Author Topic: AKB BOARDING SCHOOL (Kojiyuu,Atsumina,Mayuki) - COMPLETED (Read 80483 times)

immortal_K · « **Reply #80 on:** August 14, 2011, 05:16:26 AM »

Quote from: cmze on August 13, 2011, 10:16:28 PM

i think is going to be fun seeing acchan and yuko trying to sabotage the play..!:D

Now I am very interested in knowing what the two will do to mess everything up

Just make sure they only sabotage Haruna and Takamina's play, and let MaYuki's play run smoothly.

Please update soon

ilovecandiedapples · « **Reply #81 on:** August 14, 2011, 06:24:40 AM »

This is getting interesting can't wait for the next chapter!

cmze · « **Reply #82 on:** August 14, 2011, 12:10:48 PM »

   AKB BOARDING SCHOOL.

   14.WHO ARE YOU?

sorry about the tittle..i forgot to erase it (chapter 13) i mean "who are you?"is another chapter tittle but the play thing came to my head so i change it all! except the tittle and when i update didn't notice about the name till i read the comments

so now i'm going to use that tittle till i get to that chapter!
but don't worry! you can read the sub tittle in this case is..

<STOP THAT F-ING KISS! >

Still in the classroom..
i forgot to mention..you have to kiss! the teacher says smiling
KISS!?!?! everyone repeats
i gotta kiss sayaka! sae thought blushing
just to make things easier..no i gotta kiss mayuyu! yuki murmures while look through the window that was next to her (it's not that yuki doesn't want to kiss mayu..is just that she knows how things can complicate!)
no,no,no takamina you're not going to kiss my nyan nyan! Grrr stay away! yuko says while covers nyan nyan's mouth with both hands
takamina looks at acchan nervous but she calmed down when she saw acchan smiling
"takamina don't worry! i trust you ok.. everything is going to be fine" acchan says smiling
thanks acchan! takamina says relief
alright girls come take your scripts! the teacher says
nyan nyan bites yuko's hands!
aaahhhh..! nyan nyan what was that for? yuko says crying in pain
you just covered my mouth with your hands! nyan nyan says mad while gets up to go get her script
excuse me acchan i'm going to get mine script! takamina says while gets up
get mine minami! acchan says
ok! takamina replies smiling
yuko sits in takamina's seat and says "it seems that you are taking this better why?"
well..because there's no way in hell that kiss is going to happen! acchan says smirking
what? i thought you were agreed with the whole situation! what about with the "don't worry! i trust you " yuko says looking to acchan without blinking her eyes
i don't like the idea and i never said that i was agreed "actually thinking about them kissing makes mad" that's why you're going to help me to STOP THAT F-ING KISS! because you don't want your nyan nyan kissing my midget! right? acchan says calmed
yuko was with her jaw in the floor! she couldn't believe it acchan was acting weird but she just agreed for the sake of her relationship with nyan nyan
any questions? acchan says smirking
mmm.. does takamina know that you're a jealous bitch? yuko asks with suspicious look
"NO" acchan answers smirking
Acchan! is okay if i say that you give me chills when you act this way? yuko asks
yuko! let's focus on the problem ok! acchan says in a serious tone
(once the teacher gave the scripts left the classroom)
takamina gets back,gives acchan her script and asks what you guys were talking about?
well we were talking about how sa..hands cover yuko's mouth
"SEX" acchan answers smiling
WHAT?!?!? takamina replies in shock
yuko! you can't tell anyone about the sabotage! acchan murmures in yuko's ear and turns her look to her girlfriend who was standing in front her still in shock
minami are you okay? acchan asks
she's pale and sweaty! nyan nyan says
mariko looks at the situation concerned just like miichan,yuki,sae,sayaka!
wow she doesn't look good! sae says
she looks like she had seen a ghost! miichan says
takamina feels something is going to get out of her nose so she covered it with her hands!
what's going on takamina? acchan says while gets up and tries to see what she is covering!
let me see minami! acchan says while runs after takamina inside the classroom
acchan jumps on takamina causing them to fall! acchan saw what minami was covering (she was more happy than worried!)
takamina had a NOSEBLEED! hahahha yuko says
hahhahaha everyone in the classroom were laughing
takamina blushes (the thing was when acchan said the word "SEX" she just pictured acchan naked so that's why she had a nosebleed)
acchan helped takamina to clean up herself

AT THE THEATER PRACTICING THE PLAY!
yuki was avoiding mayu.She just talked to her when it was necessary while sae couldn't speak properly because she was really nervous (sayaka puts her nervous)
C'mon girls we have to present this play next week! give me more passion! let's go with the kiss of you two! the director says while points to takamina and nyan nyan!
yuko you have to stop them! acchan says while squeezes yuko's shoulder
what are you waiting for? acchan says mad
you're killing my shoulder! yuko replies pouting
sorry,sorry! acchan says
yuko takes her blazer and put in a way to cover her face then she runs fast to the stage shouting "LIBERTY!" and pushes miichan who was in front of takamina which was about to kiss nyan nyan out of the stage!
yuko gets back to acchan..(behind the curtain)
nobody saw a thing it was so fast! the only thing they know is that takamina and miichan fell of stage because somebody pushed them!
yuko i told you to stop it not to kill takamina! acchan says
did you had a better idea? yuko replies
good point! What was with the word "liberty"? acchan asks
well..that was the only word that came to my head at that moment hahaha! yuko says
Oh! the time is over tomorrow will practice the kissing thing! the director says
*ATTEMPS TO STOP THE F-ING KISS!* (during the week xD)
1) acchan locked takamina in the bathroom to make her miss the reharsal
2) yuko putted a thing that smelled awful in one of the theater seats (the theater smelled terrible the whole day)
3) acchan called the director's boyfriend and told him that the director was cheating on him! making the boyfriend come to the reharsal to slap the director.. and that day they didn't reharsal!
4)yuko dressed as a ninja to steal and burn the prince clothes!
5) yuko saw takamina trying to kiss nyan nyan for the scene and she threw her balloons with water
6) acchan pretended to be sick so takamina had to take care of her!
7)yuko made nyan nyan get lost in the highway (yuko was taking nyan nyan to spa which doesn't exist)
(for all the events that happened none of the girls been kissed anyone!)
*THE NIGHT OF THE PLAY*
what we're going to do? i don't have ideas left! acchan says while scratches her head
i told you we had to send takamina to africa! yuko says with her finger in her chin
really? to africa? why we don't send nyan nyan? acchan says
because..mmm nyan nyan is my future wife and i need her here! yuko says smiling
we been doing bad thing just to my minami! now is nyan nyan's turn! acchan says
hey! no way..i won't let you touch my nyan nyan! first you have to pass over me! yuko says while takes one plastic sword and points acchan with it!
that's it! i have an idea yuko! acchan says
what is it? yuko says
it's time to be creative! acchan says smirking
MEANWHILE.. ()->thoughts
sae and sayaka were on stage it was their kiss scene
everyone were quiet looking at the scene:
i love you! you're the one that i want elizabeth! Sae says while hugs sayaka
I believe you raphael and i love you too! sayaka says while breaks the hug
sae got closer to sayaka a few inches from her lips (i want to kiss her! i want to kiss her but..)
sae is about to step back but sayaya puts her arms around sae's neck and kisses her
sae replied the kiss and for a moment forgot that yuki was watching..
The curtain closes..
yuki goes after sae and starts arguing
what was that? yuki asks mad (great now i'm jealous)
nothing! sae says
it didn't looked like nothing! yuki says
we're friends ok! we always had and we always be! sae shouts
sayaka heard sae and left to her dressing room !
mayo also heard the conversation..
yuki you have to go it's your turn! sae says looking other way
we'll talk about this later! yuki says while goes to the stage!
*The curtain opens:*
princess sakura i need to kiss you! yuki says
why? answers mayu
yuki walks closer and says "because i want to" and leans to kiss mayu..both girls are red like a tomato
mayu can see yuki coming closer in slow motion to kiss her but mayu avoid the kiss
"sorry but you're confusion it's not going to steal my first kiss!" mayu says in tears
what?!? that not in the script! the dirctor says
yuki murmures "mayu" and pouts to not cry in front of everyone!
*The curtain closes*
yuki is going after mayu but is stopped by sae!
where you going? sae asks
nowhere! yuki replies
MEANWHILE
al'right yuko.. this is going to be perfect! hahahha acchan says smirking
"The curtain opens"
nyan nyan and takamina where sitting:
why you have to go? nyan nyan asks
as a prince i have duties! takamina says
please don't go! nyan nyan says sad
don't be sad! i'll be back..i promise! takamina says while moves closer to kiss her
STOP RIGHT THERE! DON'T YOU DARE TO KISS MY WOMAN! yuko shouts dressing as another prince and poiting her sword to takamina
that's not on the script! that's not on the script! the dirctor says while beats his head against the wall
unbeliveble when i thought yuko can not be more stupid! she ends up surprising me! mariko says
i think it's romantic! miichan says
well she's spended the whole week sabotaging us so that give her some points! yuki says
WTF? takamina and nyan nyan says at the same time (wow yuko is really stupid but still..she looks cute with male clothes and a weird mustache! and she had done many things to avoid me kissing takamina)
fight with me prince Kai! yuko says
okay let's fight! takamina says while gets up
nyan nyan was trying hard to not laugh
takamina and yuko starts fighting all over the stage!
war of the midgets! miichan shouts
everyone laugh while watch the fight
takamina stabs yuko first! and murmures "ok yuko die you're ruinning the whole play!"
NEVER..! yuko shouts and stabs takamina also
this is pointless they are not even hurting each other! c'mon one of you has to die! mariko says
yes,she's right! takamina hit me or i'll go after acchan! yuko murmures winking (if i make her mad is gonna be real and nyan nyan is going to get worried hahaha:P)
don't mess with acchan pervert! takamina says while beats yuko..
nyan nyan says "yuko" and goes after her rescue!
nyan nyan has yuko in her arms!
what you were thinking? nyan nyan says
yuko says (acting hurt xD) "i love you! that was what i was thinking!"
"silly" c'mon we have to take you out of here! nyan nyan says sad and trying to carry yuko
please say that you love me back! yuko says with teary eyes
nyan nyan doubt for a moment but says "I love you"
the crowd says AWW..!
kai! there you are! acchan hugs takamina or kai
acchan? takamina says
i love you kai and i know you love me back! acchan says
while kisses kai!
takamina didn't reject the kiss
there's no doubt this is not in the script! miichan says while closes the curtains
nyan nyan helps yuko to get up..
you don't have to help her nyan nyan she's pretending,takamina didn't beat her miichan says smiling!
what?!? nyan nyan says while let go yuko
nyan nyan i was going to explain you that later! thank you miichan!
you're welcome yuko!
what happen with him? takamina asks
he banged so much his head against the wall tha ended up unconsciousness! mariko answers
hey listen! people loved it! sae says!
let's open the curtains..
i love it! it was perfect! everyone shouts
the girls just smiled to the crowd..
sorry for my english

Ninjatigerdemon · « **Reply #83 on:** August 14, 2011, 01:55:42 PM »

Yay the war of the midgets
The Ways they sabotage the kiss was epic
The play was awesome too
Cant wait for next chapter
Please update soon

blughise · « **Reply #84 on:** August 14, 2011, 02:09:25 PM »

OH GAWD!!!

Acchan and Yuko combi

AWESOME!!!!!

I can't believe the things they did to sabotage the kiss between Takamina and NyanNyan!!!

But in the end.......all things worked! Well except for Yuko and NyanNyan as always

update soon

Haruko · « **Reply #85 on:** August 15, 2011, 07:38:13 AM »

i think that atsuko its a little jelousy person..jajja

cmze · « **Reply #86 on:** August 18, 2011, 12:59:50 PM »

   AKB BOARDING SCHOOL.

   15.WHO ARE YOU?

sorry for taking to long but i think this chapter is going to make it up to you well i think..! just read it!

<LET'S BE CUPID FOR 1 DAY GIRLS OK!>

it's been a week since the "school play"
yuko and nyan nyan are in stand by
acchan and takamina are better than ever
yuki have not seen mayu in all week because she has not attended school since the day of the school play!
sae and sayaka can't see each other in the eyes
sae and yuki =barely speak they don't know if they are together or not!
CLASSROOM
the teacher had to go early leaving them alone...
yuko stop with those things! hahahahaha mariko says
this is my chiken imitation! yuko says while does it
hahahahahha please yuko stop! i'm going to die! takamina shouts laughing
all the girls in the classroom are laughing except for (sae,sayaka and yuki the 3 of them were distracted:sayaka was looking at sae while sae looks at yuki but then turn to look sayaka while she wasn't looking at her! yuki was looking through her windown) yuko saw them and murmures GOTCHA!
THE BELL RINGS (LUNCH TIME..!)
yuki gets up of her sit and all her group of friends start following her..
yuki stops walking and says "stop following me"
why yuki chan? one of the girls asks
JUST STOP FOLLOWING ME! yuki shouts to the girls and goes away running!
what's wrong ? nyan nyan murmures
acchan and takamina just looked each other
mariko looked other way
miichan was pouting while yuko just looked to the girls and says "don't worry,they will be okay"
sae and others girls left the classroom..
sayaka sighs and also gets up and left the room leaving
(miichan,mariko,takamina,acchan,nyan nyan and yuko alone).Why you say that yuko? how you know they will be okay? mariko asks serious
easy! because we're going to help them! yuko replies happy while puts her chin on nyan nyan's head!
get off me! nyan nyan says moving her head
i can't you smell so good! yuko says hugging nyan nyan to not fall for the taller girl movements
what do mean we're going to help them? takamina asks
we're going to resolve their love problems! yuko answers
their love problems? everyone says at same time
"when you fall in love and the person that you love,love you back.. you are the most happy person in the world just like me! " yuko says smiling
who says that i love you back? nyan nyan asks
who says that i'm talking about you? yuko answers
uff! low blow! miichan says
get an ice on it..! takamina says
danger! danger! mariko says
THEN YOU SHOULD GET OFF ME OR THE PERSON YOU'RE IN LOVE AND LOVES YOU BACK IS GOING TO GET JELOUS! nyan nyan shouts and gets up mad forgetting that yuko was on her..(ends up hitting yuko with her head)
OMG i'm sorry yuko! are you okay? nyan nyan says while helps yuko..
yuko says with puppy eyes "my neck hurts"
ok wait i'm going to get you ice! nyan nyan says
you're pretending don't you? mariko asks
mmm no! yuko says grinning
you're so mean yuko! acchan says
ok,ok let's focus on the important thing! WE'RE GOING TO BE CUPID FOR 1 DAY! and sayaka is in love with sae that's sure and sae loves her back! yuko says
what? you're crazy! sae is not in love with sayaka,they had been friends forever! mariko says
i don't want to dress like cupid! miichan says
yuko points to acchan and takamina with her fingers and says "this too are living proof of girl love"
"yuko"takamina says while slaps yuko's finger!
mmm you got a point there! mariko says
they were looking at each other a while ago but they didn't in the eyes because they were looking in different moments so that's my proof! yuko says
we just have to make them look each other at the same time and that will be enough! acchan says
yes, we need a place apart from the school to make them face each other and talk! takamina says
everyone starts thinking...
there's one place inside the campus! miichan says while looks at mariko
where? everyone asks
ohh! now i know! mariko says
where? acchan,takamina and yuko asks at the same time
i don't think you're going to like it acchan! mariko says
why me? acchan asks
parties! parties! TAKAMINA THE BAIT ! mariko says
oh! now i remember..NO,NO and NO there's no way in hell that i'm going to let that happen again! acchan says mad while wraps her arms around takamina's body
what's going on? i don't understand! yuko says
takamina with teary eyes says why me ?
sorry takamina is one for the team! mariko says while tries to grab takamina's hand but acchan slap her hand and give her the look " DON'T-YOU-DARE-TO-TOUCH-MY-GIRL"
mariko felt shivers and hide behind miichan and says "you take care of it yuko"
what's going on? yuko asks
sorry if i took too long yuko! nyan nyan says while puts the ice on yuko's neck
aaww! my nyan nyan is taking care of me! yuko says
yuko focus! mariko says
yes,right! somebody can tell me what the hell is "takamina the bait"? yuko asks
nyan nyan starts laughing and says "poor takamina we were so mean! hahahaha"
and that means? yuko asks
mocchi has a key of one empty building here in the campus it supposed to be the boys building but because we were really rebels. The school suspended the project! mocchi's dad was the architect for the project! miichan says
great but what it has to do with takamina? yuko asks
moochi always had a crush on takamina and when we wanted to make parties or anything we used that place but there was one only way to get the key and that was using takamina as a bait! i mean she give us the key if we give her takamina! it was a trade! mariko says smiling
"acchan"takamina says
i swear i was against it! acchan answers
c'mon takmina we saved your ass many times!mariko says while puts her arm around takamina's neck
you saved my ass? takamina asks pouting
yes,we made her drink like crazy and she ends up drunk on the couch while you tried to flirt with a acchan! miichan says putting her hand on takamina's shoulder
c'mon takamina we have to help them! all the girls says (except acchan who was mad and jelous)
ok.!.takamina says looking down and pouting
thank you! all the girls says
what about yuki? acchan says
leave it to me! yuko says smiling
al'right let's get that key and let's trade takamina! yuko shouts smiling but when she saw acchan face and read what acchan told her she stood quiet!
(she said shut up or i won't tell how to catch nyan nyan)
there's mocchi! miichan says
ok i'll go! mariko says
they wait like five minutes till mariko called takamina (great now i'm her bitch! takamina thought)
mocchi took takamina's hand and dragged her around the school like if they were a couple!
grab her! mariko shouts when she saw acchan intentions to run and slap mocchi!
all the girls grabbed acchan to carry her to her room and lock her there to not interrupt takamina and mocchi!
oh god and you call yourselves my friends! acchan said
sorry acchan but you'll get message in the end of the day don't worry takamina loves you very much! miichan says
now is your turn! yuko says
ok,let's go miichan! mariko says
hey! yuko stop pretending the pain in your neck! miichan shouts while runs with mariko!
stupid miichan! yuko turn her head slowly to look at nyan nyan who was with a face "if-you-want-live-run! "
yuko follow her instincs and starts running away
nyan nyan knew that she will never cath yuko so she just sigh and went to her room..
MEANWHILE
hey sayaka! mariko says
hi mary chan! sayaka answers
sae told me to tell you that she's waiting for you in the boy building! mariko lied
really? sayaka asked blushing a little
yes! you should hurry now! mariko says
sayaka goes to the building,gets in and see sae standing there looking through the window! (fooled by miichan)
sae chan! sayaka says
how you got in? sae asks while turns around
what? sayaka says
miichan locked me here! sae says
what about the window? sayaka asks
is really hard you can't move it! sae says
miichan appears in font of window and says "I'M GOING TO LEAVE SO DO WHATEVER YOU WANT INCLUDES KISSING!
sae and sayaka blushed
MEANWHILE
all the girls went back to acchan room and starts talking
while yuko is changing her clothes to something provocative!
wow yuko you look hot! miichan says
thank you miichan! yuko says while looks at nyan nyan who is looking other way!
yuko's phone rings she picks up and leaves the girls
where did she go? acchan asks
i don't know! everyone replies
takamina enters the room tired..
minami! acchan says while hugs her and kiss her all over her face
i'm fine atsuko! takamina says laughing
yuko get's back to the room and says "girls let's go"
when did you change your clothes? acchan asks
don't pain attention to the little details acchan! yuko says while pinches acchan's arm
it's late look the sunset..mariko says
we spend all day doing things and we didn't relize it was getting late! takamina says
"al'right girls we're going out of the school" yuko says
what?!?! how?!?! all the girls says
sshh i have a car! yuko says murmuring while they passes the entrance of the school
that's the car! miichan says
yes,run ! yuko says
the girls get on the car and yuko drives far enough from the school then she pulls over
why we stop? and where we going? mariko asks
*POP** POP*
what's that? all the girls asks afraid
ohh that! is yuki in the trunk! yuko answers smiling
you putted yuki in the trunk? are you insane? all the girls asks while nyan nyan gets out to help her friend
what? she is really annoying and she didn't wanted to come in the easy way so i had to force her! yuko says
yuki was with her hands tied up also her foot and with bandages covering her eyes!
don't untie her! she will get really mad! yuko says
is that you yuko? yuki says while nyan nyan uncover her eyes
you bunch of...just untie me and take me to the school,i want to sleep! yuki says
sorry yuki we can't.. till we get close to your happyness! yuko says smiling
what are you talking about? yuki asks
wait and see! girls let pass her to the backseat! yuko replies
yuko was driving (she wasn't really good at it)
where you get the car? why you are dressing like a man?yuki asks
well..the true i stole the car from a flower delivery and this is his clothes!
what?!? and where is the man? yuki asks
i don't know! i just stole this things and i'll pay him back someday i think! yuko answers
that's why you were dressing sexy! nyan nyan says mad and looking through her window
we're dead! we are totally dead..takamina says
now i can hear my parents saying that i shouldn't have friends like yuko! yuki says smiling
you said we are friends! yuko says smiling
no,i didn't! yuki answers
where we going? acchan asks
i don't know where lives mayu! yuko answers
what?!? you were planning to take me to mayu's house
no! yuko answers
yuki sighs
i'm going to take to mayu's house! yuko says with her thumb up
well.. we never going to find her! miichan says
it's almost imposible yuko! mariko says
shut up! we're going to find her! you'll see! yuko says driving fast
yuko slow down,i still want to live!! takamina says
noooooo..!yuko says
they were moving left to right and right to left!
ouch my butt! acchan says
watch out with that girl yuko! nyan nyan says
yuko brake hard!
we almost kill a girl! mariko says in shock
oh! god.. takamina faint
takamina,takamina! acchan says
let me help you with that! miichan says while starts slaping takamina to wake her up!
stop miichan! takamina says in pain
yuko gets out of the car to help the girl..when she saw saw the girl face she hugged her and says "finally found you mayu"
huh? mayu looked at yuko
there's someone that needs you! yuko says while shows mayu who was inside the car!
ahh! yuki chan what happen? why are you all tied up? mayu asks corcerned while gets on the car..
all the girls get out of the car to leave them alone: acchan and takamina went to walk while mariko and miichan went to eat and yuko and nyan nyan went to sit in park
"mayu.."yuki says while looks at her examinating if she's not hurt..!
are you okay? the car didn't hit you? yuki ask worry while looks mayu's eyes
i'm fine let me untie you! mayu say while helps yuki
why you haven't go to school? yuki asks
well i was ashamed for what i said the last time! mayu answers looking other way
but it was true,i'm sorry mayu if i hurt you with my confusion! yuki says while puts her hand on mayu's chin to pull her closer for a kiss!
MEANWHILE
don't be mad! i wanted to help! takamina says
acchan doesn't look at takamina
c'mon acchn you know i'm yours,there's no need to be jelous! you're the only one for me...
"takamina" i love you and hate looking at you with somebody else! i'm sorry but it's the tru...acchan was interrupt by a kiss.Acchan sees a dark ally and push takamina to it!
acchan had takamina against the wall...
between kissing, licking and biting..takamina says "i love you bossy acchan"
acchan smiles and says "i love you takamina the bait"
MEANWHILE
nyan nyan and yuko sitted in a seat..the park was empty
yuko rested her head in nyan nyan's thighs
what are you doing get off me! nyan nyan says blushing
i'm sorry,i'm tired! yuko answers
mmm i guess then it's okay as long as you don't act like a pervert! nyan nyan says
ok! yuko says
how did you know that she was around here?
i saw reading a manga once and well i guesses that she would be here buying one
you planned everything,stole a car and stole clothes for something that you weren't sure that was going to work!
yep! yuko answers
wow you're the most careless person that i ever met!
i don't need a guarantee..i just throw myself for what i feel! that's how it is..even if i lose..i'll be fine anyways!yuko says smiling
nyan nyan blushes and kisses the girl who is resting in her thighs on her cheek!
yuko blushes and closes her eyes
sorry for my english and do anyone knows the name of this song or from where is the part 3:05? please help out with this i have that song stuck in my head!

http://m.youtube.com/?rdm=4n549ypty#/watch?v=pUYyCEAz4cw

blughise · « **Reply #87 on:** August 18, 2011, 02:27:14 PM »

Yay Yuko's really bringing the girls back together again

Takamina bait...ohh poor her!!!
Saeyaka and Mayuki together now!!! though I like Saeyuki more

update soon

freyatn · « **Reply #88 on:** August 18, 2011, 07:28:39 PM »

i lol all the chap

hey put the link again, that one is not from a video o.o

AAAice · « **Reply #89 on:** August 18, 2011, 10:11:53 PM »

Aww, it's been awhile commenting in this thread. :/

Anyway, LOL at AtsuYuu's sabotage plans.

I gotta admit, I am curious like Mariko too on what Yuko's real intention are. (Well I know it is that Jim and someone else but there is still something behind it.)

Poor Takamina 'The Bait' for taking the sacifice.

As usual, I can't stop my comment without mentioning my Kojiyuu. xD Miichan and her mouth by saying Yuko's pretending act. The last scene is just...

Hehe, next time Haruna, please kiss Yuko on the lips okay? :]]

Haruko · « **Reply #90 on:** August 19, 2011, 08:08:01 AM »

I wanna knoe what mocchi do with takamina... jajaj pervert idea i have in my mind...

Good kojiyuu almost a kiss!!

luckymmsg · « **Reply #91 on:** August 19, 2011, 11:13:42 AM »

Yuko sure knows how to bring the girls together but her instinct sure is stunning.

the last scene is

, Kojiyuu more please.

. Haruna, please kiss her on the lips, that will be so sweet (imagining)

cmze · « **Reply #92 on:** August 19, 2011, 11:34:20 AM »

   AKB BOARDING SCHOOL.

   16.WHO ARE YOU?

   <PRANKS WAR !>

takamina and acchan were looking at yuko who was sleeping hugging a teddy bear and with her thumb in her mouth (like a baby xD)
i can't believe this girl defeated mariko! takamina says
minami i don't think is a good idea! acchan says while tries hard to not laugh
c'mon acchan for once let me win! besides is" prank day" and everyone knows that she defeated mariko so i don't think that anyone want to prank her! takamina says pouting with puppy eyes
well you're right about that! besides she locked me! for you to go with that.. "mocchi bitch" so do whatever you want! acchan says mad
ohh yuko this is payback hahahhaha! takamina says while paints yuko's face and takes pictures of yuko hugging the teddy bear and with her thumb on her mouth
takamina and acchan laughs like crazy and left the room to go print the pictures..
yuko wakes up and see that acchan and takamina are not in the room..
why they didn't wake me up? yuko says while walks to the bathroom still with her eyes a little bit close..
yuko washes her face and looks herself in the mirror and see all the scrawls on her face! her eyebrows were orange,her cheeks has black points and the tip of her nose was red...
WTF? yuko shouts while tries to clean her face (yuko didn't know what's worst "her face painted like that or her using a fake mustache and big glasses")
SHIT the painting is not vanishing! yuko shouts mad while looks her watch and it was almost time for the class to begin so she sighs and got dress..
IN THE CLASSROOM!
hahahahahha yuko looks like a baby! a girl says
(THE PICTURE WAS PASTED ON THE BOARD)
everyone was laughing about..
what amazing picture? how you call it? mariko asks
BABY SQUIRREL IN ALL ITS GLORY! takamina answers smiling while hugs acchan
(everyone burst of laughing)
that's perfect! miichan says laughing
nyan nyan was also laughing (the picture was a piece of work xD)
yuki was also laughing till she saw sae then she remembered what she told mayu last night..
FLASHBACK
i'm sorry mayu if i hurt you with my confusion! yuki says while puts her hand on mayu's chin to pull her closer for a kiss! (on the cheek xD)
mayuyu you're very important for me,don't you ever firget that and i know i'm kinda..(sighs) just don't miss school,i need to see you! yuki says blushing
mayu smiles pulls yuki for a hug and whispers in her ear "i'm sorry and worry, i'll be waiting for you"
END OF THE FLASHBACK
yuki smiles and sees sae enter the room..
what's that? sae asks laughing
that..my friend is a master piece! mariko says laughing
somebody else enters the room..
wha..aat's wrong with her? everyone asks afraid
it was yuko with her eyes on fire and mad "how dare you put thie shit on my face? yuko asks mad whiles get closer to takamina grabs her by her shoulders and make her get up of seat to face her!
uuhh ...mm..!  takamina says stuttering
i think takamina won't get out alive of this one! she seems pretty mad! miichan says
another midgets fight! that would be great,you need to untie this.. the score is 1-1! sae says smiling
you know takamina its hard to take this paint off my face! yuko says pouting while pulls takamina closer to her
fight! fight! fight! other girls says
well that's what you get for make me pay you lunches, for made me "the bait of the day" yesterday and for lock acchan in our room!
you're rich besides i always forget that i have pay! yuko says smiling while puts her hand around takamina's neck
do you forget to pay?nyan nyan asks trying hard to nit laugh (yuko's face was really funny she still has paint on her face and looks worst than the picture)
IT'S NOT THAT IS JUST..THE LAST I DIDN'T HAVE ENOUGH MONEY AND THEY MADE WASH THE DISHES AND HELP IN THERE ALL DAY!!! takamina shouts mad while takes yuko's arms off her neck
alright, alright i'm sorry takamina! take a deep breath please..yuko says while deep breaths to show takamina how do it! (both girls takes deep breaths)
ok..now we're calm but like sae says "we need to untie this! so i propose a pranks war!"
a pranks war? takamina says
between you and me! yuko says
ok! takamina says
great! yuko says while goes to her seat
yuko sits and her desk crumbles making her fall..!
(everyone laughs)
OUCH my butt! what the hell happen? yuko says while gets up and rubs her butt
"nothing yuko mmm..it was totally an accident,i didn't plan anything against you after you locked me up in the trunk! no definately i didn't plan anything! yuki says while scratches her head with the screwdriver"
you SKNNY,TALL BITCH! yuko murmures
ups! i think this means trouble! miichan says
you know what.. i'm going to play with you kids to this "prank war" humiliate you is priceless! yuki says
if yuki is in,i'm in too! mariko says smiling
i'm in too,i have to protect takamina! acchan says
yay! i want to play too! miichan says
what hell! i'm in too! sae says
i want to play to! sayaka says
"so then let's play,the last one standing is the winner!yuko shouts
what a babies! yuko you don't know what you are getting into! nyan nyan thinks while looks other way
the teacher enters the room and the class begins
while the techer is talking mariko texts (sayaka,sae,yuki,acchan and takamina:)
"let's conspire against yuko! I don't care winning,i just want to make her loose
so this is a truce! btw don't tell nyan nyan.."
the girls reply: OK!
the classes end..
okay let's the pranks begin! yuko shouts while runs away from the classroom to prepare herself
^^ ALL PRANKS OF THE DAY..
1)mariko sees yuko forming and watching a desert in the caffetery,mariko call her friend who works in the caffetery and asks her to put hot souce on the desert and sell it to yuko! (yuko coused a big mess to caffetery,she drank everybody's soda then she had to pay them for the sodas)
2) sae and sayaka saw yuko running away from a buch of girls (the girls of the caffetery,she didn't pay them all xD) yuko hides behind a tree so sae call the girls and points to the tree! (they ended up beating yuko)
3) a cheerleader was sent by yuki..the cheerleader got closer to yuko and says "wow yuko,you seem down! do you want me to give a massage? mmm no,i'm okay! c'mon don't be shy! the cheerleader says while puts her hands on yuko's shoulders and putted on yuko some cream (it was something that attracs bees) hey! wait for me ok! the cheerleader says
yuko was sitting quiet wating for the girls but some many bees appear around yuko! she gets up and starts moving to make them go away but more and more comes..yuko runs!
(yuki was looking everything and texted mariko and miichan:going to you!)
4)mariko and miichan sees yuko coming with the bees behind her,yuko is about to pass mariko and miichan but they putted their feet in the way..making yuko fall! yuko looks at them who are smiling and gets up to runs away remembering the bees
5) yuko went to shower in the pool showers to avoid everyone but takamina and acchan were following her when yuko was showering they took her clothes away
yuko gets out of the pool area looking everywhere covering her naked body with just basketball balls! (one covering up and other covering down)
the girls where watching from a secret spot laughing!
i think is enaugh! mariko says
i had the blast! yuki says
i won! takamina says
yuko walked through the hall (there was 4 people)
yuko saw mayu and starts whispering hey mayu chan!
what?!? mayu was surprised seing yuko like that! mayu took her to her room and gave her some clothes
what the hell yuko? mayu asks
i don't know!" it's pranks war" not "pranks against yuko" i think they are conspiring against me! yuko says pouting
yes,they are! mayu says
ahhh! yuko shouts
yes,they are conspiring against you! hahaha everyone knows that! mayu says laughing
those son of a...yuko says while ends dressing up
thanks mayu chan!
YUKO'S PAYBACK
1) yuko gives sae's number to every girl in the school making sae's phone explode in sae's face and burned a bit sae's hair
2) yuko sended a letter to mocchi with takamina's sign on it cousing mocchi runs after takamina around the school like crazy
3) yuko called a gossip show and said that "acchan doesn't like to shower and never brushes her teeth"
4) yuko got in yuki's room while she was sleeping and made a trap when yuki woke up she moved a string that string made a cake crash on yuki's face!
5) yuko sended a cake with a lot hot sauce to miichan!
6)mariko was sleeping face down so yuko used handcuffs to tie her to bed and starts hitting her butt with a book(a big one)
payback is a bitch isn't it? yuko asks
i'm sorry! now stop! mariko says in tears
ok! that's all i needed..see you! yuko says
hey! i have handcuffs! get back here squirrel! mariko shouts while yuko closes the door
sorry the next is going to be better! and i didn't check it twice sorry about that..!

luckymmsg · « **Reply #93 on:** August 19, 2011, 11:57:40 AM »

The prank war is just too funny.

. erm seems like Sayaka is safe from Yuko's payback.

immortal_K · « **Reply #94 on:** August 19, 2011, 02:08:50 PM »

LOL Love the prank war, and Yuko's payback is priceless.

Thanks you, please update soon

blughise · « **Reply #95 on:** August 19, 2011, 03:39:38 PM »

SO hilarious
PRANK WAR for FTW
but yuko's pranks is way off the chart :p

update soon

cmze · « **Reply #96 on:** August 20, 2011, 12:08:20 PM »

   AKB BOARDING SCHOOL.

   17.WHO ARE YOU?

   <JEALOUSY>

() <- thoughts
nyan nyan was laying in her bed (what the hell yuko? i hateee you! you're so stupid! i don't know why i'm thinking about you! you're just...)
AHHH...! nyan nyan shouts mad waking up her partner..
kojima san what's wrong? yui asks
ah..well there was a spider! nyan nyan says nervous
al'right go back to sleep tomorrow is trip so if want to enjoy it you need to have energy! yui says tired
ok! nyan nyan says while looks to the ceiling and rembers why she's so mad at yuko..
FLASHBACK
nyan nyan walks the hall nervous looking for yuko
(i have to tell her because if i don't do it today i will try it again but i never done this kind of thing before..ok nyan nyan just take a deep breath and calm down how hard can be confess to a girl? i mean is yuko! she nice,smart,she has beatiful smile ever! she's just most adorable person that i ever met! oh god there she is..)
nyan nyan sees yuko getting out of mariko's room and says hi to the her
hey yuko chan! nyan nyan says while walks closer to her
hey nyan nyan! yuko says (what the hell she's planning? who might be after this? Grr that must be acchan! yeah that must be her..tell the press that she doesn't like clean herself was classic hahahahaha!)
i~i need no,no ..i~i..want..i just..!nyan nyan says blushing and stuttering (what?why i can't speak? just what i needed..! this could any worst?)
huh? i know what's going here! yuko says
you~you..do? nyan nyan asks
yes! yuko answers (so do you want to prank me too? yes there's no doubt that you're with them! you're not going to fool me nyan nyan..)
i..i like you! nyan nyan says blushing and covering her face with her hands(oh god! why she is not answering me back? what she doesn't like me?)
nyan nyan moves her hands a little bit to look at yuko yuko looks at nyan nyan (WTF! this prank is way out of line! playing with my feelings nyan nyan..no way! you're not going to laugh about me this time!)
oh that's cool! i like you too.. nyan nyan was about to smile when she hears yuko say AS A FRIEND!
(what? i thougth that..STUPID YUKO!)
"yuko"nyan nyan shouts while slaps her and goes away
lOUCH" (she must be mad because i discover her prank)
END OF THE FLASHBACK
nyan nyan tried to sleep...
yuko wake up..today is the trip! takamina says
nooo! yuko answers while hugs her teddy bear
c'mon i want to see how the other girls reacts for yours stupid pranks! acchan says
i forgot about that! yuko says while gets up to the bed to go to the bathroom
acchan why is not anything about you in the news? takamina asks hugging acchan and kissing her
well..i blackmailed yuko with the picture and made her call to the show to deny the rumor!
and the believed you? takamina asks
"don't tell yuko but i sent the picture so they had to believe person who looks like that can't be a good source" acchan says smirking!
wow acchan you're so smart,my girlfriend knows how to manage the press with just one finger! takamina says
acchan grabs takamina's hand and drags her out the room to an empty classroom..
acchan what are doing here? takamina asks
if we kiss in the room yuko would try to tape it so i had to choose the empty classroom..acchan says smirking
but..but somebody can see us!! takamina says nervous
you look so cute when you're nervous that you make want to..what are you guys doing here? moochi asks interrupting acchan..(i shouldn't say this but thank god that mocchi enetered the room,i don't want to know what she wanted to say!)
mocchi got closer and tries to take takamina's hand but an possesive,bitchy and jealous acchan slaps her hand
you don't have somewhere else to go mocchi? i mean with yours "friends"acchan says whith a little smirk
"acchan" takamina says
mocchi pouts and leaves the room
you are really mean sometimes! takamina says
i don't want to be mean but she makes me..why she always tries to get you? why she can not understand that you belong with me! acchan says while hugs takamina tightly
ok..ok acchan like i said "i'm yours" takamina says also wrapping her arms around acchan
MEANWHILE
yuki was walking the hallway to go to her classroom..she passes the school's newspaper office and opens the door,she waves at mayu but mayu ignores her
(how can you be so hypocrite? don't you dare to come closer to me yuki!!)
(mayuyu is really busy maybe i should let her work! we're going to see each other in the trip anyways)
yuki leaves the room and goes to the classroom
IN THE CLASSROOM
i want to go! c'mon..sae says
where we going this month? miichan asks
i don't know..! sae answers
we're going to excavate and look for fossils! mariko says
i can't wait!! yuko says smiling while enters the room
"YOU" mariko,miichan and sae shouts at the same time!
hey girls! yuko says grinning
you burned my hair! you made drink from a fishbowl! now i can't sit my butt hurts! the three girls shouts mad
seriously you drank from a fishbowl? yuko asks
gross! sae says
shut up.. michael jackson! miichan says (refering to the event when michael jackson burned his hair accidentally)
you deserve it and more because you putted my nyan nyan against me! yuko says
what? the three girls say at the same time
what you heard! yuko shouts
we never asked nyan nyan to join us! miichan says
HA..! she tried to prank me because of you!yuko says
look *mariko showed the message to yuko where it says "don't tell nyan nyan"*
yuko was frozen she couldn't say a word...
sorry for my english tomorrow i'll update both fics..sorry today was a long day and i am tired..! (i didn't check it twicee..!:P)

yukofan · « **Reply #97 on:** August 21, 2011, 12:15:32 PM »

nice fanfic..i really enjoy it

yuko

i wonder what will yuko do to win haruna's heart again..

please update

cmze · « **Reply #98 on:** August 22, 2011, 04:17:56 AM »

   AKB BOARDING SCHOOL.

   17.5 WHO ARE YOU?

   <JEALOUSY>

WHAT? are you serious? no waaaaay! yuko says while grabs mariko by her shirt to pull her closer to her face!
what's wrong? mariko asks smiling
NAAAAAAAAAAA....! yuko shouts while leaves the classroom to look for nyan nyan
weird girl! mariko says while scartches her cheek
takamina and acchan entered to the classroom and asks at the same time "What's wrong with yuko?"
the right question is "what's not wrong with yuko? sae says (everyone laughs)
hahahaha no,seriously..she running all the hallway shouting "nyan nyan"! takamina says
(everyone laughs again..)
MEANWHILE
yuko is finds nyan nyan...she was buying a desert for the trip
nyan nyan! yuko shouts while runs to nyan nyan's direction smiling
nyan nyan looks at her and murmures "here we go"
yuko hugs nyan nyan tightly and asks "is it truth that you like me?"
nyan nyan blushes and answers "NO"
ahhhh! but you said it last night..yuko says pouting
what? no.. that was a prank! nyan nyan says (still red)
that's not true! you confessed to me! yuko says
"i didn't" nyan nyan replies
so who made prank me?..because mariko and the other girls didn't
well...TAKAMINA! nyan nyan says
takamina? that..yuko runs to the classroom while nyan nyan text takamina :
takmina just agree with everything that yuko tells you! i'll explain later! -_-
takamina was talking with acchan when she feels her phone, she reads the message while yuko enters to the classroom kicking the door
"TAKAMINA" yuko shouts
takamina looks down and murmures "why me?!?!"
DID YOU MAKE NYAN NYAN try to prank me? yuko asks with puppy eyes (hoping to know the true..she lows the tone of voice in the last 4 words)
takamina sighs and look up..yes!
yuko pouts and gets a depressive aura while she goes to her desk
what's just happened? miichan says
nyan nyan enters the classroom looking if takamina was ok then she went to her seat
yuko sighs and then rest her head on her desk
she's depressed! sae says laughing
"sae!" we gotta cheer up our baby squirrel! yuki says while gets up of her seat and goes to yuko..
i'm not depressed..i have a broken heart! yuko says
i thought you had a person that love you back and that you were happy! nyan nyan says with out look at yuko
yes,i do have a person that loves me! yuko says
GOOD MORNING GIRLS! ready for trip of past knowledge! the teacher says
yes! all the girls shouts
sorry if i took too long but the headmaster told me that i have to take 2 girls of other grade..to be exact girls of the school newspaper so be nice to them.. ok come in and introduce yourselves! the teacher says
the two girls enters the classroom
yuko shouts "mayu chan" while yuki smiles at her but mayu ignores her and looks at yuko and smile at her..
what's wrong with her? yuki murmures
i'm ota aika my friends call me lovetan nice to meet you!
i'm watanabe mayu..mmm i think that's it..mayu says looking bored
ok..! well let's go to the bus! tye techer says
yuko c'mon cheer up this trip is going to be fun so..be our clown! mariko says while puts her arm around the little girl neck
yeah yuko don't get to you! acchan says smirking
what? this was your girlfriend's fault! yuko answers
hey! don't blame my minami! acchan says
but what happen? sae asks
nyan nyan pranked me! yuko says pouting
great! yuki says
whaaat? that not great! yuko says while looks at yuki who was walking to mayu
"mayuyu"yuki says while grabs her by her arm
mayu turns around to see to the person that was grabbing her arm
what do you want? leave me alone mayu says while release he arm and goes to sit in the bus leaving yuki speechless by that action
yuko takes yuki's shoulder and says "let sit in the back"
"yuko" a voice shouts and hugs her from the back
huh? yuko turns around and says "chiyuu"
i'm here to make you happy! chiyuu says
and also to make mad tomochin! miichan says to mariko
everyone sits in the back while nyan nyan,mayu,acchan and takamina sits in the first seats..
why takamina and acchan don't with us? yuko asks
well..she's the president so she has to "control us" and she has to see if everyone came and that stuff and acchan will always be where takamina is! sayaka says
Yuki was just staring to mayu who was sitting next to lovetan..(mayu knew that yuki was staring at them)
Yuko was looking nyan nyan who was playing with her psp (nyan nyan wasn't playing,she was looking from the screen to yuko and chiyuu who was sleeping in yuko's shoulder)
acchan and takamina were also sleeping (acchan's head was on takamina's shoulder and takamina's head was resting in acchan head)
1 HOUR LATER..
finally here! tha teacher says while is out of the bus
acchan, acchan wake up! takmina says
noooo five more minutes! acchan says
everyone was getting out of the bus..
takamina quickly stole a kiss from acchan without anybody notices
mmm now i'm up! acchan says smiling
ok let's go! takamina says while takes acchan's hand
al'right girls what we're going to do is pretty simple..here..these are maps with clues the first pair who resolve this will get a surprise take your excavation tools and i'll be in the pool so that's it! the teacher says
we gotta work while she's enjoying the pool! mariko says
oh! i forgot about the pairs! mmm you with you and you with you! (after making the groups they were like this:
1)sayaka and sae 2)yuko and chiyuu 3)mariko and miichan 4)nyan nyan and yui 5) lovetan and mayu 6)acchan and tomochin 7)takamina and mocchi )
hey.. i have no group! yuki says
mmm..well everyone is pairing up so i think i have to make a group! ohh yeah you join to these two they are younger so they might need help! the teacher says while points to mayu and lovetan
mayu sighs and say "with yuki!!"
the teacher leaves them and goes to the pool
miichan let me go! i'm going to kill her and then i'll bury her here! acchan shouts mad while points to mocchi
calm down acchan! mariko says
you're not the only one who wants to kill someone and bury her here! tomochin says while looks at yuko who is being hugged by chiyuu
not you too tomochin! yui says
sayaka did you see that? sae asks
what? sayaka asks
nyan nyan is jealous! sae says murmuring
noo! really? sayaka asks while looks at nyan nyan
nyan nyan was looking also at yuko mad and pouting
hmm.. i think the squirrel needs help with the cat! sae says
hey chiyuu why you don't show us your love for yuko and kiss her! sayaka says while winks her eye
yes,why not! chiyuu says smiling
sae looks at nyan nyan who was pouting to not cry and turned around to not look and says oh god! a little bit closer a little closer! those lips gotta touch...
(it was kiss on the cheek but nyan nyan wasn't looking so she didn't know)
STOP! nyan nyan shouts totally red while turns around to face the others
"nyan nyan"! yuko says
how you can dare to kiss her! what the hell is wrong with you? you say that you love someone you shouldn't be cheating! STUPID SQUIRREL...
don't call me stupid and i wasn't cheating...! yuko replies shouting
oh! so how is it call kissing someone else? jerk! nyan nyan says mad
you and your perverted mind! yuko shouts
me and my perverted mind! i'm not the one who likes cutting someone else hair to put it under her pillow or pretended to drown to kiss other girl! nyan nyan shouts
WHAT? sae says
shut up sae! both girls shouts mad
(everybody else was shocked for their discussion that they just stood quiet listening)
well if i kiss someone is not of your bussines! you said that we're not friends! and you're not girlfriend or anything! yuko shouts
YOU RIGHT I'M NOT YOUR FRIEND OR YOUR GIRLFRIEND AND I DON'T CARE! YOU CAN GO AND MARRY CHIYUU..nyan nyan shouts even redder while runs away
yuko are sure that you and nyan nyan are not a couple?acchan asks
it looked like a couple fight! miichan says
i agree! yuki says
i wasn't cheating on you! yuko murmures sad
well the circis is over everyone go to look for your treasure..takamina says
everyone start to leave
acchan let's go! tomochin says
no,we're going follow them! acchan says while points mocchi and takamina
what? no! we're going to follow yuko and chiyuu! tomochin says pouting
no,nothing is going to happen between them! chiyuu is doing this to make jealous! acchan says while takes tomochin's hand and drags her following takamina
really is for making me jealous? tomoching asks
yeah yeah..acchan says paying more attention to takamina and mocchi
yeah bitch keep your hands off my girl! acchan murmures
so we're not going to look for anything we just going to spend the afternoon fallowing them! tomochin says
yes! acchan answers
ok but let's hide they could notice that we're following them! tomochin says smiling
yes you're right! acchan says
MEANWHILE
mayu,lovetan where walking to steps ahead
mayu was taking pictures of everything and not paying attention to yuki,she just talks to lovetan
i think we should start looking for this thing! yuki says while shows that map
i think that's something that you should do,we just came here to take pictures! mayu says coldly
but we can help! lovetan says smiling
mayu just looked other way
what it says? lovetan asked
we need to find something in a tree in that hill! yuki says
let's go then! lovetan says
they started looking in all the trees but they couldn't find anything so they just sittend on the grass while mayu was taking pictures of the view far from them
lovetan that was your stomach? yuki asks
sorry sorry! lovetan says blushing
don't worry is fine! do you want something to eat?
yes,i'm hungry! lovetan answers
yuki gives her money
what? why you give me this? lovetan asks
i'm inviting you! go eat something! yuki says
but what about you too? lovetan asks
we're gonna be fine! go to eat! yuki says
ok! lovetan says happy while gets up to go to the hotel restaurant
mayu gets back and looks for lovetan
she's not here,she went to eat! yuki says while gets up
mayu pouts and starts to walk away
yuki takes her by her arm and says "you're not going anywhere we're going to talk"
mayu tries to go but yuki was stronger
let me go! mayu shouts while is forcing with yuki
mayu pulls so hard that both girls ends up rolling down the hill,yuki is on top of mayu..
ouch my head! yuki says
mayu reacts en tries to pull yuki off her
let me go! mayu shouts again
calm down! yuki says
no! mayu says
so then i won't let you go,sorry! yuki says
let me go hypocrite! mayu shouts while pulls yuki with her arms
hypocrite? you're the hypocrite you said that you will wait for me and look how you acting! yuki says while takes mayu's arms with her hands and puts them on the grass
and so what? what you're going to do about it? mayu shouts with a hate look
yuki kisses her (mayu tried to resist)
yuki let go mayu's arms and putted her hand in mayu's cheek while mayu's arm went to yuki's neck to pull her closer.Yuke pulled out the kiss catch her breath while mayu's look changed from hate to a sad one and says "why you kissed sae yesteday?"
huh? that was why you were acting this way? yuki asks
mayu looks other way
we were braking up..it was a good bye kiss,sorry if hurt you! yuki answers
you kissed her for a good bye kiss! mayu says sad
i told her that i was truly in love with you and she told me she was in love with sayaka! yuki answers while looks mayu in the eyes
you are in love with me? mayu says
yes totally in love! yuki answers while kisses mayu all over her face..
yuki stop! you're tickling me! mayu shouts
MEANWHILE
acchan and tomochin were looking at takamina who was digging
moichi gets closer to takamina and gives her a bottle of water
thank you! takamina says
while takamina is drinking the water mocchi starts drying her with a towel
what are you doing mocchi?takamina asks while mocchi is still drying her
drying you..your sweaty! mocchi says
i can do it myself! takamina answers nervous
no,is the last thing i could do besides you're the one digging because i have this broken wrist!thank you takamina mocchi says while hugs her and kiss her on the cheek making takamina red
ENOUGH! acchan shouts while gets out of the bush and tomochin trying to stop her
WTF? takamina thought
stay away from my minami! acchan shouts
your minami! who says so? moochi replies
well me jerk i'm her....tomochin covers acchan's mouth and whispers in her ear "sorry but if you say it the whole school would find out and you're acting job may be over"
irrmm doonn't cammmre! (i don't care) acchan tries to say while tomochin covers her mouth
takamina takes acchan hand and drags her to somewhere else while smiles
<far away from mocchi>
what was that acchan? you almost ruin everything!
i'm sorry,i got jealous! acchan says pouting
were you spying on us all the afternoon? takamina asks
"NO" you're crazy! acchan answers nervous
but you were hiding in a bush! takamina says
no, i wasn't hiding in the bush, i was behind the bush!acchan says
takamina sighs and sits on the grass
acchan also sits next to her
let's watch the sunset acchan! takamina says while kiss her on her cheek
acchan hugs takamina and says "i love you minami"
"i love you too atsuko"takamina replies
MEANWHILE
yuko was sad laying on the grass alone looking at the sky (chiyuu left with tomomi)
yuko sighs and says "who needs you oshima yuko?"
I DO! nyan nyan says
yuko gets up and says "what are you doing here?"
i'm sorry..! nyan nyan says crying
yuko got closer to nyan nyan and wipes her tears with her thumb.. " i told you these starts don't want to see you cry!"
yuko...i love you! nyan nyan says while leans and kiss her
nyan nyan breaks the kiss and asks you really love somebody else?
no never! you're the only one nyan nyan i love you! yuko says while hugs her
it's just that i thought it was a dream! hahahha yuko says
nyan nyan puts her hand on her forhead and sighs "i shouln't fall for you!"
bad joke nyan nyan you know how hard was to make you confess? i demand another kiss for that! yuko says
ok! nyan nyan replies smiling
sorry for my english...i gotta wait for this thing to charge to update my other fanfic it may be in a couples hours (i didn't read it twice sorry)

haruhi16 · « **Reply #99 on:** August 22, 2011, 05:13:23 AM »

hahaha Kojiyuu is so funny

and cute

nice fic!

update soon!