Love in the Fast Lane (multipairing) 24/11/2012 [Will be revamped/continued]

[AFLynx]

immortal_K: Thank you for being patient with me with this update!  Hmm... Takamina and Atsuko did seems like they also exchanged vows in the church because of that song! I totally imagined that when you mentioned it! lol I think it does run in the family and shows at a young age like Hotaru-chan's 

blughise: I hope your eyes (and everyone's) are okay after reading this chapter  Jun still has something to do that's why he escaped.
I thought of Hotaru-chan to add some love in our Atsumina pair. She did a great job in keeping a secret about the lilies.
I think Atsuko needs another clue perhaps?  we'll see in the future chapters  Thank you for reading! 

Sydney W: having someone say that my chapter is awesome boosted my morale as a writer.      Thanks Sydney W!

[JPopLover]

This is just getting better and better ^^ I love how MariMii is so close to each other ohh look at the sweet Kojiyuu moment and the super adorable moment in the garden with Atsumina :3 Thanks for updating! Hope the next update comes soon =D

[AFLynx]

JPopLover:  Thanks for reading JPopLover! I'll do my best to make my chapters more interesting as it progresses  I'm actually thinking of how I'll write about each of the pair's relationship in the future... as of now, all I can say is - Acchan... you'd better do something or else Hotaru-chan might just take Takamina away from you!  lol Thanks for the comment!

[Kid_Alpha]

I can't find words to properly express myself right now but yeah I love this~!

KojiYuu forever sweet

[Flean]

I'm speechless...  There are too much awesomeness in this chapter... i don't know where to begin... 

All I can say is that I'm so in love with this chapter... I totally can imagine all the actions!!!!  gah!!! they're so kakkoi!!! 

The 3 of them in the white dress are just...     and for the couples moment, should I comment any further?? because I'm too biased!!! LOL.. 
I'm just gonna say Kyaaaaa!!!! OMG!!! *fainted*     They're just too cute together!!! and Acchan... it's okay for not knowing or she pretend not to... (playing hard to get maybe.. or am I imagining all this to myself?? LOL...) Somehow, I could sense there's gonna be an epic love story between them... 

Too much awesomeness and love in the air~~  Thank you for this update!!! please update soon.. 

* (sorry if my comment taking too much spaces... since your update longer than usual, I thought maybe I should make my comment longer than usual too..  )

[sorakamiya]

this chapter sugoooooooooooooooooiiiiii~ 

atsuko jealous of hotaru  i like how the pair relationship develop in here.... 

waiting for the next update~ 

[kahem]

Action was great! And Takamina is so popular with girls lol

[D_Sphere]

One Word :




Awesome 

[AFLynx]

Kid_Alpha: I'm glad to hear that Kid_Alpha! I wonder how the Kojiyuu relationship will progress 

Flean: now I'm the one who's speechless because of your lengthy comment 
my fave action scene is Takamina's I hope no one's mad at me for putting a bruise on her neck  good thing Atsuko didn't notice it 
about the dresses... I got the inspiration from their no3b album where they wore dresses 
I hope I'll meet everyone's expectations regarding the Atsumina pair  I actually have a lot of ideas about their relationship
again thank you for reading and for this comment!
 
sorakamiya: thank you for reading and for your comment   
I know I would be jealous as well because Hotaru-chan got to spend time with Takamina 

kahem: thanks for the comment! hehe, Takamina seems to be popular with girls... even younger ones 
 
D_Sphere:  Thanks for reading!

[Haruko]

Omg omg like i said before epic chapter jaja bt the best part is the atsuko's cousin i laught a lot ...i'll be waiting he next i Don't care if this is long

[2448]

YAY!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for your long update! I LOVE IT~ 

The wedding is totally perfect~ P-E-R-F-E-C-T! 
And... awwww~ aachan is jealous over the small girl. HAHAHAHA!
Takamina, indeed the girls-killer. 

And yup, i love this chapter! 

[sorakamiya]

  well hotaru is a lucky gurl though and anyway i thought her parent names will be michiru n haruka though 

[hott3stson3]

 

That chapter was like, killer cute!!! 

Ahhhh, KojiYuu being all cute 

Mariko and Miichan being all sexy with each other  :nay:

And of course Takaachan with their teasing. 

Awww, Your welcomed!!! To be honest when you said you felt honoured i was feeling like this 
But whatever xD!!! I should feel honoured to received such legit reply from you 

Lets just say, that was a perfect long chapter. Thanks to all the cuteness you put in i was literally 
kind of thing! LMFAOOOO!!! AFlynx you have done it again!!! I love this chapter!!! But why do i feel something is about to happen....  Please update soon!!!  <-- LMFAOOO!!!

[haruhi16]

wow thanks for the update AFLynx! I've been waiting for this!! this chapter is so good! and thank you for posting the classical wedding song! i can totally imagine the scenes in the story!! I hope at the end of this story , those 3 couples will have their own wedding too!! 

Please update soon AFLynx!!   

[AFLynx]

Haruko: You were right... it became an epic chapter!  Thank you Haruko (and everyone of course!) for believing in my writing ability 
  Hotaru-chan wants to become Takamina's bride. I did laugh as well while I was typing that scene... I imagined everyone's reaction, especially from Acchan  <- like this lol

2448: I think they find Takamina charming.  I'm really not sure lol Acchan should really do something quick since Hotaru-chan seems determined to be Takamina's bride lol. Thanks for reading! 

sorakamiya: lol I knew it! I knew someone in the forums is bound to think about Haruka and Michiru  well, it did cross my mind to add them but I decided not to 

hott3stson3: again thank you for the vid!  I hope this fic will inspire you to make another one for the future chapters 

But why do i feel something is about to happen.... 

what makes you think of that? anyway, if there is really something that's gonna happen, I'm not tellin'  lol
thanks again for reading this chapter!

haruhi16: thank you as well for supporting my fic haruhi-chan!  we'll see if they get to be wed at the end of the story... 

[aruka]

AFlynx-san, I totally don't mind if you post VERY LONG chapters like this one again in the future..

So far, this fic is one of the bests I've read (and I'm not lying!! Really!!). As for this chapter, I also agree with the others: VERY EPIC

Perhaps this chapter will be a serious challenge for you to write another one with the same level of epicness... wish you luck!! 

[AFLynx]

aruka: thank you for your comment!  Yes, it will be a very serious challenge for me to write a chapter such as this one. To be honest, I am a little bit nervous right now because I'm thinking that everyone might expect the same level of intensity and emotions like in this chapter when there is action involved, I'll definitely try to make it as intense such as this one.  Overall, I'll try to do my best!  Thanks again for reading!

[immortal_K]

YAY the bet is on, and I get to watch at the side!!! Totally pulling a Yukirin as you mentioned 

I can't wait for you and Japanime to update your stories 

[AFLynx]

immortal_K: lol my bet with japanime1 is this - when one of us would update our fic, the other should also update hers as well. either way, it's a both win since we get to update our fics 

[haruhi16]

i'm still waiting for the update