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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 11" 8-7
« Reply #80 on: July 08, 2011, 09:26:51 PM »
Who did dare touch at Acchan?!!!! Takamima kill them!!!

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 11" 8-7
« Reply #81 on: July 17, 2011, 04:04:17 AM »
okay guuuuuuys sorry for the late update....  :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: been really busy recently.  :( :(

nooooooow, let's get started the next chapter  :thumbsup :thumbsup


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Chapter 12 : Love And Peace
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"ATSUKOOOOOO!!!!" Takamina shout and hurry go to where atsuko now.

Now he and the other JhipsTers gather in the middle of the Lord Council. As they arrive there, they could see the Lord and the guard already laying in the ground faint whether they see a man and his personal guard now holding the 6 princesses.

"Ahahahaha, surprise eh!!!"

"YOU!!! LET GO THE PRINCESS NOW!" Takamina said as pointed to the man.

"Aaaah....u must be that taka guy child. U really resemble to your father. Hahahaha... And seems u remember me don't u." He grin and it really irritate the JhipsTerz.

"Hmph, how could we forgot u nobuhiro. U'll pay for what u have done to Calm Land." Kojiro said as clinch his fist.

"Don't u dare do anything to the princesses." Mii-kun said as trying to attack nobuhiro with his magic but nobuhiro reflex it and luckily mii kan avoid it.

"Tsk DAMN!!!"

"Hahaha, u wanna the princesses u gotta get me. Ahahaahaah.." Nobuhiro gone through the portal and then disappear.

"DONT U TRY TO RUN AWAY!!!"

But its to late coz nobuhiro already vanish from their sight.

"Damn!!! Now what should we do?" Shun feel uneasy.

"Ano..." Suddenly Rie approach them.

"Rie, are u okay?" Saka come and approach rie.

"I'm fine. Ano, I think we better hurry to save the princess coz tomorrow is the half moon. Princesses power will be active."

"What? Great, now what?" Tomohiko said as keep thinking.

"Our power now can't compare to him." Mii said.

"Wait guys?! I know what we could do." Kojiro turn the page on his book

"Here, based on the book that we found in calm land. All the power of our ancestors are kept in the secret room that we found. We better go now. "

"But how?" Jun ask as give a confuse look.

"Well, I can open the portal to the secret passage as long as u got something that belong from there." Rie offer and help.

"That's great, we have that book from secret room. So it could be use. we prepare everything and tomorrow we will confront nobuhiro." Mii said as pointed his finger to air.

"Yosh, so is set now, we back to the secret room whether Rie will handle in here. Could u rie?" Takamina said looking to rie.

"Don't worry takamina san. I'll take care of all here. I'll help u open the portal." All the member are nod and soon rie use her magic to open the portal.

As the portal opened the 7 knight got into the portal and prepare for the battle.


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Secret Room
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"Well, how is it kojiro?" I ask him and he begin to read the book again.

"Uhm....based on the book uncle taka and the other lord kept the special weapon in....." Kojiro pull one of the book from the bookshelf "heeeere...."

As he pull it out there is a small room and when he open it there is a bag. He take it out and open it.

"Here it is guys, the sacred bracelet." He gave it to each of us and then something happen.

"Whoooaaaa...."

"Aaaarghht....what this light..."

"I don't knooooow...."

Soon we all already transform into a knight mode. We wear a golden armor.

"Wooooow, cool." Shun said as trying to get used to the armor.

"Haha, not only that guys." Kojiro pull out another book and another secret weapon shelf appear.

I got a golden phoenix sword, kojiro and mii hold an angle staff. Both saka and shun grabs the twin dragon spears. Tomohiko get his eagle gold bow and arrow whether Jun hold the griffen nunchaku.

"Maaaaan, this is awsome man." Shun shout as trying his weapon.

"Okay guys, let's get back and prepare for the attack."

"OOOOOSUUUUUU!!!!!"

We all then got back to portal and ask Rie to send us to the nobuhiro palace.

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Nobuhiro Palace
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The princesses are being tied up in a 6 pilars.

"My...my....oh my....u all beautiful princesses. Soon u'll be mine." He grab one of the princesses chin and lift her face up.

"NEVER!!!!"

"Whooow....whoooow....whooow.....calm down princess."

"Why u do this? First u attack calm land and now Angle Land."

"Huh? Isn't  it obvious? I wanna to take over the world and your power, I need it."

"Cih, I never want give our power to u." The princess split into nobuhiro face.

"YOUUUUU...." As nobuhiro gonna hit her the guard come.

"MY LOOOOOORD....hosh..hosh...there....there is attack."

"WHAT?!

"Ye...ye...yes sir there is an ambush. They said they gonna save the princess.they are the Calm Knights." The guard stutter.

"Grrrrr....damn. I gotta to prepare everything faster. Where is my personal adviser?"

"Yes my lord?"

"We go to the temple and start the ceremony now."

"Right away sir." The adviser leave and headed to the temple.

'I'll be waiting for u kiddo.'

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Nobuhiro front gate
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"Tsk....why they keep coming." Takamina says as thrust his sword to the guard.

"FIRAGA!!!!!" Kojiro burn all the army with his magic

"I wonder they keep the princesses....." Tomohiko use his bow to shoot the army that attact from the roof.

"Arrrght.... its annoyed, mii try to find out where are the princesses using your mind skill. "

"Yeah, shun right. We'll protect u."

"Okay guys wait...." Mii try to focus and use his mind skill. Suddenly he shout

"DAMN IT!!!!they already been taken to the temple. We gotta hurry."

"Damn!!! You....." Jun take one of the guard and ask him

"Tell me where is the temple or I'll make u can't see sunrise tomorrow."

"O...o...okay....okay... The temple is in the center chamber of palace."

"Hmph....nice info." Jun then strike his nunchaku and the guard faint.

"Okay guys, we go there now." Takamina ordered. But as they wanna enter the palace a cerberus and griffen blog their way.

"Whooooaaaaa..... Not these guys." Kojiro pouts.

"What should we do now?"

As tomohiko said that suddenly there is a canon shoot from the air.

*BOOOOOOOM

"Whoooaaaa, what was that?" Jun look at the air and smile

"Yooooo, kiddo, gomen we all late."

"UNCLE WISNU!!!!!" They said in union

"Hahaha, don't just call capt we are here too."

"Alex , nalyn, flean n sora san."

"Hahaha, now let us settle this. U guys go inside. Hurry!!!" Capt wisnu said and then the 7 young knights headed the temple.

"Whooooaaa, they are so big capt. What should we do?" Alex said as avoid the cerberus fire breathe.

"Sora and flean use your rain spears attack and nalyn go sealed that creature."

"Aye....aye....capt."

"Yooooosh, ready sora?"

"Never been better."

"Count 3..."

"One....."

"Three...."

"ULTIMATE RAIN SPEARS ATTACK!!!!"

"BILLION OF THRUUUUUUUST~"

Suddenly billions spears attack the cerberus and in a second the cerberus down.

"In the name of the lord summon.....I sealed this creature." Nalyn said and suddenly the cerberus got sealed in a card.

"Well, everything done then." Nalyn said as pick up the card but....

"IT'S NOT DONE YEEEEEEET~"

"Whooaaaaaa, aleeeex!!!"

Alex got grab by the griffen and he flying in the air.

"Come on guys help me here... Arght....I can't take my gun."

"Hold on aleeeeex."

As nalyn wanna cast a spell suddenly there is a knife thrust the griffen.

"Haaaaiiiyaaaaa~ no one could hurt my alex."

"Ceg?!"

"Hello there." Ceg landing in the griffen back and wink to alex.

"Don't forget me ceg." Shii-chan said as thrust her sword to the griffen.

The griffen lost it balance and let it grabs from alex.

"Now its my turn, u Baka?!" Alex get her dragon gun and throw his bom to the griffen and finally the griffen got down. And again nalyn sealed it.

"Great, and that's how its done. Now let's move out guys."

"Aye...aye....captain."

Then they headed to the temple.

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at the nobuhiro temple
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Nobuhiro already absorb half of the princesses power.

"NOOOOOOOOO~" takamina shout and breakthrough the protect sealed. He slice the shield with his powerfull swords.

"ARROW RAINS!!!" Tomohiko pointed his arrow to the sky and suddenly an arrow rain attack nobuhiro. Nobuhiro lost his focus and haven't absorb fully the princess power. Jun see a chance and hit nobuhiro with nunchaku in his head. Nobuhiro down and almost lost his conscious.

The young knights take this opportunities to rescue the princesses.

Takamina hurry approach atsuko and hug her "atsuko....atsuko....are u okay?"

"Atsuko wake up." Takamina stroke atsuko hair and atsuko tighten her grip to takamina.

"Takamina, I'm scare. Don't leave me."

"Hush....hush....its okay, I'm here now."

Takamina try to calm down his princess and as atsuko already calm enough takamina let go his hug and headed to terminate nobuhiro with other members. All the princess already in a save place.

"Uurgh, hahaha, u think u can defeat me? U are wrong kiddo. I have absorb 90percent of the power now see my ultimate strength. Haahahaha..."

"Oh my Goooooood...." Mii said as looking at nobuhiro transform.

"WTH, u gotta be kidding?! He....he...."

"He change into a monster...." Kojiro said with his jaw drop.

"Ahahahahaha, now let's see how u can defeat me."

"GUYS CHAAAAARGEEEE~"

"YOSHAAAAAAAAAA~"

"CAREFUUUULL~"

They attack nobuhiro in union but its no used the get hit only by one slash from nobuhiro attack.

They keep attack him but still the same.

"Urghhh....he is so powerful...." Shun said as holding his chest to cover his pain.

"Uhuk...uhuk....urgh....I don't....know gu...guys...." Takamina said.

"Use your necklace power." Suddenly they hear a voice.

"Uncle wisnu?!"

Capt wisnu approch them and help them with his other members. "The only way to stop him is by using your stars power kids but...." Nalyn tell but in a sad tone.

"But what nalyn san???" Kojiro ask

"It could take your life." Suddenly Rie appear

"RIE!!!" saka hurry approach her and hug her.

All the knight shock and hurry look at their each princess and approach them.

Takamina approach atsuko with a gentle smile and talk to her. "No....no....don't do this takamina noo..." Atsuko said as shake her head and hug takamina tightly.

"Atsuko....listen to me..." They stare at each other and atsuko eyes soon teary.

"Everything would be fine." Takamina then kiss atsuko gently. Feel the lips that he could be never could be tasted anymore. he then break it.

"It will be alright atsuko." After saying that he approach capt wisnu and ask him what to do.

"Uncle, we ready to do it."

"Your parents must be proud of u."

"Okay, guys trap the evil monster nobuhiro in the middle. And said star knight power destroy this creature."

"Me, sora and alex will guide nobuhiro in the middle." Flean said and everyone node.

Hurry flean, alex and sora attract the monster attention and guide him to the middle the knights. As nobuhiro in the middle they hurry said

"STAR KNIGHT POWER DESTROY THIS CREATURE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

As they said that the light appear and hits Nobuhiro "What.....what is it...its huuurt...aaaa....AAAAARRGGGHHHHHTTTTT....."

Soon in a second nobuhiro vanished and the knights lie on the grown unconscious.



"NOOOOOOO~"


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Knights Under Conscious
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"Huh, what happen?" takamina ask as looking her surrounding.

"urgh my head." shun try to getup and scratch his back

"are u okay guys??" takamina help the other to getup

"its okay takamina. but wait look!!" kojiro pointed a group of elder that in front of them

"wait....wait.....its impossibel...!!!" mii frowned as look at their face

"they...."

"are..."

"our parents...." saka drop her jaw and they hurry hug their parents.

"My child. U already done great. come on come with us."


"Mom, Dad." the knights begin to walk with their parents but a sudden voice stop their move.


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Nyan....nyan..... wake up... please. kojiro look yuko holding his weak body and cry


Tomochin, onegai!!! please look at me. open your eyes. U promise to teach me how to ride a horse dont u. tomohiko feel his heart ached


Shun..... Its me, please honey. wake up! yuki stroke shun hair as holding her tears


Jun....*sobs....Jun....*sobs... mayu buried her face to Jun neck and sobbing.


Baka, wake up. stop playing like this, dont die u baka, I havent told u how I feel... I.... I... I love u mii.... mii-kun only can smile look at maruko sudden confession.


Saka.....please wake up. U promise that we will together now. Please!!! Rie only can hug saka weak body and keep saying that


Takamina, wake up. please!!! Please honey!!! wake up!! u promise to take me sail with u right. wake up!! atsuko kiss takamina and hoping the little capt will wake up.


Looking at that scene the knight looka t each other and then facing their parents.


"Dad, We really love u all."

"Yeah, but we cant go with you."

"Someone is waiting for us."

"To protect the one that u love...."

"And always beside them...."

"No matter what happen."

"thats what u teach to us."



the Lords Smile and then leaving the knights. but then they said something

Always keep what we have taught u my child and teach about that to our grandchild.

"Yes dad, we will."

as the lords leave there is a light and everything turn white.


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8 Years Later
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~around the ocean~




A little girl playing with her friends


"Yeeaaaah, minako phoenix slash..." a small ponytail girl swing her wood sword in the air

"wooooow, u cant get me minako." a short hair girl tease minako

"tsk.... even u are good in long range attack I wont lose to u yue." the small girl keep attack the short hair girl

"moooo, u two, could u guys be quiet for a minute. I'm reading here." A long hair little girl with a headband protest to them

"ahahahaha, u have to concentrate more yuu-chan, like thiiiiiis..." a chubby little girl use her power to make the wood spear in yue hand flying.

"Heeeeeeey, Miko get back my wood spears." yue pout to her

"well....well....yue, seems miko need to be like this...." a little girl with a bow pointed her arrow to miko

"whooooaaaa, o...o...okaaaay.... I give it back. geez... tomo u are really mean to me." finally miko return the wood spears


"yappari, only tomo-chan could handle miko." a long hair little girl with headband said to then.


"tsk...uruseiii na~ yuna." miko pout


suddenly a figure come out and make them calm down. she is the tallest and the oldest among them

"Yoooo, guys, stop playing mom and dad calling."

"aye....ayee.... ayaaa-nee."

they go out their play room and headed the dock.

as they look at their parent they run forward in a rush to them and ask to be pickup "Daaaaadiiiiiieeee~"

"Heeeeey, there is my sweety. Fun playing with the other?" that figure pick minako up and swing her around.

"I love daddiiie...." she said as kiss her dad cheek

"So, only love daddiiie, mom broken heart here." a female figure appear and pout to minako

"Nooooo, I love mommiee too." minako said as kiss her mom.

"I love taka daddiee and atsuko mama."

"heeeee.... what about us then minako."

minako get down and stand with the other kids there.

"WE LOVE U ALL!!! HAPPY ANNIVERSARY MOOOOOM DAAAAAD, AUNT AND UNCLE!!!!!!" they said in union and their parents only look at them giggling and then begin to have their party.

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takamina POV
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well, its been 8 years since that war. We all finally can have our peace life. We all stay in the Angle Land and have a wonderful life. The most important of all that we can be together with our beloved person. I'm with atsuko, kojiro with yuko, Shun with yuki, Jun with mayu, tomohiko with tomo, saka finally together with Rie and last one mii. We cant believe that he with mariko. They always fight but they like each other actually.

Today, we are having our anniversary celebration here also with our child. They are our miracle and our precious person in our live.


"Heeeeey, dont start without us."

"Uncle wisnu, Guys!!!" uncle wisnu come with the others.

"Gramps Wisnuuuuuuu~ " minako and the other kids run toward him and hug him


"Heeeey, all my granddaughter already grown up." uncle wisnu pick them one by one

"yooo, kids, gramps already old dont ask him to pick up u one by one." mii chuckle

"hahaha, its ok mii. soo here listen to gramps what do u want to do when u are grown up." as hearing uncle wisnu minako and the other grab their each weapon and pointed it to the air

"WE ARE THE KING OF THE OCEAN"

we all laughing and suddenly I feel atsuko hug me from behind

"looks what your daughter do takamina."

"hahaha, she is yours too honey." I said as hold her hand

"she is totally look like u." atsuko said as tease me

"naaaaaah, she is as cute as u atsuko." I said as rested my forehead in her.

"Dont leave us takamina."

"I wont." after I saying that I kiss atsuko and heard our daughter foot step approach us

"ooooowwwww... mom dad, if u wanna lovely dovely please not in front of us." minako said and both atsuko and I blushed.

I pick up minako and smile to her "Well, If we dont lovely dovely U wont be here." mii said and got a hit on his head by mariko

"oouuuch, what was that for??" he pout to mariko

"dont said something that could make a kid thing something."

"geezz.... I wonder now why I could marry this old lady." mii said and then mariko grin to him

"it because u love me." mariko said and mii-kun face redden.


"mooooo..... nyan...nyan..... skinship....skinship....dont loose to them.."

"gwaaaaah, yuko kids are around would u stop that." kojiro try struggle from yuko hug.


"ne, yuu-chan is your parent always like that."

"yes indeed they are."


we all laughing and enjoy the peace time we have.



FIN~

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alright guuuuuuys...... how is it.....???  :panic: :panic: :panic: i too lazy to double check it so i dont do it....  :grin: :grin:

and this is the end of my fict..... or maybe I could make their each family live?  :grin: :grin: who knows.  XD XD

thanks for reading ....  :on cny1:

and yeeeeeaaaaay my first finished fanfict....  :onioncheer: :onioncheer:
« Last Edit: July 18, 2011, 04:44:30 PM by sorakamiya »

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 11" 8-7
« Reply #82 on: July 17, 2011, 04:24:00 AM »
When I read golden knight, Garo's image suddenly flashed in my mind. Which one is Shun-Yuki's child? That would be my favourite grandchild among all the pair.  :ding: :ding: :ding:

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 12 (FINAL) " 17-7
« Reply #83 on: July 17, 2011, 04:37:38 AM »
waa... its the end already!!!  :cry:

but I love the HAPPY ENDING!!!!  :twothumbs   with their kids~~ cute2...   XD

Takamina and Acchan lovey dovely.... :shy2:

cant wait for the next fic!!!!  :w00t:

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 12 (FINAL) " 17-7
« Reply #84 on: July 17, 2011, 12:39:11 PM »
Yeah they all have chill !!!!!! Your fic is awesome!!!!!! I wonder if Yue would become a pervert like Yuko lol
Each family live would be great ^^

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 12 (FINAL) " 17-7
« Reply #85 on: July 18, 2011, 12:49:15 AM »
Thank for this amazing fanfic! I totally gave up on commenting, but I followed this fic non-stop ^^
First finished fanfic? Nice ^^ How about you finish the others too ;) I'll be waiting~

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 12 (FINAL) " 17-7
« Reply #86 on: July 18, 2011, 02:39:42 AM »
@gramps :    :lol: :lol: well, u suppose favorite minako since she is your niece child  :lol: :lol:

@dad : i already post the next right  :grin: :grin:

@kahem :   :lol: :lol: i doubt it since yue is sae child she could be same as her  :lol:

@bou : woooooow, thanks for reading my fict bou  :grin: :grin: well for the rest i dont know wheter i can finished soon but i got  a bad habit actually. i cant write short.  XD XD XD

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 12 (FINAL) " 17-7
« Reply #87 on: July 18, 2011, 08:06:22 AM »
I love Happy Ending <3 <3
thank you for your great work on this fic
It was so nice to read your fic on my free time
Now I wanna go read your new story
Keep the great work :thumbsup
Like I didn't hear it, like I couldn't hear it.... I shouldn't have heard your love in the first place
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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 12 (FINAL) " 17-7
« Reply #88 on: July 18, 2011, 10:19:16 AM »
Lol I was confuse. Who is Yuko's daughter?

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 12 (FINAL) " 17-7
« Reply #89 on: July 18, 2011, 10:22:05 AM »
Lol I was confused. Who is Yuko's child?

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 12 (FINAL) " 17-7
« Reply #90 on: July 18, 2011, 04:40:58 PM »
@YumePouk : thanks for reading....  :cow: :cow: i'll do my best to write a good story  :thumbsup :thumbsup

@kahem : ahahaha,  :lol: :lol: okay i'll tell u  :grin:

taka x atsuko : minako

shun x yuki : yue

kojiro x yuko : yuu-chan

tomohiko x tomomi : tomo-chan <- will be triple tomo

saka x rie : aya

n i forget to mention one more its Jun x Mayu : yuna  :grin: :grin:


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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 12 (FINAL) " 17-7
« Reply #91 on: July 18, 2011, 06:55:40 PM »
Oki thx I like the Tomo family ^^

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 12 (FINAL) " 17-7
« Reply #92 on: November 06, 2011, 05:40:28 AM »
 :wub:  :inlove: Yea~ I just finished reading it~~ and it's  :thumbsup  :on GJ:
Those children~ they are just too adorable~~~  :luvluv1:  :farofflook:
And Takamina and Acchan they are soo lovey dovely~~  :shy2:

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 12 (FINAL) " 17-7
« Reply #93 on: November 06, 2011, 06:05:52 AM »
Eehhh~!!  :? Why don't I saw this before? Did I?  :huhuh
heHe! If I did, I don't remember, So I think No, So Yehey!
New Stories I mean Old but New for Me to read, I know It's Great Story,
because I know that the Writer of this Story is Great Writer, Thanks sorakamiya..  :D :twothumbs

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 12 (FINAL) " 17-7
« Reply #94 on: August 10, 2012, 04:40:40 AM »
ahhhhh~~ thank you for the great story, sora-san! i really enjoy reading it! it gave me thousands of feelings, i even cried during those hard times, ya know? haha good job!! thank you again!  :mon thumb: :mon thumb:
I love FTM. Nuff said.

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Re: King of The Ocean "Chapter 12 (FINAL) " 17-7
« Reply #95 on: November 14, 2014, 10:18:34 AM »
 :k-great: good Story :k-great:
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