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Offline Divine Vengeance

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Re: Irrelevant Stories --- Lips of an Angel – [MaYuki] – (10/29/11)
« Reply #20 on: October 29, 2011, 10:38:05 AM »
Lips of an Angel
(Posted 10/29/11)

A/N: So… just as a note, I did NOT realize that there was another fic of the same name until I had already finished this LOL I assure you, the two have nothing to do with each other except for characters probably x.x

Once again, this went the way I didn’t want it to LOL Oh well OTL

Here’s to Halloween 8D
However… the people that actually celebrate that day might be out kidnapping children getting candy, and I might get convinced to do so as well (LOL), so I decided to make a Someday update instead. Same difference in the end = 3=

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A/N: Thank you all for reading! \ ; 3 ; / I hope you enjoyed this story ;D Tell me what you think? ; v ; As usual, thank you very much for your support <3
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Re: Irrelevant Stories --- Lips of an Angel – [MaYuki] – (10/29/11)
« Reply #21 on: October 29, 2011, 11:15:00 AM »
 :angry: :angry: :angry: YOU!!!! YOU!!! KILLED MY MAYUYU!!!! YOU!!! ARGH!!! Do you know that I was pulling my hair in frustration?! :angry: Why? Why did Mayuyu have to be dead? Why did Yukirin have to suffer? Waah~!

Haha. Sorry bout that. Anyway you story is so...sad and great, at the same time. Please write more and forget the one above  :nervous

And now thanks to this story, I now have an inspiration! Yay~! Thank you! Now I can make my pairs suffer!  :twisted:
Had a withdrawal, so now I'm planning to fall in love with the couples all over again

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Here are my fics~! They can be found amongst these three. :hee:

Shots
Love's A Mission
Oh My Dolly!


R.A.Y
SoUL (Series)


The Akiba Family (T.A.F)

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Re: Irrelevant Stories --- Lips of an Angel – [MaYuki] – (10/29/11)
« Reply #22 on: October 29, 2011, 11:22:20 AM »
Oh man, I had to read this a second time to let the story fully sink in. I was confused at first and then... WHY DID YOU DO THAT TO MAYUYU?? And now Yukirin got to live without her beloved cyborg! T_T
Just go and join Mayuyu already! I can't stand the thought of these two being apart like this :(

Ok, that aside *still tryin to get over the heartbreak*, I did a double take when I saw the title. "I don't remember you writing Lips of an Angel!" went through my head. Luckily you explained in the A/N. Heh.

Anyway, it's a well-written piece as always. Good job at misleading me right till the end. I feel the pain that Yuki is going through. It's also saddening to see the usually happy group all gloomy and worried sick.

Yuki mentioned bandages on Mayu's head. Makes me wonder what method she chose to go out in. And on a lighter note, I think Rabutan will slap Mayu silly on the other side for taking her along! Rabutan is not one to go down so easily :lol:

Thanks for writing this but gosh, I need to re-read River's MaYuki update to cheer myself up.

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Re: Irrelevant Stories --- Lips of an Angel – [MaYuki] – (10/29/11)
« Reply #23 on: October 29, 2011, 11:52:50 AM »
Why T_T , why you killed Mayuyu in this story!! ;______________;  it hurts you know! ;___;  and Seeing Yuki suffering from Mayu's death makes me wanna ;_______;

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO~ ;_____;

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Re: Irrelevant Stories --- Lips of an Angel – [MaYuki] – (10/29/11)
« Reply #24 on: October 29, 2011, 02:06:49 PM »
OMG Mayuyu killed Love-tan and herself!!!! Noooooooo!!!!!
Poor Yukirin!!!!!! T_T

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Re: Irrelevant Stories --- Lips of an Angel – [MaYuki] – (10/29/11)
« Reply #25 on: October 29, 2011, 03:15:28 PM »
WHAT?! Mayuyu commit suicide?!  :bleed eyes:

Yuki become like that?! SOO SAD! TOO SAD~!!  :cry:

I'm crying inside~  :cry:

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Re: Irrelevant Stories --- Lips of an Angel – [MaYuki] – (10/29/11)
« Reply #26 on: October 29, 2011, 06:12:43 PM »
Firstly...askednfqbehn I LOVE THAT SONG  :heart: :heart:

Secondly....AKJSndjvhbhedbnjaknkrndg WHY IT BE LIKE THAT? ;_______; Both of them are in pain, and from the looks of it, Yukirin is holding it up! Why did Mayu do that? Was she protecting Yuki, or was she just scared? aksjndcjna ZuZuuuuu ;_____; You must make something so I know what happens next, or else my mind will wonder and I'll make it twisted BD

But....my heeeeeart...pooooor Yuuuuki....and Mayuuuuuuu in the hospital....and their friends are also huuuurting  :fainted:

Update soon ;___;

P.S I'm glad you updated  :heart:

But of course when I fell asleep! >=O
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Re: Irrelevant Stories --- Lips of an Angel – [MaYuki] – (10/29/11)
« Reply #27 on: October 29, 2011, 08:37:33 PM »
Ahaha, is it bad that I laughed like a maniac? I love laughing evilly at heavily depressing stories. >:D

But that was amazing. I had no idea what was going on until the end. So beautiful T A T

... I do feel like Yukirin will kill herself soon if she keeps that up. Spirit of Halloween, eh? Why did you kill Rabutan too, by the way?

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Re: Irrelevant Stories --- Lips of an Angel – [MaYuki] – (10/29/11)
« Reply #28 on: October 29, 2011, 10:11:10 PM »
Wha What !!! OMG !! T___T
Why.... Why.... Ohhhhh
My Mayuyu... T-T
Yukirin hurts too........

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Re: Irrelevant Stories --- Lips of an Angel – [MaYuki] – (10/29/11)
« Reply #29 on: October 30, 2011, 12:29:04 AM »
I'm going to have to start checking here ever Sathday and Someday  :lol:

YES!!! EMO STORY!!!!

Somehow when I started to read the story, I had the feeling something didn't add up and had a feeling that Mayu
is dead and sure enough she died by suicide but I don't understand why she took Rubutan with her.

Story wise, love it! Very well written, the flow is good at first its like Yuki is really talking to Mayu but then the
way Sae acted it didn't make sense and doesn't add up, once Sae made her way down the stairs it was obvious
there is a problem with Yuki.

I guess the pressure on Mayu is too great for her to handle, that she decided to leave it all behind, including
Yuki, and that is what shocked her into this hallucination every night along with the hollow feeling of not having
Mayu there with her. Maybe if Mayu went to Yuki instead, things would be better. Every night at 11pm.. I wonder
if that is the time Mayu left or is there any significant to the time other then it repeats every night.

At least I can see the other girls trying their best to save Yuki but I don't think it will work.... maybe it would be better
for Yuki to go find Mayu so they can be together again.

:angry: :angry: :angry: YOU!!!! YOU!!! KILLED MY MAYUYU!!!! YOU!!! ARGH!!! Do you know that I was pulling my hair in frustration?! :angry: Why? Why did Mayuyu have to be dead? Why did Yukirin have to suffer? Waah~!

LOL that's the kind of reaction I got when I killed Sae in my OS  :twisted: :twisted:

Thanks Divine Kira for updating, please continue to write more!!!
You make my boring Sathday and Someday's so much more interesting other then just book  :twothumbs :twothumbs

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Re: Irrelevant Stories --- Lips of an Angel – [MaYuki] – (10/29/11)
« Reply #30 on: October 30, 2011, 02:41:56 AM »
OHMYGAWD. i was like spazzing when i saw your update in tumblr.
i just can't just click the "thank you" button saying nothing.

First of all, i thought the story was going to be cheesy stuff one, yet....it was not, that made me really surprised, you damn awesome genius writer. the idea mayu being dead never crossed my mind. i agree with immortal_K, i didn't understand the part she took rabutan with her.  :nervous

seriously when i finally knew that mayu was dead it gave me goose bumps. yuki was just hallucinating things every night. i can't take it ;_______; yukirin  :cry: and the part that sae said "yukirin did it again."  :cry: :cry:

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thanks for the update!! i really enjoyed this one. really really love it!! Please write more  :bow:
everything you write is just genius.  :thumbup ily  :bow:

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Re: Irrelevant Stories --- Lips of an Angel – [MaYuki] – (10/29/11)
« Reply #31 on: October 30, 2011, 05:50:27 AM »
Mayuyu suicide!!!!!!  :OMG:
No!!!! It feels so sad and depressing to see Yukirin like that without Mayu with her!!!  :banghead:

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Re: Irrelevant Stories --- Lips of an Angel – [MaYuki] – (10/29/11)
« Reply #32 on: October 30, 2011, 06:45:04 PM »
Yuki's mental problem as a result of Mayu's death legitimately creeped me out. :lol:
I like your style of writing.

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Re: Irrelevant Stories --- Lips of an Angel – [MaYuki] – (10/29/11)
« Reply #33 on: October 30, 2011, 09:41:52 PM »
(O _ O).... You... you killed Mayuyu.... you made Yukirin suffer.... WHYYYY?!!! ; A ;

I didn't know what was happening till the end though too... good job. Please write more!

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Re: Irrelevant Stories --- Lips of an Angel – [MaYuki] – (10/29/11)
« Reply #34 on: October 31, 2011, 11:13:29 AM »
Poor Yuki, living now it seems in a world without Mayuyu  :cry: Why did Mayu have to end her life by suicide, so sad!!!  :cry: Yuki is obviously taking it badly but it seems at least she has her friends round her, though maybe they can do nothing for her........ perhpas more than anything they are there to stop her incase she decides to 'join' Mayuyu more than anything else....

Sae seems perhpas to be taking it badly to, perhaps because of her cloness to Yuki, mabye a closeness that, because of Mayuyu, Sae did not want to take to the level that maybe she wanted to with Yuki, a love that Sae has to keep hidden and im this situation that perhaps makes it even less likely than when Mayuyu was alive all Sae can do is be there, which is perhpas the hardest thing of all.....

And what of these phone calls? A way for Yukirin to deal with her grief? A sign that she may be loosing her mind, or maybe, just maybe perhpas she is talking to Mayuyu.....

Even though it's sad, I'm looking forward to more of this story!

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Disguises, Danso, and Love Hotels
(Posted 11/3/11)

A/N: For the record, I shall refer to cross-dressing people as the gender they are cross-dressing as.

Anyways... I  hope this somewhat makes up for how... unhappy the previous update was LOL

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A/N: And that was this week's Sathday update! I hope you enjoyed it~

In regards to some of the... confusion surrounding Mayu and Rabutan on the previous update, I'll just say that things happen when you try to stop someone from doing something that they're dead set on doing (no pun intended). I'll leave the rest to your imaginations ;D Try not to read too much into things, alright? >xD

Back on topic, thanks for reading once again! Your support is as cherished as ever ; v ; b Thanks for all the wonderful and entertainingly angry/upset comments!
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Mayuyu in a suit  :inlove: Danso!


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“… So Takahashi Minami and Maeda Atsuko are in that kind of relationship, eh?” one of the gathered fan girls mused as everyone looked at the door the two disappeared behind. Needless to say, many AKB fans worldwide were ecstatic as news quickly emerged indicating that Team A’s captain and ace duo had indeed entered a love hotel together.

LOL Even escaping you fail Takamina~!

There needs to be another Danso episode.

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Yea!! an Update~  :)
And Mayuyu DANSO!!!!!!!!!  :thumbsup
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I see you were inspired by Mayuyu's stint at the danso cafe! I swear I stopped breathing when I saw her in that butler getup. So handsome, cute, and hot. Gave me an urge to kidnap her :twisted: But I'd rather Yukirin do the kidnapping instead :twisted: :twisted:

Everyday Takamina, Everyday Fail~~
Of all places, she dragged Acchan into a love hotel in front of fans!

Yukirin wasn't any better. She actually thought she could get away with that over-the-top disguise from Bimyo~! At least do away with that fake moustache when she was wearing a dress! No wonder Mayuyu made a comment about AKB Captains.

Anyway, I love all the little interactions between MaYuki from Mayuyu tracing Yukirin's arms to the two of them tidying each other's hair to Mayuyu drinking from Yukirin's mug. So aww... And a jealous Yukirin is the best! :heart: The MaYuki fan in me is having a field day! This lighthearted story really makes up for the previous depressing update! Not that it was bad of course, just that I felt my heart die a little when MaYuki had to suffer so horribly.

Thanks so much for today's post, Divine Vengeance! Sathdays are really the best!

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