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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 8) update 8-14
« Reply #100 on: August 17, 2011, 11:35:09 AM »
Hello Soramiya-chan pLease Send me too the FuLL Version, Thanks!!  :)
:heart: Story because of the Atsumina pairing and the story is CUTE, and Minami is became a Boy..
and Acchan is Active as aLways, haHa..  :lol: and then now, Minami is become a Papa, I'm Happy!!  :cow:

CONGRATULATION Minami and Atsuko-san!!  :mon santa2: :gmon flowers:

Soramiya, THANK YOU again and GoodLuck for the Next Chapter..  :onioncheer:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 8) update 8-14
« Reply #101 on: August 21, 2011, 03:14:42 PM »
I want the full version too ^^ please pm me
Tomotomo!!!! I want more!
Acchan is pregnant and they are in trouble! Update soon please

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 8) update 8-14
« Reply #102 on: August 22, 2011, 03:20:53 AM »
AiYa!!!! I cant believe i haven't comment in a while~

gomen sorakamiya  :mon sweat: :mon crie:

But...AHHHHHHH!!! Takaachan did it!!!!

and atsuko is pregnant!!! Takahashi is going to be a papa!!!!

Omg...they are gonna be in a lot of shizz when the two lords find out about this...UPDATE SOON!!! :)

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 8) update 8-14
« Reply #103 on: August 22, 2011, 08:59:13 AM »
Wow Takamina got Acchan pregnant!!!  :luvluv1: They are going to have a cute baby angel!! keke

Finally screen time for TomoTomo pair, I hope they can all be to together in the end.

Thanks Sora-nee  :hee: sorry for late comment, didn't notice the update until now

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Please update soon, can't wait to see what happens next.

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 8) update 8-14
« Reply #104 on: August 24, 2011, 11:58:07 AM »
Takamina propose :wub: and Atsuko said YES + she's pregnant :mon love:
But I wonder What the angel & devil lords wanna do with this news
TomoTomo are together again :wub:

I want to know what will happen and more~~~
Please update ASAP~~
 
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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 8) update 8-14
« Reply #105 on: September 01, 2011, 07:50:00 PM »
guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuys  :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: sorry for the late update....

now lets get moving  to the next chapter  :panic: :panic: :panic:


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Chapter 9 part 1
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say hello to the new family minami


Minami a bit surprise at what acchan say to him.

“huh??? Huh?? Wait….wait…it mean that… I …. I will be….”

“you will be a father BAKAMINA!!” tomochin said as laughing

“heeeey, don’t call me that. I just a bit surprise.”

“hahaha chil out chibi angel.” Tomomi chuckle

“well, we’ll let u guys alone now.” tomochin n tomo now leaving minami and acchan together. Minami smile to acchan and bring her to their room. Minami lay acchan in bed and cover her with blanket.

“u should rest acchan. u’ll soon be a mother.”

“I know but somehow I afraid.”

“its okay, everything will be fine.  I’m here with you and I’ll protect both of u.” Minami said as position his self beside acchan on the bed now. they snuggle together and enjoy each other presence.

“ne minami, can I ask you something!”

“what is it?”

“if something happen to me will you forget me?”

Minami frowned at what acchan said and hug her tightly

“I will never forget you. If something happen to u I will also be beside u. I will follow wherever u go. I wont leave u.”

“I’m glad. Thank you.”

“now u better sleep.”

Minami said as hug acchan and stroke her hair.


~back to tomomi~

Tomochin and tomomi now in a roof. they have a serious conversation.

“ne, tomochin what would happen to them?”

“I don’t know. The Lord just ask me to bring them to him. But I still not sure. The situation getting complicated now.”

“yeah I know. Now acchan pregnant and carried his child. This child is special. This child is combination between angel and devil. I’m afraid devil lord planning something.”

“*sigh yeah. Now I remember about the old rumors about our angel lord.”

Tomo then approach tomochin and hug her from behind “uhm? What is it?”

“well, it is said that our lord actually fall in love with a woman from the evil world. They meet secretly and have a secret relationship behind our past lord who is his father. They also have a kid and when the evil lord find out about this he attack our world and there is a war. He manage to capture the child and kill our lord wife which it the devil woman. Our lord in depress but finally manage get over it. He still searching for his child until now. I feel sorry for him.”

Tomochin turn around and hug tomo tightly “I think fall in love with a devil is not a sin. Love is no boundary.”

Tomo hug her back and enjoy tomochin presence “lets start over tomochin.”

“haik!!!”



~in minegishi residance~

Miichan is having her meditation routine and suddenly she feels something.

“eh? The fire from phoenix candle off. Something not right. I could feel something.”

Miichan get out from her meditation room and go to her family ancient library. She search some ancient book about that sign and finally read it.

when the light from the phoenix burn out it mean a child under the soul of phoenix power will born. This child hold a great power of universe.

“ah, souka. I think it good then. But wait…”

As the power is unlock no one could stop it but this child is born from the forbidden love. This child is a child from Angel and devil.

“OMG… masaka….”

That night miichan search around the library and study more about this.

I gotta feeling that this related to minami and acchan. I gotta help them.


~Next morning~

Minami and acchan wake up early and meet tomochin and tomo In the living room.

“yoo, ohayou.” Tomochin greet them.

“ah~ ohayou tomochin.”

“hmm….wake up so early today. So, have u decided. Will you come with me?”

Acchan and minami look at each other and as acchan nod minami also nod to tomochin “yeah , we will. We cant go anywhere except coming with you. The situation not really save now.”

“I know, but don’t worry me and tomochin will help u guys.” Tomo said as give a peace sign to them

“thank you tomo.” Acchan hug tomo

“so how we got there tomochin.”

“we will go through the portal near the park. That’s the only way.”

They all nod and heading to the park. But situation not let them go through easily. They got block by the devil lord troops.

“Hahahaha, where u guys think u gonna go?”

“who are you?”

“ah~ I’m the 2nd class general of devil lord troops. My name Nobunaga. Now hand them to me and u wont get hurt.”

“we wont do that.”

“well, then I don’t have a choice. Kids, attack them.”

Soon nobunaga troops attack tomochin and minami. Since acchan is pregnant her power is drain. So tomo protect them.

“shit, they are so many.”

“I know but I cant let them take acchan.” minami said as swing his sword to evil troops.

Then suddenly a familiar voice interrupt them.

“hold on a second there. No one can disturb my aparto guest.”

“eh?! Wisnu san?” minami look surprise

“yooo?!.”

“wisnu san get out this is dangerous.” Acchan tell him

Wisnu just scratch his back and smile “well, its okay Mrs takahashi let me and my staff handle this.”

He then pointed to nobunaga “Oiiii, nobunaga. It seems the scar in your face that I made a couple of years ago not enough for u huh.”

“heeh? U…u …”

“yeah its me nobunaga, the great angel gen troops Wisnu sama. Hahaha..”

“What???” tomochin surprise

“u know about him”

“well I have heard about the angel special troops and the gen name wisnu. But after the war between angel and devil he got disband coz helping our lord now.”

“soooo now, guuuuuuuuys.” Wisnu call his troops

Suddenly nalyn, flean and sora appear “that’s the great angel captain.” Tomochin shout

“now go takahashi san. Let we handle this.”

“so u know that we….”

“I already know from the beginning I have already handle this kind of situation. Now go and save your self.”

Wisnu said as begin cast a spell to get rid the troops that blocking our way.

“thank you wisnu san. I hope we can meet again.” They both bow and now hurry headed to the portal,

“well…well… nobunaga, lets start our business now. KID CHAAAAARGE~”

“OOOOOSSSUUUUUUUUUUUU~”


“*hosh….hosh… come on we gotta hurry the portal is nearer.” They run as fast as the can but as the almost catch up the portal another enemy block their way.

“aaaargh not again. Tomochin pouts.”

“now handed them to us tomo.”

“we wont do that orochi.”

“hmph, ah~ I think we got 2 couple here huh. So u are the angel that make my little sister tomo fail her job huh.”

“back up orochi. We love each other u know that.” Tomochin said whether tomo beside her.

“right, now lets begin our business here.”

“come here orochi.” Tomochin said as provoke orochi

They fight each other. Orochi use his spell and dirty move to attack tomochin. But suddenly a evil troops come and begin attack tomo and minami. They cant hold it by their self but the a spell get rid all of them.

“Fire of Flying Dragooooon~”

“Miichan???!!’

“yooo, sorry for the late guys.”

“what are u doing here?”

“try to help u guys. Now stop talking and lets get rif this freak.”

With miichan help they can easily defeated the devil troops specially orochi. Tomochin made it to sealed him and teleport him back to the devil world.

“gosh. Your niichan never give up doesn’t he?” tomochin said to tomo.

“gomen about that and lets go now.”

“wait, let me join u guys.” Miichan said.

“but miichan are u sure? This is will be dangerous no problem. I gotta help u guys. I know I can come in a handy.”

“soo how is it tomochin?” minami ask

“hmm… sure she is strong though.”

“okay lets go.”

They all get into the portal and heading to the angel kingdom. Soon not long they already arrive in front of the gate of the angel kingdom.

“well guys, welcome to the angel kingdom.”

With that they got into the gate and headed to the Lord chamber.



I hope everything will be alright



TBC

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dooouuuuuuuu~ ?????  :panic: :panic: :panic: i'll be working for the next part and there is some surprise there  :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 9 part 1) update 9-02
« Reply #106 on: September 01, 2011, 07:56:07 PM »
waaaa we are angels wohoo   :rofl:

get lost u devil freaks >_<

takacchan go go  :yossi:
Still shipping them early pairs. 1st generation ftw!

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 9 part 1) update 9-02
« Reply #107 on: September 01, 2011, 08:02:48 PM »
awesome!!!

yah beat those evil freaks!!!!

I can't wait for the next chapter

update as soon as you can sorachan!!!

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 9 part 1) update 9-02
« Reply #108 on: September 01, 2011, 08:05:28 PM »
GO ANGELS!!!!!! beat those devils back to where they belong!!!  :twothumbs

ahhh I'm hanging, please update soon =D

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 9 part 1) update 9-02
« Reply #109 on: September 01, 2011, 09:18:06 PM »
Atsumina all the way....... yeah..... please update next

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 9 part 1) update 9-02
« Reply #110 on: September 02, 2011, 10:57:43 AM »
Acchan was the forbidden child as well??  :shocked :shocked

I want to know what happen next!!!!! :panic: :panic:

Update soon Sora~~  :bow: :bow:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 9 part 1) update 9-02
« Reply #111 on: September 02, 2011, 01:08:44 PM »
that is just cool sora neechan!  :bow:

I need angel x devil wars!!  :grin:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 9 part 1) update 9-02
« Reply #112 on: September 02, 2011, 07:07:02 PM »
Yeah! War! And Tomotomo! Lol oroshi from kannazuki no miko

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 9 part 1) update 9-02
« Reply #113 on: September 04, 2011, 05:02:26 AM »
thanks again for the comment and for reading my fanfict guys...  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

and now here the part two....  :grin: :grin: :grin:


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Chapter 9 part 2
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Finally that day minami, miichan, acchan, tomo and tomochin arrive in the angel kingdom. The hurry go to the lord chamber as they arrive there. Luckily not much people on the way to the chamber coz it would be not good the other angel seeing a human and also a devil in the angel kingdom.

Soon they arrive and ask the guard to let them come in to the chamber.

“please tell the lord that tomochin and minami have arrived.”

“yes, my gen.”

The guard got into the chamber and they wait. Suddenly a familiar voice call them.

“yoooo tomochin, minami.”

“ah, sae and sayaka. Hey guys, long time no see.” Minami said as approach them.

“hahaha, yeah not bad long since your last job. I have heard everything and don’t worry everything will be fine.” Sayaka said to minami

“heeee….it seems u are a real gentleman here huh takamina.” Sae said as chuckle.

“eerrrrr….uhm….this is me in disguise okay stop that.”

“but your wife over there could explain everything.’ Sae pointed to acchan

“let her alone sae don’t say any weird thing about me to her.” minami said as glare to the boyish gen

“ahahaha, don’t worry takamina.”

The guard finally come and let them to enter the chamber.

“excuse me gen. the lord already permit u to meet him. He already waiting.”

“okay thank you. Well sayaka we gotta go. talk to u guys later okay.”

“sure tomochin and don’t be worried takamina.”

They then enter the chamber and meet the lord angel.

“ah tomochin and minami finally u come. I bet its not easy to come here in this situation.” The lord said to them

“no problem my lord. Your word is my command.”

“so lets just go to the point here. you minami, u know how I really disappointed to you. I know you manage to accomplished your task but falling in love with a devil. What have u thinking. Do u know what effect could u cause to the angel kingdom?” minami knows that he is guilty but still he cant let the one he loves got away from him.

“my lord, I know I’m guilty and I know I u got the right to punished me. but I just want u to know. My love to her is pure and I will do anything for her even I have to sacrifice my life.” Minami said full of confident.

“so u will do anything to her? even it could risk your life?”

“yes, my lord.” Minami said as holding his lover hand tightly.

The angel lord then got up from his place and go approaching minami. Everyone just stand there and do nothing. There is only silent until the lord shout.

“LEAVE ME WITH THEM IN HERE ALONE, OTHER GO OUT FROM THIS CHAMBER!!!”

Hearing that all the angel that in there except them leaving the chamber. Minami surprise with the sudden action of the lord and he feels that the lord is on the rage. The lord move closer to acchan but minami block his way.

“Move out minami.”

“no, until u tell me what u gonna do with her.”

“Move out I said!!” the lord ordered

“I wont.”

“u push me minami.” The lord then use his power and make minami freeze in his place.

“let her alone my lord. She is not guilty.” The lord keep approaching her and somehow acchan keep calm and do nothing.

“show me your right hand.”

“huh?”

“show me your right hand.” The lord ask acchan.

Acchan then show her right hand and the lord lift up his hand cast some spell to her. a white light appear and there is a symbol in acchan right hand. It’s a symbol of an angel wings.

“Its you…finally I found you.” The angel lord move closer and hug acchan tightly

“I found you my child. My little angel atsuko. Forgive me. please forgive your dad coz he cant protect you before. Forgive me.”

What? So acchan is the angel lord lost child.

“wha…what are u saying?” acchan ask confuse

The lord sigh and then try to explain.

“my lord what actually happen?” tomochin also ask

“*sigh the truth is this devil is my lost daughter.”

“so its not a rumor then. The one that said you fall in love with a devil and have a child from her.” tomochin surprise

“yes tomochin its right.”

“so u are my father?” acchan feel confuse

“yes atsuko I’m your father.”

“but it impossible , I lived alone in the devil kingdom and the devil lord who take care of me.”

“that’s its because my fault atsuko.”

The angel lord begin tell them what happen.


~flashback : Angel Lord POV ~

That is the time when I do my first task as an angel prince. I meet this devil girl. We both fall in love and decided to get married. I and her know that this is the forbidden but we both need each other and finally decided to keep it a secret. We live happily until I found out that she is the devil princess.

“what? So u are the devil princess? Why u never told me?”

“I cant, I afraid that my dad will go after you.and u will leave me.”

“Noooo, I will never leave you I love u and also our child.” I hug her

“but Ren u know that this child have a strong power. She is half angel and half devil.”

“I know haruko. But just wait and look at the situation. I ask wisnu to pay attention to you okay?”

“okay.”

Then I order wisnu to look after haruko if I’m not around. My father the previous angel lord did not know about this also. Then that time finally atsuko is born. I and haruko so happy. Atsuko is our life and soul. She is everything. But I know we never can hide this for a long. My father found out about my relationship and he is really mad but it just for a short time. The worst thing is when the devil lord know. He begin to attack the angel kingdom and planning to take atsuko, but actually it not his order. Haruko’s brother the devil lord now plan that all. That night I try to hide atsuko.

“Atsuko my dear u gotta leave. Find somewhere to hide hurry.”

“but daaad I don’t wanna leave you.”

“everything would be fine, mom and dad will go after you. Now go,”

That what I thought at the first and then it getting worst.

“hehehe, ren where is that kid?”

“we wont tell you.”

“oh my….my… my sister haruko. Be nice with your brother, I just wanna meet my niece.’

“what a lame , don’t think that I don’t know what is your plan ryu.”

“well then I think I should do this.” Suddenly ryu cast a spell and that make my wife in such a pain.

“NOOOOOO~ haruko….haruko….speak to me…”

“Ren… pro…tect…our daugh..ter..tell her…. I love her.”

With that word she then passed away and ryu gone. That day I swear that I wont forgive him. Then I heard that the guard found a injured little angel as holding my daughter necklace. I hurry to look at thislittle angel and that I found u minami. U almost died and your back full of wound.

“So…so…sorry my…my… lord. I …I cant protect prin…prin…princess.”

That’s the last word I heard from you then we found out half your memory is gone.

end flashback


“that’s how it is minami.”

“so u already know at the first place?”

“yes, and why I really insist that u have to do this task if I don’t have the reason. I know that u fit for this task and u are already atsuko destiny. Now I will soon have a grandchild. I wont do the same mistake. I will protect my family.”

There is a silent until…

“and anooo my lord how about tomomi? It impossible that she go back to the devil kingdom.”

The angel lord smile and poke my shoulder.

“she can stay in here. I know u love her tomochin and I am sorry that my dad punished u just because u fall in love with her.”

“really? Is it okay?”

“yeah, but now I have to do something.” the angel lord said.

“what is it?”

“I gotta find the angel bracelet that has been lost. I have to find it to release the angel power in atsuko body.”

“aaaand~ where is it?”

“I’m sure minegishi san knows that.”

They all now look at miichan and waiting for her explaination.

“well, based on I know my ancestor have found it but he gave it to a friend. And errrrr….. what is the family name….. waiiit…. Its….koooo….koooo… something with that….”

“is it kojima?” tomochin interrupt

“yeaaaah that is. How u know???”

Tomochin look at the angel lord and sigh “well, that’s a long story.”

“so we gotta find this thing in kojima residence. I could help you guys. I know the owner we really close until something happen to their daughter who is my childhood friend.” Miichan explain.

“then… we can settle another problem.” The lord angel said.

“u mean u gonnaaa….” Tomochin said


The angel lord nod and just say “it’s the time to settle this. I’m gonna fixed everything.”



we gotta call her….





TBC~


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doooooooooouuuuu????  :panic: :panic: :panic: i know its a bit short i'll try to make it longer next time....  :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop:

and could u guess who is it???? i think u already know it  :grin: :grin:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 9 part 2) update 9-04
« Reply #114 on: September 04, 2011, 05:16:09 AM »
yeay!!! Atsuko's angel power~~ waahh~~   :on woohoo:

they gonna call Yuko???  :on lol:

nice chapter... long lost daughter.. new power.. new family member...  :on GJ:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 9 part 2) update 9-04
« Reply #115 on: September 04, 2011, 05:52:51 AM »
It's YUKOOOOOOOO ~ please update soon

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 9 part 2) update 9-04
« Reply #116 on: September 04, 2011, 08:29:30 AM »
not that short, it's nice neechan  :glasses:
so many pairing in here!! got little confused, but I am sure I will be used to it  :ding:

NEED UPDATE!!  :thumbup

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 9 part 2) update 9-04
« Reply #117 on: September 04, 2011, 08:51:15 AM »
Saeyaka!! And soon Kojiyuu!!! Yeah it gonna be awesome!

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 9 part 2) update 9-04
« Reply #118 on: September 04, 2011, 11:47:06 AM »
wow he found his lost child at last   :k-great:

he accepted them also

now it's kojiyuu  :hiakhiakhiak:
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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 9 part 2) update 9-04
« Reply #119 on: September 04, 2011, 02:30:06 PM »
wow you updated...that was fast :P

Yappari...I was right Atsuko is really the princess  but never really expect that shes also a devil....
Now off to go and find Haruna... of course they're going to call Yuko

update soon.....

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