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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 3 )
« Reply #40 on: April 26, 2012, 04:12:26 AM »
ehhhh who dare to touch haruna´s lips O_O... aww my kojiyuu!!

i think that takamina gonna join at game but.. not..  aww please atsumina need to be there!!

but who deserve in this capter haruna`s kiss... maybe... rena? jaaj for me its ok...

but aww i want that yuko wnna be the person..

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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 4 )
« Reply #41 on: April 26, 2012, 06:34:24 AM »
@ nahbee-san : Hahaa. Thanks. o uob

@ pandah-san : Thankies. o uob
Seriously. Lol. Feel really sorry for Jurina don’t think she’ll be the same innocent person every again. </3
Hahaa. Guess that was a bit unexpected? xD I did warn ya, bro. Though I wished I did a better job at it. ;;
Yup. Would’ve been interesting how it would go if they did join. ~ > w> ;
Mhmm. ~ Well, you know how people show their true colors when they’re drunk. ~ ;3
:”D

@ Sieka-san : Okay. ~ No taking out a shovel isn’t cheating. But using it to dig it is! = u=)
It’s going to more brighter side than the darker side. Been writing too many depressing dark fanfic. </3
Don’t worry I’m already starting on it, bro! o uob Also with another fanfic. Yuki x some person I don’t know yet. .___. ;;

I remember someone comment in Izzy’s story about a male version of Yuki. So I decided to take up that idea of making another fanfic, but with male version of Yuki. <33 ;; Paired up with… I don’t know who, yet. ; AAAA;

Hahaa. Wouldn’t that be a circle instead? xD

… Um.. A smexy kiss from Yuki. ~Smexy? Lol. Okay, sorry. xD ;; Didn’t mean to say that. Lol.
Don’t worry she will…. Eventually…. Soon… o uo ;;;;

It can be that. ~ OR she want to eat Rena’s cooking instead, hur hur. ~ ;3

Nope. Unless she was posses or had a body swaps. = w= ~

Awww. ~ How kind of you. = w= At least you’re more kind than I am, bro. :”D
Seriously right? ;3

Hahaa. But I wasn’t planning to make her king. It’s possible Gaia can read your mind. </3
The pervy must be always ready for anything. ~

Look like not? Lol. Oh yeah. Totally. ~ Because after the game Jurina is likely never going to be the same again.. Maybe. = w= ;;;; You live and learn them, bro.

… It was about to be Mayu and Rena. Yeah. Gaia loves the fan’s shipping more than my thoughts. Lol. It was first the idea of the Pocky game, but then.. yeaaaaaa. XP

You got love Yuko for everyone, honestly.

Hahaaa. xD ;; I wished I made the scene it be better. > A> ;;; But a well.
Bro, Yuki always wanted to kiss Rena. She just never had the chance? :”D

Lol. Someday. Don’t worry some day that may happen. Either accidently or purposely. ;3

Oh yeah. Totally. I think they Takamina would go crazy if she was dragged in. Don’t know about Acchan. O:

That’s a myster that shall never be reveal of what Jurina did.

It’s Yuki’s excuse to be that close to Rena. > w>
*pat pat* Reasons shall be answers in due time. I would seriously make it very reasonable. </3

 .. hnn. Would I be murder by fan if I didn’t make Rena remember Yuki, and drama happens? .____. ;;

@ karomuwi-san : Yo, bro. ;; Al or Mint is fine. Don’t need to formality and stuff. ;;
Ack! That’s not needed! ; www;
Really? I really thought it could have been better. </3 But, I appreciate it though.
Oh my…. It’s like all of the emoticons are like making a story out of your expression. xD not that it’s bad, bro. ~
Without Yuko’s pervy-ness everything would have been boring right? </3

Whoa, bro. Chill. ~ ;3 Don’t want you dying from the lack of blood if that was really possible. ;;;;
What no! Oh my god. xD There’s no need for such epic words of your bro. ~ I don’t deserve them. Lol. ;;;

What? ;; Umm… Thankies? > w> ;

*pat pat* Don’t go jumping out windows now. = w= ;;

That’s the Captain we know for ya! ;D
What seriously? o uo ; eeh.. Depends on the person? I only knew the King’s Game in that kind of term. Not the roleplaying. xD ;;; So I can’t say if your cousin did lie to you or not. ;;;
Oh my god! …. …. No I shall not tell you! Your mind it too innocent to know! ; ww; I cannot corrupt your mind… yet.
Even if you’re a year younger than me I believe? xD ;

Questions that shall be answered, oh so…. Soon… Just not that soon? </3

Al or Mint is fine. And.. There’s no need, bro, really. I appreciate your epic comments though. <33 Same with Sieka-san. ~
Lol. Don’t read fanfic while you’re out inside the privacy of your room. xD ;;
Oh my. ;;;

@ pen pen chii-san : Don’t think Yuki minded too much. ~ Well got feel sorry for the youngsters for the most part. </3
Hahaaa. xD Yuki and Rena mind just shut down and forgot there was a 15 year old there? xD

@ bochang-san : It’s fine bro. xD ;

Thanks. I read your, Infinity, by the way. I really love it, bro. ~ > w>
Never had the time to comment on too much of people’s works though. I feel terrible. OTL
I should really get to them soon. </3
Really? ;;; Didn’t think it would have that much effect. :”D ;;; My bad?
Forget triangle. ( no not really ) It’s all about the square. ;3 And other shapes…. Lol.

Aah, yes. ~ Rena’s accident. It shall be known later. ~

Hahaa. Don’t sweat it, bro. I seriously felt a little awkward typing that scene. xD ;;
But… Hey, everyone is a pervy inside, and there’s no denying it. </3
Really? ;; Well then that need to be change from her cold, badass girl into the opposite. ~
*pat pat* o uo

… Oh my. ;; Please don’t lose a lot of blood. ;;
I’m pretty sure Takamina is scar for life… Sort of. xD ;

That’s a mystery to your imagination. ~

by the way. thanks for the correction earlier bro. Didn't catch that. OTL
Really appreciate it.

@ cutegiurl-san : Thanks.
…. xD ;; oh my… Still can’t stop feel a little weird writing that part.
You’ll know… for sure. = w=

@ playgirlz-san : ….  o uo ;;;
Yuki might go through worse if she deny Yuko’s order, possibly. Lol.
Really? xD Well… There’s imagination ~
Thanks. = w=b

@ XxRoByNxX78
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: Totally got to feel for her, bro. xD ;;
You’ll know… You’ll know.
Oh dude… If you can totally do any dares yeah. xD ;; Probably want to stay away from any friends that are extreme then. xD ;;
The feeling of rejection. </3 ;;

@ Haruko-san : don’t know? Only chapter 4 knows. :”D
Bro, there would possibly be chaos all around if the atsumina jumped in, maybe. xD
….. you seriously read my thoughts about that. .____. You’re not a psychic are you?

@ everyone : sorry about this chapter, bro. </3 ;;; eyes are dying from staring at the screen for so long. * n*
by the way. if you see some sort of mistake correct me. </3 I don't. I would have it correct then wrong. OTL
well, enjoy ~ ? o:

Chapter 4

When the lights turned back on, everyone became horrified at what they saw.

Everyone’s eyes were wide as if their eyes balls were going to pop out. The scene left everyone utterly speechless. Apparently, it Yuki was the one who turned the lights back on, and not Yuko. Everyone was shocked by this scene of Haruna was on top of Yuko, pinning her down to the floor, with their lips pressed against each other.

 Yuko’s eye were also widen in shock like the rest, face turned into a deep shade of red, and her mind went off into another world, the world she called Heaven. The day when she is able to kiss Haruna has literally become a dream come true, even if Haruna was drunk or not. When Yuko felt something wet against her lips, she couldn’t help but gasp as she felt something wet slip into her mouth. Haruna pressed a little deeper into their kiss. As Yuko she felt her mind going haywire, her mind just spun around, without thinking, her tongue met Haruna’s tongue.

“Jurina no!” Rena jumped from her seat, and used her hands to cover Jurina’s eyes. But, Rena was too slow as Jurina faced turned into a whole new dark shade of red, if there is a new shade of red. The images of steam were just come out of her head, as she was breaking into a meltdown. W-w-w-w-what… d-d-d-did I j-just s-s-see!? Even in Jurina’s thoughts she stuttered. Mayu just brought her hands over her mouth, her lips making an wide ‘ o ‘. She too was blushing, but not as much as Jurina. Mariko and Yuki, broke out of their state of shoke, ran up to Haruna and Yuko, and separated them. Mariko pulled Haruna off of Yuko, and Yuki dragged Yuko on the floor, away from Haruna’s reach.

“Yuko! Hey!” Yuki called while she lightly taps Yuko on the cheek.

“I’m…In… Heaavenn right nooooow. ~” Yuko replied with a wide smile. Her mind was literally in heaven, and nothing was going to bring her back to reality any timesoon.

Seeing that Yuko was fine, Yuki gave heavy as she decided to leave Yuko on the floor. She looked up Haruna, seeing that she was still pulled into Mariko’s arms, she flap a hand as if she was gesturing Yuki to come over. “We should call it day. It’s already 1 in the morning…” Yuki suggested. Mariko agreed, along with the others, expect for Jurina. Jurina was still under the state of having a meltdown.

“Noooooo!” Haruna protested. “No no no!” She struggled to break free from Mariko’s arms as it worked. “I want to see you two kiss again!” She flees to Rena.

“Huh, what!?” Rena felt a tight grasped around her right wrist, and was suddenly pulled to her feet to be dragged away by Haruna.

“Now smooooch ~ !”

“Wha - !?” Rena wasn’t able to finish when Haruna pushed her towards Yuki. Before she knew it her lips pressed again Yuki’s soft lips once more. Yuki was unable to react in time, as she lost her balance and fell to the floor, taking Rena down with her. She landed on the floor with a loud thump as she hit her head against the floor, painfully. Yuki muffled out a painful groan under their kiss. Rena immediately pulled away, breaking the kiss, “Kashiwagi-san, are you alright?” She helped Yuki into a sitting position.

“Tsk. It hurts like hell.” Yuki winced in pain, closing her eyes tight, as she rubbed the back of her head.

Rena sat on her legs, and held her head down feeling guilty for Yuki’s injury. “I-I’m sorry Kashiwagi-san…”

“Yuki.” Yuki muttered, opening one eye while she still rubbed the back of her head. Rena brought her head up to look at Yuki.

“What?” Rena asked confused.

“Address me as Yuki.” Yuki attempted to get up, but the back of her head pained so much that she couldn’t get up, as she groaned in pain.

“Kashi-Yuki, you should just lie back down. You're only making your pain worse.” Rena insisted, stopping Yuki from getting up.

“I wouldn’t be in pain for this drunk here.” Yuki scoffed as she shot a cold and piercing glare at Haruna. Haruna simply looked away with her arms crossed and purses her lips, as if she didn’t do anything wrong. “Just help me up.” Rena didn’t protested this time, giving a nod; Yuki tossed her right arm across Rena’s shoulders, and Rena snake her arm around Yuki’s waist before they slowly got to their feet. Rena slowly took a step followed by Yuki, another small winced escaped her lips, her whole body was in pain and not just her head. And the step she took could have led to falling back on the floor if Rena wasn’t there to support her.
 
“Yuki…” Rena muttered becoming very worried of Yuki’s condition. “Maybe you should just lie down until you’re feeling better.”

“No, it’s fine. I’ll deal with it.” Yuki said softly, trying to reassure Rena that she was fine. Rena wanted to protest, but it seems Yuki didn’t want to listen as Rena had no choice, but to listen to Yuki instead. They slowly made their way to the sofa.

Mayu watched Yuki and Rena, feeling a little jealous of Rena being so close to Yuki. Too close. Mayu knew Rena is a childhood friend of Yuki, but she wondered why Yuki never gave up on her. She hated the fact that Rena is still in Yuki’s heart. Even if Yuki opened up to Mayu after the long years of attempts in the past, she was never able to get into Yuki’s heart. They dated for a month in the past, and Yuki knew that Mayu had feelings for her, since the beginning of their encounter; even so, Yuki couldn’t keep her mind away from Rena. Mayu hated that. She wanted Rena gone; however, she couldn’t erase Rena from existence physically. She couldn’t see Yuki heartbroken than she already is with Rena missing memories. And she can’t face the fact of Yuki hating Mayu. Curling her hand into a tight fist she looked down at the ground, hiding her anger.

“I-I’m going home!” Jurina announced, jumping to her feet, “Good night everyone.” Jurnia excused herself and left in a rush. Haruna waved her arms and saying ‘bye’ to Jurina.

“We should all go home, now, before anything else happens.” Mariko suggested as she shrugged her shoulders. “Yuki, you should stay over tonight. Getting home in the condition you are now is impossible. I’ll take Mayu home, along with Haruna.”

Mayu shot her head up looking at Mariko, annoyed what she just said, “No, I’m stay here as well!” She protested.

“You’ll just be in the way. Don’t make things harder as it is.” Mariko fought back, keeping her composure. “Is that fine with you Yuki?” Rena slowly lowered Yuki down to the sofa, sitting comfortably in it. “I don’t mind.” Yuki answered.

Mayu scrunched up her nose being defeated already. She didn’t like this. Not one bit did she like Yuki staying over with Rena, and Yuko. She didn’t mind Yuko, she saw her as a sister anyways, but Rena is who she mined the most, but it doesn’t seem that Mariko will allow her to stay. And she didn’t want to fight against it because she knew Yuki would probably back Mariko up. “Fine.” She said bitterly getting up, and leaving. Mariko’s eyes followed Mayu until she was out of her sight. She gave a small sigh when the door was slammed closed.

“Goodnight you two.” The two replied their goodnights to her. Mariko then looked down at Yuko, who seem to have already fallen asleep in heaven. “And Yuko. Let’s go Haruna.” She locked arms with Haruna, as she waved bye to them while being pulled away. Mariko locked the doorknob before she and Haruna exited the house, so Rena didn’t had to do it.

“I’ll go get you some water.” Rena said to Yuki, as she was about to walk away she felt a hand grasping her wrist. She turn to see Yuki’s black orbs staring into Rena’s browns orbs.

“It’s fine. Just…” Yuki broke away the stare, and look elsewhere. “Sit with me, please?”

Rena cheek tinted pink as she looks down at Yuki, unsure what to say or how to react. She was dumbfounded, not only Yuki was pulchritudinous to Rena’s eyes, but also adorable. She never expected to see such side of Yuki. She always thought Yuki was the composed and tight person, this moment told her otherwise. She gave a small nod and sat down next to Yuki’s left side. She was stiff at first, after a while, she started to relax.

Rena felt soft cold hands beneath her right palm, and her fingers were being fiddle with. Curious, she looked down at her hand noticing Yuki were fiddling with them. As her cheeks tinted pink once more.  “I’m sorry…” Yuki apologized. Immediately Rena shook her head as a soft giggle escape from the raven’s lips. “You… just remind me of my precious friend.” Rena didn’t reply, but nodded in understanding. “I’m sorry.” She apologized again.

“It’s fine really. So stop apologizing already.” Rena assured her, giving a sweet smile. Yuki gave another nod, and rested her head on Rena’s shoulder as she continues to fiddle with Rena’s fingers. Rena too rested her cheeks against Yuki’s head. Rena smelled the familiar scent again, when she stumbled into Yuki. The sweet smell really calm Rena’s mind, causing her to slowly fall asleep.

“I wished you remember.” Yuki whispered very softly so that Rena wouldn’t hear. She felt heartbroken when Rena didn’t remember her, but being with her like this she was at ease. Being her like this, Yuki felt as if the pain in her body disappeared, like it never existed. She wished she had the ability to stop time so their moment wouldn’t end. Unfortunately she doesn’t have that type ability.

“Hm?” Rena hummed, wondering what Yuki whispered, but she only got a slowly head shake in response. After that it became completely silence. And only the sound of raining falling echoes the room. Rena noticed Yuki had already fallen fast asleep on Rena’s shoulder. And their hands were still in the same position. She couldn’t help but let out a giggle, thinking that she would have fallen asleep first after all the running, and events she went through. She couldn’t resist but entwined her hands with Yuki’s, and brought Yuki’s hand up to her lips, leaving a soft kiss at the back of Yuki’s palm. This… Really feels familiar… I wonder why… Rena questioned herself, resting their hands back down on Rena’s lap, before closing her eyes and falling asleep.

To be Continue in Chapter 5

So I was watching SKE48 new single, "Ai Shite Love Ru" which led to finish making chapter 4 the next day, meaning today. lol. ;;;
instead of doing my homework, that's due tomorrow. OTL /shotshotshotshot bad me. </3
 Also the result for the event was not my decision. = w= I let the RANDOMNESS do it for me. OTL I was being lazy so yeah. </3
Gaia is seriously trolling me. You guys are lucky to having the pair up that wasn't intended. = w=)

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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 4 )
« Reply #42 on: April 26, 2012, 07:16:32 AM »
Why is digging illegal? I don't think there's any rules forbidding me from digging though~ :P

Ohh, brighter huh? Wew, well, that's good indeed. It's better to have something lighter to read after all, I've been writing dark things as of lately as well...... :lol:

Yuki x someone else? ...I dunno if I like the sound of that, given how that someone is still unknown. :O

Yuki as a male? Wew, that's hot... :heart:

Ehh...well, its almost a circle. :lol: Mah mah mah...I dunno what shape to say anymore. :lol:

You better do, dude. If you won't make a smexy kiss, I'll write it myself! :( (Desperate)

Rena does cook well.....mah mah, since Yuki does like Rena after all, she'd surely would want to eat something that Rena made, instead of someone elses cooking.... :lol: I wonder, is Yuki bad in cooking here? :lol:

It's not being kind dude. It's being selfish. I'd take the opportunity for granted, just to be even a bit close to that special someone. Well, if I had one, but I don't anyways. :lol: Yuko FTW! XD XD XD

Thank you Gaia~ :lol:
Perverts need to have hidden compartments and pockets ready, lol. I think Yuko hid it somewhere in the dark, no one seemed to have noticed her having it. :lol:

Well~ Gaia is biased for fans. :lol:

Asakjdeiaujrasjk...... ALWAYS WANTED?
You, my dear author, have officially screwed up my head with blood! :lol:
Omg, omg omg omg omg, I'm fangirling.....and I don't usually do that, what a sly author you are!! :lol:

I hope its on purpose. :wub:

I think Acchan would be willing to participate in it, just as long as its Takamina who's her partner. :lol:

Toinks...cruel. You won't even reveal what Jurina did.

You better do make it reasonable, or I'll be the first one to hunt and haunt you down altoids-san. :lol:

I dunno about that. Either way, I think making new memories is better than taking back old memories, because when you remember, the wounds and scars in the past tends to open along. Making new memories is much better. *w*)

Oh heaven is a place on earth, oh heaven is a place on earth~♫

Hahaha, Yuko got a jackpot, hohoh, Haruna and Yuko seems to be enjoying it though, lol, too bad everyone had to pull them apart~ :lol:

Jurina is corrupted already! OHHHHH!!! ""orz

AH HARUNA YOU ARE SUCH A GENIUS! You're so so like Yuko. :bow:
Lol, she pushed Rena to Yuki! Omg, they kissed for real....ohohohohoho............ :farofflook:
Too bad it was a bad kiss though because Yuki got hurt in the process........at least you kissed Rena, Yuki! :onioncheer:

And Yuki has every excuse to stay over, even have Rena care for her and call her by her name! How sly can you get Yuki? Looks like we have three sly people here. :glasses:

Mayuyu is jealous, omg? There will be fire and magma soon! And Rena won't even know that Mayu hates her for dominating Yuki's heart and mind. Lol, how dense can you get Rena? I wanna see how far it will be! :lol:

I....huh, ouch?
I felt my heart hurt all of a sudden while reading through the parts near the end.
Yuki's reminiscing of a friend, a friend that Rena thinks is someone else, but its in fact her....that kind of hurts......sitting there, together with the person who forgot you.......even though you told her not to forget. :sweatdrop: Ahh dang, Yuki must be really in pain, not only from Rena forgetting, but for the separation.....and now fate's being cruel to her again, by taking Rena's memories away. :err:

I wonder how long till Rena starts remembering..... :?

Somehow, that last part where Rena bought Yuki's hands up and kissed it, it didn't seemed appropriate to do for a friend you just met for the first time, Rena.......... :sweatdrop: Was Rena is openly affectionate to people she met for the first time? Or was it because she was feeling too nostalgic that it urged her to kiss Yuki's hand? I wonder....such a gesture is so intimate, it left me squealing to be honest, but dang........Rena doesn't remember. Shoot it. :lol:

I wonder what will the morning await for them? Will Jurina visit again and stumble upon this scene?
Jealousy will be filling the docks next time! JuriMayu jealous duo, hohoho......... :lol:

Thanks for the update. :cathappy:
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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 4 )
« Reply #43 on: April 26, 2012, 08:35:32 AM »
OMG!! LOVE YOU!!! my kojiyuu!! that kiss wow...

jaja jurina learn a new lesson about an adult kiss.. :D like so fucking much...

but we need a little atsumina :D...

and the next day.. haruna gonna remember or just yuko?..

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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 4 )
« Reply #44 on: April 26, 2012, 11:18:57 AM »
Drunk Haruna is the best!!!!!!!!!   :twothumbs
thank you drunk Haruna for that RenaYuki moment  :deco:
that KojiYuu kiss  :wub: :inlove:
and the last part is so bittersweet  :cry:
i hope Rena remembers Yuki soon!  :cry:
thanks for the awesome update!
looking forward to the next chapter!

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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 4 )
« Reply #45 on: April 26, 2012, 11:44:32 AM »
*nosebleed*

Uwah.. *still having a nose bleed*
Haruna.. *losing 2400cc of blood*
Tounge.. *died*

OMG!!! NyanNyan!!!!! *speechless*

Jurina. I think she'll become a kiss demon after this. LOL
You go girl! It's time for you to know this things!

And.. Haruna.. It's like a meme "now kiss" Yuki, Rena. LOL
(If you don't know about this meme things, try to open 9gag.com)

Mariko!! Why did you stop KojiYuu's kiss? Let them continue *still having a nosebleed in the void*

But after that event.. It's became a drama..

Poor Yuki because Rena forget her.
But the good news is Rena still have the same feeling. :D

It's became dillematic since mayuyu loves yuki too!!
I don't know who should I support! LOL

If yuki n rena become a couple.
Surely mayuyu and jurina will be sad..
If mayuki and wmatsui become a couple
I don't know!!! LOL yuki n rena will have to live without the person who they truly love..

And poor mayuyu.. Yuki hate her.. TT.TT
Cyborg idol! Please don't cry! TT.TT

And thx for the update altoids-san. :D
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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 4 )
« Reply #46 on: April 26, 2012, 06:10:35 PM »
Hahahaha! I lkove this game! Especially when Yuko is the King hahahah!
OMG Kojiyuu kiss!!!! So hot!!!

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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 5 )
« Reply #47 on: April 28, 2012, 07:29:50 AM »
@ Sieka-san : Argh! Touche, bro. Touche... Well if you plan to dig hope you hit a coffin and not gold. = 3= ~

Mhmm. o uo Brighter. ~ And none of that depression from someone's death. ; ww; Expect for Rena ( Gekikara ) assassinating people. lol.
It's nice to read something bright. = w= Totally can tell that you have. :"D

Hahaa. ;; That because I don't know who to pair her ( him ) up with. ;;; I was thinking about Rena again... But..
I don't know. It seems to fit more if it was Mayu. OTL. Do you want to read it and see what second character fits the best? o wo ;

Hot stud, yukirin. o 3o ~

Hahaaa. xD Almost a circle? Wouldn't that be consider a dented circle? lol.

Okay okay. ;;; Either you'll write it yourself or you may have a weapon pointed at my head and force me. :"D ;;;;

Of course. ~ ;3 Show how much Yuki's love for Rena. ; w; ... Eeh. I don't know. *goes to ask Yuki* .... *comes back*
She just gave me a death glare. ; AAA;

I see. ~ ;P Still kind of you though. I would just flee instead? hahaa. You will eventually, bro. ~
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It's totally true y'know. ~ ;3 You won't be a prevert unless your prepared. lol. xD ; Yuko is like a magician. * o*

Yes. ~ Indeed she always wanted. lol. :"D
Hahaaa. Is that so ~ ? o uo
... You shouldn't have said that. Now I totally want to see you fangirl more. = w= ~

Definitely? :"D But eventually because I'm a tease like that. > w> ;;

Hahaa. Maybe so. :"D For now that's a mystery. ~ o 3o

Nope. The mystery of what an 15 year old did shall never be revealed.
It shall all be left to your imagination. ~ ;p

Oh my, oh my. Such violence. ;;
And you can just address me as Mint or Al, bro. xD None of that formality stuff. > w> *notusetoit* lol.

Aah, that is certainly true. Though eventually those old memories are going to come back.
When old one comes back it best to try to fill it up with new and better memories, right? . w.

There's a kid watching. :"D And seeeing two adult making out, oh my oh my. ~

Poor Jurina... = w= ;; But it's all GOOD! :"D all good...

When she is DRUNK! lol. xD

It's a kiss and a faill kiss. </3
One painful kiss. lol. Love hurts. </3

Pssh. Pssh. > w> Bro, wouldn't you do the same thing? :"D And she can probably be a little more slier for Rena ~ ? ;3

Soon soon. For now... Need to see a certain puppy's side. ~ And the JuriMayu will born! * o* Maybe....
Aaah. ~ You shall know Rena's thoughts. . w.

</3 A very heartbreaking moment. Too... argh! *goes off to happy land* ; nn;

When fragments of her memories start coming back by turn of events........................................

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@ Haruko-san: Hahaa. = w=b If Haruna wasn't drunk she might has just give a peck. xD ;

Oh, poor Jurina. ~ = w= She's still young to know the adult kiss.

Aah, I'm still deciding to add them in or not... ;;; This is meant to be a 15 or short chapter long.
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Hnnn. ~

@ cutegiurl: xD Right?

Poor Yuki though. </3 Getting her kiss / fail kiss.

Hahaa. xD ; Who know how worse it would have gotten? . w. ;;;

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@ bochang-san: Oh my..;;;; Don't die on me! D:

Don't know about that just yet. = 3= ;;
Oh my! xD She still young for such things! not really. lol.

Hahaa. 9gag is pretty awesome. ~ ;3 So I know what you're talking about. ~

... ;;; Oh my. I wonder have much blood you have left. ;;
Hey, there is a kid watch! xD ;

Some feelings Rena has. ~ Just very unsure of them though. ; nn;

Umm... Support YukiRena? :"D

Not only sad, they may end up hating the person who stoled them away? ; w;
... Such a hard decision.. = w= ;;;

IF... Mayu doesn't do anything stupid. :x
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No probs. and Just address me at Al or Mint! xD ;

@ kahem-san: Don't play such game with pervy friends. xD ; Unless you can deal with any orders. lol.
One lesson learn from the King's Game.
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@ evryone: Boring chapter. OTL </3

Chapter 5

9:24 AM

It has finally reached morning where the sun was already high in the sky. However, there was no sun. The morning gray cloud covered the whole blue sky, giving on a gray morning.
 
Rena slowly opens her eyes, she blinks several time allowing her sight to adjust to the light. She then gave a small stifle yawn, wanting to stretch she shifted in her seat, but then she felt pressure leaning against her right shoulder. Turning her head she saw Yuki was still sleeping peacefully against her. She gave a soft smile, untwining their hands, she then moved off the sofa, while carefully setting Yuki down on the sofa. Quietly, she walked into her own room, grabbed the blanket off of her head, and dragged it out of her room. She walked back to where she was before, and drapes the blanket over Yuki.

She then made her away to the bathroom to wash her face, turning on the facets to the right temperature; she cupped her hands under the running water and splashed the water on her face twice before turning it off, and grabs the nearest towel on the rack. Drying her face off, she suddenly started to recall last night events. Every scene flashed to her mind, especially that scene, the scene of Yuki licking the frosting off of her lips. Her face flushed red from the memories. As she also recalled the time when she went to get fresh air and everything that happened after.

Then she remembers something. She recalled the time when she kissed Yuki’s hand before she slept. Her eyes widen as she became shock in place, realizing what she did, as the towel slipped out of her hands and lands on floor. Her face suddenly became dark shade of red. W-w-whaa!? Wait! What did I just do!? Why did I do that!? In her mind, she was flailing her arms while panicking. I can’t believe I did that! I just met her! Getting herself out of the state of being shock she started to massage her temples, trying to calm her mind down, and then stop to think. …But, my body just acted on its own. Why? Why being with her feel so familiar? “Argh! -- Moou!” She frustrated, she resumes massaging her temples. Is it because she told me that I remind her of her friend? Is that’s why? There was a knock on the door follow by the sound of it creaking open.

Behind the door was Yuko, who seem to have woken up before them because she was dressed differently “Hey, Rena-chan you’re awa --…?” Yuko slowly quirks a brow when Rena slowly turned her head, showing her red face. “Are you, okay? You didn’t catch a fever did you?” Yuko asking worryingly, walking over to Rena, she places a hand on Rena’s forehead then the other hand on your own. “Hnnn.. You don’t – Hey? Wha –“ Yuko started to pushed away out of the bathroom by Rena.

“J-j-just leave me alone…” Rena muttered and held her head down while she pushed Yuko out. “I… need sometime alone…” Yuko was back out into the hallway as she then turned around to face Rena.

“Is that so?” Yuko gave a weak smile, “I’m sorry.” Rena shook her head telling Yuko she had nothing to be apologizing about. “Just see Juri-chan later can you?”

“Eh? She didn’t go to school?” Rena blinked and looks up at Yuko; Yuko shook her head telling Rena that Jurina might have gotten sick yesterday, which was a lie. It was another scheme, planned by Yuko, to get Jurina and Rena to be alone together.  “I’ll visit her after Yuki… Leaves.” She diverted her eyes elsewhere, she still can’t believe the fact she kissed Yuki’s hand so randomly, and she just barely met her too. “How’s Haruna-san doing?” She looked back up at Yuko, as she saw the pain expression on Yuko making her frown.

“NyanNyan doesn’t remember anything from last night, that’s what Mariko told me. Shucks.” Yuko replied and shrugged her shoulder. “Be nice if she did.”

“Do you –“

 “Hey!” Yuko cut off Rena from finishing, as she gave a bright smile. “I need to go to work now. Take care of the house for me while I’m gone! You have just night class today right?” Rena gave a slight nod. “Kay. ~ I cleaned up the mess by the way, so I expect something in return. See ya. ~” Yuko gave a short wave and walk away before Rena could have the chance to reply.

“Yuko-san…” Rena whispered as she watched Yuko leaves. Does she really… -- It’s noticeable in the past, but… A small groan escaped her lips as she closed the door, and lean her back against it. I wish I could help... She couldn’t help but worry about Yuko, just seeing her pain expression she wanted to help her. But she didn’t know how, not with her own problems she has to deal with. “Why is it so frustrating?” She slaps both her cheeks and shook her head, before she let a small sigh.

“I’m sorry Yuko-san.”

9:56 AM

Rena exited out of the bathroom, and made her way back to the living room. Entering, she notice Yuki was now awake as she was sitting there quietly. The blanket that Rena used to cover Yuki was neatly folded and place at the edge of the sofa. And the table was clean just as Yuko said.

Yuki turned her head around, as if she knew Rena’s presence before she said anything, as their eyes met. Rena started stiffened when stared into those black orbs as she still felt a little awkward after what she did last night. “Good morning.” She greeted Rena.

“G-good morning.” Rena managed to reply, trying her best not to stuttered, breaking their eye contact and went to the kitchen. “Do… you want some water?” Getting a nod in response, she grabbed two cups from the shelf and uses the faucet water.

She then walked over to Yuki and handed her a cup. Rena gave a small nod when Yuki thanked her, as she sat down on Yuki’s right side. They both drank their water in silence. After several seconds of silence Rena started to feel a little awkward. She took a quick glance at Yuki as she was quietly sipping her drink. Looking away, Rena set her cup down and leans against the sofa. “Ne…” Catching Yuki’s attention, she set her empty cup down on the table.

“What is it?” Yuki asked, directing her eyes to Rena.

“I was going to ask you if have class in the morning. Do you?” Rena gazed elsewhere trying to avoid making any sort of eye contact with Yuki.

Yuki was silent for a moment as Rena then heard a small sigh as Yuki diverted her eyes elsewhere before she answered, “No. I have no classes today, but tomorrow I do. What about you?”

“Mhmm.” Rena gave a nod. “But it’s in the evening… How about Mayu?”

“She has classes today. She has about two I believe today?” Yuki answered a little irritate, she then shifted in her seat and crosses her arms.

Rena noticed Yuki’s irritation, she wondered why, but she decided not to pester about it and changed the subject instead, “… How are you feeling?”

“I’m still in pain.” Yuki bluntly answered. That’s because of you Rena-chan… As a soft ‘oh‘ came from the other girl.

Rena grew silent; she looks down at her hands, and fiddles the helm of her shirt, thinking what to say, when she found the words she took a small breath and asks, “Is there something… I can help you with then?” She then felt soft cold, hand slide up her cheek as those hand gently turned her head, her eyes widen as she saw a pair of black eyes stared into her own brown ones.

“Then remember.” Yuki whispered and stared deep in Rena’s eyes.

Shivers ran down Rena’s spine as she couldn’t move away. Those raven’s eyes, those eyes that held so much pain and sadness, she couldn’t move away from them. They held her down as if they had petrified her. Why do they look so sad? --What does she mean remember? Many thoughts ran through her mind. She wanted to ask these questions to her, finding the courage within her the words choke out, “Wha- What do you –“

The door bang open.

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2:00 AM ( AFTER THE PARTY )

Jurina lie down on her bed, an arm covering her eyes. A small sigh escaped her lips as she turned to her side. She recalled everything about the event that happen and hour ago, the first King’s order, the accident of Takahashi entering at the wrong time, Rena and Yuki leaving for fresh air, everything. Everything that had to do with Rena flashed back into her mind. That entire event pained her chest. Before she didn’t mind, but after recalling them they hurt. They hurt so much that she wanted to cry, but she couldn’t find herself to cry. She merely felt something jabbing in her chest. What is this feeling? Is it jealousy? She couldn’t think anymore. She just wanted sleep now. Sleep away the pain, curling into a small ball; she held her hands close to her chest as she slept.

7:06 AM

She woke up by the sound of the door being knocked. She lazily got up from her bed and opens the door. Behind it was her mom, she had her hand on her hips and her brows furrow. “Why aren’t you at school?” Her mom demands an answer.

Jurina groaned and slowly walked away, jumping back on her bed and planting her face into the pillow. “I don’t feel so good.” She half lied, and muffled through the pillow. She just didn’t want to leave the house today. She didn’t want to meet Rena. Not yet. Her heart still hasn’t stop paining. And she had a feeling if she meets Rena right now she wouldn’t know how to react. She’ll probably make herself look stupid in front of her.

 Feeling the bed shift, her mom sat at edge of the bed and patted Jurina’s head. “Do you want me to make you some soup?” Her mom asked a little sweetly. Jurina shook her head.

Jurina then turned it to the side where she could speak properly. “I just want some rest. I’ll go to school when I feel better.” Her mom simply gave a firm nod and stood up.

“I’ll leave breakfast on the table for you then before I leave to work.” She said before closing the door and left.

Jurina closed her eyes once more, falling fast asleep.

9:03 AM

Jurina slowly opens her eyes while slowly getting up in a sitting position. She rubbed her eyes before blinking several time, looking at the time she gave a small groan and lay back down. She silent stared at the ceiling as many questions ran through her head, questions she wanted to ask Rena personally, but could never find the courage to ask. Several minutes has pass since she’d been thinking, tired from all the thinking, she pulled herself out of bed and exited her room. Walking down the hallway, she gave a yawn and stretched her arms in the air. When she entered the living room she noticed Yuko arrived, she was sitting quietly on the sofa while she read the newspaper that was on table.

“Morning Yuko-san.” Jurina greeted.

Yuko set the newspaper down and look up at Jurina, giving a small smile at her. “Morning Juri-chan. Slept well? -- Actually, don’t answer. You have bags under your eyes.” Jurina sat down next to Yuko as she then slouched in the seat.

“I don’t feel that well.” Jurina managed to mutter. “I feel like crap.”

Yuko gave an understanding nod. “Maybe it was never best to play the King’s Game.”

Jurina immediately sat straight up and shook her head. “No! That’s not it.” Yuko quirked a brow at her, but she stayed quiet and allowed Jurina to continue. “I just that… I don’t mind since it’s just a game, but…” Jurina pulled her legs against her body, wrapped her arms around them, and her chin on her knees. “Rena would always resist and fight back against those things. This time she didn’t put a lot of effort at all. Do you think… She and Kashiwagi-san are…” She couldn’t finish her sentence, her heart ache too much to allow her to finish. It hurts so much just thinking about it.

Yuko slouched in the sofa, giving a long thought. She started recall this morning when she woke up from “heaven,” as she saw Rena and Yuki sleeping together on the sofa while hold each other’s hands. But, she couldn’t tell Jurina that. Keeping the scene to herself, she let out a slow sigh, “I don’t think they are. They just meet each other recently from the reaction I got when Rena-chan saw both of them.” She straightens herself up in her seat. “I do know what you’re getting at. Yuki-chan also fought against doing anything weird. Heck, she would try to beat the crap out of anyone if someone dare tried.”

There was a long silence between them before they both sighed at the same time. “I don’t understand those two.” Yuko gave a small wince and scratched the back of her head. “But, whatever it is they’re not together! So you still have a chance Juri-chan!” Yuko said in triumph trying to bring the spirit back within Jurina. Jurina gave a weak smile and nod her head. “Since you’re feeling a little sick, how about I ask Rena-chan to visit you ~ ?”

“Eh!? I – I …” Jurina hesitated to answer, she wasn’t sure if she was ready to face Rena so soon. “I don’t know… I don’t know if I can face her yet.” She buried her face in her knees and let a small groan.

Yuko patted Jurina’s back, trying to reassure her that it’ll be fine. “Sure you can. Just need to have a confidence yourself.”

“That’s easy enough for you to say.” Jurina muffled.

“You just have to try!” Yuko then heard Jurina saying ‘Fine.’ As Yuko got up from her seat, “I’m going to see if Rena-chan awake, then go to work after. So I’ll see you later.” She patted Jurina’s head before leaving.

“Wait!” Jurina lifted her head up and looked at Yuko.

“Hm?” Yuko turned around and gave a confuse look.

“How… Haruna-san doing?” She saw Yuko giving a bitter smile. As she knew immediately what Yuko was indicating, but Yuko still answered, “She’s doing okay. She doesn’t remember anything, and she apologized for it. So Mariko says.”

“Aah, I see.” Jurina gave a small frown at the news, but soon she gave a small smile at Yuko. “Just keep at it. Then maybe she’ll realize your feelings.” Jurina had known Yuko’s feelings for Haruna when Yuko figured out Jurina’s. Actually, Yuko was the person who told Jurina about her feelings seeing that it was only fair.

“That’s easy for you to say.” Using Jurina’s word against her, Jurina started to laugh as well as Yuko. “Well, I’ll see you later, kay?” Jurina gave a small nod. “Ja ne. ~” And so, Yuko left the apartment as Jurina was left alone in the house.

Jurina felt her chest lighten a bit. Even if it was only a small talk with Yuko, she felt like her chest lifted a bit. Getting up from the sofa, she made her way to the bathroom for a quick shower.

9:59 AM

For the past several minutes after getting out of the shower, Jurina had been laying on her bed while she stared at the ceiling with an empty mind. As she got tired of just lying around and staring at the ceiling, she decided to pay a visit to Rena instead. Getting out of bed she made her way to the entrance and slipped on her shoes. She exited out the door and locked it before she closed it behind her. She made a turn as she went next door. She turn the door knob as it was lock, she pulled out a hair pin and a tension wrench.

She placed the tension wrench into the lower portion of the keyhole, she turned the wrench clockwise as it moved on a fraction, and then she inserts the hair pin of the upper part of keyhole. She pushed each pins up as she felt the spring every time she release the pressure. She continues on, and pushed the upper pin out of the cylinder until she heard a click. She turned the wrench again, not allowing the pin she just pushed up to spring back down. Then she did it with the rest of the pins, as it was fully unlocked. She held on turned doorknob as he took the wrench and the hair pin out, and set it back into her pocket.

Cracking the door open and took a quick glimpse inside she saw nothing. But when she opened a little wider, she noticed Yuki and Rena on the sofa together as Yuki was being a little too close to Rena. As Jurina couldn’t help, but become shocked she banged the door open.

Yuki and Rena taken by surprise, they turned their head to the entrance door seeing a shocked Jurina.

“Jurina…” Rena muttered. Yuki shot a glance at Jurina, giving a look as she interrupted something, but Rena couldn’t see the look that Yuki gave to Jurina.

Jurina looked at Rena then at Yuki as she felt her heart shattering in pieces. “So it is true…” Jurina took a step back as her vision became blurry with tears.

“Jurina wait –“

“IDIOT! I hate you!” Jurina shouted, cutting Rena off. Before Rena could say anything Jurina made a run for it. Idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot! She shouted in her mind as warm tears rolled down her cheeks. She wiped the tears with the back of her hand while she ran. Wiping away the tears that kept pouring, she tried to clear her vision so she wouldn’t run into anything or anyone; she kept running as fast as she can to wherever her leg brought her.

Her heart became broken. She believes there was a little faith left, but the little faith died, cease to exist because of Yuki. How she hated seeing Rena so close to Yuki. To someone Rena just barely met! Why? She asked herself. Out of all people! Why she chose someone who she barely met? What did I do wrong? Endless thoughts ran through her head as those thought were like a needle jabbing into her skin.

Rain droplet started to come, but soon it started to pour. It didn’t stop Jurina from running though, she just continue to run through the rain as it hid her tears.

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“Jurina-chan.” Rena felt her chest pain when Jurina shouted at her. She got up from her seat when Jurina ran away as she was planning to chase after her, but she felt cold fingers curling around her wrist and stopping her from doing so. Turning her head, she saw Yuki giving a cold and piercing look that brought shivers to Rena’s spine.

“Leave her.”

To be Continue in Chapter 6
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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 5 )
« Reply #48 on: April 28, 2012, 07:57:46 AM »
Nice chapter altoids~san!

Hope you update soon.  :thumbsup

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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 5 )
« Reply #49 on: April 28, 2012, 08:05:21 AM »
oh this is good.  :thumbup

I just began reading this story yesterday. Hope that the next chapter will update soon

Feel sad for Jurina  :cry:

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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 5 )
« Reply #50 on: April 28, 2012, 08:55:02 AM »
THX FOR THE UPDATE!!!!!   :onioncheer:

but what've you done to Jurina!!!! TT.TT :on speedy: *teary eyed*
Jurina-chan.. TT.TT
i officially become Jurina fans!! She's my oshimen now!! TT.TT
Poor Jurina...  :on speedy:
Hueeeee...

and Yuki.. is so cold!!! OMG!!! the Black is trying to control Yukirin Mind!!

i don't know if i should make YukiRena pairing in my fic..
i thought i will try to make this pairing.. but.. but... Annyeong! :on speedy:
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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 5 )
« Reply #51 on: April 28, 2012, 09:13:55 AM »
The coffin I'd hit would probably be my own coffin dude. :lol:

Ahahaha...depression from someone's death? Who exactly are you referring to? Unn...Geki going all out without restrain is something enjoying to write, but at the same time gruesome and tiring. :sweatdrop: Hehe, I'm seriously enjoying the light drama here, to be honest...takes away the angst writer mode in me. :lol:

Hmm...I think I need to read it in order to see who fits the second character, I don't want to say Rena just because she's my bias, since I love Mayuyu too after all. If you want to send it to me, then I'll read it, do you want me to do some grammar check as well?

Hot stud indeed. :lol:

Hahaha...okay okay........what do you want me to call the relationship then? Net type love? :lol:

Do you want me to point a gun or a knife at you? :shifty: I'd be most willing to do so my dear author. :glasses:

Ah but mah, I think Yuki should show her affections in a different way rather than just that. :lol: ...It's obvious that she'd glare at you if you ask something as offending as that. :lol:

It's not kindness! Ahahaha...geez, its selfishness, selfishness, if you get to have a chance to be with your precious someone, you'd take the time for it and deliberately plan on how to dominate their whole attention only to you. :lol: Nah, I'm not interested in love dude. o ,o)p

Next time Yuko should prepare a much more elaborate dare. Something much more daring than just licking off frosting. :kekeke:

Ahahaha...erm, I don't want anyone to see me fangirling, its so embarrassing. :err:

I hate using violence and as much as possible, I'd like to talk about it in an orderly manner...but if you don't put your part of the end right, I'll be forced to use violence if necessary.... Please keep your promise...hmm, do you want me to call you Mint-chan, or just Mint? :huhuh

True...filling it up with new and happy memories is better, that unless the old and bad memories are the one dominating, then that would be a big problem. :sweatdrop:

All is lost for Jurina....uwah, she shouldn't have seen KojiYuu kiss... :lol:

I wish Haruna was always drunk? Lol.... :lol: :lol: :lol:

Love hurts, love moves, love pushes you off the ground......but it hurts more when you fall from a 15 ft building because of love itself. :farofflook:

I wouldn't do something as sly as that! That would be too selfish! I don't want to be that selfish....... :lol: But if it's Yuki, then I'm fine with her being selfish to the point that she wants to make Rena her's only. Also, I do think she needs to work more on her slyness, so that she could always take Rena's attention. :shy1:

Ahahaha...I think Jurina and Mayu will become good buds, good friends in crying over their failed unrequited love... :sweatdrop:

Hope Rena remembers soon though. I can't bare to see Yuki hurting that much... :fainted: ...Even though I'm hurting her much more in my own fic.......................I feel so guilty all of a sudden. :err:

On the update:

I'd certainly would like to often see Rena waking up to see Yuki in the morning, that would be such a great and fluff scene, and Rena would be staring an hour long just looking at Yuki sleeping...wew, just the thought sends a smile on my face, ah but then again, that's not bound to happen at all........ :sweatdrop:

Rena's so kind and caring though for placing a blanket on Yuki, but lol, Rena's panicking over her own intimate gesture, lol, your fault Rena. Don't think of it too much, just go with the flow and everything will be alright~ I hope? :lol:

Hmm...I wonder, what was it in the past with Yuko? :?

Awkwardness is in the air, Rena's making it too awkward....but mah, stop being so tense Rena, there's nothing you can do anyways. Why was Yuki annoyed though when Rena started asking about whether Mayu had classes? Lol, jealous much are we? XD Aw, just soothe Yuki's pain will you Rena? A kiss and a hug would be fine? Ah...but Yuki seems to be the greedy type doesn't she? :lol:

....UWAH! Yuki so bold! :shocked
So close, so close that they can kiss....... What a tease.... :err:

Jurina being jealous of because of the order between Yuki and Rena and the kiss is so natural, I saw it coming even from 5 ft away......and now she's putting up the I-don't-want-to-go-to-school-because-I'm-not-feeling-well act. That's so cliche, its already hilarious to see her putting up that act, but I don't mind, because Jurina is being all cute here. Still~ That picklocking skills of her's is quite a trouble, not only for other people but for herself, see what you saw Jurina?

It's because you didn't knock properly that you had to see something that heartbreaking, if only you knew how to knock...but then again, you did it on purpose to see some confirmation, and now that you did, its gonna hurt you big time, again, you reap what you sow Jurina. :depressed:

......But did she had to call Rena an idiot? Rena doesn't even know that Jurina loves her, not like her love is that obvious...... :huhuh Well, Rena did want to go after her it seems, but then again.....we have Yuki here, the person from Rena's past, her first true friend maybe? She isn't just a stranger that Rena barely met Jurina, not like Rena or Jurina would know....only Yuki knows that of course...not like Yuki can tell Rena and Jurina something like that........ :sweatdrop:

Why did Yuki stop Rena though?
For selfish reasons? Or to let Jurina have some space from Rena? I can't read Yuki here all too well. :cool2:

Mah, thanks for the update, Mint-chan? ....I think I might stick to that... :cathappy:
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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 5 )
« Reply #52 on: April 28, 2012, 12:14:35 PM »
I have read some fic, about 3 or 4 fic...inculing jurina in that story, and all of that story
make jurina really suffer because of Rena (sorry for my poor english).

Im really love Yuki and Rena pairing, but see Jurina suffer a lot in so many fic in different story,
I think i will support Jurina right now...hope it will be Wmatsui and Mayuki..lol

Thank for the Update..and, again sorry for my poor english
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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 5 )
« Reply #53 on: April 28, 2012, 03:34:03 PM »
Wow wow wmatsui or gekkiblack couple?

I dont know which one its better...

Aww my kojiyuu... Haruna dont remember nothing .. Yuuchan is so heart-broked... Please rix it maybe hey need another kiss - evil grin -

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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 5 )
« Reply #54 on: April 30, 2012, 09:10:51 AM »
YES! Finally, I can comment on this!

Chapter Four: So~  :glasses: My deduction was right after all. Yuko got kissed and it WAS Haruna. LOL. HAruna is such a pervert when she gets drunk!  :hiakhiakhiak: Making Yukirin and Rena-sama kiss once more! Though...  :glasses: I think even I would do that. LOL! And Yukirin, ahh~ So cute! Leaning her head on Rena's shoulders! AHH~! I can just  :shy2: imagine the lovely scene in my head. It's so soothing to imagine, and makes me just... :luvluv1: Altoid-san, did you know that I actually dreamnt about the chapter? Yes. I did!  :sleep: It was such a lovely dream that all I wanted was to replay it over and over again! (along with the Chapter Three!) I guess that lucid dreaming is good after all! Especially since I could control what they were doing.  :wahaha: KojiYuu and YukiRena. :kekeke:

Chapter Five: Haha, Yukirin so blunt! But then...She's lovable that way~  :shy2: And Rena-sama is really unable to remember, huh? Well, that's alright. As long as she doesn't get those painful headaches and dizzyness, I'm fine with her unable to remember her Yukirin. They can just form new memories and stuff! And wow...Jurina got hurt.  :on speedy: She ran away! I can really understand how she felt after seeing the two being so close. though not really on the same level as her since I've never felt the same way as her. Go Jurina!  :mon beam: Run even faster and away from the pain! Shout it out to the beach or someplace where you can shout without getting scolded! :mon runcry:

*sigh* Rena-san was about to run after her, until Yukirin grabbed her and told her
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"Leave her."

:mon emo: My W Matsui....  :mon ref: *hic* Well...  :mon dunno: Rena-sama will still be in good hands even if she doesn't choose Jurina. She's got Yukirin and if she got tired of Yukirin, she has Airin.   :lol: So...  :mon thumb: Go ahead, Yukirin! I'll totally support you and Rena-sama! BUT! If there's going to be more YukiRena, I request for MORE scenes of them  :mon blood: kissing. On the cheeks.  :mon lmao:

And Altoid-san, I'll really call you Al, in exchange that you call me Rin.  :hee: And I think that the way I comment and make use of emoticons almost to the point of making a story with them  :lol: is kind of...weird. And such.

And yes! Without the great Yuko-sama's 'entertaining' personality, the game would surely turn out to be like one of the games I played before. we played that game last week, and the dares were so weak. And yes, I already managed to 'chill' but being able to dream of them and control the situation just makes me  :mon crazyinlove:

As for the epic words, Al-kun (can't go calling you 'Al-chan' with you calling me a bro  :lol:) You DO deserve them! :mon nyah: Deny it all you want and say that you don't deserve it. But I SHALL continue to bombard you with more epic words! once I've expanded my vocab  :lol: XD And of course, I won't jump of a window! That's just too common!  :mon dance: I'll just jump out of my father's building!  :mon lmao: Just kidding! I don't have the guts to do that!

And I can wait for my questions to be answered. It's not like I'm rushing you or anyway. I enjoy slow fics, or fics that move slowly?  :mon huh: I'm confused. I don't remember the word for it, and I'm too lazy to think hard for it. *sigh*

And my cousin did lie, lol. She said that she already knew what it was, and even called it the Pervert Game instead of King's game. And why not tell me?!  :mon annoy: Just because I'm young doesn't mean that you can't tell me! It has Jurina involved for goodness sakes!  :mon fierce: :mon fire: She's a year younger than I am! That's why... Al-kun :mon whimper: Please tell me!  :mon pray2: I wanna know!!!  :mon whine: Please? Pretty Pwease?  :mon cute:

And one more thing Al-kun!


THANK YOU FOR THE AWESOME UPDATES!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!!!
Had a withdrawal, so now I'm planning to fall in love with the couples all over again

\(^ - ^)/
Here are my fics~! They can be found amongst these three. :hee:

Shots
Love's A Mission
Oh My Dolly!


R.A.Y
SoUL (Series)


The Akiba Family (T.A.F)

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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 5 )
« Reply #55 on: April 30, 2012, 03:07:17 PM »
lolol yes...people are so honest when they're drunk  :lol:

HAHA WOOOO! KOJIYUU MADE OUT!  :w00t:   i feel so relieved LOL
BAHAHA omg jurina......shes scarred for life! this kid..i feel so sorry for  :P hahah kinda funny how haruna just forgot about the kiss and decides to make yuki and rena kiss instead xD  :lol: aww jurina and mayuyu is totally jealous and rena is slowly remembering yukis touch!

argh! poor yuko :( her nyan nyan doesnt remember anything! and why is it so depressing?! yuko needs some love from her nyan nyan! shes becoming good at hiding her pain now D: i want to give her a hug and pat her head and tell her that its going to be alright x.x

rena is definitely confused with her feelings for yuki ....OMG JURINA CAME IN! and yuki is stooping rena from going after her..what *pulls out hair* i dont know what to say about this.......

thanks for the update!  :thumbup

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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 6 )
« Reply #56 on: May 01, 2012, 08:36:38 AM »
@ haruhi16-san : thanks bro. o uob

@ pwoper48-san : Thanks. o uo
Aah.. Well, I'm trying the best I can at the moment now.
I have a big exam to take for a class in two weeks, and I suck in the class so I need to hardcore study. </3
I'll see what I can do. No promises though. ;;;
Jurina becoming heartbroke. OTL

@ bochang : no probs. o uo thanks for reading still. ~
ahahaa. ;; well something needs to happen. o xo and jurina happens to be the person?
Oh my. ; But at least good to know that you're Jurina's fan now. o uo ;;;
Ahaha. ;;
Either or she is just is that way?
Um... You should! :"D Because.. um.. you just should! > w> ;
... o wo *pat pat* there there.

@ sieka-san : Kekekeee. ~ Likely, likely. ;P

No one. :"D Just saying. ~ Since death always leads to dark stories. OTL Because it feel like you're becoming free when you write Gekikara's without retraint. Don't know? That's what I'm thinking. > W> ;
Well... What matters is that your having fun writing about Geki's action, I guess? Oh, hahaa. I see. > w> Yeah don't worry, I'll make it light at least.

Be so nice if there is a danso of Yuki cross dressing as a male. But that comercial of the tuxedo was nice though. * o*

... um... Uhhhh...  I don't know! How about mystery love type? Since Net seems a little weird. ;;

Etto... ;;;;;; *slowly back away* Niether? I - I was merely kidding about that part, dear Sieka-san.
You can write it instead. ;;

I guess? Honestly she has a mind of her own, currently. Seriously... Like I can't control her even if I'm the one writing it! asldaks, so I can't control how the way she shows affection to Rena. ;;
But but... ! Curiosity. But... At least the glare tells me she bad. *shot*

Okay okay. = u= At least you take the chances. *totally a wimp? :"D* Hahaa. some day something will happen, and you be in love. (~ o 3o)~
Even if you deny it right now who knows what the future has in store for you. o uo

Oh my oh my, bro. = 3= Depends if Yuko can take over my mind and write something better. ~

... B-but! It's rare to see you fangirl! So it makes total goal just to see you fangirl more! ; w;

Aah, okay. ;;; Uhh, yeah I will keep my promise? eheahaa. ;; *will flee before get murdered*
Either or is fine. doesn't matter, bro. o nob

Hnn. Yeah. it really depends how serious the memories is. As long you're able to cast aside the terrible memories.
Hopefully that'll be fine. They'll still be there, but at least it something you were able to get over of.

Jurina... Poor Jurina... It could have been worse!
... What!? D: No no no! e ue ; Don't know how life would be if Haruna is always drunk. She'll probably be another Yuko. = u= ;

Love.... Is everything! Painful and well... loving. More pain than love. ;;
But without pain there won't be love? o no ;

Psssh! I know somewhere deep down you are selfish! Just hiding that fact. e ue *keeping an eye on you, bro*
Hahaaa. xD When Yuki finds away to literally dominate Rena's body and mind. <33 she doesn't need to worry later. o 3o
... Probably better than close buds later. = 3= But, for now... Yeah. :"D ;;; Forever alone get buddies? ; AAAA;

She will. :"D It's almost done, so she's close in remember. I'm rushing it now to be honest. e ue ;; I can't think about any FF when I have an big exam coming up.
... Bro, it's fine... Yuki may forgive you, depending the choice you make. = w=

When they become roomates. Then definately. >D Hahaa. I don't know. Just got to wait an see? o nob

She really is? But eeh... :"D There another side she's not that caring? > w> ; Well for people who harm her friends that is.
She is going with the flow while being stiff! D: She has her own mind, but not like a boss as Yuki. ;AA;

... a secrect event? o uo

Tense cause the awkwardness. Then again it's just her. = u= Hey hey, she's talking about someone else beside Yuki, of course she would? :"D lol.
Because she hasn't seen Rena in years. Don't blame her for being greedy. o 3o ... lol. xD ;

xP I didn't write it. Yuki took over me there.

It's all about the cliche bro! Lol. Kiddin kiddin. It was everyone does anyways, seriously. = w=
Don't try picklocking, bro. Lesson learned for Jurina... Hopefully.
She will recover! For sure she will recover! From a tsundere.... cyborg... girl. :"D

Instincts calls!

o 3o

by the way. I'll get to the message some other day, when my immune system decides to be alive. ;
freaking tired so do anything! Dx


@ kurogumi-san : ... Because sometimes a wmatsui can never happen if Jurina doesn't get hurt by Rena? I'm probably just being cruel.
And it's fine. ~ you're english is fine, bro. o uob

... Ahaa. the intention right now is RenaYuki.
Well eventually I'll make a Wmatsui? But I can't say for sure that there won't be any drama.
and I don't know if I should make a " what if, " version for this ff. o no ;
bro, it's fine. xD ~


@ haruko-san : umm.... both? :"D
Hahaaaa. xD It will be fix. in the sequel after this one. o nob


@ karomuwi-san : Because of random roulette lead to this event happening. e ue ;
What? Oh my, Rin-chan. = w= Though you won't be drunk as Haruna. You'll probably do it purposely rather than do it when you're drunk.
Oh my. o uo You just really go fangirl so easily. o uo ... Is that so? > w> ; Umm. Don't know what to say Rin-chan. lol.
Though you weren't grin very widely when you were sleeping right? Since... Um... people would be curious why you're grinning. xD ;
Oh my... Did chapter 3 reall stuck in your mind. o wo ;;; Oh, bro. = w= You really can't stop amusing me.

Um.. Well. Like I said to Sieka-san... Yuki has her own mind when it comes to writing her. = n= ;; And apparently she wants to be blunt. lol.
... Umm. I can't promise you about Rena's getting headaches or anything of that sort. ;; But but... Yuki may just kiss the pain away? :"D
Of course they can. New and better memories. o wob

She's just devastated. Honestly, it really hurts. ;; But.. here it'll be a little less painful for Jurina?
Either she finds a place to scream. or a place to just weep. ;;;

Wow... bro.. *pat pat* You're not crying are you? ; Uuh.. pretty much. Yuki is there for her. kasjdlasd. NEVER! D: Not with Airin. I still can't accept her to be honest. e ne ;;
still can't accept the fact of RenaAirin yet. Maybe because I've been with wmatsui for three of fours years already, and RenaYuki for two years. <33 ;
Sorry, bro. I just can't see RenaAirin just yet. ;
You be dying if there were more RenaYuki huh? o uo

Um... Sure. o uob Rin-chan is fine with you?
DUDE! The emoticons you us totally fits, and it does makes mini story out of them! It's adorable. > w> ~

*pat pat* I wonder how long it have go, if Yuo never introduce the game. xD ;
Dude you seriously played it? e ue ; That eager to play such a game!?  oh my, bro.
Lol. you really an unbelievable. xD In a good way though. > w>

dfgkdfl;gdf. ugh! Seriously I do not! </3 Bro... Oh my god. Use those words for someone else! D:
I can't accept them bro. </3 ... You can jump out of your father's building if you're on the first floor, bro. = u=b

*pat pat* There there. o no

Hahahaaaaa. xD Oh my. Maybe she just didn't want to corrupt you until you're older. > w> ;;; Or she believed you'll forget. xD
... eeh. ;; oh.. o no then we're the same age for now, I guess? umm. I guess I not really a big deal.
maybe I'll just message you later when I'm back in full health. </3 until then, I'll leave you curious. lol.

IS THAT REALLY NECESSARY Rin-chan? You should have just leave it in normal text, bro! XD

@ pandah-san : Mhmm. It's find of scary though because sometimes they get a little pushy, you know what I mean? ;;

.. A short make out. OTL eventually it'll be longer.. when, I make the sequal arc for this.
Jurina. *pat pat her* She'll be fine... hopefully. ;;; Well when you're drunk you forget what you're doing.
Apparently she drunk enough on one can, to be able to for so easily.
Of course they would be. xP Seeing their precious one kissing different people. ... And who knows, that's a mystery until later. ~

because the author is a sucker for depressing stuff? lol. don't worry yuko will get some love!
just not right now. ;;;

she pretty. yeah.... e ue ;; but Rena decided to make yourself confuse, instead of allowing the author write it for her.
... :"D
thanks for reading, bro. and sticking with it. o uo

@ everyone : sorry about the shitty errors. kind of under the weather at the moment.
and stupidly exhausted. my immune system are failing on me again, so I'm getting easily becoming fatigue than usual.
So bear with me and the shittyness. I'll try to to go back to it and fix 'em later.
and I don't mind if you guys comment about the errors, really. helps me know where I need to work on.

also... I probably won't update in the next two weeks? Hardcore studying for a test subject I fail the most, not literally, but a class i struggle in.
since it's a fail professor for that class. Okay, I'll stop ranting now.
But I'll try get the whole story finish when I get back?
It's almost finish. I think? ;; Then on to the other arcs! ( prequels " Yuki's Past " , and sequeal to some of the other pairing? )
I'll still be around just commenting, maybe? Or just being a ninja and lurk.

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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 6 )
« Reply #57 on: May 01, 2012, 08:36:57 AM »
Chapter 6

It’s been one week and two days since that entire incident happen.

“Rena open up! Rena!” Yuko called, banging on Rena’s door. “Rena! It’s not your fault!” On the other side of the door was Rena curled up into a ball while she covered her ears. “What do I do?” Yuko muttered worryingly as she glanced at Yuki who just stood there with the same expression as Yuko.

“Why is she worrying about what happen that night?” Yuki asked in concern. “It couldn’t be help.”

Yuko gave a heavy sigh before answering. “Even so, she hating herself because she broke the promise we made.” Yuki raised a brow, but stayed quiet so Yuko can continue. “No… Not the promise. The fact that she is going to take over her.” Yuki then furrowed her brow, unsure what Yuko was trying to say.

“She? What do you mean by that?” Yuki demanded, her voice became cold and piercing that would have brought shivers to Yuko, if she wasn’t worrying over Rena.

Yuko couldn’t help but give another heavy sigh as she didn’t want to bring back the past. “What reason do you need to know is what I need to ask first?”

“She is my precious friend in the past.”

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‘Why do you ignore me? It’s been three days now.’ The voice groaned, becoming tired of being ignored by Rena. ’Heheheee. ~ Are you mad?’ The voice chimed.

Rena presses her hand to her ears more hoping the voice would go away. But, the voice continues to giggle and repeated the same questions. “Leave me alone.” She scowled at the voice.

She heard voice gave a gleeful giggle, finally getting an answer for the girl. The voice found Rena’s action amusing to as the voice decided to throw a question seeing that Rena finally responded to it. ‘Your precious neighbor and her friend would have been raped. ~ Would you have not care if they did?’

“I do care!” Rena snapped at the voice. “I wanted to save them, but in a way different way! Why did you come back? You knew I didn’t need you!”

The voice’s giggles echoed in Rena’s mind. ‘I’ll never go away Rena-chan. ~ ’ It mocked. ‘I am you after all. Hahahaa, even if you casted me into deep slumber, it doesn’t mean I’m gone.~’ The voice didn’t answer the question Rena wanted to hear so she asked, no, she demanded for the answer she seek. ‘Someone was trying to call you back.’ The voice calmly answered. Rena blinked then gave a confuse expression unsure what the voice was telling her.

“What are you saying?”

‘I mean exactly what I’m saying.’

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ONE WEEK AGO ( picking-up from Chapter 5 )

“Leave her.”

Rena’s eyes widen. She couldn’t believe what Yuki was telling, “I have to clear the misinterpretation.”

“She’s just being childish.”

“You don’t know her!” Rena snapped. Yuki eyes widen, her grip didn’t loosen as she gripped tighten around Rena’s wrist. “Her feelings… I was stupid to think it’ll just go away!” Rena feel on her knees, held her head down, as she try to hold her tears. “I-I knew she held feelings for me. B-but…. I thought that if I just ignored it…” Tears started to run down her redden cheek as she body started to tremble from holding herself back. “She would give up, but… I was stupid! I was stupid for pretending, I should have confront her instead!” Rena finally broke down as she started to weep, using her free hand to wipe the tears away.

“Rena…” Yuki mumbled with a deep frown, her heart felt broken seeing Rena weeping in front of her, she felt a sharp pain of guilt jabbing into her chest for stopping Rena from chasing after Jurina. Yuki finally let’s go of Rena’s wrist, as Rena brought the other hand to wipe her tears away. Yuki got off of her seat and went down on her knees as she watched Rena weeping in front of her. Yuki was hesitant as first, wondering if she was try to hug Rena to comfort her she would just push her away, but then she found the courage and wrapped her arms around Rena, pulling her into a hug.

Rena didn’t resist as she lean in more as cried into Yuki’s shoulder. Yuki was surprise that Rena didn’t resist, hugging her a little tighter; she then started to stroke her head to sooth her. She felt Rena’s body trembling under her embrace, and seeing her state Yuki couldn’t help but feel pity and guilt piling up on her. “I’m sorry.”  Yuki whispered and bit her lower lip. She felt Rena slowly shaking her head. Yuki should her shoulder soaked in tears, but she didn’t push her away, she only pulled her into a tighter hug. How she bemoan such event. If she knew Rena was going to break down, she would have let her go; better yet, she should have left the house when she woke up.

Thoughts ran to her mind, as every thought just kept breaking her heart little by little, but she didn’t weep like Rena. She fought against it, she endured the pain her thoughts gave her, she knew she couldn’t fix what was done, but she knew that she could lend Rena a shoulder, and be like a cloak that covers Rena’s tears from everything and everyone.

Two hours has passed as Rena finally calm down. She was now fast asleep on the sofa, completely fatigued from her break down, with the blanket over her that was used to cover Yuki.

Yuki was on her cell talking to Yuko, and telling her what happen. On the other side of the line she could hear Yuko sigh. “I’ll do what I can to find Juri-chan. Have you told the others?” Yuko asked in concern.

“No. I don’t think I should. It’s probably best to have less people worrying, but… I’ll ask Mayu to help.” Yuki leaned against the entrance door, as she held her head down and stared at her feet. Yuko mumbled a yes, as they then hanged up. Yuki looked down at her cell and dialed Mayu’s number. Brining the cell up to her ear, she heard the phone ran twice until someone picked up the line greeting Yuki happily.

“Mayu, I need to do something for me.” Yuki said a little coldly, hoping that Mayu got the idea that Yuki was being serious, but she didn’t.

“What is it?” Mayu wondered cheerfully.

“I need you to help me look for Rena’s neighbor.”

There was a then silence on the other line. “Mayu?”

“Why?” The voice no longer sounded happy, as it sounded more annoyed.

“Just do it, okay?” Yuki really didn’t want to beg to Mayu, she wasn’t in the thoughts to be even begging for anyone’s help, then again, she never like begging to anyone.

“Fine, just because you asked. That girl’s name was Jurina, right?”

“Yes. Thanks, Mayu.” She heard Mayu saying, ‘No problem,’ in a cheery voice before they hanged up. Yuki gave a small sigh as she placed her phone in the pocket of her pants. Walking back to the living room, she glanced at Rena who was still fast asleep. She walked over to the sofa and sat at the edge of the seat.

She stared as Rena’s pulchritudinous face. Everything was perfect about her, her skin wasn’t pale, she wasn’t thin, her lips had a nice shade of pink, just everything about Rena is perfect, to Yuki that is. “You really have grown to be more a princess.” Yuki gave a small smile; she lifted a hand, and brushed Rena’s bangs aside. “Here I thought you’ll grow into a prince.” The more she stared at Rena face; she felt her chest tighten as she had the urge to steal a kiss from the sleeping girl. Easily giving in the urge, she leans down and lightly presses her lips against the other. But then, she immediately pulled back when the girl shifted as a sweat drop rolled down her cheek, hoping she didn’t wake Rena up.

She did, Rena slowly open her eyes and look up at Yuki. “…You’re still here?” She muttered in a tired voice. Yuki mentally sighed in relief that Rena didn’t notice Yuki had stolen a kiss while she slept. As she nodded to Rena’s question. “Is Jurina --” She was stopped when Yuki placed an index on her lips, shushing her.

“She’ll be fine. Yuko and Mayu are going to search for her. Go back to sleep.” Yuki ensured her, giving a smile to her. Rena gave a small nod and closes her eyes, falling back a sleep. I wonder when you’ll remember me. Yuki wonders, as she felt something jab into her chest once more, shrugging it off she got up from her seat and walk toward to the door. She slipped on her shoes, borrow the umbrella in the basket, before she exited out of the house, and help the other two search for Jurina.
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After hanging up with Yuki, Mayu gave small sigh. “It has to be all about her. What about me?” Jealousy drifted within her heart. “I’ve been with her longer, what does she have that I don’t? I did the same thing that she did, then why?” All these questions Mayu couldn’t answer. Another sigh escaped her lips, she slipped her cell into her pockets before open the door to her class, and went back in.

An hour has passed as Mayu was finally out of class. It was her last class for today, until night reaches. Walking out of the building she looked up at the sky, seeing the heavy rain wasn’t going to lift up soon. Fortunately, she brought an umbrella with her. Digging into her bag she pulled out a simple pink umbrella. Opening it, she then walked into the rain as she made her way home first to drop off her bag before she searched for Jurina, like Yuki requested, but she did keep an eye out and looked around.

Walking up a small hill, she passed by a park as she stopped, and saw someone sitting on the swing, their head held down, and allowing themselves becoming drenched in the rain. Is that person insane? Mayu asked herself, quirking a brow. She then continue to walk ignoring the person, then something click to her head, walking backwards and look at the person again she realized it was Jurina. What the hell is she doing there? She slowly made her way to the girl on the swing, but the girl didn’t move her head up.

When Mayu was standing in front of Jurina, she tipped the umbrella a bit as it would also cover the girl. Jurina shot her head up when she didn’t felt the rain pouring on her anymore. Her eyes widen when she saw Mayu as she blinked several times before wiping the water from her eyes and sniffled a little. “What are you doing here?” Jurina mumbled.

“I could ask you the same question, person-who-is-going-to-freeze-herself-to-death.” Mayu watched the girl, seeing her eyes red as she believed she been crying this whole time, even if the tears were mixed within the rain the evidence still remained.

“Haa, none of your business. Leave me alone.” Jurina said, trying to sound a little cold, but it really didn’t work as her voice was a little shaky from the coldness.

“No can do.  If you’re planning to kill yourself, you’re just doing a slow and painful way.” She said with a deadpan expression.

“I’m not!” Jurina snapped, looking up at Mayu giving an irritated expression.

“Then what?” Mayu asked still keeping her same expression.

Jurina grew silent for a moment. Look away before answering, “I just want to be alone, okay? I don’t want to be at home. I don’t to be in anywhere! So leave!”

Talk about being nice. Mayu commented to herself. “Look, I don’t know what’s up with your sudden attitude, but freezing yourself to death isn’t a good idea. Your parents are going to be worry sick if they knew their daughter comes back soak, then suddenly go down with pneumonia.”

Another brief silence, Jurina understood what Mayu was telling her, but she didn’t want to be with a group of people, neither did she wanted to be at home with Rena next door, her mind wouldn’t be at ease knowing that she was next door. She couldn’t bring herself to face Rena yet, not what after she saw earlier, she still felt her heart pain from seeing such event. “Can I go to your place instead?” She asked in a soft whisper, but loud enough for Mayu to hear.

“W-what!?” She was shock, they barely knew each other and she asked if she could come over. What’s with this girl? “We barely know each other. Don’t you have like… your friends’ house to go to?”

Jurina nodded her head. “But… I don’t want them trying to bug me what happen, it’ll just be a pain.”

Mayu understood what Jurina meant because she did pester what happen to friend sometimes, when she catches her friend looking glum. And since she barely knew Jurina so she wouldn’t really pester her, neither did she want to since she had a hunch that it’s possibly about Rena, seeing that Jurina didn’t wanted to go home. A small sigh escape her lips, “Fine. Whatever, just call your parents, alright?”

“Yay!” Jurina jumped up and tackled hugged Mayu.

“Oi! Let go of me!” Mayu scoffed and tried to pull Jurina off. She felt her clothes becoming wet from Jurina embrace, as she wanted her off before she became soak herself.

Jurina finally release Mayu, and pouted at her while she gave her the puppy eyes.

Mayu eye twitched when she saw her pout. “What’s up with you? What’s with the sudden change of personality?”

Jurina shrugged her shoulders, “Because being depress isn’t good for the health.”

“I don’t understand you. At least you’re happy which is good, I guess.” She muttered at the end. “Anyways let’s go and get your dry. Don’t blame me if you get sick.” Jurina nodded with a bright smile, Mayu shrugs before she turns around and began to walk with Jurina next to her.

Jurina hasn’t fully recovered yet, she still felt depress, but she force herself to hold a smile. A smile that can lighten one own heart or so she always believes.

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“Don’t worry. She’s going to stay over.” Mayu said as she was speaking to someone.

A relief sigh was heard. “Thanks, I suppose I owe you one?” Yuki said, unsure if she should have said that.

“Aa. How about a date?” Mayu said, sounding a little happy.

“Mayu…”

“I know, I know. I’m merely kidding.” Mayu wasn’t really kidding, but, she couldn’t help it.

“I’ll find a way to repay you back.”

“No it’s fine. If it’s from you I don’t mind.” Mayu sincerely answered.

A faint sigh was heard. “Thanks again. Well… Bye.”

“Mhm. Bye.” Mayu hanged up as she jumped on the bed, face first. Then a click was heard, and the door open revealing Jurina wearing a plain white t-shirt and shorts, with a towel draped over her head.

“Who was that?” Jurina ask drying her hair with the towel.

“Yuki, why?” Mayu notice Jurina’s expression pained, but quickly brought a smile and shook her head.

“Nothing, just wondering.” Jurina sat on the bed, next to Mayu. Mayu stayed silent about Jurina’s expression, not wanting to pester about it, as she handed Jurina her cell.

“Call you parents that you’re over.” Jurina nodded, and took the cell as she then dialed her mom’s number. Mayu watched Jurina as she talk to her mom, and then she got up from her bed, “I’m going to take a shower.” She whispered as Jurina simply nodded, and continue to talk to her mom.

Did something happen? Mayu asked herself, grabbing her change of clothes and went to the bathroom. I wonder what....

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For the next several days Jurina has been sleeping over at Mayu’s place, but, often Jurina would go home to get her school supplies and see her mom while she tries to avoid Rena. Even after school, she would use a different route to exit than the usual route to avoid running into Rena. When Rena called her, she would simply ignore the call. Jurina knew she was being selfish, but she couldn’t bring up the courage and face Rena. She still felt broken, and not anytime soon the broken pieces of her heart will be put back together. Although, Jurina was able slowly recovering the little pieces whenever she with Mayu. She found Mayu’s company enjoyable even though she acted like a little tsundere, whenever Jurina attempts to hug her or show any sort of affection to her, but she found them amusing, even if Mayu doesn’t find them amusing.

Mayu watched Jurina during those passing days, dealing with Jurina’s random affections, while she watched Rena. Yuki and Mayu kept silent to Rena about Jurina staying over at Mayu’s place, as they merely told her that Jurina was busy doing school projects, they even convinced Jurina’s mom to follow the act. But they wonder, how long would they be able to keep the masquerade up?

Rena didn’t seem to be the same person when Mayu first met her. She nudged Yuki during class time to time, wondering how Rena was doing, but Yuki merely shrug unsure what to say. When Yuki finally told Mayu what happen, she was devastated; she understood why Jurina would react that way she did when Mayu found her in the rain, when she heard what Yuki told her, she too felt the pain Jurina had, but it wasn’t worse as Jurina’s. She could only muffle an, ‘oh,’ when Yuki told her. Silently, she watched Rena becoming more and more out of it. And when she saw Yuki giving a pain look whenever she saw Rena, Mayu also felt her hear pain whenever she saw Yuki. She helplessly watch Yuki being in pain, wishing she could help her, but couldn’t.

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“Hey do you want to go out for a night stroll?” Jurina asked closing her book, and turned around in her seat.

“Have you finished your homework at least?” Mayu answered with a question, looking away from the book she was reading and stared at Jurina.

Jurina gave a small pout, as Mayu instantly knew she wasn’t finished, giving a sigh, she closed her book and took off glasses, and lay them both down on the bed. “Whatever, as long you finish it when we get back.” She got off the bed.

Jurina burst into glee, jumping out of her seat, and hugged Mayu. “Aargh! Get off of me! Would you quit doing that?” She struggled to push Jurina off, but only get a tighter embrace.

“Nope ~ !” Then Jurina finally released Mayu, and gave her usual cat smile.

Mayu massages her temples, “Ugh, I can’t believe you. Are you like that with everyone?” She looked up at Jurina who now held a bitter smile. Feeling guilty for the sudden change of atmosphere, “Anyways, let’s go!” Mayu said leaving. Jurina brightens again, and gave a nod as she followed Mayu.

They walked next to each other in silence, enjoying the night time weather. It wasn’t freezing, it wasn’t hot, it felt rather calming with a small wind blowing against their skin.  The night sky was also soothing while there were faint stars twinkling in the sky. Mayu and Jurina would stop and stared as the sky in awe, before they continue to walk. They made their way into the night town, seeing many convenience stores, restaurant, an arcade, and night clubs open.

“I never knew a lot of places open at night. Well except for convenience stores.” Jurina said in amazement.

“Really?” Mayu quirked a brow, “You don’t go out to town that often at night?”

Jurina shook her head. “Mom always worrying about the danger at night. So I don’t go out unless I’m in the car. But I’m always sleeping in the car rides.”

“Aa, is that so? Well I don’t blame her. The night can be dangerous.” Mayu close an eye and scratched a cheek with her index.

“Hahaa, I guess. Oh hey! Let’s go to the arcade!” Jurina said pointing to the arcade.

“Sure.” Mayu nodded, as Jurina ran off to the arcade while Mayu simply walked.

They spend most of their time playing in the arcaded. They played varieties of games more than once, and also took silly picture together in the booth.

After it was almost closing time, Jurina walked out of the arcade was laughing her guts out, while Mayu’s face was red as she puffed out her cheeks. “Oh, oh my god! That’s so hilarious! I never imagine someone so weak at punching!”

“Shut up! My kicks are better than my punches!” She crossed her arms and huffed. Then she saw three men walk down the streets, coming towards Jurina, while Jurina was coming towards them without looking. “Ah, Jurina watch out!”

“What?” Before she was able to react she bumped into of the men as she stumbled backwards, but was still able to get her balance. “Whoa, sorry about that.” She sincerely apologized and gave a small bow.

Then men in the middle click his tongue, he was the tallest among the group, look to be in his late twenties or earlier thirties, short hair, pretty built, so Jurina assumes since she bump into him. He dresses in a business suit along with the other two by his side, but everything was disorder and loose, making him look sluggish. “Well, look what we have here boys. Someone decided to run into me without looking.” Two males, which look around the same age as the one in the middle, both snickered.

Jurina furrowed her brow, “I did apologize.” Mayu came up to Jurina, and lightly tugged her clothes.

“Jurina, let’s go. Quick.” Mayu whispered, worryingly what’s going to happen.

The male in the middle ignored what Jurina said, and continue. “Oh, and there’s another girl along. How great.” He whistles. The male on his right spoke, “But… Looks like one person is going to be the odd one out.”

“Hey girls, what do you say about having a nice time with us, hm ~ ? It’ll be a blast I promise.” The middle said, putting his hand in his pocket and lean forward.

Jurina became a defensive, keeping Mayu behind her. “Sorry, we’re not interested in such. We prefer to be home.”

“Oh ho ho ho. ~ Playing hard to get, aye? This guy here love gals that are hard to get.” The middle snickered, causing only Jurina to become even more defensive and took a step back.

Jurina turned her head slightly and whispered softly enough that only Mayu could hear, “Run.”

“What? I can’t leave you!” Mayu answered worryingly, she didn’t agree to Jurina’s idea. She couldn’t leave her knowing it was her responsibility of watching over Jurina.

“Oi oi? What are you talking about? Won’t you like to share with us?” The male on the left demanded in a husky voice. He took a step closer, a bit too close for Jurina’s comfort zone.

“Now.” Jurina demanded.

“Hey c’mon now.” The left man was about to reach out to grab Jurina, but before he could she threw a full blown punch at his face, sending him flying off his feet a little, as she also kicked him in the balls, leaving him paralyze on the floor. The other became shock at such action, as they couldn’t believe to see someone so young to deal that much damage to one person.

“Run!” Jurina shouted, turning around and grabbed Mayu wrist, pulling her along as they ran the opposite direction. She could hear the men shouting after Jurina and Mayu. Crap! Fortunately for them, the two men lagged a little worrying about the third guy on the floor paralyzed.

“Why didn’t you run when I told you?” Jurina snapped while they were running, with the three men following right behind them.

“I can’t leave you!” Mayu shouted back.

“You’re not in a condition to say that! Shit!” They made several turns hoping it would get the three male off their tail, but it didn’t. They were still able to follow them. Jurina cursed under her breath while she ran still dragging Mayu.

She reached into her pockets, and without hesitation she dialed Rena. She didn’t want to dial 119, seeing that the service was crap in this situation, so she called Rena instead, really hoping she could save them.

Several rings until a tired voice answered. “…Hello?”

“Rena it’s me!”

“Eh!? Jurina, what --”

“No time! Help us!” Jurina said panicking.

“Where are you right now?”

Jurina couldn’t tell where they were, but she gave brief description as Rena immediately knew where they were. Rena could hear unfamiliar shouts over the phone, along with Jurina’s heavy breathing.

“Oh shit!”

The call was cut off.

To be Continue in Chapter 7

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SNIPS PREVIEW TO CHAPTER 7 ( it's not actually the official, so you may not see it in chapter 7? Who knows. o no )

"W-who.... who are you?"

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"Jurina-chan. ~" She called her name, a wide grin creeping on her face as she walked over to Jurina. Jurina couldn't move, she was too terrified to move, she felt as if something had glued to her the ground while she stare into those familiar, and yet unfamiliar eyes. The figure leaned forward, and wiped the small splattered blood off her cheeks....

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'...Hehehe, then how I about I give you a little refresher?’ Images started to flash into Rena mind, thousand of images flashing less than second. Rena shut her eyes tight; she held her head and curled into a tighter ball, “Nngh!” Her head throbbed in pain, everything was too much for her to handle she wanted it to stop. “S-STOP!”

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"When I found her.... She was bleeding to death." Yuko said painfully, recalling such horror memories, as she bit her lower lips.


So the beginning was meant to be in chapter 8, but I decided to throw that in so you guys know what to suspect. o uo because I'm being kind? lol. don't know.

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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 6 )
« Reply #58 on: May 01, 2012, 08:40:01 AM »
first! will edit this after read :D
Finished! and i'm still the first!!!! :D


i... i don't know but i get teary eyes when i read the flashback..
I can see JuriMayu in the air! :D i hope so. LOL
so at least jurina will be happy. :D
Jurina! Stay strong!! :D

and after read the last part of the flashback and some spoiler for chapter 7..
i just realized the first part in this chapter..

someone gonna died? and it's not rena or yuki..
don't tell me it's jurina or mayu!!! HUAH!!! NO!!
don't kill any of them!!! Please al-san!!

and don't tell me that the one who made someone bleeds to death is R-r..rena..
*heartbeat stopped for a minute*

please let my prediction false!

and thx for this breathtaking update..
when i read this chapter i can feel my heartbeat getting faster, tears starts to well up in my eyes, and yet i'm smilling.. LOL
too much emotion in my mind right now. LOL

hope that you can success in that class al-san! Hwaiting!
yeah, sometimes i also get some douchebags lecturer. LOL stay strong! you're not alone! :D
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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 6 )
« Reply #59 on: May 01, 2012, 09:59:18 AM »
Ahahaha~!  :hiakhiakhiak: You're right! I would definitely do it on purpose while making everyone think that I'm drunk to keep myself from getting killed the following day! And yes...I do easily fangirl when it comes to great authors such as you. I mean, authors such as yourselves deserve to have fans like me.  :hee:
I think that I did grin while I was sleeping  :sleep: because when I woke up, I woke up with a smile and I was such in a happy mood!
I'm glad that I amuse you Al-kun!  :hee: I will amuse you even more as times passes by. ^^

Since I can't write Yukirin being blunt and all, I'll try to think of a way to make her seem so by reading your fic. It's a great referrence for me, since I can just think of several plots in my head! But...Unfortunately, I'm too lazy to write them down.
And if Yukirin were to kiss the pain away...  :shy2: Rena-san might just take advantege of her! (though with her princess-like personality, that's nearly impossible)

And I'm actually glad that Jurina ran away from the scene. Will help in lessening the pain.
Well, to be REALLY honest...  :mon sweat: I'm still not that comfortable with RenAirin. I mean...I've been a W Matsui fan for nearly two years (I've only been an AKB48 fan for two years ) and they were the first couple I really did Fangirl about. As for YukiRena, I've only started shipping them ever since I watched MG 2 and read Sieka-san's Chinmoku.

Long sentence short,  :mon dunno: I still prefer W Matsui and YukiRena over RenAirin. RenAirin is just like a crush for me  :mon exhaust:, whilst W Matsui is forbidden love  :mon inluv: (Incest) and YukiRena forbidden love for princesses  :mon blood:. There's just a major spark for the two pairings for me  :mon spit:. Well, I'll be fine with whoever Rena-sama chooses actually. :bigdeal: I'll support her! :onioncheer:

Well, Al-kun...Deal with them! They can bring you inspirations if you ever feel down!  :mon geek: Well, :bigdeal: That's what I do when I'm depressed. I always re-read the comments for my fics...and BAM!  :mon yeah: I'm surging with happiness and energy. Just like what others say, "The comments are our life." That's why, I always make sure that those who deserve them knows it.  :mon geek: That's why you should accept it, Al-kun! Comments makes us fanfic authors energy and life! It's the medicine that no science can make! (am I saying that right?   :mon lol:)

Anyway, onto the comments! I've been blabbering! LOL!

Chapter Six: So...Rena-sama broke the promise of probably...  :mon huh: killing or fighting? So... now Gekikara-sama might take over.  :mon determined: Very interesting, Al-kun. Extremely!
I really like how you made Gekikara-sama tease and talk to Rena-sama like that. It reminds me of how I become whenever I do something I regret and my sadistic conscience talks.  :mon cweepy: She's very creepy, I tell you. *shivers* Sometimes I wonder, whether I'll become like Gekikara-sama if my conscience ever gets control of me. :bigdeal: oh well, means happiness for me then! :hiakhiakhiak:

Jurina and Mayu would have been raped?!  :mon ghost: Rena-sama! I beseech you! :kneelbow: Let Gekikara-sama out for a while to send them to pandemonium!  :mon mad:
So...Gekikara-sama remembers her dearest Yukirin. Interesting.  :glasses:

And wow, Rena-sama actually knew about Jurina's feelings. Wow... Now I pity Jurina even more. BUT! I still support Rena-sama in her choice! I mean, even I did what she had done to Jurina. So.... Go YukiRena! :onioncheer:

I was actually surprised when Yukirin grabbed Rena-sama and prevented her from running after Jurina. I mean, most of the time... (let's make Yukirin 1, Rena as 2 and Jurina as 3) I always read the 3 running away with 2 after them, and 1 just staying there feeling guilty and such. But this... You really took me aback, Al-kun!
As for what happened after that...Yukirin felt guilty and STILL stole a kiss.  :mon lmao: My god, Yukirin! You're so weak when it comes to Rena-sama! But then... I somehow wished that Rena-sama slept longer for Yukirin to kiss her some more.  :mon inluv:

I'm glad that Mayu decided to help Jurina, it means that JuriMayu is in progress! Maybe? LOL!

And now~ For the snippets that Al-kun is not sure whether it'll really be in Chapter 7  :lol:

Hmm~ so far they're really making me crave for an update. The
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"W-who...who are you?"
made me think of Rena going berserk and one of the douchebags asked her the question. Or maybe its a passer-by? :hiakhiakhiak:
So with the blood on the cheeks of the girl who called her, which I suspect is Rena-sama, I deducted that she 'took care' of those jerks. Well done, Gekikara-sama!  :mon dance:

And Yuko's sentence....made me already wonder what had happened.

MOU~! Al-kun! You're such a tease! Making me crave and wait for the next update! Mou~!  :mon annoy:

Anyway....


THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE, AL-KUN!!!!
Had a withdrawal, so now I'm planning to fall in love with the couples all over again

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Love's A Mission
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