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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 6 )
« Reply #60 on: May 01, 2012, 10:32:47 AM »
Uh, you'll have an exam? Well, me too. :panic:
You suck at class? Me too!
But sometimes i have those "small paper from God" that help me on exam :D

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Well, thanks for the update, i like it :twothumbs
And, yeah, I'm curious what will happen next. :? Especially about what will happen to Jurina and Mayu. But i think, that the Gekikara on Rena will appear and take the lead!!

And... Just take your time with you hardcore study

I'll be waiting for the update here 8)

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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 6 )
« Reply #61 on: May 01, 2012, 01:43:31 PM »
omg i just realised i made so many typos in my last comment LOL i totally didnt read over it  :sweatdrop:

ah yes i know what you mean  :yep: 
hohoho a longer make out session with kojiyuu mmm im totally liking that  :w00t: ah yes you have no idea what you're doing when you're drunk...its like you become a whole new person!

ooh i wonder what the mystery is going to be  :P
haha its okay i like depressing stuff too :) sometimes i like the feeling it gives me...might give me a heart attack one day though LOL
this confusion is definitely confusing  :banghead:

OMGAH! renas inner geki is coming out again!  :O but shes trying to suppress it! whats gonna happen~~
YUKI STOLE A KISS FROM RENA! that sly girl  :P rena woke up too easily she shoulda slept for a bit longer lolol
*whistles* i see some mayujuri here! they're getting so close xD and jurinas all clingy on mayu *hugs self* so cuteeee! although they do still have feelings for yuki and rena respectively :( maybe they can both LOVE EACH OTHER!  8)

mayu and jurina is about to get raped! omg! SHES STILL A KID! D: wheres mayuyus super fighting skills! oh man renas gonna come and might end up killing these men  :panic:

AHHHHH THE PREVIEW!! fhuwfhiuewafheuir i have gibberish spouting outa my mouth..i cannot form any words anymore.... :hand: i have died

thanks for the update!  :thumbsup

p.s dont get sick! take care of yourself and i will prob disappear for the next month until my semester is finished as well...gl to the both of us  :twothumbs

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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 6 )
« Reply #62 on: May 01, 2012, 04:43:59 PM »
Death leads to more problems needing to be ironed. ^w^llll I mean, if you kill the character off, you need to arrange the set, like the atmosphere, the mood of the character and their thoughts, and that takes quite a lot of job. :3 But it does make the story dark, in a way, but more on the emotional side.

I'm enjoying writing Gekikara, yet...yes, there's a big YET on that, its tiring, having to write her, I need to use my knowledge in vocabulary. :catglare:

Yuki could pass as a cool guy in that tuxedo yah know. :L

Mystery love? Doesn't that seem more weird? ............How about Root type? Xwxlll

I'm not joking though my dear author......I'm serious you know. :glasses: :shifty:

Is that even possible? (OA O
So its like, your chanting Yuki and she's doing everything? Or is it just your inner RenaYuki fangirl that's doing it? :lol:
The question itself was rather.......lol, bad, and lol, she told you that through a glare? :lol:

I prefer not to fall in love, right now and in the future. (ow o

Let the inner Yuko in you control you then! :frustrated:

Aw come on', I want to keep my pride and keep myself oriented, don't do that, me fangirling takes away half of my morals. :lol:

You better keep your promises dude......... :shifty:

True, though it also depends on your capability to handle your emotions well, if you can't, then even the most smallest sad things in the past can hurt you. :3

I wonder if Jurina would suffer more here though.....seems like it in this update. (ow o
Haruna as the second Yuko is fine just as long as she's targeting Yuko. :hehehe:

Ehh........well, that's true. Love can't be balanced out without pain, I mean, its weird without it, you need to at least get hurt while in the process of loving someone in order for your affections to grow strong.............. :sweatdrop:

I am selfish, but I'd also like to think of the consequences first of my selfishness before being one. :lol:
My solution for Yuki is to make Rena drunk and have her take responsibility if anything happens to them on that day. :lol: If Yuki can't dominate Rena's mind, then she might as well try to dominate her mind, or make Rena feel responsible....... :P

Forever alone buddies, I like the title you know. (ow o
I kind of see it in JuriMayu, I mean, them being forever alone and stuck together, until they realize they actually have one another, oh lol, facepalm when major accident happens when they suddenly realize that, so much angst.........and my angst plot bunnies are skipping wildly over that thought. :lol:

Don't rush, take your time when you can write. Also, good luck with your exams! :thumbsup
Depending on the choice I make? What make her cuddle up with Rena all day in bed or something so she'll forgive me? (OA Ollll

When they become roommates, who knows what happens........... :lol:
...........Sorry, I think I'm implying something........dayum, my mind.... lllllllorz

Mah true, that's how you built Rena's character here, somehow, it kinda fits perfectly with Yuki's.......... :lol:

Do you want me to dig up that secret? :huhuh

I'm not blaming Yuki for being greedy, its fine to be greedy as long as you have a good standing point! >:3 Also, Rena needs to loosen up around Yuki, everything will just turn tense and awkward if she doesn't lighten up. :lol:

I don't know how to picklock anyways dude, it's not like I'm planning to be a thief. :lol: With Mayu with Jurina, I know she'll be back up somehow, I mean, Mayu is the perfect companion to take away your mind from drama. :3

Don't worry dude, reply when you can and take care of yourself, I told you to sleep early! :sweat:

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I wonder what happened that made Rena lock herself up? Maybe she unleashed her inner Gekikara and it took over, beating up people and making a bloody mess..........if that happens, she might have felt guilty for it. And Yuki told a valuable secret to Yuko! Omg, will Rena actually hear this from Yuko? Will Yuko tell Rena that Yuki is a friend from the past? Wait a second, will Yuko even tell Yuki? She does have a right to know.......I bet she would, one way or another. :3

Gekikara's talking to Rena! Gekikara's talking to Rena! Geki----wait a second.........why does this seem familiar? OwOlll
It's like that scene in my own fic, Chinmoku, where Geki's talking to a voice. *le gasp* I wonder if this voice here, Gekikara, is evil.....or harmless, and will help Rena around? I hope so, I don't want Gekikara to be like that voice in my fic, urging her to destroy and kill. :smhid Though it does seem that Geki's helping Rena, remember that is........and she seems to know that Yuki's trying to make Rena remember her......

Wew, Yuki sure knows how to work her ways, even calling Mayu and asking her to look for Jurina. I feel bad for Mayuyu, Yuki doesn't like her yet she's willing to go that far to do something for Yuki, I hope Yuki would repay Mayu's kindness by freeing her from her emotions and help Mayu move on by making her fall for someone else...........

Yuki so sly! You are so getting slier by the next chapter Yuki! I wouldn't be surprised if you made your way in another totally devious way..............but lol, did you just have to steal a kiss from Rena when its your whole fault why she cried? Geez, I thought your guilty, please act like one Yuki! Being greedy is bad right now! :lol: :lol: :lol:

JuriMayu! Looks like their starting to become good friends, I like the development, at least Jurina is leaning onto someone aside from Rena...... :lol: But dang, looks like their in trouble. I don't feel all too worried though because I think Yuki and Rena will get there and save them before anything happens. :3 Just that, I think Rena will come as Gekikara instead. :3

Lol at the preview, I see Gekikara here, though I'm curious of what Yuko said, she might as well have told Yuki about what happened.......... :lol:

Thanks for the update. :cathappy: Good luck on your exams again! :on GJ:
Take care of yourself, and go to sleep early dude, or I'll throw a table at you. :farofflook:
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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 6 )
« Reply #63 on: May 01, 2012, 04:57:12 PM »
this is too awesome!!!  :inlove:
Rena & Yuki! Mayu & Jurina  :wub:
i love the pairings  :twothumbs
cant wait for your next update!!!
thank you so much for writing such a great fanfic!

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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 6 )
« Reply #64 on: May 06, 2012, 01:18:15 AM »
@ everyone : soo... chapter 7, umm.. yeah Not going to updated until after the exam, sorry guys. > A> ; And... I'm almost back in full heath. ... Not yet. Sorry to worry about that you guys. ;;;;
Anyways. This is not really here for comment. But update something else! :"D
After running through my other computer, I found an old mini story and uncompleted fic document under a pile of homework documents, and I thought it would be nice to share. <33
Also, I'm posting up a one shot of KojiYu, it's not related to FM ( Forgotten Memories ). It came from an inspiring artist that gave me an idea.
And it's my way to thank you guys for being awesome and dealing with the terrible story I'm making. :P And that goes to the ninjas too! Hiding in the shadows. o uo
All the post is going to separate since it'll be neater that way. AND THANK YOU GUYS AGAIN FOR BEING AWESOME BROS! ; wwww;

@ bochang-san : Hahaaa. > w> Fast reader aye?

Eeh? Really? o no ;; Even if flashbacks aren't sad or depressing?
Hahaaa. ~ It's possibly so bro. > w <
Getting support from Mayu, she'll be fine. Same with Mayu.
They're supporting each other even if they don't know it. xP

Mhmm. = w= It meant as a foreshadow, so you guys have a hint what's going to happen.
... umm. I can't tell you who.
But I can tell you that someone does die.

A hey! D: Bro don't go dying! ; AAA;
And I can't tell you. o xo ~ It can be so or not.

I should be thanking you for reading bro. o wob
Is that so?
Eh, sorry about giving you all the emotion building up? ;;

Thanks bro. = w=b Will try.
They're not fun, right!? But good to know that. ; w;b
Hope that you stay strong against those lectures as well if you're dealing with them!

@ Karomuwi-san : Wait a second.. you're only a minor though! They won't believe you're drunk. > A>
and don't really get yourself drunk actually drunk either. = u=)/ I'm not here to support minor drinking.
Also also... You may still get yourself killed if you were pretending to be drunk.... Maybe?
Eh!? Yo, I'm not that great bro. I see though. o no *pat pat head*
Oh? hahaa. xD Well as long you're still in a happy mood when you wake up. o uo
:"D ;;; Umm.. thanks?

You just need to let your inner Yuki take over you. = w=b Hahaa. I see. Glad it helps then.
Ha. xD Just write them down whenver you feel like, Rin-chan. xP And as long they are still in your head.
No! Rena shall not take advantage of Yuki! Gasp! Though that would be a dream come true. ; w;
Lol. That would only happen if Rena was seriously drunk or something. xP

Well, if Jurina stayed don't know what will happen. lol. Can't image what will!
know how you feel. = u=b Aa, I see. Hahaa. xD Well good to know that Sieka-san and MG2 got you into that shipping. o uo
Aah, okay. xD At least you at least accept it a little. I just can't se it myself yet! </3
It's not even incest dude! xD Only if you make them sister in your ff! lol. YukiRena makes sense yeah. xD
Good to know you're supporting her all the way. ;3

Ugh. You've got me. Yeah, I understand what you mean. :P I'm not too much the type to appriciate such words from people.
Since it just feel wasteful on someone like me. I'm fine with a simple thanks that's why. xD ;;;
Lol. It's fine you blabbering. xD

What happen is a mystery, bro. ~ Actually, didn't I mention it in chapter one? xD Yuko and Rena made a promise not fight anymore.
I think. *goes back to chapter 1, don't even remember myself now* xP
She might, she will. > w> ~ Hahaa. I try not to make Gekikara a jerk to Rena much as possible?
There's a meaning behind why and how Rena is talking to her Gekikara. and it shall be said or hinted in the next chapter.
Totally know how you feel when you have the conscience talking to you. She can't be that bad? Maybe you just fear your conscience. o no ;;
Ummm. Trust me, you don't want to if it involves getting your friend or yourself seriously hurt. ;
If it just a mild point where you're totally amuse watching your friend behing furious and angry at you, but not much to hate you then get all that happiness you want.

Umm. Yes they would've. Lol. There's a reason why she's doesn't want to.
Mhmm. Reasons.... It's a mystery to the next chapter. ~

Yeah. I tried not to hint it so you guys wouldn't know that Rena knew. o xo And made you guys think she just dense.
Jurina will be fine. She has Mayu now.... Maybe? :"D Hahaaa. Oh my. xD

You really thought it was going to be a cliche moment? Lol.

Lol. Don't worry Yuki is going to reflect on that later. xD Umm. Rena has to be knocked cold if that were to happen. o 3o

Maybe, bro. ~ Likely.

The snippets are going to be in it. Just added more to it. xP
Uhhh. Sorry?

Hahaa. Just a crazy assumptions that I can't answer. o uo ;;;
Of course! Since the beginning of chapter 6 said all.
.. umm... I'm sorry? ;;

@ Pwoper48-san : So so... I'm not the only person who's suffering? ; www;
At least you're lucky for those. lol. Good luck to you bro.

all your thoughts will be said in chapter 7. o wo ;
Aa, thanks bro.

@ Pandah-san : Bro it's fine. Don't worry about it too much. ;

Mhmmm. ~ ;3 There will be one. Just not in the story. More likely in the sequal, yep. I'll make sure of it.
Oh yeah. And being drunk is bad. You're exposing too much of yourself. ; ww;
Midly drunk is fine, right ~ ? :"D

Hnnn. ~ If Rena being around Yuki slowly makes her remember is the mystery for the last chapter or the next. o 3o
They're nice... sometimes. Totally understand you there. ... ;; It will give you a semi-heart attack so no worries. o wob
I'm sure you're strong enough not to get a heart attack!
*pat pat* o no

Dun dun duuuuuun. That's a secrect that can only be anwer in the update. o uo
Hahaa. Says a lot that Rena is possibly a light sleeper. xD
Mayu is a support to Jurina, even if Mayu doesn't know it. xP Of course though, it's not easy forget the person you love the most. *heavy sigh*
Hahaa. If my Mayu and Jurina muse allows me to write that in their sequal for them. xD

Dun dun duuun. :< Mayu is pretty much a weakling in this one. ; AA; Aa, who knows. She save them that for sure.
But, how is the question... Hmmmmm..

ACK! No don't die! *pulls soul back into body* ; AAA;
No probs.

Aa, thanks bro, I appriciate it. > W> I see, alright then. Best of luck to you too bro!

@ Sieka-nee? : Oh yeah. It does but... it's not so bad if you understand the mood of it. I know what you mean though.
It pretty much is. *going to kill a character off one of these days* xP Yeah, it'll be heavy if you get it just right.

Aa, I see. Well you got the dictionary to help you there bro. = w=b

Hahahaa. Guess she can. xD If she get the right touch of looking badass. ~ ;3

Oh, fine. xD We'll just leave it as root love then. xD ; Root though... hnn.... = u= ;

EEEH!? Etto... ;;;; C-can it at least be a toy weapon then!

Yeah it is.
What? no! xD It's just my Yuki muse just pretty much take over what I write when it's her part.
Hahaaa. If that was the case I will dominate both RenaYuki. >3 And write what I please to write! Muhahaha ~
Sorry? Do you have a better way to place it? And I only assume that way!
I mean. if you ask that kind of question and they glare are you, you'll likely know the answer!
If they were good, wouldn't they tell you straight out? o no

Hnnn. I see. = w=

No! The inner Yuko doesn't need to do so! xD

Psssh. > w> I'm not going to break down your pride that bad. ... hnnn. I don't mind if that happens to you. ~ o uo

Okay okay. ;;; Well, I hope it's a good reason? Uh. hope. ;

Mhmm. o no Which is bad if you're not strong enough. But, eventually over time you'll be able to deal with them.
Just in a slow and painful way honestly.
... Hnnnnn. = w= I can't really say. If Jurina muse allow me to make her suffer more then I will. o:
It'll be patch up later though by a certain person. ~ ;3

Hahahaa. Oh you. xD Now it's a mystery how Haruna thoughts are when she's drunk, and act like a second Yuko.

At least get hurt by love several time. Mhmm. And fight through it! O< Because then you know it true love and not a simple crush. o wo

Hahaaa. Good to know you think a head first. xD
Oh my! I don't think Yuki has the heart to get Rena drunk really. Unless Yuko throws in another King's Game, and Rena happen to get drunk from the order.
Lol. Don't think Rena can try to dominate Yuki. Rena isn't like how she was in the past. If she still was for sure that can happen! xD

It makes total sense for them. It's sad, but it fits. </3
Both feeling rejected by the person they love. ; w; Lol. Bro, don't you like it when your mind run wild. xD

Aah, rush is needed. Need to get everything of my head before I accidently start writing the story on the test. lol.
The people who corrects the test, they'll be like, "Hnnnn. It's a very nice story there, but it's not the promt you're suppose to write for the essay."
Could imagine that happening. xD ; And thanks for the luck. o uo)v
Hnnn. Hahahaa. xD Don't know, maybe she'll forgive you if you do that?
Talk to your inner Yuki muse. o no And see the answer.

Muhahahahahaha! > u> Many stuff will happen! Many stuff!
Lol. xD It's fine. ~ So many stuff will happen if they became roommates. ~ Oh, inner Yuko muse you'll be so enjoyed with the site. ~ <33

It's best to try to fit the characters together. If not, it'll be a little boring?

What? No!? .... what secrect are we talking about again? :"D

And whatever happens, she got to reflect on it. .... Yuki will break her stiffy-ness! O< That will be her goal!
Unless Rena get to her goal first. ~ Which is a mystery goal. ;3

NO! Sleeping early is for squares! D: And I'll be fine. OTL

Aa, you can be correct on that, bro. o wo ~ Hnnn. Who knows if Rena will hear it from Yuko. Who knows who knows. ~
Hnnn. It shall be said, and you'll know. lol. Just not yet. > w> ;

Don't worry. ~ The Gekikara that talk to Geki in Chinmoku isn't the same. ~ It's a little different in a way. how, that's a mystery.
There's a reason why Gekikara is talking to Rena the way right now. ~ Hahaa. Gekikara isn't that evil... well not yet. ~
Geki isn't going to presure Rena to go into a rampage. xD ; It's going to be different. Aa, yes. There's a reason to all of that. :3

Yuki is going to have to if she's going to try to get Rena. > w> ;;;; If she doesn't, oh ho ho, I'll force her. :U

Hahahaaaa.xD Next chapter Yuki isn't. >P Yuki is totally going to reflect on it eventually! Rena will make sure that Yuki does, if Yuki tries again
when she is not suppose to!

Even if Mayu didn't want to bother with a child. lol. She's slowly trying to get over it. But obviously Mayu and Jurina still love Yuki and Rena. ; w;
Mhmm. = w=b You can count on that. Aa, who knows. It's either she comes as Gekikara or or or or..... Something else!

Hnnn..... *stays quiet about it* = u=

Thankies again bro. I will I will! And no! none of that throwing table at me. > w> ;;;
Oh... By the way, if you haven't notice yet, I might just start calling you Sieka-nee since you're being persistent about still being older than me. xD ;
You're not that older than me! D<

@ gekirena-san : thanks bro. o wob
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Re: FM (Ch. 6) & Birdcage (Ch. 1) & 1004 Thank You
« Reply #65 on: May 06, 2012, 01:18:35 AM »
Birdcage ( YukiRena )

Chapter 1

I remember the day I found you, bleeding, freezing, and dying under the pile of snow. Your wings were damage from a creature that attacked you. You had claw marks everywhere on your wings, as your feathers were all tattered up. At first I thought you were dead, but then I saw a small movement of you breathing I decided to save you, and brought you to my home. The home of a royal family, the Matsui family, living high in the mountain isolated from the town.

“Father, do you have a birdcage?” Rena asked, she was only ten years of age, and was next to throne of the family. She tugged on her father’s robe to get his attention.

“Yes I do. Why do you need one sweetie?” The father wonders with a kind voice.

“I found this blackbird badly injured, and I want to save it.” She pouted up at her dad.

“Hmm..” Her father was giving a thought and brushed his white beard, when he saw Rena pouting, how could he not resist? “Very well, I’ll ask the servant to fetch you a cage, and get a veterinarian.”

Rena burst into glee and hugged her father. “Thank you so much, father!” Her father let out a chuckle and patted her head.

“Just make sure you take responsibility for it. Your mother will kill me if there was a mess.” Rena gave a firm nod before letting go and running off to her room.

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The next day the veterinarian came, the blackbird was a raven, as the veterinarian tended the raven’s wounds. And from that day forth the raven hasn’t woken up. By each passing day, Rena would still watch the raven’s wound slowly recover. The claw marks on the raven finally healed, but, leaving a permanent scar, as the tattered feathers fell off brining new ones.  And yet the raven still hasn’t woken up. Rena wondered why.

A year has passed and the raven still hasn’t shown any sign of waking up.

“We should get rid of the bird sweetie.” The father suggest, while the family was in the middle of dinner. Rena was sitting diagonally from her father’s right side, and her mom on the opposite end. And next to Rena was her little sister, Jurina Matsui, who is only seven years old.

“No. It’ll wake up I’m sure of it, father!” Rena protested.

“You’ve been saying that for a year already! And it still hasn’t woken up. It’s just wasting space now!” Her mom yelled, causing Jurina to flinch and drop her fork. She look up at her mom never hearing her yell before, neither seeing her angry.

“It will! I know it will!” Rena abruptly got off the chair and ran to her room.

“Rena!” Her mom called after, “Jeez that child. She takes too much after you.” She exhaled.

The father laughed, “She is still only a child after all. If she really insists the bird will awaken, we’ll give it another week.” The mother only gave an annoyed sigh as Jurina just silently watches, and then quickly finish her food before dismissing herself.

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Rena sat on her bed while she silently stared at birdcage with the raven silent sleeping. For the whole year she has been doing the same routine every night, she would sit and stare until she has fallen asleep. And every time she woke up, she wonders if it had awakened, but to her disappointment, it was still sleeping. Slowly she started to doze off, and before she realized it she had fallen asleep.

There was an annoying sound of clanks, like something was clawing against metal bars.

Clank. Clank. Clank.

Waking up from the sound, Rena slowly opens her eyes groggily as she rubs them. She then blink several times noticing it was still night, she reach over to the nightstand next to her bed, and turned on the lamp.  The light radiating from the lamp filled the room, she turned her head to the sound, and to her surprise it was the raven clawing and biting on the metal.

“It’s awake!” Rena jumped up to her feet in glee. “I knew it’ll awaken!”

“Let me out you mortal fool!” The raven cawed, and continued to gnaw at the metal cage.

Rena gave a loud gasped, bringing her hands over her mouth, “You can talk! Uwaaaaa! That’s amazing!”

“Of course I can talk you…“ The rave stopped the claw and grew silent for a moment, “You… You understand me?”

Rena sat down on her bed and gave a firm nod. “Mhm! Every single word I understand.”

The raven grew silent once more, and blinked several times. “Mortal child, how do you understand? Only the witch can understand my tongue.” The raven hissed at Rena, “Do you carry the witch blood?”

Rena tilted her head and gave a confuse expression. She then crosses her arms, and held her chin, silently thinking. “I am no witch. I am the oldest princess of the Matsui Family.”

“Then how do you know my tongue?” The raven demanded in a cold voice that sent Rena body to shiver.

Rena silently thinks once more before shrugging. “I don’t know. Maybe I’m magical being!”

The raven cawed. “Ha! Such a strange child, you are. Tell me, what is your name, child.”

Rena puffed out a cheek in annoyance, “Stop calling me a child!” The raven laughed at Rena’s reaction. Then she gave a bright smile answering the raven’s question, “Rena. Matsui, Rena. What about you?” She tilts head, curious to know the raven’s name.

“I have many names. The name I have known before became long forgotten, call me whatever you may wish as long I agree to it, and fitting for a female.”

“Hmmm.” Rena looked elsewhere, thinking of a name. “’Yuki’! I found you in the snow, and ‘yuki’ means snow. And you’re also pretty like the snow.” The raven, Yuki, started the laugh again causing Rena to frown, wondering if it was a bad name to give. “Is that a no?”

“I don’t mind such a name.” Rena gave a wide smile, delighted to know that the raven agreed to the name. “Though I do have to say I am not a pure color as the snow.”

Rena shook her head as Yuki cocked her head to the side, curious of the girl’s thought. “That’s not true! You are pure! I don’t know how to describe it you just are!”

Yuki laughed once more, “You’re an interesting child. You have yet to amuse me more. Now tell me, I’m curious to know, how am I here in such a small cage?”

“Oh! I found you in the pile of snow, you were badly injured and I thought you were dead, but, when I saw you breathing, I thought I should save you.”

“So you save me? Aa, I remember. I was attack by a witch familiar. How long has it been since you found me?”

Rena tilted her head thinking. “About a year ago…”

“I have slept for that long?” Yuki blinked and looked at her wounds, where she imagines them to be. She notices that there were no wounds, and the scars were not noticeable due to the new born feathers. “Maa, you have taken great care of me child.” Yuki bowed her head down, indicating her gratitude. “I must somehow repay you for them.”

Rena gave a nod, “How about being my friend?” She gave a wide smile.

“Friend?” The raven cocks her head to the side, “There should be something you want more than having me as a friend.”

Rena shook her head, “No. I’m always stuck inside this mansion. I can’t go anywhere else because of my illness.”

“Illness?”

Rena gave a small nod as her wide smile became a small frown. “I don’t know anything about it because my father and mother are hiding it from me. I just overheard them once.”

“I see. If that is what you wish, then, I have nothing against being your friend.” Yuki notice Rena giving a stifle yawn. “You should best rest. I shall be here when you awaken.” Yuki assured her. Rena gave a small nod, turned off the light, and said her good nights before sleeping.

--
Like Yuki said, Rena awakens seeing Yuki sitting in the cage quietly. “Good morning, Yuki.” Rena mumbled, she went into a sitting position and rubs her eyes.

“Morning.” The raven bowed her head.

Rena and Yuki spend their time talking to each other, until Rena was called down for breakfast. Rena announced the raven has finally awakened as everyone was surprise, but, congratulated Rena for its awakening. 

Every day became the same routine for Rena. She would spend her whole day in her room talking to Yuki. She would always be talking about herself, and help the Yuki remember her past, bits by bits. Yuki remembered she had been living for hundreds of years. She was once a princess like Rena, and was kidnap by the witch when she was child, she was held prisoner before the witch had put a curse on her. For what reason, she could not remember. But, she would always remember how the witch will clip her wings from flying away or chain her leg down; such horrid memories brought shivers to her. Fortunately, she was able to escape one day, but was chased down by a witch’s familiar when she was caught missing. As the day Rena finding her wounded in the snow was when the witch familiar almost caught her after a long flight.

Telling such memories, Rena felt guilty of confining Yuki in the cage as she allowed Yuki to fly into the sky freely. She left the bird cage open, and the balcony door slightly open, for Yuki fly whenever she wanted to, and come back whenever she wanted to. Yuki had never abandon Rena, keeping her promise that she would stay as her friend. But, she felt that she needed to repay Rena more than just being a friend. Yuki was a very kind raven, in Rena’s opinion, even though she would speak a little coldly at Rena sometime, although Rena didn’t mind, she still found her attitude amusing.

Apparently Jurina was able to understand Yuki as well, after three years later she was no longer able to understand Yuki, but only hear the raven cawing. Rena found it odd since she was still able to understand Yuko, Yuki as well found it odd, unable to find the answer they decided to move on.

Several more years has passed, Rena is now nineteen as her illness became grew worse, but, it wasn’t as terrible to the point she wasn’t able to walk. It grew worse that she often gets colds or fevers. As her parents still believe Rena didn’t know about the illness Rena had. She knew her parents could force themselves to tell her.

Two nights ago Rena ran down with a high fever, and she still has a high fever tonight. The servant have just given her medicine and left her to sleep. With the medicine Rena took didn’t feel like it was taking effect, it felt like it making it worse.

Rena muffled a small groan, feeling streak of sweat trailing down her head. She tossed and turned in her sleep, and then she felt cold hands brushing against her cheeks.

“Rena…” A familiar voice woke Rena up. Her eye lids fluttered open, everything she saw dark and hazy, she couldn’t make out the figure that lingered over her, but she knew it was the person, and the voice sounded so familiar.

Rena tried to make out the figure, “Yuki?” She tiredly murmured. She felt cold finger pressed against her lips, shushing her.

“Go back to sleep.” Rena listened to what the voice ordered, as she closed her eyes, feeling those cold hands wiping away the sweat on her forehead. “Just get better, please.” Was the last thing she heard from the voice before everything became silent.

There was a strange noise. It sounded as if something was being scratch. Awakening from the sound, her eyes lids slowly opens. She allowed her eyes to adjust to the light before she slowly sat up and rub them gently. Her head felt a little light, but, she felt a lot better than she did last night, or two days ago. She felt like she was completely back to full health. She thought it would take several more days for the fever to decrease, and yet she is now in full health as if she never had a fever to begin with.

Odd. She thought. Quickly she brushed the thought aside and recalled last night. The cold hand she felt against her face, the voice that sounded like Yuki. The noise continues as it brought Rena back from her thoughts. Her eyes scanned the room, seeing Yuki wasn’t in the cage, neither was she anywhere in the room. “Yuki?” Rena called, the noise she heard suddenly stopped, pulling the blanket off of her; black feathers fluttered into the air. Rena blinked several time picking up a black feather an examined it. She knew what these black feather were, “Yuki…” She got off the bed, and when she set her foot down on the floor, she felt something soft beneath her feet. Looking down there were more black feathers scattered on the floor. “Yuki?” She called again; she noticed the balcony door was wide open as she then made haste, and walked to the balcony door.

A gasp escaped her lips, to her surprise there was a large raven, about the size of Rena, sitting on the balcony with its peck tucked under its wings. “Yuki?” The raven twitch from the call, lift its head up, it turn its head around to face Rena.

“What is it?” The familiar voice answered.

“Yuki!?H-h-how did you get so big?” Rena eye bulge out, she was bewilder to see the raven growing so big in just one night.

“I don’t know really.” Yuki simply answered as she turned her head away.

“C-can I pet you?” Rena tried not to stuttered, but she was so surprise by the sudden change she couldn’t help it.

The raven turn her head back, and cocked her head, “I don’t see what is the problem with that, since you done it many time.” Rena gave a small nod, and walked over to Yuki. She extended her arms out, as her hand made contact with the soft black feather.

“Uwaaa. It’s even softer!” Rena was amazing by the touch. It felt soft enough that she can even sleep on it. Actually, it was softer than her pillow she thought. She wonder how nice it would feel if she slept on Yuki.

“Don’t go sleeping on me.” Yuki stated as if she read Rena’s mind.

“W-wha? No! I wasn’t thinking of that…” Rena grew silent for a moment, “Actually yeah I was.” Her face turned red of embarrassment thinking of such silly thought. Then Yuki started to laugh as Rena puff out her cheeks, and turned redder. “Moou!” Then a call was heard on the other side of Rena’s door. She turned her head to the door then back at Yuki. “Looks like they’re calling me for breakfast. I’ll see you in a bit, Yuki.” Yuki gave a small nod as Rena then left the room.

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Re: FM (Ch. 6) & Birdcage (Ch. 1) & 1004 Thank You
« Reply #66 on: May 06, 2012, 01:18:56 AM »
Inspiration from 1000 Words by Yuumei You guys really need to read it, if you already have not. <333

1004 Thank You ( KojiYu )

“Hey! Get away from her!” A girl, known as Yuko Oshima, shouted as she kicks the two boys down that trapped a girl between them and the wall.

Yuko caught the boys harassing her precious person, Haruna Kojima, in the alley, and Yuko happen to feel that her friend was in danger. Following her guts, it led to her finding Kojima trapped between the wall and two boys. And without a second thought she beat the boys down instantly. The boys didn’t get the chance to fight back because of the sudden attack. The merely groan in pain on the floor wondering what’s happening.

“C’mon hurry!” Yuko shouted quickly, grabbing Kojima’s wrist and they both fled.

After a long distance away from their pervious location Kojima started shouting to Yuko, “Yuko! Yuko stop!” Kojima forcefully broke the grasp as they both stop, with Yuko turning to face her and giving a quizzical expression. “I didn’t need your help! I was fine on my own!” Kojima stated annoyed.

“But, NyanNyan…” Yuko frowned, unsure if her precious friend knew what she was saying. “You didn’t look like you were…”

“You just assume! Why are you always bothering me? Why can’t you just leave me alone?” Angered Kojima turned her heals around and walked the opposite directions.

Yuko stared to follow Kojima, “Where are you -”

“Don’t follow me!” The shout stopped Yuko in place as she look at Kojima’s back horrified. “Why can’t you just leave me alone?” Kojima started to run away as Yuko stood there in silence as she watched Kojima’s figure growing smaller and smaller.

Yuko wanted to run after her, but if she was to run after her she feared that Kojima would hate her, although she felt a needle of pain jabbing into her chest for not running after her. Both pained hurt so much she didn’t know what to choose, her legs scream to run after, her mind told her to stay, in the end everything was just painful for Yuko the bear. “Why… Why did you suddenly change?” The words choked out of Yuko’s mouth as she fell on her knees and held her chest, tears slowly building up. “Why?” She whimpers.

The next day at school, in the morning, Yuko had her head resting on the table as someone came up to her. “Yo, what happen to you?” The voice belong to Minami Takahashi, she pulled out a chair from the other desk, and place it next to Yuko’s desk as she then sat down. “You’re not energetic as usual.”

Yuko murmured a groan, and turn her head to face Minami. Minami flinched when she saw Yuko’s face all pale and exhausted. “You seriously don’t look good. You sure you should be at school today?” Minami asked worryingly. Another groan escaped Yuko’s lips as she turned her head facing the other way.

“I don’t want to stay home.” Yuko simply answered. “I’ll probably suffocate more at home.”

Minami sweated dropped, “I-I see… Could it possibly be about Kojima?” Minami jumped when Yuko started bang her head on the table four times then stopped. “I’ll take that as a yes.”

“She probably hate me now.” Yuko winced as tears started to build up by just thinking about it.

“Nonsense, you know best that Kojima can’t hate you. She’s likely under the weather and you caught her at a bad time.” Minami tried to assure her and gave Yuko a pat on the back. “Oh hey, Kojima is here.”

Yuko immediately shot her head up to see Kojima, and as Minami said Kojima just entered the room. Kojima made a brief eye contact with Yuko before looking away with a pain expression, and sat at her desk. Yuko also gave a pain expression and slam her head back down on the table, causing Minami to jump in her seat. “You really need to stop that. You’re going to hurt yourself.” Minami gave another pat on Yuko’s back, and then the bell rang for class, getting up, she place the chair back and went to her respectful seat.

They whole school day was long for Yuko. Even if Kojima and Yuko hanged out with each other for lunch they didn’t really talk. All there was is the heavy silent atmosphere that dwelled over their head. After they finish eating, Kojima leaves without a word and leaves Yuko merely staring at Haruna leaving. The same routine continues on for the next several days.

 It has now a weekend night, and Yuko spend her home time lying down on the sofa, with only herself in the house. Her parents were not around due to work so it was just Yuko alone in the house. Then there was a knock on the door. Yuko lazily got up from the sofa, walked to the door, unlocked it, and open it revealing an exhausted Minami. Yuko raised a brow at her confused, “What’s up?”

“Why are you not saying your good-bye to Kojima!?” Minami shouted as Yuko became surprised.

“Wait what? What are you saying?” Yuko looked at her in utter confusion.

“No one told you!? Kojima is leaving to Paris, and today is her flight!”

“WHAT!?”

“C’mon! You’ll still be able to catch her!”

Yuko rushed out f the house, and followed Minami. They had to take several train ride stop to the to the air port. Minami and Yuko were on their toes, repeating in their mind they wished the train would go any faster.

--    --    --    --

“Hey, you sure it’s fine not to see Yuko?” Mariko asked and gave a tight hug to Kojima.

Kojima shook her head, she let go of the hug and gave a sad smile. “She’ll try to stop me, and I can’t deal seeing her cry. I’m weak when I see her cry in front of me.”

“But she is someone you love isn’t she?” Sae asked, “You love her more than anyone so you have to let her see you leave.”

Mii-chan nodded in agreement, “And she totally is in love with you! And she’ll understand so…”

“It’s what she wanted.” Atsuko said to the others.

Kojima gave a small nod understanding what they mean, “I can’t face her though. I’m not as strong as her. Even I see her now, I would think about staying instead of leaving.” Everyone turned their head to the speaker, the speaker announce the flight Kojima was taking. A small sigh escape her lips, “It looks like I should get going now.” She hugged everyone once more. “Bye bye.” She gave waved, and put up a smile as everyone wave bye to her when she started walking off.

--    --    --    --

Yuko and Minami finally arrive out of breath. The three turned to look at them and gave a small frown.

“She just left.” Mariko murmured, and everyone look away from Yuko’s heartbroken expression.

“You… Got to be… kidding me!” Minami groaned and feel to the floor exhausted.

Tears started to build up in Yuko's eyes as she feel to the floor weeping with tears now running down her cheeks. Mii-chan quickly came over and pulled Yuko in a tight hug and petted her head. Yuko cried into Mii-chan shoulder, unbelieving that she missed Kojima. Sae patted Yuko on the back, while Mariko and Atsuko helped Minami to get on her feet. Everyone silently watched Yuko call Kojima’s name while she sobbed into Mii-chan shoulder. They wished they could comfort her more, but powerless as they were they only watched her sob.

The following day school was now in session. Everyone came into the classroom with their normal self, except for Yuko. She finally stopped crying, but her chest was heavily in pain. She couldn’t bear coming to school, but she thought when she come to school she would see Kojima. Setting her bag on the desk, and opening there was a pink envelope she never seen before. Taking it out, she look at the front to see who it was from, but it was blank. Opening it, there was a stack of folded papers, taking the content inside she unfolded the paper as her eyes grew wide, tears slowly building up. As the paper she held was Kojima’s handwriting.

Hey Yuko... Do you remember that time when we first met, and how I slapped you for suddenly touching me? I hated you for that, I only thought of you as a perverted squirrel, but when you kept trying and I finally gave up, I realized something… Something that only you honestly gave me, affection. I realized that I feel in love with you. And I couldn’t say it to you personally. And yet you continue keep your eyes on me and no else. Did you know the time we have spent together was something a thousand words cannot describe? They were precious memories that words cannot place. Do you remember that one day you save me, and I got angry at you? I wanted to apologize to you. I wanted to thank you and apologize to you a for giving you a hard time. I was really grateful that you save me, but… I don’t know why I couldn’t tell you my thanks. Maybe seeing you before I leave was too painful for me to bear. Pushing away from me made it only worse, and it was cliché, but I didn’t know any other way to face you.

I couldn’t face you because I knew you’ll stop me from leaving. I left because of my father had fallen ill, and he didn’t have much time left to live. I wanted to spend the last remain days he had left to live. It was hard for me to choose at first, but knowing that you’ll live and become strong without me, I chose to go to my father. Yuko, I’m sorry. I’m not strong as you, that’s why you’re always there defending me because you knew I was weak… I’m sorry. I wish I can become strong like you. I wish I saw you one last time before I leave. I wish we can go back to past together. I wish to say my thanks to you personally, but instead…


Yuko stared at the paper, as tears started to dripping onto the paper. Her hand gripped on the paper, leaving creases marks, and shut her eyes tightly as she couldn’t bear to read the paper any longer.

A thousand words that said Thank You as there were four extra words that said, I love you, Yuko.

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Aa, sorry that it isn't that great. ;; But, thank you guys again for everything you are the best. > w>
Now onward for me to comment to you authors out there! ... Slowly though. OTL. *goes into corner of shame* But it will be done!
sort of edit. OTL

@bochang-San : I know. I realize my mistake when I was in the car. Lol.
It's fix now. XP
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Re: FM (Ch. 6) & Birdcage (Ch. 1) & 1004 Thank You
« Reply #67 on: May 06, 2012, 02:20:43 AM »
first! will edit after read. :p


The birdcage is interesting!!!

I know from the very first time that the bird is Yuki! LOL
and i wonder why Yuki become enormous? hmmm will she turned into a human?
and Rena is sick?
I have this ominous feeling when i read about that..
i hope rena is okay.. i hope a great story awaits! LOL

and 1004 words.. is so sweet..  :ptam-cry:

Yuko! don't bang your head to the table!
i don't know if i should laughed or not when i read about that. LOL

KojiYuu.. TT.TT i hope there will be an epilogue. :D
and why 1004? if it's 1000 'thank you's and 3 words, i love you.
it'll be a 1003 right? :p

Epilogue please! I hope they'll meet again! TT.TT
« Last Edit: May 06, 2012, 02:30:35 AM by bochang »
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Re: FM (Ch. 6) & Birdcage (Ch. 1) & 1004 Thank You
« Reply #68 on: May 06, 2012, 07:50:32 AM »
Ahahaha, don't just kill your main character off if you need them for the later parts, because that would be a big OMG FAIL ORZ moment. :lol:

I am using the dictionary, often even when I'm writing, I always have the webster's tab on mozilla. (*w *

Yuki never fails to look badass you know, its like that category was made for her! :lol:

You don't like root? Lol, tsk, Network love? :lol:

Nope, no can do, it has to be a real weapon, using a toy weapon won't have an effect after all. :roll:

Lol, then let Yuki control you! I'm liking where its going anyways. XD
Better way to place it? Hmm....I guess you can say that asking a girl whether she can cook can be a bit offensive and rude since girls are mostly expected to know how to cook.......erm. :sweatdrop: LOL! True, if I did get a glare like that I'd assume it that way. XD

Tsk, why? Are you Yuko type level? :3
Ehhhh.......how mean, Mint-chan...I want to keep a bit of some pride for myself...... :catglare:

Lol, if she lets you make her suffer, I doubt she'd do that though, Jurina's just a kid after all. :3

I really want a drunk Haruna, though lol, her thoughts would be in shambles I guess? But she's quite handy too........

There are times when you have to let go and forget about love too, even if you say that its true love that you feel, if its impossible to achieve, then you might as well just let go......if that love is truly for you, they'll come back or knock on your heart's doorstep. d (ow o

Tsk...I thought Yuki was sly to go to that point, I mean if she gets Rena drunk, she'll get a chance.......ehhh, I know Rena can dominate Yuki, she already has Yuki's heart in her hands, what more if she had Yuki down on the bed? :lol:

It fits perfectly for broken hearted people, ahahaha, their together in pain and sadness, but they'll also be together in happiness and love. I love it when my plot bunnies are going wild and I can write them, but its a real bother if I can't even use them. ;p

AHAHAHA! Omg, that might happen, don't just write a story like that in an essay, lol........ :lol: That would be a bit embarrassing too. Lol, I might as well write about locking her up with Rena in a room or a locker instead if that's what it takes..... :rofl:

Hohoho....many unimaginable stuff that is bad for kids.......
Tsk, Yuko-san is invading my thoughts......... 8)

True, but opposite personalities that clash together is quite fun to read to. :grin:

I too wonder what secret it was....... :huhuh

Yuki needs to get herself together and stop herself from kissing Rena again, like seriously, lol, but hmm... Gekikara might help Rena break the awkwardness.....depends huh? Such a mystery.....

You'll be fine? You sure? : o

Dang it, you aren't giving me any clues at all huh? I wonder how exactly will Rena regain it, through Geki? Or through Yuko? Or, through Yuki herself? Ahhhhhhhhhhh.......... :panic:

Different in a way? Either way, Gekikara and the voice in my fic have the same aim it seems, to cause some rampage and trouble. :lol:

Tsk, don't force Yuki to do anything that'll make the situation worse. XD

Lol, I don't think Yuki will act while Rena's conscious, unless Gekikara suddenly takes over and dang......lol I sense a split personality on Rena. 8)

Hey, she seems to be having fun with Jurina though, and yeah, first love never dies they say, and it hurts just remembering it! :lol:

You don't want a taste of a table throw? Aw...... D:
I am older than you, by months, just because I'm not older than you by a year, doesn't mean that your on the same age as me, if you do turn on the same age as me, then I'll let it slide, but you aren't, so I'm still technically older than you, just face the fact Mint-chan. :P


Review - Birdcage

Interesting........so Yuki is a blackbird here? Whom was a former princess that a witch abducted and cursed and held in prison, only that, Yuki escaped but got pursued by the witch's minion and got hurt in the process of escaping, lol.......and Rena here saved her when she was still ten. Nice development and first meeting, but lol, to have Yuki sleeping for a year long? I thought it was like she was cursed like Snow White, waiting for a prince's kiss, lolololol, I was expecting it to be honest. (I'm so silly.) I'm glad though that Yuki woke before Rena's parents have the time to take her out, and it seems that Yuki and Rena are good friends huh, but for Rena to understand Yuki? How mysterious, even Jurina understood her, only for a bit before it disappeared.........

I wonder why? Could it be that Rena and Yuki are connected to each other that's why Rena's able to understand her? I mean, if you do love someone, you'll be able to understand them no matter what. Though I think this is spelling out bad news to me when I read over that Rena's sick with something that's still not stated for.....I wonder what her sickness it, heart illness or something? :?

Mah, I wonder too why Yuki grew that big! Did she absorb Rena's sickness? Lol, now I'm having doubts, maybe Yuki is a princess of a magical kingdom......maybe, just maybe........ Though you know, I was expecting Rena to fall asleep on Yuki, too bad Yuki just had to disturb her before it happens......still, when I imagine it, aww, so cute...Rena falling asleep while snuggling on Yuki and Yuki uses her wings to wrap around Rena's body like a blanket........ahh dang, but she's a bird. A large one at that. :lol:

Nice story over all, very interesting, I can't wait to see the next part. :thumbsup


1004 Thank You

I've always known about Yuumei, I mean, her works are totally fantastic, and I seriously love her 1000 Words, its a nice take you know, this OS I mean. It started out a bit bitter on the side because we can see how Haruna is rejecting Yuko's help and acting all mean and ungrateful to her, we even get to see how their becoming distant from each other until to the point where there's no communication at all, just silence.

I have to say, I got a bit teary eyed when Haruna left and Yuko didn't get to see her, I mean why the heck did she freaking do that? She should have at least waited for a bit........so much drama. And the separation was so painful because they didn't even get to talk and clear things up in personal, only through a letter......

I feel for Yuko, it can't be helped that she cried so much over the letter, especially the I love you at the end. I know that Yuko's been waiting for those words to be said to her, but for them to come from a paper? Ouch.....so much pain. Saying goodbye through letters or emails is never good, its better to tell it personal, Haruna you better come back and make up for that! >:V


Thanks for the new story and the OS, they were lovely Mint-chan!
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Re: FM (Ch. 6) & Birdcage (Ch. 1) & 1004 Thank You
« Reply #69 on: May 06, 2012, 04:52:34 PM »
 :farofflook: That's sad... I can't pretend to be drunk. And no way~ I won't drink until I'm of legal age. I mean...I don't think I'll even like the smell of beer and such. Wine, well my parents allow me when I'm supervised. So yeah...
And you're welcome, Al-kun. ^^

Hmm~ My inner Yuki says to take advantage of Rena-sama.... :hiakhiakhiak: and since I'm focusing YukiRena in T.A.F my inner Yuki is saying things so childishly, instead of being a cold!  :lol:
And IF Rena-sama ever does take advantage of Yuki-san...  :luvluv1: :on bleed: I think you'll know how much blood I will lose. I mean...Even if they're not like kissing and such, I'll be having a nosebleed whenever there's a cute scene between those two. It's a condition I'm worried that might be the death of me, but I still don't try to fix it. :hiakhiakhiak:

Well, simple thanks for you might not let you realize how much I crave for you updates. So...I like telling you how much I feel with my limited amount of vocabulary. I mean...You and Sieka-san are the ones who really fueled up my YukiRena gauge.

Birdcage: Ooh~! A new fic!!! And it's still YukiRena!!! *squeals* And wow... Rena-sama is a princess~ *sighs* I LOVE IT!!! WOOHOO~! I'm so gonna crave more!!! argh!! why are you torturing me Al-kun by making me crave more of your fanfics?!?!?!?!  :angry: But I love you for that! ahahaha~

1004 Thank you: Wow...Haruna...Left. And she didn't even try to tell Yuko about it. Well...It's understandable that she won't be able to leave and take Yuko's cries. But...to not thank her after getting saved... -3-

Ano~ Al-kun...I'll re-edit this tomorrow! I need to sleep. Tehe~ :P
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Re: FM (Ch. 6) & Birdcage (Ch. 1) & 1004 Thank You
« Reply #70 on: May 07, 2012, 09:45:26 AM »
Chap6: wow Jurina is brave! I can't wait to see Gekikara
Birdcage: I like this one. Ravens are cool, a bit scary but cool.
1004: T_T it's sad but beautiful at the same time

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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 7 Part 1 )
« Reply #71 on: May 07, 2012, 10:07:03 PM »
Muhahahahaaaa! c< Minty-chan is going to kill me for leaking half of chapter 7. Tehehehee. ~ It wasn't even meant to be parts but now it is! >D That's what she get for letting me borrow her computer! >P
ALTOIDS IS GOING TO GET TO YOU, COMMENTERS AND AUTHORS, WHEN SHE GETS BACK! AND SHE, HERSELF WILL POST PART 2
AND FINISH GETTING ALL HER COMMENT TOGETHER AND REPLY TO YOU AUTHORS' STORY OUT THERE, 'KAY?
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It's not f-up if that what you guys thinks. It's my revenge on her! c< Minty-chan's friend decided to throw this at you guys just to piss Minty-chan off, that's why I'm posting this. /innocent smile
Fwaaaa ~ watching her dying from the wrath of her Gekikara Muse kill her, forcing her to type such gruesome, bloodplay, scene in "part 2"! c< Hahahaaaaa ~ ! It's so amusing. ( > u < )
Also... her snips... Are from "part 2" actually. So so so so... ~ Have fun with Part 1!

Oh! There's quite a lot of cuss words. If you don't really like them, turn back now. c:
YOU'VE BEEN WARNED!!!


Chapter 7

“Jurina! Jurina!” Rena could only hear the buzz of the cell. “Oh no.” She quickly got up from her sofa, and ran out the door.

Running down the streets, she quickly dialed Yuko’s cell. Hold the phone to her ear, the phone rang four time, until a groggily voice answered. “Yello?”

“Yuko! I need your help. Jurina and Mayu are in trouble!”

“What!?”

Rena told Yuko the location where she assumed Jurina and Mayu were in.

“Okay, I’ll ask my boss to let me off. Bye!”

Oh god. Please tell me that I’ll make it in time! Rena panic as she continues to run down the street.

'Hahahaaa, what’s this ~ ? A weak heart I see. Heheheee.'  A voice in the back of Rena’s conscious giggled; however, Rena didn’t hear the giggle as her panic drowned the voice out.

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“Great the stupid building cut off the signal!” Jurina muttered trying to redial again and again, but getting no signal.

Jurina and Mayu hid behind the large dumpster that was able to cover them. While Mayu tried to get the door, next to the dumpster, open. “It won’t budge.” Mayu complained softly, turning the doorknob clockwise and county clockwise.

“Let me do it.” Jurina quickly said in a low voice, replacing Mayu. She looked at the keyhole and cursed to herself. “Darn, it’s the tubular pin. I don’t know how to picklock that!”

“W-what are you serious? What do we do?” Mayu panicked.

“When worse come to worse we’re going to have to climb up that fence.” Mayu and Jurina turned to see the nine feet fence. And on the other side of that nine feet fence were flocks of pigeons cooing and staring at them, their head tilting side to side.

“I can’t climb up that!” Mayu shouted loudly as Jurina cupped her mouth, shushing her.

“Quiet! You’re going to have to climb that when we have no other –“ Jurina pulled Mayu down, forcing her to crouch. Jurina kept her hand over Mayu’s, and brought an index to her own lips. The quietly listen to their surroundings. As the sound of the men huffing, and complaining to each other, wondering where the two went. A trail of sweat ran down their face, their heart raced in their chest, they held their breath while they carefully listen to the men.

They footsteps slowly started to fade, as they both gave a relief sigh. When they stood straight up, the flock of pigeons suddenly flew away.

“Oh!” A sudden voice echoed. Jurina and Mayu froze in place scared to turn to face the voice. Crap! They both thought.

“Like they always say, when birds flies there’s someone.” Another voice said.

“Idiot! That not it goes!” Another voiced yelled, slapping the previous voice’s head.

“ARGH! What the hell was that for?” The slapped man replied annoyed.

“Would you two shut your god damn mouth!?” The middle man snapped at them, obviously furious with their stupidity. “We have business to take care of.”

The two apologized, “Sorry, boss.”

Jurina kept Mayu behind her as she slowly walked back whenever the three men took a step.

“Mayu…” Mayu directed her eyes from the men to Jurina, a droplet of sweat running down Jurina’s face, her teeth gritted tightly together with a deep frown. Her should was stiff, but she still held her guard up and carefully watch the three men while whispering to Mayu. “I’ll distract them. You need to climb as quickly as you can.” Another step back, the men were getting closer and close by the every second.

“Mayu, we don’t have much time. Quit hesitating and do it. Trust me.” Jurina growled under her teeth. Mayu look at Jurina then the fence. She gulped, before nodding. She saw Jurina give a weak smile, “Three more steps, you run to the fence.” Mayu nodded.

“Oi! What the fuck are you talking about?” They took a step, and the two girl took a step back.

One... Jurina and Mayu counted in their head.

“Why don’t you share it with us?” Another step.

Two…

“Bitches don’t ignore us!” The final step.

Three! Mayu turned around and ran to the fence. Smashing into it she quickly began to climb. Jurina started running towards them her fist held up.

One of the middle men, which is the boss, held his eyes on Mayu, “Hey! Stop you fu-” Catching him off guard, a heavy uppercut blow was dealt under his jaw, sending his head back, then a sudden elbow jab in his stomach,, forcing him to take several steps back as he crouch down and held his stomach in pain.

The other two looked at their boss in shock as Jurina quickly move to the next guy on her left as she threw a jab punch at the man chest, due to the height difference she wasn’t able to punch him at the face, but the punch was strong enough to push him back as he groan in pain. “Oh you fucken bitch.” The man growled furiously.

She took a step closer to him, her fist up protecting her face, and her arms folded with her elbow protecting her body, and leaving only a foot distance between him, using her body weight, she pivot her left feet, and turned her hip, she threw a punch at him dead center on the chest with her left, turned then  her hips counter clock wide to throw a second punch at him with her right hand, and goes back to her previous stance, as her left hand was about to punch him once more. The man caught sight of Jurina left hand going for the next attack, he quickly prepared for the jab on the chest from the left. But, catching him off guard with her false left jab, Jurina threw a right cross at him, pivoting her right feet that made her body turned, as her right arm shooting straight out as the there was a loud snap sound from the landing of her fist to the man’s chest.

The punch sent him back as he smacked hard into the concrete wall before he fell numbed on the floor.

Whoa. Didn’t think I still remember how to box. Jurina smirked please to remember she still had the boxing spirit inside of her. It has been three years since she last boxed or held her fist up at someone. She was surprise that she still remember the techniques after three years.

Mayu recently stopped climbing as she was watching Jurina taking down the second male. How amazed she was when she saw Jurina’s punches flow so smoothly and landed on the man. She quickly broke out her awe moment when she saw the last man coming at her from behind, “Jurina watch out!” Mayu shouted.

Jurina quickly turned around seeing the last man throwing a left punch. Quickly, she made her right foot go in front, avoiding the man’s punch as she armed stretch out, her left hand grabbing the man’s left arm from in the inside, then she turned her body where she would be facing the same direction as the man, while she still held onto the man’s left arm, as her right arm moved under the man’s left where her right shoulder is directly under the man’s armpit, and bending her knees as she tossed the man over her shoulder, throwing him on top the second man with a loud thump as the second man became even more in pain.

Ouch… He’s going to be sore, but now it’s not the time for that. Jurina quickly ran to the fence as Mayu was still climbing up, almost there. “Mayu hurry!” She quickly said as she climbed up.

“God fuck! You shit head hurry and get up!” The boss recovered, and forced his two pals to their feet by pulling from up.

The boss and the guy that was thrown started to run down the fence, but the other ran the opposite direction.

Jurina was able to climb to the other side first, as she climbed down a bit before jumping off. She looked up to see Mayu terrified on top of the fence. She looked at the men that were still running towards the fence. “Mayu hurry!” She rushed Mayu.

Mayu shook her head terrified, and held on the fence tightly as if she was hanging to it for dear life. “I can’t!”

Crap! Jurina cursed, biting her lowers lips. “Then jump down! I’ll catch you!”

“But -”

“Trust me will you?” Jurina extended her arms out ready to catch Mayu.

Mayu turned her head to see the men already climbing up the fencing. And shaking it while they climb, almost causing Mayu to lose her balance on top of the fence. Without anymore hesitation she closed her eyes and jumped off, as Jurina caught her, her arms around Mayu’s waist as the weight almost send Jurina falling back, but she caught her balance. “See, you can do it.” Jurina assured, Mayu held on Jurina tight her eyes still shut, she held on Jurina tightly, her body trembling as she still terrified, but she manage to give a small. “We got to hurry. They’re almost over the fence.” Jurina quickly said letting go of Mayu, she open her eyes open as she slowly recovering from her state, then Jurina grabbed Mayu’s wrist and ran for the exit.

Then suddenly the third man came from the other side, with a long metal pipe in his hand as he held it threateningly, forcing Jurina and Mayu go into a halt. Mayu turned around as they had the back against each other.

“Jurina…” Mayu squeaked.

Jurina turned her head slightly seeing the two month finally over the face, and slowly walking towards them, while the third did the same. Shit… I can’t fight like this! She couldn’t risk leaving Mayu and beat the single guy in their way from escaping, especially when he held a weapon. Jurina slowly moved to herself and Mayu towards the wall. Pushing Mayu into the wall where she would be between the wall and Jurina, her back facing her, guarding Mayu from the three men.

Mayu felt Jurina body trembling in fear as the men came closer. She looked at Jurina expression, her teeth gritting tightly together to hold back her trembling body, her hands were curled in a fist ready to attack if they dare came near to Mayu, as a glint of panic and fear were in her eyes. “Jurina, forget about me.” She whispered to her ears. Mayu knew that Jurina wanted to fight them off, or try to, but with her in the way she knew Jurina couldn’t leave her alone.

“I can’t do that!” Jurina huffed under her gritted teeth, pushing Mayu more against the wall when they came closer.

“C’mon here you fucken bitch!” The boss angrily said, grabbing Jurina by the arm, and pulled her away from Mayu.

“Jurina!”

Jurina struggled, trying to break the grip, she was about throw a kick, but the man that held her tossed her to the other side of the wall. Her shoulder smashing into the wall as she gave a loud winced of pain.

“Jurina!” Mayu was about the run to Jurina, but the man that was tossed earlier stopped Mayu from doing so and pinned her against the wall.

“Hey hey now. You don’t have to worry about her. It’s just me and you now.” He said snickering. “Yo, boss. I can do whatever I want to her right?”

“Yeah sure. I don’t give a fuck as long I get my fun.” The boss said with a smirk, as he had Jurina pinned down the arms. She thrashed her legs around, trying to kick him off, but when he punches her in the stomach, massive amount of pain shot through her body as she grumbled in pain. She wanted to curl and hold her stomach, but she couldn’t. Trembling under those arms, streaks of tears rolled down at the corner of her eyes from fear and pain.

Rena hurry! PLEASE!

“Let me go!” Mayu shouted trying to break free, trying to push him away. But he was much too strong for Mayu as the man lean in closer to Mayu, feeling his heavy breath against her ear. No! Someone help! Mayu cried in her mind, shutting her eyes from everything.

“Hey save me some for – AAAAARGH!” The man with the weapon screamed as there was loud sound clanked. The two other men stopped what they were doing, and gave a confused expression as the turned they head.

Jurina and Mayu tried to see what happen as well as their eye grew wide.

They two male gave a dumbfounded expression seeing their own buddy on the floor knocked unconscious; they even gave a more dumbfounded expression when they saw who knocked their friend down.

Rena! Jurina thought excitedly, finally their savior has come. Though it never struck to her how Rena was going to save them, but she believed in Rena that she would find a way to save them.

“Da fuck are you?” The man holding Mayu against the wall questioned Rena, with a brow quirked.

Rena slowly picked up the metal pipe that rested near her feet. “Let them go.” Rena demanded trying to stay calm as possible and not allowing her anger show.

“Ha! Who is the hell are you to command us, huh!?” The man challenged Rena, tossing Mayu aside towards to the boss. The boss gave a small sigh, and moved away from Jurina.

Jurina was about to make her escape, but the boss grabbed her by the hair, along with Mayu, as he then locked his arm around their neck in one arm, as they oxygen was slowly being cut away. The two girls were about to struggle in the boss’s arm for air until a revolver was suddenly pointed at Jurina’s head. Jurina began panic, almost about to burst into tears, she wanted to struggle free, but the sudden fear of that man pulling the trig made her body feel weak.

Please! Rena! Jurina begged, as she tried to hold herself from crying. Mayu too, felt exactly the same way as Jurina. She feared of the trig being pulled and shooting Jurina in the head. She couldn’t risk that happening. She tried her best to get oxygen through, but failed, as her lungs slowly started to pain.

“I told you to let them go.” Rena hand clenching tighter on the pipe.

“Hurry and get rid of her asshole.” The boss commanded his friend.

“Yeah, yeah, yeah. Better yet, how about teaching her a lesson in not to interrupt us?”  He snickers taking a step closer. He reached for something inside the pocket of his pants, as Rena became defensive and eye his hand, carefully watching his action. He pulled a knife out of his pocket, and gave a devious smile. “Kekekee... Lucky for you I didn’t bring my gun.”

He’s all talk... Rena complained, giving a small sigh. …Don’t think it’ll be too hard to knock him out… I hope.

Aaa. ~ Such a weak heart. So easy to control, hahaaaa. Let me have some fun ~ !’ The voice within Rena said with a sinister giggled.

What!? STOP! Rena tried to stop from whatever was happening, but she was too slow as something snapped inside of her.

There was a long silence...

Suddenly the air, the atmosphere, everything became silence. Silence like death. Like time has stopped. As the atmosphere started to grow heavy, not depressing, but as if a mad dog has appeared, a mad that couldn’t be controlled by anyone, a mad dog that would tear and eat someone without mercy. Everyone felt this crazy sudden change of atmosphere as everyone shuddered.

The man with the knife scrunched up his nose as if the atmosphere had no effect on him, but made him question instead. “Da fuck is going on? Huh…?” He looked down at his hand that held the knife, seeing it shaking frantically. “What the hell?”

A soft giggle echoed in the alley as everyone brought their attention to Rena.

What’s going on? Jurina questioned as stared at Rena, trying to see her clearly.

Rena continued to giggle, her giggled taunted him, making him furious as he gripped tighter on his weapon. “What you laughing about, huh!? I’ll show you bitch!” The man ran towards, thrusting his weapon at Rena, as Rena just stood there like a statue.

“Rena!” Jurina cried out.

to be continue :P
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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 7 Part 1 )
« Reply #72 on: May 08, 2012, 02:12:32 AM »
Eh?! So it's no al-san who post this? LOL
Whoevet you're, you're the greatest troll ever live. LOL
Can't wait what will happened to you when al-san look at this post. LOL

Kinda guilty reading this. :(
But.. The temptation..
Sorry al-san. I can't..
I'm read it! :3

I already get some hints about the next part which will caused the event at the start of ch 6. Hoho
Jurina is quite a fighter eh? And the guys who don't have balls using weapon to beat a harmless girl?
I want to kill them so badly.. :3

And I hope you get your revenge al-san. :p
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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 7 Part 1 )
« Reply #73 on: May 08, 2012, 05:04:11 AM »
So, the one who post it not al-san?
 :?
Or maybe al-san have something like gekikara in rena? Ah, never mind

And, have you done with your hardcore study, al-san? Hoho

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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 7 Part 1 )
« Reply #74 on: May 08, 2012, 05:54:07 AM »
I need a second part for the kojiyuu fic!! T_T my kojiyuu

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« Reply #75 on: May 09, 2012, 09:40:31 AM »
Gekikara is in da place aye!

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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 7 Part 1 )
« Reply #76 on: May 10, 2012, 09:56:05 PM »
@ everyone : asdk;aslkda;sld. Chapter 7 is not suppose to be in parts! *throws self at wall*
uugh.... why does this have to happen? -- forget it. so... part 2............... Hope you readers are fine with it. ;
Wrote it whenever I got the chance. Mostly during school lunch breaks, it's vivid since it's actually hard to type with all the noise.
But it's the only free time that is there. So much studying at home why is there not breaks!?
Three more days until test... Shrugs. stuDYING sucks! Dx Calling for a damn break on Saturday!
FREE SOME FROM STUDYING before insanity takes over. Sorry, sorry for the rant. You bros didn't need to read that. ;
Think I'm just going to separate comment replies with the story now. OTL

@ to that one chick ( you know who you are! ) : Going to kill..... Going to freaking kill...... *RAGE TO THE MAX*
CAN'T FREAKING BELIEVE THAT HAPPEN! I'LL FIND YOU ON THE WEEKEND, luck I didn't realize until after school! D<

@ bochang-san : Lol. xD

Eh? Really? o no I always thought Birdcage is boring. Honestly. ;;
aa, I can't really tell you. :"D That's a mystery to chapter 2...
Indeed Rena is... But what illness? I don't know... ~ o uo
Bad things always happen when someone is sick.... = w= ;;;
Eeh, hope it's great for you, bros. o xo ;

Something I wrote in two days. = x= ; I wished I made it a lot better though. *heavy sigh*
Laugh and feeling sorry for Yuko? ;
Yeah, I realized that. Thanks for the correction bro. = u=b
... Hnnn. Don't know if I should make another for it, honestly. I might make another where the meet again?
Don't know. lol. It depends on the mood. ;;

Ugh. I hate my friend for that, I DIDN'T THINK she was going to do that! She borrowed my laptop for college stuff, and I thought it was just that!
I need to hunt her down. And murder her because that was not awesome!

.... *siiiigh* It's fine. I'm over it now....
o nob .... It's all in the past Jurina box... I guess. Those guys were wuss in using their weapons? lol.
They would have probably take it out if Jurina and Mayu fought back more.
... don't worry...

I'M TOTALLY GETTING REVENEGE!

@ Sieka-nee :

LOL! xD That would totally be an EPIC FAIL. Eventually the main character will die someday. = w= Like all the way at the end so it won't be a fail! :U

Oh? hahaaa. I see. > w> I just keep my dictionary on my bookmark bar. o xo I always have too many tabs open so keep it up. OTL
Tab overload! Dx

Hahaaa. Guess so? xD Yuki fits in a lot of category bro. ;3

Root... is okay..... xD ;;; Network? Lol. That would be fitting if they met through the network. Hahaa. xD
We'll just live with..... Root or something. xD ;; Or go with dented circle. lol.

skjdfkls! </3 How cruel of you Sieka-nee! Lol. I'll probably flee before you even get me. o uo ; *should start now*

What!? OTL Yuki Muse is very tiring to handle. She takes so a lot of energy to try to fend her off. Well that Yuki's personality anyways.
.. True... = w= ; Though I wouldn't know how horrible cooking taste like. o xo Everyone at home can cook soo.... yeah. ;;
Eeh... Can you cook? o wo ;; ... duh. a simple glare says all. ~

I can be.... when I want to? Depends on the type of people I'm around or talking to, I can be at Yuko's level. o uo ;;;
lol. I just DON'T go running around touching breat. No yet? lol. B-but --You don't want to see me at that level. OTL
*snickers* You'll be fine. ~ Knowing else will know about it. xD

True... But, Jurina can be a little devil sometimes, so she'll find a way. = u= ;;;;

Maybe... Some other time there will be a drunk Haruna again. Just not now... o no
Her thoughts likely be in shambles if she was wasted. She WILL be hard to handle. She'll be worse than Yuko and jump all over that place. ;;;

Of course. Though you can always keep on trying, then you eventually realize it's impossible might as well give up then.
It would probably hurt to still try. ; Love is very random sometimes. = w= ;;; Siiiiiiigh. Complicated love...

Hahahaaaa. xD I can't tell you for sure if Yuki will or will not. It really depends on the mood and situation. ;P Getting someone drunk at a bad time is bery bad. ;;;
Oh yeah... Bro! xD Lol. I can't say anything about that because I have something in mind for JuriMayu prequel. o uo

True true. Forever alone buddies... *pat pat JuriMayu* Poor them. = w= ; They're going to help each other forget their old love... OR...
They can help each other get obtain their love one! o 3o ;
Wild plot bunnies! xD lol. Then you should write them down. It won't hurt, right? xD

It will likely happen because it just DID happen. ARGH! Was copying math notes then I just realize I was in lalala land, and end up writing my story with PEN! PEN!
OTL at least the teacher doesn't check our notes lol. I hate ripping paper out of notebooks since it's messy. xP
Bro... When you image the people who reads the essay. And my test is on Bio sooo... like...
For example the question will be : Tell about the function of homogeneous... Or something.
Me: *some how end up writing Yuki and Rena in bed together without realizing* ...........
Reader: Hnnnnn... //// It's a very very.... detailed explination ... /////// ......... BUT! It's wrong!
It would totally suck for the person who is a homophobic. o xo ;;;;

TOTALLY BAD for little kids! BUT you know what? I corrupt children so it's fine! >D
Hahahaaaa. xD Don't worry! Yuko is harmless if it's just thoughts. So allow her thoughts invade you!

Haha. Yeah. > w> It could clash together in a terrible way that it is unbalance, but then become balance afterwards! o:
Something like that. :9

Don't remember what we were even talking about when it came to the secrect! OTL

Hahahaaa. Yuki can't help it! Her muse runs wild for me so I can't do much about it. = w= ;;; the most is just smack her in the head.
Or Yuko jumps in and add more fuel to the fire. o no Geki... Hnnnn. Don't know? She might or might not, meeh, depends how Geki feels.

Yes, yes, I'll be fine. xD Three hours of sleep is actually good enough for me. IF I REALLY need to sleep I'll just pass out in the middle of the day or something.

Of course not. ~ Giving clues will be bad. o no Chapter 7 better much explains that. xD
But it's going to leave questions as well. *siiiiiiiiiiiigh*

Your Geki is pressuring! xD And very secretive! Lol. Gekikara is going to have to cause havoc eventually.
Like C'mon. It would not be Gekikara if she's not causing havoc! xD

Pssssh. I'm going to do that! Lol. Kidding. She'll reflect on her own actions later. o wo

.......... Bro. You may have just hit the spot about that. xD ;

It will die.... Eventually. Just very slowly... Don't worry Mayu will be there to tape it up!
Or fill it in. ; w;

Umm... OF COURSE NOT! Why would someone want to taste a table throw? > xo ;; It probably painful.
d;flksdk;flsdf! *huffs* Fine fine fine!
I'll still call you Sieka-nee even if I become the same age as you. lol. But still.... don't want to accept the fact. Hmph!

Lol. You expect too much about that. xD ;; It's totally not a Snow white story. It's like.... Something else!
There would be a hint about it in chapter 2 or 3?
Reason why Yuki slept for a year... I don't know. She was likely super exhausted. = w= After going through the torture with the witch.
hnnn. Really can't say it's love that helps them communicate. It's something else. ~ Rena mentioned it.... Though it might just be a childish thoughts. lol. Who knows. ;P
Her illness..... Another mystery answer I'll give you. = w=

Lol. Yuki absorbing it? Na. xD It's not that. There's a different reason. Magical kingdom? You're imagining a lot. o wo
Freak huge bird that Rena can ride. o xo Hnnnnn.... I wonder if Yuki will allow Rena to ride her....... Lol.
Probably asked Yuki Muse later. xD ;

Yuumei stuff are very inspiring. A very touching story. You read Knite right? <3 ... Can't always start story sappy and sweet. ;;
There times it need to start off bitter sometimes. </3

There are some people who can't face the person they love. Siiiiiiigh. Was really hard to decided whether to right that Yuko will make it in time or not.
It is.... Sometimes painful even writting it through a letter. Just not that painful I suppose.
...... o no Hnnnnnnnnnnn................
and thankies, bro. o uo
lkl;dkfsd, I am I am! </3

@ karomuwi-san : ... *pat pat* Because pretending to be drunk is bad. </3 You'll feel guilty if an accident happen when you were pretending to be drunk.
I don't think you should be drinking anyways. xP Alcohol is terrible in the first place. Eeeew... Beer! Dx Don't know how people actually hand drinking that. > A>
Oh.. Hahaa. I see. That's good I guess. So you don't get drunk. Wine is pretty good. just depends what flavor of wine your drinking.
o uob

Hahahaaa. xD Want Rena that badly aye? = u= Hahahaaaa. xD We'll at least she's not pulling a yandere. ~ It's adorable to see her childish. o uob

That's a big IF, bro. :"D Rena will someday.... Someday. Lol. Rin-chan don't lose so much blood that we need to call the ambulence. o xo ;
Well.... Then we better hope the ambulence are quick with the blood transfusion. ;; don't want you to go dying on us! Dx

Aa... I see. I know what you mean, but still. = w= ;; ... lol. I blame Sieka-nee for everything that has to do with YukiRena. ;P

Etto... ;;; I'm sorry about that? Good to know that you love it. o xo ;;
Honestly, I actually hated it in the past. Surprise I still have it burry under piles of other documents and not deleted. lol.

Kojipa got her reason. ; w;

Lol. It's fine, bro. xD ; Don't worry about fully responding, I don't mind. o xob


@ kahem-san : uugh. it's a hassle to deal with Geki.
Raven are, but the represent death. </3
o no ;;

@ Pwoper48-san : Enough reminder. OTL
I would be nice if I did have another personality. sigh.
I have enough of stuDYING. It so tiring! I want a break.
I'm actually still not done with my studying. Not until Monday, but.. I really do

@ Haruko-san : I'll think about making a second part... I'll think about it. o xo

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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 7 Part 2 )
« Reply #77 on: May 10, 2012, 09:57:12 PM »
WARNING : THE SCENE IS VERY GRUESOME. BLOODPLAY YOU CAN CALL IT? READ AT YOUR OWN RISK! 8U
IF YOU DON'T LIKE THE GORE.... WELL... THEN PRESS CTRL & F AND TYPE IN PRESENT. OR JUST DON'T READ IT!
THANKS BROS! o nob

Chapter 7 PART 2

Then there was a sound of bones breaking. Rena had swung the metal pipe at his ribs as the man was hit by it and was thrown to the wall. His body smashed painfully into the wall as he cried in pain, breaking several of his ribcage. His body shook as he slowly got to his feet, using the wall as his support. He coughed out blood as is it spilled to the floor in front of him. He stared the red fluid beneath his feet; his breath pattern became rigid as his vision becoming blurry.

An eerie giggled echoed the alley, how amusing it was for her when the man cried in pain. And yet, there was a hint of disappointment in her giggle. She then lifted the pipe and held it in both of her hands as she rested her cheek against the cool metal while she bit the bottom of her lips, giving a wide childish smile.

The man looked up at Rena, seeing her smile angered him, his blood started to boil as anger started to build, he gripped on the knife tighter and prepared to attack once more, “You son of a bitch!” He pushed himself off the wall, ignoring that pain that shot through his body, and darted for Rena.

Rena giggled once more before she swung the pipe like a bat, and hit him at the right side of his neck. A loud gruesome sound of bones snapping when the pipe made contact with his neck as he flew, blood spewing out of his mouth, the knifing flying out of his hand and landed near Rena’s feet. He fell to the floor with a thud, like a dead animal being tossed aside, as he lay there completely immobilized.

The boss’s and the two girls’ eyes grew wide in shock at the scene. The two girls felt a knot in their stomach; they had the urge to vomit by the gruesome sound and the smell of blood that invaded their nostril. They were not strong against the smell as their head became hazy. The horrid smell, sight, and sound they experienced, they wanted to block it out, but couldn’t. They knew they could simply close their eyes, blocking out the image, but their eyes would close. Their eye lids stayed wide open as if it were forcing them to witness the scene.

Stop! Please stop! Stop!’ The voice inside Rena’s mind cried out.

The current Rena ignored the cry as she slowly walked up the immobilized man, dragging the pipe on the floor making a strident scratching sound.

When she stood right in front of that man body, she looked down at him as she saw a hint of his chest moving. He was still alive and breathing, just barely. Another giggle escaped her lips before she lifted the pipe up, above her head, the tip pointing directly down at the skull.

No…. No… Don’t do it!

Ignoring the voice once more, she struck the pipe down into the skull, piercing through the skull and the brain. His skull smashed into pieces like glass, his brain becoming holey and squished, as blood splattered everywhere, staining the female’s lower body, and some on her face. The pool of blood started to form, as the air around them became heavier to breathe.

Jurina and Mayu stared horrified, forgetting the pain in their lungs, their breath taken away from them, as they couldn’t take their eyes away from the scene. The image of the pipe smashing into the man’s skull repeated in their head over and over like a broken tape recorder. And it wasn’t just the image, the blood that splattered every time the pipe smashed into the skull repeated in their mind. The knot in their stomach became stronger as they need to vomit, but the laughter. That lunatic person, they believe was Rena, stopped them from doing so. It’s like her insane laughter was some sort of curse that prevented them from vomiting, and only felt them this disgusting knot in their stomach.

They watched as Rena kicks the shattered skull around, and poke the brain with her pipe before jabbing it several times, causing more blood squirt out from every jab, while she giggle like a maniac. Rena found it so much fun, the smell, the sight, the sound, everything amused her. She started to kick the pool of blood around as if she was a child playing in a rain puddle, and splattering it all over the concrete floor as she continues to giggle.

The man that was knocked out, finally woken up, as he stared horrified at the lurid scene. “In God fuck what just happen?” The voice took Rena attention away from playing in the pool of blood, as she limply turned her head. A huge grin plastered on her face as if she found a new toy to play with, to break into pieces by her own two hands.

“Get the fuck out of here!” The boss shouted and tossed the two girls aside, uncaring about them as he now as he just wanted to save his own life. They landed with a thud, and in haled heavily, finally get their oxygen running through their lungs, but the knot in their stomach remains. They slowly sat up and moaned in pain. Jurina rubbed the back of her head and looked at the man as her eyes grew wide when the man brought up the gun, held it both in his hand and aimed for Rena’s chest; he tried to steady his trembling hand before firing.

Jurina scrambled to her feet and tried to stop the man. “NO! STOP!”

Jurina moved the man’s hand when he had pulled the trigger as the bullet went flying, and missed Rena’s chest, but slit her left arm when the bullet shot by and hit the wall instead.

Rena directed her eyes away from the man, and looked at the newly slit, seeing a droplet of blood trickling down her pale arm. She stared at it with a deadpan expression as she brought her opposite hand up to the droplet, and slide a finger up the trail of blood. When the trail has ended, she lifted her hand up to her lips, and licked off the blood, the copper taste dancing on her tongue, finding it rather sweet to her taste.

A guiltless smile creep formed on her lips as she wanted more of that sweet flavor. She slowly turned her head to the boss and eyed his revolver. Her eyes shined when she saw the gun, a different object for her to obtain more of that sweet taste she crave, and slowly made her way to the boss.

“Stay back! Stay back you fucken monster!” He shoved Jurina away, as she feel to the ground, he start shooting again, but every shot missed Rena, leaving merely more scratches on her arms or cheeks. Rena reach up and grab the gun, but when she saw the hands still curled around it, she gave a displeasing frown, dropping the pipe to the floor, as she brought up her now free hand and forcefully broke the finger away, snapping several of his finger in the process. The man howled in pain, as she started to giggle when she heard his howl and finally retrieving her new toy to play.

“Ne… Oji-san…” Rena said between her giggle as she examine the gun in awed. Please to have a new object in her hand for her to use.

The boss took a step back and stumble to the floor on his butt as he stared up at her appalled. He didn’t reply as he was too frightened to even speak, his own voice escaping from him. He tried to speak, but he only choked on his own voice when Rena lucid sweet eyes met his. Those eyes that appears to be innocent yet they clearly lust for blood.

Rena went down on her knees as she leaned closed to him, place both of her palms on the ground at the man’s side, as her mouth move close to his ears. “…Okkotteru ~ ?” She crooned.

The man screamed and tried to shuffle away from her, but was suddenly stopped when the gun was shoved into his mouth. “Annoying trash. ~” She hummed with a grin. Tears started rolling how the boss’s cheek, in his mind he begged for mercy, he begged to God to spare his life. Rena was about to pull the trigger, but then something came to her mind. Stopping her action, she pulled the gun out of his mouth and stared at him expressionlessly. She tilted her head, and looked down at the revolver as she opened the cylinder, seeing only a two bullets left. “Ne… Let play a game. ~” She said sweetly, she pushed the man down roughly to the floor, being flat on his back, before she sat on top of his stomach. “Let’s play Russian Roulette. ~”

The man eyes widen in fear as he stared up at her.

She spilled the empty bullets to on the floor before closing the cylinder. She then spun it, twice and allowed it to stop on its own as pulled the hammer.

CLICK!

She gave a sweet grin, “Let’s play, Oji-san ~ !” She pointed the gun directly at his right thigh of his leg, and pulled the trigger.

BANG!

“AAAAAAAAAAAARGH!” The man cried in agony. He tried to get up and hold his shot thigh, but Rena kept him pinned down by grabbing his throat as he squirmed under her grip. He tried to grab her and push her off; when he tried the revolver was immediately brought up to his skull as fear took over him. He believed the next chamber would empty, but he wondered, was it really empty? He wonders, but he didn’t want to take the chances. He gritted his teeth very tightly, trying to endure the torturous pain, and continue to beg to God to save him.

Rena hummed a sweet tone as she enjoys watching him suffer under her wrath. She gave a giggle, and brought the revolver pointing at his chest this time. His heart currently beat frantically hoping the chamber was empty. She pulled the hammer again. CLICK!

The man closed his eyes and begged to God repeatedly in his head. When she was about to pull the trigger, the man, that just woken up after being knocked unconscious, tackled Rena to the ground, removing her off of his boss.

“Fucken monster, stay away!” The man shout as wrestled with Rena, trying to keep her pinned down beneath him. Rena started laughed and thrashed under his arm; she managed to kick him aside, changing their position as Rena was now on top of him, and held the revolver to his skull. Without hesitation she pulled the trigger.

BANG!

The bullet shot through the man’s head as he was now lifeless, blood oozing out from his head as another pool of blood started to form.

“Hahaahaaaa.” She dropped the gun, and cupped the blood from the pool as she watched it seep between her fingers, spilling like sand in an hour glass, as it drizzled on top of the lifeless head, drizzling the man’s own blood on his own dead face.

No this is not me... This is not me! Stop… Just stop already…’ The voice whimpers in the back of Rena’s mind. Hoping that the current Rena would stop, but she didn’t.

Rena was so absorbed from the blood bath she created as she wanted more. She lust for more blood. She wanted to imbrue her hands with more blood. She wanted more of that sweet scent. She slowly turned her head back to other man, the last remaining man, as she saw him trying to escape by crawling away, his shot leg leaving a trail a blood behind me.

Getting up from her spot, she slowly walked her way to the man.

“RENA STOP! PLEASE STOP ALREADY! JUST STOP!”

Rena stopped in her tracks when the voice called her name. Turning to the voice she saw tears streaming down from Jurina’s eyes. She stared at her blankly and tilted her head.

"Jurina-chan ~ ! " Rena called her name, a wide grin creeping on her face as she walked over to Jurina. Jurina couldn't move, she was too terrified to move, she felt as if something had glued to her the ground while she stare into those familiar, and yet unfamiliar eyes. The figure leaned forward, and wiped the small splattered blood off her cheeks. But the hand only smeared it more, and left more blood print on Jurina’s cheek because of Rena’s bloody hands. “Hehehee, I missed you. ~ !” Jurina couldn’t break away the eye contact from Rena as she noticed Rena was leaning close to her face.

No...! Stop! Leave her alone!

Rena body stopped in her movement as her suddenly eyes grew wide. Jurina blinked several times, feeling Rena’s warm breathe as their lips were only several inches apart. She continues to stare into the eyes, finally recognizing the eyes she knew so long, those warm and sweet eyes she knew. The air around them finally felt normal, everything was becoming light once more, expect for the reek of massive blood spill that lingered around, but there was no long the berserk aura the other admitted.

“R-rena…?” She whispered, feeling like her breathe was taken away from her. She felt warm water dripping rolling down her cheeks as it wasn’t her own, they were Rena’s. Endless amount of tears dripped from the other girl’s eyes.

“I’m sorry… Jurina… I’m – I don’t know what… I’m --” Rena didn’t finished, she quickly moved away from Jurina and ran off. She couldn’t bear to see her own destruction. She couldn’t even face to see Jurina now. How much trauma she has caused for the two, especially Jurina, she couldn’t bear face her own actions. How was she going to face her? She wanted to get away; she wanted to drown herself in the sea of darkness where she didn’t have to face Jurina or anyone. Running down in a bloody mess, she held her head down as she ran passed Yuko and Yuki without knowing.

Yuki went into a halt, as Yuko continue running. Yuko somehow ran into Yuki when she was getting off her night shift work, as she told her the situation as Yuki decided to come along and help.

She turned to see the person that ran passed them, looking very familiar to her. Rena? She knitted her brow, unsure if it really was. Seeing the blood all over the person that ran passed by her, she couldn’t believe it would be Rena. Brushing the thought aside, she started to run again to follow Yuko. Then she notice Yuko was at a stop and facing into the alley terrified, blood completely lost from her face.  When Yuki saw what Yuko was seeing, she gave the same expression too.

Blood every, two body lifeless on the floor, a man crying in pain as he tried to crawl his way, and two girls curled up, their head burry in the knees trembling. “Mayu, Jurina!” Yuko ran towards the two, trying to avoid splashing her feet into the pool of blood. As Yuki scrunched up her nose from the smell of blood, as it made her somewhat dizzy. She wonders how Yuko was able to go pass it without feeling sick by the smell.

“H-help me…” The man groaned, stretching his hand up to Yuki begging for help.

Yuki furrowed her brow and face the man, “What happen here?” She demanded an answer from him rather than helping him.

“A-a m-monster… M-monster… Aaaaaaaaah!” The man didn’t answer Yuki, realizing he was traumatized from whatever had happen, as Yuki just ignored him and rush her way to the others.

Yuko held Jurina in a tight hug, brushing Jurina’s back, and shushing her while Jurina whimpers and shook under the embrace.

Yuko kneeled down in front of Mayu, and lightly petted her head. “Mayu…” Yuki worriedly called Mayu’s name. Before she knew, Mayu tossed herself on Yuki and buried her face in her chest as she sobbed and trembled. Yuki would often push Mayu away when she did that, but now it was different. Wrapping her arms around Mayu, she pulled her into an embrace while she continued to pet her head. She wasn’t so good with comforting someone, she wished she was now.

“I-I was s-s-so s-scared…” Mayu murmured between her tears.

“Sssh. Don’t speak.” Yuki calmly said, and continue to pet Mayu.

“R-rena…. R-ena… S-s-save… u-us… f-f-from t-those men…” Jurina tried to calm down, but she was having trouble breathing and speaking between her sniffles. She wiped the tears from her eyes and took a deep breath. “T-they… t-t-tried to... r-r-rape u-u-us…”

They? Yuki and Yuko both thought as they took a glimpse at the scene.

Rena did all this? Yuki asked herself, surprised and terrified at the scene a single person made.

Oh, no. Yuko panic, she helped Jurina up to her feet, but her feet were still wobbly, she used Yuko as support. “Yuki, we need to get them out of here.”

Yuki nodded in agreement. “Mayu, can you—Actually, never mind.” Without second thought Yuki lifted Mayu in a bridal style. The only life time chance Mayu would probably ever experience it from Yuki. Mayu kept face buried into Yuki and was still crying Mayu actually enjoyed the feeling deep down, but she was still traumatize about the scene as the enjoyment was easily brushed away. “Yuko, whose place, is closer?” Yuki turned to Yuko.

“Mariko’s.”

Yuki gave another nod, allowing Yuko to take the lead as she steadily moved Jurina with her. Jurina close her eyes trying to avoid seeing the sight, but the smell. She still could smell the blood everywhere, making her feel weaker, but she held on until they were out of the alley.

Yuki followed them, with Mayu in her arms, until she stopped when she heard a cry man.

“Please…. Help me…” He begged.

Yuki couldn’t help feel this anger building up inside of her, what he and his friends have done to Mayu and Jurina was reprehensible. Without hesitation, she ended up taking all her anger out by kicking the man in the ribs, hard enough to break a few ribs cages, as he cried in agony. “Better pray for the ambulance to save you. Better yet… Die in hell.” She spat the words to him coldly before following Yuko and Jurina out of the alley, and leaving the man to die.

-  - - - -

There was a knock on the door as Mariko came over, and opened up. Her brows were raised when she saw for the four. “What’s up?”

“Can we allow the two to rest here?” Yuko asked sound very worried.

Mariko was curious, but she didn’t argue and accepted their request. Yuko and Yuki explained what they saw, and what Jurina told them, in another room while Jurina and Mayu slept. Understanding the situation, Mariko allowed them to stay overnight. And from there on, Yuko and Yuki found out that Rena had encaged herself within her own room. They called her out several times, tried to persuade with food, and nothing worked. Yuki had the urge to just tear the door right there, but Yuko stopped her because of the bills they would have to pay. With an irritated sigh, Yuki didn’t tear down the door into shreds as they continue to try different tactics.

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PRESENT

Yuko couldn’t help but give another heavy sigh as she didn’t want to bring back the past. “What reason do you need to know is what I need to ask first?”

“She is my precious friend in the past.”


Yuko gave a quizzical expression at Yuki’s statement. “What? I never met you when we were little.” She started feel a little irritated for some reason. Her hand curled into a fist, ready to punch Yuki at any moment.

“That’s because I moved before I met you likely.” Yuki notices Yuko’s hand curled into a fist as she decided to ignore it.

“Were…” Yuko took a deep breath, trying to calm her sudden irritation, “Were you… The person Rena waited for? Black…?”

Yuki raised a brow, confused at Yuko’s statement. “What?”

Suddenly, Yuko grabbed Yuki’s shirt by the collar and pushed her against the wall, sending a pain of shock through her spine, “Answer me! Were you Black?” Yuko teeth gritted together tightly as she was furious, as she couldn’t contain the irritation inside of her, why was she furious? She wonder that herself. She didn’t know why, when she recalled the past when she first met Rena, and saw pain in her eyes. Yet there were filled with hope, believing the person that Rena waited will come, but never once did, she just became furious. Furious that the person Rena waited for never came. Was that her answer? Yuko wonder as well.

“How do you know?” Yuki furrowed her brows, demanding from answer from Yuko instead of answering her question.

“Rena was the one that told me! Did you know she waited for YOU every day!? Never once she told me who Black was, she had high hopes that Black will send her something and she would then tell me then. Every day I see her staring at the mail box, whether shine or rain she still waited in front of it! She always had a big stupid smile of her face, but every time nothing came she took her depression and anger on someone else. Did you know!?” Yuko kept her anger, but tears started to blur her vision.

Yuki looked at Yuko’s eyes feeling all the guilt piled over her. She slowly shook her head as she never knew she caused Rena so much pain. “I’m… Sorry…” She mumbled bitterly, she didn’t know what else to say, as turned her head away.

“Don’t apologize to me… Apologize to her.” Yuko whisper irritatedly, letting go of her grip on Yuki, as she then wiped the tears away from her eyes. “She’s the one mourning.”

“…I know…”

There was complete silence between them, only the sound of Yuko sniffling echoed the hallways.

“But… One thing doesn’t clear up… No, two things, why doesn’t she remember me? And what do mean by the other Rena?” Yuki narrows her eyes at, hoping Yuko would full answer.

Yuko took another deep breath, her mind finally clear away, her irritation quickly vanish. She wiped the last remaining tears from the corner of her eyes, before she turned to face Yuki with a small frown. She hesitated for a moment wondering if Yuki should know or not. She gave a worried expression and fought against with her thoughts, until she finally decided to tell Yuki.

Her lips parted as she began to speak, “I can’t fully tell you what happen… But I can tell you what I saw.” Paused and saw Yuki giving an understanding nod.

“It was three years ago. Rena’s last year of high school. One day, a snowy day, she got into a fight with someone, who it was and reason I don’t know. I suddenly got a call from Rena, or I thought she called me, since she didn’t answer me when I spoke over the phone. I started hearing people screaming and giggling over the line. Then suddenly there was loud sound of wheels screeching then I lost connection. I immediately started searching for Rena.” She stared to grow silent. "And when I found her in the parking lot of her school.... She was bleeding to death." Yuko said painfully, recalling the dreadful memories, as she bit her lower lips. Her hand became into a tighter fist. “Blood everywhere… Snow soaked in blood. She was drench in blood herself, her head it was bleeding --the bleeding wouldn’t stop. It wouldn’t stop!”

She punched the wall behind her, “I was so useless when the ambulance came! I could only hope for the success of the surgery. So useless I was! I could merely watch, and patiently waited.” Her hand started quivering as guilt slowly piled on her when she couldn’t help Rena. “She was saved, just barely on time. The problem was she fell into a comatose state after the surgery. Day after day after day… She didn’t wake up. Months passed and she still hasn’t awakened, but she finally did late in the summer. She wasn’t the same though. Her eyes became softer, weaker, and fragile. It was as if the Rena I knew completely died in that even, although it was fine. As long she was a live it didn’t matter. She remembered me clearly, but when I mention Black. She didn’t recall who the person was; I didn’t want to tell her. I kept silence, and allow those memories to be completely forgotten so she can create new ones. Then I soon started to realize something was out of place after her discharge.”

She scrunched her nose, trying to call what happen. “Rena kept whimpering a voice inside her head, how it haunts her every day, how it kept telling her it lust for violence, for blood, for cries. The voice finally over whelmed her, and she suddenly became different. An insane aura radiated from her, it was as if a rapid vicious dog had been release, her eyes became the eyes I knew in the past, but… more vicious, more anger, I couldn’t believe it was her. It was as if her personality became split.”

She lifted her hand up, and touched her neck. “She tried to strangle me, but she managed to regain her mind before she suffocated me… From then on, the voice in Rena’s head would give her headaches, and take over her body and cause havoc. I manage to talk to the other Rena by beating her in a fight. And persuaded her, she promised to never appear again, or fight anyone, unless her heart grew weak. After that, the other Rena never appeared again as if she went into deep slumber.” Yuko finally finished as she scratched the back of her head.

She looked up at Yuki, who was utterly speechless and shocked. Yuko didn’t expected an answer from Yuki, she knew it was probably to sudden for her to absorb everything in her mind. She clasped her hand on Yuki’s shoulder. “Take your time… There’s no rush…” Yuko gave a small nod. “And can I trust you look over Rena for me? I need to get back to work before my salary gets cut and we lose the apartment.” She stared into Yuki’s eyes as Yuki gave a firm nod. “Good… If anything happens, call me. See you later.” Yuko started to walk away, but then stopped and turned to Yuki and giving her a soft smile. “Oh… Whatever your reason was, I’m sure you have a good reason.” Yuko turned back around and left the apartment.

Yuki stood there silently to herself. Her mind collected all the information Yuko told her. She imagined Rena in front of the mail box every day. Thinking about it, her heart started to feel like lead, but she didn’t shed tears. I’m sorry, Rena… I’m sorry. I… I…

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There was yelling outside of Rena’s room earlier. She lifted her head up and tried to listen to outside, but the voice spoke kept speaking to her she couldn’t make out what they were saying, as the yelling finally stopped, and everything became silence.

 ‘Did you know she had been calling you?’ The voice wonders curiously, breaking the silence.

Rena furrowed her brows; she then heard the voice click her tongue before continuing. ‘She’s been calling over and over. Hehehe. ~ Can you not hear her voice? She desperately was trying to call you. Rena-chan! Rena-chan! Or better yet, Gekikara!’ The voice mimics the person she was talking about. ‘Hahahaaa, oh how cruel of you to forget.

“I don’t know who you’re talking about! I never forgot anyone!” Rena snapped at the voice.

The voice gave a bone chilling giggle causing Rena to shiver, ‘Did your memories split too? I thought you still remember. Heheheee, no matter….

“What do you mean? Split too!?”

 ‘Heheheee, how I about I give you a little refresher?’ Images started flashing into Rena’s mind, thousand of images flashing less than second. Rena shut her eyes tight; she held her head and curled into a tight ball, “Nngh!” Her head throbbed in pain, all these images, all these voices she heard in her head, everything was too much for her to handle she wanted it to stop. “S-stop!” She cried.

Gekikara! Don’t you dare forget!’ A familiar voice and scene replayed in her head.

Rena shot her eyes open, a sweat drop trickling down her forehead, as the images finally stopped, but those images, those voices, she knew what they were now.

“Yuki…” Rena whispered exhaustedly.

There was a loud knock on the door. “Rena? Rena, open up! What happen?” Yuki worried called on the other side of the door. She kept on knocking, hoping Rena would open.

“Yukirin…?” Rena eyes widen, finally realizing why that time was so familiar to her. She pushed herself off the bed and walked towards the door.

Hahahaaaa. ~ Now you remember some of it. Time for revenge. ~

“Wait! There’s still more question I --” Then her mind snapped.

Rena placed a hand the back of her neck, and rubbed them as if her neck was sore, before she rolled her head around as her bone gave a crackling sound. The knocked continues as Yuki also continues calling Rena. A wide grin creeps on her face as a giggled slip out of her lips.

Wait! Don’t hurt her!’ The voice cried, pleading to her other self.

“I’m not going to. ~ I just want to greet her first before anything else. ~” She said kindheartedly, setting her arms back to her side as she walked to the door and open it.

Yuki stared down at Rena, as she held her head down hiding her eyes from Yuki. She gave a relief smile seeing that she was fine. But the smile quickly changed into a worried frown as she felt something was different. “Ren -- ” She was cut off when Rena suddenly pushed Yuki against the wall, her hand pinning Yuki against the wall by her arms as pain shot through her back once more, and wince. “R-rena…?” She murmured painfully, her eyes moved down as they met Rena’s. Slowly her eyes grew wide when she saw them. They were different. They were completely different; they look like child’s eyes, begging for entertainment. They lust for havoc. "Who... Who are you?"

Rena ignored her question and snaked her arms around Yuki’s neck, pulling her into a hug. As her face lean close to Yuki’s ear.  “Tadaimaaaa ~ !” Rena hummed sweetly and giggled.

“Black ~ !”

To be Continue in Chapter 8

Lesson learned... never let a malicious person to borrow laptop. OTL
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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 7 Part 2 )
« Reply #78 on: May 11, 2012, 01:29:59 AM »
First!!! Uwahahaha!
Will edit this after read in my class.


Already in my class with a high speed internet connection~ UWAHAHAHA

IT's so INTENSE!! GRUESOME and BLOODY!
SO MUCH GORE!!! LOVE IT!! UWAHAHAHA

al-san! You're the best! LOL well sieka too.
you're both awesome!

I'm okay with some gore. since i used to read manga that have some gore and bloody scene. :D

i love it!! :D
LOVEITLOVEITLOVEITLOVEIT!!! :D

idk what to comment. LOL
i just love it!

and Mayuyu.. trying to get an advantage eh? :p
but poor jurina.. she's still a kiddo and she's to saw such a gruesome scene in front of her eyes..
i'm pretty sure, she'd be traumatized..

and rena.. the accident.. what caused it? :3
tell me tell me tell me~

sorry but i'm kinda excited today. :p


@Muwi: I WIN~ #PROUD

@Sieka: Kinda lazy to post another, so i just edit this post hope you'll read it sieka-san(?)
hmmm, i didn't think about anything.. i mean both of you (al-san and you) great at writing angst or some gore scenes.
so i love it~ LOL
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Re: Forgotten Memories ( Chapter 7 Part 2 )
« Reply #79 on: May 11, 2012, 02:56:32 AM »
First!!! Uwahahaha!
Will edit this after read in my class.

no fair!! I wanted to be first, oppa! anyway, since I could only get second spot here at my room.... I shall reserve it. ahahaha. I'll re-edit once I come back from badminton practice.

Yeah... I don't really wanna get drunk and regret anything I did, since I always see those kind of regretting in the screen. LOL. Besides, I don't like beer anyway. I don't like the smell, since just getting a whiff of it makes my face scrunch in disgust. I don't understand how that can be the top three beverage in the world.  :smhid Or maybe I just have a picky tongue? :hiakhiakhiak:

Well...I would like to have a Yandere Rena-sama. That would be nice to read.  :lol: Well... Any kind of genre with Rena-sama is fine with me~ :bigdeal: but...A childish Rena-sama always wins, for me. It's just because she has that princess-aura surrounding her, making it adorable to read when she's childish!
If I ever do need an ambulance, then I'll just prepare some blood bags just in case. I can't die due to that!   :glasses: I still have several more fics to update, as well as write down! And I still need to see some more of your great works!

Hmm~ :glasses: Not all of it is due to Sieka-san. I started to think about the YukiRena pairing after watching MG 2 and reading ShibuyaDokiDoki-san's works. So...I'm blaming Shibuya-san and MG 2. :hiakhiakhiak:

It's a great thing that you didn't delete it. It would have been a waste, you know. ^^
And just because Kojipa has her reasons...What about Yuuchan?!  :on voodoo:
:bigdeal: Oh well~ Guess that the only way to make me feel better about the ending...is to make Haruna suffer in SoUL. Mwuhahahahahaha~  :ding: :kekeke:


And onto the comments!

Part One of Chapter Seven: To be honest...I was trolled here. XD I wanted to comment...but I wanted to wait for a while, since I was a bit busy. By the time I planned on writing a comment for the first part, you updated. LOL! Talk about coincidence! :hiakhiakhiak:

Anyway! I love how Gekikara-sama took over Rena-sama's body! It was so cool! It was really awesome at how you made Gekikara-sama took over, really! Her personality has really split into two, and it's like she's having war with herself! The unleashment of Gekikara-sama!!! :kneelbow: Al-kun! You're really a great author! Rena-sama couldn't even stop Gekikara-sama from taking over, since she was weak at the moment.

At first, I wanted Rena-sama to fight with them using her own skills, but unleashing Gekikara-sama was just...WOW *speechless* I know that I'm repeating my words over and over again, but I can't help it! I just love this chapter very much! Totally awesome!

Part Two: I have two MAIN words for this update.

GRUESOMELY AWESOME!!!

:mon beam: I LOVE IT! To the point that I just had to re-read it three times! No exaggerations, I swear!

And Russian Roulette? Wow, Al-kun. That's a fun game I enjoyed reading about! Maybe... :glasses: Hmm~ I should include that to make things interesting. Hmm~ Maybe not? :hiakhiakhiak: Who knows~ I don't even want to think about anything besides this update! Woohoo~

And thank god, Rena-sama was able to stop Gekikara-sama from hurting Jurina. That would totally make Rena-sama guilty afterwards, I'm sure. Since Rena-sama already felt guilty and such for doing such a wonderful bloodbath, if Jurina got hurt because of her...She's surely going to lose it. I don't want Rena-sama to go insane...yet. Haha.

And wow...Yuko getting mad at Yuki! *dances around* I totally love this fic!!!
I don't really understand why Yukirin never sent Rena-sama any mail, or even called.  :mon wind:
Rena-sama... *hic*  :mon whine: why didn't you send any to her, you Black Yukirin?!?!?!  :mon fire:
I knew that she can't send any messages, or even send back an SMS to others!
BUT to NOT send Rena-sama any?! ARGH!!!! :mon fire:

I'm very disappointed with you, Yukirin! Black! You selfish person!  :mon woo:
 :mon hanky: How could you do that to Rena-sama?
And then you wanted her to remember you?!  :mon uggh:

YUKI deserves to be forgotten AND replaced by Jurina!!! :mon mad:
I'm very disappointed with how Yukirin acted! Making Rena-sama wait and wait and wait!
And even making her have her personailities split into two!
 :mon yell: How you could you Yukirin?!
How could you make a promise to never forget each other?!
And you!!!  :gmon pissed: You never even sent her a mail!!!
A MAIL!!!
A MAIL, DAMMIT!!!! :mon fire:

*hics*

 :mon emo: My Rena-sama...  :mon waterworks: How could Yukirin do that to her?

*coughs* Anyway...I should stop my Rinage.  :mon ko: It's no good for me. I think that I actually have my blood pressure rising, because of this. *sigh* And I'm a low blood pressure type.  :mon exhaust:

Like what Yuko said to Yukirin...She had a good reason.
REASON.
If that certain reason isn't good enough, I just might wish for Rena to fall for Jurina! So, Yukirin! You better have a good damn reason!
Don't make me do my Rinage again! It's exhausting. :mon exhaust: and my vision is getting blurr because of being upset about YukiRena. :mon ko:

But then... :glasses: It's not Yukirin's fault.

 :mon geek: It's you, Al-kun! It's your fault for making Rena-sama's Gekikara(-sama)'s side come out in this fic.
So you should be the one I should be getting mad at.  :mon cweepy: Yeah! That's right!  :mon determined:
It should be YOU!
You didn't make Yukirin send Rena-sama a mail, that's why! So...it should be you I should be unleashing my rage on.
But then... I'm too exhausted. "mon exhaust:

So...you better feel grateful to Yukirin for enduring my rage, when it was you who should be receiving it.
Aish...This fic might be bad for my health.
Making me giddy and squeal out in offices.
Making me dream and actually have a nosebleed.
Then making me upset and give me high blood!

Aish...See, Al-kun? This is how your fic affects me.
It affects me to the max, that I even jump up and scream in anger inside my room.
I'm so lucky that I wasn't making my commenting in my father's office again.
That would just cause me to be kicked out. LOL

Anyway...I think that'll be my comments and raging.
I have no more energy left to type.
And most of my rage have been typed into the keyboard.

Anyways...Farewell, Al-kun. Thanks for the update... :mon exhaust:

« Last Edit: May 11, 2012, 04:31:43 PM by karomuwi »
Had a withdrawal, so now I'm planning to fall in love with the couples all over again

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Here are my fics~! They can be found amongst these three. :hee:

Shots
Love's A Mission
Oh My Dolly!


R.A.Y
SoUL (Series)


The Akiba Family (T.A.F)

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