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Re: [Complete] R I V E R - SSA Log #6 - (10/22/11)
« Reply #220 on: October 23, 2011, 12:27:51 PM »
...yay! i want to read the Oshiri sisters version vent mission! :lol: :lol: :lol:
when i imagine Yuko and Mayu fell down the chute while laughing
 it also made me laugh  :lol:



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Re: [Complete] R I V E R - SSA Log #6 - (10/22/11)
« Reply #221 on: October 25, 2011, 01:58:20 PM »
WahhhhH! All the updates that I missed while I sinked into the sea of books.....

THanks for the story Divine Kira!!!, I  :heart: :heart: it.

Being able to read so many updates all at once is so satisfying, unfortunately all good comes to an end
Finally Yuko gets promoted and Sasshi LOL better follow Noro for your badge or you might never get it HAHA
Oops forgot to mention the sudden Nachu appearance ROFL ATSU-neeeee HAHAHAHA

hmmmm that chopper this scary with trigger happy Mayu, Geki Rena and Tomochiyuu-rage..... never get on their bad side or it will be worst then skinned alive........ O.o

Wow everyone pairing off at the end but Mari-Mii is as LOL as always  :twothumbs :twothumbs

Your side stories and SSA logs are  :heart:  :inlove: :wub:

Poor Takamina but thats what happens when you decided to make new a new life and accompany your wife into labour, be happy she didn't break your wrist keke, but at least you get a cute little Atsumina, and I can bet Mayuki's will be just as cute. Although how it all can happen is still a mystery that I don't really care since its a mix of beautiful genes  :twothumbs

Ahhh, so thats how Yuko failed her exam and didn't get a promotion, because she was too concerned about Nyan Nyan and for Harunyan to be willing to decline promotion just to stay the same as her squirrel  :wub: but what I like best in that one was Miichan haha, making it obvious outside their door and expect to catch kojiyuu doing something inappropriate  XD Haha Sasshi quality it is, always fails.

SSA + vents
OMG Sae so failed but I still  :heart: you for all the position you put Atsumina through HAHA, so lucky it was only training. I agree with the dark general I would like to read the Oshiri sister version of the vent mission. Yuki and Haruna stuck in the vent while the Oshiri sisters fell down laughing haha.


I really enjoy reading your stories, please continue to write us more of your lovely stories.
Thank you for creating River *bows down*, sorry for the MiA in the last few updates, life got in my way and almost ran me over LOL

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Re: [Complete] R I V E R - SSA Log #6 - (10/22/11)
« Reply #222 on: October 25, 2011, 03:49:11 PM »
...yay! i want to read the Oshiri sisters version vent mission! :lol: :lol: :lol:
when i imagine Yuko and Mayu fell down the chute while laughing
 it also made me laugh  :lol:

I second this! I'm sure this version will be filled with sexual tension as well though mainly of the pervy kind. Mental image of the Oshiri Sisters groping butts and boobs all the way down is too awesome!

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Re: [Complete] R I V E R - Extra II - [MaYuki] - (10/27/11)
« Reply #223 on: October 27, 2011, 01:12:22 AM »
R I V E R

Extra II – A
(Posted 10/27/11)

Warning: Mild language and violence ahead.

A/N: This takes place several years before the events in R I V E R.

Also, a thanks goes out to seigus, who suggested this piece~ I hope you enjoy this portrayal of your OTP orz

As usual, please ignore how unrealistic the military and technology are @_@

Forever plugging AtsuMina and KojiYuu like a boss.

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A/N: Sathday update~

Thanks to everyone who gave reviews! Those are always very helpful in more ways than one ; v ; b And they give me new ideas while I should be focusing on other stories... but that's more than fine ;D
As always, thank you for reading! \ ; 3 ; /
« Last Edit: January 22, 2016, 06:49:00 AM by Divine Vengeance »
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Re: [Complete] R I V E R - Extra II - [MaYuki] - (10/27/11)
« Reply #224 on: October 27, 2011, 02:11:44 AM »
Grabbing a doorknob ftw. 8D
Like I’m the most calm... Like, it must definitely be because, Like when we enter, I’ll be hurrying. But Because Junjun is older, I can calm down? I don’t really know, Like I just absolutely want her there beside me. Whenever we go abroad, if Junjun is absolutely not beside me, I absolutely won’t go. Something like that. -- Tanaka Reina about Junjun.

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Re: [Complete] R I V E R - Extra II - [MaYuki] - (10/27/11)
« Reply #225 on: October 27, 2011, 03:53:04 AM »
OTP FTW.

Mandatory boob grabbin' ;D

But man, I felt like that was worse than Yuko harassment XD

You should do WMatsui next, with an epilogue for dem 8D

Keep up da good work, Nish~ :on GJ:
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Re: [Complete] R I V E R - Extra II - [MaYuki] - (10/27/11)
« Reply #226 on: October 27, 2011, 04:10:53 AM »
YAY for Sathday updates! I knew checking here was a good idea  :lol:
Somehow I had a feeling I should take a look and sure enough right at the top is a new update!!!!!!

WOW way to go Mayuyu, right on the first meet with your superior,
you get a feel what it's like to work with your favourite Yukirin HAHA Must be a handful  :lol: XD  :twothumbs
Go CG!!! got to make sure you secure what is yours! maybe her cyborg mind calculated unconsciously where
her hand should go in case of surprise take-offs if the pilot next to her has nice assets.  :twisted:


I'm surprised Yuko haven't suffered a concussion yet, her skull must be very hard and the insulation must be awesome!
And you added a bit of Atsumina interaction too  :thumbsup

Thank you!!!! Please continue to update.

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Re: [Complete] R I V E R - Extra II - [MaYuki] - (10/27/11)
« Reply #227 on: October 27, 2011, 05:48:08 AM »
OMG I had a feeling that this was coming and I was right! Thank you so much for writing this! *cries a R I V E R*
I very much enjoyed your portrayal of MaYuki here :bow:

I must say I had a hard time trying not to laugh out loud in class while reading. My classmate was giving me the funny look when the table kept trembling from me trying to control my laughter :nervous I finally let out an audible squeak when I read that my NMB oshi was on medical leave from drinking gallons of bad milk. Why are all Watanabe girls so cute? XD

WAY TO GO, MAYUYU! Best first meeting line ever! “Nice… F… cups…?” XDD
Yukirin only has herself to blame for being so eager to meet her new partner. She was obviously checking out Mayuyu's butt right there and was disappointed in not being able to see the cyborg's face in the trench.
And Mayuyu admired Yukirin all along? That little cyborg must have many images of Yukirin captured during mini stalking sessions stored in her memory.
Man, their sexual tension is so high that even Haruna agreed with Yuko that they were going to fuck each other one day!
I would love to read about how Mayu and Yuki came to care for each other as more than friends after this disastrous first meeting. They started off on the wrong hand... I mean, foot and it's gnawing at me how they righted this wrong. Of course, this is just a suggestion. I will always be throwing out ideas for MaYuki but please don't feel pressured to write them!

Interesting to know that Sae was a trainee together with Mayuyu while Yukirin was not yet a captain. That's the fun part about reading events that happened before the main story. An idea suddenly popped into my head. Perhaps you can write about how Sae almost got Sayaka killed during a mission by being too loud and how she subsequently redeemed herself by getting them out of the dangerous situation she created. That could be the mission that led to her eventual promotion.

Before I end off this comment, I have to say great job on the AtsuMina and KojiYuu moments as always! Acchan was clearly enjoying completing Captain Midget's sentences. And as immortal_K put it, Yuko has a damn hard skull but I suspect her growth has been stunted by the constant head whacking. Haruna wants to keep her squirrel tiny!

Thank you again for this Sathday update! Looking forward to more installments!

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Re: [Complete] R I V E R - Extra II - [MaYuki] - (10/27/11)
« Reply #228 on: October 27, 2011, 05:58:20 AM »
Ah I love it when main stories have epilogues and prologues. Kind of makes me sad RIVER is over but at least you're giving us this, right?  :heart:

But man I don't know whether that was a bad greeting for Mayu or pretty lucky lol Then again I would not want to be on the bad side of Yuki.

Please tell me there will be more side stories?

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Re: [Complete] R I V E R - Extra II - [MaYuki] - (10/27/11)
« Reply #229 on: October 27, 2011, 08:57:04 AM »
Hahahahahah Takacchan and Mayuyu grobbing Yukirin!!!!

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Re: [Complete] R I V E R - Extra II - [MaYuki] - (10/27/11)
« Reply #230 on: October 27, 2011, 11:48:29 AM »
Yeah! MaYuki~!!  :yossi:

Mayu's first comment . . . LOVE it~  :rofl:

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Re: [Complete] R I V E R - Extra II - [MaYuki] - (10/27/11)
« Reply #231 on: October 27, 2011, 01:52:54 PM »
Love MaYuki!

Hope there will be more on them!

Thanks for continuing this series through extra tidbits!!

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Re: [Complete] R I V E R - Extra II - [MaYuki] - (10/27/11)
« Reply #232 on: October 27, 2011, 02:59:59 PM »
LOL this is funny. Oshiri sisters are really the best pervy partners! LOL at Mayu grabbing boobs 8D

I love this, thanks. <33

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Re: [Complete] R I V E R - Extra II - [MaYuki] - (10/27/11)
« Reply #233 on: October 27, 2011, 05:05:47 PM »
YAY!!!! :cow: :cow: :cow:
RIVER UPDATE!!!
I felt like I haven't read anything in here for so long!!!
I totally missed this!!! XD XD XD

Mayuyu you really's Yuko's Oshiri sister!!! :rofl:
Yuko and her language :roll:... I swear she've got some really strong and thick head to be able to endure NyanNyan smacking :lol:
It's also nice that you've added some Atsumina flirting in here!!! :grin:  I always love their moments.

I wonder is there apart two of this???
IF So please update soon XD XD XD

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Re: [Complete] R I V E R - Extra II - [MaYuki] - (10/27/11)
« Reply #234 on: October 29, 2011, 06:27:43 AM »
Boob grabbing-WIN BD

Nya~~~ You must make a second part to that, like...a part where what Yuko and KojiHaru said came true BD (WHICH WAS EPIC BTW)

*is trollin' today~*

Anyways, I love your updates, and like I told you before I started...I indeed loved it  :heart: :heart: :heart:

And yes, I switched the word, "liked" and "loved  :heart: :heart: Das how awesome it was ;)

Update soon~  :heart:
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Re: [Complete] R I V E R - Extra II - [MaYuki] - (10/27/11)
« Reply #235 on: November 20, 2011, 12:37:22 PM »
HI THERE BUNCH OF VICTIMSFANGIRLS. YOUR SECOND BOSS HAS ARRIVED.

Stupid Sexy Acchan and That Stupid Pole

SSA Log #7 – Entered 11/20/11 by arisa03/Satsunyan

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“Say, Acchan, KojiHaru, have you heard of the recent ‘Love Test’ going around?” Minegishi Minami asked her two higher ranked friends.

“Hm? What is it about?” Kojiharu, who seemed to be curious, asked about it.

“Apparently, if someone you know or have a crush on confesses to you, to know that they’re sincere, you should tell them something like ‘You must know my best friend. She’s prettier and better, blahblahblah, and she’s right behind you.’ If the other person turns around…” Minegishi Minami turned her back at the two and turned her head to look at them. “… It means they’re not being serious.”

“Oh, I have heard of this once,” Maeda Atsuko said and cupped her chin using her left hand. “I should try this too.”

“To whom? To Takamina~?” Miichan asked and nudged her friend. “Hoho~”

“Shush you, Miichan!” Atsuko nudged her friend back as she brought up both her palms to her face to cover her blushing cheeks.

Behind them, Takahashi Minami walked by and looked at them for a moment.

“And what!? I heard you haven’t decided on which base to join after graduation!” Miichan shouted at the top of her lungs. “What is this blasphemy, Acchan!?”

Takamina’s ears perked up at the information and actually contemplated whether to ask about it or not, but she remembered that she was in a hurry and left the location right away. She decided to just… fix it later.

“Shush, Miichan! People will misunderstand you!” Atsuko pushed the Gachapin-look-alike away. “I already decided to go to where Takamina is going. I just don’t know who to room with yet!”

Meanwhile, KojiHaru had noticed that Takamina might’ve caught wind of the wrong information but just decided to sigh away. “They’ll fix that anyway.”

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“Uh…” Takahashi Minami started while fiddling with the skirt of her Academy uniform. She stood in an empty street with just the love of her life, Acchan, in front of her and the afternoon sun plus the chirping of the birds guiding them. “Uh… I heard that you haven’t decided on which base to go to after graduation…”

Maeda Atsuko looked at her partner in confusion, tilting her head to one side. “Minami?” she asked and walked forward to the small female. “Minam—“

“Move in with me!” Takamina blurted out.

Atsuko stopped dead in her tracks with a shocked expression. Her mouth fell open as her face changed color from normal to pale… then to red. She took a step back and placed her arms to her side. “Why me?” She looked at the ground.

“Because I know you well and… being in the same base will make me worry less andwecanspendmoretimetogetherand–!” Takahashi Minami answered with full confidence. “You don’t have to answer me now or—“

“You should see my best friend,” Acchan smiled bitterly as she looked to her side and huffed some air. “She's closer to you anyway and she seems like she needs your care more than I do. She’s standing right behind you.”

“So?” Minami answered, still with confidence all over her features. “I don't want to turn around because I have you right in front of me, and I know you're more important. I want to move into this base with you, Atsuko. I don't care if Tomochin is going to the same base or not, or if she’s behind me or not.”

“Why won’t you turn around!?” Maeda Atsuko stomped on the ground, bit her lower lip, and pouted before sprinting, away leaving her short-legged companion in the dust.

Takahashi Minami, making the best decision she could come up in the present situation, chased after the girl. “When did she become so fast at running?”

A gust of wind passed by as Atsuko and Minami turned around a corner. Takahashi, noticing that the apple of her eye’s skirt had lifted up into dangerous levels—thanks to the wind—skidded into a corner and facepoled hard onto an electrical pole.

Maeda Atsuko, noticing the scene through her peripheral vision, stopped running and jogged to her midget. “Minami!”

Takahashi Minami lay down on the ground with both hands on her face, wincing in pain. “Oowww…” She removed her hands from her face to sit up and look at Acchan, who was bending over her, giving the midget a clear full view of what was inside the girl’s uniform through her low V-neck collar. Takamina could feel the blood rushing to her face as she fainted to the ground. “Stupid sexy Acchan and that stupid pole…”

Then the rest was dark.

Meanwhile…

“You should see my best friend,” Kojima Haruna started as she looked at the squirrel who had just confessed her undying love for the nth time in the past hour. “She’s prettier, sexier, and has bigger breasts than I do. And she’s standing behind you.”

Oshima Yuko, as if automatic, turned her head, “Where!?” Noticing that no one was standing there, she started chasing after her cat, who had started to walk away. “Fuck! Nyan-nyan! That was a joke! Nyan-nyan! You’re the only one I love!”

“If you truly loved me you wouldn’t look at someone else!” KojiHaru shouted from afar and started stomping away once more.

“Nyan-nyan!” Oshima Yuko ran after her with all her might. “That turning around was a mistake! It was a habit! A habit! Nyan-nyan! I love youuu~”

“I hate you! Go away!”

Previously…

Itano Tomomi stood baffled behind Takahashi Minami, who had just sprinted after Acchan in mach speed. She furrowed her eyebrows and tilted her head to one side.

“… Acchan told me to go home with her and Takamina today. What just happened?”

End.
A/N: Trolling like a boss~~
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Re: [Complete] R I V E R - SSA Log #7 – (11/20/11)
« Reply #236 on: November 20, 2011, 12:50:40 PM »
another awesome SSA log... weee~~  :gmon twirl:  This really made my day~~  :mon fyeah:

Thanks boss!!!  :mon thumb:

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Re: [Complete] R I V E R - SSA Log #7 – (11/20/11)
« Reply #237 on: November 20, 2011, 03:29:39 PM »
Yeah SSA~ I laught so hard at this !!! Takamina with the pole too funny !!
Takamina wants sexy Acchan with her  :k-wink:

and LOL poor Tomo, she's alone XD

I want another from you or Divine  :luvuluvu: Pleeease !!
See You~  :k-hello:

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Re: [Complete] R I V E R - SSA Log #7 – (11/20/11)
« Reply #238 on: November 20, 2011, 04:38:21 PM »
Oh Yuko, what are we gonna do with you?

lol the ending though, priceless~

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Re: [Complete] R I V E R - SSA Log #7 – (11/20/11)
« Reply #239 on: November 20, 2011, 05:10:10 PM »
WAAHH UPDATE YAY :cow: :cow: :cow:

I can't believe it!!! I missed this!!!!
LOL Takamina, just when I thought you finally looked cool....and you just ruined it in the end :smhid :lol:
Acchan can be such a tsundere :lol:

Lol At Yuko XD XD XD....she'll forever be a pervert....poor kojiharu :P

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