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Author Topic: After All These Years...~君に恋してる~ Chapter 2 (03/03/2012)  (Read 11100 times)

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Hi~ :)
My first time writing a fic so I'm not sure if it'll be good or not XD
Here's the Prologue and maybe Chapter 1 on Saturday or Sunday!


Prologue
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"ha.. ha.." a small figure is running as fast as she could causing herself to nearly trip and fall.
As she run she looks at the paper bag that she is holding and smiles thinking what the person will react about her present.
She then reach a Cafe then hurriedly went inside and immediately spot the person she was looking for.
"Acchan!!" shouted the small figure as she show the paper bag that she's been holding to the other figure who was sitting at the corner of the Cafe.
"Takamina..." replies the girl called Acchan which is Maeda Atsuko.
"Look! I've bought your favorite Chocolate Cake!! The line was kinda long so it took awhile to buy it" says Takamina or Takahashi Minami as she smiles while handing the paper bag to Acchan.
"... Takamina.. I've got something to tell you" says Acchan calmly and a bit cold.
Takamina notice the tone of Acchan's voice and her smile slowly faded.
"What happened??" asks Takamina concerned while she took a hold of Acchan's hand
Acchan removed her hand from Takamina's and take a deep breath then look into Takamina's eyes as she slowly say the three words that will completely break Takamina's heart...
"Let's break up..."
Let's break up... Let's break up... Let's break up... these three words has been repeating itself inside Takamina's brain as she couldn't believe what she just heard..
"Acch.. Acchan.. You're joking right?? Ha.. ha.." replies Takamina in a tone that she thought Acchan is joking but seeing Acchan's face tears start to form inside her eyes but she tried her best to hold it in..
"I'm sorry.." says Acchan
"Why... I thought we loved each other.. I.."
"I'm sorry.." Acchan says for one last time as she leaves the Cafe.. leaving Takamina there alone whose tears starts to drop slowly one by one... and you might even be able to hear the sound of something breaking... the sound of Takahashi Minami's glass heart broken into thousand of pieces...
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Re: After All These Years...
« Reply #1 on: February 17, 2012, 07:46:22 PM »
My first thought is Atsumina fics ~ happy that you write it BUT it's kinda sad when the story start up with breaking up.
I want Atsumina back ^^

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Noooooo!!!! Acchan!!! Why did you break Takamina's heart?!!!! T_T

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Omg not Only break takamina's heart my heart suffer too. Aww i waiting for the drama

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OMGAH! I see some drama coming up~
Plz update soon!

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OH! i love dramatic fic    :( :(

please continue it soon!!

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Ahh, so misleading. I thought it would be all fluff and cotton. Noo, I want Atsumina back and happy. ;___;

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"... Takamina.. I've got something to tell you" says Acchan calmly and a bit cold.
Takamina notice the tone of Acchan's voice and her smile slowly faded.
"What happened??" asks Takamina concerned while she took a hold of Acchan's hand
Acchan removed her hand from Takamina's and take a deep breath then look into Takamina's eyes as she slowly say the three words that will completely break Takamina's heart...
"Let's break up..."
Let's break up... Let's break up... Let's break up... these three words has been repeating itself inside Takamina's brain as she couldn't believe what she just heard..
"Acch.. Acchan.. You're joking right?? Ha.. ha.." replies Takamina in a tone that she thought Acchan is joking but seeing Acchan's face tears start to form inside her eyes but she tried her best to hold it in..
"I'm sorry.." says Acchan
"Why... I thought we loved each other.. I.."
"I'm sorry.." Acchan says for one last time as she leaves the Cafe.. leaving Takamina there alone whose tears starts to drop slowly one by one... and you might even be able to hear the sound of something breaking... the sound of Takahashi Minami's glass heart broken into thousand of pieces...

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Still Prologue but already breaking my heart... I thought it was going to be a Happy fics! Please, Make my AtsuMina together! And Update Soon!
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Thanks for the comment :) I'm not that good in writing but I did my best! :grin:
LOL! I love the bar codes~ :cathappy:



Chapter 1

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“Acchan, Acchan!”
“Huh.. oh.. Miichan.. You scared me..”
“It’s not my fault because you were spacing out” replies Miichan, Minegishi Minami.
“Why were you spacing out??” asks Kojima Haruna
“… Nothing..”
“Are you thinking about ‘her’ again?? The one that you regret of letting go off..” asks Miichan
“…”

I know that it’s my entire fault to let go of you… If I could just hold your hands and hear your voice again… I regret in letting go of your hand… I was just stupid at that time.. When I realized that I was wrong, you were no longer here. Where are you now?? I’m sorry… And I miss you

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Acchan has once dated Takahashi Minami a.k.a. Takamina when she was in high school. She thought that her feelings for Takamina were not love, it was just feelings she share with best friends.. But people always find something important after losing them, which makes the people regret. That’s human nature. And that’s the same for her, she only realized how much she misses Takamina, how much she loves her after she has lost her… After destroying everything herself…

After realizing what she has done Acchan has tried to forget her, she dated many people but it was not possible to forget about her at all and no matter how many people she dated she never got the same feelings she got with Takamina. Even when she hold hands or kisses another person her heart does not beat wildly like when she did it with Takamina… She does not feel happy at all and that’s the reason why she kept breaking up with her boyfriends and girlfriends, her relationship with another person never last more than a month the longest last for only 2 and a half weeks but she can’t stand to be alone so she kept dating after each break up, she lied to herself that it was love…

All these stopped when Miichan told her firmly “Acchan, it is not love and I know you know it so stop hurting those people by dating them when you don’t even love them”

And that was Acchan’s love life until now from breaking up with Takamina to now, the present.
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Acchan is now 24 and is a successful veterinarian. She loves animals so she decided to be a veterinarian and cure all those animals who will need her. After she has graduated she has went to work in a pet clinic but she quit it very soon because…
   She always come late and was scolded every time.
   She was scolded for sleeping during work.
   She was scolded for looking sleepy all the time and does not look professional.
   She was scolded for eating the animal’s cookies… (She especially likes the dog biscuits..)

She was jobless for awhile and did not know what to do. At that time, her best friend Minegishi Minami who is also a qualified vet suggest that why don’t they open their own clinic since she is also tired of her bossy boss who always find trouble for her. Acchan was really happy and grateful of Miichan’s idea and they open a pet clinic called the AKB Pet Clinic together and their other best friend Kojima Haruna also joins in but she works as an assistant for both Acchan and Miichan.

Now let’s go back to their conversation above.
“…”
To break the silence Miichan suggest that they go have lunch now since it’s already noon.
“Then why don’t we go try the new restaurant that is just a few steps away from here? Seems like it has just started to operate yesterday” suggests Haruna
“Un!” Acchan agrees happily, the idea of eating has lightened up her mood.

After walking a few steps they are now in front of the new restaurant called ‘Memories’. The restaurant gives off a relaxing aura which is tempting for customers who wants to eat peacefully and quietly. There are many types of flowers both inside and outside the restaurant, adding some elegance to it. Ting! Sound of the bell as they opened the door. The restaurant’s wall is white and there are some simple wooden tables and chairs inside which seems rather comforting. There is a soft and gentle music being played inside the restaurant which is relaxing.

A tall, short haired girl came to them and bow slightly saying ‘Welcome’ and lead them to their seats and asks for their orders.

“Wow.. the restaurant is rather comforting, I like the atmosphere here” says Miichan
“Me too” agreed both Acchan and Haruna
Then they look at the Menu and gave the waitress their orders.
“The food all looked delicious and it was hard to decide what to choose” says Miichan
“Yea! I want to try every one of it!” says Acchan
“Acchan.. didn’t you just ordered 2 types of spaghetti, 2 types of rice dishes, 1 salad, 1 sandwich, 3 pizzas, 2 lasagna, 5 side dishes and you still wanted to order more?!!” exclaimed both Miichan and Haruna
Acchan just look at them innocently as Miichan and Haruna has three black lines on their head
The waitress was surprised as Acchan orders her share of food and also had three black lines when Acchan looks like she wanted to order more. She then bowed and brings the order to the kitchen.

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Inside the kitchen there are 3 people, one is reading a one piece manga, one is polishing her finger nails and one is playing with her front hair.
“Here’s the order” says the waitress as she went in the kitchen.
“Oh!” said the girl who was reading the one piece manga as she went to get the order.
“Woah.. how many people is out there?? Seems like a lot of work..” says the girl who was previously polishing her nails which is Itano Tomomi a.k.a. Tomochin.
“Three people”
“What?!” shouted the three girls
“I know, I know and Yuki.. can you don’t be that surprised?? Because it’s actually scary to see how your eyes are going to come out…” say the waitress
The girl called Yuki a.k.a. Kashiwagi Yuki pouted and sat on the chair.
“Haha.. Mariko stop bullying my sister” says one of the girl as she patted Yukirin’s head which lightens Yuki’s mood.
“Fine, fine. Just does it fast. We don’t want the customer to wait so long, boss~”

“Tomochin, Yuki let’s start now.”
“Okay~” replies Tomochin and Yuki
They start preparing the food.

“Ah! BTW, don’t forget Yuki you are ONLY allowed to wash the ingredients and Tomochin you bake the pizzas and lasagna and BE SURE to follow the RIGHT steps and DON’T add anything else! I don’t want to see nattos on the pizzas or anything strange, got it?”

Tomochin rolled her eyes and starts preparing the pizzas.

After a few minutes the waitress starts to bring the food to Acchan, Miichan and Haruna.

“Omgphf, this is so delicious~~” says Miichan with food in her mouth
Acchan and Haruna just nodded as their mouth are full of food.

It seems like the food is really to the taste of the three friends as they start to order more and after they finished they order again. Because of this the kitchen was really busy, not only because of the three friends but because there are other customers too and their ingredients are running out!!!

“Tomo and Yuki, continue to prepare. I’ll go and refill the ingredients.”
“Got it!”

The owner/boss of the restaurant then hurriedly removes her chef hat and apron and went to the dining area.
“Mariko! I’ll go refill the ingredients first”
After telling Shinoda Mariko, the waitress, she then leaves the restaurant.

At the same time, Acchan heard a familiar voice… the voice she missed so much so she quickly turn towards the source of the voice just to see a small figure going out of the restaurant. As if she realizes something she hurriedly stand up while accidently letting go of the pizza on her hand causing it to fly to Miichan’s face.

“Hey! What was that for?!!” complains Miichan but stopped as she see the expression on Acchan’s face.
“Acchan..?” Haruna calls Acchan who seems to be spacing out
“It’s her…” Acchan says in a very soft voice
“Her??” asks Miichan and Haruna but in a second they realized what does Acchan’s ‘her’ means.. “You mean ‘her’?!!!”
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i love it!!!
please update soon!
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At the same time, Acchan heard a familiar voice… the voice she missed so much so she quickly turn towards the source of the voice just to see a small figure going out of the restaurant. As if she realizes something she hurriedly stand up while accidently letting go of the pizza on her hand causing it to fly to Miichan’s face!

LOL, My imaginations running wild when i read the first words!     
  I know my AtsuMina will meet somewhere and They'll be back together! (Also, I don't know why But, I'm laughing when the pizza fly to Miichan's face!)

“Hey! What was that for?!!” complains Miichan but stopped as she see the expression on Acchan’s face.
“Acchan..?” Haruna calls Acchan who seems to be spacing out
“It’s her…” Acchan says in a very soft voice
“Her??” asks Miichan and Haruna but in a second they realized what does Acchan’s ‘her’ means.. “You mean ‘her’?!!!”

Yay! Takamina! Acchan Go Get Your Husband! I'll be waiting for your upcoming updates! So, Update Soon Caecus-san!
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OMG !!  i love your story~  :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:

PLEASE update soon ~     :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy:

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Acchan go get back Takamina!!!!!!!

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Way to go for Acchan. Fight for your Minami back. ^^

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 Haha Acchan stealing cookies  :rofl:
And the order hahhhaha

:prayers: I pray that Acchan will get Takamina back...

Thank you for your update!
Arígatou!  :kneelbow:
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of course!! go acchan go .. takamina you make acchan have difficult problems because she broke your heart..

and then.. kiss her like a baws :D

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I'm loving this fanfic!
Please update soon!  :yossi:

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NOTICE:

Sorry for not Updating for so long.. :nervous No Excuse..
I'm working on the second Chapter at the moment and promise to post it within TODAY!!
I would like to change the pairings~ Hope you guys don't mind XD
It's Atsumina at first~ But I'll like to change that! Hope the Atsumina fans won't mind :)
I would want to make it.....~~ Maybe ALL Takamina for now~ (All girls fall for Takamina~ :D)

Thanks~ Back to working!!! 8)

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I would want to make it.....~~ Maybe ALL Takamina for now~ (All girls fall for Takamina~ :D)


 :bow: Please make it TakaTomo or TakaHaru :bow:

Love the story :thumbsup

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