Author Topic: R I V E R (MaYuki) + Extra chapters (06/07/2013) - FANFIC DELETED (Read 121761 times)

blughise · « **Reply #200 on:** October 20, 2011, 03:13:18 AM »

AWESOME!!!
Sorry forgot to comment on your other update......
I love the epilogue so much!!!
ATSUMINA always makes my day no matter how tiring it is!!!
I so love it!!!

and now KOJIYUU!!!
LOl AT Yuko, she can't win against NyanNyan on that psp game
But she kick more ass in real action!!!

and YAHHOOO FOR SATHDAY!!!!
I wish it's everyday SATHDAY

So you and arisa update you awesome fics

haruhi16 · « **Reply #201 on:** October 20, 2011, 04:02:10 AM »

Thank you for this! Yuko is my OTP too <333

You made my day. Thank you. <333

Haruko · « **Reply #202 on:** October 20, 2011, 06:23:42 AM »

aww kojiyuu forever!!

thanx a lot

kahem · « **Reply #203 on:** October 20, 2011, 09:00:22 AM »

Kojiyuu is so cute!!!!

Seigus · « **Reply #204 on:** October 20, 2011, 03:50:15 PM »

You know, you are making me look forward to Sathdays!
That warning about violence and language at the top of every update is all thanks to Yuko's foul mouth

I really admire Yuko and Haruna's relationship. You can feel the love despite all the "domestic violence" Haruna dishes out. Eight years at the same rank is no joke!

Having Miichan as a friend is quite unsettling as you'd never know when she's going to barge through the door. Worse is she seems to enjoy what she sees!

It's hilarious how everyone refers to Meetan as old (I can never forget that AKBINGO ep where Sayaka called Meetan an old woman

). Pervert Meetan needs to have her revenge one day!

I also love the fact that you included Privates Sasshi and Fresh Lemon! Poor girls. Their misery is our joy

And... and... you are such a tease with the brief hints of MaYuki! Those two being late together?! And that little scene of Yuki bumping Mayu into the wall? Nothing really happened but I felt Yukirin's protectiveness over Mayuyu and that's enough to make my heart do a little somersault

Thanks for the update!

arisa03 · « **Reply #205 on:** October 20, 2011, 04:18:15 PM »

^ We know they like it anyway. xD

<333333333333333. Forever posting Sathday updates on someone else's timezone. LOL.. And yes, I will forever answer all of your questions like the boss I am. <3

Vanui · « **Reply #206 on:** October 21, 2011, 06:47:04 AM »

That... was ridiculously cute and funny

Sasshi is quickly making her way up as one of my fav members here. Always gettin' bullied XDDDD

More shenanigans ahead?

Keep up da good work, Nish~

yukofan · « **Reply #207 on:** October 21, 2011, 02:05:55 PM »

awwwwww...kojiyuu is so damn cute

and fresh lemon

Kiiz · « **Reply #208 on:** October 21, 2011, 06:08:54 PM »

hahaha "Yuuchan, language." again

chibi-nyao-chan · « **Reply #209 on:** October 21, 2011, 10:23:32 PM »

Sathday's update

With you and arisa-chan I'm so happy to be Thursday

Yuuchan's love for Nyannyan <3

Your fanfic are so cool ! please more

(next time atsumina please

)

Crimsonwing · « **Reply #210 on:** October 22, 2011, 03:57:26 AM »

Hi! Ok I know I said I'd be posting a review on your next chapter, but the overall guilt got to me (and I'm far too lazy to start my Bio lab report), so I figured I'd post one right now

Where do I even begin? This fic has absolutely impressed me to the point that despite the fact that I have finished reading it, I find myself going back to it when I have absolutely nothing to read or do (which is something I don't do very often with fanfiction). I can truthfully admit that this fic has both made me laugh to the point that my usual "calm, poker face" I attempt to maintain in public is broken (hence the several weird looks courtesy of my friends) but at the same time, given me moments wherein I'm (insanely) wailing at the computer going "Y U END IT THERE?" (ie I had honestly thought you were gonna kill off Erepyon

).

Your characterization and portrayal of the several members of Army48 was definitely well done, from the epic leader that Takamina is to the poor bullied soul that is Sashihara. I've enjoyed being able to see each of these characters in action (well, except Trollguchi, but then again she did add to the amusement

). In regards to plotline, it was nicely paced. Not too prolonged, that it verges on unrealistic, but not too short either that it felt rushed. So really good job on that

Once again, I apologise for the lack of reviews... Both my laziness and lurker..ness (lol) are to be blamed

I hope that this review makes up a little lol (despite it being so general and vague (?) lmao )

It has been a extremely enjoyable ride and I would most certainly look forward to your future installments! Good luck with the writing!

Divine Vengeance · « **Reply #211 on:** October 22, 2011, 09:22:43 AM »

Stupid Sexy Acchan and This Stupid Air Duct

SSA Log #6 – Entered 10/22/11 by Divine Vengeance

Warning: Potential language and violence ahead.

A/N: Someday update~

Also, sorry if the climbing system here is completely wrong LOL ~~/forever failing~~

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A/N: Also... Just to warn you, I will no longer be updating as frequently as I have been recently.

I'm sorry if that disappoints, but the fact is that my imagination has greatly disappeared recently LOL To add to that, I've also got things to do in that horrible sector of reality called an 'offline life' llOTL

However, Sathday updates shall still hopefully be weekly, and on good weeks, I may still provide the occasional Someday update. Once again, sorry OTL

On a happier note, thank you for your continued readership! All reviews/comments/likes/thanks and all other indicators of your support are as appreciated as always ; v ; b Please continue to read on~

haruhi16 · « **Reply #212 on:** October 22, 2011, 09:50:38 AM »

nice update!!

Stupid Sexy Acchan!!

lol at OSHIRI SISTERS

Thank you divine for the update!

blughise · « **Reply #213 on:** October 22, 2011, 06:15:52 PM »

LOL

I love this SSA!!!!
Sae...way to go

Oshiri Sister still creating troubles

AWESOME UPDATE!!!!

UPDATE Whenever you can

Seigus · « **Reply #214 on:** October 22, 2011, 06:57:55 PM »

Yay for sexual tension!

Sae ain't Genking for nothing

And Oshiri Sisters forever awesome! *imagines them falling down the chute while laughing their asses off*

Haruna and Yukirin should use their assets to smother their laughter.

Good luck to your offline life. I understand how sucky it can be.

Vanui · « **Reply #215 on:** October 22, 2011, 07:26:04 PM »

I think... I just died laughing LOL

Stupid sexy Acchan indeed... and Yuki and Haruna getting stuck by their assets LOL Oshiri sisters FTW XDDDDD

...please excuse me while I continue chuckling by myself over here.

Keep up da good work, Nish-san~ (see what I did thar? 8D)

Nyanoha · « **Reply #216 on:** October 22, 2011, 08:44:28 PM »

Pffft...I...can't..stop laughing! xDDD

My oshi, even in a "tight" situation, you still manage to be awesome

I'm sure Acchan, didn't mind the situation much BD

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The entire ventilation chute shook violently as several bodies hit the bottom of the metal shaft.

ALKSDNJNAJN^ I especially laughed hard at that LOLOLOL

Even the end was beyond epic xD MaYuki and KojiYuu made a deadly collision 8D

Thanks for the update

Even though you may not be updating like usual, I shall still wait oh-so-~~not~~-pateintly

aruka · « **Reply #217 on:** October 23, 2011, 03:18:27 AM »

I'm happy with the fact that you keep this thread steaming after you completed RIVER.

As long as you update, frequency doesn't matter, since we all know the main part of this thread is already wrapped.

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aruka: Thanks for keeping up with this story xD I hope the action was entertaining ; v ; Thanks for reading!

You're welcome, but actually I should be the one thanking you since you took your time writing RIVER. No, the action didn't disappoint me at all.

In fact, sometimes I wondered if you did a bit of research before writing each chapter because there were several details which I was sure some people would ever hardly think of.

Your and arisa03's Sathday and Someday updates are still awaited. Send my regards to arisa03 too.

Haruko · « **Reply #218 on:** October 23, 2011, 04:16:40 AM »

come on takamina dont blame your wifey.. we know acchan is hot

Kid_Alpha · « **Reply #219 on:** October 23, 2011, 04:41:55 AM »

Hooray for SSA logs~!

What am I supposed to say? This is hilarious especially Sae fudging up the mission lol

lol at Yuko and Mayu at the end pfft