get back to japan! sorry sorry! takamina says  worry about acchan reaction 
yes,i know!  acchan says pouting 
huh?
yes i know we have responsibilities! acchan says sad
 i thought that i had to drag you back to Japan! don't worry we'll get OUR PERFECT HONEY MOON..!takamina says while give a peck to acchan on the lips 
acchan smiles then she takes takamina's hand and drags her to the bathroom..!
acchan what's going on? takamina asks 
we still have 10 min of honey moon so preapare yourself..! acchan says smirking 
WHAT YOU NEVER GET TIRED? takamina asks
 I'M  A SEX ADDICT ..! acchan replies biting her lips
MENWHILE 
nyan nyan and yuko are still laying in the floor (naked) looking at the maps in the book ..
nyan nyan are you sure you want to marry me? you don't have to do it, i'm not pushing you! 
nyan nyan sighs and stares yuko...somebody told you that you know how to ruin the moment? 
sorry nyan nyan! yuko says with sadness in her voice while changing her position..(face down and looking to her right to not look nyan nyan who is on her left)
"Yuko" nyan nyan says with teary eyes while put her hand on yuko's back 
"When you left to new york. I felt that my heart broke in  pieces..i missed you like crazy and i know that i always acted as jerk..the truth was that i didn't wanted to accept the fact that you meant everything to me since the start..  that i loved you pervert sweet,funny, caring and protective sides as well,i learnt my lesson I DON'T WANT TO LOSE YOU AGAIN,I'M HERE TO MAKE YOU HAPPY..! I LOVE YOU AND I LOVE YOU MORE EVERY PASSING DAY..!"
yuko was in tears she turns around  and see nyan nyan crying also
Yuko shouts in tears "NYAN NYAN I LOVE YOU"
Both girls hugs each other and  stares each other till they fall sleep! 
NEXT DAY 
yuki was release from the hospital so she wanted to go the reharsals (the truth she goes just to see mayu because mayu can't miss the reharsals anymore) 
yuki enters to the dressing room  looking for mayu but sae grabs her by her arm not letting her go..!
mayu looks at the scene and didn't react to it as a jealous girlfriend..she just got up aproached to yuki and gives her a kiss on her cheek.. and says:
good morning yukirin,i'm glad to see you're okay! 
thanks mayu chan! yuki says smiling 
sae takes yuki away making her to sit next to her..! 
yuki was calm..! now she knew that mayu wasn't mad about sae trying to get her..! 
then the door opens letting in the captain and the ace of the team A..
hey girls!  acchan says happy 
hey girls! takamina says tired but happy 
wow takamina you look like you haven't slept in days! mariko says smiling 
where you two have you been? miichan asks 
i know! i know!  they have been working hard on their routines! sae says grinning 
is that true? miichan asks in a serious tone 
miichan i want the divorce..! acchan says smirking 
takamina thinks (i don't think she's going to say it) 
why? i been faithful to you! is there someone else? miichan says pouting 
yes,there's someone else and.. and..WE GOT MARRIED..! AND WE'RE HAPPY...!  acchan says nervous and holding takamina's hand 
(what?!?!!? she said it..!)  takamina thinks
all the girls in the room look at them in shock (lovetan miichan,mayu,yuki,sae,sayaka,tomomo,tomochin,mariko rena and jurina those are the only names i know :P)
takamina got really red and faints..
CONGRATULATIONS...! yuki says smiling and hugging acchan then the others girls reacts and hug acchan too forgetting about takamina who was on the floor..!
acchan ended with the hugs and took her tiny captain to the couch..!
is she okay? everyone asks 
i don't know!  acchan says 
another two girls enters the room very happy and holding hands..! 
am i seeing right? mariko asks 
is yuko hand in hand with nyan nyan? sayaka asks surprise..
this is a second sign that might be the end of the world? sae says while looking at yuki ..
what's going on? nyan nyan asks still grabbing yuko's hand
takamina and acchan got married! and then when we were going to congratulate them.. she faint..! mayu says 
hahaha takamina faint..! yuko says smiling 
"Yuko" nyan nyan says 
ok,ok let me handle this..! yuko says while takes acchan by her waist and says "you know acchan i always wanted to ..SKINSHIP YOU those two look so good..
huh? acchan replies
TAKAMINA PROTECTIVE MODE ACTIVATE...! keep your hands off her..! takamina shouts mad..
she pretended that she faint! tomochin says
that's so lame..! mariko says 
ha! now you're up..! yuko says smiling till nyan nyan slaps her and says "as always yuko" and goes away 
what? i was doing it for medical purposes! yours are bigger and you know i love them! nyan nyan come back..! yuko shouts while going after nyan nyan
she should say "as always kojiyuu" miichan says laughing
yes you right..! sae and sayaka agreed 
congratulations takamina! the girls says 
huh? that was it? takamina says 
what do you want wedding presents? you didn't invite us to the wedding..! yuki says  
sorry if is too short is just that i have a job interview tomorrow and i have to sleep early hahaha i don't want to work i'm just 18 xD  hahaha

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« Reply #294 on: August 05, 2011, 02:36:04 PM »
they should held one in Japan too...... XD
So everyone can celebrate it with them!!!
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« Reply #295 on: August 05, 2011, 05:39:04 PM »
oh, Acchan is sex addict... :smh :on bleed: .
This is so... oh my oh my,,,  :lol:


The forever KojiYuu..  :twothumbs


Must have them all fly to Canada for KojiYuu wedding..  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

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« Reply #296 on: August 07, 2011, 01:06:50 AM »
You don't know that Kojiyuu are married? Ages ago... in GUAM!!! I'll show you the picture on your next update (Meaning my next comment as I'm a little lazy to find the picture in my file. xD)

Of course, Kojiyuu is once again be mentioned on my comment. KOJIYUU. :]] Come on, say the good news to the members now!

Hehe, Takamina pretended she fainted? LOW!!! :]]
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« Reply #297 on: August 08, 2011, 02:20:43 AM »
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you wanted to do skinship with acchan..!! nyan nyan shouts mad 
it's not skinship..skinship..! yuko replies smiling
what is then?!?!?!nyan nyan asks shocked by yuko's answer
EARSHIP..! yuko says grinning 
earship? that's what you wanted to do to acchan? just.. earship! nyan nyan says (feeling pretty dumb about that huh?xD)
yes! yuko says covering her eyes with her hands 
yuko number 1: now she really thinks that we're perverts
yuko number 2:what? a person can not like ears! 
yuko nukber 3: is just a weird that someone like to touch ears! the way we want! 
yuko number 1: just aplogize! 
yuko number 2: yes you're right just apologize even if not you're fault..
nyan nyan i'm sorry.. i just wanted to see the difference between your beatiful ears and hers! yuko says while hugs nyan nyan by the waist..
nyan nyan sighs and pushes yuko to the bathroom..!
nyan nyan? yuko says 
kojiharu lock the bathroom door and starts kissing yuko passionately. yuko is shocked but happy at the same time
yuko number 1: YAY! rough shex ;)...! 
yuko number 2: shex in the bathroom :D..! 
yuko number 3: has  a list of things and moving her glasses  shouts CHECK! :)
yuko: and the best part i'm the first having shex in the bathroom..YAY! take that takamina hahahaha
MEANWHILE
well i thought it would be different.I mean the girls didn't care..i think i'm safe! takamina murmures with her finger on her chin and pouting cutely
acchan saw her captain and couldn't resist so she kisses her deeply not caring if anyone was watching..
acchan we're in public takamina says while ends the kiss
mmm but we're married and they know that i want.. to feel you,touch you,kiss you and make you scream my name real loud! acchan says smirking while kissing takamina's neck.Takamina almost can't resist the temptation but she rathered run away from her sex addict wife..for the sake of their jobs 
i need to hide..! i need to hide! takamina says while moving her head side to side looking if acchan is not coming after her! then she keeps running..
acchan walks looking for takamina then she stops walking "so my minami likes to play hard to get" and return walking then she heard something in the bathroom she tries to open the door but it was locked! 
acchan sighs and shouts "really minami? lock yourself in the bathroom..! are you a child? 
nobady answers she just heard little noises! 
acchan sits on the floor and leaned her head in the bathroom door  and says..well it's not my fault that i want to do dirty things to you.I mean you look really hot and contain myself.. i think that's what happen to sex addicts they just see a hot person and they want to..you know but that only happens to me when i'm with you so then" i'm a sex addict with you! " i promise if you get out, it will be more private ok ! no more bathrooms,no more taxicab's backseats,no more parents's house and garages i'll promise i'll be good! "acchan says smirking 
ACCHAN WHAT A PERVERT..! yuko and nyan nyan shouts at the same time  while open the door 
huh? ahhhhhhhh! i thought takamina was here! acchan replies 
hahahaha acchan is total pervert! who ever thought that? nyan nyan says between laughs
yuko instead was with a perverted shinny look! (oh god..he knew that yuko was happy for what she was imagining) "damn takamina how dare you having sex in every single part of america and japan? what a pervert! hahahaha
you guys call me pervert but you two were... acchan says smirking 
we were nothing! nyan nyan says and walks to the other room 
yuko was looking fiercely to acchan and also was couting her money! 
what is it yuko? acchan asks 
i need to buy a lot of secret cameras! this place is an aphrodisiac place! can't you see?  i was doing dirty things here with my nyan nyan  for very first time and you had been doing dirty things to takamina for ever in this place! yuko says grinning 
SLAP!!!! 
ouch! acchan that hurt yuko says brushing her cheek 
MEANWHILE 
sae and yuki were siiting in the couch talking while mayu was talking with other team b members..
sayaka interrupted sae and yuki and dragged sae out the room because she needed that sae do her a favor! 
mayu sees yuki sitting alone and went to make some company! mayu sitted in the couch next to yuki..
first they were sitting end to end like strangers looking to the other girls..
yuki looked mayu and smiled then mayu looked at yuki looking at her and smiled back,yuki got red and look other way,mayu looked other way and move closer to yuki..
yuki also was pretending looking other way and got closer to mayu till they where nowhere to move..they were really close.. 
mayu says" hi"smirking  
yuki says" hello" smiling 
are you happy? you make act like a silly girl! yuki says pouting 
mayu puts her hand and yuki's thigh and says "you're my silly girl" 
and you are? yuki asks 
what you want me to be? mayu asks smiling
what about a dog.. i always wanted a dog! yes you're my little puppy! yuki says smirking 
ok! rouf rouf then like a real puppy i have to..  mayu says while starts sniffing yuki in her neck and starts licking her all over 
mayu stop... you're giving tickles! yuki says between laughs 
i'm not mayu Rouf! rouf! 
hahahhaha 
sae is about to enter the room but she saw mayu with yuki and rathered go somewhere else..
MEANWHILE
nyan nyan was walking to the reharsal room but in the way she see someone else standing there!
nyan nyan sighs and says akari what are you doing here? 
visiting friends! but the truth "i came to visit yuko" akari answers
what the hell? nyan nyan says while rise her hand to slap akari but akari was faster and stopped her hand before!
akari smiles and says "not again honey,it's time for you to learn what it's like when someone steals something yours" 
akari let go nyan nyan hand and walks away 
sorry for my english and for making this too short but it's almost the end so don't expect many words :P

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« Reply #298 on: August 08, 2011, 02:32:15 AM »
what  its gonna  end!? I feel like the are a lot of things can still happen........... LOL @ Acchan.......... You're becoming more  like the pervert squirrel, Yuko!

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« Reply #299 on: August 08, 2011, 02:34:20 AM »
Acchan really is a sex addict  XD
I wonder where takamina went XD
Yuko can never beat takamina XD
Kojima being jealous part was wonderful.  :twothumbs
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