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Re: bueaty and the theif chapter 9 Enjoy!!
« Reply #40 on: February 26, 2012, 08:27:02 AM »
I bet Acchan is going to fall for Kai soon~ :D

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Re: bueaty and the theif chapter 9 Enjoy!!
« Reply #41 on: February 26, 2012, 10:58:50 AM »
Kai is so gentleman and caring. Guess she started to like/love Acchan now.

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« Reply #42 on: February 26, 2012, 06:10:26 PM »
Well done more plz  :lol:

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Re: bueaty and the theif chapter 9 Enjoy!!
« Reply #43 on: February 27, 2012, 12:10:26 AM »
chapter 10

Atsuko walked into her house and seen her two older sisters running around frantically and shouting random things around the room to eachother.Something came flying towards her head but she quickly dodged it with her quick reflexs and tured head to her sister who stood there with a opolagetic look but then quickly returned to what she was was doing.Atsuko just watched her two sisters with a amused look but then decied to ask what they where doing."Stop what your doing and explain!"

The two girls stopped in there tracks and explained everything to there younger sister.When she heard what they had found on Kai she coudnt believe it she could feel her heart breaking more and more as she heard everything her sisters where saying and she didnt understand why."He coudnt have done that he doesnt seem like he could just because he is a theif doesnt mean that he could do that!"Atsuko shouted defending Kai."Why are you defending him he locked us in his damn basement he is not what he appares Atsuko no one ever is."Atsuko felt her finally snap in two she knew now what was happening and what this feeling was she had to talk to Kai and now was the time.She ran out side and it began to rain the rain got harder and harder "Atsuko why are you outside my house?"Atsuko turned around to see Kai behind her with a plastic bag in his hand he then noticed she had no coat on for the second time that night he took his coat off and wrapped it round Atsuko but this time kept tight hold on her because he could feel how cold she was.

"Atsuko are you gonna answer my question?"

"I needed to ask you something i know you know i am a detective and i know you know that we have alot of information on you and your brothers and that we know your theives so please answer this question."

Kai could hear the pain and seriousness in Atsuko's voice so he just nodded his head in responce to Atsuko.

"Did you really kill that man?"

"Yes but i didnt mean to he had a gun and pointed to Riku's head we fougth over the gun i had it in my hands then the guns trigger well you can gusse why does this bother or consern you?"

She knew the truth now and it hurt to know it was true but he did it protecting his brother defending family but that question he asked could she answer it well she was going to try."Because because i think i..i..i l..l..o..o...v...e you i think i love you."Kai coudnt believe his ears the rain was pouring more and more and all he wanted to od is hold Atsuko in his arms and say "I think i love you too."These words ecohed through her head she looked Kai straight in the eyes they never wanted this moment to end both leaned in and there lips finally met there lips moved in rythem until they broke apart the forheads touched and there breath hit eachothers faces."We cant tell anyone can we?"

"No you and your sisters are trying to put me in prison and my brothers i suppose we can in school but no one outside can know."

"I suppose that will do remember your my slave at 5 in the morning"

"Dont remind me you wake up to early"

"Ha i know but still thats something you love about me"

"Yer yer it is i suppose we look like where in one of those old romantic movies you know where the rain is pouring we confess and stuff it feels like where in a story Atsuko i love you."

"I love you to"

The rain stopped and left Kai soaking wet holding on to a half dry Atsuko and a white bag filled with milk and such.Atsuko then left that is before Kai gave her a short goodbye kiss well if you count kissing for like 5 minutes a short goodbye kiss and went home opening the door wearing Kai's coat completely forgeting she had it on i suppose thats 2 coats of his she owns now.

end of chapter

that is one couple togther yay i love this couple hehe thanks for reading and please comment Riku and Yuko chapater next!

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Re: bueaty and the theif chapter 10 Enjoy!!
« Reply #44 on: February 27, 2012, 12:16:29 AM »
OMG!!!!!!!!

 :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook: :wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly: :nya: :nya: :nya: :nya: :nya: :nya:

THEY KISSED AT LAST!!!!!!!!  :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:

I'm soooooooooo waiting for Yuko and Riku, OMG!!!!!  :mon crazyinlove: :mon crazyinlove: :mon crazyinlove: :mon crazyinlove: :mon love: :mon love: :mon love: :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :gmon flowers: :gmon flowers: :gmon flowers: :gmon flowers: :gmon twirl: :gmon twirl: :gmon twirl: :gmon twirl: :gmon twirl:
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Re: bueaty and the theif chapter 10 Enjoy!!
« Reply #45 on: February 27, 2012, 12:24:36 AM »
They confess to each others. They are couples now. ^^

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« Reply #46 on: February 27, 2012, 01:31:50 PM »
One couple one!
And yay! For the kiss!!!!

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Re: bueaty and the theif chapter 10 Enjoy!!
« Reply #47 on: February 27, 2012, 02:28:10 PM »
Yea~~!! Kai and Acchan are finally together now~ :D
And the kiss was~~ :wub: :wub: :wub: FANTASTIC~!!!

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Re: bueaty and the theif chapter 10 Enjoy!!
« Reply #48 on: February 29, 2012, 10:36:29 PM »
chapter 11

"Kai what took you so long i had to fix everything on my own because Kuu just sat there an eat the intire time you where gone!"Riku Screamed Kai was use to this side of Riku so he didnt care that much when he shouted after all this night was the best one of his life."I had to help someone old lady see i even gave her my coat."Kai argued looking down at his dripping wet body.Riku laughed at his brother and went to bed today was a long day.

The next morning Riku woke up to the snoring of his younger brother Kuu coming through the wall making him bash agianst it then he heard a bang obviously Kuu had fell out of his bed being the clutz he is.

(Riku's pov)

I got out of bed and checked on Kai suprised not to see him in his bed then i went down stairs and he wasnt there i was in shock it was 6 in the morning and that midget was gone something had defently happaned mabye he found himself a girlfriend i will analaze his behaviour later i dont have the time to call him i have a very early start at one of my restraunts.I choose my clothes quickly and get changed grabbing a pice of toast i had made an ran out of the house jumping into my Mercedes bend and driving off full speed to the restarunt.Noticing a car following me again i took the long route shaking however it was off my tail in a hurry.
When i arrived one of my head chefs hurried me inside telling me a critic was coming to visit and i began practicing my best dish.Soon it was time for the people to come and start eating breakfast as they done mornings.The critic came in head up high and snoty looking down at the rest of the customers then just behind a familar face came from behind him my little squirral was there wait did i just call her my little squirral it doesnt matter right now though.My waiters led him and little squirral to a table for some reason she was with that man.

I severed my best dish to the pair and walked off to the kitchen waiting to hear the review i was then called to go to see the critic my hands sweating with worry and nerves.But there was no need as i got 5 stars again.The little squirral gave me a cheeky grin and stayed when the critic left and asked to speak with me we went to the back of the restarunt and suddenly she pulled out handcuffs and pushed me againts the wall i tried to fight back but my hands where handcuffed before i could.

"What the hell are you doing?!"

"Handcuffing you and taking you to prison what am i being to nice."

"Why is my little squirral being like this?"

"Who said am your squirral Riku-Nyan?"

"Argh let go!"

"No i have evidance and now your coming to prison sorry."

I tried to shake her off me but she had a tight grip she pushed me in the back of her car and we quickly arrived at the police station.She dragged me in side kicking and screaming then thrown me in the interagation room.Questioning me saying she had evidance then i remembred that i smothred her with something that should knock her and make her forget things obviously that didnt work.I refused to answer anything she asked.So i decied to have some fun.

I got up from my seat and pulled her up by her collar supriseing her then thrown her against the wall i pulled her closer and blown slightly on her face making her blush and me chuckle because of her action.I pulled her closer if that was possiable i lifted her chin and kissed her slightly on the lips then more police came and dragged me off her and took me out the room while i let out a laugh that could make your body still with fear.They pushed me in a cell and i found a way to get out of cell but i had to be sneaky i gusse i will have to wai for now.

end of chapter and Riku's pov

thanks for reading next chapter will be Kuu and Mayu something bad will happen wont give hints but if you gusse right i will let you decied who and what the next chapter will be about and i will mesaage the winner.Once again thanks for reading please comment!


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Re: bueaty and the theif chapter 11 Enjoy!!
« Reply #49 on: February 29, 2012, 10:43:41 PM »
Haha, this was a fun read  :lol:

Waitin for more  :thumbup
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Re: bueaty and the theif chapter 11 Enjoy!!
« Reply #50 on: February 29, 2012, 10:50:15 PM »
 :luvluv1: RikuXyuko kiss scene  :twothumbs

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Re: bueaty and the theif chapter 11 Enjoy!!
« Reply #51 on: February 29, 2012, 11:05:52 PM »
guys i want you all to gusse what bad thing happens in the next chapter to one of the two following people Mayu or Kuu if you gusse right you will get to choose who and what chapter 13 will be about and i will message the winner hope you guys have fun figuring it out! :)

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« Reply #52 on: February 29, 2012, 11:12:36 PM »
Mhm... Maybe Mayu...
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« Reply #53 on: March 01, 2012, 10:27:45 AM »
Good can't wait to read more and I know what happens but I'm not allowed to say

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« Reply #54 on: March 01, 2012, 12:36:36 PM »
Pow pow pow go Riku go!
I hope nobody will die in the next chapter

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Re: bueaty and the theif chapter 11 Enjoy!!
« Reply #55 on: March 01, 2012, 05:55:20 PM »
okay so u all have till sunday to gusse what happens in the next chapter okay an it will happen to Mayu
gusse wht happens and the winner will be messgaed by me okay thanks

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« Reply #56 on: March 02, 2012, 03:38:27 AM »
RikuYuu kiss..^^

i want more of these moment...

So something bad will happen to mayu 
i wonder what is it?

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« Reply #57 on: March 04, 2012, 01:06:07 AM »
chapter 12

Kuu went for a walk after his scheduled ended and hit the shops when he found his favourite manga store Rappappa.When he got into the store he seen his friend who owned the store he quickly hooked him up with the best manga the store had.A familuar face then walked in Mayu looked towards Kuu only to nod her head in acknowledge ment that he was there.As she worked out a plan in head because today was the day she was going to get Kuu into prison and keep him there this was going to be the end of the 3 angel brothers and it was going to be all because of her and her sisters.

She shot looks every now and then to Kuu to make sure where he was and what he was doing at all times then music filled the air Smooth crimanl by Michael Jackson glee version.

Kuu noticed Mayu's looks over to him and wanted to have some fun.As she looked away he knocked a shelf over causing people to see what happaned he was gone but then Mayu was behind him he coudnt believe it he started running down the roads of Tokyo dogeing and running in and out of people.When a car door opened just infornt of him but he had quick reflexs and jumped over it while Mayu ran round it she was fast.People where starteled by the jump that Kuu had achived and he smiled seeing Mayu was slowing down.Then suddenly right by him making him almost get scared out of his skin.He ran out into the street jumping through cars and smashed a window of a cra by jumping through it and hotwired the car.

The car reved up then burst out into the street he turned the raido turned on and Michael Jacksons Bad Glee version burst into the car.Kuu smiled these songs where really ironic.Looking into the rear view mirror he seen Mayu pull someone over and take there car and come after him.He was getting frustrated he sped up the car more and more until it hit its max but even then Mayu was behind him there was no point in her being discreat after all he was on to her.

They where now on the motorway Kuu had an idea he weaved in and out of the cars then just as soon as there was a small gap left for him to turn he did where as Mayu went straight ahead.

He had won well that is what he had thought poilce cars surroned him not he coudnt get out Mayu appared in one of the cars she got out of the car walked up to Kuu and said those 4 words."You are under arrest."His eyes widened he had been caught worst part it was by her.The anime girl he was never going to be able yo live this down.Okay glee had been on the radio alot today because another one came on the radio Hit Me with Your Best Shot" / "One Way or Another he smiled today was really ironic.
Handcuffs circuled around his wrist and pulled him from his car and escorted him to the back of a police car not knowing that his other brother was there he was thrown into an intergation room where they got no answers no matter how hard they tried the answer was the same it was always SHUT UP!

Not knowing what to do she called her Younger sister Atsuko in.

"You do know that we have your two brothers right?"

"No and i am gusseing they have have gave you no information."

"Oh why is that?"

"Riku taught me how to read body language sorry."

end of chapter

hehehe yer so a lot of glee sorry been obsessed lately anyway comment and thanks for reading the winner of the comment is Sakura_Drop_ she has told me wht she wants so im workin on it now!

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« Reply #58 on: March 04, 2012, 01:11:49 AM »
i wonder how they are going to free from jail..  :panic: :panic:

And, oh, how I'm waiting for the SPECIAL thing I requested, hehe  :wub: :wub:
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« Reply #59 on: March 04, 2012, 10:27:08 PM »
 :lol: Yup u are really obsessed wiv glee and nice one robyn u know I  :heart: all ur fics  :drool:

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