When Kanon Invites Kumi To her house(One-shot) - COMPLETED

[eSsIe21]

One day Kanon invited Kumi in her house.



-Kanon opens the front door-

Kumi: sorry for intruding –taking off her shoes-

Kanon: -slipping on slippers, gave an another pair to Kumi-

Kumi: thanks –smiles-

Kanon:-blushes- -look away-

-footsteps from the living room going to the front door-

2nd older brother: non-chan!!!!!! Welcome home!!!! –hugs Kanon-

Kumi: -eyes widen-

Kanon: Onii-chan yamette!!!! I have someone with me!!

2nd older brother: -looks at Kumi- Who are you?

Kumi: -shuttering- K-k-kumi Y-y-yagami desu! -bows-

1st older brother: the who kiss non-chan passionately in their pv –pops-outs from the corner-

Kumi and Kanon: -blushes hard- it’s not like that….

2nd older brother: -points at Kumi- you de-flower my non-chan! –whined on the floor-

1st older brother: -rolls eye- stop scaring our guest –looks at Kumi- come inside and don’t mind that crazy one

Kanon: -pulls Kumi to the living room- -sits on the couch- sit here – pats the space beside her-

Kumi: -nervous- -sat beside Kanon-

1st older brother: -comes out with a tray of juice- -sits on the opposite couch of Kanon and Kumi- -puts the tray on the table-

Kanon: -takes two glasses and give one to Kumi-

Kanon and Kumi: -start drinking the juice-

1st older brother: what date is the wedding?

Kanon: -chocked by the juice- -cough- -cough-
Kanon: Onii-chan! –brushes Kumi’s back- Are you okay Kuu-chan?

Kumi: -nods- -looks at 1st older brother seriously- I don’t want to go that fast. First, I want to introduce myself to her parents. Then, -take a glare at Kanon- I want her to finish her study. I don’t want to rush her.

Kanon: Kuu-chan! -blushes madly-

1st older brother: OI!!!! YOU DON’T HAVE TO WORRY AFTER ALL. SHE PERFECT FOR THE ROLE!!!

2nd older brother: -comes in and sits besides 1st older brother- -sighed out- you better take care of our non-chan or else

Kanon: -realize the situation- -teary- -run towards her brothers and hugs them-

1st older brother and 2nd older brother: -smiles- our little non-chan really change now.

Kumi: -smiles- in a good way.


please comment

[jehovachiabi]

so sweet!!! please write more for this couple >< it would be great if you can write a long fanfic for this couple hehehehe

Kanon and kumi is so sweet together!! both are so shy!! ><

 Thanks for the update!

[yukofan]

kumi and kanon are so cute..yeah,you should introduce your lover to your family before getting merried..LOL..

[ny37z]

I LOLed so hard when the 1st brother suddenly talk about the wedding..
please write this kind of fic more~

[gekirena]

KumiNon!!! i love this pair soo much 

i hope you write a long fanfic about them and not just a one shot ^________^

thanks for this oneshot by the way!

[Pwoper48]

KumiNon~ these two are just too cute

its good if there is a sequel for this hoho

thanks for the update, anyway

[kahem]

I don't know why but when I read the title I smiled lol
The brothers' antics are so funny ^^

[saeseki]

What? Kumi, what were thinking? marry her nau!

well, when i read this fic, i remembered Yuasa Hiroshi: “While she always displays that idiocy, her way of thinking is like that of an adult"

anyway, i love it

[msst28]

love your story..
Like protective brother character

1st older brother: what date is the wedding?

can not stop laughing..

[eSsIe21]

THANK YOU ALL THE COMMENTS!!!!! I'M SO HAPPY!!


WELL THIS IS THE SECOND PART!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW KUMI INVITES KANON TO HER HOUSE!!!! YEAH!!!!!!



Italic - thoughts


After 1 month Kumi invites Kanon to go to her house


Kumi and Kanon: -walking on the streets to Kumi’s house- -hold each other’s hands-

Kumi: Are you nervous?

Kanon: no! Because I know Kuu-chan will always by my side!! –smiles widely-

Kumi: ehe-eheh-eh-eheh –scratch her cheeks- -it’s only my house non-chan-

-Front of Yagami Hosehold-

Kanon: Your house is beautiful!!!!

-The house was decorated with matching white and black paint- A small backyard to their left with many flowers planted-

Kumi: Dad doesn’t like bright colors for the house so he chooses white and black and Mom loves to plant flowers. Come on I think you’ll like inside –pulling Kanon gently to the door-

Kumi: -opens the door- TADAIMA! MOM! Mom?

- A middle-aged woman Shout from somewhere-

Kumi’s Mom: Kumi you’re back! I’m in the kitchen! Is Non-chan with you? You can go to the living room

Kanon: -look at Kumi- Non-chan?

Kumi: –shrugged- She’s always like that when I told her about us –Still holds Kanon’s hand-

Kanon and Kumi: -goes to the living room and sits on the couch-

-Muffin appears and runs to Kumi’s feet. He licks Kumi’s foot to get her attention-

Kumi: -looks down- Muffin!!!!!!!! –picks the dog- Did you behave today huh? Huh? –start playing the dog-

Kanon: -looks at Kumi and Muffin while a smile-

Kumi: Muffin we have a guest today! –held out Muffin to Kanon- This is Non-chan!

Muffin: -barks at Kanon- -got off from Kumi’s hand and runs to hide to the opposite chair-

Kanon: -sad- did I scare him?

Kumi: no. He’s always like that at first. He’ll be attached to you in no time trust me

Kanon: -nods sadly- -looks at Muffin-

Muffin: -Staring at Kanon-

Kumi: -stands up- Mom takes a while in the kitchen. I’ll go to her and maybe get some foods for us. –walks to the kitchen

-the front door opens-

Kumi’s Two younger Sisters: TADAIMA!!!!! –passing the living room and saw Kanon-

Youngest: -runs to Kanon and takes her both hands- You’re Kanon-chan right!!!??

Kanon: -nods-

Youngest: -hugs Kanon- Onee-chan is right! You’re so cute! -pinching Kanon’s cheeks-

Younger: Stop doing that. If Kumi-onee-chan saw you you’ll be dead

Kumi And Kumi’s mom: -appears- What’s happening? –saw the her youngest pinching Kanon’s cheeks-

Youngest: -sweat drop- Yabai!!! –runs away-

Younger: –shrugged- I’ll go to her

Kumi: -goes to Kanon and caressed Kanon’s cheeks- Are you okay?

Kanon: -nods- I’m okay. I just got surprised

Kumi: About what?

Kanon: -smiles- She looks like you.

Kumi’s Mom: Many people say that. Sometimes they even though her as Kumi. I don’t why this girl here is small compare to her sisters when at their age.

Kumi: -grumpy- -pouts- at least I’m cute, neee Non-chan I’m cute?

Kanon: -wide eyes- eeeee-e-e-ehhhh –whisper- maybe

Kumi’s mom: -starts to laugh- whahahahahahaha you can’t be cute. Non-chan is the CUTE ONE!!

Kumi: Mom!!!

Kanon: -draws close to Kumi- But I Love Kuu-chan even she’s an idiot – whisper to Kumi’s ears-

Kumi: -blushes-

Kumi’s Mom: Non-chan you can stay for dinner. Sorry I didn’t give you something to drink or eat. It’ll cook something special today!!! Oh! I’ll have to call dad to tell him that Non-chan will join us for dinner! –goes away-

Kumi: We can wait to my room until the dinner is serving. –stands up and pulls Kanon-

Muffin: -who is staring all the time- -walks towards Kanon-

Kumi: He wants you to pet him!

Kanon: -picks Muffin-

Kumi and Kanon: -goes to Kumi’s room-

Kumi’s mom: Be careful Non-chan! Sometimes Kumi is a pervert!~~~ -shouts from somewhere-

Kumi: MOM!!!!!



FINISH!!!! YEAH!!!


PLEASE COMMENT ABOUT WHAT YOU THINK FOR THIS ONE!!!

[saeseki]

you've updated!! i was like 

the part when Kumi invites Non, to her room, i can't stop 

I Love you, please continue~~~ and i'm the first to comment

[kahem]

Hahahah! Both of them have really a funny family ^^

[aruka]

Hahahah! Both of them have really a funny family ^^

Seconded.. I love the antics of both families. Thankfully they really ease the tension that would very likely to happen if one of their family members brings his/her pair to the house.

Now I'm kinda wondering how if the two families meet each other, arranging their daughters' marriage (hoping) while leaving KumiNon standing on the corner all red and speechless.

[fuu_kun]

I lovee this fanfic soo much please, can this have a continuation pweaase T_T)/

[FNK23]

1st older brother: what date is the wedding?

at the first time i thought it was a joke, so i laughed really hard  but then it's followed by this:

Kumi: -nods- -looks at 1st older brother seriously- I don’t want to go that fast. First, I want to introduce myself to her parents. Then, -take a glare at Kanon- I want her to finish her study. I don’t want to rush her.

and i was like,  ehhhhhhhhhhh?????!!!   for reaall ??

Kumi’s mom: Be careful Non-chan! Sometimes Kumi is a pervert!~~~

what kind of mom who told her daughter behavior to her girlfriend ?? nyahahaa
make some update pleasee
looking forward the next chapter, *hope it's about kuminon in kuumin's room