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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 2 ~ The new classmates
« Reply #20 on: January 18, 2012, 04:28:13 PM »
@Sydney W - Updated! Thanx for your support!
@haruhi16 - Same here. I'm going to enjoy portraying Yuko here as a guy =)
@Megumi - Thank you for your kind words! I hope Riku and Haruna will make life hard for poor Yuu =P
@kahem - Yep! Mayu is alive! Not that she died =P
@virgo_shaka - Your answers will be revealed! hohoho
@oddball - More characters to complicate the mix. Sae will have an enjoyable term

Chapter 3 ~ It’s Persona…

“Oh gosh! It’s Persona… ”

“Kya! It’s KAI! He’s so cute!”

“No! Riku is much better and sophisticated!”

“Stop that! Kuu is the coolest of all!”


The school’s cafeteria echoes the cries of young maidens as the popular trio from the boyband Persona walks in.

The three Ikemen wave around to their fans before proceeding towards the “VIP” area, a corner in the cafeteria that was formerly reserved for the “Flower Four” of Akimoto High School, the four who was said to be the best looking of the entire cohort.

“Ah… Sayama, what brings you here? Don’t you know that this table is now reserved for Persona?” asks Kuu coldly.

“That’s right… F4 is the past… the present and future will be Persona now!” agrees Riku.

“You’re both right… So why don’t you move on to another lesser table that’s more befitting for mortals like you?” asks Kai arrogantly.

The 3 of them stare menacingly at Sayama before bursting out in laughter.

“Ya! Sae-Kun! You should have seen the shock look on your face! Did you think we would be so mean to our former leader?” teases Kuu as he playfully pokes Sayama on the stomach.

“Stop calling me Sae-Kun! You knew I never like that girly nickname given to me by Mariko-Sensei…”

“But Sae-kun is so cute and I might fall in love with you!” laughs Kai as he pats Sayama lovingly on the cheek.

“You know Kai, I’m not sure if you want to say that in front of Atsuko…” replies Sayama, making Kai blush furiously.

“Ehm… Don’t pull her into this. She’s innocent…”

“Innocent? I think she’s guilty of trapping your little heart, caging you in the prison of love…” teases Kuu, making the blushing Kai turn as red as a beetroot.

“Don’t worry shortie, Acchan is now hanging out with my sister. She won’t be able to hear this…” replies Riku, making Kai sigh with relief.

“How’s your first day in class then? Heard that you were made a laughing stock by some new transfer student?” enquires Kuu.

“Don’t remind me of him please…” sighs Sayama as he gives himself a face palm.

“What’s the matter Sae-kun? Finally, has Hokuto Shinken met Nanto Seiken?” asks Riku, the martial arts fanatic.

“I’m not sure about Hokuto Shinken and Nanto Seiken. But I think I’m sure that he has met your sister and it’s happening over there…” replies Sayama as he points towards the direction of a commotion.

The familiar silhouette of his nemesis is now at the table of Riku’s sister, Kojima Haruna and Kai’s crush, Maeda Astuko.

“Why that little runt! I will teaching him a thing or two about harassing my sis!” growls Riku as walks towards them, protective brother mode activated.

“Eh… Ehmmm… I guess I better follow him in case he gets into trouble?” replies Kai hastily, using it as an excuse to get close to his crush.

“Those two never change, don’t they? An over-protective knight brother and a shy beetroot… I think Haruna and Acchan must be frustrated over them. Oh well… By the way Sayama, since they are both gone and you are almost done with lunch, how about joining me to check out the two lovely new ladies over there?”

Sayama sighs upon hearing this. As the hotheaded Riku needs a Kai to rein him in, the flirty womanizer Kuu will need a Sayama to keep him out of trouble…

******

“Mayu-chan, I think Yuu-chan might be facing some problems. I would suggest that you help him out?” requests a seated Yuki while eating her Cha Soba.

“Hai! Oju-sama…” replies Mayu with a polite bow before taking her leave to help out her companion.

Yuki frowns lightly. It’s only the first day and Yuu-chan has managed to get himself into various troubles. Clearly, this little squirrel will deserve some punishment later. But that will come later. Mayu, with her quick wit would be able to keep Yuu out of most trouble, leaving her to be able to enjoy the peaceful meal of Cha Soba.

Unfortunately, peace seems to be sacred today as a shadow lumbers over her. As she looks up, she sees the sight of a playful looking male with sparkling eyes.

“I’m too cool to be cool, coz my name is just Kuu. Minegishi Kuu, at your service..” answers the male as he breaks into a little suave dance.

As Kuu gets ready to do a spin and end off with his killer pose, his leg manages to slip on something, breaking his momentum, causing him to crash like a sack of potatoes.

“Kuu! Are you alright?” replies Sayama as he rushes into the scene.

“Ah Itai! Gosh! Ice? How come someone spill ice in such a place! I must complain! I need to complain! Ice should be banned!”

“Kuu… Stop making such a fuss…” replies Sayama quickly as he places a mouth over the whining Kuu.

“Come! Lets go to the infirmary for a checkout. You don’t want to have any broken bones after a fall right?” advises Sayama as he drags his pal away before he could make a bigger scene.

“Hmm.. B..ut… I…mmmmm…..ohhhhhhh….kayyy…” mumbles Kuu, unable to speak properly with Sayama’s hand over his mouth.

“I’m sorry! Yuki-san. Hope he didn’t disturb you during your lunch…” apologies Sayama sheepishly before disappearing with Kuu.

Yuki smiles slightly at the scene before continuing her lunch. This school is filled with interesting characters. It might be worthwhile to stay here after all.

However, her thoughts are interrupted by another shadow. Her eyes narrows as the shadow looms over her.

“You… Why do I sense Yoki from you…”


Yuki’s eyes widens at such comments before looking up to see a female student with black jet hair and serious looking eyes and a nametag that reveals her name to be Yamamoto Sayaka…

* Footnotes:

Hokuto Shinken is the eternal rival of Nanto Seiken. Both martial arts are the opposites in form and theory.

Yoki - Demon Aura

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 3 ~ It's persona...
« Reply #21 on: January 18, 2012, 05:56:39 PM »
 :lol: seems as though Kuu did not have the best of introductions to Yuki thanks to some ice....... ice, I wonder if Yuki may have had a hand in it suddenly appearing out of the blue......

Sayanee is here!!!!!  :on woohoo: and she senses 'Yoki'  from Yuki, what sort  of character is she?

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 3 ~ It's persona...
« Reply #22 on: January 18, 2012, 06:01:41 PM »
An update!
Guess each of them will be meeting up with their respective partners soon. Mariko + Kuu, Kai + Acchan, etc
I want to know what happened next.

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 3 ~ It's persona...
« Reply #23 on: January 18, 2012, 09:54:23 PM »
SO INTERESTING!!

Saya-nee can read aura?! COOL!

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 3 ~ It's persona...
« Reply #24 on: January 18, 2012, 10:13:11 PM »
I know Mayu is not dead but I thought she wasn't alive... Wow what I'm saying? It's not logical xd
Oh over protective Riku is interesting ^^

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 3 ~ It's persona...
« Reply #25 on: January 25, 2012, 02:18:06 AM »
Hi guys, sorry for the delay! I couldn't get access to the forum =/

@oddball - All will be explained. She will play an important role in this fic.
@Sydney W - Thanx for the support! I might go for a slight twist. The standard pairings might be boring and over-written
@RenaChii - Sayanee can do more than that. There will be more scenes that she will use her powers
@kahem - The mystery about Mayu will be revealed on the next update so that you won't be confused anymore. She wasn't alive but now she is. Soon all will be logical. Hope you enjoy Riku in this chapter.

Chapter 4 ~ Cafeteria Chaos

The great Oshima Yuu was in a fix. He didn’t know that girls like this could exist in this part of the world. Perfect bodies with lovely boobs like chestnut tree with fresh nuts for harvesting.

However, these girls are such hard nuts to crack. In the past, all it takes was a toothy grin and some sweet words and the girl would be his.

But now, this has proven to be a challenge, especially the one called Kojima Haruna. Amongst all the girls, she’s the one with a lithe body with perfect mounds on her chest, reminding him of the sweet savory taste of a fine freshly harvested chestnut.

She might be a tough nut to crack. But Oshima Yuu wasn’t one that will back off from a challenge, especially going through the defense of a tough nut to get access to the soft delicious flesh.

He had decided.

“Kojima Haruna! I shall crack you open like a chestnut…”

******

Haruna could stop rolling her eyes up in dismay. All she wanted was to complete the final stage of Final Fantasy on her PSP but this new transfer student has being nothing but a nuisance. His endless chattering reminds her of a squirrel and his antics to get her attention, irritating

The straw the broke the camel’s back came when he tried to cover her eyes in an attempt to get her attention…

******

“You idiot! Do you know how many days I had spend on the game! How could you do this! I was so close to beating Genesis! And now I can’t get my perfect finish! How can I unlock the secret stage without my perfect finish!” shrieks Haruna at the top of her lungs.

“Finally, you are talking to me…”

“But before she talks to you again, I suggest that you talk to my Bokken…” growls a voice from behind as a wooden katana points dangerously along the neck of Oshima.

Kojima Riku has just joined in the fun…

******

Atsuko, the innocent by-stander to this chaos could only face-palm while Haruna rolls her eyes up. Her brother has always being this protective of her. Going to her rescue at any moment of distress or when any guy tries to hit on her. She has given up on having a relationship to focus on video games instead. At least she doesn’t need to apologize to the other party and their parents for having their precious son traumatized by the Bokken wielding Akuma brother of hers.

However, no matter how much she wants her brother to cut this irritating brat down to size, being the dutiful sister she is, there’s too much for his brother to risk right now.

His new career as a rising pop star in Persona…

His upcoming Kendo finals…

All would be ruined if he strikes the new transfer student.

Haruna could only look with pleading eyes towards her best friend Atsuko to ask for help. But what could Acchan do towards two alpha males eyeing each other like lions except to pray?

And God must be kind to her today by answering her prayers with a certain Kai-kun…

******

Kai tries his best to catch up with Riku but being the midget of the group does have its disadvantages. It wasn’t fair to expect someone with a height of 148cm to have legs as long and powerful as the 164cm tall Captain of the Kendo club.

However, whatever advantage Riku has in height, Kai replaces it with determination and lungs of steel. Being the best singer in Persona meant he has the best lung power, which he uses to his advantage now to work his body to a steady pace.

His determination meant he has a mind that focuses on the task on hand, which also meant he has a one-tracked mind like a train on a journey; there’s no giving up till the destination is reached. But that also meant he is oblivious to the things around him, like a nice piece of slippery ice cube ready to make him tumble and fall…

******

“You bastard! You will pay for harassing my sister!” threatens Riku as he drops to a partial crouch, both knees bent. With his right arm drawing back and his left arm extended, he graps his bokken by the kashira (End of the Handle) while resting the tip on his left thumb. His body tenses up as he circles Oshima in quick sidesteps to look for an opening.

******

Oshima arches his eyebrow upon looking at such a style. Most would had rush in madly and gotten a quick KO without knowing what happened. The person in front of him might be a master. He could feel his blood boiling. Apart from nuts and woman, his greatest hobby was fighting. This could be fun…

******
 
Both Riku and Yuu narrow their eyes as their body tenses up in anticipation. Riku starts first by doing a quick step forward, cutting the distance between the two. The step also fulfills the role of the anchor and builds up for the next move as the momentum allows him to use his body as spring to project the bokken forward in a fast but deadly strike.

Yuu does the same by doing a quick step forward. To win against a stabbing katana is easy if you could close the distance between you and the opponent. A katana is a long bladed weapon that will require working space. By not allowing the owner to have such space will reduce its attack power and reaction time.

This move, although easy, is not for the faint-hearted as you will need to step forward and dodge the stab from the attacking katana to close the distance. But courage is Yuu and Yuu is courage, fear was never in his dictionary.

Riku’s eyes widens at such a gung-ho move and Yuu’s eyes glows in anticipation for his counter. However, his counter will have to wait as a clumsy Kai rolls in like a bowling ball to hit the two in a killer strike of his own.

Kai – 1
Riku – 0
Yuu – 0
Random Ice cubes – 2

******

“Ah! Itai! The cafeteria is sure slippery during lunchtime right Riku?” asks Kai sheepishly as he struggles to break free from the tangled mess of between Riku, Yuu and himself.

“Takahashi Kai! You Dork! You are the most unidol idol I had ever known! Now get off me!”

“Somebody’s hot tempered isn’t he? Did your best friend tried to pick up your sister too?” gloats Yuu sarcastically.

“Why you perverted Yankee!”

“Struck-up Sister complex runt!”

“Ugly barbarian!”

“Crazy Samurai!”

The argument between the two continues until a new voice interrupts their conversation.

“Oshima Yuu… Remember the words of Oju-sama?”
******

The commotion died down upon the entrance of Watanabe Mayu, one of the new transfer students. Grasping Oshima by the neck in a choke hold, she made him bow in apology at the group before dragging him by the collar away.

The defiant Oshima was still making Akanbes (pulling down one lower eyelid to show the red inside, while sticking out the tongue) at Riku while being dragged off.

For Riku, his focus was no longer on the rude, sister stealing Oshima Yuu. His eyes were now set on the perfect little girl known as Watanabe Mayu…

******

Kashiwagi Yuki’s eyes widens to the point of testing the limits of human capability at the words of the serious looking girl named Yamamoto Sayaka.

“Lost for words? Bakamono…” growls Sayaka softly, as she narrows her eyes in contempt.

Yuki looks around for help before face palming herself internally.  She was the one that sent Mayu out to keep Yuu out of trouble and now who will keep her out of trouble.

A series of Ehms and Ahs creep out of her mouth to drag time as she tries to formulate a good answer.

“Kami-Sama, why didn’t you tell me about this?” she whines internally before sighing in resignation. If this Yamamoto wants a fight, she shall give it to her.

However, Kami-sama works in wonderful ways and today, he had decided to send help in the form of another Sayaka, Akimoto Sayaka…

******

“Ah Sayanee! I see that you are getting yourself acquainted with our new transfer student?” asks Sayaka as she gives the other Sayaka a friendly pat.

“Ah Yuki-San, I’m sure Sayanee didn’t mention that her father works as the head priest for the local temple?” asks Sayaka.

‘The daughter of a head priest, that explains her spiritual sense…’ thoughts Yuki as she shakes her head in response to the words of Akimoto Sayaka.

“In fact, do forgive her if she talks too much of the supernatural stuff! She’s over-eager on such things but most of the time, she joins me to create chaos on the football field as the twin towers. Our goalkeeper had graduated. Therefore, we are looking for one now, would you like to join us?” pleads Sayaka.

“But I…. I know nothing about football…”

“Don’t worry! The goalkeeper is the easiest job! You just stand there and stop the balls from hitting our goalpost. But most of the time, Sayanee and myself will have so much procession of the ball that you won’t need to do anything at all, right Sayanee?”

Yamamoto Sayaka could only manage a soft “hai” as an answer. Her mind still confused with the entrance of the other Sayaka. A Bakamono in her football team?! This is madness!

She reached out again with her senses to re-confirm the demon aura she had detected from this new transfer student, only to detect nothing from her, not even a trace of human aura.

Sayanee was clearly confused now as she wrinkled her nose, her mind in deep thoughts.

“You see, Sayanee is always in deep thoughts when it comes to our team! Our training starts this coming Wednesday! You will join us right? Lets go Sayanee, we shouldn’t hold Yuki-san up anymore. Lets start our planning for club activities!” ends Sayaka as she drags Sayanee off the table, leaving Kashiwagi Yuki alone at her table again…
 

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 4 ~ Cafeteria Maddness
« Reply #26 on: January 25, 2012, 06:36:26 AM »
I love how little effort Mayu took to subdue Yuu. She looks like the perfect but deadly little girl whom people should be wary of. And Riku seems to have taken an interest in her. Unexpected but I like! XD

I agree with what you said about having standard pairings. It'll be refreshing and awesome to have a twist! ;)

Last but not least, thank you for giving Sayanee a significant role in this story! Keep up the nice work!

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 4 ~ Cafeteria Maddness
« Reply #27 on: January 25, 2012, 06:37:05 AM »
I wanna see a little atsumina :D

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 4 ~ Cafeteria Maddness
« Reply #28 on: January 25, 2012, 12:37:08 PM »
Wahh Mayuyu sure is scary like she's not fully part of this World, hmm, I wonder what Sayanee would sense in her! (btw cool Sayanee has a real role in this!)

I wonder what it was that 'Oju-Sama' said to Yuu, despite Mayu's scary powers it seems that as much as anything stopped her.....

Hmm, and quite what is Yuki, sometimes she seems composed but then she is easily ratlled by Sayanee, interesting...

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 4 ~ Cafeteria Maddness
« Reply #29 on: January 25, 2012, 06:55:10 PM »
Should have found this fic earlier its so goood !! XD
Perverted yuko / yuu as usaul ~ :P
Ohh sayanee  is in this .. Least she got a proper role  :thumbup
Why not add milky too   .. :lol:

Update soon !! Need to read more  :drool:

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 4 ~ Cafeteria Maddness
« Reply #30 on: January 25, 2012, 09:34:17 PM »
She said Yuki bakemono too...

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 4 ~ Cafeteria Maddness
« Reply #31 on: January 25, 2012, 11:20:30 PM »
"Kojima Haruna! I shall crack you open like a chestnut…"

I'm the one who think... Oh god I have to stop this mind of mine *fp*

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 4 ~ Cafeteria Maddness
« Reply #32 on: January 28, 2012, 04:56:02 PM »
Sorry guys for being a slowpoke. Work is overwhelming. Just back from AKB 6th Stage in Singapore.

Really impressed by the following girls:

Ume-Chan's dancing really own the stage

Yuka's stage presence. Alway smiling and 110%!

Micha's grace and beauty. She's really charming!

Moochhii's perseverance. Initially she wasn't that confidence on stage but I'm glad she recovered mid show and became a shining sun.

Nattsumi's charm. Although not that prominent on stage, she's really pro and charming. I really hope she can get more support. Kinda felt bad for neglecting her during handshake as I wanted to pass Yuka-san a personal gift.

If she's back in Singapore for another show, I shall give Nattsumi a gift too. 

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« Reply #33 on: January 28, 2012, 06:57:08 PM »
Sorry guys for being a slowpoke. Work is overwhelming. Just back from AKB 6th Stage in Singapore.

Didn't know you are from Singapore too! Then again, I should've guessed from your username :sweatdrop:
I didn't go for the 6th Stage but I agree with what you said about Umechan. She always captures my attention when she's on stage. Great dancing skills and very very pretty! Anyway, I saw on the AKB48 SG website that SDN48 will be coming on 17 Feb for another stage! It will probably be the last chance to watch them live so I'm really excited. I went for their 2nd Stage and was simply blown away by their charm and professionalism. Although I love AKB48, I must admit SDN48 are more fun to watch as they appear more confident and less rehearsed because of their age and experience. Their MCs are really entertaining. However, I haven't had the chance to watch AKB48 media senbatsu members perform live so my impression isn't that all that accurate.

Pardon me for rambling on. Just got excited to know there's a fellow Singaporean fan on the fan fiction board :grin:
Anyway, take your time to update your story (though I'm itching to find out what will happen next). I understand how work can really consume one's life :(

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 4 ~ Cafeteria Maddness
« Reply #34 on: January 29, 2012, 06:28:42 PM »
@seigus Thanx! I guess I will see you at SDN48 show in Feb? hahahah.
@Haruko Kai and Acchan will happen. But it will be slow. Things will go wrong and will happen but they will happen somehow, somewhere =P
@oddball I will have an interview with the Yuki gang soon so that things will be much clearer. Just wait for the interview special =)
@Popsicle DONE! Now lets see what she...he can do in this mess =P
@RenaChii OPS! I mean BAKEMONO... not BAKAMONO! It's a VERY BAD TYPO!
@kahem I can't help you if you think like Yuuko =x

Chapter 5

Ding Dong Ding Dong...

The chime of the school bell signifies the end of school day. The gates of the school slowly open to the delight of the students, to release them back to freedom.

But freedom is only for those that deserve it. A loud smack on the table brings fear to all that has to stay back for detention for the first day of school as Mariko-sama continues her daily routine of the residential prison warden for the “privileged”

“Ah… We have celebrities in the house. Kojima Riku and Takahashi Kai from Persona. I humbly welcome the both of you to Hotel California, you can check out anytime you like, but you can never leave…”

Kai sighs as he stares at his best friend. It’s his entire fault for starting the commotion at the cafeteria. Being celebrities doesn’t mean you are above the law. This is the iron rule that Principal Akimoto had set down for all students. And now that they will be late for recording, Kai shivers involuntarily from the fear of facing their dreadful akuma manager, Kamonohatsu Saeko.

From the frying pan to the fire, both will give you fiery death. But at least in school, there’s the kind and gentle Akimoto Kouchou (Principal) to restrict Mariko-Sama. In the entertainment industry, who would dare to defy Saeko-sama?

Kai grimaces as the longest hour in his life continues under the watch of the banshee of Akimoto High School, Mariko-Sama.

KOJIMA RIKU! DAMN YOU!

******

“Honmaya… You do have an injury…” exclaims Yokoyama Yui as she inspects Minegishi Kuu in the nursing station.

“That’s what I had being telling you for the past hour…” sighs Sayama as he watches the nursing teacher bandaged up the injured Kuu.

“Yokohama Sensei, are you sure I need all this bandages? I have a recording later after school…”

“Recording after school? You must be lying. You are just a high school student. You can’t be a pop star…”

“But he is! Sensei, Minegishi is Kuu from Persona…”

“Ah! Honmaya… Why didn’t you say so in the first place? But don’t you worry; Mariko-sensei just mailed me to seek suggestions on how to torture Kai and Riku during detention. So all of you will be late…”

 ‘Late…’ gulps Kuu upon hearing that. Being late was a big NO in the Entertainment World, especially if you are just a rising starlet. His manager, the notorious Saeko, won’t like that at all. The bandages seems to be much welcome now if he could use them to get some sympathy…

******

“Ojuu-sama, I’m sincerely hope that you had an enjoyable first day at school. Do pardon us for any mistake on our part…”


“Kachou-san, I’m glad that you had agreed to take us in at such short notice. I’m also pleased that you had excuses my retainers from the cruel fate of detention…”

“But Ojuu-sama! I wasn’t at fault..mmpphhh… mphhh” complains Oshima before a quick-witted Wanatabe cups his mouth with her hand to prevent the loud-mouth yankee from worsening the situation.

“Ah… to be young again. Your retainers are so full of energy…” chuckles Akimoto.

“Please, Kachou-san, from now on, please treat us like your normal students. I had chosen here because I know that you are impartial and fair. Isn’t the school motto’sいつも感謝。冷静に丁寧に正確に。みんなの夢が叶いますように? (Be always grateful. Calm, Careful and Exact. Everybody’s dream to come true) All of us have dreams and we are grateful that you have given us this chance. We shall be calm, careful and exact to live up to your expectations!”

“But Ojuu-sama, how could I…”

“Now now, I know that it’s possible. Didn’t you just send 2 celebrities from Persona to detention? We will live up to your expectations as normal students from now on. Please do excuse us as we take our leave…” replies Kashiwagi Yuki calmly as she bowed formally towards the principal before exiting the office with her retainers…

******

“Miyazawa Sayama! You are late again!” screams the voice of the twin Sayakas of the football club.

“I’m sorry! I had to persuade Yokoyama Sensei to release Kuu from the infirmary. I’m sure you know how hard it is to do that…” apologies Sayama as he rushes into the club room of the football club.

The two Sayakas nod in unison. Both of them had being into the infirmary due to the various injuries on the pitch. They both understand how hard it is to convince the distrusting sensei.
“Well, you could had abandon Kuu! He’s nothing but trouble! By the way, important updates! We found a new goalkeeper!” announce Akimoto Sayaka with gusto.

“ NO! I object! That new transfer student is not proven yet and I don’t trust her…”

“Ah… Sayanee, be nice! Remember the first time we met. You didn’t trust me too and we are now best buddies on the pitch and off! You should give Kashiwagi-san a chance! What do you say Manager-Sayama?”

Sayama freezes at the magical word of Kashiwagi.

“Kashiwagi..?”

“Yes! Kashiwagi Yuki! The new transfer student. Are you deaf? Or are you getting old? Or you need to visit Yokoyama sensei?”

“No…Thank you… I’m just tired after taking care of Kuu…”

“Sae-Kun! Please reject this ridiculous idea of Sayaka! She’s not going to be in our team right?”

“Ehmm… I think it might be a good idea… We do need a new goalkeeper right?”

“Nani! Sae-Kun! You better go back to Yokoyama Sensei! I seriously doubt that you are capable to be our manager anymore…”

“Good choice Manager-Kun! According to the club’s constitution, during the selection of members, the manager gets the final say. So we are now completed! I can see it now! The High School Cup Finals! Here we go!”

“Fine! If you both want it that way… Just don’t regret it! Remember! I warned you about her first…” puffs Sayanee as she slams her palm down on her desk before walking out in angry strides.

“Eh!? Sayanee? Sayanee! Wait up! Sayama! What are you doing there daydreaming? Lets chase her back!” yells Sayaka as she chases after her fellow twin tower.

Sayama could only give a huh…

His mind is clearly no longer focusing on the two Sayakas.

******

“Riku… Riku… Hello! Riku! Anybody home? Snap out of it! We are gonna be late! Shachou will have our hides!” cries Kai as he drags his fellow band member out of detention.

“And where’s that Kuu! Don’t he know what time it is… This is it! It’s really from the frying pan to the hot fiery hell fire…” shudders Kai as he thinks of the unpleasant things that will happen when Saeko Shachou discovers that they are late for their new single recording.

“I’m here Kai… I don’t think I can make it for recording today. Yokoyama Sensei has given me medical leave…” replies Kuu from behind them.

“Huh! Wah! Kyaa! Kuu! What on earth happened?” asks Kai as he rolls up his eyes in disbelief at the sigh of a mummified Kuu.

“Humpty Dumpty had a great fall?” was the sheepish answer Kuu gave.

“Great! We are so gonna die! Riku! Snap out of it! We have no time to waste! We need to rush to the studio!” yells Kai as he drags both members out of school.

“But I’m on Medical Leave! It’s against human rights to work when you’re sick…” screams Kuu in resistance as he looks at Riku with pleading eyes.

But Riku wasn’t focusing on anything now expect for the lyrics of a new original song that starts with:

3秒見つめるだけで
落としてみせようか
お前の愛なんて
俺の思い通りさ

I look at you for just 3 seconds,
And I seem to fall for you
You’re love
Is my pleasure…

******

“Ojuu-sama… Aren’t we going home? Why are we going towards the opposite direction?” asks Oshima as the trio takes a right turn at the cross junction instead of left.

“Quiet Oshima… Ojuu-sama has new plans…” whispers Watanabe Mayu as she puts a finger to the lips, hoping that Oshima gets the hint. Ojuu-sama seems to be in deep thoughts and as her retainers; it isn’t their place to question her.

The trio slowly proceeds up the street only to stop in front of a big shrine.

 “Nani… Ojuu-sama?” ask both Oshima and Watanabe in shock.

“Don’t worry Yuu-chan. I’m visiting a friend…” replies Yuki as she closes her eyes in concentration.

A ray of light beams from the temple and slowly materializes into a pulsing form of golden energy.
“Yuki-hime… it’s being years since we met…” greets the entity.

“Ryujin-sama… it’s being years …” nods Yuki in acknowledgement.

“And now you have grown. You have retainers too. My gosh! A flying squirrel and a doll?  Why are you associating yourself with Bakemono like them?” asks the golden entity, inciting anger to both retainers. But as much as they would like to retaliate, they do understand that this entity was out of their league.

“I don’t think you are right to criticize them. Oshima might be a squirrel but he has courage. Watanabe might be a doll but she has dedication. All are virtues that might not be found in the human world. Didn’t we all started as Bakemono before following the way of cultivation towards our current status?”

“You’re right. The way of cultivation is the only way for us to become saints to serve Kami-sama. Is that why you are walking the earth now?”

“Ehmm. Kannon-sama had advised me to do that. To learn the ways of the human so that I could progress further in my cultivation.”

The golden entity seems to nod in agreement. “If Kannon-sama has advised you so, then it shall be good to follow her orders. Now Yuki-hime, why are you really here? I’m sure you are not visiting me just for old times sake?”

Embarrass by his words, Yuki blushes slightly as she looks down to the ground.

“I understand that Ryujin-sama is now the Guardian deity of this town. The high priest’s daughter is most perceptive and had confronted me. I asking you for advise on how to deal with her…”

The entity seems to laugh at the request. “Kanon-sama was right to send you for training. You might be strong in your cultivation but your understanding of the human ways is limited. I understand your problem and I have a solution for you. I would like you to meet my son, Ryuki. He will be your retainer too. Please guide him well. Now farewell Yuki-hime! I leave Ryuki in your care now…”

The golden entity shines brightly before dissipating, leaving behind a bewildered teenage boy of similar age to them.

“But Otu-san! I don’t want to be her retainer…” whines the boy before realizing he’s in the presence of new company.

“Now now… what do we have here?” asks Oshima as he sizes the newcomer.

“Ah I know! Since you have equally fair skin and height like Mayu, you should take her surname as well! Watanabe means crossing of boundary. Like her, you had crossed over to this world as well, it shall be a fitting name for you!” exclaims Oshima.

Still confused by his current situation, the new Watanabe Ryuki could only nod blurry while Mayu gives herself a facepalm at the new addition.

“Ah Mayu, don’t you like this newcomer! Since you both have the same surname, you can be his Onee-chan! Isn’t that great?” announces Oshima.

‘This will be great! By giving Mayu these new responsibilities, she won’t be able to control me anymore hohoho…’ thoughts Oshima Yuu deviously.

Mayu wrinkles her face upon hearing that. Her primary duty is to obey Ojuu-sam, this new boy will be a burden. She looks at Yuki hoping for salvation from this mess only to see her knob her head in agreement.

“Ah…Ryuki-chan. Welcome to the family. Mayu-chan might be stern and cold, but she shall be a good Onee-chan to you right?” affirms Yuki as she looks at Mayu sternly, making her sigh in helplessness.

“That’s it! Ryuki is now part of us… Ryuki… Ryuki… That’s hard to pronounce…Ryu..ki…Riiii….Yu…Ki… hmmz since you are white and soft like a cheese, how about we call you chizu? But it doesn’t flow…Ah I know!  How about we call you MILKY!” exclaims Oshima as he skips around the new recruit in glee.

“But I don’t wanna be called MILKY…” exclaims Ryuki…

Watanabe Ryuki, aka Milky has joined the party.




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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 4 ~ Cafeteria Maddness
« Reply #35 on: January 29, 2012, 07:10:33 PM »
OMG MILKYYY !! :inlove:
This fic is amazing~
Thanks prataz you da best!  :twothumbs

Be expecting me to read every chapter then ~  :lol:
Update soon .. :w00t:

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 4 ~ Cafeteria Maddness
« Reply #36 on: January 29, 2012, 07:15:12 PM »
The Persona going to face the wrath for being late from Saeko Shachou. ^^

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 4 ~ Cafeteria Maddness
« Reply #37 on: January 29, 2012, 07:19:53 PM »
Me, thinking like Yuko? Never :hee:
Poor persona lol

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 4 ~ Cafeteria Maddness
« Reply #38 on: January 29, 2012, 07:38:50 PM »
It's so awesome that you are including the NMB48 girls in this story. At first I was thinking "Who the heck is this Ryuki?" then I saw MILKY!!! She's my NMB oshi :wub:

Can't wait to see how Mayu "takes care" of her new little brother XD And woo hoo, Riku is so in love!

I really like how this story is turning out. Keep up the good work! :thumbsup

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 5 ~ Updated
« Reply #39 on: January 30, 2012, 12:57:17 PM »
Hmm so the plan for getting Sayanee off Yuki's back is Milky?!?!?!?............... Yeah that might work!  :lol:

Oh dear, seems as though Yuu is trying to get some breathing space for herself by getting Mayu to look after Milky (Poor Milky on that front it think!) I think though that maybe Mayu knows the score and will be around Yuu when she needs to be, even if she dosn't want much to do with Milky at the moment!

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