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Author Topic: X-5 hottest boyband - chap 18 [Kojiyuu, Atsumina, Saeyuki & others] 27/12/2011  (Read 82971 times)

Offline kahem

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Selfish Kai is great ;)

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@immortal_K : yeah there will be more of it  :) . Thank you for reading and yes i'll update soon  :thumbsup

@kahem : Yeah he's selfish now 'cause he loves her  :heart:

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here's the continuation, sorry for my english btw  :nervous




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                                                                                                              Chapter 10
                                                                                     KojiYuu - The girl that i want to be with forever




"Wait, Yuu. Where are going?"

"Just, wait. I know you'll like it there."

"Just where exactly are we...." she stopped as she saw a small house with a small garden with beautiful flowers around it.

               Yuu called someone inside the house, it was the caretaker and he lead them inside. The house is just simple but she was amazed by the antiques displayed every corner inside the house. The house was really clean and all the things were nicely arranged. There was a table and 2 chairs outside the house and it was a perfect place to start a morning with a coffee and you can't hear any distracting noise like horns of the cars, people shouting and chitchatting in the city. You can only hear the tweet of the birds around it and you will love the fresh smell of the air. If someone would love to live simple and in a quiet place, that someone would probably choose this place to live.

"Wow..Yuu, who owned this?"

"It's mine.."

"Y-Yours? but how-"

"My grandfather built this house just for me near the resort. While my parents were busy managing our resort, my grandpa and I sneaked out to come here in this house that he built for me. Can you see that table and 2 chairs? That is where we always seated and have our coffee every morning. We always talked about a lot of things, but mostly about his love life when he was young. He said he was really happy when she married my grandma. He always talk about it all over again everyday, i know it was funny but i always had fun talking to him. He totally understand me so i never get bored talking to him. My grandfather is a good man. I missed him so much."

"I see, so no one is living in this house?"

"I didn't let anyone to live here. This house is really special to me, i have so many good memories with my grandfather here so i decided to get a caretaker to take care of this house and keep it clean like before."

'I didn't know there was a side of him like this being so senti aside from being so crazy, perverted and all.' the girl thought while staring at him.

"So how many girls that you already brought here with you?" she was trying to change the mood of the guy.

"Honestly, you were the first girl that i brought here with me. I promised to my grandpa that i will bring the girl i love to this house with me, he said he will be really happy if one day i came back here with a girl that i want to be with forever.." He seriously said

              The girl blushed after hearing all the words that Yuu have said. She know he was serious, she can't say that it was just a story that he made up, it was the first time she saw him like this. She don't want to be cold at the moment, she don't want to ruin Yuu's moment remembering one of his loved ones. She suddenly move near to him, she held his hand and just smiled at him.

"I-I'm sorry if i'm telling you about this,Haruna. I -"

"I'm happy that you're telling me all this." she smiled at him.

             The guys just smiled back at her. He cupped her face and was about to kiss her but the caretaker suddenly came in.

"Sir, here's the coconut juice and cake that you wanted me to buy."

"Oh okay, thanks, just put it on the table outside."

"Yuu, why did you bought these."

"I want to eat outside the house with you just like what my grandpa and I used to. Come on, let's go outside and let's eat the cake." He grabbed her hand and they went outside the house. They sat on the precious chairs that Yuu and his grandfather owned for a long time.

"Thank you for being here with me now, Haruna. Sorry if this place is boring for you and - "

"No, no of course not. I should be the one to say thank you for bringing me in this beautiful and quiet place. It's relaxing and refreshing."

"I'm glad you like it here. I'm sure my grandfather will be really happy now 'cause finally I came back here with a girl that i want to spend my whole life with.." He smiled at her.

             The girls was touched of what he just said. she stood up from her chair and walk in front of him, she cupped his face and she leaned to kiss give him a kiss on the lips. She was surprised of the sudden move of the girl. They closed their eyes when their lips touched, he gently kissed back. But the girl suddenly broke the kiss, the kiss took 10 seconds but for him it was like forever...It was like a dream, a sweet dream that he don't want to wake up anymore.. he slowly open his eyes and he saw the girl's face smiling at him. The girl decided to get back to her seat and eat the cake. But the guy was still surprised of what the girl just did. So does it mean the girl likes him too?does the girl gave him a sign that she want to be with him forever too? Hopefully. The guy thought.

"Thank you, Haruna. This will be the best gift that i will give to my grandfather and i'm sure he will like it."

"I hope so, here eat this cake, say ahhh.." She was trying to feed him.

"Aahh.. mmmm.. it taste good, so sweet."

"Yeah, so sweet, i love it!" she give him a beautiful smile.

"You're smile is so beautiful. I want to see your beautiful smile everyday.."

             The girl blushed. The guy's words are now to sweet for her to handle..

"You're so beautiful, you know i can't take my eyes off of you, Haruna. I really hope you will be in my side forever.."

"Yuu..."

"I can feel my grandfather is watching us right now here and very happy."

"Ehhh.. Yuu, don't scare me.."

             The guy just chuckled as he saw the cute reaction of the girl...

"Let's go?" the guy said.

"Okay, how bout these -"

"Don't worry, the caretaker will take care of it. Come on." He stood up from his chair. He then grabbed Haruna's hand and they walk away from the house.

"Wait!" the girl stopped.

"What is it?"

"Wait here, i forgot something on the table."

"I'll come with you."

"No, it's okay. Just wait here." She ran back to the small house to get something, but the truth is, she didn't left anything on the table. There is something she wanted to do. She stand in front the house and smile.

"I am so glad that your grandson brought me here, now i know that i am really special to him. I feel happy that he told me his good memories with you. Even if i didn't meet you in person, I know you are a good man. Don't worry, I'll take care of your grandson and i'll do my best to make him happy." She smile and she close her eyes when she suddenly felt a cold wind passing through her body. She know it was Yuu's grandfather, he answered her back and she know he's really happy right now for his grandson.

"Thank you." she said and slowly open her eyes.

"Haruna?" the guy suddenly came in and was worried.

"Yuu.." She turn her back to see the guy from behind.

"You took so long so i decided to follow you here. Have you found it already?"

"Y-Yes.. Let's go.."



'Thank you. I'll try my best not to break your grandson's heart. I will take care of him..'



To be continued.....

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KojiYuu  :heart:   :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:

Hope you guys like it.   :)

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Very Nice and warm KojiYuu moment, and for once Yuu didn't do anything pervert.
So does that mean they're official?

update soon

Offline kahem

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Yuu can be so cute <3

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@blughise : yeah KojiYuu moment  :heart: :heart: :heart: .. I think they're not official yet, Haruna didn't say her sweetest YES to Yuu yet. Hopefully soon   :heart: KOJIYUU  :wub: :wub: :wub:  i'll try to update soon  :) thanks for reading!  :)

@kahem: yeah so cute  :) :) kojiyuu  :deco:

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hi, im your new reader. Actually i was searching some intresting fics to read.
And yours. The plot is totally good. HAHAHAHA! Can't wait for your updates :D

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@2448 : Aww i'm glad that you like my fic  :heart:  , thank you! and yeah i'll update soon!  :thumbsup

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So that means we still have to wait for Haruna to say "yes"? Why are all these girl's stalling!!!!!!!

Come on just make it official Haruna! LOL Even Yuu's grandfather already approve of you so

hurry! keke

Thanks, please update soon  :twothumbs

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@immortal_K : yeah! these girls are playing hard to get!  :angry: :angry:  haha just kidding  :lol:
                                   i agree!! Yuu's grandpa is happy for them!  :)  , i'll update soon as i can.  :) :) thank you  :heart:

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No rush, take your time, but update soon  :twothumbs

HAHA, yea I need to work on my updates too since I'm out of all my pre-written inventory, its write as I update now  :lol:

Since I just updated that means time to hit the keyboard :shock:

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@immortal_K : you should! i like your fic so much! :heart: it's one of my favorites!  :) :)

                      I hope you update soon too! please!  :) :)

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LOL just updated a OS in the OS collection and Black in white yesterday so it will be a while before I update again.
But I'll keep trying to write if I have any ideas, i don't know, I keep getting this feeling that my writing isn't up to par from before I took a writing break.... sigh

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Wow, it's been a... month? LOL sorry for the late update.




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                                                                                                        Chapter 11
                                                                                                     Spin the bottle




     -   7:00 PM  -


The group decided to gather on the big round table in the eating area in the resort.

"Are you guys having fun here?" Yuu asked.

"YEAH!" Everyone answered.

"I'm really glad that you all like it here. This is one of the best vacation i've ever had!"

"But anyway, any idea what are we going to do here?"

"Hmm, well, we are all here now, how bout we'll play a spin the bottle game?" Sae suggested.

"Good idea! I have a bottle of champagne here, let's use it."

"Okay, you guys wanna play?"

"Sure." they all answered.

"OKay, btw this a truth or dare game, if you don't answer the question being asked or if -"

"We all know about that, there will be a punishment."

"Okay, so let's start?"

Sae started to spin the bottle, all of them were a bit nervous that the bottle might stopped and point at them. They all know it's gonna be a personal questions or crazy dares that their friend would ask. Then the bottle finally stopped and pointing at...

"Miichan!"

"Ah okay, uhmm TRUTH."

"Okay, so i'll be the one to ask!" Yuu volunteered.

"Okay, ask me."

"Uhm, do you have a crush on here? mention his name." Yuu grin.

'Ahh, i know this would happen.' She thought.

"Yes." she answered."

"and who is it?"

"Uhmm, okay.. it's Riku."

'Me?wow really?Thanks for that question,Yuu. I didn't know Miichan is attracted to me too.' Riku thought.

"Riku! My brother! You must be really happy right now eh?" Yuu tapped his shoulder and smile

Riku just smiled back and stare at Miichan, while the girl is trying not to look at him.

"Okay Miichan, spin the bottle and you will be the one to ask."

"Okay." she spin the bottle and all of them were looking at the spinning bottle, curious of who will be the next victim.

"Yukirin!"

"Truth."

"Okay. If Sae ask you to be his girlfriend, would you YES or NO?" Miichan asked seriously.

Yukirin was suprised of Miichan's question.

'Wow, i couldn't believe Miichan would ask something like that..but i'm curious, please say YES, Yuki.' Sae thought

"Uhmm, i don't kno-"

"YES or NO, Yuki."

"Y-YES."

Sae was really happy, he wanted to stand up and jump for joy as if he already made her say her sweetest YES. But he controlled his self to calm, he wanted to look cool for Yuki. He just smiled at the girl and Yuki just shyly smiled back at him.

"Sae, goodluck bro!" Yuu tapped his shoulder.

"OKay Yuki, it's your turn now."

Yuki spin the bottle and this time it's....

"Yuu!"

"Me?oh it's my turn now, okay truth."

"Okay are you seriously in love with Haruna?"

Before he answered, he look to Haruna.. the girl just simply smiled at him and waiting for him to answer..

"Yes, i love her with all my heart." he answered.

"Awww... so sweet!" everyone was teasing the two.

"Oi, Yuu, stop staring at Haruna and start spinning the bottle." Chiyuu tapped his shoulder.

"Okay okay, geez.."

He spin the bottle and this it's..

"Riku!"

"Oh great, tsk. Okay this time.. hmm DARE."

"Good choice, Riku. Now i want you to kiss Miichan on the lips."

"Okay, wait ,whaaat?!"

'How could he dare me like that?she's his cousin!' Riku thought.

"Yuu.." Miichan shook her head.

"Sorry cousin, kill me later, okay? Now Riku, just do what i say.. or ..just take the bigger punishment."

Riku didn't answer and just stared at Miichan.

"N-No, i'll just take the punishm-"

"Do it, Riku." Miichan cut him

"H-huh? Are you seriou-"

"Just do it, or else you'll suffer from their punishment."

Riku gulped and moved closer to Miichan. He give her a quick kiss on her lips. They were staring at each other closely after they broke the kiss. It was a good feeling. It was sweet.

"Oi oi, you can continue that later, Riku spin it now." Yuu interrupt the two

Riku didn't answer and he just spin the bottle. So this time it's...

"Tomomi!"

"Oh okay, truth."

"Okay,is Chiyuu your first kiss?" He asked.

"No."

"No?! I thought i was your first kiss?" Chiyuu pouted.

"I'm sorry, Chiyuu. The truth is, my first kiss was... my dad, when i was little!" She chuckled.

"Aaah! you're such a tease Tomomi! i thought i wasn't your first kiss."

"Sorry my Chiyuu, i was just kidding." She hugged the him and trying to make him smile again.

"So are you guys now official?" Sae asked.

"No, not yet." Tomomi answered.

"Not yet?why?"

"No why's, i can wait for Tomomi." He smiled looking at the girl.

"Okay, so spin it now Tomomi!"

This time it's....

"Kai!"

"Oh okay, since you guys always pick truth, i'll pick dare this time."

"Okay, let me challenge you,Kai. Can you see that stage infront of us?We all know that is where the live bands and other entertainers perform. I want you to take Acchan, bring her there and tell her what you really feel. You must use the microphone so everyone could hear you confessing." Tomomi grin.



To be continued.....

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Wow, Tomomi's dare  :w00t:

Sorry for the lazy update guys. :(

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Finally update.... :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: Thanks alot.... hope you'll have more interesting idea :D :roll: 8) :P  Focus and hard-working in finish this story... :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs Please update soon!!! Gook Luck!!
 

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WOW
Kai's dare is so totally different from the rest....
I was kinda hoping that the dare will be... him play some piano and dedicated it to Acchan  or something like that....
and I guess that dare is alot better than him playing a music................

Anyways nice though short update....
update soon

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in this moment i dont wanna be kai.. O_O

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a dare???  :w00t:  Kai better be careful this time.. not to messed up like before... XD

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WOW KAI so brave to pick dare, O.O and good for Tomomi to decide to dare him to finally speak his true feelings, Kai please don't mess up!

What a perfect game of spin the bottle (truth or dare), Sae time to ask Yuki to be your gf, and please hook up Riku and Miichan!

HAHA please update soon!

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OOOHHH a confession interesting :hee:
cant wait for the next chapter
please update soon  XD XD
I'll say "I love you" to the person I love
Even if these feelings aren't returned, saying "I love you" to the person you love
That is the most beautiful thing in the world

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