Author Topic: Irrelevant Stories ––– Stargazer – [KojiYuu] – (5/1/14) - DELETED (Read 99556 times)

kahem · « **Reply #100 on:** December 27, 2011, 08:05:50 AM »

Mistletoes FTW!!!!

skytsuna · « **Reply #101 on:** December 27, 2011, 12:26:58 PM »

I love this~

Haha Takamina as a deer~ Cute

LOL Acchan kept running away from Takamina

And when Takamina is going to give up, Acchan gave her a kiss

Really Nice

Thanks for the update

Divine Vengeance · « **Reply #102 on:** January 04, 2012, 09:52:35 AM »

In Heaven

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Chapter 3
(Posted 1/4/12)

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A/N: Credit for the picture above goes to the wonderful Nyanoha~

Anyways, thank you as always for reading! I hope this chapter does not disappoint you even though it did not come out the way I wanted. Please enjoy! m(_ _)m

A quick warning: Make sure to look at the dates so that things will make more sense in context~

Once again, I hope you enjoy, and thank you for your support! Comments are welcome as always ;A;

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WinterAir · « **Reply #103 on:** January 04, 2012, 11:19:01 AM »

Omg yuko!!!!! Nooooooooooo omg this is so sad T.T
>< your story is so good and extemely heartbreaking lol
Yuko showed such s strong love for kojiharu even till the end
Ahhh >< I wish it doesnt really just ends like this, kojiharu needs
To repay yuko back!!! Lol really amazing story =] an your attaining mistletoe one is really cute
Can't wait to read more works from you!

silllythings · « **Reply #104 on:** January 04, 2012, 01:36:40 PM »

haven't read a story that made me cry so much in a long time~ the tears came down naturally~

thanks for writing a wonderful story, i knew it would be a sad ending from the title early on, but still....

haruhi16 · « **Reply #105 on:** January 04, 2012, 01:55:15 PM »

Omg

what have you done to me and to my OTP, my squirrel

My heart is breaking, i feel like someone is stabbing my heart right now.. HELLLLLLPPPPPP

Omg this story is so heartbreaking

, i wish Haruna didn't accept that offer and just be with Yuko, spend all her time with her while she's alive (No!she's not dead! for me!NOO!

)

This is nice btw but heartbreaking

Please don't let any of these two die on your next story please

luckymmsg · « **Reply #106 on:** January 04, 2012, 03:52:59 PM »

OMG

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Saw this on tumblr, then i notice you have updated.
Been crying over what you hav done to my OTP and my oshi.

Dunno why the moment I read till the date 7 October that I had the feeling that something gonna happen.

Yuko sure showed all her love to Haruna always.

I'm gonna kill Yamato-san, how could you make my OTP separated so many times because of all this overseas work.

Never will I think that Yuko is dead.

Kid_Alpha · « **Reply #107 on:** January 04, 2012, 04:37:08 PM »

What are you doing making me cry so early in the morning? ;A;

Though I kinda predicted this, the over all feel of your story just gave me a vibe ~~that and the title~~ but I was so hoping I was wrong.

Nyanoha · « **Reply #108 on:** January 04, 2012, 07:52:07 PM »

You know my reply to this ;________;/////

Haruko · « **Reply #109 on:** January 05, 2012, 05:08:32 AM »

my kojiyuuuuuu T_T why take ke!! but my kojiyuu no!! aww.. i dont know what to say.. so many feelings T_T

immortal_K · « **Reply #110 on:** January 05, 2012, 07:52:00 AM »

ahhhhh Div.........

It's so sad, you killed Yuko!

At first it was all about Haruna being too busy, but I guess we finally found the reason why Yuko stayed with Haruna and always
encourage her to concentrate on work. Yuko even went as far as pushing Haruna away for another business trip just so Haruna
can be successful. She knew she didn't have much time left, so she did the next best thing she can and be supportive so Haruna
will be able to make it to the top...

But I'm not sure if I agree with that kind of thinking, because in the end Yuko left and they were never able to spend any quality
time together. It was like most of Yuko's life was wasted on waiting and making the best for Haruna but never for herself. She rather
spend all those days and nights alone and face her sickness alone....... The love Yuko have for Haruna is just that deep, that no
matter what happen Haruna comes first, but I still think that is selfish of her to keep it from Haruna.

Now that Yuko is gone what will Haruna thinking? All those time she neglected Yuko and the time they missed spending together.
The last time she seen Yuko was a couple weeks ago, it will make Haruna feel so much worst and guilty for always having Yuko
wait for her.... at least that's what I think......

But all in all, awesome story I like how you wrote this, the way it's separated in days like a log, almost as if we are looking through
a hidden camera that recorded their life for our curious eyes. It feels very realistic and true... because it reminds me of all
those sad life histories I encounter at work.

Thanks, hope to see more of your work in the future.

~the sick immortal......

oist · « **Reply #111 on:** January 05, 2012, 08:20:55 AM »

I knew it! Arghhhh...

I knew she was going to dieeeeeeeeeeee
darn

darn

darn.

And the worst part is that they only get to meet sparingly because of Haruna's stupid job. Ughhh..

Now I need to find something to do that will make me happy again...

Megumi · « **Reply #112 on:** January 05, 2012, 01:24:19 PM »

OMG I knew it! Yuchaaaaaaaaaaan!

Thank you Divine Vengeance for this super great sad fic...

Arígatou!

Crimsonwing · « **Reply #113 on:** January 08, 2012, 08:14:04 PM »

I'd like to think that you already know my feeling towards this fic by now, but here's an actual proper review since you deserve way more than that (questionable) spaz attack I sent yesterday lol.

But before we start on that, WHY YOU KILL MY FUTURE DADDY?

Haha all joking aside, what more can I say but beautifully done? As a lover of angst stories, I have read a multitude of angst filled fics in my life. Some, while undoubtedly sad, fail to make much impact on me whereas some would, as I eloquently put it yesterday: "MAKE ME FEEL FEELINGS"

In regards with your fic? Well I'm sure you know which category I've placed it in.

I'm not sure how you yourself view your own writing, but trust me when I say it is more than enough for us to establish a connection with the characters (which is of course a key component when it comes to angst). In the past, I've praised you on your excellent characterization and this time round, it is of no exception. Not only is it easy for me to visually see the events playing as I would watching a movie, but because of the connection that your writing has allowed me to have with both Haruna and Yuko, I felt that I could literally place myself in their shoes. My world stopped the same way Haruna's did when she received the phone call. My heart raced as hers did as she made her way to Yuko (actually,it's been racing the whole time since I, like many others, have speculated something like this happening due to the implications placed by the chosen title). And as Kojiharu watched Yuko -whose unwavering and unfailing love never failed to pull on my heartstrings- slip away, i found myself begging the same way she did for her to stay.

Oh and by the way, the uniqueness of the addition of the timeline noted during every event? Brilliant idea. It most definitely added to the anticipation and drama of this fic.

As always, I greatly look forward to and further plans you may have for this fic

As a little sidenote: I think it is suffice to say that should I ever make an attempt at writing an angst filled fic, this is definitely going to source of inspiration to turn to

kahem · « **Reply #114 on:** January 08, 2012, 09:04:57 PM »

Nooooooo!!!!!!!!!! Yuko!!!!!! Why?!!!!!!!!
T_T

Divine Vengeance · « **Reply #115 on:** March 04, 2012, 10:51:48 AM »

A/N: So... sorry for the delay with this chapter. I was planning to live in Hiatus Land for quite a few reasons, but inspiration randomly cropped up and a timeslot opened... so yeah.
Sorry if this chapter sucks 'cause my writing funk isn't back or something like that OTL And sorry if it's too short >_>
If you have any questions, feel free to ask~

Thank you, as always, for reading. Your support and comments are greatly valued no matter what ;__; /

Anyways, without further ado, I present you:

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In Heaven

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Chapter 4
(Posted 3/4/12)

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Nyanoha · « **Reply #116 on:** March 04, 2012, 10:58:37 AM »

I just wanted to be the first person to comment ;___;

You already know what I think of this ;_______; (

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Prataz · « **Reply #117 on:** March 04, 2012, 12:56:18 PM »

I think this song suits Haruna when Yuuko moved on...

sakura_drop_ · « **Reply #118 on:** March 04, 2012, 03:15:55 PM »

I know I mentioned this a lot, but never on you fanfic, so...

YOU ARE MY GOD OF FANFICS!!! (together with Sieka

)

I...Reading your stories just makes me want to write more and more and more... but somehow when I write something it's soooooooooooo different than I imagined before... i can't seem to write it so flawlessly as as you do...

Though my mind has lots of flawless stories...

Anyway, while reading I expected Yuko to be at least not dead... It didn't matter if she's in coma, in a ghost form, in another body or something like that. Or safe and sound... Or just moved on and left Haruna... What mattered was that Yuko should stay alive. I'm happy about this update, and I'm waiting for more!!!

haruhi16 · « **Reply #119 on:** March 04, 2012, 05:13:59 PM »

Omg this is still soooooo heart breaking, my heart! D: I wish Yuko was there for Haruna and be happy forever....... i can't comment more about this fic because my heart is really breaking right now </3

.........But at the last part, Yuko is alive? YUKO IS ALIVE?! So is there gonna be a part 5 ?!?!?! HOPEFULLY THERE IS!!!