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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 5 UPDATED 9/20
« Reply #20 on: September 20, 2011, 08:26:02 AM »
Lol the slap poor captain
I like Miichan's character

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 5 UPDATED 9/20
« Reply #21 on: September 20, 2011, 08:31:01 AM »
 :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: poor takamina and it seems the relationship getting develop  XD XD

write more~  :grin: :grin: :grin:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 5 UPDATED 9/20
« Reply #22 on: September 20, 2011, 08:58:31 AM »
LOL... that was fast... they just joined AKB and already practicing river...  XD

Taka is angry~~ Acchan better do something...  :banghead:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 5 UPDATED 9/20
« Reply #23 on: September 20, 2011, 04:35:21 PM »
Hehe yes river is their debut single in this story cuz it's my favorite song  :twothumbs

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 5 UPDATED 9/20
« Reply #24 on: September 20, 2011, 05:15:22 PM »
HEI,  COME ON!!! you can do it, I really  hope you have a lot of idea now... XD XD XD XD XD the story... keep me feel curious and interesting.... :heart: :heart: please write more soon !! :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 5 UPDATED 9/20
« Reply #25 on: September 22, 2011, 05:06:26 AM »
 :O :shocked :O :shocked

TAKAACHANNN!!!!! LMFAOOO i guess its for the best that maybe Takamina is mad...Oh well~

whatever happens Takamina will always togetherrrr be~

PLEASE UPDATE SOOON!!!

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 6 UPDATED 9/23
« Reply #26 on: September 23, 2011, 08:08:58 AM »
Thanks for reading guys! here's another part! :thumbsup

Part 6

   After practice everyone left home.. except for Acchan, she went to the icecream shop. 30 minutes have passed and the captain still didn’t show up. Acchan thinking that Takamina isn’t going to come, made her way to the door to leave.  As soon as the ace opened the door, the chibi captain walked in at the exact  time causing them to collide. This time their lips actually met, their eyes widened.. too shocked to move... Acchan now realizing what position they were in shyly pull back with a slight blush on her cheeks.. “Gome ne Minami”.  Takamina still stunned held her index and middle finger to her lips “My first kiss..why!????????whyyyyyyyyyy does it have to be with this devil??? ahhhhhhhhh…” Takamina squealed in her mind. “Give me back my first kiss you psycho!” the captain shouted at the ace . Acchan expression changed from embarrassment to infuriation “You’re first kiss??... hey!! you walked into me remember!? and I already apologized so be quiet, it’s not like I wanted to kiss you or anything” Atsuko yelled back. “You guys act like a married couple,forever arguing” Haruna interrupted laughing.  “No we don’t” Takamina cried.. still whining to Acchan about giving her kiss back. “Oh, Haruna you’re here too?” Acchan asked disappointedly. “Yeah Takamina invited me if that’s okay with you.. sorry I made her late.” “Yeah..sure,sure it’s okay..have a seat..” Darn it, I can’t apologize to Takamina in front of Haruna..it’s humiliating..Acchan thought..”Well  why did you ask me  to come here today Atsuko?” Takamina asked. “eeh ehh..eh to..erm..” “Just spill it alreadyy!” “well it’s kind of personal..” “Oh..should I leave you two alone then?” Haruna asked. “That’ll be nice,thanks Haruna..” “Okay I’ll just order the stuff  up there while you both talk..” “Okay” Takamina replied.. “Umm..about earlier..I’m..i’m.. eh I’m really sorry that I slapped you..” Acchan finishing the sentence quickly.  “Oh wow the princess actually know how to apologize..just kidding..” Takamina snickered. “Don’t worry I was only mad for the moment..is that the only reason why you brought me here today?” “Hai….” Acchan replied. “You could of just said it to me in the dressing room..” the captain said with a wink. Acchan face starts to reddened..”well okay, you can go now! That’s all I wanted to say”  “Eeeeeeee!? We already ordered..too bad I’m staying and you are too! “ Takamina said with a smile.. “This girl…after all the harsh things I say to her she’s still so kind to me…what an interesting person..” Acchan thought..”Okay guys I’m back” Haruna said carrying their icecream to the table. “How come theres only two?” Acchan asked..”Oh sorry I didn’t have enough change, Takamina and I can share ^_^”  Haruna fed a spoonful of chocolate to Takamina.. “OI SHIIIIII..”Takamina started blushing,smiling and giggling..Acchan begins to feel uneasy..her chest tightens..”Do they like eachother?..” the ace thought..feeling jealous..”Why am I feeling like this? I shouldn’t, I don’t like her..just ignore it Acchan, just ignore it..”Speaking to herself in 3rd person.

It was getting dark out…Yuko picked up Haruna  and left first..”Erm Atsuko, do you want me to walk you home?” “I’m fine I can walk myself ” “You sure?” “Hai, I’m positive..” “Okay well be safe! Okay? Watch out for pervs..since you’re a beautiful  girl and all..” Acchan starts to blush again. “See ya Atsuko” Acchan walked  to where the street lights were dim..the night was getting scarier and quieter..She had a feeling that someone was following her..Everytime she would look back there was nothing..Near an alley way 2 men showed up… “Hey pretty girl..lets have some fun tonight” one of the old men said pulling her hands,they both surrounded her looking at her up and down..”Yummy, she looks tasty” the other man said with a scary looking smirk..” Don’t touch me!” Acchan screamed.. Both men started pulling on her clothes..trying to get it off.. Acchan was really frightened and fainted.. Suddenly a small figure showed up yelling..“ Stop before I kick your asses! I’m a f**king black belt and I will not hold back!” “HUH? Well well look what we have here there’s another girl for you”  The man said to the other one..” Oh.. such luck we have, one for me and one for you.” Before the men  could approach her, she dragon fly jump kicked one of them in the chest..The other one she constantly punched him as if he was a punching bag, one punch after another connecting to his stomach. Both men was terrified and scattered away like a bunch of ants..”Acchan, are you okay?” there was no response. She was knocked out cold…Takamina brought her to her house and called her parents to tell them Atsuko was staying the night. Takamina lifted her up the stairs into her room .. “Jeez this girl is heavy!!What does she be eating!?” Takamina thought.. she layed her down in her bed and looked at how angelic Acchan is when she’s asleep and NOT TALKING..(LOL) she starts to notice how filthy her clothes has gotten..” I have to change her… “ The captain began to take off her shirt..slowly pulling it off her shoulders..Takamina’s  blood started rushing to her face as she sees Acchan’s bra strap.. “her body is so sexy..her  tummy is flat, she has nice plumped breast and a firm butt..Takamina thought..Finally done changing her clothes Takamina nose starts to bleed… Takamina slapped herself twice in the face”WTF..I’m such a perv…”

TBC…

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 6 UPDATED 9/23
« Reply #27 on: September 23, 2011, 08:25:55 AM »
Hahahah Takamina! Don't blame yourself Acchan is sexy after all lol

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 6 UPDATED 9/23
« Reply #28 on: September 23, 2011, 08:47:35 AM »
yeah agree Acchan is sexy  :thumbup

LOL Acchan is heavy!!!  :rofl: :rofl:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 6 UPDATED 9/23
« Reply #29 on: September 23, 2011, 09:08:26 AM »
OMG!!!!! i love the ATSUMINA fanfic you write!!! Good Job!!  :thumbsup :thumbsup :twothumbs, DO UPDATE SOON!!! :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :heart: :heart: :heart:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 6 UPDATED 9/23
« Reply #30 on: September 23, 2011, 10:57:11 AM »
LOL... :lol:  takaboy bleeding from seeing acchan half naked...  :twothumbs :twothumbs

how did she know Acchan have a firm butt?? did she touch it?? hahaha... such a pervert captain...   :rofl:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 6 UPDATED 9/23
« Reply #31 on: September 23, 2011, 11:10:19 AM »
OMG :w00t:

Our midget perverted captain :lol:
it's nice that they are slowly progressing


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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 6 UPDATED 9/23
« Reply #32 on: September 26, 2011, 06:24:00 AM »
jaj yeah how takamina know about butt...

yeah don t blame you takamidget... acchan its hot.. but remember jus look not touch....

and acchan jealousy.. love a lot..

if you want maybe a kojiyuu scene please :D

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 7 UPDATED 9/26
« Reply #33 on: September 27, 2011, 05:50:27 AM »
 8) sorry i kinda half assed  :shakeit:  this one..but here's a treat for you Haruko..lol  :roll:

PART 7


“Should I try to wake her up? Nah..She looks really peaceful.” Takamina thought.. Takamina begins to stare at Acchan ..”I never noticed how attractive she is..why is my heart racing so fast?” Takamina slowly moved closer to the aces face without realizing it. ”those lips… why do I have the urge to kiss them?” Takamina held back as she sighed.. she was confused about her feelings. Lying next to Acchan made her feel at ease so she fell asleep…

Next morning

Acchan groaned as she woke up. Her eyes were still a blur…as her vision starts to clear up she notices an outline of person’s face positioning only  a few centimeters away  from hers.. “Chibi!?” Acchan freaked out, moving away and pulling all the sheets to her side covering herself up.. Awaken by Acchan’s scream, Takamina woke up rubbing her eyes.“Oh… you’re finally awake” Takamina said with a smile.“What happened last night? How did I get here?” Acchan said with a worried face.. “Last time I was conscious, there were two guys trying to harass me..” Takamina smile started to disappear.. ” I …i…i…. found you naked in an alley way…I’m sorry Atsuko but..but…you’re innocence was taken away by those two men..As soon as I got there, they ran off…” Acchan eyes starts to water, her face scrunched up..”why do I have to be so weak, now I’ll never be good enough for anybody”  Acchan cried… “I’m just kidding, I’m just kidding Atsuko!!! don’t cry!! ” Takamina wrapped her arms around her laughing… “YOU JERK !!!! HOW DARE YOU JOKE WITH ME ABOUT THIS?!?!” Acchan yells punching Takamina with light girly hits.. “HAHAHA man oh man you should of seen your face!”  “what really happened then?” Acchan asked. “Well I followed you..even though you were stubborn and kept saying no..anyways I’ll get to the point.. I kicked their butts before they could lay a hand on you!”  Takamina says with her fist held in the air looking all dorky. “ Thank you for saving me..Acchan says with a hint of red on her cheek bones. “Hey wait a minute! You didn’t see anything  when you changed me did you!?! I’ll poke your eyes out if you did” “no no…I didn’t see anything I promise” Takamina lied as her nose starts to bleed again.. she held her hands over her nose trying to hide it..” BRB I need to use the bathroom” she lied once more running to the bathroom to wash her face. “Alright! I’m back!” “eh Minami what time is it?” Yikes!! We’re  20 minutes late for practice, lets hurry Atsuko !”

Meanwhile @ practice..

“Nyan Nyan! Where are you going?”  The squirrel like girl asked Haruna while clinging onto her arms.. ” Yuko, we can’t let people know that we’re an item or else we’ll be kicked out.”  “Then why did you tell Minami about us?” “Because I trust her” Haruna replied. “Do you like her or something? I see the way you look at her Nyan Nyan!..” I don’t.. she’s just a childhood friend!”  “Okay fine, I’ll believe you this time..” Yuko said in a disbelieving tone.. Miichan walked up to Haruna and Yuko..”Did you see my wife anywhere? she’s never late to practice..” Miichan asked furrowing her brow…”I really miss her..” “Hmm..now that you mention it, Minami is also late..” Yuko answered. “Do you think those two got something going on?” Haruna asked out of curiousity.. “Of course not! She has eyes only for me” Miichan exclaimed with an annoyed expression. “Hey guys!!! Sorry we’re late!” Acchan and Takamina shouted in unison. Both girls looked at each other and blushed.. when they realized that they said it at the same time. Miichan unexpectedlly grabbed onto Acchan and dragged her away... Takamina suddenly felt alone..she didn’t want Acchan to go. She wanted Acchan stay by her side. She was beginning to feel jealous towards Miichan and Acchan's relationship..As for Haruna she walked away from Yuko to talk to Takamina..”What’s wrong Minami?” Haruna asked. “Nothing’s wrong” the captain replied. “I can tell that something is bothering you…You like Atsuko don’t you?” “No way…ha I will never like someone like her..” “You can try to deny your feelings but you can’t lie to me that easily..i’m your bestfriend after all.” “hai…I know but I already have someone else that I like too..” “Eh!?! NANII? NANII?” Haruna was startled that it might be her that Takamina likes..”Well here’s the thing..I don’t know her..” Haruna was a bit relieved after hearing that response. “But what do you mean you don’t know her!?” Haruna bellowed.  “You remember the earing I was looking for?” “Yeah what about it?” “That earing belongs to that girl” “Um you know..I think I seen Atsuko picked up something from the floor the other day,why don’t you go ask her if it’s the earing?” “Really???” “Yeah Really.” “But..I’m confused about my feelings, can I really feel the same way for two different person?” “Only your heart can answer that Minami” In the meantime Yuko was furious..”why did she just walk away from me like that!?” she thought.. “right after I accused her of liking that midget! She wanna be all affectionate with her..proving me right” “I’ll show her!!” During practice Yuko went around being  lovey dovey with almost every  girl..Haruna starts to notice it and glares at her. Haruna was really angry to see her beloved squirrel messing around with other girls..”why is she acting like this?” she was upset.. so she took a break and went into the dressing room to cool down..as soon as she walked into the room, the door slammed behind her.”Nyan Nyan..” Yuko whispered hugging her from behind. “what do you want!? Isn’t those other girls enough for you!?” Haruna replied. “Nyan nyan…I was trying to show you how I felt..” “Showing me how you feel??? So you feel that we should see other people!? Is that it?” “NOOO..that’s not what I meant..I was showing you how it feels to be jealous, earlier you ignored me for Minami and it made me feel pathetic. I’m sorry if I hurted you, trust me! I have feelings only for you.. I lo—“ Before Yuko can finish her sentence..Haruna cupped the squirrel face and kissed her in the most passionate way..  to shut her up. She teased the corner of her mouth gently with her tongue, making her want more.. Rapidly their tongue were fighting for dominance but both broke it up gasping for air.. As Yuko hands starts to move up from haruna’s waist and into her shirt..A knock on the door interrupted them.  “Hey girls! We have an announcement to make so come out of there as soon as you can” Aki-P stated. “Come on Yuko, lets go..” “But Nyan Nyan! Just a little bit more pleaseeee..” Yuko whined..” “No, we have to go..maybe later ok? Haruna winked at Yuko. “BINGOOOOOOOOOOOOO” Yuko shouted excitedly.

TBC…

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 7 UPDATED 9/26
« Reply #34 on: September 27, 2011, 06:35:26 AM »
thanx... Jelousy haruna I like... and takamidet jelousy too... aww akip why do you interrupting the kiss... very bad.. for us jajaj good job.. im waiting for the next chapter

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 7 UPDATED 9/26
« Reply #35 on: September 30, 2011, 08:55:53 AM »
Kojiyuu jealousy hehehe
Poor Acchan, Takamina pranked her xD

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« Reply #36 on: September 30, 2011, 03:38:24 PM »
WOW!!!! :inlove: :w00t: :panic: Nice fanfic.... good job, please update soon.......... :wub: :wub: XD XD

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 7 UPDATED 9/26
« Reply #37 on: September 30, 2011, 09:26:02 PM »
Nyan nyan not be jealous !! Yuko love only youuu !!!

nice fic ! please update soon  :luvuluvu:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 8 UPDATED 10/7
« Reply #38 on: October 07, 2011, 09:30:36 AM »
Sorry guys..i've been slacking off lately because of work but thanks for reading :) here's another part..

PART 8


“Girls you will be spending some time in New York for an Anime Festival from February 7th to the 15th! So pack your bags! Are you guys excited!?!?” Aki-P shouted enthusiastically “NEW YORK??? But I can’t even speak English! The only thing I can say is I like shrimp!”  Miichan said to Acchan with a pout. “Haha its okay Miichan that’s why there’s a Google translate app on our phone” Acchan reassured her chuckling. “Suggoiiiiii! I can’t wait to perform in New York and go sight-seeing...” Takamina hollered eagerly. “You girls will be pairing up for the trip, 2 in each room for the hotel.”  Aki-P stated. “Hai” the girls screamed out excitedly. “Please, please, please… pair me up with Acchan”  Miichan whispered quietly to herself.” “Minegishi and Maeda, You girls will be rooming together.” “YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!” Miichan shrieked like a little happy girl causing everyone attention to be on her.. “ I mean errr.. uhmm cool” she said more maturely. “What a loser, HAHAHA” Minami thought although she felt envious of her.  “Kojima and Oshima, you two will be rooming together..” Yuko was so happy she started to do silly dances making Haruna laugh. “Stop that!” Haruna exclaimed with a blushing face. “ Itano and Takahashi, you will room up together, this will give you girls a chance to get to know eachother.” Both girl smiled at eachother.. “Isn’t it inappropriate for a boy and a girl to room up with eachother?” Mariko and Miichan said jokingly. “Ehhhh!! What do you mean by that?” Takamina replied. Her failed expression  slowly started to appear. “Watch out, Takamina might just hit on you..after all she is a boy.” Haruna said laughing hysterically.” Tomochin then, said “I think she’s a cute boy” turning around shyly trying to cover her blushing face. “Hahahahaha  why are you lying to her for?” Acchan exclaimed. although she’s feeling upset about it. “Arigotou Tomomi, Atleast someone thinks I’m cute here” Takamina said with a smirk. Aki-P also announced all the other pairs.

Next week on the Flight to Ny..

It takes 1 and a half day to get there... Everyone was asleep..except for Takamina and Miichan, they both sat beside Acchan on each side. Acchan sleeps through everything so she can’t hear the conversation.. “Errm..Takamina, I want to ask you something but I don’t know if I should ask you.” “Hmm..? what is it? You know you can tell me anything..” Takamina said. “I think…i..i think i…umm..” “Yes? Come on ask me...”  “I think I like Acchan…” “Oh…” Takamina said with a disappointed tone… “You know since you’re very close to her, can you to help me confess to her on Valentine’s day in New York? Please say you’ll help!” Miichan lifted her two hands putting it together in a praying position and showing Takamina her puppy face... “How can I refuse? Of course I’ll help you... after all we’re friends” Takamina says with a fake smile..

@ the hotel..

“Hmm for some reason the weather here is weird, why is it not snowing?” Acchan asked Miichan while sitting in their room. “I guess it’s global warming? I don’t know..Miichan answered confused. “Miichan, I always wanted to try the hamburgers here,I heard this is better than the ones in japan..later on do you want to go and try some?” Acchan asked.  “Sorry, but I can’t..I already made plans with Mariko. Maybe tomorrow?”  “Oh no it’s fine...” Acchan decided to go by herself. The place she was looking for was across town. She took the subway there...Acchan found her way there using an app. on her phone. The place is called “Burger and Barrel” ..It was listed  as one of the best burger place in New York. “Hey Miichan where’s Atsuko?”  Takamina asked worriedly.. “I think she went to this burger place across town? I don’t know.. why?”  “By herself?? That’s not safe!!..do you know what the place is called?” “Burger and Barrel” Miichan answered feeling bad about letting Acchan go alone. Takamina dashed out the main lobby of the hotel where Mariko and Miichan was having a drink. She went up to her room to map quest the place..while searching, the gadget on the side of the laptop says there will be a severe storm..Takamina rushed out bringing an umbrella with her..she didn’t want the same thing to happen to Acchan when she walked home alone before..Meanwhile at the shop Acchan was enjoying her burger. It’s almost 8 p.m., that’s what time the shop closes. Acchan looked outside, it started to rain really hard.. the storm was coming really fast..the staffs and everyone else had already left. Acchan began to walk as it was raining..she was drenched in seconds...Suddenly the rain had stopped..but how? Acchan stood still and gradually look on top of her..” An  umbrella? Who could this be?” She thought. She turned around deliberately and seen the smile of the person whom she been longing to see.. “Taka…mina…what are you doing here?”Acchan nervously asked. “I came to walk you back to the hotel..it’s dark out and a storm is coming” Takamina said with a concerned look on her face. “Hai” Acchan said shyly… The storm started to get worse, all the electricity went out on the streets and there was no signal on their phone either.. “Minami..I’m really scared” Acchan said shakingly..” “It will be okay..Hold on to my hands Atsuko..” Acchan felt relieved and felt butterflies in her stomach…”This feeling..I don’t ever want it to end..” Acchan thought.. The wind blew harder causing the umbrella to break..  They both ran as fast as they could into a phone booth..The booth is small causing their body to press against eachother soaking wet..Takamina began to blush..“There’s  an abandon warehouse over there, we’ll have to stay there for the night” Takamina said calming Acchan down.. “But it’s scary…” Acchan replied.. “Don’t worry..I’ll be right beside you no matter what” Takamina said assuring her..

TBC…

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 8 UPDATED 10/7
« Reply #39 on: October 07, 2011, 11:00:22 AM »
wah!!! they went to NY!!!!  :w00t:  nice moment in the phone booth~~  XD

I wonder what will happen... spending the night together in an abandon warehouse~~  :P

update soon~~  :banghead: :banghead:

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