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Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.4
« Reply #180 on: January 23, 2014, 06:05:01 PM »
Mayu got her real Yuki back

And why Mariko calling Mayu name?

What happen to the boy

Please updatesoon

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Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.4
« Reply #181 on: January 23, 2014, 07:17:37 PM »
omg thank you so much for the update! :heart: :heart:
i missed this fic a lot~ :deco:
and yay! yuki is back and no more black smoke! :cathappy:
im glad mayu is okay~ but mariko-sama is acting suspicious calling mayuyu's name :shocked
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
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Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.4
« Reply #182 on: January 24, 2014, 01:59:21 PM »
I was wonder why on chapter 3, mayu able to see the black smoke?

is that because the evil Yuki wanted to catch her to her/black world?
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Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.6
« Reply #183 on: April 04, 2014, 07:59:49 AM »
                                   THE EXCHANGE
                                            5

"Rena I don't remember many things... Why was I sleeping?" Jurina asked as they walk together

Rena smiled nervously "I told you, you were tired!" She answered worried that she might suspect something.

Suddenly cars crashed in front of them Rena covered Jurina.

Jurina and Rena looked at eachother then got up to see what's going on?

"Jurina be careful" Rena says as she can't watch properly cause of the smoke. People were freaking out cause the drivers came out of the cars without any scar.

One of them killed a man that tried to help him.

Rena was shocked "What did just happened?" She wondered as Jurina is behind her.

The two drivers notice Rena presence and smirked.

"Gekikaraaaaaaaa!" One of them shouted "Rena chan!" Jurina said scared cause the guy was coming.

The other driver that was a female also smiled and looked at Jurina who was really scared.

People around were running away.

Rena looked at Jurina "Go hide inside that coffee shop... NOW!" She shouted the last part serious then kicked the man on his face to stop him.

Jurina was paralyzed cause the fear and somehow she feels she's been in this kind of situation before.

The other girl grabbed Jurina"RENA CHAN!" She shouted in pain cause she was grabbing her by her hair. Rena got distracted and the male punched her on her stomach then punched her on her face sending her meters away.

Rena cleaned the blood on the corner of her face and looked at the man smirking.

"Hi!" Somebody said then punched at the girl that was holding Jurina and sent her meters away.

Yuki fixed her bangs while Jurina doesn't believe what just happened.

"So cool!" Mayu said fangirling over her. Rena smiled then run to the man and kicked him on his jaw.

He was knocked out.

"What's going on?" Yuki asked as she looks at the disaster just those two made.

Rena was also confused "The cars crashed and they come out like that... one of them new my name." She said worried about Jurina.

Mayu pulled Yuki sleeve "Are you okay?" She asked.

"I have the little feeling somebody is playing with us!" Yuki answered looking around. "As you thought master." He said looking afar.

"Hikaru those are hindrances please take care of it!" Someone said.

Hikaru laughed "Let the games begin.." he whispered, Yuki was still feeling uncomfortable.

"Be careful with Watanabe and Matsui Jurina!" The shadow said before disappearing.

~At Takamina's place~

"WHAT  DID YOU SAY?" Yuko asked worried while Acchan only looked down "BASTARD!" She thought.

Takamina and Kojiharu were trembling.

"He only knows where he left his seeds... it's my fault for not noticing since the beginning. I always thought she was always an unlucky human girl dragged into all this but there where so many casualties.. she saw the black smoke!" Mariko said looking down

Eiji looked at the tense scene "So you mean their atracction is cause Mayu is master?" He asked.

"She's master of all of them!" Mariko said.

Acchan, Yuko, Takamina, Kojiharu, and Eiji were shocked.

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Yuki and Rena were still looking at the tall building they knew someone was watching them but then don't his/ her exact position.

Suddenly the female driver got up and was about to attack Mayu.

Yuki and Rena turned around.

 "NOOOOO!" Yuki shouted and tried to stop her but she wasn't close to Mayu.

The female driver saw Mayu in the eyes (she was scared) then she stopped moving her fist a few inches away from Mayu's forehead.

Yuki and Don't understand anything and Jurina is still paralyzed.

Mayu steps back scared not understanding what's happening.

"So she doesn't know..." Hikaru whispered with a smirk.

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"Will be alright as long she don't know.. " Mariko said.

Acchan looked at Mariko sama "There are others like that?" She asked curious.

"Probably, he manage to have a daughter in this world. Don't see Why he can have more chosen one's... of course he can't live in her body, only Jurina's" Mariko explained.

Everyone looked at eachother not knowing what to say.

TO BE CONTINUED... 

« Last Edit: June 03, 2014, 04:31:07 AM by cmze »

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Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.5
« Reply #184 on: April 04, 2014, 08:24:49 AM »
Eh?!  :shocked  :shocked

Don't tell me Mayu is Alexander's daughter?!!!!!
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Update soon..... thank you

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Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.5
« Reply #185 on: April 04, 2014, 08:25:36 AM »
Finally, an updated! Thank you  :kneelbow:

Now I understand why Mayu can see the black smoke :D

Cool, the story is getting more excited..  :twothumbs

Updated soon ~ :kneelbow:
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Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.5
« Reply #186 on: April 04, 2014, 08:30:08 AM »
i want the  next cmze sama

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Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.5
« Reply #187 on: April 04, 2014, 11:50:42 AM »
Yeah an update after so long....

Great going there...

What's going to happen to them next?

What kind of trouble would they come across now?

Would Mayu or Jurina be able to get rid of him?

Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next?

Thank you for the update

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Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.5
« Reply #188 on: April 05, 2014, 01:09:03 AM »
Yay update!!!

Mayu is the master?!?

Update soon

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Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.5
« Reply #189 on: April 10, 2014, 12:18:01 PM »
I had reread the fic  XD..

First, Mayu is Human at first.. How to say, during the first season she is able to went in and out when there are trap that angle can't do that. That include Jurina.

And in the season one, who is the guy that adopted her if she is Alexander's daughter? Since in the season one 1 it mention that yuki had taken mayu's dad life away for going down to earth.  :? :? :?
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Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.5
« Reply #190 on: June 03, 2014, 04:32:00 AM »
                                   THE EXCHANGE S2
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Mayu couldn't do nothing but shiver.

"What did just happened?" Yuki asked a little scared looking at Mayu while Rena only walked to the woman's body in front of Mayu.

Jurina was trembling looking at the three girls "Who.. are... these.. persons?" She whispered stuttering.

Rena looked it at it coldly "She's dead..." she thought nit wanting to alarm Jurina so she changed her mood "Okay let's go Jurina, we 're in the middle of a date!" She said showing he smile calming the younger girl.

Jurina sighed then smiled  "Right!" She said as Rena comes closer soon the two were out of sight.

Yuki was still serious then she also walked to Mayu and grabbed her hand pulling her with her against her will.

"It's not your fault forget it!" Yuki said serious as she walks pulling Mayu who was sad.

Mayu was still in shock as the scene repeated on her head "Did I felt good about that?" She asked to herself.

~~~~~Few minutes before~~~~~~~

The woman stopped her attack a few inches from Mayu's forehead,.

Everything was quiet like if time stopped.

Mayu looked at the woman in front of her then turned to look at Rena and Yuki who were with their hands extended trying to get there.

"What's this? Nothing is moving? Did time stopped?" Mayu asked to herself.

Suddenly her shadow started moving on its own.

"WHAT  THE HELL?" Mayu let out scared.

The shadow was now standing next to her "Don't you remember me? How long am I suppose to wait?" She asked while Mayu was still frozen in shock.

"I'm Nezumi, I was your best friend till you hit your head and abandoned me!" She said acting cold.

Mayu looked at Nezumi walking around her "We, my best friend?"She repeated confused.

"I been always a loner!" She replied looking annoyed to the shadow.

"Before getting adopted? Who used to play with you hide and seek?" She asked while a few memories got back to Mayu.

A few flashes of her playing hide and seek hit her head the. Remembered how one of the kids asked her with who she's playing and replied "Nezumi"

Mayu got back and looked at Nezumi "You're games weren't fun! You always made me do bad things and you said it was for FUN!" She said mad.

Nezumi laughed "I was playing now I''m serious look she's about to kill you with just one punch!" She said looking at the woman

"What are you?" Mayu asked.

"I'm the one who always have to save your butt... Whenever you're about to die I'll appear to protect you since useless Yuki can do it by herself!" Nezumi said looking at her nails.

Mayu was confused "Who you called useless?" She asked mad to the black shadow.

"Easy... her feelings for you are not real!" Nezumi said careless.

"What did you say?" Mayu asked between sad and mad.

Nezumi git closer to Mayu "Upss never mind.. let's fry her brain!" She said before passing through Mayu's body.

The woman was about to hit Mayu.

"Wait? Was that a dream?" Mayu thought.

"No.."

Mayu heard someone whisper.

Suddenly the woman stopped a few inches away her forehead.

Mayu looked at her in the eyes then she started shouting.

"FORGIVE ME!" FORGIVE ME!" Over and over again till her lips dry and her body became In no time skeleton..

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"Acchan what's going to happen next?" Takamina asked sad looking through her window.

Acchan hugged her from behind "It will be alright!" She said calmed.

"How can you be so calm in a moment like this?" Takamina asked a little irritated

Acchan smiled "I win nothing by getting like you!" She replied.

"Seeds.. " Takamina whispered.

Acchan got serious " I gotta protect Takamina" she thought.

"I wonder how many people like Mayu Chan are around the world?" Takamina asked getting Acchan nervous.

"Let's not think about that!" Acchan said tapping Takamina's back with a smile t h t made Takamina feel comfortable.



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Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.5
« Reply #191 on: June 04, 2014, 11:38:13 AM »
This is interesting...........
Please update soon

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Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.5
« Reply #192 on: June 06, 2014, 02:57:34 PM »
I guess...I need to read season 2 again  :grin: :grin: :grin:
seems like there's something that confusing me hahaha  :sweatdrop:
about Mayu..hurmm.. I wonder about mayu's past...about Nezumi~~~
thanks for the update Cmze-san~  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
take a rest for your fingers~  :D Ganbatte!!  :cow: :cow: :cow:

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Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.7
« Reply #193 on: July 19, 2014, 04:49:09 AM »
                                   THE EXCHANGE S2
                                          7
In a dark night~

"Catch him!" Acchan shouted in trouble as she's fighting with someone else.

The person in front of her smirked "Give up already.. " he said before punishing Acchan on her stomach.

Acchan knelt to deal with the pain, she spitted blood "NEVER!!" She shouted before punching him on his face breaking all his tooth.

Suddenly someone fell from the sky. Acchan saw her and him unconscious on the floor so she looked up and smiled "Yuko.." she said happy.

"We'll be alright!" Yuko said with a thumb up from a tall building.

Yuko felt someone behind her "Who are you? What do you want?" She asked calmed as she turns around to face the other person.

"I see you been looking for me!" A handsome boy said serious, looking at his clothes You could tell he was a farm boy but no a normal one.

Yuko was shocked "You're just a kid!" She exclaimed pointing at him.

"Don't mock me because of my height YOU'RE AS TALL AS ME!" He shouted irritated before disappearing.

"Eh.. Where did he go?" Yuko said looking side to side.

Suddenly he appeared in front of Yuko "Wh... What?" She said nervous before he introducing his hand inside of Yuko stomach.

Drops of blood were falling on the floor.

"Do you really think you can defeat a monster like me?" He whispered on Yuko' s ear.

"YUKOOOOO!" Acchan shouted and tried to punch him but he was faster, he removed his hand and also was able to dodge Acchan.

Acchan grabbed Yuko "It's okay!" She said covering Yuko' s wound with her hand "Why she's not recovering now?" She thought worried.

As Yuko is seeing everything blurry.

"Some middle class creatures can't defeat me!; He said coldly.

"This kid!" Acchan thought looking at his red eyes and cold stare.

"Who did you call middle class?" Someone asked.

The kid looked around "Who said that?" He asked.

"Me?" A voice said before kicking him on his face sending him away.

The boy was starlet "This girl again.." he thought annoyed as he gets up.

"Gekikara!" Acchan said happy seeing her friend.

Gekikara turned her head "Are you 2 okay?" She asked then looked at the boy.

"We'll see each other again!" He said mad with a scratch on his face then left.

Gekikara looked at her friends "Why she haven't woken up?" She asked to Acchan.

"She's not healing!" Acchan. Replied worried.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~>>>>>><<<<<<<~~~~~~~~~~~>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<~~~~~~~~~~~

At Kojiyuu' s home.

"What did you say?" Mayu asked getting up from  the couch as Yuki is only there sitting crossing her legs.

"Mayu Chan don't be mad!" Takamina said smiling nervously.

Kojiharu tapped Mayu's softly "I told you already this are free vacations...for you and Yuki" she said.

"Why do you want send us away?" Mayu asked irritated.

"We just thought you two needed vacations!" Eiji said nervous.

Mayu looked at Yuki "You're not going to say anything?" She asked pouting.

Yuki looked at Mayu After some minutes she got up and snatched the tickets from Takamina's hand.

Takamina and Kojiharu were n nervous, they know how temperamental Yuki can be.

"Europe will be nice!" Yuki finally spoke after seeing it from some seconds.

"What?" Mayu let out unhappy.

Suddenly Acchan, Gekikara enters by the Window, Gekikara was holding Yuko on her arms.

"Yuko!"Kojiharu let out taken aback then fast Gekikara putted her on the couch while Haruna was trying to wake her up.

"What happened?" Yuki asked.

"Someone attacked us.. he was on a different level and Yuki is not healing!; Acchan replied looking down.

"Damn it!" Yuki said mad while Mayu onky looked at Yuko.

Kojiharu stopped what she was doing then got closer to Acchan and slapped her "DON'T MAKE PROMISES YOU CAN'T  MAKE!" She shouted as tears rolled her cheeks.

Everyone was shocked.

"Kojiharu!" Takamina said ready to butt in but Acchan stopped her with her arm "You're right.. I'm sorry!" She said sad looking down.

"Go away..." Kojiharu said still sobbing.

Takamina and Acchan left.

Everyone felt bad about it

~Inside of Mayu's head~

"Tell me Nezumi what's going on?"

"Well they know about us and they are scare of you!"

"I'm talking about Yuko!"

"Mmm well that's complicated..  he absorbed her power so if she doesn't charge, she'll die!"

"Well sleeping might recover her"

"Wrong.. it takes a human life to charge!"

"WHAT?"

"SOMEONE HAS TO DIE!"

TO BE CONTINUED..







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Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.7
« Reply #194 on: July 19, 2014, 05:28:19 AM »
Someone need to die for Yuko... who would be it?

What's happening to them?

Would they be able to defeat the boys that do them in?

What's going to happen to Yuko?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the updates

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Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.7
« Reply #195 on: August 03, 2014, 06:29:09 AM »
now nezumi is appears! yeay
please continue it :) Thanks for your update cmze-san! :bow:
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Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.7
« Reply #196 on: January 04, 2015, 03:49:43 PM »
Oh. My. God!!! Finally Mayu will be cool!!!  :w00t:

but wait Yuki doesn't really love her? what the hell  :?

yeey update soon cmze-san  :twothumbs

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Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.7
« Reply #197 on: January 11, 2015, 03:54:59 AM »
 :cry: :cry: :cry: Author-san plz..update this this really cool and good story  :cry: :cry: :cry:
 :whistle: :whistle: Waiting for the Update... :byebye: :byebye:
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Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.8
« Reply #198 on: January 28, 2015, 04:59:57 AM »
                                   THE EXCHANGE S2
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"Death.... whenever I hear that word my body shivers." Mayu thought sad then looked at Yuki who was watching something through the window pain.

"Should I say it?" Mayu thought "I don't like to deliver bad news... " She whispered.

Suddenly someone knocked their door. Yuki was still absent minded so Mayu opened the door.

There they were Takamina, Acchan, Rena, Akicha.

"We gotta do something!" Acchan said entering to the dept followed by the others.

Rena only looked the heavy vibe between them it's been a few hours since Yuki was attacked.

"Then WHAT WE CAN DO?" Yuki let out rising her tone of voice and looking at everyone. "She haven't say a word in a while and now she's yelling she is disturbed" someone whispered inside of Mayu's head.

Everyone looked surprised and more weight was added to the situation.

Acchan clenched her fist "I have to save her... " She let out then left by jumping from the window.

"What's she's planning? It will be useless!" Rena let out confused.

"Looks like it's going to get interesting!" Again someone whispered inside of Mayu's head.

"Shut up!" Mayu let out then noticed everyone is looking at her.

"Are you okay?" Yuki asked concerned.

"Yep.. " Mayu lied.

Nezumi laughed inside Mayu's head "Do you want me to tell you a little secret?" She asked.

Mayu didn't respond. "I'll take that as a yes." Nezumi said while Mayu pouted "You can help her." She said.

Mayu shocked in a blink of an eye she was talking to her shadow only. "Seriously?" She asked excited.

"Yeah but there's a little prize you have to pay to bring your friend back.. it's really small!" Nezumi said.

Mayu smiled "I'll do anything!" She said.

The shadow laughed.

(Meanwhile)

In the cold night Acchan was wandering the streets trying to figure out the best way to resolve everything.

"I said it'll be okay." She thought feeling bad about it "I COULDN'T  PROTECT HER!" She shouted mad.

Suddenly Acchan looked around "Who's there?" She asked serious.

"Me!" Someone answered coming from the darkness.

"Gakuran!" Acchan said shocked cause she looked different and scary.

"What happened to you?" Acchan asked feeling all the darkness around her.

"NOW!" Gakuran said as soon she said that two fallen angels appeared from each side trying to capture Accchan.

"Bastards!" Acchan murmured in trouble. One was coming to punch her and the other wanted to kick her.

Acchan grabbed both the kick and the fist.

"Sorry I don't have time for playing!" Acchan let out serious making both hit each other.

Suddenly somebody else appeared hitting her on her stomach making her spit blood.
 While Acchan is bending in pain this girl punched her again k. Her head making Acchan face the ground.

"Who...the... hell are you?" Acchan asked having a hard time with her cheek on the floor immobilized.

"There's no need for you to know!" She said laughing.

Acchan looked at her, She had Gakuran same vibe full with darkness. "You'll be useful Atsuko!" She said made Gakura grab her and carry her bridal style Acchan fainted.

As they were walking Gakuran stopped "What about them Kumi?" She asked to her mate.

"They are weak I don't have time for them besides we have orders to get Alexander's daughter... Jurina Chan wait for us!" Kumi said happy as she walks.

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"I can stop it... I can save her!" Mayu said to everyone.

Everyone looked at Mayu.

"What are you taking about?" Yuki asked.

"Trust me!" Mayu said then got out of the dept, Yuki followed her with the others.

After some minutes the end up on Kojiyuu' s dept.

"I'm telling you, I can do this!" Mayu said to Haruna who was all swollen from crying.

Yuki stood quiet looking at Mayu.

Mayu went to Yuko' s room and saw her on bed unconscious.

"Now what should I do Nezumi?" Mayu asked and soon received Instructions from Nezumi.

"Put your hands on her forehead" Nezumi said while everyone looked at the scene trying to understand.

"Leave the rest to me!" Nezumi said.

After a few seconds Mayu started to scream.

"Mayu Chan!" Yuki said trying to stop her but she couldn't touch her.

Mayu kept screaming and blood started coming out from her nose.

"What's going on?" Everyone was panicking mostly Yuki.

After some minutes it stopped Mayu started spitting blood.

"Mayu what was that?" Yuki asked grabbing her.

"Did.... it...work?" Mayu asked in pain and hardly could stand she would collapse if Yuki wasn't there holding her.

Everyone looked at Yuko she started moving then opened her eyes.

Haruna cried even more "Yuko!" She said and hugged her.

Yuki looked in horror at the person she was holding.

Rena, Akicha and Takamina were happy but confused.

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"You said it was a small prize, my body burns~" Mayu said in pain.

Nezumi smirked "It was... You brought someone back from the death" she said.

"What happened to you,? You're not shadow anymore.." Mayu asked weakly.

Nezumi laughed "You didn't really expect me to be a shadow inside your subconscious forever?" She asked.

Mayu fell sleep while Nezumi only looked at her with a smirk on her face.

TO BE CONTINUED.

GEKIKARA VS REALLY EVIL KUMI'... WHO YOU'll THINK WILL WIN?


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Re: THE EXCHANGE: S2!!! CH.8
« Reply #199 on: January 28, 2015, 10:32:31 AM »
 :panic: :panic: wow that's was a good update  :w00t: :w00t:
 :lol: :lol: Thank's for the update  :yossi: :yossi:

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