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Hi! I wrote a fanfic long ago but didn't have any ideas left for that Fanfic so I decided its time to start writing a new one!  So here is the prologue!!

Oh by the way the pairings I ship are marimii , atsumina , mayujuri , gekiblack , tomotomo , saeyuki , kojiyuu , kumianna, and yea I guess that's about it LOLS I am not sure myself whether there are others that I ship or not because they are all too adorable! And there are too many of them LOL! And I guess I will include them all into this fanfic YAY the big union LOLS.




PROLOGUE

In this world, there are always times when you feel down. There are always times when you feel stressed out by your studies. There are always those times that you feel like you are all alone…

I have always thought I am alone. My families, I have none… or you could say they don’t even care about my existence. My friends… they only befriend me for my money.
Why do I live in this world, I sometimes wonder.

Ah… that's right.. I found my reason the very day I transferred to this school.
The day that I found people that I can really call friends. Also, the person that made me understands my existence. The day I found her, my one and only partner, my soul mate, my everything.


TBC...


O if you have any ideas or suggestion for the title pls feel free to comment! This will go untitled until I choose one hehe. Sorry if it’s boring its my first official fanfic!

« Last Edit: July 06, 2012, 10:36:42 PM by jehovachiabi »

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Re: My new attempt of a fanfic : PROLOGUE - untitled
« Reply #1 on: April 23, 2012, 07:34:38 PM »
i want saeyuki, atsumina, kojiyuu, tomotomo and every couple of akb48 plss.. continue writing this fanfic!!! :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow:

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Re: My new attempt of a fanfic : PROLOGUE - untitled
« Reply #2 on: April 23, 2012, 08:33:49 PM »
ooo i wonder who this person is lol

i pretty much ship most of ur pairings lol but i tend to go for rare ones like shibuya and gekikara lol

poor whoever it is getting used for her money glad she finds someone

continue defo i wanna know more

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Re: My new attempt of a fanfic : PROLOGUE - untitled
« Reply #3 on: April 24, 2012, 05:30:58 AM »
uwah!! Who is she?
The family background is.. soo.. #crying
poor her.. and her friends are scumbag..

so who's the soulmate?
it must be love at the first sight Kya~ *squealing like a girl

it's so fluffy, i'm gonna die. LOL
update please. :p
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Re: My new attempt of a fanfic : PROLOGUE - untitled
« Reply #4 on: April 24, 2012, 10:39:56 AM »
i want mayujuri <3 and all of pairings that you ship..LOL..

please update the 1st chapter..


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Re: My new attempt of a fanfic : Chapter 1 - New school
« Reply #5 on: April 24, 2012, 04:48:55 PM »
Thanks for the comments!!! Here is chapter 1:D


Chapter 1: New school.

In the darkness of the room, a tint of light could be seen. A girl with short hair was looking at pieces of papers.

“So it’s finally tomorrow…””she mumbled to herself while flipping through the papers.

“Akb privilege girls school? What kind of name is that.” The girl laughed to herself finding the name intriguing.

“I guess it will be fun…at least I hope so…” She said with a sigh as she put the papers back into the file, off the table lamp and walked towards her bed.

Lying on her bed, she stared into the darkness in front of her as she let her thoughts run wild inside her mind, hoping tomorrow would come soon so that she could leave this house. This house that she didn't feel the need of her existence.

……………………………………………………………………………………….

The next day came as fast as the night had ended. The shoulder length haired girl jump up of bed, looking forward to her new life in the new school. Somehow, she was had a good feeling from today. Maybe, just maybe, something good is finally going to happen in her life.

She stood in front of the mirror checking her uniform for the last time before she grabbed her bag and luggage and ran out of the house.

“I hope I never see you again. Bye” She turned back for the last time and said coldly to the grand looking house in front of her before she finally went on her way to school, almost running from the excitement that she is feeling. Not even a tint of emotion was left for the house. Nobody even tried to stop her from leaving. She finally broke free.

…………………………………………..

Now, standing in front of a majestic school, she felt herself shiver from the view in front of her. She closed her eyes and took a deep breath.

“The feeling of freedom, even the air smells refreshing.” She thought to herself.

She scanned the schools name ‘Akb privilege girls school’ before grabbing her luggage and took her very first’ step into the new school.

Strolling slowly towards the schools building, she saw a sakura tree which haven’t bloom, a huge water fountain in the middle of the big square of the school, lots of benches under the trees for students to relax, a huge green field with tennis courts on it, lots of smaller stores for rent (probably for school festivals or activities), even the tiles used for the school’s ground had a majestic feel to it.

She walked into the school’s building; towards the principal’s office only to find her jaw dropping at the sight in front of her as she walked along the corridors. She had thought that the school’s classroom would be like those normal ones that she sees everyday. However, the classrooms here in this school were painted with golden and red paint, and inside the classrooms, instead of normal paint, it was decorated with warm coloured wallpapers. Even the chairs and tables are shaped differently and there were the school crest on each table to represent the schools very own production. She was getting more excited with each step she took.

Finally, she arrived at the principal’s office. Nervously, she knocked on the door and heard a faint “come in please” coming from inside the room.

Turning the knob of the door, she opened the door and quietly closed it when she was inside the office. The office was huge and there were tables and chairs aligned neatly and fashionably. She looked towards the figure that walking towards her with a smile.

“Nice to meet you, I believe you must be Miss Matsui. I am the principal, Sakako Shida. Please just call me Ms Shi.” The principal extended her hand for a handshake.

“Ah y-yes my name is Matsui Jurina, nice to meet you Ms Shi. I am in your care from now on…” Jurina said as she shook the hand that was held out to her.

“So jurina, do you know where your class is located at?” Ms shi said in a sudden high pitch voice, which startled jurina.

“U-umm… t-the school is big and u-umm I just s-saw the u-umm…” jurina stammered as she was startled by the sudden question.

“What’s wrong with you jurina! Stammering now of all times! And why does this principal suddenly give off that high-pitched voice! Omg… it does not suit her at all! Argh what do I do now I am so nervous!” Jurina facepalmed herself in her mind.

The principal looked at jurina with an amused expression and laughed at the nervous jurina.

“HAHAHA!! Hey relax! I was just joking! It IS your first day here and I don’t expect you to know the place well. Anyway, your teacher in charge will bring you to your classroom and you will start class straight away. I hope you do well here Miss Matsui. Most important thing is to HAVE FUN! After all, studying in a fun environment is the best way to excel.” The principal said with a very warm voice.

Just as the principal finished her little speech, a knock came on the door.

“Come in please” the principal said as she walked back to her seat.

“Ms Shi, I came here to bring Ms Matsui to her class.” A teacher with tied hair and glasses walked in.

“Ah yes that girl there is Matsui Jurina. Please bring her to her class thank you.” Ms shi said while she started typing on her computer.

“Hai. Well then Matsui jurina san? Please follow me. The class will be starting soon. Let’s hurry.” The teacher guided Jurina out of the office. Just when they reached the door of the office, the teacher turned around and said: “oh I forgot to introduce myself. My name is Sakako Mahida. You can just call me Ms Ma. Nice to meet you. I believe you will enjoy your next 5 years here.”

(This school is special and the students here study straight up to university after their high school, which is 3 years and university 2 years so it’s 5 years altogether.)

They reached the classroom and jurina was surprised at the quietness surrounding the corridor. As Ms ma slide the door open, jurina still did not hear any sound coming from within the classroom. This made her even more nervous than she already was.

Ms ma motioned her to go into the classroom and jurina walked in while still dragging along her luggage

 (Weird school. They don't show students to their dorm first? Lols)

As jurina walked in, she found out the reason of the quietness in the classroom. She saw something that made her feel like someone finally noticed her presence and someone… no not just someone, more like everyone.
Everyone was awaiting the arrival of the new student.
Everyone was waiting for the arrival of jurina.
This was the first time jurina felt her own presence.
This was the first time jurina felt that she was there, she was alive…



TBC in chapter 2: Classmates or Friends.


« Last Edit: April 24, 2012, 05:01:49 PM by jehovachiabi »

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Re: My new attempt of a fanfic : Prologue - untitled
« Reply #6 on: April 24, 2012, 05:31:14 PM »
Oooh~ another SKE fic perhaps? With some members of AKB tagging along~ WOOHOO~

Who shall she be paired with? Rena-sama or Churi-san? I wonder who.

And I feel kind of bad for Jurina-san. She's being used by her friends for money. *sigh* Oh, Jurina. I pity thee.

Next update please! ^^
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Re: My new attempt of a fanfic : Chapter 1 - New school
« Reply #7 on: April 25, 2012, 12:31:07 PM »
>> karomuwi

Hi thanks for the comment! but the pairings this time will be as stated in chapter 1 because i ship them hehe sorry bout that!! ><
And yes! here's the next update! xD


Chapter 2 – Classmates or friends.

Jurina walked into the classroom with a shock because she found many pairs of eyes looking at her.

What made her happy was that every pair of eyes had the expression that she had longed for. The expression that not even her parents gave her. They were all looing forward to see her. Waiting for her. Everyone had a warm look on his or her faces. It was as if they knew the situation jurina was in.

Jurina’s POV

I was nervous and happy at the same time. Nervous because I had to introduce myself to my classmates and happy because they…somehow, they warmed my heart.

I moved forward and stood beside Ms ma.

“My name is Matsui jurina… u-umm…  Nice to meet you” I didn't know what to say. I was too nervous for words. This is the first time I transferred to a new school and I didn't know what I have to say to introduce myself. Since I was nervous, I decide to make my introduction short and sweet.

The teacher motioned for me to sit down at the empty seat that was beside the window.

“Awesome! I get to sit beside the window! My all time favorite place!” I thought to myself.

Noone’s POV

“Jurina-san please take the seat beside the window at the back.” Ms Ma said as she pointed at the seat beside the window.

Jurina walked towards her seat and felt pairs of eyes following her while she walked and drag at her luggage.

She sat down in her seat feeling refreshed and ready for study.

The lesson commenced and jurina took out her textbook. The eyes that she felt earlier was gone and the classroom was replaced with the normal feeling of how it should be, quiet and serious.

Class ended swiftly and it was time for lunch. Jurina didn't know where she should go for lunch and she just sat in her seat and looked out of the window, wondering and hoping that she would make some true friends in this school.

Jurina was deep in thoughts when suddenly she felt a tap on her shoulder.
She turned to look to see who tapped her shoulder and found the girl sitting beside her smiling at her.

“Hi, jurina-san. My name is Matsui rena please just call me rena. San is too formal for me hehe. I was surprised when I heard your first name. hahaha I guess we will get along well.” Rena smiled at the shocked jurina.

“Oh btw, jurina-san are you not gonna eat your lunch? Since its lunch time now.” Rena asked.

“H-hi r-rena please just call me jurina too, u-umm to be honest I haven toured the school yet and I don't know where the canteen is hahaha.”jurina smiled awkwardly as she was embarrassed. This school was just too big.

“Oh~ shall we eat together then? I will show you around the school after class too if you don't mind.”

Jurina was very happy and relieved that someone finally talked to her and is willing to show her around the school.

“Really?! Are you sure it’s ok? I hope I am not a bother for you…” Jurina said in a small voice.

“It’s ok jurina i am free after class anyway haha. Shall we go now? We have an hour break.” Rena said as she stood up from her seat.

Jurina followed her and stood up. However, before they could take a step forward, somebody shouted towards their direction.

“RENA!!!!”

Rena turned her head towards the direction from where the voice was coming from and a figure jumped towards her.

“Renaaaaaa let’s go to the canteen! I’m hungry~.” The person said as she pouted cutely.

“Ah yuko! Sorry I almost forgot we are going to the canteen together hahahahaa. Oh btw, this is jurina, not that you don't know since she had just introduced herself when she came into class LOLS. Shall we bring her to the canteen together? And I will be showing her around school after classes are over, do you want to come along?”

Jurina bowed at yuko who smiled back at her.

“Ah~ Sounds fun! Let’s go to the canteen I’m starving. And And! Include me in the school tour hehe it will be lots of fun the school has lots of interesting things to see and discover! Ah! (yuko facepalmed herself) I forgot to introduce myself. Hi jurina! My name is Oshima yuko please just call me yuko!”

Jurina could tell that yuko is a very energetic girl by the way she talks and her expression is always changing when she talks. She found her interesting. This is the first time someone was so energetic around her. The one’s around her was always acting like they were best friends with jurina but jurina knew that they were only friends with her because they treated her as an ATM machine. These two people now, standing right in front of her were different. They didn't know her background.

(Jurina applied to this school by herself. She had loads of money in her bank account because she didn't see the need to spend her money when her parents gave her as pocket money. So, jurina now have about 100 million in her bank or more than that, who knows xD)

The trio went to the canteen and on the way, they met up with two others, kashiwagi yuki and kojima haruna, who were in a different class but were friends with rena and yuko since kindergarten. Apparently, jurina could see that yuko was hyped up to 150% around haruna. What surprised jurina the most was when yuko pounced on haruna like a wolf pounced on its prey. It was another interesting sight that jurina saw today.

5 of them reached the canteen and jurina was stunned at the grandness of the canteen. This school is like a palace. Even the canteen looked so grand. Red carpet and glass tables. It was stunningly beautiful.

They ordered their food and sat down in a corner. They started eating their food and they chatted about various things they want to do in life and what will they do after graduation.

Soon, they were all chatting happily and jurina was happy because this is the first time anyone had talked about their future plans with her. This made her confirmed that these people sitting with her now are not just classmates that she could say hi and bye to. They are people that she could go to for advice, people that she could call friends.

“OIIIIIII!!”

The sudden voice broke jurina’s train of thoughts. She turned around to find a figure running towards their table followed by another figure that was walking slowly behind.

“Oiiiii how cruel could you people get! We were just away in the office for 30 mins and you all went ahead without us?!” The person who reached the table first said.

“Hahahah!!! Mii-chan as noisy as ever hahah!” Yuko laughed at the sudden rambling of the girl.

“Hey! That’s evil u stupid squirrel! Like you could say me when you are noisy yourself!”

Miichan and yuko glared at each other as their foreheads were already touching each other.

“Ok, enough you two.” The person who finally reached the table after miichan said calmly as she forced them apart separately.

“Mouuuu Mariko! That hurts!” Miichan whined and pouted again.

“Ah mariko welcome back.” Yuko said.

Jurina found the scene in front of her amusing and let out a small laugh, which caught the attention of miichan and mariko.

“Oh meet Matsui jurina, she just transferred here today. Btw where is anna, kumi, mayu and sae?” Yuko asked as she looked around for them.

Yuki perked up her ears when she heard sea's name and she looked around to with yuko.

“They are at the library with the principal, it was something about some project I think” Mariko replied to yuko’s question.

“Ehh transfer student huh that's cool!”miichan said as she draped her hands around jurina.

“H-hai nice to meet you.” Jurina said, still smiling goofily.

“Nice to meet you too, please refrain from getting close to this girl here in case she pass her stupidity to you.” Mariko pointed to miichan as she smiled to jurina.

“Hey! You are evil too!” Miichan exclaimed as she ran and this time draped her hands around Mariko and started whining again.

Jurina was surprised as to why mariko did not smack that hand which was draping her shoulder away. She smiled at the duo as she added them to her “Hajimete friends list”.

The table became very crowded and they were all chatting and getting along when the bell suddenly rang.

‘DING DONG DING DONG’

“AH! WE ARE GONNA BE LATE!! LET’S RUN TO THE CLASSROOM! SEE YOU AFTER CLASS LATER! NYAN NYAN SEE YOU LATER!” Yuko exclaimed and everyone started running out of the canteen.

Jurina jumped out of her seat and ran after them, feeling the wind blew at her hair as she ran and felt like she was having fun for the first time in her life as she watch the back of her newly found friends.

TBC~

There is still atsumina, tomotomo, kumianna , mayu and Sae lols such a long way to go~ next chapter they will all appear though xD
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Re: My new attempt of a fanfic : Chapter 2 - Classmates or friends
« Reply #8 on: April 25, 2012, 01:53:44 PM »
so jurina is the main character?

i like it ^^b

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« Reply #9 on: April 25, 2012, 03:12:35 PM »
So I see KojiYuu and MariMii in action.
I wonder about Jurina and Rena. Yuki's sure to be bound to Sae.
Jurina however is supposedly for Mayu then right? Seeing as how JuriMayu is one of your favorite. But my concern would be Rena, who would be paired up to her if Jurina is with Mayu? I don't think there are any possible characters left apart from Airin, I doubt she'd appear though, and I really thought Jurina would be paired to her... I can't even say nor imagine Rena getting paired with Yuki, knowing that Yuki likes Sae here it seems. Rena would just turn into a third party over SaeYuki. And heck, Rena isn't even Gekikara here, nor is Yuki Black. :sweatdrop:

Anyways, looks like Jurina is seeing the light. Lol...she's having friends, that's nice, but next to having bliss and happiness, is sadness and trials and tribulations. Happiness doesn't come free after all, there will always be prices at stake. I hope Jurina is ready to pay up for all the happiness she's getting right now. :lol: But then again, since you are the author, this might just turn into a happy fic all the way, I do hope some drama stirs up a bit though, it would really be interesting to see how Jurina deals with all the problems, after finally being able to be close with someone and learning of friendship and human warmth. :)
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Re: My new attempt of a fanfic : Chapter 2 - Classmates or friends
« Reply #10 on: April 25, 2012, 04:49:32 PM »
I think I like this fic. Can't wait for the others characters especially the Tomotomo ^^

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Re: My new attempt of a fanfic : Chapter 2 - Classmates or friends
« Reply #11 on: April 25, 2012, 04:56:07 PM »
>> yukofan

Yea jurina will be the main character thanks for reading my fanfic! :D

>>Sieka

Hmm yeaa i was troubled over rena's pairing but now i am thinking of pairing her with airing though i don't really know about this pair hahaha
It would be really sad to let rena be alone and lonely in this fanfic so yea i guess i will add airing after all! xD
and yep there will be trouble along the way oho so u can look forward to all those trouble that will happen heh but apart from that this will be a very happy fanfic lols I'm not good with sad things after all ><

>> kahem

Thanks for liking it! the characters will all appear in chapter 3 since if i drag any longer i am scared if i have the writers block HAHAH!


Thanks for all your comments! i am working on chapter 3 and you will probably see it tomorrow please look forward to more adventure ahead :D

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Re: My new attempt of a fanfic : Chapter 2 - Classmates or friends
« Reply #12 on: April 25, 2012, 06:24:38 PM »
Hi! Here is chapter 3 ~its short because its only the self introductions~ Tomorrow i will update chapter 4 the school tour will begin finally in the next chapter!




Chapter 3: Self introductions.

Jurina and her newly found friend finally reached class and they were glad that Ms ma was not in class yet and they still had time to chat before class started.

“Hey so we are going to tour the school after class right? Man I cant’ wait!” Yuko said excitedly her tension as high as ever.

“Tour the school! I wonder who is my roommate… I hope it’s someone I know, or someone as awesome as my new friends!” Jurina thought as she stared into space.

“na?”
“jurina?”

“JURINA!”

jurina jumped up, startled by her own name. By the time she came back to her senses, the whole class was staring at her, including a certain squirrel who was laughing her head off at jurina’s reaction.

Awkwardly, jurina sat down red face as she glared at yuko who sticked out her tongue playfully at jurina.

……………………………………………

Class finally ended and yuko packed her bag as fast as she could and ran towards jurina.

“JURINA!” she shouted again and this time, jurina braced herself and smirk at yuko.

“You get me once, you won't get me twice heh” Her smirk grew bigger as yuko pouted.

“Come on you two! We still have a school to tour!” Rena finally spoke when she saw the two ‘kids’ still joking around.

“Ah jurina I think we should tour the school and bring you to your dorm so that you can rest after the tour. How bout it?” Rena asked.

“Yea I think that would be great! Thanks you two!” Jurina beamed at rena and yuko, appreciating their help.

The trio went out of the classroom only to find familiar faces waiting for them.

Miichan, mariko, haruna, yuki, Sae, Mayu, kumi, anna, tomo~mi, tomochin, acchan and takamina.

“Eh?” Jurina asked with a questioning look.

“Are you shocked? Are you touched?! HAHA we all came here to tour the school with you!” Miichan exclaimed energetically while pumping her fist into the air.

“H-hai.” Jurina could only mouth the word as she was too touched she felt like crying.

They were actually willing to tour the school with her. First day of school and she already made so many friends. She couldn’t ask for more.

‘Clap, Clap’

“Ahem~ since everyone is here, let’s all do this self introduction thing again since there are a few people that jurina haven met yet.” Mariko said in a sisterly manner.

 “HAI HAI! ME FIRST! My name is Minegishi Minami, Nickname Miichan. Don't call me gachapin because I hate that name! I LOVE FOOD! NICE TO MEET YOU JURINA!” Miichan half shouted her self-intro.

“My name is Shinoda Mariko and I am the oldest here so you can just treat me as your big sister. I will be graduating with all of you though, we will be together for a long time ahead so please feel free to tell me if you have any troubles ok? Oh and just call me mariko.” Mariko finally finished her speech as Miichan smiled at her.

“Next up is me! My name as you know is Oshima yuko. Just call me yuko. My favorite Person is (looks at haruna and smiles), My most hated thing is balloons (Gives a BOO face). They sometimes address me as squirrel. Let’s get along jurina!” Yuko smiled again at haruna as she ended her sentence, which made haruna blush.

“My name is kojima haruna, they call me nyan nyan or haruna. I… hmm...eh? That's all. Nice to meet you jurina~” haruna said her sentence half heartedly because apparently she spaced out while she was introducing herself.

“My name is Matsui Rena. I have the same family name as you so lets get along! You can just call me rena.” Rena smiled at jurina who smiled back.

“Yo I’m takahashi minami, they call me takamina and I am 148cm tall. Ops I didn't have to say that. Ahem this may be the first time I’m meeting you but I am sure it wont be the last. Yoroshiku na.” Minami facepalmed herself as she failed at her introduction.

“Hi~ I am maeda atsuko, you can just call me acchan and I am engaged to minami~ (peeks at takamina while blinking her eyes). Nice to meet you jurina, I hope you have fun in this school especially with us around!” acchan finished her introduction as she cling on to minami who blushed a crimson red when she heard the word ‘engaged’.

“Hai my name is Kashiwagi yuki. Please call me yukirin like everyone does. Nice to meet you jurina~” yukirin bowed.

“My name is miyazawa sae and I am in the basketball club. Just call me sae! Nice to meet you!” Sae smiled cheerfully as yukirin peeked at her from the corner of her eyes.

“My name is Kasai tomomi! U can call me tomo~mi chiyuu” tomo~mi stated.

Jurina was abit confused and she asked: “u-umm, so do I call you tomo~mi or chiyuu? Ahahah…” jurina asked awkwardly. 
 
“See! I told you to stop using chiyuu after your name! Now u are confusing her!
Jurina, just call her tomo~mi. Btw, I am itano tomomi u can call me tomochin hahah don't get confused with her and me~.” Tomochin said in a joking tone while poking chiyuu.

“tomochin is evil! Chiyuu” tomo~mi pouted as tomochin poked her cheeks.

“hai hai my name is yagami kumi~ just call me kuumin. Nice to meet you jurina!”
Kumi smiled at jurina.

“My name is ishida anna! Just call me anna! Kuumin is my VIP” Anna beamed at kumi who blushed and covered her face with her hand.

“Eh? VIP? Very important perso- ahhhhh I understand now. Hahah!” Jurina eyes the couple sheepishly.

“Last but not least! Mayu it’s your turn!” yuko tapped mayu’s shoulder.

“H-hey. My name is watanabe Mayu. Just call me mayuyu… nice to meet you jurina-chan.” Mayu said in a super calm voice. People would think that she had no emotion but that was not true at all.

“Hai hai that’s all for the self introduction! We are running out of time!” yuko suddenly shouted which startled everyone in the group.

 Finally after the introductions, they were going to start the tour around school!





TBC~

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Re: My new attempt of a fanfic : Chapter 3 - self introductions
« Reply #13 on: April 25, 2012, 07:24:28 PM »
Ow~ their introctions are so cute~ especially Atsumina and Tomotomo

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Re: My new attempt of a fanfic : Chapter 3 - self introductions
« Reply #14 on: April 26, 2012, 03:04:08 AM »
what a cute introduction..i wonder who will be jurina's roommate..


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Re: My new attempt of a fanfic : Chapter 3 - self introductions
« Reply #15 on: April 26, 2012, 04:32:03 AM »
kojiyuu!!! atsumina!!1 hell yeah!! :D

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Re: My new attempt of a fanfic : Chapter 4 - School Tour
« Reply #16 on: May 07, 2012, 07:54:47 PM »
>> Thanks for reading my fanfic! >< sorry i haven't been updating, i wasn't in the mood to write this up but now, i am READY! So here is the next chapter! i hope you all like it :D Please tell me if need to improve on anything! Thank YOU!


Chapter 4 – school tour

The group was walking down the hallways after their brief introduction. Their footsteps could be heard and they were chatting among themselves.

“Ah~ we can finally start this school tour.” Yuko said while stretching out her hand behind her head.

“Yeah let's show jurina-chan the places that she will need to know and…” Miichan said in a suddenly serious tone, “The places that she better avoid.”

The group suddenly became very silent until jurina spoke, not able to contain her curiosity.

“erm… is something wrong? Why are you all suddenly so quiet?”

The group looked at one another and said: “Jurina, you MUST avoid the sacred grounds of this school.”

“E-Eh? S-Sacred grounds?” jurina stammered unknowingly.

It may be because of the atmosphere, everyone seemed tensed.

“You see that forest there?” Mariko pointed to the dark green forest at the corner of the school’s backyard.

“You must NEVER, and I repeat NEVER, step foot in there.” Miichan continued the sentence for mariko.

“Although they say it's sacred grounds, I believe there was something terrible that happened lots of years ago and they didn't allow students to go into the forest anymore.” Rena explained.

“They had recorded in books at the library in the bell tower. It was said that the forest used to be very lively and it was a place that students used to have their camps and d-dates.” Takamina explained this time and stuttered at the word “dates”as she peeked at acchan who saw takamina peeking and batted her eyelashes at takamina.

“Ah… I will take note of that thank you!” Jurina said as she looked across the school grounds at the forest that gave her the chills after hearing the explanation.

“Anyway! Let’s continue this school tour! Since we talked about the bell tower, our first stop! THE BELL TOWER!” Yuko was now hyped up and smiled a smile that jurina had never seen before.

“Nyan Nyan! Let’s go to the place where we first met! Hehehehehe.” Yuko smiled sheepishly at haruna, which made her hit yuko hard in her head.

“O-ouch! That hurts nyan nyan!” Yuko rubbed her head and pouted at haruna which made haruna blushed.

“Let’s go.” Haruna hold yuko by the wrist and drag her towards the bell tower.

“Ah there they go again, the tsudere haruna vs the perverted squirrel. I guess the squirrel wins this time.” Mariko crossed her arms as she watch the couple walks ahead.

The rest of the group followed yuko and haruna towards the bell tower, which was 50 stories high and there were lots of books, computer rooms, gym and swimming pool.


1st stop: BELL TOWER

The group reached the bell tower in less than 5 mins and jurina was very surprised at the sight before her.

“W-WOW, I can't believe my eyes! Are we really still in school?!” Jurina’s jaws almost drop as she saw the huge tower in front of her.

“hahah! We knew you would like this! You have exactly the first reaction as when I first saw this tower. It’s unbelievable!” Yuko turned around and smiled brightly at jurina before turning back and continued walking into the tower.

The bell tower had 5 elevators once you walked in and they even had revolving doors at the entrance. The first step into the tower is like the first step into a castle. Red carpet, grand lights, receptionists, a small fountain in the middle of the hall, Directory with specific information to each floor.

The group walked towards the directory and mayu explained the directory to jurina as she saw the confused look on her face.

“(cough) This is level 1, as you can see, this is the entrance of the bell tower.
Starting from level 2 all the way to level 20, you will be in the library. There are different genres on each level and they are all separated and neatly arranged. From level 21 to level 35 are the computer labs. You have to register from level 1 before you can gain access to the computers in this building. From level 36 to level 45, it's the gyms and swimming pools. For the gyms, you will also have to register at level 1 before you can use the facilities inside the gym because you will receive a special activation card with your ID in it. You are free to use the swimming pool though. Level 46 to 50 is the students’ lounge. It's somewhere where you will want to go for group discussions or just to hang out with your friends. Hmm… I think that's pretty much all for the bell tower.”

Mayu breathed out after her long explanation to jurina as she looked up when jurina did not have any sign of movement. What surprised her was that jurina was actually taking notes.

“eh so that's the reason why she is not talking haha she’s taking notes, that's… the first time someone listened so attentively.” Mayu thought.

After writing down the full explanation for the bell tower, Jurina looked at mayu and smiled her cat-like smile.

“Thanks mayu-chan!”

Not used to getting this much attention (because her classmates thinks she speaks like a cyborg and thought that she is someone with no emotions), a tint of pink crept up to mayu’s cheek as whispered a “You’re welcome” which earned her another cat-like smile from jurina.

After the tour to the bell tower, their next destination was-

“LET’S GO TO THE CAFÉ NEXT!” Miichan burst out from nowhere causing everyone to jump back from their position except mariko who gave a smack on her head for startling everyone.

“Gosh! Can’t you pipe down a little! We almost became deaf!” mariko chided.

“ehehe s-sorry~ I was hungry…” Miichan touched her forehead where mariko had smacked.

The group sighed as they agreed to head for the café for dinner since it was almost 7pm and they were famished.


2nd stop: CAFÉ

“W-wow this is a café? It looks like a restaurant to me~” jurina once again exclaimed and felt excited just to be eating here.

“Yeapppp lets find a place to sit, I will tell you one thing. The food here is really delicious!” miichan said as she started to eye the food on every student’s table.

The group found a place and sat down as they ordered their meal.

“So~ we have covered 2 stops in the school. The rest of the place is actually just the science lab, cooking room, nurse office, and design and Media room. Most of them are classrooms so we will show you to one last place, the nurse office! When you are sick or unwell, the nurse office will be the first place you want to go so it’s essential that you know the place!” Yuko said as her hands was all over haruna.

“H-Hey yuko stop it! You’re touching me everywhere! AGAIN!” Haruna gave yuko a slap on her head for the nth time of the day.

After finishing their awesome and delicious dinner, the group headed towards the nurse office.


3rd stop: NURSE OFFICE

“This is the nurse office, the nurse in charge is Kitahara Rie. She is a student as well as a nurse because her family owns a hospital and she has a certificate for this as she helps out sometimes at her families hospital.” Sae said as she open the door to the nurse office.

“Eh? It looks like a hospital here. This room is huge!” Jurina said as she saw how big the place were.

The room looked like a hospital as it was huge and there were lots of equipment’s.

“It has to be this huge because our yearly medical checkup is held here.” Tomochin and Tomo~mi explained.

“Oh~ I understand now, thanks!” Jurina smiled.

“It seems Rie is not here at the moment, but its ok you will get to meet her someday.” Haruna said.

The group exited the room and gathered together outside the hallway.

“So~ we have come to the end of the school tour, well not exactly the end because I believe there are still lot’s of places we haven covered yet. We will get the chance next time though. Remember we still have 5 years in this school!” Rena exclaimed, excited about the adventures ahead of them.

“Yea! 5 years! We could do a lot of things! Ah! BTW I guess its time to show you to your dorm room since it’s already so late now. Early day for us tomorrow!”
Yuko said.

“Yea! You’re right! Wow time flies when we are having fun! Thank you all so much for accompanying me today for this tour. I feel really happy that I was able to meet this group of friends. Please look after me from now on too!” Jurina said gratefully.

The group headed for the dorms as they chatted on the way to the dorms.


Last stop: DORM ROOM

“ok I guess we will split here for today. I am in the same room with haruna. We are in room 324.”  Yuko said as she clanged on to haruna.

“My room is next to yuko’s 325. My roommate is Takamina.” Acchan said as she hugged takamina from behind and rested her chin on takamina’s head.

“Mine’s 323. My roommate is tomo~mi.” Tomochin gave a cute smile which showed her fang teeth as she looked at tomo~mi. Tomo~mi on the other hand jumped on tomochin when she saw the smile that tomochin finally showed her for the whole of today.

“My roommate is Yukirin, our room is 322, just beside the tomotomo pair.” Sae said as she patted yukirin’s head and yukirin blushed a deep red.

“My roommate is kumi, our room is 321. Hahaha the number is pretty nice hahaha!” Anna laughed with kumi as she said out their room’s number.

“My roommate is this big eater here. Our room is 320.” Mariko said as she pointed at miichan in a joking manner, which made miichan pout.

“My room is 319.My roommate is Furukawa Airi, We call her airin but you haven seen her though she is in our class because she is currently overseas and won’t be coming back until the day after next.” Rena smiled her sisterly smile.

“Oh by the way, jurina what’s your room number?” Rena chan asked.

“My room number…” Jurina fumbled with her piece of paper in her bag.

“My room number, it says here, 318! Hey my room is beside yours!” Jurina answered excitedly.

“318?! Wow lucky! You have the same room with mayu! This is the first time she is having a roommate after half a month!” Yuko exclaimed.

“Yeah, Mayu is treated like a cyborg by most of the students here so no one wanted to share a room with her in case thing goes… you know, a little awkward.” Rena said as she patted mayu’s shoulder.

“Oh I see… It’s OK! I know how mayu is! She is not as cold as everyone else thought she is! I am so happy to share a room with someone I know!” jurina breathed a sigh of relief as she looked at mayu and gave her a cat-like smile again.

“I-I am happy too…” Mayu looked down on the floor and blushed as she saw jurina’s smile. She finally had someone that was willing to share a room with her.

In the past, whenever a student was appoint to share a room with her, the student will request for another room after the first few night because they couldn't communicate with mayu and they felt bored and awkward to be in the same room as her. But now, jurina was here, and she is willing to share a room with her. This made her very happy. Finally, someone is not rejecting her.

“Thank you jurina.” Mayu smiled at jurina with the brightest smile she could muster for now.

Jurina was frozen on the spot.

“k-k-kawaii!” was the first thing that jurina could thought of when she saw that smile that mayu gave her.

“Alright! Let’s head back to our rooms. See you guys tomorrow!” Takamina took the lead and the group went back to their respective rooms, ready to rest and prepare for a whole new tomorrow.




TBC…


i have finally thought of a title for this fanfic i will name it "REASONS".
« Last Edit: May 08, 2012, 09:02:12 AM by jehovachiabi »

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Re: My new attempt of a fanfic > Reasons: Chapter 4 - School Tour
« Reply #17 on: May 09, 2012, 09:51:24 AM »
All couples are so cute~

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Re: My new attempt of a fanfic > Reasons: Chapter 4 - School Tour
« Reply #18 on: May 09, 2012, 11:14:51 PM »
jurina and mayu shared the same room <3
i wonder what will happen to jurimayu..
continue~ ^^b


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Re: My new attempt of a fanfic > Reasons: Chapter 4 - School Tour
« Reply #19 on: May 10, 2012, 12:23:14 AM »
 :w00t:  :drool: sharing bedroom .... :)
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