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WHEN REBEL MEETS NICE
A SNEEK PEEK



OPPOSITES ATTRACTS, A LOT OF PEOPLE SAID IT
LIKE WHITE PEOPLE MARRYING BLACK PEOPLE
WHERE TALKATIVE FALLS IN LOVE WITH A SILENT TYPE
AND A THIN BOY HAVING A CRUSH ON A FAT GIRL


HAVE YOU EXPERIENCE FALLING IN LOVE?
I'M SURE YOU EXPERIENCED IT ALREADY
BUT

WHAT IF SHE/HE IS OPPOSITE TO YOUR IDEAL MAN/WOMAN?
WHAT IF SHE/HE CAN CHANGE YOU FOR BETTER OR FOR WORSE?
WHAT IF EVERYTHING IS RIGHT FOR YOU BUT IT'S WRONG FOR HIM/HER
DO YOU STILL WANT TO CONTINUE YOUR FEELINGS?
OR FORGET IT TO PROTECT YOURSELF FROM HEARTBREAK
and what will happen
WHEN REBEL MEETS NICE
WILL IT BE A HAPPY ENDING OR A WOUNDED FEELINGS




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Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
« Reply #1 on: November 06, 2011, 06:00:58 PM »
By the way this is my first time writing a fan fiction and I hope it will get your interest and attention. Please do comment or give me some advise because it will really help me a lot and I'm still a newbie. ^_^ .



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Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
« Reply #2 on: November 06, 2011, 06:18:20 PM »
Let Acchan be rebel and kai be nice character. Pls post your storyline, cant wait to read it.

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Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
« Reply #3 on: November 06, 2011, 06:32:36 PM »
Sydney: yeah Aachan is rebel here and Kai is the nice one. I'll update soon when my dad is done fixing our Internet coz I saved it in my laptop but I'm using now an iPad. I promise I'll update 2 long chapters :D
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Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
« Reply #4 on: November 06, 2011, 06:48:46 PM »
Yehey! New Fic to read..  XD
and by the way, WeLcome here creamcracker..  :welcome
I did'nt write Fics, I'm just a reader, so I don't have many ideas about making stories..
but I suggest to you to read all the Fics here, specially about your pairings, I know it will heLp..  :)
 Actually I'm Atsumina Fans, I like anything that about them, I like your opening and I think it's new,
well! that's all..  :) GOODLUCK OK!  :jphip: I hope your internet will be fixed fast, heHe! OK Thanks..  :D

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« Reply #5 on: November 06, 2011, 07:31:44 PM »
Blue thanks for your warm welcome.  Yeah I hope too that our internet will be fixed as soon as possible. But while it is under construction bwhahaha I'm doing my fanfic now and I'm on chapter 5 already. :D
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« Reply #6 on: November 06, 2011, 11:43:45 PM »
WHEN REBEL MEETS NICE
CHAPTER 01

(what if you meet someone at the wrong place at a wrong time? What if she is opposite to your dream girl? Do opposites really attracts? What if you meet someone who can change you and lastly what will happen if a rebel meets nice)  :huhuh :? :O :shocked

Kai-kun wake up it's already 7 o'clock in the morning and you still have job. Kai-kun , Kai-kun!

(I'm Takahashi Kai, 21 years old, a simple guy who lives in a simple life. Well others call me mr. Nice guy but I don't know why.Supposed to be I'm a college student now but instead I'm working to save money for the tuition fee. I'm a NGSB or no girlfriend since birth [what a shame  :banghead:]. I'm not picky to girls though but let us say I have an ideal girl, she must be nice,humble,honest,loyal and have similar chracteristics with me)

"I'm coming mom"

Sigh! It is supposed to be weekend but I have to work hard for my future. I was thinking

"I'll be going now mom, Ahh and by the way I'll be going home late alright?"

"Alright, take care of yourself son" mom answered

It was a sunny day and everyone looks so happy. Family goes out, couples have date, and friends hang out and I'm totally jealous, yeah FREAKING JEALOUS! I thought.
I saw an old lady alone crossing the streets ; it was dangerous so I helped her.

"Oh good morning obaachan why are you alone crossing this road?let me help you"

"Thank you you are a nice person." the old lady said.

"Oh don't think about it too much,well I'm used to the word nice because they always call me mr.nice" I replied with a smile

"Hahaha you are a joker too" the old lady laughily said to me

"shit" I whispered as I look my wristwatch.    " I have to go obachan I have a work, be careful and see you around" I said as I tie my shoe lace preparing to run fast. I run as fast as I could so that I will not be late to my work. Luckly I just arrived in time.

"whew! That was close" I said as I breath deeply and wipe my sweat in my forehead.

"oh good morning kai" Sae-kun said with a bright smile

Sae is my best friend since kindergarten, I know a lot about him and he too knows about me a lot.

" oh good morning too Sae,   Ehhhh? You look so happy to day huh?" I said with curiosity

"well somebody accepted my offer, right sayaka? Sae answered happily

"ehhh? What offer? I asked

" don't mind him!" Sayaka answered while her face is blushing.

"oh my! Don't tell me you two are official? I quickly said with a shocking voice

" BINGO!" Sae answered and kiss Sayaka

"hey you two! Don't do that here in the cafe, you are ruining the ambiance of this place" I said jokingly

" my,my! Don't be jealous, you are good looking, mr.niceguy. I'm sure you can find a lot of girls out there" Sae said to me teasingly

"hey, first of all I'm not jealous alright? And I don't like boys, I like girls" I said while laughing.

" oi! What's the meaning of that? Sayaka even though she has an abs and look like a guy, she is still a girl and I love her" Sae said while trying to stop his laughter

" ouch! Hey you two, do you want to be a punching bag huh? Sayaka said with anger.

" alright! Alright! Get back to work guys hurry coz we have a lot of customers today since it is weekend". Manager said, and Kai can you put the garbage outside so that the collector can pick it up.

"alright manager"

I picked up the trash and putted it outside. When I'm about to get inside to the cafe somebody got my attention. I look at my right side and saw this bunch of teenagers,well to be exact, 6 teenager girls roaming around the area and passed by in our cafe and then the garbage bag that I put earlier is now few steps away from its original position. One of those teenagers kicked it.

" umm. Excuse me? Can you put the trash bag that you kicked into its original place? I said politely while faking my facial expression as she might notice that I was irritated.

" what is it? Do you have a problem with it? A girl with long curly brown hair replied. Her other friends just stare me. Their glares gives me goosebumps.

" w w well nothing. Continue walking to your destination"I answered as I don't want to make the issue bigger or I was just too scared.

I sighed and walked towards the garbage bag to to pick it up and put it back to its orignal place but something pops out in my mind, the bar pin that the girl was wearing. It was my first time seeing that bar pin with a word written.

"WNA.   What is that?" I murmured as I looked back to the teenagers.

I saw them walking away,heading to their destination but someone paused and looked back at me and smiles evilly which pissed me off and make my blood boiled. My emotions exploded as I can't hold my anger anymore.

"WTH? what's that supposed to mean? Arggghhh, what's with that group of youngsters roaming around in this place, and that girl that smiles at me? What is wrong with teenagers nowadays? Yes she is beautiful but her attitude doesn't suits with her angelic face,
I need to be calm.......... INHALE ,,, EXHALE! Calm down mr nice guy. I muttered while talking to my ownself.

I get back inside with my eyebrows meeting with each other.

" what happened?you look so scary Mr. Nice guy." Sae teasingly said

"hey what is wrong with teenagers nowadays huh? I don't get them. Doing some stupid things in front of an adult? I said with anger.

"hmmm? Maybe you are just old that is why you can't understand them and come here let me check your temperature" Sayaka responded.

I walk where Sayaka is standing having a thought that she is serious but after she touches my forehead she said.

"what the! You already reach your boiling point, you have to cool down a little bit Kai hahaha" she said while laughing

" nice one! Sae said and give Sayaka a high five.

" I thought you are concern with me Sayaka and I'm so serious here you know? I said annoyed

" alright calm down dude! We are just joking here hahaha and start to work now so you can forget what happened earlier.

I took Sae's advice and start working. Hours were passed until our jobs were done. It was an exhausting day for me and its already 10 o'clock in the evening. As I'm on my way to our house walking, I stop for a bit and look up the sky. It's beautiful. The moon is so bright and also the stars that twinkles in the sky. The wind that is blowing in my ears is so refreshing. What a wonderful world I lived in and......

"ehhhh? What was that? Did I heard something?"My mind stop functioning for a while,when my ears heard something.

"is it a ghost? I'm shaking as I walk closer and closer to the place where I heard some voices until I saw something that makes my eyes wide O.O

"what the hell is this? I thought as I saw the bunch of teenagers that I met earlier fighting with adults.

"what the! They are fighting with some loan sharks but I admit they are skilful in fighting but why? I muttered

I was hiding while watching the fighting scenes until one of them got punched and false down near me. The girl was injured and had blood on her mouth and head. She saw me and smirked like nothing happens.

"wait, I know her. She was the one who smile at me evilly previously, these teenagers are really bad ass" I thought while having a shock-scared face

"hey are you ok? Are you hurt? What are you doing? It is dangerous you know" I whispered at her while she was getting up from that fall. I scratch my head saying to myself, of course she is hurt, it is obvious you idiot"

She smiles again and wipes her bloody mouth but this time she has the terryfying look. It is like that she is hunger for blood. I mean to make the guy pay for what he had done,to punch him with all her strength, but I also saw the loneliness she had.

The girl fought back with her other teammates  and beat the guys until they are unconscious. After that the girls just left and vanished having a light injury.

 That fight was bloody hell. How come they defeated these guys? And what did these guys do to them? And there was a scene that comes to my mind, the girl that I saw smiling at me with a terryfying expression.

"who is she? I was thinking. Then I step forward and walk away to the place before the police will come
however I stepped something. I looked down and saw an I.D. I picked it up and saw the picture and read what is written.

"MAEDA ATSUKO" oh she was that beautiful-evil-hunger-for-blood girl but why did she crush out her school name? And what is with this sticker?.

"WNA,,, EHHH? I said



To be continued......

I hope you like it.:sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop:

What is WNA? Hahahha   :?
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Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
« Reply #7 on: November 07, 2011, 01:23:57 AM »
i like it :heart:
bad ass acchan and mr. nice guy kai/takamino
i can't wait to find out what happens on their next meeting :D
can't wait for the next chapter please continue

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« Reply #8 on: November 07, 2011, 01:55:22 AM »
I'm curious abt WNA ?! Could it be watanabe + atsuko ?! Guessing. Pls update next chapter. It's awesome storyline of your. Thank you.
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« Reply #9 on: November 07, 2011, 02:02:26 AM »
Wow.. nice start.. :w00t:
may be next chapter it will more incredible situation :cow:

good job!!! :wub: Nice chapter!!  :heart:UPDATE SOON......... :inlove:

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« Reply #10 on: November 07, 2011, 02:18:14 AM »
nice fic! hope you add other couples here!! <333 update soon!

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« Reply #11 on: November 07, 2011, 02:40:09 AM »
Wow!!!  :w00t: Nice Plot~!!!
I would love to know what would happen later~  :heart:
Hehe.. Rebelious Acchan and Nice Takamina/Kai  :inlove:
Please update soon~  :mon inluv:

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« Reply #12 on: November 07, 2011, 03:41:47 AM »
WOOTTT!!!!  :w00t:  new fic!!!!  XD

mr nice guy Kai x rebellious Acchan~~~ nice start..  :on GJ:   

update soon... wanna know how they fall for each other...  :mon inluv:

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« Reply #13 on: November 07, 2011, 06:28:10 AM »
Your weLcome.. :)
Umh WOW!  :w00t: You're fast, You wrote 5 chapters now? haHa..  XD
Keep it up Boy/GirL..  :twothumbs and Wow! the story is good, I want more..  :lol:  :bow:
pLease write more next chapter, heHe! It's really interesting.. :) and when I read the 6 teenager girLs,
1st thing tha cames to my mind is the Princesses of Majisuka Gakuen, but No! I'm wrong 'coz Atsuko is with them..  :huhuh
weLL! the WNA, is Like a cLan, I think, heHe! Well! pLease update soon as possibLe, heHe! Thank You..  :thumbsup :D

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« Reply #14 on: November 07, 2011, 07:03:22 AM »
jajaj maeda is like a bad ass... like it!! and kai kun aww sweetest kai kun.. you gonna be in dangerous cause maeda-san is a perv person :D

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« Reply #15 on: November 07, 2011, 08:52:26 AM »
Oh the concept is really interesting.
WNA? Euh... Euh... Hum... Aaaaaaah!!! What could it be?!!!

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« Reply #16 on: November 07, 2011, 03:44:16 PM »
Thank you so much for your very nice comments. I'm happy the you like my very first fanfic. Yeahey :love:

Haruhi16: don't worry, because in the next chapter there would Be new characters/pairings.

Blueangel: I'm a girl.^_^.

Note: WNA meaning will be revealed in the next chapter, and I will update the next chapter later. Hahahaaha. By the way some of their age and surnames are also a fiction here in my story.thanks :D
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« Reply #17 on: November 07, 2011, 04:03:27 PM »
thank you <33 update soon!!

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« Reply #18 on: November 07, 2011, 04:12:47 PM »
I want to know what happen :ding:
thanks for nice fic :hee:

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« Reply #19 on: November 08, 2011, 01:17:44 AM »
CHAPTER 02

I was lying on my bed, reminisce the action that I saw earlier on my way home as I stare the I.D that the gril dropped. Luckily the address is written and she didn't crush it out.

"sigh! There is no choice but to return it tomorrow after my work since I'm dayshift and it will end at 3 o'clock pm and I will take this opportunity to ask about WNA" I said in a low tone as I started feeling sleepy and ended up into the other place called DreamLand.
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(WNA a.k.a Wild Night Atmosphere is an organization consist of 12 rebellious teenager girls. They only attack at night making the atmosphere wild. Everyone left their houses and lived in a one particular place which they called their HOME, the WNA house)

      *WNA house*
"hello? Yes, we already did your request, just check our website for the evidence, and your now safe to roam around in that area peacefully" one of the WNA member answered to the person in other line of the phone.

"what did she say Mariko?a gachapin looking girl asked the girl holding the phone.

"oh miichan you're there.. Uhmm she said thank you and she will send the payment tomorrow morning." the tall girl replied.

"ne, mayuyu, are you done looking for other request on our website? A girl with black aura asked.

"no not yet yukirin, there are lots of request here but mostly they are not worth it." the cyborg girl responded.

A few moments later the door opened and there are 6 girls step inside the room.

"oh welcome back guys" the youngest girl said loudly.

" how was the fight? Hunger for blood again?hehehe by the way Jurina can you get some bandages and medicines so that we can clean their injury" Mariko told the youngest girl

"yes, of course Mariko senpai" the youngest girl responded

" no we are not hunger for blood today, even Rena's other side(gekikara) didn't appear this time but asked this girl beside me who punched her pawn half dead" the long brown curly hairl girl said.

" I agree to tomochin, I don't know what is going on with Aachan, she was really scary, chiyuu" a girl name tomo~mi corresponded.

"I'm telling you now guys that don't mess with Aachan or else you will end up like those bastards that she beaten up earlier,neh Kojima" the cat look alike girl told the group.

The tall air headed girl just nodded.

"here are the bandages and medicines Mariko senpai." Jurina shouted.

" thanks Jurina and please next time don't shout coz we can hear you loud and clear ok?" Mariko replied

" I'll be going to my room now and have some rest, good night guys and don't forget to do your assign work because we have a lot of request right now" the serious looking girl with eyeglasses said as she headed to her room located on the second floor.

" hey Aachan we still have to put some meds and bandage to your injury" miichan exclaimed.

" leave her alone for now, there must be something bothering her" Kojima answered.

"YATA! I found it, I found the right person for the next mission" mayuyu eagerly said to hear teammates.

" hey Yuko can you read it loudly for us coz I'm still applying here some meds with others" Mariko said while seeing Yuko doing nothing.

" alright, alright" Yuko answered while clearing her throat

       To WNA
       
              Hi I'm Kim, a first year high school student . I was wondering if you could help me about my problem. Can you investigate my father because he is kinda suspicious these past few weeks and I feel that he is betraying my mother. In terms of condition and regulation you ask for,I agree to it. I'll send the picture to you with the information attached to the picture and also the agreement form with my signature. I hope you will accept my offer and don't worry about the payment as soon as you finished your job, I'll send it immediately.

" geez I really hate adults like that" yukirin said having the black aura that will definitely give you a goosebumps

" that is why we have a motto right? Rena said while wearing her trademark laugh

" don't trust adults easily coz somehow, someway they will hurt you" mayuyu corresponded

" trust yourself and you will know how to live, but I also trust WNA right? Kojima stated

Everyone nodded as a sign that they agreed to what Kojima said. The night got deeper and deeper and one by one went to their own rooms to have a rest. Every room consist of two people except Aachan's room.

(mayuyu-yukirin , Mariko-miichan, Rena-Jurina, tomo-tomo, Kojima-Yuko)- pairing of each room.

   *THE NEXT DAY* ( I = Kai)

" thanks for the hard work. I'll go now and see you tomorrow" I said as I leave the cafe. I search my phone as I'm going to use the google map to locate the exact location of the owner of this I.D

"wow I have lots of missed call, who would it be?    Oh it's my little sister, it's weird that she called me 5 times already" I murmured while contacting her.

" the number you have dialed is not yet on service, please try again later"

"she is not answering, well maybe that was not important" I said without having a second thought and went to google map instead and search for the address

After 20 mins

"maeda, maeda, maeda" as I was looking for their house. " oh here it is. WOW! Their house is huge" as I said with with an amazed expression.

As the time I'm about to press the doorbell somebody asked me and said.

" Uhmm, who are you? A girl asked with curiosity as she saw me standing in front of their house.

"I'm Kai, Takahashi Kai! I'm about to give this thing to the owner, do you know Maeda Atsuko? Because she dropped her I.D yesterday.

"Takahashi Kai? He's" she whispered

"yes? Is there something wrong? I asked as I heard her saying my name.

" oh, no, nothing. And yeah I know her, she is my older sister and by the way, are you an acquaintance of my sister?

" oh, no, it's jut that" i looked down because I don't know how to tell her that I saw her sister fighting with guys, that she have some injury coz for sure it will make her worry

" it's just that?" she asked me interested of what i'll say

" Uhmm how will I say this, Uhmm" I look at her and guess what I saw, WNA bar pin

"WNA!" geez I shouted it.

"ehhh? WNA?? Ah this bar pin in my upper left? The girl replied

"yes! If you don't mind can I ask what is the meaning of that?" I asked excitedly because I'm really curious about it.

"well, it's just a bar pin or still you are not yet destined to know the meaning of this one but I'm sure someday you will know the meaning of WNA, definitely" she said with a smiling face

"but--- I didn't finished talking as she abruptly get the I.D and said, " my name is Erena and thank you for returning this one".

She get inside into their house. I walk away disappointed.

" sigh! I still don't Know what WNA stands for.  Uhmm, is it WOW NICE ABS? that is why they are embarrassed to say the meaning of WNA especially when I'm the one asking? I know I'm hot but they don't have to be shy." I murmured while talking to myself, puzzled  about the word.

"but what does she meant about 'I'm sure someday you will know the meaning of WNA" I scratched my head thinking for an answer to another question.

To be continued....
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Question : what is bothering with Aachan?
                What do Erena mean about the words she said to Kai?

Hahaha I miss Erena that is why i include her in my story. Hope you like it. And in the next chapter it will be an action.

   :) :) :)
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