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Flean

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 10" 2-7
« Reply #60 on: July 02, 2011, 11:37:11 AM »
poor sayaka~~ :smhid :smhid

BATTLE???  :shocked :O :shocked

daddiee will update soooonnn~~~ :lol: :lol:

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 10" 2-7
« Reply #61 on: July 02, 2011, 11:58:16 AM »
wow going great!! :twothumbs

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 10" 2-7
« Reply #62 on: July 02, 2011, 03:12:13 PM »
SUPERB!!! You are updating so fast YAY!! Hahahaha! Reading ur story really makes me feel like writing one of my own maybe i should give it a try too  :glasses: :glasses:

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 10" 2-7
« Reply #63 on: July 02, 2011, 03:28:41 PM »
SUPERB!!! You are updating so fast YAY!! Hahahaha! Reading ur story really makes me feel like writing one of my own maybe i should give it a try too  :glasses: :glasses:

Maybe you should write it too..  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

then, more fic to read!!! YEAY!!!  :cow: :cow:

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 10" 2-7
« Reply #64 on: July 02, 2011, 03:36:47 PM »
sou sou!!! :yep:

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 10" 2-7
« Reply #65 on: July 03, 2011, 02:17:49 AM »
thanks for readiiiing guuuuuuuuy~  :mon firecrack: :mon firecrack: ureshiiiiii~  :farofflook:

now I'll update for the next scene.... what will happen???  :shocked :shocked guess  :grin: :grin:

and jehovachiabi u should write toooooo~  :mon inluv: :mon inluv:


now lets get moving~  :mon santa4: :mon santa4:

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Chapter 10 part 2 : Love and War
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Saka POV
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"Don't do this!!!"

"But I have too, this the only way!!!"

"I won't leave you here. Come with me!!"

"No!! Please understand. This is already my duty."

"I don't care!!!! I love u!!!"

"Look at me?!We will meet again!! In the next life!!! I will find you. I love u."


"Uwaaaaaagh?!" I awake and my body already sweaty. 'What was that dream. Who the hell that female priest?'

I got up and as I see its still dark outside.

'That dream, I feel so familiar. Could it be my past life?'

I go out my room and just walking around the Lord Council small garden.

'That dream so real.'

I close my eyes and suddenly there is someone calling me.

"Saka san? Is that you?" I open my eyes and search where that voice come from.

"Owgh, miss Rie, sorry for disturb you." I said as bowing to her.

"No...no...its find. U aren't disturbing me and please just call me Rie." She said to me and even it still dark I could see her smile. 'Oh my why my heart beating so fast as I look at her.'

"Ah, okay then, just call me saka." Rie smile and then approach me.

"So, why u haven't slept yet?" I ask her as smiling to her.

She just smile and then stare at the moon "well, I'm the priest so I gotta check up everything before I sleep."

"Woow, what a big responsibility." I said to her and she just chuckle.

"Well yeah, anyway! Did u believe in reincarnation?" She suddenly ask me. I wonder why she ask me that.

"Uhm....I don't know, maybe yes and maybe no." I reply her. Suddenly I could feel that her hand cupped my cheek and make my face look at her

"Well, I do believe in that." As she said that something happen to me. I feel I got back to the past and there I look a priest and a knight.

"Don't do this!!!" The knight said as grab the priest hand

"But I have too, this the only way!!!" The priest try to release from the knight tight grip

"I won't leave you here. Come with me!!"

"No!! Please understand. This is already my duty."

"I don't care!!!! I love u!!!" The knight shout

"Look at me?!" The priest cherish the knight cheek. "We will meet again!! In the next life!I will find you. I love u." The priest told the knight.


I try to get closer to see their face clearly and I got shock when I see it.the priest... She is Rie and the knight is.....


'Me'


After that scene I got back to reality and realize that I'm in my bed. 'OMG, what happen?' I look around and try to gather my consciousness.

'Its true, that vision is my past.' I look at the bracelet in my arm ' Rie, finally we meet again?! '

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I got up and hurry get change prepare for the meeting. I headed directly to the Main Hall to meet the Lords and the others. As I walking pass the garden. My step stop. I look at the young priest there. 'I gotta talk to her after the meeting.' I then continue to the Main Hall.

As I arrive there everyone already gather and the meeting start.

"So, what will we do now?" Shun ask for the command.

"Okay, nobuhiro will arrive around a week from now, so I'll gonna split u guys." Lord maeda said

"We have 4 gate here, south, east, west and north. Takamina and me will cover the south gate, kojiro and mii go with lord oshima and shinoda to the west gate. shun watch the east gate with lord kashiwagi whether jun and tomohiko u keep an eye to the north gate and last saka u protect the Lord Council where the core of the island with priest Rie."

I surprise at what lord maeda order but glad that I will be beside her. I won't the past repeat.after that we prepare at our each post and leave the main hall.

As I leave the main hall I try to looking for Rie. I search every where and finally I meet her at the back yard in Lords Council. She just stand there and close her eyes. I approach her and then wrap my hand around her.

"I found you!" I said as hug her from back feel every scent of her.

"Yeah, u find me?!" She said as rested her head to my cheek.

"I miss you?!"

"Me too, I thought u have forget about me."

"I won't forget you, I already remember everything. I won't let that happen again. I'll be beside you." I said as tighten my embrace to her.

She pull out from my embrace and cherish my cheek.

"Let's face this together!" I then hold her hand that cherish my cheek. Feeling her smooth skin.

I then kiss her and hug her "yeah, we can do this. As long as u beside me I can do anything."

"I love you."

"I love u more."

In there I already make a vow, I won't let anything happen to her and everyone that I care around me. I will protect them.

end of saka POV

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Jun POV
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After the meeting me headed to watanabe palace whether tomohiko go with lords kasai to his palace. I follow lord watanabe and go to his library. As I arrive there I take some book and began to read. As I read I don't realize around me. I'm busy with my own world. *sigh that's one of my bad habits.

While I reading then I feel a hand cover my eyes.

"Who am I?" That what I could hear. I smile and reach the hand of the person and remove them gently.

"Who else except my cute princess." I finally can see her.

She then sit in my lap and our forehead touch each other.

"I miss my prince."

"I miss my princess too." We stay like that for a moment. Then we pull back and smile to each other.

"I heard u will guard the gate with dad."

"Yeah, that's right!" I can see her concern in her eyes.

"Please be careful and take care." Mayu said as give me short light kiss.

I then hug her and buried my face in her neck "I will, don't worry. I'll protect u my princess."

Suddenly someone knock at the door.

"Jun san, Lord Watanabe called." the guard said

"I'll coming right away."

"Thank you and is princess mayu there too? Lord watanabe also wanna meet her. He is waiting in the north gate."

"Yeah, we'll go there right away." after that mayu get up from my lap and walk out the library hand by hand to meet lord watanabe.

as we arrive in the north gate I see Lord Watanabe is talking to someone. Lord watanabe call us and we approach them.

"Mayu, Jun come here. I would like u to meet someone."

I come and when the person turn around me and mayu. I frowned.



I know that face~




TBC

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 :panic: :panic: :panic: getting complicateeeeeed~  :panic: :panic: :panic:

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 10 part 2" 3-7
« Reply #66 on: July 03, 2011, 02:25:25 AM »
Waaaae who's that someone!!! such a teaser  XD

OHHH SAKA has a partner!!! btw who's Rie O_O

mayuxjun   :inlove:

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 10 part 2" 3-7
« Reply #67 on: July 03, 2011, 03:18:18 AM »
SakaxRie!!!! :twothumbs :twothumbs

who's that someone???  :banghead: Update Soon!!!

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 10 part 2" 3-7
« Reply #68 on: July 03, 2011, 04:57:46 AM »
i guess i will write one  :peace: but for now i will need some inspiration~ :cool1: I'm gonna read other fanfics before starting my own one xD hoho looking forward to your next chapter  :whistle:

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 10 part 2" 3-7
« Reply #69 on: July 03, 2011, 05:02:57 PM »
 :lol: :lol: :lol: as I told u mom, I'm not a teaser.  :grin: :grin: :grin: just a bit  XD XD

anyways Rie there is kitahara rie.  :grin: :grin: :grin:

and jehovachiabi i'll be waiting for your fanfict. make lots of taka acchan okay....  :thumbsup :thumbsup

now lets moving.....  :panic: :panic: :panic:


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Chapter 10 part 3 : Love and War
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Jun POV
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"You!!!" My jaw down as I see her

"Matsui Rena desu." She said as smiling to me and mayu.

"Watanabe mayu desu."

I hurry jump and hug her "Rena chaaaaaaaan!!!! How are u? I really glad I can meet you."

"Jurina-chan, I'm happy I meet u too. We've been worried to u."

"Ah, gomen. But u know what happen rena. And please call me jun. its have to."

"Hahaha, seems u two already close. Good then, rena will help us. She right away go here as I told her about u jun." Lord watanabe said.

I happy and keep talking to rena then I realize I already do something wrong.

"Uhm.... I guess I better go now father."

"Eh? Mayu? Where are u going?" I try to catch up with her and hold her.

"Better u go back there." She said as pout to me and leave me.

I back to rena and lord watanabe "what happen to her."

"Haha, jun I guess someone is jealous. U better catch her now."

"Eh? Jealous? But I only talk with u." I said confusely to rena.

"Well, jun, u know one thing? My daughter is a jealous person u should know about it." Lord watanabe said as giggle.

"Yeah, its me. But she don't know who am I."

"Aaaaaaaa, I doom. My princess mad at me." I said as scratching my hair.

"Ahahaha, don't worry, everything would find. I bet she is at her room now. Better u see her." Lord watanabe suggest me.

I then excuse my self and headed to her room.

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Mayu Room
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The maid show me my princess room and as I got there I try to knock it.

*knoc...knock....

"Mayu, may I come in?" I ask her but no answer. I then just open the door and watch my princess stand in the balcony. I approach her and call her.

"Mayu, what's wrong?" Still no reply from her.

"*sigh I just go then. I'm sorry." I said as trying to walk to the door but suddenly I could feel she hug me from back.I turn around and hug her back.

"I'm sorry that I kind a forget about u before but u know, rena is the only family that I got now. She is my cousin. I happy seeing her. Don't be jealous."

"I'm not jealous." Finally I could hear voice. Somehow its cute looking her jealous like this.

"Yeaaaah, right." I began to tease her and as she pull out from the hug I could see her smile.

"U only belong to me my pirate prince." She said as pinch my nose.

"Ouch...ouch...ouch... Sorry, sorry I'm sorry for making u jealous." She release the pinch and look at me "that's your punishment."

Seing her pout again I decided to tease her.

"Oookay, then.... This is my punishment to my princess then."

"Ahahaha, jun stop it. Its tickle."

Yeah, I tickle her and suddenly we lose our balance and fall into her bed. I'm on her top now. I look at her and I can see her loving eyes.

'Oh my!! She is so beautiful.'

"Listen mayu, u are the only that I love , I never gonna leave u. So don't be jealous again okay." I said as trying to hiding my blush.

"Yeah, I know that. I love u too." She said as wrap her hand around my neck and hug me.

As she pull out from the hug I get closer to her and without realize our lips already touch each other. I kiss her passionately and she kisses me back. I can feel all of her scent and passion. Her hand still wrap around my neck, suddenly she deepened the kiss. Her hand tracing from my neck to my shirt and I could feel she already unbutton the first button in my shirt. Then after that I begin to kiss her neck but suddenly we heard a knock on the door.

"Princess, is jun san there?lord watanabe call." The guard call.

I sigh and look at her, she just chuckle "I'm here, I'll catch up later." I said with a irritate tone. And finally the guard gone.

"Sigh, why should they disturb our good moment." I said as giving a pout expression.

Mayu then cup my cheek and cherish it "its okay, we can continue later. Now just go!" As she said that I back snuggle to her and buried my face in her neck.

"Yadaaaaa~ I wanna be with my princess now."

She just chuckling and push me "lateeeeer~ now go."

"But I'm a mess coz of u." I grin to her and I could see her blush.

she then approach me and help me to button my shirt. "There its fixed."

I smile and hug her again "I'll be back."

"I'll be waiting." She said as place a light short kiss on my cheek.

I leave her and then meet lord watanabe.


end of Jun POV


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Kojiro POV
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I mii-kun is in charge to protect the west gate with lord oshima and shinoda. so after the meeting they headed to the west gate. we look at the situation there. still havent got any sight of nobuhiro. so I go to Lord oshima private libary with mii-kun to find some information and make a strategy.

I search the book that might be useful to me and learn a kind of new magic since there are a lot of magic book there. I sit in the desk try to started reading while I could see mii-kun now doing his regular meditation at the library balcony. as I read I feel someone is watching over me. I think its only my feeling but suddenly that squirrel bump into me and cling to me.

"Nyan nyaaaaaaaaan~" she directly hold and hug me

"Moooooaaaaa, yuu-chan stop that. I'm busy here." I said as trying to let go my self from her. well, actually I like her but I'm not that typical person that could show my feeling.

I struggle and finally can let go my self from her and I look she pout. Now I feel guilty.

"Dont pout, U look ugly like that!" I said as keep reading. then I can feel she come closer and rest her head in my shoulder

"ne, what are you reading nyan nyan?" she ask me with a cute tone. to be honest she is totally cute.

"uhm.... kind of magic book." I said coldly.

"owgh, u are a magician. sugoooiiiii!!! I also can do some magic but I'm not allowed to use it."

"so dont use it. I dont want something happen when u use it.'

"heeeee?! nyan nyan hidoiiiiii!! but its ok. coz I got nyan nyan now that will protect me." she said as whispered to my ear.

"yeah whatever." OMG I could hear and feel her soft breathe.

suddenly there is a silence and I wonder why she can still stand sitting here with me that ignore her.

"ne, yuu-chan can I ask you something?" I said as closing my book.

"yeah of course anything. what is it?" she said so amuse.

"well, since when u like me?" she kind a surprise when hearing it but then answer it with joy.

"since the first time we met of course."

"heeee??? that long?" I frowned. how come she can love a person only in one sight.

"yeaaaaaah, and I still like you until now and forever no matter what happen."

"so, why u like me then?"

she silence but then cherish my cheek. I kind a shiver in her action but try to stay calm

"Its because I love nyan nyan. I like everything about you and I dont mind to be rejected by u so many times. as long as I can be with u its enough for me." I look deep into her eyes and I couldnt denied anymore that I also Like her. I love her smile and everything about her.

"Ah souka!!" I said as pull out from her embrace.

there is another silence but then I move my sight to the book I read. I open it and lift up the book with my right hand so it cover my face.

"Ne yuu-chan." I call her and she move her face to me.

"yeaahuhmmmp..."

Then my left hand automatically grab her chin and make her face closer to me and I kiss her. I maybe always reject her but deep into my heart I love her. Now I cant handle it again and I already make a decision that I wont deny it. At the first she surprise with my action but then kiss me back. and there we kiss for the first time as covered by book. Our kiss then begin more deeply and passionately but we should broke the kiss coz needed of air.

after we pull out from the kiss our forehead touched and I confess to her "I'm sorry if I have hurt u so much by rejecting u but the truth I just afraid and I totally Love U too. will u give me another chance?" I close my eyes, waiting for her reply and then finally she answer

"I wont give u any chance." I heard it and I feel my heart hurt but I deserve to get it. But suddenly she continue her sentence

"I wont give u a chance to leave me. Stay always beside me." OMG , I feel really relieve as hearing it.

I hug and embrace as whispered in her ear "I wont leave u and I promise I will protect you no matter happen."

then we stay like that for a moment.


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Meanwhile in the other place near the library
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A young princess only stand from afar behind the trees and look at the balcony. there is mii-kun still doing his meditation.



'*sigh I dont know how u feel towards me but I guess I feel something to you.'



the princess then walk slowly so the younger magician cant notice her.

but, the princess wrong. she dont know that the younger magician could read people mind and feel someone even if its far from him.


after the older princess leave the younger magician grin





'I gotcha you mari-chan.'





TBC~



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sooooooooooooo dooouuuuu?????  :huhuh :huhuh :huhuh should I make takamina, tomohiko and shun POV toooo????  8) 8) 8)

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 10 part 3" 3-7
« Reply #70 on: July 03, 2011, 05:13:10 PM »
SEEE TEASER  :lol:

trololol yeah yeha make their POV's also xD

oh so Rena's the cousin eh ,jealous mayu kawaiii!!

way to go harunyan!!!

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 10 part 3" 3-7
« Reply #71 on: July 03, 2011, 05:36:54 PM »
hahahaha... i like this part!!! want more POV!!! :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

JunMayu are just~~   :wriggly:   the guard!!!   :on voodoo:

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 10 part 3" 3-7
« Reply #72 on: July 04, 2011, 05:37:51 PM »
 :lol: :lol: better u smack the guard then dad....  :rofl: :rofl:

anyway, mooooooms i'm not a teaser....  :grin: :grin: :grin:

and now already part 4  :shocked :shocked :shocked i cant believe it  XD XD XD

well, lets get started....  :grin: :grin:


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Chapter 10 part 4 : Love and War
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Shun POV
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After the meeting and I hear that I'll be cooperated with lord kashiwagi somehow I feel happy. Well to be honest in that condition I could also meet yuki.

I know I should separate between love and battle but every time I see her I feel my heart is so calm. I vow I'll be protect her no matter what happen. Even it will take my live I'll be glad as long as she okay.

After looking the condition and situation with lord kashiwagi, he invite me to come to his palace. In there we have a long conversation. I could see yuki is passing the room that I and lor kashiwagi have a chat. I wish I could meet her.

After 2 hours nonstop talking and drinking , finally lord kashiwaki excuse him self and let me to have a walk in his palace. Finally I have a chance to meet her again.

I ask keichan her personal maid where she is and The maid said that she is in the kashiwagi back garden. I hurry go to where yuki is.

As I arrive there I could see she is sitting near the pool. She deep half of her feet to the pool and playing with the water there. I approach her and call her.

"Hmmm...uhm.... Hi there yuki. May I join?"

She look at me and hurry give me a gentle smile.

"Sure! Come and join me."

I hurry join her and sit beside her and star the conversation.

"Woow, the view really beautiful here."

"Ah, yeah. I usually come here but Its more fun when watch it together with someone special." She said and it make my heart beating so fast.

"Owgh, so I'm someone special then." I said as grin to her.

"Uhm.....not too. I have watch it with other person."

"Eeeeeh??!! Who?"

"Uhm..... Someone that I love the most."

Okay, hearing that I feel my heart broke.

"Its with my parent."

Great, she try to make me.and I could hear her giggle.

"U really cute when u are jealous shun." She said as clinging and rest her head to me.

"Well, uhm.... Since I...I...I like you and you are the person that I love the most I think its already suppose to." I said in shutter and it make her chuckling.

"Heeee??? Why are you chuckling? I mean it." I said as pout to her.

Suddenly see cup my cheek and make me look at her.

"I have waited for long to meet u shun. I love u too." I look directly to her eyes and I know its the truth.

"Thank u. I promise I'll be always beside u and protect u yuki. I won't let u get hurt." I said as cherish her smooth face.

"So, let's go back to the palace." I said to her but as I wanna stand I got slipped and got into the pool.

"Woooooaaaaaaah~"

"Shu....shun....careful~"

And then all my body wet coz of the water then I hear her laughing.

"Ahahahaha, shun. U should be careful"

"Owgh come on don't laugh princess. But by the way the water is so good. Join me here yuki." I said to her in genki tone.

"Mooooooee, shun get in now. Its almost night and it cold."

"One more minutes yuki."

I said to her and I could see she is pouting.

"Okay...okay....I'll up now. Give me your hand help me." As she give her hand to me something across my mind. I reach it and as I grip it I grin.

"Come on shun hurry up."

Then suddenly I pull her so she also got into the pool.

"Moooooooeeee shuuuun.... Look what have u done. I also get wet." She said as trying to hit me.

"Ahahahaha, okay...okay....I'm sorry. Okay?!" I said as embracing her.

Soon I could see her smile appear and my hand move by it self. I cherish her soft cheek and make her face closer to me. I could see she start to close her eyes and we kiss. Our kiss is soo passionately. I could feel her hand now wrap around my neck whether my hand wrap around her tiny waist. Our kiss more intense and somehow we both could feel we already drown together in the pool as sharing a lovely kiss.


end of shun POV


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Tomohiko POV
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I and Jun have a duty to watch over from the north gate with lord watanabe and lord kasai. Right away after the meeting I and jun  go to the north gate. We check the condition in there. Suddenly Jun excuse him self whether I still watch over.

I pay my attention to the scene around me. Stay in guard and make sure everything is okay. Suddenly I surprise by a sudden hug.

"GOTCHA CHIYUUUUUUU~"

"WHOOOAAAAA~ princess don't surprise me like that." I said as trying to release my self from her hug.

"Hehehehe.... I miss tomochin...." She said as buried her face in my back.

"Prin...princess... Don't hug me like this. Everyone is looking at us." She pull out from the hug and pout at me

"Mooooeeee, don't call me princess. Call me tomo." She said as give me a puppy eyes. Gosh, she is so cute.

I can't resist that look "*sigh okay, tomo then. What do u want tomo?"

"Neeee, tomochin, let's accompany me to somewhere place." She said as holding my hand.

"But I have to watch over the situation here."

"Please....please....pleaseee...just this once."

I face palm "okay, but I gotta excuse to lord kasai first."

"Its okay I have told him." She said as grab my hand and drag me with her.

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She takes me to the wide open yard. I could see lots of horses there.

"Neeee, tomochin do u like horse?" She ask me as approaching one of the horse there.

"uhm.....not bad, I have learn how to ride it. Could u ride a horse?"

"Hmm..... I can't. I not allowed. So I just come here to play with them."

I look at her and smile "wanna ride with me?"

She surprise but then jumping happily and kiss my cheek. The kiss make me blush and then I help her to got up to the horse first after that I follow. Now she is sitting in front of me. I in charge in controlling the horse.

We ride in a fast pace at the first. I could see she is so exciting.

"Waaaaa~ its so tanoshiiiiii~"

"Ahahaha, this is for your first time in riding a horse?"

"yeaaah....."

"Alright then, let's move faster, hang on princess."

I faster the pace and then after a couple of minutes wondering the yard we move in the slow pace.

She suddenly rest her head in my chest.

"Tomochin..." She calls me so gently

"Umm? What is it?"

she just tighten her grip to my body "nothing."

"Are you tired? Let's take a rest for a while." I suggest to her and she nodded.

We find a nice place to take a rest and get off from the horse. After that we lay on the grass. She move closer and snuggle to me as buried her face in my neck. We keep like that until without we recognize it we fall a sleep.

time passed and suddenly I feel the weight on my body disappear slowly. I miss her touch. but the there is a sudden shock I can feel. Suddenly I could feel something so smooth pressed my lips. I try to open my eyes and greet by an angle smile.

"ah, sorry for waking u up."

"uhm?its ok, no problem. a...a...anyway, did u just...." I ask with a shutter tone

"hmm, yeah. are u mad at me?" I could see the sadness in her eyes

"uhm.... why would I mad at you anyway?"

she then look down and speak with a weak rhythm "hmmm... coz I suddenly kiss u while u are sleeping."

I just chuckle and the lift up her face and give her a short deep kiss. "I wont mad at you tomo. Never would I."

"I love u." she said as hug me tightly

"I love u too tomo." I said as embrace her.

"Ne, tomochin?"

"Yeah? what is it?"

"Will u promise something??"

I nodded and she tighten her grip a round me "Dont ever leave me."

"I wont, I'll beside u and protect u."

"and promise me that we will ride a horse again after the war."

I kiss her forehead and rest my head in her's "I promise."



end of Tomohiko POV


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Takamina POV
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after the meeting I hurry to the south gate and watch over there with lord maeda and we have a short conversation.

"so, seems that u and my daughter already known each other." he said as smiling to me.

"yeah. first time I meet her was when she was visiting Calm Land."

"Ah, I see. I guess its already destiny u meet her again now. u like her?"

"uhm....errrr....hmm.....ye...yeah!" I said as blush. Somehow I feel like I'm being interrogate by future father in law

"hahahahahaha, u are so funny takamina." I feel so embarrass now.

he then approach me and put both of his hand in my shoulder "well, I trust u takamina. please take care of my daughter."

after he said that suddenly atsuko come and he excuse himself "well, I guess I gotta go now."

atsuko approach me and stand beside me "soooo, what are u guys talking about?"

"uhm..... nothing much. Just to get know each other with my future father in law." I said and I could see her blush.

"we...we...well, please be patient with my dad. he like to tease." we both then giggle.

suddenly she come closer and wrap her hand around my neck and hug me.

"U gotta remember your promise to me."

"sure, I will atsuko. but anyway, after this all finish will u go on sail with me? I'll bring you to a beautiful place around the world."

"really???? I want to." she then hug and kiss me. I really like looking her so cheerful like this.

we keep embrace each other until suddenly something approaching. through the gate.

I hurry take my scoop and look it and I frowned as I look what I see.



' NO!!!! Its Impossible~ '




TBC

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so dou guuuuys....????  :? :? and sorry for the late update, from now I cant update fast, my short semester is started...  :panic: :panic: :panic:

but I'll do my best to update.... I hope u like this....  :grin: happy readiiiiiiiiiing~  :cow: :cow: :cow:

Offline nyaha00

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 10 part 4" 4-7
« Reply #73 on: July 04, 2011, 05:46:53 PM »
gaaaah i feel so itchy so cheesy  XD

yay more POV!!!!

waaaaa who's approaching  :banghead:

the enemies O_O? or ....

teaser sora nice job!

me want update  :yep:

Flean

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 10 part 4" 4-7
« Reply #74 on: July 04, 2011, 05:51:13 PM »
enemy approaching?? :shocked :shocked

get ready for battle!!!!  :scolding:

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 10 part 4" 4-7
« Reply #75 on: July 04, 2011, 10:54:59 PM »
nice POV's  :twothumbs

So the war is near  :shocked

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 10 part 4" 4-7
« Reply #76 on: July 08, 2011, 01:06:56 PM »
I like the OPV ^^
Sayaka and priest Kitarie ? Interesting

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 10 part 4" 4-7
« Reply #77 on: July 08, 2011, 03:42:24 PM »
thanks for reading guys.... and sorry for the late update...  :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop:

now just move in....  :panic: :panic:

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Chapter 11 : Sudden Attack
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takamina POV
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What? No!!! Its impossible! I try not to believe it but they are there.

Nibuhiro's army!

"Takamina what's wrong?" Atsuko grab my arm and ask in a worried tone.

"Atsuko!!! Its not good. U go back to the palace right now!" I hold her hand and look directly into her eyes.

"ANGY!!!! GET ATSUKO BACK TO THE PALACE AND THE OTHER TOLD ALL THE LORD IN THE EACH GATE TO BE READY!!!ENEMY APPROACHING!!!"

"Takamina noooo, I don't wanna go back?!"

"Atsuko, listen to me! The enemy is approaching. U have to be in the save place. I won't let u get hurt."

"But...but....buthmpp..." I grab her hand, make her closer to me and sealed her words with my short deep kiss.

I pull out from the kiss and look directly to her eyes "Listen, atsuko?! I'll be fine. Now go back to palace."

She give me a short kiss on my cheek "promise me?!and be careful."

"I will my princess. Now go?!" She nodded and leave with angy back to the palace.

"GUYS, IN YOUR POSITION!!"

"YES SIR!!"

Me , Lord Maeda and the other guard prepare for the attack and suddenly from the ocean and the sky nobuhiro army come out and attack up.

"CHAAAAAARGEEEEE!!!!!"

As lord maeda said it we begin our war. Nobuhiro's armies attack from each direction east,west,south and north.

The army keep coming. I slice them with my sword and try to avoid their attack and defend.

Suddenly I heard a scream.

"Argh.... DAMN!!" Lord maeda got hit by the soldier.

"My Lord, are you okay?" I approach him as gone through the attack that directed to me.

"DAMN!! They got me!!"

"My lord just go back to the palace. I'll take care of this."

"Are u sure?"

I nod and he right away go to back to the palace to treat his wound.

"Aarghh, why this seem unlimited."

Keep swinging my sword and suddenly I see a plane in the sky and drop a bom to the 'Lord council.'

"DAMN!!! SAKAAAA!!!"


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Saka POV
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"ARGH!! WHAT WAS THAT?!"

"Its a bom!!!"

"Tsk, great they do an ambush."

"What should we do now Saka san?"

"Go out and look the situation. Don't let anyone gone through."

"YES SIR!"

The guard go leave me alone with rie. We are at the priest room where some kind magic ceremony held. I've been ordered to be here and guard here. Everything was find before but now its a riot. Nobuhiro do an ambush and one of his air army attack the lord council with a bom. Luckily the room where I and rie are not got hit.

"Rie, what are u doing now?"

"I try to strengthen the magic barrier."

Suddenly one more bom is released and it almost hit where the place I stand.

"DAMN?!!!!" I look at rie, she still doing the ceremony. I approach and grab her. Ask her to leave the place.

"Rie, leave it, we gotta go from here."

"No, I can't saka. I'm the priest. Its my job to protect this place. If u wanna go just go. Leave me here." I angry at what she said to me.

Soon without thinking I grab her and lift her up.

"Wa...wa....wait....saka, what are u doing let me down." She struggle in my hold but I just ignore her and take her out right away from the lord council.

"RIEEEEEE?!" I shout to her and it maker calm down.

"I have made a mistake in past by leaving you alone. Now , I'm not gonna do the same thing."

I hurry run out and dash through the nobuhiro army and get rie to the save place.


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Takamina POV
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I keep swinging my sword and slay all nobuhiro army. Finally we made it to take care of the army but suddenly a voice catch my attention.



"KYAAAAAAAAA!! LET ME GOOOO!!!!"



"ATSUKOOOOO!!!!!"




TBC

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 :panic: :panic: :panic: sorry guys , i know this is short.... i make it longer the next chap..

and anyway.... i'm gonna finish this sooon....  :grin: :grin: :grin:

Flean

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 11" 8-7
« Reply #78 on: July 08, 2011, 03:53:56 PM »
DAMN THAT NOBUHIRO!!!!! :angry:         Takamina~~ save Acchan!!!!  :panic: :panic:

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 11" 8-7
« Reply #79 on: July 08, 2011, 06:35:43 PM »
 :panic:  acchan!!! :banghead:

takamina save her!!!
Still shipping them early pairs. 1st generation ftw!

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