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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 4-3) update 31 - 7
« Reply #60 on: August 02, 2011, 07:02:47 AM »
Hi my 1st time posting here. I had joined for some weeks ago but I didn't post anything..  :nervous :nervous

I love this fics! Kuroi Acchan... hahaha  :love:
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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 4-3) update 31 - 7
« Reply #61 on: August 02, 2011, 07:45:48 AM »
WOW devil and angel under the same roof, on the same bed  :twothumbs

I hope Acchan does more things to her angel  :hee:

Thank you for the update, will be waiting for your next.

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 4-3) update 31 - 7
« Reply #62 on: August 06, 2011, 02:48:46 PM »
 :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: thanks for reading guys.... i'm glad u like it  :yep: :yep: :yep:

now what if we just go to the next chapter....  :grin: :grin: :grin:

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Chapter 5
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next day minami POV
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Last night really tiring. I couldn't sleep at all. She keep hugging and snuggle to me. I should get my bed today. If I keep sharing bed with her I couldn't get sleep.

Now I still in bed, lazy to wake up. But the sun light soo bright and it wake me. I try to open my eyes and I found only me in the bed. Seems she already wake up. I go to table and look at my watch and I frown when I look at the watch..

"WHAT?!!!!"

"AAARRRGHT!!!"

"ITS ALREADY LAAATEEEE!!!"

I hurry go to the bathroom and clean my self. After that I get ready and wearing my uniform. I look at the kitchen here there are the little devil.

"Ah, minami, have a breakfast, I already cook for u."

I look at her in confuse "huh? U cook this?"

She nod and smiling to me "yupz, sorry I didn't wake u up. Seems u really tired."


"yeah, and who fault is that."


She bring some of fried rice and give it to me as sitting beside me "here, taste this?"

I look at the food in front of me "uhm.....I should be careful. Is this food save for me?"

"Its okay, I didn't put anything in there. Here I prove it to u."

She grab a spoon and dig in my plate. "See! I'm okay!"

"Uhm.....alright! Ittadakimasuuuu~" I have one bite and then

"Whooooaaaaa oishiiiii~ this is soooo delicious!!" I compliment her. But seriously this is nice.

"Great, I'm glad u like it." She said as smiling to me.

"Hmmm....u totally could become a good wife?!" I said and suddenly she look away and blush.

"I...I....well...thank u." She said to me as blushing.

I could see her cheek redden and it make me kind a want to tease her.

"Haik, finish, thanks for the food." I said and the get up from the chair.

"Okay, time to go its already late." I grab my bag and ready to go.

"Wait for me!"

"Hurry up?!"

"Haiiiik I'm ready." She now stand in front of me and I look her hair kind a messy.


"omigaa she is so sexy....urght nonono....can't think like that. Focus minami....remember, she is your rival."


"Uhm? Why are u looking me like that?"

"Huh? Ow...ow....never mind.it just....?!" I approach her and comb her hair with my hand.

"Mi...mi...minami?"

"Your hair is kind a messy."

She look down and blush again.

"There u go....kawaiii as well?!" I said and she just stand there stun

"Ahm....uhm.... Tha.... Thanks..."


She is so cute when she is stuttering like that.And Oh my, her hair so soft.


Looking her blushing like that make me wanna tease her. I come closer to her and whispered some thing to her ear

"U...are...welcome!and by the way...."

I cup her right cheek with my hand and give a short kiss in her left cheek


"Thanks for the fooooood." I hurry run away from her and she shout

"Mooooouuuu~ Minamiiiii~"

"Ahahahaha~" I go first as laughing and she chase me.


"what a great day~"

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Atsuko POV
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Okay, yesterday I shared bed with this chibi angel coz there is only 1 bed in our aparto. We decided to pretend as a young couple since I'm sure the owner won't let us rent the only room there if he found out that we are just uhm... friend? Just let's say that. In the middle of the night I unconsciously hug her. Somehow I feel really calm and save. Different from what I have feel this long.

The next morning I wake up first and look at the chibi angel in front of me. He sleep so tight and so cute. His face so calm. I feel there is a magnet that attract me to come closer to him and kiss his cheek. I got up from the bed get change and prepare for the breakfast.

This morning he already make my heart melt and beating so fast. I don't know what happen to me. The one that I have to do now is doing my task.

we go to school together. I keep clinging to him. I could see his blush and just chuckle. As we arrive at school we meet our target. The day pass as usual but at the end of school I look at miichan that she is talking to a phone. After she finish talking I and minami approach her.


"Hmmm.... U look happy miichan?!" I said to her with a teasing tone.

"Huh? Ah, she is a friend." Miichan said as smiling to us.

"Well, seems miichan have a business acchan let's go."

"Heeee??? But....but..."

Minami grab me and force me out of class.

"Hahaha, good luck u two." Micchan laugh.


Now me and minami is at the school yard talking...

"Mooooo, why u bring me to come here." I pout as he stops his foot now.

"Tsk....listen, I know u will do something to her and I won't let u ruin that." Minami said with a hars tone.

"Heee, I haven't done anything and u already suspicious to me?" He nods and start talking

"Yeah, coz I must be be careful. I shouldn't got distract."

"Distract? Like....this!" I hurry spell a smoke and disappear from him.


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As I disappear from minami I follow miichan. She is heading to the main road. There is a bus coming and I hurry used my magic to make the bus lose control. But....

"MIICHAN WATCHOUT!!!"

"KYAAAAAAA~"


*Brrrrrruuuuuaaaak


Tsk...the bus hit the side road but miichan manage to avoid it. It coz the chibi angel there. I just watch them.

"Mi...mi...minami! Are u alright?"

"Owgh....my head!!!"

"Minami your head!!!" Miichan look shock.

"Wha...what?"

I see him from distant and look at his bleeding head. He accidentally hit the ground. Somehow I worried to him.

'Is he alright? The blood keep running.' I bite my lower lips. I wanna help but I can't.


'Huh? Wait? Why should I worry to him?!'

'Something wrong with me.'



I keep thinking and then I see a light.

'Huh?'

"Cure...."

I see minami wound disappear. I forget an angel could cure themself. Well nothing to worry then. I see miichan already gone. Only minami there. He then go. I got out from my hidden and searching miichan.

Finally I see her. She is got into a cafe. And meet a girl. Uhm... Who is that girl? She seems older but so beautiful. As I thinking a hand grab me from behind.

"Eeh? What the....?"

"Tsk....u have to responsible with my wound." Minami said with a cold tone.

"Heee... Its my task I can't help infact u already cure what with that badge?" I pointed to the badge that in his forehead.

"Ah, kore? Well, it impossible for human to get recover fast. It just a fake.why? Worry?"

He said as grin to me and I just pout to him "n..no...why should I."

He then grab my waist "well, even though that just remember. I'm not an easy opponent." My heart suddenly beat so fast coz the closeness then I move to got out from his hold.

"Me too minami, now let got back to work."



Let's see what could u do next~



I headed to the cafe.

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Miichan POV
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Today Is a horrible day. A bus almost hit me. Thanks to minami kun he comes and save me. As saying thanks and help him I headed to a cafe. I'll meet someone today. hehehehe... Not really horrible actually since I'll meet this girl. I arrive at the cafe and there is she already wait for me.

"Miichan, over here." She wave her hand and call me.

I approach her and sit beside her.

"Ah, gomen ne mariko san. I got something to do so I late."

"Its okay, I'm glad u come." She smile to me.

"So, what u wanna to eat?" She ask me.

"Uhm.....anything u order its okay." I said as smile to her.

"Ok then." She call the waitress and order a food. We chat as waiting our food.

"So, how are u today?"

"Well I gone through a weird and boring day. U know school." I scratch my back.

"Ah, but school time is fun. Work is exhausted." She pout, omg she is so cute.

"anyway, thank for treat me next time I'll treat u."

"Ah, I'll be waiting. Its really fun to meet u today. Let's don't make this is the last time we go out." Mariko said

"Ahaha, sure. Let's hangout sometimes mariko san."

"Heee.... What with the san? I feel really old."

"Well, mari chan then." I smirk to her and she is blush. Why is she blushing.

We keep talking and laughing until.....


*bruuukkkkk

"I...I....ittaaaaaiiii..."

"Minami? Acchan?" I see minami and acchan fall to the ground where acchan is on top of him.

"Your friend?" Marichan pointed to them. Since they still wearing the uniform I bet marichan knows from that.

"Yeah. Why are u guys in here? And what happen?"

"Ouch, that's her fault. We got slipped." Minami look pissed.

"Well, anyway this is my friend shinoda mariko."

"Shinoda mariko desu." She bow

"Takahashi minami desu."

"Maeda atsuko desu."

They both bow. And suddenly,

"Well, miichan and shinoda san we'll be going now."

"Bu...but..." Acchan said

"We should go acchan." Minami grab her and look at her. She just pout and they leave.

"Nice too meet u."


They disappear and I keep talking with mari chan.


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back at the angel n devil
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They headed to their aparto where greet by a woman

"Hi there, I'm nalyn. U must be the young couple wisnu san told me."

Minami and acchan look at each other and blush.

"Maaa,maaa u guys are so kawaii, anyway takahashi san u got a delivery. Seems that its a bed. They already arrange that and u just could relax."

"Ah, yeah thanks nalyn san."

"U are welcome. Now I gotta back to work."


Nalyn leave and both of them got into their aparto.

"Heeee? U bought a bed."

"Yeah, so tonight I could sleep well." Minami said.

"Moouu..." Acchan just can pout.


They headed to their room and as arrive there minami hurry go to his new bed

"Aaaaaah~ I feel so relieve~" minami lay in his new bed but suddenly

*crak...crak....bruuuuaaaak...

The bed is broke "iiittttaaaaaaiii....."

Acchan just chuckle and then crawl to minami "ach....acchan....???"

"Sooo, seems tonight u have to sleep with me again minami." Acchan said seductively.

"Wha....whaaaaat?! This....this.... Must be you....u did this,  U use your magic." Minami said as pointed to her.

Acchan than pout again "hee, I don't do anything."

Then Still in the same position where acchan on top, she tracing her finger from minami body to her cheek and cheerish it "well, how many time u gonna buy the bed seems the result would be the same."

Minami frown "what that mean?"

Acchan move closer and whispered in minami ear "Give up minami."

"Geeeez, acchan. U are so insist able." Minami said as face palm.

Acchan then got up and pull her tongue out "Minami baaaakaaaa?!"

"Heeeeeeyyyyy?!"


Acchan go and took a shower. As she got out minami turn to take a shower. As minami finish taken a bath he go to kitchen and look atsuko preparing the dinner. They have a dinner together and as they finish minami clean the dishes.

They got to the room and minami don't have a choice.

"This time u'll sleep that way." Minami pointed.

"Moouuuu, why?"

"No special reason. Now let's get to sleep. I'm tired."

Acchan nod and smile to him. Acchan sleep near the wall.


Suddenly......

"Ne minami."

"What?"

"Can I hug u?"

"Wha...what??" Minami shock

"I'm sorry last night I hug u accidentally, but it because I got to used sleeping hugging something and I easily got a nightmare."

"Heeee???" Minami just sigh

"Well...uhm...I...I..."

"Its ok if u don't wanna." Acchan then turn facing the wall.

'Tsk.....why she should be doing this. I couldn't look a girl disappointed.'


Then, suddenly minami wrap his hand around acchan.

"Mi...minami..."

"Well, just don't to much move okay." Minami said as blushing.

Atsuko then hurry hug minami and snuggle to him. Minami take the blanket and cover their body with it.

"Well, oyasumi minami."

"Oyasumi acchan."


'nanka, I don't wanna let go my hug~'


'I wanna be like this forever~'




TBC~


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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 5) update 8-6
« Reply #63 on: August 06, 2011, 02:59:52 PM »
beep beep! traffic traffic too much cheesy there! :lol:

wohoo acchan made her move but failed !!!

LOL there's my part!! so happy @_@

ehehe poor bed  :grin:
Still shipping them early pairs. 1st generation ftw!

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 5) update 8-6
« Reply #64 on: August 06, 2011, 03:09:16 PM »
enemy but live together, eat together and even sleep together??? LOL... :wriggly:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 5) update 8-6
« Reply #65 on: August 06, 2011, 03:12:25 PM »
finally an update!!  :wub:

I love the part when Taka's bed is broken~  :grin:

Please update asap  :cow: :cow:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 5) update 8-6
« Reply #66 on: August 06, 2011, 03:19:25 PM »
 :grin:
Hehe
Atsuko, you and your tricks!!! :grin:
Takamina you give in so easily.....I guess you just wanted to hug her too :grin:
They are so cute together XD
Marimii are progress nice and slow

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 5) update 8-6
« Reply #67 on: August 06, 2011, 05:45:20 PM »
I think it will be funny if it was Takamina that purposely broke the bed so she can spend more nights hugging Acchan to sleep  :on lol:

They are already like a married couple  :twothumbs

Please update soon, Thank you

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 5) update 8-6
« Reply #68 on: August 06, 2011, 07:49:51 PM »
Takamina new bed broke already wow
They get to sleep with each other again  :cathappy:
Can't wait for next chapter update soon
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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 5) update 8-6
« Reply #69 on: August 13, 2011, 10:01:31 AM »
Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuys~  :panic: :panic: :panic: sorry for the late update  :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop:

and thanks for reading  :yep: :yep: :yep:

now lets move to the next chapter, i hope u like it, its a bit long i guess~  :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop:

seems the relationship get closer and a bit complecated now  8)2 8)2


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Chapter 6
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flashback
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"Goooo, hide..."

"Bu...but dad..."

"Gooooo now...."

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"Hiks..hiks...mom...dad..."

"Pst...pst... Little princess come here." A little short hair kis calls

"Who are u?"

"I'm just a kid, hurry if not they will find you."

Suddenly....

"HEY KID!" A man grab the little boy

"What u think u are doing?! Guys get the little princess."

"Noooooo, princess. Let her gooooo....let her gooo.." The little kid struggle and punch the man face.

"Gaaaaargh, u little...." The man drop the little kid and slash his snap

"Aaaaaaarght...."

"Nooooo, don't do it to him. Nooooooo...."

"Prin...prin....princeeeess... So....sorry..."

"Noooooo..."

"Noo...."

"Nooo....."

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Minami POV
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Again today I sleep together with this little devil. I couldn't believe it I got into her trap plus She ask me if she can hug me coz she often got a nightmare. At first I thought she lie to me. But I'm wrong, its not a lie.

"Uhmn....no..."

'Eh, what happen?'

"No...no.. Please... Don't..."

I open my eyes and see acchan grip tighten to me.

"Eh? Oi..acchan...acchan..."

"Nooooooo don't hurt that kid....pleaaaase"

"Acchan... What's wrong...?? Ssssh... Calm down.... Calm down....ssssshhh.... I'm here.." I hug her and try to make her calm down a bit. Her move become more rough and I can't hold her anymore.

"NOOOOOOOOO....." She wake up and sweating. I move closer to her and hug her.

"Ssshhh... It just a nightmare acchan. Now calm down. I'm here. I'm here.."

She hug me tightly and rested her head in my chest.

"I'm scare.... I'm scare..." She said as sobbing to me.

"Sssh....its okay nothing to be scare about. I'm here. I'll be always here."

"*sobs...don't...leave me..." She said as hugging to me.

"I won't, now calm down and close your eyes." She nods and I bring her back to lay down and cover her body with blanket as hugging her.

"Minami...."

"Uhm?"

"Thank you."

"Its okay."

She then calm down and back to sleep. Oh my, looking her like this make me uneasy. its sad to look at her like this. And one thing I couldn't believe, is she really a devil?! As I look at her she is not like the other devil that I have met. I cherish her cheek.

'What kind a devil that cry?!'

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Today I wake up early. I just open my eyes and look at the little devil beside me. Some of her hair is covering her face. Gosh, so pretty. I wipe away the hair from her face. I could see clearly her face. So cute and calm. I try to touch her cheek with my hand and feel it so soft then suddenly she makes a move. Don't wanna wake her up I just stun there not moving.

"Uhmmmmn...."

'Hmph...she is so cute...'

"Uhmn....mi...minami?"

"Yosh, ohayou?!"

"Ah, sorry I disturbing u last night."

"Noo, its ok. Well, now I got go up." I try to got up and then she hold my hand. I turn around and look her in confuse

"What is it?"

she smiles to me and gesture cutely as saying "where is my morning kiss??"

I blush furiously as hearing her sentence "wha....what...?? Sto....stop kidding and wake up acchan..." I go up as throw her with the pillow.

"Moooouuu, minami hidoiiii?!I mean it?!"

I pull out my tongue to her and suddenly she throw me back the pillow.

"U missssseeeed *bleeeeeh~"

"MINAMIIIII~"


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Today as usually we go to school together and I just keep silent about what happen last night. As we arrive at class suddenly there is a guy approach her.

"Maeda san, please go out with me tomorrow!"

"Heeeeeee?????"

I hurry look at that guy and a bit pissed off. Why should I? We are a rival. And what's this feeling?! Something wreck my heart.

"Uhm... Is it a date??"

"We....well...."

She looks at me and I just pretend not looking at her.

"Okay, then."

'WHAT????'

"Arigatou maeda san."

"Anyway, what's your name?"

"Owgh, my name is Ren."

"Ok then ren kun, see u this weekend."

This guy then leave the class. I could feel this little devil keep looking at me. I try to keep calm and miichan approach me.

"Hey, minami u won't do anything?"

"What?"

"To what have happen."

"Why should I?"

"Maaa....maaa...don't get jealous minami."

"Whatever, I wanna go out now."

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I leave the class and go to bathroom. I need to wash my face. Suddenly a voice call me.

"Yooo, minami."

"Tomochin??? Why so sudden?"

"seems that devil got u right now. Hahahaha, she totally wanna make u jealous."

"Shut up tomochin."

"ahaha, okay...okay...I just wanna remind you, beware of her. When u fall u will hard to survive and here I give u a suggestion. Just ignore her. She just wanna make u jealous."

"Yeah, yeah, I know and thanks for the suggestion. Anyway how is yuko?"

'she is fine don't worry.'

"Say my regards to her okay."

'okay, now I gotta go jaaaa naaa~'

With that tomochin disappear and I headed to the class room.

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I got back to my chair and looking at this little devil. During the lesson I can't concentrate. Daaaamn, why I feel uneasy now. Then since that accident at the class, everyday this idiot come to meet acchan. They talk and have a lunch together. Even so after school I still watch over miichan, I still have to protect her.

Each day, I can manage to protect her and that little devil haven't got any chance to hurt her. I also could see that she is getting well to that mariko girl. I hope everything will be alright.

Then its time for weekend. It mean its this little devil date time. I wake up and found her no where. Tsk, seems she already gone. I got out the room and there is breakfast plus a not on the table.

Morniiiiing~


Today I got a date

I already prepare for your breakfast

Happy weekend


Acchan
 


*sigh why I'm worried. I feel that I don't trust that guy. I go living room and laying there.

Should I watching them?

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atsuko POV
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Its almost a week I live in one roof with that little angel. I have try to hurt miichan but he always can save her. Actually I kind glad that he can save her. I don't know why it seems I a bit change since I meet him.

Today I'll have a date with ren. He asks me out in front of the class and I accepted it. I actually hoping that minami will do something as he try to ask me out but he just sit there and do nothing. Minami baka. Did he know that I just pretend to like it. I don't like it going out with this guy. I think my feeling to minami have growing now. I want to be embraced with him. Now I'm regret it. Why should I accept ren offer.

Then suddenly someone call me

"Maeda, sorry for waiting."

"Ah its okay."

*sigh he is coming.

"So, where will we go now?" I ask him

"Let's watch a movie first." He said as grab my hand but somehow, I feel someone is watching us.

I release my hand from him and he looks surprise

"Ah, sorry for that."

"O...o....owgh, its okay maeda. Its my fault."

We then begin our date today. We go to the movie, having a lunch together, talking, etc. But my thought is still on minami. What is he doing right now? Has he eat his breakfast?

Its almost dark and now I and ren sitting in a park. We watch the scenery in front of us. Suddenly he grabs my hand and start to talking serious to me,

"Ano maeda there is something I wanna to tell you."

'what is it now this guy? Is he gonna confess to me? Oh my....'

"What is it?"

"Fro...from the beginning I saw u, your face always in my mind I can't get rid out of it. As u accept my date I feel so happy and now I realize that I like you maeda. Would u want to be.....to...to be my girlfriend?"

He now looking at me and move closer to me as wanna kiss me. Oooouch, what should I do now.

"A...ano...u are to close now ren kun."

"I ... I love u maeda."

He is closer and closer. What should I do now. Suddenly I hear he screaming.

"It..tatatataiiitaaaaaaiiii!!!!" I open my eyes and look at him

"Who the hell that throw me with stone?!" He said as rubbing his head.

And we heard something near the bushes.

"Who the hell in there?"

*meow....

A cat?well this is my chance

"Well, I guess I gotta go now its already night." 

"Wait, maeda u haven't answer my confess" he grabs my hand and I turn to him

"I...I'm sorry ren. I can't. U are a good guy. I'm sure u will find better girl."

"Ah souka." He look disappointed.

"We can be friend." I smile to him and he smile too

"Thanks maeda and, sorry, before I...I almost..."

"Its okay, now I gotta go."

"Wait! Let me accompany u!"

"No need ren. Its okay."

I hurry leave him and headed to the nearest station.

I walk out from the park and then I see a figure. Coming out from the bushes. Its dark and he wearing a black jacket. I can't see him clearly but then I realize that I know who is that person.

'Baka!' I said in my mind as smiling.


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at the aparto
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"OMG today is so tiring. I gotta change before she comes." Minami change his cloth and clean himseld then headed to his bed and laying there. Then soon without he realize he already fall into a deep sleep.

A couple of minutes later the door open and there is acchan. She walks slowly and put her bag. She looks at the figure sleeping in the bed. She just smiles and go get change her cloth.

As she get change she approach the sleeping minami on the bed but before that she notice the black jacket under the bed.

"My...my....minami, u totally can't hiding anything from me." She chuckle and just let the jacket in there.

she begin to stroke minami hair and speak

"Well, minami, seems I make really tired to day. But I'm glad u do that."

She start got into the bed and look once again to her little angel.

"Thanks for today minami." Acchan then move closer and kiss minami forehead and then capture his lips.

Acchan then rested her head in minami chest. She cover both of them with blanket and then snuggle and wrap her hand around takamina. She then begin to fall sleep as smiling.


"I haven't know what happen to me but I think I start fall for you."


TBC~

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 6) update 8-13
« Reply #70 on: August 13, 2011, 10:38:10 AM »
yeeeey updaaaaatee!!!  :cow:
I love it  :yossi:
Grahh!! I want to slash that Ren guy's face!!  :on kimbo: :on kimbo:
how dare he wants to kiss Acchan!  :knee:

yeah the last part is so lovely  :mon lovelaff: :luvluv1:
I need next chapter!  :hee:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 6) update 8-13
« Reply #71 on: August 13, 2011, 10:44:54 AM »
yay update!!  :on gay:

aiz why did she let him date her   :mon ehh:

ren got hit by a rock  :mon lol:

kame like the last part  :mon inluv:

Still shipping them early pairs. 1st generation ftw!

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 6) update 8-13
« Reply #72 on: August 13, 2011, 10:46:25 AM »
YAY thanks for update!  :twothumbs

Takamina is so funny hiding in the bushes stalking them, should've picked up a bigger rock  :lol:

Hmm could Acchan be that princess in the past? but then why did she become a devil?

Please update soon.

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 6) update 8-13
« Reply #73 on: August 13, 2011, 02:44:25 PM »
pretty hilarious!!!

Minami getting jealous....so cute XP

Acchan so naughty!!!

now, that they both notice their feelings for each other.....what will happen next????

can't wait for the next update

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 6) update 8-13
« Reply #74 on: August 13, 2011, 02:50:55 PM »
Perhaps Acchan (princess) was kidnap by this lord devil and raise into become devil.. and that little boy is Takamina.... owww... Waiting for next chappy... thanks  :thumbup

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 6) update 8-13
« Reply #75 on: August 13, 2011, 09:10:50 PM »
Minami is jealous  :cathappy:
Minami throwing the rock   :cathappy:
Thank you for updating
Please update soon
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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 6) update 8-13
« Reply #76 on: August 13, 2011, 10:02:38 PM »
argh!! I love this chapter..  :wriggly:

Minami get jealous while hiding his true feeling..  :shy2:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 6) update 8-13
« Reply #77 on: August 14, 2011, 05:29:15 AM »
OOOWwwwwwkaaaaaaaaaaayyyy guuuuys~  I dont know what got into me, but i feel i can fast update today  :grin: :grin: :grin:

as usual thanks for reading my fanfict~  :panic: :panic: :panic: :yep: :yep: :yep:

now lets get into the next chapter, something will happen in here  :shocked :shocked :shocked bewareeeee~  :twisted: :twisted:


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Chapter 7
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flashback
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“Noooo…. Let him goo… stop….stop torturing him..”

“princess… so…sorry…”

“Garh, this is wht u got when a little angel like you try to fight our lord.”

With one whip it scratch the boy back “GAAAAAAAARRRH~”

“NOOOOOOOO……”

arrrgggghhhh~

Princess…. I’m sor…sor…sorryyy…



~end flashback~


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Atsuko POV
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Last night really an exhausting day but I feel all my tiredness is replace by a minami warm embrace. I don’t know what happen to me, it seem we are somehow really close before we met now. I feel calm and save where ever I close to him. But…. We are different.

It almost morning and I heard something. I try to open my eyes and look at minami. He looks soo in pain. Is he has a nightmare?

“Mi…minami… what happen?”

“urgh… hurt…”

“what? What hurt? Minami don’t make me worried.”

I hug him and stroke his hair and hugging him.

“it…its hurt… so… sorry… I … I’m so…sorry…”

“Minami… Wake up… minami…”

I still hold him and he finally open his eyes. And I don’t know I suddenly cry. He knows that I’m crying and cherish my back.

“so..so…sorry acchan. I just have a nightmare. Sorry.”

“Don’t make me worried like that.” I start sobbing

“eh? Why are you crying?” minami wipe my tears and I just keep silent.

“I’m sorry to make u worried. Lets just prepare for school now. I’ll go to the bathroom.”


He then leave me in that room and suddenly…

”Atsuko!!”

“My…my lord?”

”Seems that u haven’t make in completing your task.”

“I…I am sorry my lord.”

”Seems that angel is always on your way, then I’ll give u another task.”

I frown at what the devil lord saying, I’m afraid “wha….what is it my lord?”

”Kill that angel.”

I shock what I have heard and as saying that the devil lord disappear. I cover my mouth with my hand. I wanna cry, I couldn’t do that. I couldn’t kill minami. I can’t. I wanna cry but I hold it. I don’t have any choice. I have to kill him. I’m a devil here.

Then I heard the door open .

“Acchan? What happen?”

“Nothing, I just have to go. Excuse me.”

I right away leave him. I don’t wanna he see me crying. I hurry go to the bathroom.

I cry in the bathroom and I suddenly hear tomo voice.

”atsuko!”

“Tomomi, what should I do?”

”I have told u before right.”

“Its all my fault.” I keep crying

”I cant do anything atsuko, all I can say is don’t make the same mistake that I have ever made.”

“tomomi…”

”I just want u to know that any decision that u make I’ll be always support u.”

“tomomi…”

With that she then leave.


I guess I have to do that.

_______

I prepare and meet him out side, as usual he waiting for me and we go to school together. On the way I didn’t speak anything to him. We just walk together. Even after school I didn’t say any word to him. I just leave him and go with ren since he ask me to accompany him to a book store. I accompany him and we ended hanging out together well as a friend of course.

Then as it almost dawn, I back to aparto and got into my room. There I could see he is sleeping. I thought, its my chance to get rid of him. I begin to used my magic and summon my weapon. I just stand there cant move, I really cant do this, my tears begin to fall, then suddenly he speaks.

“What are u waiting for acchan?”

I surprise and drop the knife. My hand is trembling.

“U wanna kill me right? Kill me now.”

His sentence is like a knife that strike into my heart.

“I…I ….”

“what acchan?”

He said in a cold tone. And I just silent.


what should I do?



~end of Atsuko POV~


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Minami POV
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Today I wake up and found this little devil crying as hugging me. I have a nightmare last night. I wonder why its coming again. That is the time of my childhood memory. I don’t wanna to remember that. I feel hurt seeing her crying like this. I wipe her tears and then go to the bathroom. In the bathroom I turn my back and the scar is still there. This scar wont vanish. This scar is my punishment for not protecting the princess.

I begin to take a bath and then headed to the room but before I got into the room I heard that acchan talking to someone.

”Atsuko!!”

“My…my lord?”

”Seems that u haven’t make in completing your task.”

“I…I am sorry my lord.”

”Seems that angel is always on your way, then I’ll give u another task.”

I frown at what the devil lord saying, I’m afraid “wha….what is it my lord?”

”Kill that angel.”


I shock to what I have heard, the devil lord now order her to kill me. I feel hurt. But then I look at her. She is trying to hold her tears. will she so that? Kill me. I’m confuse now and I pretend not hearing anything and come in the room.

“Acchan? What happen?”

“Nothing, I just have to go. Excuse me.”

She right away leave me. actually I could see her tears. What should I do now? What if she will do that? During this mission something growing inside my heart. Somehow she mean everything to me now. I could not see her crying, I could not see her in other person hand. I want always beside her. So I decided to keep aware.

As we go to school she didn’t say anything. She even go with that ren again. I don’t get it what is she planning. then I decided to go home and waiting for her. I keep waiting until finally around 7 pm I heard the front door is open. I bet she is home now. Then I pretend sleeping and I heard the room door opened.

I could feel that she is standing in front of me now. I’m waiting but she is not moving. Only silent and sobbing that I heard. Then I decided to break the silent.

“What are u waiting for acchan?”

She surprise and drop the knife. her hand is trembling.

“U wanna kill me right? Kill me now.” I said to her as open my eyes

“I…I ….”

“what acchan?”


I’m waiting for your answer…


~end of Minami POV~


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Now the devil and the angel is confront each other. Minami look at acchan with a plain expression.

“Now tell me acchan, U wanna kill me right? Kill me now.”

“I… I….”

“I couldn’t believe this, I think devil still a devil right?”

“Stop…”

“Why? That’s the truth right? The lord have command u. what are u waiting for?”

“No… Yamete….”

“Kill me now acchan..”

“No… Please stop…” acchan shaking now.

“KILL ME~ U WANT THAT RIGHT?”

“Yada…”

“Why??? I’m helpless now. Kill me.” minami approach her and bring the knife to acchan hand.

“Yada…” minami bring the knife to her chest now

“KILL ME ACCHAN!!”

“YADAAAA!!!!” acchan shout and struggle from minami grip.

“WHY?”

“I CAN’T!!”

“WHY? TELL ME ACCHAN WHY???” Minami hold both of acchan hand now.

“BECAUSE I HAVE FALL FOR U!! I LIKE YOU!!! I LOVE U MINAMI!! STATISFY NOW!!” acchan shouting make takamina surprise and loosing his grip to her hand.

“Acchan…”

“I love you minami, I love u so much. I couldn’t do that. I cant kill someone that I love, someone that important to me.” minami just look at acchan that falling down the ground sobbing and crying.

“I never thought that I will fall for you, but everyday that I spend with you make me change. I even don’t have any urge in doing my task anymore. I wanna be with you. I wanna say I love you but I cant. I know it would impossible. I’m a devil and u are an angel. Angel and devil are enemy, they hate each other. They cant fall in love each other theyhmph….”

Haven’t finished her sentence , minami capture acchan lips and sealed any words that come out from her mouth. Acchan surprise at the sudden action but then she kiss minami back. They kiss with passion and so gently. They taste each other sweet lips.
Minami broke the kiss and guide acchan to sit beside him at the edge of the bed. Acchan only look down and cant say anything. Then minami broke the silent.

“Why u aren’t talking now?”

”What should I say? U must be already hate me now?”

“why would I kiss u if I hate you?” minami said as cup acchan face to look at him

“Listen acchan, I have to be honest to you now. U see, I… I also love you acchan. U don’t know how I have resist my feeling towards you, its killing me, it so painfull, its hurt. And when u are together with the other guy I’m jealous. Each day, each time my feeling to u is growing. I also wanna say I love u to you. But I haven’t got any chance and I’m afraid of being rejected. U always tease me that make me doubt how u feel towards me andhmph…”

Haven’t finish his sentence now is acchan turn capture minami lips. She kiss minami roughly like no other time left. They kiss passionately. Acchan wrap her hand in minami neck and minami wrap his on acchan waist. Acchan pull down to deepen the kiss and then they begin the tongue battle. minami lick acchan upper lips, try to taste his little devil lips. Minami then bring acchan to laying on the bed as still kissing each other. They then break the kiss and look at each other.

“I think I can't hold it anymore. I love u and I want you acchan, but if u don't wanna something happen after this I won't pushed u." Minami said to acchan with a loving eyes.

He is now at the top of acchan and then acchan stroke his hair and smile "I love u too minami. First I thought its a fun game but soon I realize its not a game anymore. I won't u just for my self and I want I only the one for u."

"Atsuko...."

"Anything that will happen today, I won't regret it even I'll have to get punish for the sin that I have done."

"The sin for loving an angel."

She look at minami with a warm and gentle eyes. It seems that she is no one in minami eyes. She is not a devil she is acchan, his only acchan.

He smile and move closer to the little devil face

"I won't regret either acchan."

Acchan then keep stroking his hair and saying "I wanna be yours minami."

"Let me be yours too acchan." They then continue their desire and passion that they have hold this long.

"U don't know how I should resist to kiss u everytime I see u acchan."

Minami begin give a light kiss to acchan lips

"I wanna kiss u like this."

He kiss acchan roughtly. Hungry to taste the sweet lips that have stole his first kiss.

"Minami...."

Acchan moan to the kiss and started to snaked around minami neck and the push minami to deepen the kiss. Their tongue thwirl for the dominant and minami wins the battle. He explore every inch of acchan mouth make her moan his name.

They break from the kiss and look at each other.

"Uhm.... I don't know that an angel could be this wild." The little devil teased

"Hmm.....that's your fault." Minami smirk

"Eh? Why is it my fault?" Acchan ask in a pout tone

"Coz.... U are so cute..." Minami said as licking and kissing acchan neck.

"uhnm.....minami...."

Minami start un button the little devil cloth as keep attacking the devil neck.

But suddenly acchan hold minami hand and minami stop.

"hmm? What happen?"

Acchan give minami her usual seductive smile and whispered in minami ear "I don't wanna I'm the only one naked here." She said to minami and minami got blush whether acchan just giggling. Still wrapping her hand in minami neck minami back to seduce her too

"sooo, help be to undress then"

Minami said as smirk to acchan. Acchan bite her lips and begin to un buttoning minami cloth.

Minami kiss now tracing from acchan neck to her colar bone. And planted a mark there.

"Ah, minami..."

"Uhmm...so soft...atsuko..."


That night they break the wall between the angel and the devil, they feel all the love and embrace each other.


they didnt thinking about the rule ,


they didnt think about anything.


they only think about them about the love that they share to each other.



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meanwhile in the other place


"uhmn... miichan...havent sleep?" a girl snuggle to her beloved person

"ah, mari chan. I cant sleep" the older girl then hug the small girl

"why?"

"I feel something that gonna happen and I need to do something about it." miichan look at her charm

"will something happen to you?" the older girl look worried

"I think not me, since u already release me from my curse." the smaller girl grin

"we...we...well, I dont wanna lose you so... so..." the smaller girl capture the older lips and they kiss

"I know mari chan."

"I love you miichan, dont ever leave me."

"I love u too mariko."



TBC~


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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 7) update 8-14
« Reply #78 on: August 14, 2011, 05:54:38 AM »
Finnaly~~ the scene is here~~~  :shy2:  i even read the continuation...LOL..  :on bleed:

Hot scene!!! yeah!!  :twothumbs  I love the mutual feeling they had for each other...  :farofflook:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 7) update 8-14
« Reply #79 on: August 14, 2011, 06:03:31 AM »
Ahhhhhhhhhh~ i want it, please pm me  XD  :bow:  :bow:
and my atsumina finally be together  :inlove: marimii too  :wub:
and i want to know what have happened before between acchan x takamina  :huhuh
anyway, thank for this chap (you sure fast)  :twothumbs  :twothumbs

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