Konnichiwa minna! My name is Nicole ^^ I'm a new author so please be gentle

but feel free to leave constructive tips =D I hope you guy enjoy my fanfics :3 I warn you that I'm a "free time writer" so I only write stories when my work/studies allow me to. Oh and if you have any couple suggestions please feel free to tell me ^0^
First Story (MariMii): Feelings For You“Miichan!” shouted Takamina as she chased after the girl with whom she shared a name. Recently, the Gachapin look-a-like had been acting weird and running away whenever she saw Shinoda Mariko. Takamina had had enough of this behavior and was determined to force Miichan into telling her why she was running away from Mariko, who looked rather sad and more distant lately. Noticing that the other Minami was running into a hallway that led to a dead end, the short leader knew that she was finally going to catch the bucked-toothed girl. Cornering Miichan, Takamina gave the other girl a look that said ‘tell me what’s going on or else..” Letting out a sigh, Miichan knew that she would have no choice but to tell the midget leader or face the consequences.
“Ok, Ok, I’ll tell you”, said Miichan as she took a long breath and quickly muttered, “ThetruthisthatIlikeMarikoandI’mtooscaredtotellher.” Gasping in big gulps of air, the raven head noticed that her brunette leader had on her trademark ‘fail expression’.
“What? Could you please repeat that slowly?” questioned Takamina as she prepared to listen.
“I.Like.Mariko.” replied Miichan, enunciating each word. Takamina’s jaw dropped as she stared wide eyed at the younger girl. She had not been expecting to get a confession out of the other girl.
“Oh..is that it? Why don’t you just tell Mariko then?” stated the brunette as she waited for her fellow no3b member’s answer.
“Are you crazy?! Why would I do that? So that I can get rejected? Plus, why would someone so extremely beautiful and sweet and sexy and cute and smart, like Mariko, want to go out with a bucked-toothed Gachapin like me?” Miichan stated with a disheartened look on her face. Letting out a heavy groan, Miichan leaned against the wall and slowly slide into a kneeling position with her head rested on her folded arms. Mariko who had been eavesdropping on the conversation blushed as she realized that her feelings for the younger girl were definitely returned. She had been really upset lately because she was worried that Miichan had found out about her feelings and was trying to avoid her. Deciding that now was the time to let her feelings be known, Mariko slowly walked into the corner and put her finger to her lips letting Takamina know she would take care of the situation. Nodding her head in a knowing way, the brunette captain decided to leave the two alone and went to go pick up Acchan for their lunch date. Walking silently to the younger girl, Mariko bent down and wrapped her arms around Miichan pulling her into a tight hug. Miichan’s breath hitched as she realized who arms were wrapped around her frame.
“You should have just told me how you felt my adorable Gachapin..”, whispered Mariko in her husky voice, letting the soft air brush against Miichan’s ear sending chills down the latters back. Returning the embrace, Miichan wrapped her arms around Mariko’s waist while letting out a sigh of content.
“I, Minegishi Minami, love you, Shinoda Mariko. Will you do me the honor of being mine?” whispered the raven headed girl as she awaited her loves answer. Without even the slightest hesitation, Mariko replied with a ‘yes’ wrapping her arms even tighter around Miichan’s neck. Leaning away from the older brunette, Miichan gazed deeply into Mariko’s eyes before moving closer to catch her lips in a sweet yet passionate kiss. Mariko returned the kiss, slightly parting her lips to allow the latter’s tongue to twist and slide against her own. When breathing became an issue, the two girls pulled away, resting their foreheads together contently. The moment of peace was broken when a loud scream echoed down the hallway causing the new couple to slowly break away and look towards the direction of the noise. What they saw next was the red faced Yuko running away in panic from the pissed-off looking Kojima Haruna.
"HELP ME!!!!" shouted Yuko as she continued to run away from the persistent Haruna. Looking at each other, Mariko and Miichan broke out in laughter as they watched the odd coupled antics. Clasping their hands together, they chased after the other two girls to ensure that Kojiharu didn't kill the perverted squirrel.
THE END
First update ^^ enjoy! ~
Second Story (Minami/Ray): Second Chances Part 1/?Takahashi Minami shifted on her bed as silent tears shed down her face and she sniffled to clear her runny nose.
Why? Why had she fallen for Japan’s number one songstress? Why had she been foolish to even tell Ray that she was a girl? The ache in her heart could not even be described as her mind was filled with images of the beautiful diva.
It had been one year since Persona disbanded. One year since they were shot. One year since she had gotten her heart broken and thrown in her face. Flashback“You can’t love me! Y-you can’t love me b-b..b-because..I’m a woman!” Kai shouted as he lifted his hand up to pull the hairpins out of his hair, pulling off his wig and letting Minami’s long hair fall free from its cage. Ray stood with her eyes widened and a look of pure hurt and betrayal before lifting her hand to send it flying across the shorter woman’s face causing her to stumble backwards.
“How could you do this to me? I hate you! I never want to see you again!” shouted the red-faced diva as she ran away. Ray couldn’t understand why she was running away from the one person who had made her feel loved. Sure Kai had turned out to be a woman and she had felt lied to but the feelings that Kai made her feel made up for that ten-fold. Realizing that she had just made one of the worst mistakes of her life, the white clad songstress sped back to the parking only to find it empty and to see Kai’s signature black leather jacket lying on the floor. Waking over to the jacket and picking it up, the diva slide on to the ground and sobbed into her loves jacket. In the midst of her crying, Ray felt something brush pass her fingers and she turned the jacket to find a little white note sticking out of Kai’s coat pocket. Slowly unfolding the letter, Ray carefully smoothed it out before the words caused her to sob even more.
“Dear Ray,
I know I’m not the best person with words but I just wanted you to know that I love you. I don’t know how you could have fallen in love with someone like me. I’m not tall, strong, or charming. Never in a million years did I think someone like you would ever fall for someone like me. I always imagined your type to be the prince type like Riku or the bad boy type like Kuu. I’m hot-headed and tend to snap yet you still fell for me. Haha..sometimes I think that it was God’s way of playing a trick on me but now I know it’s reality. I don’t know how but you’ve broken down my walls and stole my heart with your beauty. You’re so perfect. I can’t even describe how gorgeous you are. I find even the simplest things you do cute like: the way your eyes shine when you smile, how your nose crinkles when you think, or even the sound of your melodic laugh. I know I have trouble expressing how I feel but one thing I know for sure is..I love you. I love you with every fiber of my being and I want you by my side forever. So will you accept this confession and be mine? I promise to be your eternal love because my heart beats for you and only you. You’re my forever..
I love you Ray.
-Kai”
Ray sobbed harder as she now understood how she had been dumb enough to hurt her Kai. Stopping her tears, Ray forced herself to get up with a determined face. She was going to do whatever it took to bring Kai back.End FlashbackIt had been a year now and Ray still had not given up searching for the blonde member of Persona. She had done everything, going from calling Persona’s manger, visiting their apartment only to find it empty, and even having detectives search the city to no avail. It was as if Persona had vanished off the earth. The songstress let out a deep sigh as she watched her best friend, Shinoda Mariko being all lovey-dovey with her hot race car driver of a girlfriend, Minegishi Minami or Miichan. Mariko had invited Ray to join them for lunch but Ray felt like a third-wheel when Miichan arrived. Telling Mariko that she wanted to go for a walk, the diva slipped her large yet fashionable sunglasses on and headed out of the café. As she began to slowly tread down the street in her signature white boots, Ray wondered what could have happened if she had not rejected Kai or whatever Kai’s real name was. Lost in thought, the songstress did not hear the footsteps that where loudly coming from behind her until she felt something or rather someone knock in to her from behind. Slightly losing her balance, Ray closed her eyes and prepared for the incoming impact only to find two soft hands wrap around her waist swiftly pulling her back into a standing position.
“I am sooo sorry miss! I didn’t mean to bump into you but I’m in a rush so excuse me!”, said the mystery girl who ran towards the huge recording studio before the diva could reply. Looking down, the songstress noticed a familiar looking black and white striped scarf laying on the ground where the mystery girl had been earlier.
Could it be..? Kai?! Feeling the urgency of her feelings rush into her brain, Ray ran to the building only to see the back of the mystery girl being dragged by another girl with short hair towards one of the dressing rooms labeled “AKB48 Team A”. Walking up to the main desk, Ray slipped off her sunglasses and asked the woman at the desk if she knew anything about this so-called “AKB48”.
Several minutes later, Ray walked away knowing quite a few things about this group: 1) It was a girl group consisting of 48 members 2) There were 3 captains to 3 teams, Team A’s Takahashi Minami, Team K’s Akimoto Sayaka, and Team B’s Kashiwagi Yuki and 3) The overall leader of AKB48 happened to be this Takahashi Minami girl. When she turned the corner, Ray noticed the door to the dressing room open and the girl from earlier walked out, this time dressed in a plaid, school uniform styled costume with a large bow tied stylishly to her hair. Blushing when she noticed how adorable the girl looked, Ray knew that this girl had to be her Kai. The small details where all the same: the height, the large expressive brown eyes, the thin yet soft lips, and the ever-present dimples. Watching as the girl walked away with her taller friend who was dressed in the same outfit, Ray swore that she would do whatever it took to get her Kai back.
“Kai, I’m sorry for not excepting you..I swear that I’ll win you back and never let you go..”THE END?
What do you guys think? Should I write a sequel? I don't really know. Well it's up to you guys ^^