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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 5 ~ Updated
« Reply #40 on: January 30, 2012, 05:36:06 PM »
OMG Milky had appear!!!
Mayu get a little brother

and Yui.. honmayan character :rofl: :rofl:

Really love your story

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 5 ~ Updated
« Reply #41 on: January 31, 2012, 07:02:28 AM »
wow wow wow sayamilky? saeyuki? like it :D

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 5 ~ Updated
« Reply #42 on: January 31, 2012, 08:45:44 AM »
Milky is here as a boy?!

Please update soon~!

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 5 ~ Updated
« Reply #43 on: January 31, 2012, 07:08:13 PM »
Hi guys, a short radio special. Hope it helps to answer some questions!

Radio Special 1:

Aki: Ladies and Gentlemen! Welcome to AKB Radio! Tonight, you are privileged to have Kuramochi Asuka from French Kiss as your host!

Mochi: And you have the beautiful Aki-cha from French Kiss too as your co-host!

Aki: Too bad Yukirin is busy with Winter Sonata; else we will be a complete French Kiss! Now everybody, do you like our new single, Saisho no mail?

Mochi: AKI-CHA! We shouldn’t be promoting our single today. Remember we have a guest today? Mr Ryujin-san, welcome to our show, would you like to greet our guest?

Ryujin: Hi everybody, I’m Ryujin. I play the role of Ryujin in Winter Sonata. And yes, I’m the real thing. I’m the king of dragons of the Eastern Sea, and one of the dragon gods.

Aki: Ah Mr Ryujin-san, you are really into your role! Thank you for your amazing greeting! You must be delighted that 2012 is your year?

Ryujin: Ah… Yes. It does feel good to be in demand again.

Mochi: So Ryujin-san, how does it feel to work with our Yuki-rin? Has she bedazzled you with her charm yet?

Ryujin: Ah Yuki-hime? How I wish I could but there’s… ehem… the wife? Maybe my good for nothing son might be interested in her but I guess when you are of a certain age, it makes you immuned…

Aki: REALLY! That’s amazing! Finally someone is immuned to Yuki-rin! How about the rest of us in French Kiss? Do you think we can charm you?

Mochi: AKI! He’s married… But how about your son? Do you think he will fall for Yuki-rin? Or perhaps any one of us?

Ryujin: My son… It would be my honor to have any of you as my daughter in law but that good for nothing only likes girls from Osaka…

Aki+Mochi: OSAKA! NMB48????!!!

Ryujin: Don’t ask me. I’m only the father. I can’t control his taste in girls, right?

Mochi: Sigh… That’s true… Oh we have a call-in right now! Hi! Would you like to introduce yourself?

Caller A (In a Darth Vader Voice): Ah… My name is Hentai Risu! I would like to ask why did you send your son instead when Ojuu-sama asked you for help. What makes you think that white milky of yours can stand up against that fierce looking Sayaka-woman?

Aki: Ah… somebody has being following the show! So Ryujin-san, would you like to take this question?

Ryujin: Sure… you know, for a Bakemono, you are a Bakamono, isn’t it Oshima Yuu…

Yuu: *GASP* How did you know it’s me? I tried one of those Star Wars Voice changers to change my voice…

Ryujin:  Not many people are famous for being a Hentai Risu (Perverted Squirrel) and only someone as stupid as you won’t guess the reason why. Your Ojuu-sama and fellow Bakemono Mayu does understand the reason.

Mochi: But Ryujin-san, I don’t understand too. I’m sure many readers won’t understand the reason too…

Ryujin: Alright… for the sake of the readers and fans, I shall explain it just once… Apart from the Dragon God, I’m also the main god of the town’s shine. This means the head priest serves me as I grant blessings to the believers.

For a priest to use white magic, he has to invoke the name of the temple’s main god, which is myself.
The same goes for Sayanee, if she uses any magic, she calls upon my blessings for the spell.

But most of the time, as one of the main gods, I’m overwhelmed by the running of the rain cycle in the region, so Ryuki does most of the magic part…

Yuu: Ohh… so that means if Ryuki doesn’t allow her, she’s powerless?

Ryujin: BINGO. You can say that her power depends on the whims of Ryuki now…

Mochi: AH! That’s so smart! I’m sure Milky-chan can manage this quite well!

Ryujin: Sigh… that’s the hard part… which is why Ryuki is under-going training with Yuki-hime.

Aki: Don’t you worry! Yuki-rin is a capable leader. I’m sure Milky-chan will learn well under her!

Yuu: Don’t you worry Ryujin-sama! I, Oshima Yuu, shall do my best to guide him too! Oh crap! I got to go… Mayuyu is on the loose again!

<The calls end abruptly…>

Mochi: And there goes our first caller. Ryujin-san, this sure is interesting to do Winter Sonata. What do you think will happen next?

Ryujin: You know as a god, I’m not suppose to reveal any heavenly secrets…

Aki: Ah Ryujin-san, you are such a pro! But I’m sure the listeners would like to know more so that there’s better viewership?

Ryujin: Oh well… This is just for better viewership. I think there will be love triangles happening but I’m not going to reveal who…

Mochi: Love triangles! That’s so cruel! Why can’t love be simple and straightforward?

Aki: Asuka… The viewers want chaos, love triangles and tragedy! Look at all the Korean shows! They are such hits due to that. Guy A likes Girl A, Girl A likes Guy B. Love Triangle occurs. Finally Guy A gets Girl A, only to have one of them have cancer and the other killed in accident. Guy B is the lone survivor but choose to be alone due to love.

Mochi: …. Why do you have to be so negative… Didn’t you played the role as a positive girl recently?

Aki: But that’s the truth isn’t it? I would like to argue with you but our time is up! Mr Ryujin-san, thank you for your time!

Ryujin: Thank you for your time too! It’s my pleasure to be on this show.

Mochi: And now we shall say goodbye to our listeners with French Kiss’s Temo Demo Nami Da!

Aki: Please enjoy!

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 5.1 Radio Special 1
« Reply #44 on: January 31, 2012, 07:59:10 PM »
Now i understand bit more .. :fap
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You know as a god, I’m not suppose to reveal any heavenly secrets…

Lmfao so true so true !!

Triangles I :heart: it woop !~  :twothumbs
Can't wait for the next part now~  XD

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 5.1 Radio Special 1
« Reply #45 on: January 31, 2012, 08:25:23 PM »
Whoa~ what a unique way to answer some of our curiosities.. this is fresh! :D
Radio Special 1? So we can expect for Radio SP 2, 3, ..., n later? :?
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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 5.1 Radio Special 1
« Reply #46 on: January 31, 2012, 08:53:59 PM »
I like the radio concept  :twothumbs :twothumbs

Love Triangle who? who? :panic:
Need to know soon..
can't wait for next part
Hope you can update soon :bow:

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 5.1 Radio Special 1
« Reply #47 on: February 01, 2012, 07:28:16 AM »
Thanks for reading and commenting on my fic  :)

Just started reading here but decided I'll leave something first before I forget.

I'll come back and modify this when I finish reading  :twothumbs


Finally finish reading and up to date and remembered to come back to edit my comment  :twothumbs

Wow this is interesting, so Yuki is the mysterious Yuki-onna that saved Sayama, and Mayu is now able to walk and talk.. but they don't
remember little Sayama! LOL at Yuu-chan, not matter where she/he is it will always be entertaining (the super flying squirrel). I got weird
looks from bro when I laughed seeing how Yuu came up with Milky!

So twin tower is WSayaka in here, and we have Milky and Mayu related, a PERSONA! and a trolling homeroom teacher  :lol:

THe star of these few chapters I must say is the random ice cubes  :thumbsup Thanks for the random Radio special.

PLease continue! update sooon!
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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 5.1 Radio Special 1
« Reply #48 on: February 01, 2012, 11:46:25 AM »
LOL radio interview with a God, what a scoop!  :P

Hmm, so Milky is the one who controls the 'powers' that Sayanee has,  :lol: nice, wonder how that will play out not she is under the protectoion of Yuki?

Love traingle?!?  :w00t: At the moment I want a Sayanee, Milky, Yuki one, I just like the idea of Sayanee not having her powers anymore and falling for Yuki, or Milky changing from his er 'norm' and liking girls from kagoshima as well as Osaka!

mmmm Milky and Yuki, mmmm Yuki and Sayanee, mmmm Sayanee and Milky, mmmm Yuki, Milky and Sayanee  :on bleed:

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 5.1 Radio Special 1
« Reply #49 on: February 01, 2012, 05:41:12 PM »
Hahahah that was funny ^^

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 5.1 Radio Special 1
« Reply #50 on: February 02, 2012, 12:56:25 AM »
The Radio show was hilarious!
And it makes us understand Milkys role...

Thank you for your update!
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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 5.1 Radio Special 1
« Reply #51 on: February 03, 2012, 05:03:17 PM »
@Popsicle Thanx for the support! But I will need your help to QC Milky's character. I'm not very familiar with NMB except for seeing them in Singapore Live once =x

The love triangles will slowly appear. Hopefully it's not gonna turn korean style.

@Sydney W Persona's torture will happen soon.But  I won't focus that much on Persona as this fic is still on Saeyuki =)

@kahem I'm sure there's some Yuko-ism in all of us ard. And thanx! I tried my best to make the radio special kinda crazy. More crap will happen soon!

@seigus Thanx for the support bro! I'm going to SDN48 show! Maybe we can meet up during then.

@oddball Now I seriously wonder if Yuu can succeed but if he does, then Mayu won't be the scary smarty cyborg we will love.

Thanx for the suggestion. But it won't be Sayanee, Milky and Yuki. Something else will happen. Love is random, Love is all around. All will be a surprise!

@msst28 I was waiting for somebody to comment on Yui's Homayan. Yui is one of my fave girl apart from Yukirin. Hopefully I can develop her character here instead of giving her little camo roles =x

And thank you for supporting the radio show. I wasn't sure if readers here would be used to this. Love triangle will slowly develop. Lets see how it goes.

@Haruko Hope you are fine with this arrangement. I wonder how Sayanee and Milky will turn out...

@RenaChii I will update soon... once I can get my brain to work. Work is overwhelming =x

@aruka There will be various radio shows to allow readers to understand more about the characters. Expect more wacky fun ok!

@immortal_K Thank you! Your fics are damn nice, making mine pale in comparison. Look forward to more comments to improve my writing!

@Megumi Thank you! Your support is much needed!

Mina-san! Arrigato for the support! It's all the comments you all gave that make me smile during a hard day at work.

New update is coming soon as I get my inspiration while listening to Team B's Stages.

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 5.1 Radio Special 1
« Reply #52 on: February 04, 2012, 01:12:54 AM »

@msst28 I was waiting for somebody to comment on Yui's Homayan. Yui is one of my fave girl apart from Yukirin. Hopefully I can develop her character here instead of giving her little camo roles =x


really..
I like her too especially if she with the honmayan charater  :mon inluv:
Hope to see it too

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 5.1 Radio Special 1
« Reply #53 on: February 06, 2012, 07:38:09 AM »
modified my comment from above, since I did say I would come back and comment properly after I read  :lol:

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 5.1 Radio Special 1
« Reply #54 on: February 06, 2012, 04:48:35 PM »
Chapter 6

The familiar crack of the whip echoes through the room, bringing fear to those that hears it.

“So… You dare to be late for recording…” growls the deep voice of the akuma of the entertainment industry, Kamonohatsu Saeko.

“Ehm… We were… ehm…” stutters Kai, his body reacts involuntarily in memory of the previous lesson for being rude to the Charismatic Diva, Ray.

He glances at the mummified Kuu with the side of his eyes, hoping the quick-witted boy could provide a solution.

However, Kuu only looks at him nonchalantly before looking down at his medical certificate and look back at him with a grin in his eyes that seems to say ‘I’m safe…’

‘Traitor!’ curses Kai silently as he stares daggers at Kuu before looking at Riku, hoping the leader for the group could save them from this mess.

“Shachou… It’s my fault. I was busy coming up with lyrics for our new song. Would you mind helping me with that?” explains Riku sincerely with a bow.

“Eh….!?” went Kai and Kuu, their eyes widening at the comment before bowing their heads in guilt.

Riku is really their leader. Soldering the blame for them both by telling such a lie. But without a song to present to Shachou, the two fear for the fate of the tall lanky leader of theirs.

“Kami-sama! Please protect Riku…”

******

Kojima Riku breathes in deeply to calm his nerves before reaching for one of the guitars hanging by the racks.

Plugging the instrument in, he adjusts the knobs on the amplifier before testing out a few chords to test the level of distortion.

Finally satisfied, he palm-mutes the first chord continuously to build up the tempo before breaking into the song:

3秒見つめるだけで
落としてみせようか
お前の愛なんて
俺の思い通りさ

******

Watanabe Mayu gives herself another face palm. In fact, her palm could soon be a permanent resident on her face considering the amount of stupidity that is happening around her.

At first, there’s the troublemaking Oshima Yuu and now there’s the naïve Watanabe Ryuki that is so simple and trusting that you could cheat him off his clothes and he would thank you for it.

The best of all, Ojuu-sama has conveniently entrusted her to take care of the two. 

‘Oh God! Why do you torture me with this two… Wait… didn’t one of the gods just send one of them to us… ‘ grimaces Mayu as she whines internally. 

As she turns towards her Ojuu-sama, hoping to appeal against the task of being carekeeper for the two idiots, her nose starts to tickle.

Puzzled by such a reaction, her hand reaches for her nose to scratch it, only to trigger off a big sneeze, leaving her stunned.

As the rest fuss around her, worried that she might be unwell, Oshima Yuu stare at her hardly before cocking his eyebrow at her.

“Ah… Congratulations! Mayuyu! Somebody must be missing you!”

******

The last chord of the song slowly fades away, leaving familiar painful silence of the sound proof studio.

Kai and Kuu look at each other dumbfounded before looking at their leader with newfound respect.

“You didn’t tell me you knew how to play the guitar…” accuses Kai.

“And the lyrics… it’s amazing! How did you manage to come up with this…” praises Kuu.

Embarrassed by the praises and attention, Riku looks down shyly, his eyes darting nervously away from any eye contact.

He couldn’t tell the rest that the song was inspired by someone whom had captured his heart in 3 seconds.

Besides, to fall in love is a big taboo even as a male idol. That was one of the primary reasons why Kai haven’t confessed to his crush Maeda Atsuko.

 Before he could think of a good reason, a big paper fan hits the 3 of them on head.

“Ah Itai…” chorus the 3 of them, rubbing their heads in pain.

“Quiet… I had showed mercy by using the fan instead of the whip…. Consider this your reward for writing your own song. But do you have to use an electric guitar? This is so X-Japan… Why don’t you switch it to a Classical and give it some Spanish feel? The song needs to be mysterious and romantic, a song that is a statement to the girl you like…”

As Saeko drones on, giving her comments on how to rearrange and improve the song, the trio gives a sigh of relief.

They had survived the day!

******

“What do you mean by someone misses me?” asks Mayu in shock, her robotic façade broken into pieces.

“It means someone misses you! It’s common knowledge that when you sneeze once, it means someone is thinking of you…” announces Oshima loudly.

“Aniki! If I miss you, would you sneeze too?” asks Milky cutely.

“Ah… Little Milky, you are so cute! But I’m afraid that I won’t sneeze that easily if it came from you. To make someone sneeze, you must really like that person. Like really really really like that person. In short, it must be love!” declares Oshima.

“Oh… So if I miss Tousan, he will sneeze too?”

“Ah Milky, you are so adorable but no… The sneeze only happens if someone has romantic intentions towards you! It’s gotta be LOVE!”

Watanabe Mayu gives herself a face palm again before pulling the young and gullible Milky away before Oshima can further corrupt his mind.

‘Love… There’s no love in this world. I shall find the source of this sneeze and put him away for good. I’m a golem, a cyborg created out of magic. Cyborgs don’t fall in love…’

******

“Ah Mariko-sensei, I hope that you are prepared to have another transfer student in your class tomorrow…”

“What! Another one? Seriously! Kachou Sensei! Could you stop treating my class like a refuge camp?”

“I’m sorry but your class is the only one that has a vacancy left…”

“But Kachou Sensei, you know that the seat has being vacant for a reason…”

“I know… but the application has being approved. I’m sure it will be alright…”

“FINE! If you say so! Just don’t blame me when anything happens!”

“Don’t worry… I’m sure the new transfer student can take good care of himself. Besides, if there’s anything wrong, there’s still Yamamoto Sayaka to handle it…”

“Pfftt… You always seem to have an answer for everything don’t you?”

“And that’s why I’m the Kachou. Thank you for the day and have a safe trip home…”

Mariko-sensei bows politely towards the principal as she walks towards the school gate.

Before leaving the premises, she takes a look back at the school only to zoom into her classroom as she sees a dark silhouette appear at the window.

Narrowing her eyes in displeasure, she prepares herself to scream at the top of her voice for the student to report to her immediately, only to realize that the silhouette has disappeared.

Rubbing her eyes in disbelief, she looks around again, hoping to find the offensive student but to no avail.

‘I must be working too hard…’ she shrugs as she walks out of the school to head towards one of the pubs.

“There’s nothing like a glass of warm Sake to reward myself after a hard day at work…”

******


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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 6 Updated 6th Feb
« Reply #55 on: February 06, 2012, 05:20:37 PM »
Hell yeh u updated !  :thumbup
Riku Cutee .. :inlove:
Oh well least they didn't get anywhere near as hurt as i expected.  XD
Milky u gullible child..  :lol:

Mind updating soon..  :P
I love it ~ :yep:


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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 6 Updated 6th Feb
« Reply #56 on: February 06, 2012, 05:22:26 PM »
Awesome for updating the stories. ^^ Targeting the next update soon ^^

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 6 Updated 6th Feb
« Reply #57 on: February 06, 2012, 09:59:28 PM »
Ganbatte Mayuyu~

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 6 Updated 6th Feb
« Reply #58 on: February 07, 2012, 12:19:48 PM »
Aww Riku made a song for Mayuyu!  :lol: Hmm seems as though he has inadvertantly given a 'weapon' to Yuu by doing that too, hmm not sure it's going to have the desired effect with Mayu though who may er' destroy him if she finds out!  :panic:

Milky, so sweet, lol I'm looking forward to you meeting Sayanee.... but, what is wrong with the seat that may soon be yours?

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Re: Winter Sonata [Sae+Yuki+Mayu] Chp 6 Updated 6th Feb
« Reply #59 on: February 07, 2012, 02:54:41 PM »
Kojima Riku& Watanabe Mayu?! Waaaa I want next update fast! LoL
And Ryuki/Milky haahha such a cute innocent boy  :lol:

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“I’m sorry but your class is the only one that has a vacancy left…”

“But Kachou Sensei, you know that the seat has being vacant for a reason…”

“I know… but the application has being approved. I’m sure it will be alright…”

“FINE! If you say so! Just don’t blame me when anything happens!”

“Don’t worry… I’m sure the new transfer student can take good care of himself. Besides, if there’s anything wrong, there’s still Yamamoto Sayaka to handle it…”

Ohhh ahhhh interesting! Must be a spirit or something...

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‘I must be working too hard…’ she shrugs as she walks out of the school to head towards one of the pubs.

“There’s nothing like a glass of warm Sake to reward myself after a hard day at work…”

LoL Mariko sama hhahaha


An AKB school with spirit/demons/god fic yeah... definitely my kind of fic :twothumbs
Can't wait for your next update!
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