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Re: Love puppy (Mayuki,Kojiyuu) Update! YET Another one!!! read it?
« Reply #180 on: August 17, 2012, 04:18:16 PM »
Oh~ I wonder who is it~ hehe

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Re: Love puppy (Mayuki,Kojiyuu) Update! YET Another one!!! read it?
« Reply #181 on: August 17, 2012, 04:20:24 PM »
Ahh great chapter!  :luvluv1:

Center's show was scary.  :scared:

Rena's story reminds me of a vocaloid song called "Moonlit Bear" or something like that. Either way it was good! :farofflook:

I want to know more about the capricious witch so please update soon! :nya:


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Re: Love puppy (Mayuki,Kojiyuu) Update! YET Another one!!! read it?
« Reply #182 on: August 17, 2012, 10:11:28 PM »
                                      Chapter:___________________



'....I don't care anymore.....I just want to be there with her everyday.Even if it means sharing her with someone else.As long as I know she loves me too, its fine with me.......or maybe I could kill the other one....'


_200 years in the future_
'tsk! this girl thinks bad too.I must do something about her too....why does everyone wants to kill each other? what's with this world' a girl how was looking in a mirror asked no one , she was in a Clocktower.In a forest forgoten by everyone, where the old clock still moved.
'maybe because they hate ? hate is a strong emotion.And all of them have emotions so things like these are inevitable.I too hate someone....' Centre said as she eated from her cake.

'you hate someone...? don't think like that about my angel,Centre or I'll punish you again.' the girl looked with the edge of her eyes at Centre with a glare
'y-yes' Centre nodded with a shiver as she got scared a little 'but how is the capricious witch?and what does she has that I don't...?' she continued to wispher
'I told you to not call my angel ,a witch! my angel .....where are you now?' the girl looked out the window for the first time that day,thinking about her angel.
'........' Centre looked annoyed at the ground 'anyway! what do we do about her?' she said pointing at the mirror how looked in the past
'....she looks a lot like my angel....' the girl smiled 'bring her here for a while,I think we need to talk, and I would like a new singing bird'
Centre sighed 'yes yes~ then ,I'll be going Nezumi~!' she sat up and entered the circle after flashing a smile at the girl named Nezumi
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_present time_
Yuki had just changed her clothes after taking a shower.She entered the kitchen to drink something, and when she was about to sip from the drink a girl appeared in front of her.Imagine the surprise?
All the drink in Yuki's mouth ended on Centre who now looked annoyed.
'h-how are you?'
'I liked this shirt you know?! ' Centre shoted and took Yuki's hand ,her glass ending pierced on the ground. 'lets go, I don't want to stay so away from Nezumi..'she blushed and formed again the circle .
'w-wait! whaa----'

-another part of the city-
Mayu had just waked up after a short nap.She couldn't do anything as Rena was at school and so should be Yuki so she could just sat still until one could come home.
She sat from the bed and suddenly had a bad feeling. She wanted to go to look at Rena and Yuki to see if they are okay but when she walked past the mirror, with the edge of the eyes she saw that her reflection wasn't moving as her. She stopped and took passes back to look at the mirror again.

It was really true to say at least.The mirror wasn't moving, her figure in the mirror wasn't moving and wearing the same clothes.She looked at her 'reflection', she was looking back at her with a sly smirk even if she herself wasn't smiling at all. She walked closer and put a hand on the mirror, her 'reflection doing the same.
'how are you?'
'me? I am you'

Mayu didn't say anything anymore and just placed both hands on the mirror trying to reach the person on the other side of the mirror.
'you are not me.....you are yourself..' Mayu whispered as she felt tears ready to fall on her cheeks.Something about her 'reflection' made her sad, very very sad..
the reflexion looked annoyed by her words and took her hand off the mirror.She glared at Mayu  then sighed.
'when you look at this mirror.....the truth in your soul I could read.....do not wish dead for loved one,hold them dear, so that utopia could be formed in this world.We will open the path between tne angels and devils on earth,the place where all shall meet.Protect them and we will meet Mayu...'
The mirror whispered and then closed her eyes and disappeared.

Mayu's tears started falling, she no longer felt like going after them.They will come back today surely, because it was not destined for them to die....

_200 years in the future_
'I'm back~! 'Centre shouted as she appeared in the same room with Yuki over her shoulder.
'haa~ welcome back Centre' Nezumi said back as she looked at her from her mirror
'l-lets me go!lets me go you idiot!moron! ' Yuki screamed in frustration as she hit Centres back
'man! this girl is annoying! who do you call idiot, stupid?!' Centre hit Yuki's butt with a hand yearning a yelp from Yuki who blushed

'Centre, that's not how you treat a lady, moron. Put her down, I'll talk to her.' Nezumi approached them
Centre put Yuki down and took a step back.Yuki once she had landed she hit Centres arm .
'auch! it hurts!' Centre cried angry
'....' Nezumi looked blankly at her ,after turning to Yuki with a smile 'Its an honor to finally meet you,princess Yuki.'
Yuki turned and saw Nezumi,gasping and suddenly jumping on her 'Mayu!!! Mayuuuu!'
'hey ! don't call Nezumi 'Mayu'! she is nothing like her!' Centre lifted Yuki again,taking her off Nezumi who sat up
'lets me go!' Yuki cried in frustration

'calm down please.I will tell Centre put you down imediately after I explain something.' Nezumi got her attention
'First, I am not Mayu, I am her twin sister Nezumi.I can demonstrate that with the second fact, we are in the future,in a Clocktower, in the centre of a forest.'Nezumi explained and put Centre take Yuki to a window and show the outside,Yuki with a surprised face believed imediately when she saw how high they where.
's-so you are not Mayu......her twin sister Nezumi!?I never know she had a twin!' Yuki looked surprised at Nezumi and touched her cheek softly stroking
'yeah, even she doesn't remember....anyway! I took you here  ,so youcould relax for a few days and understand that killing someone is bad!' Nezumi said determined

'she says that....but she surely wants to kill everyone...' Centre thought sarcasticaly

'Centre you are punished! go down and to the master of cemetry for the rest of the day.' Nezumi said looking at her
'w-why?!'
'cuz you just thought something you shouldn't right now'
'damn that mirror!'
Centre left the room sad.

Yuki now that was down started walking closer to Nezumi and stroked her hair and cheeks,making Nezumi feel warm but annoyed.
'then, I'll stay here with you for a while?' Yuki asked with melancholic eyes looking at Nezumi
'yes......or at least until 'she' comes and sends you back....probably in 2 days' Nezumi stepped back and walked back to the mirror.
'....' Yuki didn't say anything more and just watched Nezumi
'stay with me for a while dear Yuki.....I'll give you back soon enough to your sweet Mayu.'

Time flew very fast, they where only two days after all.But in this time Yuki become friends with Centre,and heard a little about the future from then.She also spend time with Nezumi,learning that she was really different from Mayu but still the same.....the three eat together,sleept together after many pleads to Nezumi, and even bathed together when they forced Nezumi in.It was more paceful that back home for Yuki, she felt at peace as she had these friends.But the 2d day come to fast ........and Nezumi was already waiting for someone in the room she first seen.She had her hood on ,and both her and Centre where waiting with her.....

Suddenly a voice was heard from the darkness of the room
'what is the meaning of this?' The voice asked
Nezumi sat up sudenly ,a smirk appeared on her face 'I am happy to see you too my angel....'
'what is the meaning of this?' the voice repeated
'well, princess Yuki had a few bad thoughts and I decided to relax her mind by talking to her' Nezumi started moving around the room,searching for the person who talked
'for 2 days? I don't remember you so talkative Nezumi.....'
' yes I was not......but I thought that you will come see me if I had her a little more--'
'Send her back.' the voice was comanding,leaving no room for anything
Nezumi lets out a sigh with a smile 'fine, Centre.Take back Yuki-hime .'
'but I can't leave you here with 'her'!' Centre sat up
'just take her back.' Nezumi comanded
'y-yes..lets go Yuki'
Yuki took Centre's hand without looking at her,she was still looking at Nezumi who had a sad smile on her face searching for someone in the room
'we will meet again Yuki,Don't worry, just dont forget what I told you' Nezumi looked at her with the edge of the eyes smiling
Yuki nodded and both she and Centre disappeared

After they left, the person steped in the light a little.Nezumi seeing her steped closer,took her hand and kissed the back of it , all the way smiling.
'my dear angel, I am so happy to see you again!' she said cherfully
The 'angel' just looked blankly at her and said '...you are not woth my time' and leaved the room very fast
Nezumi remained in the same position, her smile still there
'you will love me.....I am certain of that, my angel.'
« Last Edit: June 04, 2013, 08:58:08 PM by yuukimoko »
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: Love puppy (Mayuki,Kojiyuu) Update! Update_)_______________upupup....date?
« Reply #183 on: August 17, 2012, 11:00:29 PM »
EHHHHHH?  :shock:

Who's Nezumi's angel! Is it future Yukirin?   :?

I thought it was strange seeing Nezumi and Mayuyu as two differen't people. But it makes sense.  :hehehe:

Great chapter! Update soom!  :hee:

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Re: Love puppy (Mayuki,Kojiyuu) Update! Update_)_______________upupup....date?
« Reply #184 on: August 17, 2012, 11:53:06 PM »
WOW I'm really confused but I like it ^^

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« Reply #185 on: August 18, 2012, 07:15:22 AM »
Oooooooh ! Lemme guess !

So it's like : Mayu x Yuki.. ? and Centre- Rena... ? and Nezumi- Black ? :D

The girl on the dark side was Black, right ?? YAAY Then that means... a wild Gekikara will appear ! :OOO

Lol remember, just guessing~

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Re: Love puppy (Mayuki,Kojiyuu) Update! Update_)_______________upupup....date?
« Reply #186 on: August 18, 2012, 08:28:37 AM »
ahhh this story is getting more interesting! it's full with mysteries, and passions too. nice job yuukimoko-san! i thank you for this  :luvluv2:

erm, can i make a request? if it's possible, could you change everytime you're going to write who , please do not write as how. for example, "who are you?" , not "how are you?". unless if u really want to ask the condition of a person, then should you use 'how' instead of 'who'. sorry if this is complicated to you or if my request offend you in any way. i's just that i got very2 confused sometime  :dizzy:

i'm not really good in english, but i could help u in any way i can. hope you won't mind tho. tehee~  :mon sweat:

anyway, please update soon!!~ i really hope yuki will end up with the real mayu. please, please, onegaiii~~  :kneelbow:
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Re: Love puppy (Mayuki,Kojiyuu) Update! Update_)_______________upupup....date?
« Reply #187 on: August 18, 2012, 12:28:14 PM »
Miyumi:  I dont know how is Nezumi's angel really...Im waiting for a twist.....but cant think of it still so sont know hows that...or maybe I do? :P

Kahem: sorry that you are confused, but Im happy you like it~ :)

ChuuuPuffss: interesting guess but even I dont know if its like that ....Im thinking about it when I write it~still didnt figure out many pairs... :P XD

lollita90: Im glad you like my story, and dont worry ! I like to be corrected(if its not my mother correcting me..)  and yes, I have that problem with how and who....I dont remember the meaning when I write it .Ill try to be more careful from now one, please correct me again if it happens.....As for the story! well Mayu...she will chose probably .....sooner or later! XD


          Thanks for the comments everyone! Ill try to update soon!
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You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: Love puppy (Mayuki,Kojiyuu) Update! Update_)_______________upupup....date?
« Reply #188 on: August 19, 2012, 10:09:33 AM »
Thanks for the fic hehhehe XD Update more please :twothumbs And really hoping for a Mayuki for the next chapter, really love the story yuukimoko-san :thumbup

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« Reply #189 on: August 19, 2012, 11:46:17 AM »
                                                                         Chapter:__________

'Rena....l..Rena is gone!' Mayu shouted at the top of her lugs as she fell to her knees in front of the door.
'Mayu.....don't worry.....we'll get her back.' Yuki said as she kneeled beside her and hugged her, getting a positive answer from Mayu who hugged her back .

What exactly happened here you ask? wanna have a look? then lets go back and see......

*flashback----that morning*
Yet another paceful morning, if you want to call it that.But today was the day Mayu wanted Rena and Yuki to meet, all three of them.Mayu had a blank face like always,but inside she was quite trembling.Rena showed her fears hugging and telling 'what if's without any sense.

'calm down Rena......everything will be fine, Yuki is understanding and I alredy told her that I will lets her meet the other person I fell for...' Mayu smiled at Rena and took hold of her hand.Rena smiled back, her emotions gone a little.

'then, lets go!' and the door opened.

At Yuki's door they both stoped ,Rena had started trembling again
'Y-Yuki-san doesn't know that you are her puppy....and she knows I have it!'
Mayu sighed,  and took Rena's chin to look in her eyes , and kissed her.It was a good way to calm Rena and Yuki, they both would melt at Mayu's touch.
CRACK...
The door opened and Yuki stond there looking at them kissing.They parted fast
'I-its not what it looks like Y-Yuki-san!' Rena started trembling again, she was at the edge on crying.
Mayu sighed again and turned to look at Yuki to explain everything ,but when she turned she saw Yuki with a small smile and there was no hate.
'Its fine Rena-chan! calm down' Yuki hugged Rena and stroked her back
Rena started crying ,Yuki sighed and took both of them inside. Once Rena calmed down
'how where you not surprised Yuki-san? you semed so calm...'
'Ah! its nothing! I already know everything.' Yuki said with a smile
'w-what?! how?' Mayu asked shocked
'.....that is my own secret....' Yuki smiled said nothing more
Mayu was suspicious, what had happened to Yuki? how told her everything? ......just what was going on?!

A hour later, Mayu was still thinking about it while Rena and Yuki whare talking about school,parents and other things.And also their time, more like they where trying to share Mayu.......who takes her at the hour ---- until hour ---- and so on....That until Mayu just snapped and sat up ,scarying them
'how about we move together? that would be more easy.'
The girls looked at each other and smiled, that was the best idea!
'then, we will go important thinks for now, and then we will take the aproval from our parents and move .' Yuki said as she held Rena's hand.They seemed to understand each other very well and Mayu was grateful for that.She really didn't need two crazy girls fighting over her.....

The moving took 3 hours in which they got at Rena's house and took things that she needed, they made 4 times that .So they moved at Yuki's house together.

-(((((((.....can we jump a little please? I'll just tell you fast what happened in 2 weeks......))))))))))))---

They really understand each other, both Yuki and Rena where kind and understanding.They made food together, did homeworks together, even bathed together with Mayu. They also sleep in the same bed with Mayu in the midle.They where like a familly, they all loved each other and so they wanted to remain but after two weeks, something happened.

Mayu was watching tv, while Rena and Yuki where making dinner.
'dinner is ready Mayu!" Yuki shouted after her

They eat ,talking about something while Mayu wasn't listening at all. Inside Mayu felt very very happy, she felt like she was married to them.It was pleasant! they kissed and hugged, no one crying .
'Mayu!'
Mayu looked up and saw Yuki and Rena looking at her worryed.Rena started wipping something from her cheeks
'what....' Mayu reached up and saw her cheeks wet, the 'tears' appeared again.She felt like a crybaby really, she cried at everything.

In the darkness, a figure appeared.Mayu sat up saddenly feeling the presence close.She looked around the room.
'what's wrong Mayu? ' Rena asked worried , she sat up and started heading to the bathroom, her reason to take a towel.
The person's chance to take her.
Mayu to run after her.
Yuki to follow.
Everything happened to fast, in the blink of an eye Mayu was down on the ground being pushed be dark force.Yuki hugging her, and Rena disappearing in the dark.

____*End flash back!*____________________________________________________________________________________________________________

*200 years in the future*
'w-whats going on here!!!?' Nezumi shouted at the top of her lugs as she watched everything from her Mirror.
Centre fell, surprised be the yell and the sudden moves.
'she took Rena......my angel! why!?' Nezumi moved from the mirror around the room
'i-it sems she wants to stop you....'
'....she really does, and takes dangerous moves.If she took Rena then Mayu will try to move in the future to search for her......this is good because Yuki will provide her transport.But without Rena, the utopia wont be complete. She probably will remove her memories and put others, fake ones.And for Mayu.....she will probably make herself forgot.She will erase and redo her own memories to forget the pain.' Nezumi looked at the mirror again
'ah, my sweet angel.....you can't stop me! I will have it! I will have you and the eternity........I will make the utopia happen mother..'She looked at a foto, trying to remaind her.
Centre sighed and hugged Nezumi.

_somewhere else ,the same future_
'good, now put her on the bed Jurina.' the dark figure said as she give Rena to the said Jurina.
'yes!' was the cheerful response the girl give with a cat smile.
'it seems you didn't have problems.Mayuyu is still weak so we can control this.' A small figure said as she looked at Jurina exiting, she stroked the sleeping one on her lap.
'yes......she is still weak. ' the dark figure murmured 'but this is good for now, so we could stop utopia from happening, isnt it, Yuko?'


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I know its too short but I lost my inspiration one hour ago,when I made a pause after I wrote the things before the flashback.......understand? no?ok...

Review?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!!??!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!!?!??!?!?!?!?!!?!?!??!?!?!?!??!?!

From now on, the updates will be more slower! I start exams and school soon.........
« Last Edit: June 04, 2013, 09:11:49 PM by yuukimoko »
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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My head is spinning ._______________.

Wtf is happening ????

Who is that dark figure ???

and Yuko ?!?!?!

Wtf !!! Kill me naaaooo ! -RAGE-

Lol I wanna know what's nxt that's what I'm trying to say xD

Update soon, I guess ~
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WHAT?!!! wait...is Yuko the dark figure?  :? :?

WAHH !!! :panic: :panic:

please update!!!

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the more i read this fiction.. the more confused.. Maybe I should read again

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Haha now i have time to actually give you a coment. Sorry about this Yuuki >"<

It's getting confused though but i think i still can understand something o.oa

The black figure is Black right?

And about the Mayu x Rena couple, it's unusual and interesting :) It's normal to me either Mayuki or JuriMayu but somehow Mayu x Rena is quite sweet too.

But anyways, as a big shipper for Wmatsui, I'm still looking forward to WMatsui moment and since Rena is with Jurina now, I'm more excited!!!!

Thanks for the hard work and update soon~

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Wahh brain twister!  :dizzy:

So Rena is Nezumi's angel?  :dunno:

Is Yuko the dark figure or was it Black? :dunno:

Where did Jurina come from? :dunno:

Ahh so many questoins! :frustrated:

Please update soon!  :gyaaah:

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My head is spinning ._______________.

Wtf is happening ????

Who is that dark figure ???

and Yuko ?!?!?!

I have to agree with Chuuupuffss-san. This chapter has been a bit confusing, since the coming of the new characters. But I know that Yuukimoko-san will shed some light on us readers in the future chapters. So that means, we'll have to be patient for your next update. :hee:

But since we're at it... :glasses: Let me see if I'm at least correct at some of the characters.

So Mayu's twin is Nezumi.
Nezumi's slave/assistant is Center.
Nezumi's angel is Rena.
The girl whom Mayu is supposed to marry (and she painted) is Rena.
The one who will fulfill Nezumi's plans is Rena.
The on who kidnapped Rena is Jurina and Yuko?
And the black figure is... Black?
And Yuki is... uhh... :err:

:dizzy: So dizzy... But I'm really liking the plot more and more.
The mysteries are still yet to be solved, and the black figure has yet to be revealed.
Yuko has appeared, which makes me wonder if she'll have any mirror-like person, since everyone but Rena and Yukirin has them.
It may just be me, but I'm somehow sensing... Gekikara and Black.  :ding: Hope they do appear. That'll be like...Wow.

Anyways Yuukimoko-san! I really love this fic of yours!  :on GJ:
And I'm sorry for being such a lurker.  :depressed: I've been feeling quite lazy lately. Sorry. :kneelbow:
But I'll try to comment every now and then! I mean... I really really want to see how this love-square or pentagon or hexagon works out?  :nya:
And now, back to my blankets!  :on gay:
Had a withdrawal, so now I'm planning to fall in love with the couples all over again

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Here are my fics~! They can be found amongst these three. :hee:

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Love's A Mission
Oh My Dolly!


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This is not a chapter, I repeat this is NOT a chapter!

      I decided to do a summary to everything that happened until now in Love puppy! so everyone will understand.

                                                                          Love puppy!


1- Watanabe Mayu is punished by her father and the high council for unknow things.She is send back 200 years,where she meets Kashiwagi Yuki ,who takes her home and becomes her new owner. Mayu is a puppy, a part of her punishment was the form.

2-Yuki takes a bath with puppy Mayu, after leaving for some shoping and to meet with her best friend,Kojima Haruna.She arrives later than she told she wpuld and Mayu gets a little mad.Mayu eats human food, she hates the dog one.

3-They go to bed, Yuki start crying,being sad and Mayu tryes to make her smile.They end up kissing,after rubbing noses together.Mayu transforms in her human form, scarying Yuki who fainted.It takes only one hour and Mayu becomes a puppy again.The next day Yuki considers it all a dream.Mayu is waiting for Yuki to come back home with some visitors.

4-Yuki comes back with Haruna and Yuko,her puppy. Mayu finds out Yuko is her sister, send back also by the high magician and his girl.Mayu also finds out Yuko is Haruna's lover,knowing she is a puppy. Sae makes her first appearence at the door.

5-Mayu bits Sae, Yuki treats Sae's wound.Mayu and Yuko make signs to Haruna .They all decide to go for a walk.

6-Sae tries to ask Yuki for a date, but is the two puppyes stop her every move.Haruna and Yuko go home leaving Sae to walk Yuki home.Sae and Yuki are about to kiss, only for Mayu to stop them.Sae leaves after Yuki closes her door in face.Yuki searchs for Mayu who ran in the house, only to end up on the bed with the girl from her 'dream' on top.

7-Mayu in her human form kisses Yuki and declares her as her own.Yuki tryes to fight back.Mayu finds out that she can make Yuki's heart hers,gaining emotions.Yuki bits Mayu ,Mayu runs out naked but stops at the entrace door.She can control when to become puppy again.

8-First time Maeda Atsuko is mentioned in the story.Second time Takahashi Minami is mentioned.Yuko explains how she got there and why.Mayu declars for the first time that she will do something bad once she is back in the future.Yuko knows her sister doesnt have good thoughts, she is thinking about something.Yuko is seen talking to Haruna.Sae asks Yuko for a date over the phone,Yuki accepts.Later she is bit three times be Mayu in her human form as punishment for the date.

9- Yuki is sad so Mayu decides to explain what is happening to Yuki.They have dinner together.Yuki accepts Mayu somehow, falling for her.

10- Yuki goes on the promised date with Sae.Yuki filrtes with Sae to get Mayu's attention

11-Mayu is kissing Yuki in a changing cabin.She gives her a rose and a chocolate kiss.She leaves Yuki with Sae, looking at them from the crowd.Sae declars her love for Yuki but we dont know if she accepts, the author jumping to later when Yuki goes home.Home she finds her puppy asleep, dinner and a piece of poetry.For the first time Yuki declars that she had fallen for Mayu with the line 'you really are the prince I dreamed for....'

12-Mayu prepars breakfast for Yuki before she wakes up,after transformes back in a puppy. Yuki remembers Sae's confession, telling the readers her answer.Yuki rejects Sae, But Sae says she wont give up and continues to hold on Yuki.Mayu and Yuko meet in their human forms ,Haruna and Yuki are at school.Sae appears with Yuki after school .

13-Sae has dinner with Yuki and puppy Mayu.Mayu fights a little with Sae,Yuki comes in and stops her.She kisses Yuki and runs to transform somewhere else leaving Sae and Yuki alone for 5 minutes.Sae goes with Yuki to her room to talk something important.  The author writes from Mayu's POV from there. Mayu after changes, goes and listens to Yuki's room ,ready to go in.She hears Yuki and Sae kiss.The door opens a little and she sees Yuki kissing Sae back.Mayu obtains a heart in that moment, she runs out in the dark.Crying  in the park she first meet Yuki, she meets another girl how offers her shoulder and a home.Matsui Rena makes her appearence.

14-Mayu's POV. She dreams about the past, her mother and a sister she doesnt remember.A portrait she drew shows the one she will marry.Her father, and other two sisters try to protect her from the evil Clocktower.Mayu promises she wont love anyone else more than she loves her mother.Rena becomes puppy Mayu's new owner.Mayu starts liking Rena more.

BONUS- It shows someone elses POV. That person tells us a story, her past maybe.She also talks about other new personages : her and Mayu's mother(the personification of greed) , 'that girl' (her servant/friend) , 'master of the cimistery'(a monster who eats people) and  'Clockwork doll' (probably herself).
She says she is the one that watches the Clocktower after her mother 'disappeared'.She never tells her name until the finall but she talks about her mirror, and the two twins.

15-It starts with Sae's POV, she tells us how she meet Yuki and how she fell in love.It shows Yuki's POV too, she says how she fell out off love with Sae and declars for the second-third time she love Mayu.She makes a vow that she regrets later.The story is retaken from chapter 14, this time in Yuki's POV instead of Mayu's. Sae wants Yuki, Yuki tryes to see if she truly love Sae.Yuki sees Mayu, she finds out she only loves Sae like a sister now, never returning to love her.But they promise to each other that they will be together the next time they will be born .Sae leaves and Yuki cryes herself to sleep, losing both Mayu and puppy Mayu.

16- One week later Yuki meets puppy Mayu and Rena in the park.Even if she doesnt want to lets Mayu go, Mayu runs to Rena and goes home.

17-Mayu falls more and more for Rena.They sleepin the same bed and Rena tells a story.Mayu falls asleep before the story is over.The story's origins and truth is unknow. Rena makes Mayu promise she will go met Yuki.
200 years in the future, 'that girl' from the BONUS is showed walking the stairs to the top of the Clocktower.

First triler~

18-Mayu and Rena spend a relaxing day together.Mayu confronts Yuki, they make up. Both tells each other what happened until then.Mayu refuses to lets Yuki say the magical three words.Yuki and Mayu spend the next day together.Mayu goes back to Rena with roses.Mayu shows that she fell for Rena,and Rena for her.Mayu remembers something from the past.
The painting in the BONUS was Rena, she is told she will love the person in the paint be someone ,probably her mother.Mayu asks Rena for a date.

19-It starts with Mayu talking about her emotions. Then moves to the date between Mayu and Rena.Someone is spying them, 'that girl' is showed to be Centre.She was told be her mester/friend/potential lover to scare Mayu ,trying in a play to kill Rena.Her potential lover/master/friend is in love with someone else.Mayu and Rena enjoy their date until they enter a circus.There Centre and 2 helpers scare them, and almost kill Rena. Mayu caryes Rena home.Rena doesnt remember anything from the circus.Rena tell's Mayu a little more from the story.

Second triler!

20- Yuki is took in the future by Centre. Her  potential lover/master/friend  AND Mayu's twin sister,the person speaking in the BONUS is Nezumi.
Mayu meets Nezumi ,her reflection in a mirror.Yuki meets Nezumi, and thinks she is Mayu at first.Yuki spends 2 days with Centre and Nezumi becoming very fast good friends.On the 2d day, a misteryous figure appears, and tells Nezumi to send Yuki back.Nezumi is in love with this person,'capricous sourceress'.Yuki is send back. Nezumi declares her possesion with this line 'you will love me.....I am certain of that, my angel.'

21-Rena and Mayu go to meet Yuki and tell her everything.Yuki alredy knows, probably from Nezumi.They spend some time together like a familly.Until Nezumi's 'angel' comes and takes Rena.
Nezumi thinks about what could happen now.
The 'angel' goes home ,unknow location, and gives Rena to 'Jurina'(unknow personage ,unknow details) .Yuko is seen again ,she is talking with the 'angel' about Mayu 's ideals, power and how the 'utopia' should be stoped.Nezumi wants to make 'utopia' happen. The story Rena was telling is forgoten for now.



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That was all, 21 chapter.......and we still have to go.

Characters until now:

Watanabe Mayu-puppy Mayuyu- 3rd Prince- Cyborg prince
Takahashi Minami- 2d prince- 'charming' prince
Oshima Yuko- puppy Yuko-1 prince- 'perverted' prince
Kojima Haruna- 'angel of air'- Yuki's best friend
Miyazawa Sae- Yuki's first friend
Centre-Nezumi's servant/friend-'that girl'
Nezumi- Mayu's twin sister-Master of the Clocktower-the watcher
Mother-
Father-
Misteryous person-
Jurina-
Matsui Rena-
and so on~!!!!! Hope this helped you all!!! tell me what you think now please? Ill probanly do another on like this after another 10 or so chapter......

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« Last Edit: August 19, 2012, 07:09:11 PM by yuukimoko »
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

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You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: Love puppy (Mayuki,Kojiyuu) Important -Recap! Recapitulation!
« Reply #197 on: August 19, 2012, 09:43:41 PM »
                                                           Chapter:_______________--




Mayu put the ring on the persons finger before her, and smiled gently yearning a blush from that person
'now, you ca kiss-------'
'wait right there!'
Suddenly the door opened and Mayu entered
'what do you think you are doing?' she asked
....how did she ask?
'Im talking with you!'
....me?
'yeah you!!!!'
......I was in the midle of the story, what do you want Mayu?
'dont talk to me like that! how many chapters did you jump?! 12-20????? how many!!'
/.........not my fault no one enters here.....so I can do whatever I want......problem?
'yeah problem!!! I was the leanding one in the story and you suddenly stoped? and why is Nezumi there insteand of me? I sould marry **** not her!'
*sigh* you are giving me headaches......fine! Ill stop now......
'and where getting to the good part....' Nezumi pouted and kissed ****
'hey!!'


anyway......lets leave them there.....

                                                                                  Triler!

'where am I?'

'I am your prince.....'

'Rena.......who is Rena?'

'I only want you Yuki......'

'this......why now? damn it!!'

'how are you?!'
'I am me!'

'.......the author got bored..'

'Yuko......Nyannyan loves you....'


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is that really the triler? dont know......maybe it isnt........damn my boredom!!!!! I wanna read something too!!!!

Ignore the author please, she is too bored......


                                                                   Yuuki was here~! XD
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: Love puppy (Mayuki,Kojiyuu) Important -Recap! Recapitulation!
« Reply #198 on: August 19, 2012, 09:59:56 PM »
If you're bored then how about you come with me into the world of Mayuki?

I have so many ideas I wish to share with you.

 :hee:

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Re: Love puppy (Mayuki,Kojiyuu) Important -Recap! Recapitulation!
« Reply #199 on: August 19, 2012, 10:14:11 PM »
I am all ears!!!! but with private message or something? ms? tell me~~~ Im bored to dead! but I also only have around 30 minutes or so.....
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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