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Offline chykla

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OSU! So like, I decided to write an AKB fanfic after seeing the 1mm documentary when they showed the girls walking at AnimeExpo ;-;. And then I saw some videos of them walking in the red carpet on youtube and it literary made me cry LOL. If I was there I would totally scream out Kojiyuu, Atsumina/Takacchan, and Bakamina -SHOT-. Also, I apologize for any mistakes, I’m a big noob (Y). enjoy D8

Btw, Takamina talks a lot to herself in this fic o3o, they’re in italics so yeeep 8D
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Prolouge;

God, if I was a guy, I would make her my wife.

I think.

But look at that beauty. The way she dances across the stage, how she misses simple steps, how she dozes off in the middle of a song. I find that very cute…

Wait, what am I saying?! I’m the captian here! I should be helping her improve instead of staring at her like a creep!  Or rather, I need to scold her for dozing off 100% of the time! But staring at her seems so much fun. Ah, I’m a failure in so many ways, I can’t even decide on what to do. Wait, what do I mean that I can’t decide on what to do?! I decided to go to practice today didn’t I?! Well, you ARE a worthless piece of crap that can’t even decide on something so simple!

Like what?

Like the feeling of love?

No you retard, what you’re going to do with her. I know you want to stare at her all day…

“NO! I DON’T WANT TO BE A STALKER IN FRONT OF--“

“UUAHH!! BAKAMINA!!! “Then, a squirrel like figure then jumped from my loud yell and fell hard into the floor.

“Ah! Yuu-chan! Are you okay?! Does it hurt?” Soon after the young squirrel fell, a cat like figure came to her rescue and helps her get back on her feet.

“I’m alright!” The squirrel smiled and showed the ‘V’ sign “I’m alright because Nyan-Nyan came to help me!” She then hugged her cat like friend tightly.

“Mouu!” She stroked the squirrel’s hair slowly “As long as you’re okay…”

Suddenly, I felt cold chills on my spine.

Apparently she was looking at me…

She was looking at me with the ‘Gosh-Takamina-You’re-Hopeless’ face.

Even though Kafuka Fuura said that nothing in this world is hopeless

I, Takahashi Minami, is very VERy much hopeless. Yup, I’m a failure.
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Gosh Takamina, yer hopless 8l Really though  :err:

Even though “Takahashi Minami is AKB48”, she’s still hopless, oh well o3o. WEE –trollface- :wahaha:

Yep, Bakamina. 8l. I’ll post Chapter one later tonight/morning (didn’t know it’s 4 am  :mon POd:) ANYWAYS, YEAH, ILL POST IT IN A COUPLE HOURS. D8 UNTIL THEN

BYEBIII :mon bye:
« Last Edit: November 19, 2011, 10:26:42 PM by chykla »

Offline Tejinashi

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OMG I want to know what happen next. Please update soon! :kneelbow:
And I still can't seem to like the Bakamina nickname, I only know that she have 1 nickname that is Takamina, the baka one is just some mistake made by the sub team that do the engsub for the documentary, and this issue (I mean the nickname baka one) has made a war in 2 fan forum I know. So please consider it first before use that nickname again :kneelbow:
PS: sorry if I offend you in some way :kneelbow:, it's my fault so please don't stop this fanfic because of something I say :kneelbow: I just love this fic, and I'm sure many other one here do too, so please... :kneelbow:

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nice fic!!! need to read the next chap!!!  :on lol:

About 'Bakamina'.. I don't really mind about it  :bingo: but as a Taka oshi, like Tejinashi said please reconsider using that nickname... :kneelbow:

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Hi chykla. =DDD You should update this soon. xD

@Flean/Tejinashi: They actually did call Takamina 'Bakamina' before. LOL. She didn't mind, that girl. xD
Like I’m the most calm... Like, it must definitely be because, Like when we enter, I’ll be hurrying. But Because Junjun is older, I can calm down? I don’t really know, Like I just absolutely want her there beside me. Whenever we go abroad, if Junjun is absolutely not beside me, I absolutely won’t go. Something like that. -- Tanaka Reina about Junjun.

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but but they are actually the members - her friends, we are nothing to her but just fan, so it's okay to use it in the fic because her friends can call her that, but I still think that it quite rude for us to call her baka, she can be silly sometime but not baka, so please consider it :kneelbow:

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@Flean/Tejinashi: They actually did call Takamina 'Bakamina' before. LOL. She didn't mind, that girl. xD
LOL... I know.. I'm just saying.. XD  She's too nice!!!  :inlove:

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hey I need next chapter! I need my AtsuMina!  :cow:
yea taka is too nice to be angry.
btw an advice, please write "Takamina/Minami instead of B*kamina"  :twothumbs that sounds waaaay better to me or even us?  :theking to me our leader is not Baka, she's even smarter than me and she's leader though :thumbup

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lol Poor Takamidget! hahah please update soon!! :D

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Continued I like hopeless Takamina lol

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yeah we need atsumina and.. kojiyuu please, i wanna know whart acchan thinks...

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Re: [AtsuMina] The Hopeless Story of Takahashi Minami~// Epic Fail! 1.1// 11/19
« Reply #10 on: November 19, 2011, 10:24:09 PM »
Note;; Ah, before we start the war on the Bakamina, I'm only posting that on the prolouge. I mean, if Takamina did that when you're epically practicing, you would say that no e___e?! She did scare my Yuko ;-;!! So, D8 yuh.

@Tejinashi; I do plan on calling Takamina, Takamina or Minami in this fic. i mean, our Acchan wouldn't call her precious Minami 'baka' no xD? Unless she wants to o3o;;...

You didn't offend me dont worry xD! When someone writes a comment like this i put it to mind and improve xD learn from your mistakes no xD? Glad you enjoy it ; w ;

@flean;NEXT CHAPTA COMES NOW 8DDD.

I'm not a Taka oshi but i do respect Takamina very much ;  3  ; after watching the 1mm documentary ;-; she works her best and i respect her for that ;  w  ; she cares for the members too ;  A  ; GOOO TAKAMINA

@arisa03;updating now 8D

Si, it's true that our Takapapa was called Bakamina by Sae, 8l

@moekare;INDEED TAKAMINA IS VERY SMART AND NOT ONLY THAT, VERY THOUGHTFUL ; w  ;.

Yep, she is too nice to be angry xD, she got chairpranked 3 times and she didn't go JFKR+SMFMRMD but she checked the chair carefully xD

@kahem;HOPELESS PAPA FTW

@haruhi16; si, poor takaboy ;-;

@haruko; since I'm a Yuko oshi, and Kojiyuu is my top OTP, there shud be a lot of Kojiyuu here xD and not to forget Atsumina xD

Guiiis, thank you so muuuuch for reading my fic ;-;. and for liking it tooo ; w ; and now i feel bad cause i plan to do something horrible in a couple chapters later ;-;

Also, o___o my uncle said this to me so i thoughti shud share it LOL
"chiiiiiiiika~ you watch hana kimi right?(the remake ;3;) you look like the person who played ashiya, what's her face? Maeda--(friend interupts)"ATSUKOOOOOO-CHUAANN""YEAH HER!!all you needta do is dye yer hair brown"
Oh uncle ;  w  ; but, Y U FORGET ACCHAN'S NAME-SHOT-

I planned to update this fic acouple hours ago but i had churchpractice orz ENJOY;;
ALSO, PLEASE NOTE THAT THERE WILL BE GRAMMAR AND SPELLING MISTAKES, AFTER ALL, IM TYPING ON MY FONE ;___;
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Chapter 1.1; Epic Fail?!

Takaboy, you did it again.

I should really stop talking to myself in front of the members. They might start thinking that I went crazy due to overwork.

"I mean, I don't overwork myself right?!"

"Yes you do papa, yes you do..."

"HOLY SH--!!" I fell backwards from my chair after hearing a familiar voice reply to my thoughts

"A-A-A-A-A-ACCHAN!! DON'T GO AROUND AND R-R-READ PEOPLE'S MINDS!" I demanded as she, Maeda Atsuko, crossed her arms and smile devishly

"Oh daddy, I wasn't reading your mind~ I wa--"

"She was stalking you~ WOOT WOOT!! Way to go Papa getting the good ones!!" a voice interupted our conversation.

I felt my face getting hotter, the next thing I knew, the girl that interupted our conversation, Miichan, said that I was blushing.

"My, my, Takamina! Are you pleased with Acchan stalking you?" a certain squirrel jumped into the conversation as she wraps her hands to her beloved cat.

"I--UH--I MEAN THAT--WELL--ERR--"

I stopped struggling on my words when I saw her carefree smile.

I smiled back and started to laugh, the others too started to join, the we saw two confussed couple walked into the room

"Nee~ Sae, why are they laughing?"

"Maybe they finally realized that they've come crazy~"

"Oi..." I stopped laughing and gave the two couples, Miyazawa Sae and Kashiwagi Yuki, the death stare

Suddenly, everyone started laughing at ME

Takahashi Minami...

Felt defeated by her fellow members twice today.

Indeed, an 'Epic Fail'...

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DONT YOU LIKE CHAPTERS WITH PARTS

THIS CHAPTER WILL BE DIVIDED IN 3 PARTS 8DDD CAUSE IMA TROLL -TROLLFACE-

HEHE

TILL THEN

BYEBI

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nice!!!  :on lol: and LOL at Taka epic's fail~  :wahaha:

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 :tama-laff: So funny Takamina's fail !!!

It's really good please continue  :luvuluvu:

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Hahaha this our suberi queen ^^

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our suberi queen ^^

Our suberi Queen [2]

Takamina has always really great fails
Hahaha so cute...please continue to write ^ ^
So .. where is part 3?? XDD

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 :twothumbs sugoii!! please update soon :)
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jajaj everybody laughts .. poor takamina but i cant help you.. you fail.. again :D

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I wanna know what happen next onegai onegai. ...

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please update ~~

atsumina, kojiyuu and saeyuki! nice pairings XD

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hahaha... Takamina Fail~ Kojiyuu, atsumina and saeyuki... wow!!!! update soon~

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