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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 5" 27-6
« Reply #20 on: June 27, 2011, 10:46:47 AM »
 :lol: :lol: :lol: thanks for reading guys,  :grin: :grin: and btw bou chan , actually I wanna up chapter 5 part 2 this morning but i guess, better I up now....  :grin: :grin: :grin:


and from know the pov will be on minami side  :)

lets moving.....moviiiing.....  :cow: :cow:

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Chapter 5 : New Life part 2
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So since that day, I and my friend live with my uncle. he is a pirates. We are thought  about many things. They thought us about pirates live, how to defend ourselve, how to predict the weather etc. all the crews are also really nice. if they said pirates are mean , not for them.

we now have a new Identity, my name now takamina and we all disguise as a guy. we can keep the secret so tight, no one  recognize us as a child of the lords in Calm Land. I wonder how are the situation in there. did my parents and the other save? its still a riddler to me and the other.  thingking about that bring the pain but the right thing now is we must make the situation calm first and then just look at the situation.

well, now we also the pirates. I and my other friends miikun,kojiro, tomohiko,jun,shuu and saka helping our capt wisnu that also our uncle. we go to many places searching for the treasures. we meet lots of people and learn many languages. surprisingly, all the people that I meet are knowing the JhipsTerz. They said that we are the king in the ocean. No one dare to fight or disturb us. All the marine base looking for us. Our head already got price now. Many goverment get pissed coz us. We attack all they ship that shipping goods and foods. We take it and then give it to the poor people. to be honest as the time pass we really enjoy doing that.

The important thing that I and my friend learn during all the time with capt wisnu is team work and trust. capt wisnu and his crews are know the only family that we got and they really love us. speaking of the crews let me tell u something about them. First is alex san. she is really expert in fixing anything. u may see she only an ordinary technician but when it deals with fight dont mess with her. she got special ability. she is so strong and any thing could be a weapon to her. but she really kind of like flirting. shun really close to her. she teach everything she knows to shun.

next is nalyn san. she really a great chef. mii-kun and kojiro really close with her. she teach kojiro how to cook a lot delicious foods whether mii-kun will be always the tester. he will eat all the food that they make. u may think nalyn san only can cook but she is also good in fighting. this chef is a magician. so dont mess with her. even though like that she really love to laugh.

the other are flean and sora san. they in charge at the weapon supply and plan strategy. they both are ex-ninja's and assassin. shun, saka and tomohiko learn lot of things from them. they teach them how to operated a cannon and how to make a battle strategy.

last but not least I guess is ceg. ceg is capt wisnu assistant. she the one control the ship direction. she maybe looks young but she is also great. capt wisnu already teach her many thing. and really skill full. jun and I really close with her.

time really move fast it has been 15th years since that happen. now we all grown up but that horrible scene and the pain in our heart couldnt fade away.


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15 years later
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"wooooaaaa~ watch out!!"

"hahahaha, whats up shun? already tired? we have just begin your sword practice."

"tsk, dont underestimate me saka. I havent showed u all my skill yet." shun grin as keep attacking saka. on the other place near there

"tomohikoooooooooooooo~ stop pointing your archer to meeeee~"

"ahahahaha, come on mii-kun dont move so much I wanna hit that apple in your head."

"whatever! u really love to make me your practice object." mii-kun pout.

finally mii-kun still cant escape and tomohiko release his arrow and in a second *wush it hits the apple but the arrow its to fast and got through the apple and directly go to kojiro position.

"KOJIRO WATCH OUT!!!" mii-kun and tomohiko shout in union make kojiro aware

"whoooooaaaaaa~ SHIELD~" suddenly a barrier perform around him and the arrow fell

he sigh and then frowned to us "Yooooooooooo~ what the matter with you guys?!"

suddenly Jun shout "YOOOOOO~ Guys!!! New Target Approach~"

"Ceg, told the captain." Jun told ceg and suddenly they all already prepare for the ambush.

"Capt, the target ship is approaching. what we do now?"

backing ceg the captain give an order "Prepare in position now."

"aye....aye....captain!!!!" ceg back in her position.

the captain still standing there in front of the big picture of the one he really respect


'Uncle~'





'I wont '





'disappointed you~'




TBC~

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what will happen then????  :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: sorry its really short I make it longer for the next part  :grin:

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 5 part 2" 27-6
« Reply #21 on: June 27, 2011, 10:58:23 AM »
I'M A MAGICIAN  yey!!!!  :hiakhiakhiak:   

but i really love to laugh  :mon whimper:

AT LEAST i'm not only in the kitchen  :pig madder:

great as evaaaa

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 5 part 2" 27-6
« Reply #22 on: June 28, 2011, 06:13:51 AM »
 :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: no mommmiiiieeee~ u wont be always in the kitchen. it just the intermezzo...  :grin: :grin:

now lets begin to the next part ...  :on drink: :on drink: :on drink:


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chapter 5 part 3


flashback
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"Takamina...come..." Capt wisnu call the brown hair guy

"Yes, capt?!" He approach and sit in front of the capt.

"Let's go outside. I have an announcement to make. " Then both of them leave the cabin and gather at the deck with everyone

"All the crews, listen to me. I have to told you an important announcement."

There is a silent.

"From now own, takamina will be the capt of this ship. Me, alex, nalyn, flean and sora will go to some place that I couldn't tell u right now."

The young brown hair guy frowned

"But...but...but..."

"No but takamina. U in charge in here now. I have to leave for some reason I can't told u now." The capt said as laid his hand to takamina shoulder

"Are u sure capt?"

"I'm sure u will be a great captain. U have your friends beside u."

Capt wisnu then ask the crews "is there someone object with this decision??if there is, raise your hand."

No one raise their hand and since then takamina become the captain of the JhipsTerz.

But before he goes, capt wisnu already prepare everything for takamina and the other.

end of flashback
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Present time
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'How are u now uncle?'

'Its already 3 months since u left.'

'Today, I'll do my job uncle. Wish me luck.' I said as smiling to the picture in front of me.

I go get my mask and wearing it. Its the mask that uncle wisnu give to me. Its a half face metal mask where there is a wind symbol in it. I wear it to keep my Identity. The other crews also wearing mask when we do our job as a pirate.

After wearing my mask I go out and prepare for the ambush.

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"Yoooooo capt the ship is nearer." Jun said as look using his scope.

"Haha, seems today is our lucky day then. That's is nobuhiro supply ship" mii-kun said as wearing his mask.

"Ah, I hope that is kind of princess ship actually." Shun said as preparing his spear.

"Tsk....u just wanna flirt with a princess don't u? I guess alex san really teach u all the thing." Saka said as grinning to him

"Well, that's shun the flirt master." Tomohiko said as placing his bow and arrows at his back.

"Owgh, seems we are approaching guys. Now its the time for me to cover our ship with magic." Kojiro said as close his eyes then spell "SHIELD". The ship now already covered with kojiro spell.

The capt come out and stand beside ceg that control the ship. "Ceg, how's the condition?" The capt ask her.

"Well, we almost aproaching the ship capt."

"Now , increase the speed ceg."

"Aye....aye....captain...."

The ship move fast and all the crews standby at their position.

"ARE U READY GUYS??"

"AAYEEEEEE...." All the crews shout

"Tomohiko, ready with your fire bow!" Capt says and tomohiko prepared.

Then the captain prepare for the command.

"OKAY GUYS!"

"IN YOUR POSITION!"

"SET!!!!"

The ship is getting nearer and then

"ATTAAAAAAAAAAACK!!!!!!!"

The capt said and right away tomohiko pointed all the 3 fire bow to the supply ship and hit directly to the deck.

"CHAAAAAAAARGEEEEE!!!!!" All the crews said.

Saka start to throw his chain rope and go accross the ship.

"Whoooaaaa....what happen in here???!! Guard....guard....protect the supply and goods."

Saka grin and ready take out the nunchaku. "Guaaaaaard take care of them."

"Hmph....u try to get rid of me? Never can boys!" As the soldier attack him , shun come with his spear and stright them all.

"Whooooohooo.... Its fun saka."

"Hahaha, yeah and it seems something burn around there." Saka said as chuckling at the scene that happen in front of him.

"FIRE~"

"Aaaaargghhht~ my butt."

"The...the...they are a magician. Aaaaaaaa~"

"Wanna me to burn your butt too?" Mii-kun said as give a smirk to the guard

"Nooooooooooo~"

"Ahahahaha, mii-kun, stop teasing and playing." Kojiro said as laughing to the guard.

The soldiers run but one of the soldier try to attack kojiro from behind.

"U dead now magiciiaaaaaan~"

"Kojiro look out?!" As the soldier gonna attack suddenly he got kick from the back.

"Uuuuaaarght~" he got hit by Jun swing kick.

"Woooogh....thanks jun."

"No problem brother."

They both then do the high5 and continue the fight.

Capt taka fly right away from his position and help them whether tomohiko is in charge in a long range attack. Tomohiko could strike directly all 5 soldier with one shoot.

Soon there is a riot there. There are a lot of guard there but can't compare to the power of the 7 mighty pirates. One by one the guard down and the only one left is the captain.

"Wha...wha...what do u want actually?!" The capt said shuttering

"Tsk....tsk....tsk....we are a pirate what else we want?" Mii-kun said as pointed his gun to the captain

"Ple...ple....please don't kill me! U can take all the thing in here but please don't kill me. I have a family." The capt beg

Suddenly the pirate capt come approach and look at the capt "well, we won't kill you, we will release you and make sure u tell about this to your lord and give him this." The pirate capt said as give a piece of letter to him.

"I..I..I.. I will tell him. Thank you." The capt then leave the ship using a boat.

"Soooo, what will we do now capt taka?" Jun ask him

"Check every inch of this ship and take all the use stuff in here to our ship." The capt order and the crews nodded "aye....aye....captain."

Right away they search that place. Saka and shun bring all the weapon and the army supply to the weapon lodge in their ship whether mii-kun and tomohiko get all the foods there to their food lodge.

Kojiro and jun now searching at the prison there. As they arrive there they see a shadow. Someone is there, tied. Hurry kojiro and jun release the prisoner and take her to their ship and leave the ship. And ready to sail again.

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"Urgh...argh....where am I?"

"Owgh, u awake?! GUYS THE GIRL AWAKE!!!!" Kojiro said as calling the other

"And... Who are you?"

"Errrrr.... U gotta surprise when u hear it but we are a pirates." As hearing that the person look surprise and scare.

"No...no....no...don't be scared we won't do anything to you. We are 'JhipsTerz'. We found u in the nobuhiro ship supply." The capt said as smiling to her. Soon her expression change.

"U guys the JhipsTerz? So it means....." Suddenly ceg go through the room rushly

"Shi-chan!!!!"

"Ceeeeg!!!"

Ceg come and give the girl hug, "finally u come back." She said as holding her tears.

"U know each other?!" Shun said as give a confuse look.

"Yeah, she is shii-chan. Nalyn personal assistant and also a great spy."

"Haha, I think I'm not that great ceg." She said as scratch her back.

"Well okay, just let her go get change then we will continue the introduction at the dinner. " All the crews now leave shii-chan and then as she have done got change they all having a dinner at the deck.

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at the deck
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all the crews eating freely at the deck. as they finish eating they having some conversation with the new comer.

"so your name is....."

"just call me shii-chan."

"okay shii-chan so u are a spy." capt ask as looking at her

"yeah. capt wisnu ordered me to disguise as a guard at nobuhiro kingdom. but one day they found out and as u can see. I got into the prison and will transfered to the prison at azka." shii-chan explain and drinking her drink.

"WHAT?! prison at Azka?" mii-kun shout

"eh? you know where is it?" shun ask

"its a special prison for a prisoner that have a special ability like magic." sayaka explain to the rest of the members there.

shii-chan nodded "yeah thats right and I'm lucky u guys come and save me."


there another silent shii-chan start talking


"anyway, I havent known u all."

"owgh sorry, I'm mii-kun."

"I'm shun and this is my brother saka."

"I'm kojiro the chef u can say and this is tomohiko."

"and I...." havent finish his sentence the capt already cut by shii-chan "takamina right? capt wisnu has told me before." shii-chan said as smile to him.

"well, since I already in here can I join u guys? I could help kojiro in cooking and maybe hunting?"

they all laugh and then chuckle "hahaha, sure shii-chan welcome home." the small capt said.

"yeah I'm home~"

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meanwhile in the nobuhiro palace
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"WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!!!!! OUR SUPPLY SHIP HAS BEEN ATTACKED!!! AGAAAAAINNNN!!!" nobuhiro said as screaming so laud

"ye..ye....yes my lord and he also give u this." the shutter capt handed nobuhiro a letter and he open it.

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hallo there nobunobu~

thanks for the goods and foods u have give to us.

u are such a goooood lord but unfortunately...

dumb....

we will wait for your next gift to us.



the JhipsTerz


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after reading it nobuhiro blood boil and he is in a high anger

"AAAAAAAAAAAARGGGHHHHTTTTT.... CATCH THAT PIRATE RIGHT AWAY AND DONT EVER COME BACK IF U HAVENT CATCH THEM!!!!!"

"ye...ye....yes My lord." the captain leave the throne hall as fast as he can.

nobuhiro take a sit as holding his forehead 'Damn that pirate. they dead when they meet me. I'll got you.'


suddenly, his adviser talk to him "My lord , it seems u need more power now. I could feel your power is weaker now."

"WHAT?! What did u have just said?" he said as grab his adviser jaw.

"wha...wha...what I mean is you need more power my Lord." nobuhiro then let go his grab than look at his adviser

"so, whats the idea then?!"

"I have heard that there is a land where a great power lies. If u could conquer that land and even marry with one of the princess there u'll get a huge power. "

"nice idea, whats the name of the island then?" nobuhiro grin.

"Angle Land~"



TBC

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 5 part 3" 28-6
« Reply #23 on: June 28, 2011, 06:46:44 AM »
THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE!!! I've got the feeling that this Angel Island's princess is Atsuko! Update soon

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 5 part 3" 28-6
« Reply #24 on: June 28, 2011, 10:12:48 AM »
EHHHHHH We went to another place?! ahuhuh

and hey who's Shi-chan O_O YAY i have another assistant!!! :hiakhiakhiak:

oh no Angle land,the princesses r there ! >_<

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 5 part 3" 28-6
« Reply #25 on: June 28, 2011, 12:41:14 PM »
@blughise : u will know in this chapter~  :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin:

@mommie : I save the best for the last  :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

actually i have finished the part 2 but i guess i gonna post part 1 first...  :grin: :grin: enjoy....enjoy....  :cow:
 
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chapter 6 : Angle Land part 1
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Far....far away from the "Calm Land", there is a land where peace and love are the symbol of the land. It called the "Angle Land". This land is ruled by 6 kingdoms. These lords of the 6 kingdoms are a great friend of the lords in the Calm Land but since the Attack of Nobuhiro empire to Calm Land, no one have ever heard about The Angle Land anymore. It seems that they disappear from the earth.

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flashback
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"Here we are princess. This is the place right?!" A little boy said as he put the princess from his piggyback.

"Now, I gotta go." The boy then fly and leave the little princess

"Heeey, waiiiit!!!! What's your name?" The princess shout

"Thank you for saving me." Again the princess shout as the boy fly leaving her.

She then pout and as she look down she found small knife. she take and examine the knife. at the edge of the handle carved an insial "M".

" 'M'? Maybe this is his inisial name. Hope we can meet again. " She said as give a gentle smile.


end of flashback

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present~
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"Princess.....princess...." A girl shout and running around the yard

"Owgh, where is the princess. Her father calls her.I better go there. she must be there." The girl then go to the secret place that only she and the princess know.

As she arrives there she could find the princess is sitting in the tree as enjoying the wind blow. Finally the girl call her princess.


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princess POV
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"Princess....princess..." My maid calls me as I laying in my favorite spot, enjoying the wind blowing.

I look at her and answer her call "owgh, angy! What is it?"

"Your father call u princess. Its lunch time." Angy said as still looking at me from the ground.

"Okay, tell my father I'll be there in a minute." I said as smiling to angy.

"Heee, okay princess, I go tell your father now. I just don't get it why u really like doing this." She said as leaving me.

Well, the main reason I like doing this is coz as I feeling the wind I feel he is there beside me. Then I go down from the tree and go to the palace.


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in the other place
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Three princess are talking together at the palace yard.

"Mooooooeeeee..... I miss heeeer...." A small princess growl and pout.

"Owgh, calm down will you, u all...ready....like....this....since u...back...from....calm land...mooo, stop shaking me....." A short hair princess said to her squirrel friend.

"She really just miss her savior chiyuuuu~" a cute long hair princess said as having her tea.

"Well, I guess u also miss him to huh?! Your prince chaaaarmiiiiing~" the short hair princess said as teasing her friend

"Whoaaaa, u right. She always suddenly blush when I got catch her in a day dreaming. She must be remember that kismph........"

"Stooooooooop saying thaaaaaat chiyuuuuu~" finally she shut the squirrel princess mouth

"Seee....see....she is blushing again." The short hair princess just laugh as pointed both her friends.

"Hmph...huff...huff....okay...okay....I give up....I can't breath here." Finally the squirrel get  release.

"Okay guys that enough, let's just sit here as waiting for the others."


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somewhere near the sea shore
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A princess stand in there while looking an old bandage.

' U save me that day and I can't forget about u. How are u now? Are u still alive?'


Suddenly a young princess come towards her with her dog "neeeeechan~ let's go to the gathering. Everyone must have waiting for us."


She looks once again to the old bandage as saying


' I'll be waiting for you.'


Then she and the young girl go together.



TBC

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can guess who are the princesssss~  :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin:
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« Reply #26 on: June 28, 2011, 01:42:56 PM »
MAN U'r such a teaser  :banghead:

ANgy's the maid COOL!!!!  :hiakhiakhiak:

can't w8 for the next 1!!!!! :panic:

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« Reply #27 on: June 28, 2011, 03:11:35 PM »
 :hiakhiakhiak: :hiakhiakhiak: :hiakhiakhiak: i'm not such a teaser mommiiii~  :shy1:

here the next paaaart~  :shy2: :shy2:

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chapter 6 : Angle Land part 2
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"Ah, finally u come. Sit here my beloved daughter." The lord said and kiss his daughter.

"So where u go today dear?" The queen ask her

"At the usual place mom." The young princess smile gently to her mom

"Ah I see, are you still remember that boy again atsuko dear?" Her mom ask and make the princess turn blush

"Hahahaha, my daughter is grown up now. Well, I think its already the time for you to have a suitor." Her dad said as grin to her

"Dad, stop that." The princess pout to her dad

"Okay...okay... Don't pout atsuko. I'm just kidding. And don't worry I let this problem to you." Her dad said but before he finish his lunch his guard come

"Lord maeda, your horse is ready."

"Well, thank you there angy now I guess I have to go. Love u dear." Lord maeda say as kiss his beloved wife.

"Anyways, I just go too now. I think my other friends already wait for me. Love u mom , dad." She said as kiss her both parents.

"Come on angy we go now."

"Yes princess."

Then the princess leave her palace and headed to the gathering area.

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at the gathering area
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"Princess yuko, princess maeda is here"

"Owgh, mari, please guide her to come here." Princess yuko said as put her tea cup.

"No need yuko, I already here." Princess atsuko said as approach princess yuko. The personal maid then go and leave them.

"Acchaaaaan... What took u so long. I've been bullied by them." Yuko said as give puppy eyes to atsuko.

"Huuuuh? She is laying, the one that get bullied is me and mariko is her partner in crime chiyuuu."

"Heeeeh??? I'm not her partner in crime tomo. Why u pointed at me." Mariko pout and suddenly the other princess come.

"Well....well...well....seems I miss a lot of thing here."

"They are starting the fun without us yuki-nee." Added the young twin tail hair princess.

"Ooowgh, hi there yuki, mayu. We have just started and I'm glad u come." Atsuko said as giving them a gentle smile.

Princess yuki and mayu then join them and have some evening talk with other princess.

Well, These princess are a daughter of the lords that rules in angle land. They really close to each other and grown up together.

First is maeda atsuko, she is from maeda kingdom and lords maeda daughter. She is a bit a shy and a calm girl. She has a gentle smile. Next is oshima yuko. She is from oshima kingdom and lords oshima daughter. She is kind a pervert and like to tease sometimes.the one that usually become her teasing target is kasai tomomi. She is from kasai kingdoms and lords kasai daughter. she is cute and sometimes a bit childish.

Next is kashiwagi yuki and watanabe mayu. Yuki is lords kashiwagi daughter and mayu is lords watanabe daughter. They from kashiwagi kingdom and watanabe kingdom. They already close since they are kid. Yuki is a calm person but have kind a funny reaction whether mayu is a cheer up princess but she could really act cold someday. Last but nat least is shinoda mariko. She is from shinoda kingdom and lord shinoda daughter.she is the oldest among the others princess there.

These 6 princess are said the reincarnation of 6 angles that create Angle Land. It is said that they have a really powerful power but it locked in their body. The power could only be locked if the princess found their true love.

"Ne acchan, do u still remember when the first time me go to calm land." Yuko ask acchan.

"Yeah of course. How can I forgot." Acchan said as resting her chin on the table.

"Yeah, its the first and the last time we go there. I wonder is he alright?!" Mayu said as look at cocoa on her lap. Suddenly all the girl shout.

"HE?" Mayu that realize that she has said something that gonna make her be interrogated blush

"We....well... He is cocoa savior I just wanna know how is he." The other look each other then grin

"U like him don't you?!" Yuko tease mayu and give her usual teasing smile

"Well, actually I thinking about someone that I met in there too." Tomo said.

"Heeee? Don't tell me each of u meet a boy there and fell for them." Mariko said surprise

"Well, we are still kid at that time. We just looking for a friend." Tomo said as blush

"But u two kiss tomo." Yuko said as grin

"Mooooooeeee....yuuuuchaaan its an accident." Tomo said as chased yuko

They all suddenly laugh and enjoy that day.

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somewhere in the ocean
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The JhipsTerz is having a meeting.

"So, shii-chan do you know what nobuhiro plan next." The capt ask her

"Well, since I have been caught I don't know anything but don't worry. Before I got caught I already prepare this." Shii-chan then take out some small box from her pocket.

"Eh? What's that?" Shun pointed to the object

"This is my tapping equipment. I place it behind nobuhiro painting so no one will notice. Let's hear what happen. I just try to fixed it." Shii-chan then turn on it and we hearing the converstion there.

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nobuhiro palace
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"So, let's see.... U said there is island called 'Angle Land'. Do u know where is it?" Nobuhiro ask as look at his adviser

"Unfortunately the island is no where to found since u attack the calm land my lords. But it is said that the angle land and calm land some how connected. " His adviser explain

"Very well then, if that island and the princess power there could make me stronger from I now, find that island right away." Nobuhiro ordered

"As u wish my lord."

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back at the JhipsTerz~
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"And that's all the converstion for right now. My equipment need to be repaired again plus the connection is not good in here." Shii-chan said

"DAMN!!! That nobuhiro seems wanna attack angle land. We gotta got there before him." Shun said

"Yeah, u right but its no where to found how could we find it." Tomohiko said as thinking

"Uhm.... I can use my power to find it. Base what I have read before Angle land is connected to Calm land we better start searching from there to the south. I read it located in the south of Calm land." Kojiro said as give explaination to the rest of the crews and capt.

"Wooooowww....kojiro u the best. Finally your knowledge is useful right now." Mii-kun said as round his hand to kojiro

"Heeeeyyy, it is useful u know." Kojiro look pissed to mii-kun

"Very well then, let's rest now and we start our journey tomorrow okay." The capt ordered then headed to his room.

As he arrives at his room he sit in his capt chair and look at his father swords



'Dad, what will happen after this?'



'Wish me luck dad?!'




TBC~


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dooouuuuuuu~  :on drink: :on drink: :on drink:

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 6 part 2" 28-6
« Reply #28 on: June 28, 2011, 03:28:45 PM »
See See u'r a teaser!!!  :banghead:

oh well hope the gang arrives at angle land soon @_@

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 6 part 2" 28-6
« Reply #29 on: June 28, 2011, 07:39:39 PM »
WOW so fast I like it!!!!!!

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 6 part 2" 28-6
« Reply #30 on: June 28, 2011, 11:03:26 PM »
Hope the prince and the princess going to meet again soon~ :roll:

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 6 part 2" 28-6
« Reply #31 on: June 29, 2011, 03:18:33 AM »
I KNEW IT! i felt that i was gonna end up being a maid!  :O

LOL i hope i have cool powers or something.

Yay! The Princesses are gonna meet their prince  :lol:

Update soon!

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 6 part 2" 28-6
« Reply #32 on: June 29, 2011, 09:48:22 AM »
ehehehehe... thanks for reading guys, now lets see how the prince could go to the angle land  :grin: :grin: :grin:

and mooom, which part is the teaser...  :? :? XD and angy, u will now later , but i can told u that u are special maid.  :grin: :grin:

now let's movin....moving...  :on gay: :on gay:

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Chapter 7 : Journey To the Angle Land part 1
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Takamina POV
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'eh?! where am I? why suddenly everything seems blur!' I walk through the path that I even dont know where will lead me. I just feel the path never end. Suddenly, I could see a light and I approach that light. The light then bring me to somewhere place. The place is so beautiful and peaceful. I feel that I'm in heaven now. I go around that place then I could see someone from afar. There is a girl sit in the ground. She wears a white one piece. I cant see her face but I guess it seems she is waiting for someone. I keep stand in there and not long there is a knight approaching her. I move closer and I could hear their conversation.

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"Honey! Finally you come! I really miss you." the girl hug the knight.

"Yeah, I'm back, I really miss you too. Sorry for always leaving u like this."  the knight embrace the girl,  I think she is his lover.

"Its okay, as long as I can see you." the girl give the knight gentle smile. she really look like an angle.

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then after that scene that white light appear again and I dont know some how I was taken to the other place again. but I think it the same place but there is some different. Its dark and so quite. 'what happen again? where am I now?' I feel kind a dizzy then I saw that girl and that knight again.

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"I love you!" the girl said as holding so tight the knight hand

"I love you too! I love u more than everything. but I gotta go." the knight said as embrace the girl

"Dont leave me!!" The girl suddenly cry

"No...No...I would never leave you. I will back for you, I do this to protect you too. If something happen to you I better die."

"Promise me you will be back!"

"I promise, princess."


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'heee? so she is the princess.' but again I was drag to somewhere else. 'uuurgh, what is it. is this some kind of time travel.' I said as scratch my back. as I open my eyes there is another scene.

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"Princess, I'm sorry. I have to do this." the knight said as hug his princess

"You promise u will always beside me. You promise you never gonna leave me." the princess started to cry

"If I'm not doing this you and the other angle will got hurt and I wont that happen. Specially to you." the knight said as cup his lover cheek. then he take off something from his finger.

"My love, please take this. As u hold this ring then u know that I will always be with you." the princess take the ring and hold it as she also give something to the brave knight.

"And please take this too My love. This necklace will always protect you and make u always remember about me." as the princess finish her sentence they kissed and then suddenly a huge power appear. That power divided the land into 2 seperated Island. then everything turn back blur.

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"Yooo , Capt.... Capt.... TAKAMINAAAAAAAAAA~"

"WHOOOAAAAAAA~~~ Arrghtt~ Mii-kun why u do that!" Mii-kun shouting make me awake from my dream.

"Tsk, Mii-kun what do you want? I need some sleep now." I growl as placing the pillow to my back.

"Takamina, wake up, u should see this." Kojiro got into my room and I hurry got up with my head still aching.

I go out my room and as I go out I see a scene that give back my and my friend past memory. I stand there still doesnt believe what I see. For a long time since the last time I see that. Here we are again. we arrive at our home town.


"Calm Land."

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wo got up from our ship and walking around in our home land. Calm Land, they always said that but now all I can see it just a ruins.

"So, guys what we will do now?" Jun said as waiting for the answer

"Why dont we have a quick memorial tour?" sayaka said

"Well, Okay, I give u guys around 30 minutes then we continue our journey. who knows we will find a clue regarding to the way to angle land." I said as walking leaving them to the way to my home....

"wait! where are you going takamina?" mii-kun ask me

"I wanna see my home." I said with a cold tone


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Takamina POV
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After walking around 5 minutes, I finally arrive at the ruin that used to be my home. I got inside and headed to the main hall. there I could see an old picture of the young me with my parent. I dont know how are they now, where are they, were they still alive. It make me wanna cry. The only one thing that left from them are the necklace that they have given to me and my ancestor sword.

I move closer to the picture and accidently touch something that open a secret passage. 'heee? whats this? I never know that there is any secret passage in here.' My mind full of questions. So, I just got into the passage and walk through the path there. I keep walking until I found a door in front of me. As I open it my eyes wide open. Its look like a secret place where all my ancestor stuff been saved.

I look around the room and examine all the stuff there. I see some bracelet , swords , spears etc in there. finally I headed to the book shelve there. I could find a journal that my dad write. I just look at one glance then as I wanna return the book A letter fall from the book and it directed to... "Me."

I hurry look the letter, open it and read it.

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Dear Minami,



If u read this letter it mean that u already found out about the secret dungeon

I know u must be surprise but I have prepare this dungeon for u and the other

In here I and the other lord kept our ancestor stuff

We have prepare it since we know that nobuhiro chase after you all

Use this place wisely my child


Lord Takahashi


PS: Even I dont know how u look like now, but I'm sure
      u must already grown up into a great warrior.
      mom and dad love u minami.




after I read the letter I started to cry but I try to hold it. 'That Nobuhiro Will Pay For This.' I said as holding the letter tightly in my hand.



TBC~

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I think this chapter will take a looooooooong waaaay~  :cool2: :cool2:
« Last Edit: June 29, 2011, 10:07:44 AM by sorakamiya »

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 7 part 1" 29-6
« Reply #33 on: June 29, 2011, 10:44:25 AM »
since ur mommiee not here, daddy comment first~~~  :cry: :cry: :cry:

btw, who is the princess and the knight?? so tragic!!  :fainted: :fainted:

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 7 part 1" 29-6
« Reply #34 on: June 29, 2011, 10:55:19 AM »
OI it's not that i'm gone!!!
aiz oh well u beat me there nyahaha

great job ma daughteR!!! this soo nice   XD

i told u dont be a teaser -____-

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 7 part 1" 29-6
« Reply #35 on: June 29, 2011, 02:16:35 PM »
MOMMIIIIIIIE~ DADDDDDIIIE~ :on gay: :on gay:

owgh both of u comment my story for the first time ,  :farofflook: thank uuuuuuuuuuuu~  :on gay:

well, soon or later u will find out it daddie.... and dont forget, to update yours too  :grin: :grin: :grin:

and mommiiiie~ I'm not a teaser~  :nya:

here i post the continuance .... I working on the part 3 now... lets doin' ....  :on study: :on study:

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Chapter 7 : Journey To the Angle Land part 2
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Mii-kun and Kojiro POV
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"Well, where will we go now kojiro?" mii-kun ask

"dont u wanna see your home?" kojiro look at mii-kun curiously

"I wanna but u see, my home already destroyed I couldnt fine anything there." Mii-kun said as look down

"ah I see, mine too. Uhm.... but The library I bet it still stand. We covered it with magic so all the document of the island save."

"Well, lets go there, and find the way to the angle land." Mii-kun said as drag kojiro.


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"Yoo, mii-kun slow down. The library is here." Kojiro said as try to stop mii-kun

"Ah, gomen. I guess my spirit to high today." He said as chuckling

"Well, u always like. Now let's got into the library." Kojiro then lead the way to the library.

Soon they arrive at the front door. Kojiro and mii start to open the door by magic. Only a magician can open it since its been covered with spell. As the door open they both got into the library.

There they stand amaze. So many books there and it countless. Since mii is not fond of reading he started to feel dizzy.

"OMG so many. How can we found it?" Mii pout

"Tsk, u really never go to library don't u?!" Kojiro look at him

"Well, to be honest I come here just to help my dad and I'm to lazy to read." He said as scratch his back.

"Heeee...if that so, u just have to follow me then. Since that is an secret document it kept in the other place." Kojiro then headed to the back of the room where his father n mii always do their job.

He look around but find nothing.

"Heeee, its really strange. The book should have be kept around here." Kojiro said

They now standing at the back of the office desk "come on kojiro, try to remember it. Your memory is better than me."

"I know but it just whoooooaaaa....." As kojiro said his hand accidently push kind of secret button and the secret path under where their stand open.

"Kojiroooooooo what have u done." Mii shout

"I don't knooooooow and I don't knoooow where will we heading nooooow."

"Whoaaaaaa......"

They sliding to the path and then got into some place.

"Ouuuuch my butt...woooaaaa~"

"Itttttaaaaatatatataiiii...."

"Mii-kun got out of me. U really heavy." Mii got bump into kojiro and then suddenly they hear a voice.

"Guys????"

They then look at the person that called them.

"Takamina????" They said in union


end of POV

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shun and saka POV
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"Saka where we go?" Shun try to catch up saka

"We go to the barrack. I wanna search something in there." Saka said as keep running

Suddenly shun stop in some place. Its the place where he meet with the injured princess kashiwagi.

Shun stop his step and just standing in there. Try to gather the memory in his mind.


'This place, still not change.'

'Where are u know yuki?'

'Could we meet again?'



Then he heard saka call him and he back again in the reality.

"Yoooo shun, don't just stand there. Hurry!!"

"Yeaaaah, wait for me."

Shun then continue his step.

Soon they arrive at the barrack. Saka directly heading to the main building where his and shun father do their experiment.

As they arrive at the research room saka try to search the room.

"Yooo, saka what are u looking for actually?" Shun ask as give him a confuse look.

"A blue print of our father experiment about calm land history."

Saka keep searching but no where to found. "Damn, where is it?!"

"Are u sure its in here?"

"I'm sure." Suddenly saka remember something and headed to the desk office as looking a switch.

As he find it he push it and in front of them opened a secret path.

"Whoooaaa, what's this?" Shun surprise

"Let's got in there its the secret path."

Shun nodded and follow saka. The keep walking to the secret path and they found another switch. Shun press the switch and as the door open they see the other there.

"Heee? Mii-kun, takamina, kojiro?"


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Tomohiko and Jun POV
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"Yooo tomo, where are u going." Jun said as chasing tomohiko

"I wanna try to catch that biiiiiirrrrdd.....aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~"

"tomohikooooooo~ whooaaaaaaaaaaaaa~ "

as chasing that bird tomohiko and Jun fall into a hole and then they landed in some place and bump into someone.

"mooooaaaaaaa~ tomohiko get out of meeeee~"

"eeeh???? Mii-kun??? what are u doing in here??? and Jun move out , u are so heavy."

"whooaaa, gomen....gomen...." Jun try to get up from them.

"Why after kojiro I should got strike to both of u." Mii-kun said as rub his back.

After that the small capt started to talk. "uhm..., so I think in each secret passage in each kingdom directly to this room then"

"eh?what is it actually is this?" Shun ask

"well, based on my father letter this is the 7 Lords Secret Room. They kept all the document about Calm Land in here."  takamina explain.

Suddenly kojiro interrupt "So it means that book could be saved in here!!"

Kojiro run directly to the book shelve and search for the book.  "YOOOOSSH! FIND IT!!"

everyone gather and stand surrounding kojiro "what book kojiro?" takamina asked him

"Its about the Calm land and Angle land. Somehow I have heard that they are connected." kojiro turn the page one by one and suddenly

"capt....capt....can u hear me?"


"yeah, what is it shii-can?" takamina grab his walkie talkie

"I see nobuhiro ship approaching"


'damn , why they are here?' "Okay shii-chan we hurry go to the ship. turn the engine right away."

" Roger capt~"


"okay, kojiro u take the book, we hurry go from here. as the condition gone well we back again." the capt said

"aye...aye....captain" the other crews shout

then they hurry got away from there avoided nobuhiro ship.


TBC~

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dooouuuu???  :on drink: :on drink: while writing this somehow i kind feel i'm playing role play games  :hiakhiakhiak:
« Last Edit: June 29, 2011, 03:50:18 PM by sorakamiya »

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 7 part 2" 29-6
« Reply #36 on: June 29, 2011, 03:06:29 PM »
YESH I'M 1ST!!! LUCKY  XD

ahahah secret HO  :lol:  go find it guys!!

i'll get my fb soon @_@ oh and i'm working on another fic, true experience FTW let's see if it doesn't count

tyt sora-shi


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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 7 part 2" 29-6
« Reply #37 on: June 29, 2011, 03:11:12 PM »
"Its about the Calm land and Angle land. Somehow I have heard that they are connected."
Hurm....  :mon dunno:  Daddieee going to update after this... ngeh ngeh ngeh~~  :mon misch:

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 7 part 2" 29-6
« Reply #38 on: June 30, 2011, 11:47:29 AM »
just let's moving how about it.....  :on gay: :on gay:

shall we????  :grin: :grin: :grin:

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Chapter 7 : Journey To the Angle Land part 3
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"Hurry guys."

"Capt, its look like nobuhiro ship have seen us."

"Tsk.... Kojiro use your magic make our ship invisible."

"Aye...aye... Capt. Mii help me here."

"Okei dokey...."

Then kojiro and mii cast a spell to the ship so nobuhiro army can't see them.

"INVISIBLE~" mii and kojiro shout in union

In a minutes the ship is vanished from the sight.

"Fiuhh~ right in time." Jun relieve

"So where to go now?" Ceg ask for direction

"How is it kojiro? Have u find it?" Takamina asked

"Well, hold on for second." Kojiro start to looking at the book. He turn the pages one by one.

"So?" Shun ask

"Uhhhmmm....well based on the history Calm Land and Angle Land used to be one land until something happen "

Everyone look curious "what happen?"

"Uhm....not mention in here. Here only said that the island devided into by the knight to coz he wants to protect someone."

'Eh?it mean that the dream I have last night is about this?! Oh my God.'

"Yooo, takamina, what's up? U seems out." Mii-kun ask me and look worried

"Owgh, nevermind. So is there any way where we can find the Angle Land?" The capt asked kojiro

"Well, this book said that the angle land is in the south of calm land, so I guess we just have to headed there." Kojiro explain as close the book.

"Okay then now we headed to south. Ceg!"

"Aye....capt?"

"Go to the south!"

"Aye....aye....capt!!"

Soon they all headed to the south.

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meanwhile at nobuhiro's
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"My lord, we have seen the JhipsTerz ship at the ruin of Calm Land.but then they disappear as we want to approach."

"Ah, I see, they must be still around there. Go find them and bring them to me. Alive." Nobuhiro ordered his guard.

"Ye....ye....yes my lord."

"Good! Now go?!"

The guard then leave the main hall.

"Soooo, my adviser. Have u send my propose to the princess in angle land?"

"Yes, my lord. I have send it through the portal since that the only way we can get connected to the Angle Land." The adviser said

"Good, now we have just waited for the reply. If they turn it down, then..." Nobuhiro take his sword and swing it

"We have to do the plan B. Hahahahaha!!!!"

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Angle Land
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At angle land the lords having a meeting.

"So, did u guys receive the letter?"

"Hmph, yeah. We receive it maeda. But I won't let my daughter to him."

"U right oshima, I have heard about him and he is really a bad person."

"Yeah, I heard he is the one who attack calm land. I won't either kashiwagi. What do u think kasai?"

"Me either."

"So its set then. We will reject his propose. Right maeda?"

"That's right shinoda, if he do something we will prepare our troops and I'm sure he can't find our island easily."

All the lords nodded and each of them write the reply for nobuhiro. They know this will take a good risk. But they have to protect their beloved family and island.

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meanwhile the princesses
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"Giiiiiiiirls, have u heard that?" Kasai run towards the princesses

"What? The propose?" Yuko reply

"Naaaaaaah, I won't accept it." Mariko said as give a irritate face

"Yeah, I don't wanna get engage." Mayu said as holding cocoa in her lap

"Mayu right, we got our right to choose who we like." Yuki added

"Well, its okay girls. From what I have heard from my father, the propose is rejected." Atsuko said as drinking her tea

"Mooooee....yokatta...chiyuuuu~"

The princesses just chuckle looking at their friend relieve reaction.

"But anyway, I wonder who will be my prince later." Tomo said as smiling and imagine her imaginary prince

"But I guess mayu already has." Yuki tease

"Moooeeee, yuki chan...stop that." Mayu then look down and blush

"But well, I don't know why, I kind a feeling that soon we will meet someone."

"Uhm.....u are right acchan."

"Well, just wait then." Mayu said as playing with cocoa

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back at nobuhiro
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"WHAT?!THEY REJECT MY PROPOSE!!!

"Ye....ye....yes my lord no one of them accept it." His adviser shutter.

"AAAARGHTTTTT!!!!" Now nobuhiro is on a high rage

"Go find where angle land is and get all the princess to me."

"No one could reject nobuhiro."

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back to The JhipsTerz
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"OMG, it have been days we sail in this direction but no result." Tomohiko said as shake his head

"Patient brother, its writen in here Angle Land is quiet far from the Calm Land." Kojiro try to cool down tomohiko.

Then shii-chan give a surprise information to the capt.

"Capt...capt...I got a news that nobuhiro now is searching the location of Angle land too. He is planning to attack them."

"Damn, we gotta to hurry and warn the lord in there." Saka interrupt

Suddenly, Jun give some bad news.

"Capt....the weather is not good. It'll be a storm."

"Great, first nobuhiro's ship is seen now we will hit a great storm." Shun protest

Suddenly the sky turn black and thunder attack.

"Aaaarght....shit!!!"

"Tomohiko don't swear." Kojiro said

"WTH!! Its not the time kojiro. The wave shaking the ship. We gotta to hold on."

"Capt, could u handle the air?"

"I can't its to strong I couldn't handle it."

The wind flow so strong and could break a tree. the thunder also getting fierce.

"Tsk....DAMN!!!there is a hole in the canon room." Shii told them.

"Shun, Saka go there and cover the hole."

"Aye....aye....capt."

"Kojiro, mii-kun use your magic to protect the ship."

"Right a way capt."

"Ooowgh DAMN!! The wave is approaching."

"Grrooooaaaaaa~"


"HANG ON GUYS!!!!!!"


"Daaaaaaamnnnnnn!!!!"


"Whoooaaaaaa~"



Suddenly, everything turn black.



TBC~

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the arrival is soooooooooooooooon~  :on drink: :on drink:

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 7 part 3" 30-6
« Reply #39 on: June 30, 2011, 11:52:22 AM »
STORM BREAK OUT
watch out JphipsTerz!!!!

Angle Land here we gooo!

ahuhu i miss my char T_T

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